this is a hard one for me to rate
This is super short, so there’s not a lot of time for world building, but the author gets in a little. I hope subsequent books keep building things, and I’m fairly confident it will end up being an interesting read.
The spicy scene dominates the short, but it is…weird. Not logistically weird, it’s just a bit of first time fun, but the way it’s written…I’m struggling with my own words right now.
There’s a lot of interesting choices in vocabulary that made me grimace in disgust. I genuinely tried to keep my mind from wandering into the gross images that words like “bloated” bring up, but I can say, at least the author didn’t use the word “turgid” to describe any of the boy parts. (It’s so gross when authors do that)
Even though the vocabulary choices were disruptive for spicy scenes, I’ll keep reading the series. If I review again, it’ll be on the final book.
Recommend? Well, I am going to invite my book group along for this ride, so maybe?