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The Moretti Trilogy #1
Promises Unbroken
How much will she risk to save her sister?
Mae Ashton has every reason to stay in Georgia and marry the man she loves, save one—the disappearance of her sister. Although all evidence points to Hazel’s death, Mae’s discovery of a single picture changes everything. If Hazel is alive, Mae will find her. And she’s left everything to do so.
Davis Everleigh isn’t about to let Mae, his fiancée, go just because of a note that hardly explains her departure to New York City. Instead, he follows her to the city and gains employment with the man Mae believes is somehow connected to Hazel.
As Davis and Mae become further entrenched in their effort to locate Hazel, they find themselves facing a corrupt businessman and his ruthless henchman, Alberto Moretti. In a world of lies, will the truth prevail—both about Hazel and in their own lives?
Mae Ashton has every reason to stay in Georgia and marry the man she loves, save one—the disappearance of her sister. Although all evidence points to Hazel’s death, Mae’s discovery of a single picture changes everything. If Hazel is alive, Mae will find her. And she’s left everything to do so.
Davis Everleigh isn’t about to let Mae, his fiancée, go just because of a note that hardly explains her departure to New York City. Instead, he follows her to the city and gains employment with the man Mae believes is somehow connected to Hazel.
As Davis and Mae become further entrenched in their effort to locate Hazel, they find themselves facing a corrupt businessman and his ruthless henchman, Alberto Moretti. In a world of lies, will the truth prevail—both about Hazel and in their own lives?
257 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 26, 2021
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Kristina Hall
19 books434 followersKristina Hall is a sinner saved by grace who seeks to glorify God with her words. She is a homeschool graduate and holds a degree in accounting. When she’s not writing, she enjoys reading, arm wrestling, lifting weights, and playing the violin.
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December 18, 2021
Stars: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
In the very beginning, I wondered why this series was called the Moretti trilogy. After all, it is about the Ashtons, isn’t it? Mae, who risks her life to find her sister. Hazel, who left a broken family behind years ago. Frank, who can’t leave because of his paralysis and troubled heart.
Then I met Alberto. And, as you can imagine me saying in my most dramatic voice, everything changed.
This really is his story. His series. Somehow, this strong, silent mobster henchman wormed his way into the forefront of the story...into my heart...and dominated both of them. His character is so real—every facet of him is not just realistic and authentic...it’s alive. His redemption arc? Even better. Kristina Hall knows, lemme tell ya, how to wear a soul down and led them to the Lord in a way that is touching, powerful, and genuine. I love it. Even if it’s only fictional souls that are coming to Christ.
And, yeah, you could count it as a spoiler that Moretti is redeemed, but to be honest? Once you meet him, you’ll know. He just oozes potential and all-around awesomeness. I love him.
That’s becoming increasingly obvious, isn’t it?
Yeah, I thought so.
I should probably talk some more about the other characters...and the story itself...shouldn’t I?
That is standard procedure, so off we go.
Davis, y’all, Davis was fabulous. Sure, at first I was a wee bit worried about him...mainly that I wouldn’t like him or that he’d be bland. And, in some ways, I think he was missing a bit of flavor, perhaps, but in others, he really was an amazing guy. He was like the grown male version of Elsie Dinsmore, if that makes sense, always striving to do what was right, what honored God, and what helped others. Despite the risk. Despite temptation. Despite the odds, which were never in his favor.
Yeah, Davis’ character was simply fabulous. There’s no other word for it.
As for Mae...y’all, I really wanted to like her. And I did. Sometimes. But I couldn’t relate to her in the way I wanted to or connect with her on a deep lever. That said, from a surface standpoint of her character, she possessed a quiet strength that I admired and a determination that anyone would appreciate. Her struggles were realistic and deftly handled.
Then there’s Lillian/Hazel and Vincenzo. Y’all. Them two made me gag. And it wasn’t necessarily because Vin was a heartless, murdering, mobster and that Lil was crazy for him (I’m just grateful that the two were married)...it was more that the both of them were a couple of spineless sea sponges. I’m with Moretti—Vin wasn’t worthy of his position, he wouldn’t make good on his threats, he lacked the guts needed to handle things, and on top of all of that…he was hopelessly annoying. And Lillian was just a fool.
