~ Jackson ~ When life at home became too risky, I accepted my aunt's invitation to move to her ranch on the other side of the country. It would have been perfect if my aunt hadn't died a month after I arrived and left me her ranch. Now, I had to figure out how to run a ranch... and why a sexy stranger on a motorcycle has moved himself into my house.
~ Ze'ev ~ I was born a dire wolf. Our sole purpose in life was to protect our pack. We didn't get mates. We didn't have lives of our own. We had nothing except our duty. Well, screw that. I left my pack years ago, refusing to conform to the rules set down by the shifter council. Imagine my surprise when I find myself intrigued by a human I met in passing. Unwilling to pass up an opportunity to get to know him better, I move myself into his house. What better way to discover why he smells so damn good?
When danger knocks on the front door and Jackson is attacked, who better to help me protect him than other dire wolves. It might be my only chance to keep him alive, even if it means I have to form my own pack. ~~~ Warning: Gay erotic romance. The material in this book contains explicit sexual content that is intended for mature audiences only. All characters involved are adults capable of consent, are over the age of eighteen, and are willing participants.
I was kinda iffy about the writing, but I did like the characters well enough. Until one thing through me completely out of the story and there was no going back.
“He was stabbed in the meaty part of his chest, just above the clavicle.”
I was so confused I started touching my own clavicle and looking up anatomy images. If something this simpler goes wrong, I just can’t over look it.
It started off really well but then the drama became too dramatic. I would really like to know how aunt Clara died too?!? It is never explained. Anyways, the plot seemed solid with the runaway mL from abusive ex-lover who happens to meet with the other ML traveling through town. It just became ridiculous when the mL almost dies not once but twice and some other very convenient happenings. The “bad guy” turns out to be a narcissist douche bag that I can’t even bring myself to hate because he’s SO ridiculous and unrelatable. The ML’s alpha dad is like a crazy nice loving parent, why so much whining about him from the ML?!? Overall, I like the story and enjoyed the humor but I almost didn’t finish it.
This was all a bit unripe and not completely thought through. Where was the bloody editor?
The author seemed to forget at times that the different characters should react with each other. Every time we experienced one POV the author seemed to completely forget the other character and how he would normally react in that situations.
A human not aware of the supernatural world, would be at least aware, surprised and mildly shocked to the unknown situation of getting bitten and knotted for the first time during sex and would react accordingly. But surely not ignore it, like the author did.
A human would wonder how he can sit up, eat and move with such lack of pain and not pulling any stitches after being stabbed in the chest, not hours earlier. To be healed in such a manner he is able to have rough sex, lying on his front and then weed in the garden not a day afterwards with a chest wound. And not having taken any pain medication or pulled any stitches. But surely not ignore it, like the author did.
When an author doesn’t even do its research and do the minimum of researching that the “meaty” part above the clavicle is not part of the chest but the shoulder/neck area, and not how it is described in the book. It is sloppy work. I would expect a higher personal standard when publishing a book and wanting to make a name of myself and be proud of my work. And why a “killer/assassin” would stab you in that exact area and simply leave you, without checking you are really dead, is also simply silly.
Sigh, there are a lot of such amateur incidences and situations the author sadly failed and no one seemed to point it out. It could have been a good book. The story in itself was interesting.
I made it to about 70% and just couldn’t do it any more. Thing is, it didn’t start that bad and the first few chapters were alright but soon it devolves into the usual shifter fare with poor writing, awful dialogue and unbelievable storytelling.
The story idea was great, it was what made me want to read it obviously. But it felt rushed, segmented, and without depth. Almost like the author wrote some, left and then came back after a long time. The rushed thing was odd and made everything get mashed together so quickly that it made a it feel like things were forgotten. It didn't help that suff was rehashed and breezed over a lot. But the depth of the story!? It could have been so good! There was not a lot of back story to the main characters only with some of the world building, again it was something breezed over. Give examples of things happening not just he hit me or it's because. Some was answered towards the end with Jackson. But the story promise I really liked so I made myself read it. This is my opinion and how I felt when reading this.
I have a two chapter rule if a book can't hold my brain captive long enough to enjoy two chapters it's not worth it. But I wanted to know! So I might be reading the next book and see how that is and the fact they kept throwing around the word omega without content grr. Oh wow.... Why should I care!? I know from reading other books not by this author with omegas in them, why I might, but come on! It's like giving me a drop of water and then saying it's not even a drop or water. So yep I have no clue how I feel about this book. Do I somewhat like it, hate it, I don't know. I just don't.
