Of all the random Kindle genre freebies, James Flynn stood out to me. I enjoy his imagination, his dark twisted sensibilities. So much so, I’ve read three books by him before he reached out to offer me his latest to review.
Obviously, I said yes. Read it. And here’s that review. Disappointing, likely, but honest as always.
This book was by far my least favorite of Flynn’s. For some reason he decided to go with erotica on this…heavily. And while, I don’t think of myself as a prude, it just isn’t something I enjoy in fiction. Maybe, if it’s done right and serves the plot and used sparingly, sure, but this is way over the top, with a sort of horny teenager/horny old man pruriency, and profoundly offputting. Not sure if it was meant to be some sort of a writing exercise or what, but for this reader it really didn’t work. Flynn did warn me, to his credit. Just not sure I expected quite so…much of it.
It isn’t in every story, but the ones that feature it, really throw the book off. It’s a shame, because it starts off with a pretty strong story, but then it just sort of devolves. Right down to the closing number, which is frankly…sorry to say…kind of disgusting.
Again, Flynn’s a fun writer in that he tends to twist his stories just right. And so, the final story actually does have a fun and funny twist, but it gets lost under all the literally jizz or whatever it is he went after.
And then, there’s that poetry. There’s no need for it. None at all. Not only does every story get a poem for an introduction, but there’s one story in here, Drifter, a pretty good story, that is all but ruined by the fact that inexplicably Drifter the character chose to express himself through poetry. All those centuries on Earth to master every language, every form of expression, and the best he can do is crappy poetry? Seriously?
I don’t get it. Flynn is a very talented artist. A pretty good writer. But poetry might be a reach too far. Just like those tenuous dubious rhymes.
Anyway, aside from all that…there are some good stories in here. In fact, two of the best stories in here are repeats from the previous collection. So, if you’ve read those already, this one won’t offer much. Unless you’re really into sex on page that is.
Check out the author’s other books to get more of an idea of his writing talent. Don’t go by this one.