Is this a bad thing, that Vin and Lil were just so painful to read about? Nope, not at all, because Hall is one of those authors who is so good at making bad characters. If you catch my drift.
And, of course, honorary mention for overall awesomeness goes to John Scranton. I would absolutely love a story about him. Just, y’know, throwing that out there.
Now, moving on to the elements unrelated to characters and fangirling...the suspense and action. Y’all, Hall can keep you on the edge of your seat, lemme tell ya, turning pages (or clicking screens) like there ain’t no tomorrow. And yet, her stories are never rushed. They’re perfectly paced, allowing time for development and depth—something most suspenses sorely lack. Not to mention she can write a durn good fight scene.
Speaking of scenes…that conversion scene. Man, was that powerful or what?
Also, something I really liked, not only about Promises Unbroken but also all of Hall’s historical works, is that she is so immersed in the setting and that it becomes so real, to the point that there’s no need for excessive descriptions or info-dumps about how things looked or functioned back in the 1920s. Not that I don’t mind excessive description and information; those just aren’t elements that belong in a suspense. In a novel like this, being completely invested in the story and only the story is all that matters, and Hall makes that simple.
What’s probably the craziest thing is that, when I finished Promises Unbroken, I thought to myself “Man, that was even better than To the Uttermost! It can’t get any better.”
Then I started reading Mercy Undeserved.
Disclaimer: I received a complimentary copy of this book from the author. All opinions expressed are my own.
In the very beginning, I wondered why this series was called the Moretti trilogy. After all, it is about the Ashtons, isn’t it? Mae, who risks her life to find her sister. Hazel, who left a broken family behind years ago. Frank, who can’t leave because of his paralysis and troubled heart.
Then I met Alberto. And, as you can imagine me saying in my most dramatic voice, everything changed.
This really is his story. His series. Somehow, this strong, silent mobster henchman wormed his way into the forefront of the story...into my heart...and dominated both of them. His character is so real—every facet of him is not just realistic and authentic...it’s alive. His redemption arc? Even better. Kristina Hall knows, lemme tell ya, how to wear a soul down and led them to the Lord in a way that is touching, powerful, and genuine. I love it. Even if it’s only fictional souls that are coming to Christ.
And, yeah, you could count it as a spoiler that Moretti is redeemed, but to be honest? Once you meet him, you’ll know. He just oozes potential and all-around awesomeness. I love him.
That’s becoming increasingly obvious, isn’t it?
Yeah, I thought so.
I should probably talk some more about the other characters...and the story itself...shouldn’t I?
That is standard procedure, so off we go.
Davis, y’all, Davis was fabulous. Sure, at first I was a wee bit worried about him...mainly that I wouldn’t like him or that he’d be bland. And, in some ways, I think he was missing a bit of flavor, perhaps, but in others, he really was an amazing guy. He was like the grown male version of Elsie Dinsmore, if that makes sense, always striving to do what was right, what honored God, and what helped others. Despite the risk. Despite temptation. Despite the odds, which were never in his favor.
Yeah, Davis’ character was simply fabulous. There’s no other word for it.
As for Mae...y’all, I really wanted to like her. And I did. Sometimes. But I couldn’t relate to her in the way I wanted to or connect with her on a deep lever. That said, from a surface standpoint of her character, she possessed a quiet strength that I admired and a determination that anyone would appreciate. Her struggles were realistic and deftly handled.
Then there’s Lillian/Hazel and Vincenzo. Y’all. Them two made me gag. And it wasn’t necessarily because Vin was a heartless, murdering, mobster and that Lil was crazy for him (I’m just grateful that the two were married)...it was more that the both of them were a couple of spineless sea sponges. I’m with Moretti—Vin wasn’t worthy of his position, he wouldn’t make good on his threats, he lacked the guts needed to handle things, and on top of all of that…he was hopelessly annoying. And Lillian was just a fool.
