TLDR: The plot is incredibly thin and shaky, there’s no mystery at all… As perfectly obvious who the culprit is within the first few chapters of the book as soon as they are introduced. Attempted red herrings are so completely transparent has to be ridiculous. This person really need to take some writing classes and it does not astonish made all that this was self-published on Amazon. Poorly written on every level. If you want to read about a 29-year-old that acts like an incredibly spoiled eight-year-old-(and is incredibly stupid but convinced of her own superiority)-this is the book for you.
So first off-women can’t inherit titles because their family decides they should. Sorry…there’s no ‘provision’ one can take to change that. It’s set up by law, either they can, or they can’t. Period.
Oh, and a country house would have a chauffeur. You are NOT chauffeured by your butler…..🙄good lord. Sorry but not having the appropriate number of servants in a country house doesn’t make you ‘independent’. It makes the few servants you have work 4X as much.
And not meeting the staff shows great disrespect to the house, title, her family, and the staff. So does ‘doing the housekeeper’s town errands’. The staff would be mortified, who often had great pride in the houses they served.
While the scene with her mothers’ dresses was touching…she couldn’t wear them. They were over twenty years’ out of date. And if the story is set in 1920…those dresses would be…Edwardian. Practically Victorian in style, cut, etc. You’d need corsets, and other structured undergarments just to get them on. There’s a HUGE difference in fashion-unlike today where 2000 and 2020 clothing are almost interchangeable. And noooooo….you don’t wear a silk evening dress to a garden luncheon.🙄🤦🏻♀️
And an aristocratic hostess being belligerent and rude to a guest? Or…ANY British person acting like that? As a GUEST?!? It’s a completely modern American attitude. Not even an upper class Brit in this day would act like that.
Another American writing a British mystery series? Seems to be. (Clarification: yup, it is.)
The main character is ‘supposed’ to be (by the authors) intelligent, capable, and highly feminist. What she comes off as is utterly annoying, selfish, and juvenile.
She spends the first third of the book whining and hating on every other character-including the sergeant that (gasp) doesn’t want to leave his wife who has JUST GIVEN BIRTH to triplets. WHAT A HORRIBLE MAN!
Clearly he hates women. (As does apparently everyone, at least according to the protagonist).
She also falls all over herself whenever a good looking male appears 🙄, and goes on…and on…and on…and…..on………….about women’s social status in 1920’s England. We. Get. It. Now could we have some plot, please?
She proceeds to boss around the police (because….reasons….) And calling them lazy, inept, etc.
She then demands police information, after threatening the sergeant, and feels no remorse or issue with it. Frankly- she acts like an entitled privileged brat that….we’re supposed to sympathize with? Hell no. Why should the police give out information to a strange woman who made unsubstantiated claims?
And yeah-they ARE UNSUBSTANTIATED, no matter how pissy and flouncey she gets whenever ANYONE points that out.
“Have you determined the time of death? Or the murder weapon?”
Um. No. There’s…no body. There’s no indication anything happened.
At all.
"Oh well then if you want to get out of the dark ages you need to employ women” What the….what does that have to do with ANYTHING she was just talking about? Other than the author shoehorning in more plotless whinging to try and make the protagonist ‘modern’….
She’s actually flat out rude to the sergeant, and to most people in general ….. unless they’re women. (Or super hot).
The ‘hot blonde guy with chisled jaw’ is named…Lancelot.
Oh ffs.
No.
Just….no.
And his gross, creepy, suuuper patronizing attitude is….ignored or forgiven by the author/protagonist. Because….. hot.
And loses her mind whenever he’s around….the author spends quite a bit of time on this. And he’s vapid, rude, ignorant, and idle. Perfect match.
And ‘giggles’ constantly around him when he’s being idiotic and patronizing. Has absolutely no self control whatsoever, in anything.
The “hot” detective, who questions her statement just as much as the constable is given a free pass too. Because hot.
She also suspects ppl of being murderers simply based on their lack of feminist enlightenment. Or …for random unfathomable reasons.
And she says “women are naturally good at being detectives”.
Um. No. That’s…not a thing. No actual feminist would spout such utter BS.
Equality? Yes.
Being better because of genitalia? No. That’s just as bad as assuming they’re NOT good at it…because of gender and genitalia.
She’s increasingly biased, increeeedibly stupid, and arrogant. In the end, it’s actually the butler (the one she enjoys insulting) that figures everything out, and saves her ass, she just apparently gets all the credit for it from the author… Because… “Woman“.
Author also uses ‘random accident’ or ‘act of god’ as the ONLY way she finds anything.
Which is fairly hilarious considering how much she whinges on about how much better women are at detective work than men.
“I wanna break the laaaaw and trespass!” /whine whine. Um… maybe that’s why the owner is angry with you? (Stomps foot) Veruca Salt impersonation: “but I waaaaaant to!! And I’m a WOMAN, so clearly more able than any inept gross MEN police!!!!”
“And I’m TOTALLY able to take care of MYSELF” flounce flounce /rude remarks. (Except….she isn’t. Not even kind of capable. Not even a little bit).
In fact, it’s so completely, ridiculously opposite of any actual feminist ideals, one can only assume that it was written by someone who actually hates feminism, but was trying to portray a modern feminist character in order to sell books.
‘Strong, feminist women are rude, selfish, over the top caricatures’ seems to be the go to here. And the employ of the ‘not like other girls’ trope is actually spelled out🙄🙄
Oh, and the slapping native guides by spoiled white women in middle eastern countries as well as servants for becoming over-emotional is just fine, so you know. 🤬
It’s like the (cough cough…very modern American) author spent no time researching 1920’s Britain, much less spent any significant amount of time in this country.
It reads like poorly concepted and executed fanfic. I’m only glad it cost 1$ on Audible.
How this gets anything over a 2 stars tops is beyond me.