The story is awesome! 😉 The writing could use an American editor ☹️
This story was SO good! I can’t begin to tell you how emotionally invested I became in Alex. Much of the story brought tears.
The writing, however, jarred me out of the story quite a bit. This is only because Marie King is obviously British, and used a lot of British slang in her writing of a story that seems to be set in the United States. As I am an American reader, I picked up on it right away. Words, like “pitch”, when describing a “football field”, for instance, need to be replaced with their proper American linguistic counterparts. To clean up those inconsistencies, the book could use a thorough going through by an American editor.
But, yeah, the story was awesome!