Is this a bad thing, that Vin and Lil were just so painful to read about? Nope, not at all, because Hall is one of those authors who is so good at making bad characters. If you catch my drift.
And, of course, honorary mention for overall awesomeness goes to John Scranton. I would absolutely love a story about him. Just, y’know, throwing that out there.
Now, moving on to the elements unrelated to characters and fangirling...the suspense and action. Y’all, Hall can keep you on the edge of your seat, lemme tell ya, turning pages (or clicking screens) like there ain’t no tomorrow. And yet, her stories are never rushed. They’re perfectly paced, allowing time for development and depth—something most suspenses sorely lack. Not to mention she can write a durn good fight scene.
Speaking of scenes…that conversion scene. Man, was that powerful or what?
Also, something I really liked, not only about Promises Unbroken but also all of Hall’s historical works, is that she is so immersed in the setting and that it becomes so real, to the point that there’s no need for excessive descriptions or info-dumps about how things looked or functioned back in the 1920s. Not that I don’t mind excessive description and information; those just aren’t elements that belong in a suspense. In a novel like this, being completely invested in the story and only the story is all that matters, and Hall makes that simple.
What’s probably the craziest thing is that, when I finished Promises Unbroken, I thought to myself “Man, that was even better than To the Uttermost! It can’t get any better.”
Then I started reading Mercy Undeserved.
Disclaimer: I received a complimentary copy of this book from the author. All opinions expressed are my own.
July 23, 2021
This was so good.
For some reason, everyone seems to have a fascination with the 1920s and mobsters. And now I understand, because this was such a cool setting for a book. The whole 1920s prohibition scene was such an excellent backdrop for this story.
And can we talk about the characters? Mae was so stubborn (probably to a fault, but her loyalty to her sister was amazing.) And Davis ... my man! That guy was just the best. Yeah, he had his failings, but the way he stood by Mae and encouraged her and preached truth to her ... he was epic. And he was an accountant that could shoot and fight and be heroic, which is rare in books, I think. Not all accountants are skinny and helpless - rather, Davis investigated all of Rossi's financial crimes quite well. (That was such a cool part.) And how can I not mention my favorite, Alberto Moretti. Ahh, this guy. He was awful. But I loved him anyway. He was such a well-developed character, and even though he was such a sad guy, he cracked me up. (Especially when he antagonized Vin.) And poor Alberto, always getting stuck with all kinds of promises ... (and it even ties in to the title, in a way.) He needs to stop promising people things, poor guy. And how could I forget, my favorite fictional preacher, John Scranton! Wow. I loved his steadiness, his courage, his protection of Mae. That guy right there was an epic side character.
Now, the plot. So cool. The whole thing with Hazel/Lillian was really interesting because she didn't want to come home. She wasn't innocent in the whole deal like Mae would've liked. That just creates all kinds of intrigue. And add all of that to Rossi's criminal dealings that Davis deals with, and this plot moves along very quickly. There was all kinds of action and suspense. Yeah, people got shot and beat up, but it wasn't anything graphic at all.
And now we come to the best part. The morals/themes of this book. Obviously, from the title, you can see what a lot of it's about. Mae struggled to trust the Lord, yet His promises remained sure and certain in the face of her fear and doubt. Davis had his own story of coming to a point of desperation and realizing all that he had was the Lord. And Alberto ... well, his story is a little bit of a spoiler, but I'll just say that he finds God's promises to be unbroken to him as well. Scripture layered this book, and though the characters weren't perfect, they're a good example of living in a world that's not our home. Davis's struggle over his involvement with the Rossis makes you think about living in the world and how our inaction over evils can be considered a sin. All kinds of things to make you think in this book.
I would highly recommend this book to those who enjoy historical fiction or suspense. I can't wait to read the next one on the series! (And there's more Alberto!!)
Thanks to the author for a free copy of this book!
For some reason, everyone seems to have a fascination with the 1920s and mobsters. And now I understand, because this was such a cool setting for a book. The whole 1920s prohibition scene was such an excellent backdrop for this story.