So, so much potential was totally destroyed by poor writing. Not that it was terrible all of the way, but it would just start feeling good and the author would do something unfortunate. First - this story has more coffee breaks than a Starbucks. Things get going and "Would you like a coffee" or 'I need a cup of coffee'. Really? I swear to god there was coffee mentioned on every 2nd page. Then there was the editing - ouch! Nope - can not even talk about it - so painful. And character actions! He escaped from the bad guys and ran through mud and forest while the bad guys headed back up the road to kill his friends. What does he do after he bursts in and warns them? He has a shower and washes his hair. Then there is the lack of research - if you stab someone with a knife and it is sticking out of the wound and has to be yanked out - it has penetrated more than 1 1/2". And -- And a stab wound above the clavicle (also known as the collar bone) would place the wound in the neck region - not the chest! So much pain and sadness - so sad for the murdered story.
I don't want to sound mean, but my lack of interest in this book stems from the author not bothering to do her research. "He was stabbed in the meaty part of his chest, just above the clavicle." "He was stabbed in the meaty part of his chest, just above the clavicle." WTF does that even mean? It also seems preposterous to me that a person recovering from a chest wound can instantly sit up and eat some chicken noodle soup and bread! He doesn't have a cold, he was stabbed in the chest!! So ridiculous. Also, the main character was rather stupid. First) This was just pure silliness. 1.5 star.
Jackson moves to his aunt's ranch after home life becomes too risky, only to inherit the ranch when she dies. He must figure out how to run the ranch and why a mysterious stranger, Ze'ev, has moved in. Ze'ev is a dire wolf who left his pack, refusing to follow their rules. Intrigued by Jackson, Ze'ev moves into his house to learn more about him. When danger threatens Jackson, Ze'ev enlists other dire wolves to protect him, even if it means forming his own pack. As they navigate these challenges, their connection grows stronger.
I really enjoyed this story with Jackson and his horrible cousins and Ze'ev who was strong and supportive of his fated mate. I loved the drama,danger and emotions experienced by the two men. A great start to the series. Easy to read, feel and understand. This was an MM story with mature content.
Jackson has inherited a ranch from his aunt. One that he doesn't have a clue what to do with. Even if it wasn't stripped down to almost the bare walls by his three greedy cousins. Ze'ev is an alpha dire wolf. Jackson's scent intrigues him and he needs to know why. Caught breaking in, Ze'ev simply moves in, taking over and taking care of the human Jackson. When Jackson is attacked and nearly killed, Ze'ev begins calling in the friends and allies he's made over the years. Because against all odds, Jackson is his mate. I am hoping there will be a sequel to this slightly off beat story. It was funny, sweet and had a bit of danger. Jackson and Ze'ev make a good pairing. And the author has quite a take on Alpha/Omega pairings. Alphas aren't really in charge. They only think they are!
I love shifter/human fated mates stories, and this one is one of the best. There were a few things I found a bit odd, like how Jackson was perfectly okay with finding Ze’ev in his office and going through the will, but I put that down to the Jackson subconsciously recognizing Ze’ev as his fated mate. Other than that, I loved Jackson and Ze’ev’s journey. The action and the secondary characters all add to the story really well. I only hope the author is planning more stories to this universe. Another story focusing on Jackson and Ze’ev should be Part 2 because of Jackson’s new designation, but there are also so many other characters who need their own story. I’ll keep my fingers crossed!
I love this author, especially for when I'm stressed and just need a great adventure with low angst. I don't mind the suspension of disbelief. It can sometimes be a relief. However, some books are too much and this was one of them. Time was sketchy, wolf senses came and went and, not suspension of disbelief, but Ze'ev was the worst protector.
Family drama on another level - suspense, surprise and the fairy tale ending!
Jackson - nice guys don't finish last! Whoop! Whoop! You have to feel for Jackson the "ex" that won't take no. A real dirt bag! Then family drama on a whole new level. I love how Jackson gains his confidence! Ze'ev the guy that was all dark mystery riding in to town has some surprises in store. This is a shifter romance with "not cookie cutter" plot lines. It about a family/pack is by choice. It is a great story with so many layers and like a good dessert a taste treat to savor! V2 S2 MM Romance more book reviews please check out @my2centsbooklover Thank you!
I enjoyed the slow build, and the air of mystery and suspense that built from Jackson starting off alone, and showing us immediately how big and generous his heart was as he shared money he could ill afford to give away -- yet he wanted to help Ze'ev before even knowing who he was. Dire wolves; fated mates; a self-entitled, chauvinistic and over-indulged alpha heir who refused to take no for an answer; and strange goings-on around his ranch are seemingly unrelated problems facing Jackson and his surprise fated mate Ze'ev. Great story! Four stars
Jackson has had bad things happen to him so many times that its amazing that he still has a smile and goodness in his heart.
