So you've taken on the job of restoring (and moving into) this dilapidated old house with lots of spooky rooms, bringing your ten-year-old daughter, and then the kid tells you that she saw a possibly disturbed person roaming the corridors. Do you:
a) call the police
b) hightail it out of there
c) both, or
d) give it some thought, then shrug it off, because, well, who knows *what* that kid saw, right?
This is one of those books where d) is not only considered un-crazy but actually the logical choice: "If (mom Terri) saw him herself, she'd ask him to leave. No sense calling the police on a kid, especially a kid with a mental illness. Hopefully he'd get bored and leave on his own."
Um. Maybe it's just me, but I think I'd have a slight problem with a mentally unstable teen hiding in the same house where I live with my child.
Then again, it's not like calling the police would change anything, because that boy Terri's daughter Dallas (yes, Dallas) saw is actually a ghost, who proceeds to wreak a little spooky havoc (not that spooky, mainly annoying) before telling the girls that he's mad because he was murdered, in this very house, by a member of his own family, and they're supposed to get him justice. Or something. Things took a bit too long for me and it all felt a little Idiot Plot, so I started skimming; also, I couldn't stand dumb daughter Dallas who is 10 going on 15 when she's not behaving like a toddler. I don't know if the author has ever spent much time around kids, but this girl did not seem plausible to me. I mean, how many 10-year-olds do you know that pat their mom's arm and say: "It'll still be our summer, Mom. Don't worry."
Also, Terri. Terri likes to think, and to over-think, but she's not all that great at problem-solving, ironically enough. Terri is one of those whiney hand-wringers who find lots of Reasons but not much backbone, yet who like to think of themselves as mama bears nevertheless. A Terri is not my favorite character as a rule. I found it exhausting spending 250 pages (that felt like 400) stuffed into the head of a Terri.
Then, the Mystery of the Ghost Boy. Could have been interesting, if he hadn't been up against a Terri; a Terri flies into an impotent rage or goes into hand-wringing mode before toodling off to ask Someone Who Might Know, but there's never any real tension or excitement. Things get a bit icky, and there are a few red herrings thrown about, and this one lady turns out to be improbably, freakishly old, because apparently the author did some quick mental calculating halfway into the manuscript and went "oh f*ck", and at the end it gets full blown dramatic, but all in all it was just... meh. If you do haunted house, you need atmosphere and sense of place, both of which I didn't feel here.
Sadly, not for me.