And can we talk about the characters? Mae was so stubborn (probably to a fault, but her loyalty to her sister was amazing.) And Davis ... my man! That guy was just the best. Yeah, he had his failings, but the way he stood by Mae and encouraged her and preached truth to her ... he was epic. And he was an accountant that could shoot and fight and be heroic, which is rare in books, I think. Not all accountants are skinny and helpless - rather, Davis investigated all of Rossi's financial crimes quite well. (That was such a cool part.) And how can I not mention my favorite, Alberto Moretti. Ahh, this guy. He was awful. But I loved him anyway. He was such a well-developed character, and even though he was such a sad guy, he cracked me up. (Especially when he antagonized Vin.) And poor Alberto, always getting stuck with all kinds of promises ... (and it even ties in to the title, in a way.) He needs to stop promising people things, poor guy. And how could I forget, my favorite fictional preacher, John Scranton! Wow. I loved his steadiness, his courage, his protection of Mae. That guy right there was an epic side character.
Now, the plot. So cool. The whole thing with Hazel/Lillian was really interesting because she didn't want to come home. She wasn't innocent in the whole deal like Mae would've liked. That just creates all kinds of intrigue. And add all of that to Rossi's criminal dealings that Davis deals with, and this plot moves along very quickly. There was all kinds of action and suspense. Yeah, people got shot and beat up, but it wasn't anything graphic at all.
And now we come to the best part. The morals/themes of this book. Obviously, from the title, you can see what a lot of it's about. Mae struggled to trust the Lord, yet His promises remained sure and certain in the face of her fear and doubt. Davis had his own story of coming to a point of desperation and realizing all that he had was the Lord. And Alberto ... well, his story is a little bit of a spoiler, but I'll just say that he finds God's promises to be unbroken to him as well. Scripture layered this book, and though the characters weren't perfect, they're a good example of living in a world that's not our home. Davis's struggle over his involvement with the Rossis makes you think about living in the world and how our inaction over evils can be considered a sin. All kinds of things to make you think in this book.
I would highly recommend this book to those who enjoy historical fiction or suspense. I can't wait to read the next one on the series! (And there's more Alberto!!)
Thanks to the author for a free copy of this book!
April 7, 2023
Okay, this was so good!!! This is the second book I've read by Kristina Hall, and I enjoyed them both a lot!
Promises Unbroken was such a cool story. ahhhh I loved the characters too! Davis....hehe....I love him. He's so loyal and kind and will do anything to help those he loves. Same as Mae. Her devotion to her sister despite the circumstances was amazing. I gotta admit....I never really hated Moretti. Strangely, he had too much of my sympathy XD . Vincenzo....man. that guy is a....not good guy XD
I also loved the overall message through the Christian elements!! There were some differences of beliefs, but that was to be expected so I'm not too worried about that XD I mean....I did read the book in two days so I think it's safe to say that I thoroughly enjoyed Promises Unbroken, and I look forward to read more in this trilogy, and more from Kristina!!!
-Happy reading, everyone :)
Promises Unbroken was such a cool story. ahhhh I loved the characters too! Davis....hehe....I love him. He's so loyal and kind and will do anything to help those he loves. Same as Mae. Her devotion to her sister despite the circumstances was amazing. I gotta admit....I never really hated Moretti. Strangely, he had too much of my sympathy XD . Vincenzo....man. that guy is a....not good guy XD
I also loved the overall message through the Christian elements!! There were some differences of beliefs, but that was to be expected so I'm not too worried about that XD I mean....I did read the book in two days so I think it's safe to say that I thoroughly enjoyed Promises Unbroken, and I look forward to read more in this trilogy, and more from Kristina!!!
-Happy reading, everyone :)
October 19, 2021
Kristina Hall, you have just blown me away!!!!!
Guys, this book... aaaahhh, why is it so good. HOW IS IT SO GOOD!!!! I don't think I have any comprehensible thoughts, so I'm gonna have to say review to come. But... man, I just have so much to say. I LOVED THIS BOOK!!!!!! I'm already ready for the reread. But first, gimme the sequel!!! ;)
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Okay, so I'm going to slightly alter my typical review formatting because I don't like it and just want to. ;P
This book was just a really refreshing read!! Suspense is pretty much my home base genre. It's the genre that made me fall in love with reading, the genre of the first stories I ever wrote, and the one I get the most excited for. So when I found Kristina Hall, I just KNEW I HAD to read a book from her. And it's CHRISTIAN suspense, which, like I was telling one girl, makes it awesome cuz I LOVE suspense and obviously Jesus, so the two together... perfection! *chef's kiss* And let's say this book FAR SURPASSED my expectations!!
