Oy vey, where to start. This book had so many problems, the most glaring was the worst editing I've ever seen. Using the word previous instead of precious, mentioned a patients empty eye sockets (where his eyes have been gorged out) and then 2 paragraphs later talking about the same patients blond hair and green eyes. There were others but those 2 were in the first 7 pages. I almost gave up then. What kept me going was the story. It was actually fairly interesting but with a very poor execution. Ignoring the bad editing and proofreading (which was a struggle), the story was choppy. One minute the main characters walk out to the back yard to get some fresh air. They have a 2 second conversation and suddenly are pacing the library floor. It didn't feel like an adequate amount of time had passed between different settings or ideas. It felt like they could have skipped the breath of fresh air altogether, it added nothing to the story. There were also weird product mentions throughout the book - Yahoo! (always spelled with the exclamation point), Google, Lucky Charms, Marvin the Martin... things that didn't contribute to the story and felt like product placement. Finally, my last issue with this book is there were so many aspects of the story that just didn't make sense or further the storyline. At first these random tidbits seemed like they must be a clue to solving the mystery but nope, they were just random tidbits that left me confused. By the time the ending came around, I just didn't care anymore.