Something I’m getting really tired of yet I’m plagued with is action books where the authors don’t seem to know how the action group functions. It’s been a while since I read about a cop/detective as clueless as Stan. When you’ve read enough good suspense books, you catch clues easily and also have an idea of the level of skill/intelligence law enforcement agents should have. Here, everyone was worse than an amateur. Missing all the clues. Extremely delayed reactions. Refusing to suspect obvious suspects (Craig and Dan should’ve been investigated about 50% in but Stan somehow overlooked all that?)
Also, after the firemen knew their wives were targets, it should almost have been impossible to kill another because they should have been on incredibly high alert and guarded. But somehow one of them slept off while his wife was murdered right beside him?
I also don’t know how Stan needed a professor to tell him what he did about the serial killer; it’s basic stuff.
That was my main frustration with the book.
I thought the romance/drama was promising, but it just didn’t hit all the way for me. I started out liking Ally’s voice, but then she seemed too weak and whiny. I did like her ish, but not as much as I expected to. I was annoyed when she geared her parents up to be mad at Mark but then when she changed her mind about him, she didn’t take the time to explain why to her parents. She made them look bad when they were acting off what she had told them.
I liked how she and Mark both realized their mistakes. I really liked how Mark saw himself through the Bible. And him taking the bullet for her was awesome show of love and courage. His commitment to protecting her was admirable. I also thought the plot idea was a great one; targeting firemen’s wives. I felt so much sadness over how their children were being orphaned and their husbands widowed. There was a lot of potential for deep emotions to be felt!
I also really liked the faith aspect and Nick.
However, if a couple would have these much problems just four years into marriage, especially a couple that should know the Lord, I’m skeptical and am not convinced the marriage would last. Four years just seems like way too soon for a Godly couple to start thinking of a divorce.
The book has potential, but after reading so many romantic suspense books, I’m sad to say it didn’t quite reach the standard of books I’ve read. But I will say the author’s writing has promise!