The reasons why you should read this book:
~THE CHARACTERS!!!!! I just loved, loved, LOVED. Mae and Davis were just epic, and they had some of the best character arcs ever!! I could just feel for them and connect really, REALLY well. (If I was older, Davis would definitely be down on my list of fictional crushes... sorry Davis. You're just a bit *too* old for me at the moment. 😜) And let's just talk about Alberto Moretti for a sec. I have never, ever, ever loved an antagonist as much as him. I was literally SO EXCITED when we reached his POV. He was well... fun to read about!! (Plus he was Italian... which is like my second favorite country ever. What? I have an undying love for pasta. XD)
~ The plot will keep you engaged from literally the first chapter. I don't know about you, but suspense just isn't suspense without some fabulously paced plot! When I really started getting into it, I finished it like two days after because I literally COULD NOT PUT IT DOWN. I remember trying to squeeze in reading time every spare second I had. Which was sooo refreshing since some of my last reads have been a bit... more boring? This was honestly really amazing cuz I had unreachable expectations for the plot and Ms. Hall passed EVERY. SINGLE. ONE. *mind is blown* (I will say, though, that I was kinda sad we found out what happened to Mae's sister earlier in the book than I had wanted, but that's just a personal opinion, and did NOT change the epicness of this novel!!!)
~A Christian message that will actually move you!!! If you're a bit unsatisfied with popular Christian fiction that lacks... how do I say this? Basically Jesus. Then look no further because NOT ONLY do we get an engaging plot, relatable characters you will root for, you ALSO get an amazing Christian message, that I don't know about y'all, but it really touched me so much!!!! Brownie points definitely go to Ms. Hall for this one!
~The setting was so much fun!! This was probably one of the first books I've read with... was it the 1920s?? I don't remember, but I really LOVED LOVED LOVED the setting chosen for this book!
~This is a series you'll probably wanna binge-read, so lucky for you the final book releases THIS NOVEMBER!!!!! So you can go ahead and start reading it now without having to worry about waiting forever for the final book.
The cons:
That I'm not reading book two right now. *cries* I will get to it soon, but gotta catch up on my other review books first. :)
*I was given a free copy of this book from the author in exchange for my honest review* (I think that's what I'm supposed to write... this is honestly my first time doing this. 😅)
Guys, this book... aaaahhh, why is it so good. HOW IS IT SO GOOD!!!! I don't think I have any comprehensible thoughts, so I'm gonna have to say review to come. But... man, I just have so much to say. I LOVED THIS BOOK!!!!!! I'm already ready for the reread. But first, gimme the sequel!!! ;)
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Okay, so I'm going to slightly alter my typical review formatting because I don't like it and just want to. ;P
This book was just a really refreshing read!! Suspense is pretty much my home base genre. It's the genre that made me fall in love with reading, the genre of the first stories I ever wrote, and the one I get the most excited for. So when I found Kristina Hall, I just KNEW I HAD to read a book from her. And it's CHRISTIAN suspense, which, like I was telling one girl, makes it awesome cuz I LOVE suspense and obviously Jesus, so the two together... perfection! *chef's kiss* And let's say this book FAR SURPASSED my expectations!!
