In what was supposed to be her first ski trip since the war, Hermione wakes up from an avalanche to find herself back in time. Despite her search to return home to her time, she is forced to relive her last years at Hogwarts and the War that she knows will claim the faces that now haunt her. In Particular, the face of a certain Weasley that she finds herself slowly falling for.
If you were forced back in time, would you try to save him?
The story itself was great. The plot was there, the characters were all accurately depicted, the romance was precious... But the grammar and spelling errors abound made it really difficult at times to even WANT to finish. But as there aren't many fremione stories, I persevered. All in all, I enjoyed this.
I have since learned that most fic writers don’t like their works posted on Goodreads. I am leaving my current review up and adding this note, because how else are people meant to know?
> It didn't seem right to ask her, “So Hermione, who have you seen die” to satisfy his curiosity. Instead he wanted to turn to the Fates, point at Hermione and ask, “Of all the people in the world, can’t you give this one a break? No more bad things. She’s had enough of them. Just give this girl a rest-”
> “We’re friends, she’s in distress. I’m making her a bad day box,” “You’re making her a ‘Pick the better brother’ box,” George laughed.
> “Are all Weasley men arses or just the ones I fancy?” she spat, turning her attention back to the grounds. “You Fancy me?” he asked, his voice softer now.
> You're going to tell your brother you got me in a broom closet?" Hermione asked as she entered into the maintenance room.
"Of course, but the real question is which brother I tell."
> "A toast," Fred said, lifting his tumbler, " To The-Boy-Who-Lived, ecetera, ecetera, may he soon earn the title The-Man-Who-Ended-It-All."
She must have given him a confused expression as he added very quickly, "You know, in a good way."
> And she hadn't done a damn thing.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
I have so many thoughts about this fic and not one of them make sense.
Fremione Fremione Fremione. This was my first fremione fix and I must say— meh. I am sorry but Fred just doesn’t do it for me.
Fred gave me so much anxiety throughout the whole 360k fic that I dreaded his chapters.
I liked this Hermione, I believe she’s one of the most canon Hermione’s I’ve ever read.
The pairing? It didn’t give me butterflies but also, the writer did say time and time again (lol) that she didn’t like writing love/smut/kissing scenes, which I totally get, but that’s why I some times felt the falling in love fell a bit flat. It doesn’t mean I need all the smut to feel the love but something was just missing and I don’t quite know what it was.
Also, I almost quit because of all the spelling mistakes that were in the fic. The fact that following words were spelled wrong EVERY SINGLE TIME broke me: their/they’re/there your/you’re quiet/quite liar/lair breath/breathe lose/loose knew/new
There were sooooo many more grammar mistakes, but, to persevere and finish the fic, ignored it all by chapter 5. But also, there’s probably quite a few grammar mistakes in this short review, so really, who am I to judge?
Hated the rushed ending, but I guess I get it? She wrote the fic from 2015-2020, which means she wrote for FIVE years, updating WEEKLY. That’s mental. Fanfiction writers are unreal in the best ways.
Anyway, I’m never making the mistake of deviating from my darling Draco ever again. Loved loved the experience though.
This fic started really interesting. Halfway through it tho I got really bored but managed to power through up to the 70% mark and gave up there. Spent about a month with it on pause still debating wether or not to DNF it but I needed books to complete my reading challenge, it was the only reason I managed to finish this. Some things really annoyed me and Hermione was one of them, more specifically the fact that she kept trying to meddle with what happened but she kept forgetting key details (like how the potions books is what led Harry to the diadem), like how could you forget this??? This was also way too long for my liking and the spelling mistakes were kind of annoying. Giving it those 2 stars because despite everything I was able to finish and because I do think Fremione is a good ship.