I am not always a very committed reader. I read every day, but that can range from one page to multiple chapters. the first 300 pages I every day about a month on reading, and it was getting a little tedious, even though I found the story quite interesting. I decided to finish the last half within the week, driving me to read chapter after chapter in a much shorter span, and I think the way I read this book ended up being perfectly aligned with the tension and excitement of the plot!
duncton tales (part one) ended with a fellowship leaving their beloved duncton homes behind in order to complete their tasks respectively; more or less doing the will of the Stone, which is the pinnacle of their religion.
in Duncton rising, this group of brave, loyal, kind, wise, and all interesting, moles, set out in defiance of the newborns, who wish to eradicate their "blasphemous" culture, and to make it all according to their new newborn sect "purging the snake in the name of the stone".
sidenote: to me it truly resembles the feeling LotR gave me (a group of unlikely heroes setting out together, only to be separated by different quests, but always growing closer to eachother, and true bonds forming that are, in the end, stronger than the evil they face).
its kind of comedic how i keep thinking this story about "moles" will just be cute and then there is another case of torture rape and murder xD
I really enjoy all the times when characters explain their "backstories." some might find it distracting from the plot, but I felt it really added to the overall story and with setting up more interesting characters to root for.
(Rooster rant)
that said, though Rooster is not among the most likeable of moles, he, besides our main mole Privet, does feel the closest to me. why? because he makes mistakes. all our moles have some type of flaws and strengths, just like real "characters", but it seemed William Horwood was afraid of making the moles fail at anything. as if only the world was against them, but with enough determination, they could "win" over their flaw. the only one who doesn't do that is Rooster. he is a deeply sensitive mole, sometimes a little socially clueless, who wields a great responsibility (and power), but he *messes it up*. he doesn't just lose his friends, he breaks the commitment of being the master delver (and if he hadn't made the commitment he wouldn't have lost his friends in the first place!) by using his paws to kill another mole. other moles, like Hamble, still see the "potential" in Rooster, and stick with him so loyally, even though Rooster makes even more grand mistakes. Rooster feels really guilty and confused, swears off delving entirely, yet in the end, he doesn't just overcome this by simply making up his mind to do it. he kills again and again, Hamble leaves him, he is taken as a newborn hostage infront of which he confesses all his sins, bearing his heart in front of the stone, but under unfortunate circumstances. he pretty much accepts his death/punishment. he grieves his lost love, Privet, grieves his friends, grieves who he should have been. then Privet comes to save *him* and finally he can start to forgive himself and do better. and in the end of the story, he succeeds in his task, he finally delves. he could have never done this without the help of his mole friends, who after all he had done, could still love and accept him. and Rooster finally starts feeling at peace. I think this is beautiful, and this is just a small part of just one moles story! this is how rich this book is.
what I liked less..
some plot points didn't make clear sense to me.
-for example, the whole thing about Stour having to carry the 6 books into this chamber. he had to carry them through a lot of tunnels, exhausting him to the point of dying when he finally finishes (or maybe he was just kept alive by the will to finish this first?). but pumpkin and sterne can enter the chamber via another side tunnel within minutes. why didn't he take that route?
-another point, pumpkin only at the end rebels against the newborns, by simply leaving Duncton Wood. but why didn't they all just leave before they even arrived at Duncton? why wait until they start killing, when you know they are killers?
-another point is, why exactly did the fellowship go to the meeting? it was basically the main plot but I never really understood the point of it? they escaped from duncton wood to go there, only to be captured there and be taken to cells, to escape and watch the meeting secretly, and then to escape again? I kind of get that there was more to it than that, but how much impact did their being there really have on the outcome? couldn't tell you.
Characters ⭐️⭐️⭐️3.5
Dialogue ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 4.5
Setting ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
was mostly very immersive and interesting places, but in the end I did start forgetting which place was which (like beechenhill? what's that??)
Pacing ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️3.5
it feels a little unbalanced at times.
Immersion ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️4.5
Writing style ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️4.5
sadly it does suffer a lot from "tell dont show" syndrome. this really started to bother me. besides that more technical point, i do like the way he writes in general.
Depth/complexity ⭐️⭐️⭐️
I really really wish they didn't have to make the newborn inquisitors basically pure evil. I find it hard to believe such a big group of moles just love violence. I do hope to learn more about Thripp and the carodacian order, but I wish the newborns didn't just say "for the stone" while just completely not giving a shit about the religious aspect. I think it would've been more interesting to see actually argue about why they were right and maybe try to convince moles instead of straight up going to abuse as their conversion ritual. it made most of the newborns look stupid and cruel, nothing much more, apart from the more devious leaders (different kind of stupid).
Re-readability ⭐️⭐️2.5
Creativity ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
who would've thought moles could make for such a immersive story? William Horwood made it possible.
Ending ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️3.7
not bad by any means, it felt like a clean appropiate ending, could have used maybe more of a cliffhanger?
ps. RIP to Chater