Ze'ev is a powerful Alpha Dire wolf that has been on his own for a long time. He likes his lone wolf status and his way of life.
Both of these men find that their lives change almost as soon as they meet. As they fight through trouble, violence and prejudice to come out bonded mates that teach those around them a thing or two.
I really loved this book, I actually stayed up to read it not done that for a while. I loved Jackson’s character so much, he was strong with a kind heart. Ze’ve was awesome too as an alpha he was a brilliant character. The writing was great the story well told and loss of yummy steamy time. The only disappointing part for me is that I read the book before I realised book 2 isn’t even out yet! So I’ll be patiently waiting for book 2 while no doubt doing a re read of this book :) x
This had a nice premise but it was pretty silly and anticlimactic. Jackson was a damsel in one chapter and a fears warrior in the next. A house full of dire wolves and they all stood and watched Jackson play around with a handgun. That whole scene was so ridiculous, childish and it wasn t the only one. I might try one more book to see how the next couple fares. The wolves characters are strong and distinctive, Lu doesn t talk, Gunny is an ass, Val is mysterious but the action and story telling at least in this book is amateurish, with no plot.
This is the first book in the series and it was easy to get in to the story and root for Jackson. And when Ze'ev shows up as a strange kind if knight in shining armour I immediately liked them together. Loved that we got to see just enough of Ze'evs friends to keep me wanting more for them and I loved the small pack that they start together.
The book had action, fated mates, wolf shifters and bad guys on both the human and the wolf side. I will definitely pick up the next book to see what happens next.
I love Aja, and happily downloaded this new book. I enjoyed the characters, and the potential. Yet, there was a lot that felt rushed and just glossed over, particularly in sudden character changes.
Both Jackson and Gunny hated the other species, yet they each got over it in a day or so, with two conversations.
The characters also stumbled into stupid moments with no explanation, for example a wolf successfully snuck up close enough to get to Jackson, and none of the Dire wolves were aware of it.
Ze'ev is a dire wolf, the strongest of all wolves and dire wolf is known for not have a fated mate or is it true?? Read this book to find out!
I truly enjoyed their relationship even though my initial thought of Jackson's personalities are too good to be true but it's just the way he is, a good man with a great heart.
One problem solved but there are too much questions left unanswered especially with Sy and his brother. I hope there will be a continuation and looking forward to Kahl's story~
I love a found family story. This one doesn’t start out that way but it shows that family is the pack you room around you, not just those of blood. Jackson’s family is definitely less than stellar but there is hope for one of them anyway. Ze’ev is a dire wolf who is shocked to discover all he has learned of true mates is wrong. These two are about to change the status quo and I can’t wait to watch it happen!
I thoroughly enjoyed this story and all of the wonderful supporting characters. Jackson was such a sweetheart and Ze'ev was a strong and loving alpha dire wolf. I also loved the duck that was mentioned ever since Jackson had inherited his aunt's ranch (so cute). I didn't like how Jackson kept getting hurt, but the plot was quite captivating. I loved the ending to this great read, and I'm looking forward to much more.
This is my first book by this author, and I really enjoyed it. I loved the characters, including the secondary characters (who I assume will have their own books in the future). It was action packed as well, even if the resolution seemed a little too easy. Overall, it kept me turning the pages and wanting more, and I’ll definitely read the next in the series!
A reasonable bit of MM shifter erotica. The storyline is a bit loosely defined, an odd juxtaposition of shifter abilities and human type frailties. Minimal character development, convenient associations, and some loosely resolved story threads keep this from becoming a better read. Ends on a mostly just neutral note, with potential for a better future.
I enjoyed this book the relationship between Ze’ev and Jackson was white hit but so grounded. I did think the book ended abruptly with some of the storyline left undeveloped. What happens after Jackson’s shift, or the relationship between Ze’ev and his father. I hope there are other books in this series.
This story has a great plotline, it reads well, and it doesn't really have any slow parts, where it feels like the story lags. I won't put any spoilers, but I will say that I enjoyed reading about the two main characters, and watching their relationship develop. I'm looking forward to the next book in the series!
Great story. Jackson and Ze'ev are a great alpha pair. I wanted more. The fact that Jackson is so strong and resourceful draws you in. He will not be defeated. Ze'ev brings a helping hand and believes in Jackson.
I love the characters. I'm ready whatever is next in the series.
It’s a promising start. The foundation is well established. The introduction of the characters is well done, which arouses my curiosity and makes me want to know their development for the future. I want to know a little more about the other characters and see Jackson and his Alpha again.
This is the first book in the : Guardians of The Pack Book Series
This was a fun read I really enjoyed this book and it's characters the plot was pretty generic but I still enjoyed it . Looking forward to more of this series .