The reasons why you should read this book:
~THE CHARACTERS!!!!! I just loved, loved, LOVED. Mae and Davis were just epic, and they had some of the best character arcs ever!! I could just feel for them and connect really, REALLY well. (If I was older, Davis would definitely be down on my list of fictional crushes... sorry Davis. You're just a bit *too* old for me at the moment. 😜) And let's just talk about Alberto Moretti for a sec. I have never, ever, ever loved an antagonist as much as him. I was literally SO EXCITED when we reached his POV. He was well... fun to read about!! (Plus he was Italian... which is like my second favorite country ever. What? I have an undying love for pasta. XD)
~ The plot will keep you engaged from literally the first chapter. I don't know about you, but suspense just isn't suspense without some fabulously paced plot! When I really started getting into it, I finished it like two days after because I literally COULD NOT PUT IT DOWN. I remember trying to squeeze in reading time every spare second I had. Which was sooo refreshing since some of my last reads have been a bit... more boring? This was honestly really amazing cuz I had unreachable expectations for the plot and Ms. Hall passed EVERY. SINGLE. ONE. *mind is blown* (I will say, though, that I was kinda sad we found out what happened to Mae's sister earlier in the book than I had wanted, but that's just a personal opinion, and did NOT change the epicness of this novel!!!)
~A Christian message that will actually move you!!! If you're a bit unsatisfied with popular Christian fiction that lacks... how do I say this? Basically Jesus. Then look no further because NOT ONLY do we get an engaging plot, relatable characters you will root for, you ALSO get an amazing Christian message, that I don't know about y'all, but it really touched me so much!!!! Brownie points definitely go to Ms. Hall for this one!
~The setting was so much fun!! This was probably one of the first books I've read with... was it the 1920s?? I don't remember, but I really LOVED LOVED LOVED the setting chosen for this book!
~This is a series you'll probably wanna binge-read, so lucky for you the final book releases THIS NOVEMBER!!!!! So you can go ahead and start reading it now without having to worry about waiting forever for the final book.
The cons:
That I'm not reading book two right now. *cries* I will get to it soon, but gotta catch up on my other review books first. :)
*I was given a free copy of this book from the author in exchange for my honest review* (I think that's what I'm supposed to write... this is honestly my first time doing this. 😅)
August 7, 2021
Kristina Hall is quickly becoming a new favorite author.
If you are looking for a fast paced Christian historical fiction with a little dash of romance, this is perfect. This book will capture your attention and not let you put it down.
Kristina Hall does a fabulous job with her characters as always. She makes you fall in love with almost everyone including one of the bad guys. I love how much she brings scripture and truth into her stories, too. And there is always a lot of action and near escapes. I also thought it was a fun time period. The plot was intriguing and though sometimes a little unbelievable, I still loved it.
So I really can't think of anything negative about this book. It was well written and a truly enjoyable read. I can't wait to read the next books in the series.
*I received a complimentary copy of this book from the author\publisher for promotional purposes. I was not required to write a positive review. These are my honest thoughts and opinions.
If you are looking for a fast paced Christian historical fiction with a little dash of romance, this is perfect. This book will capture your attention and not let you put it down.
Kristina Hall does a fabulous job with her characters as always. She makes you fall in love with almost everyone including one of the bad guys. I love how much she brings scripture and truth into her stories, too. And there is always a lot of action and near escapes. I also thought it was a fun time period. The plot was intriguing and though sometimes a little unbelievable, I still loved it.
So I really can't think of anything negative about this book. It was well written and a truly enjoyable read. I can't wait to read the next books in the series.
*I received a complimentary copy of this book from the author\publisher for promotional purposes. I was not required to write a positive review. These are my honest thoughts and opinions.
August 26, 2022
Just loved this novel. I suppose because it was not only fast-paced and a little frightening, but also because it was sooo Christ-honoring. I wouldn't have missed this one for anything.
April 18, 2022
**Currently free on Amazon!**
4 stars & 4/10 hearts. This was a unique Christian Fiction! To start off, I have always been intrigued by 1920-1930s big city mafia (who hasn’t?) and I found the premise of this story very interesting—the mafia, a small church preacher, a secretary from rural farmland, and a war veteran accountant, faced off in one great battle: will the lavish underground empire of the Rossis continue strong, or will a determined young woman and her self-sacrificing fiancé and pastor make them totter?
I can’t say I really related to any of the characters in particular, but I related to various aspects of their problems throughout the stories. My favourite was Scranton. What a man!! Absolutely amazing. I liked Moretti an awful lot too. He’s hilarious, and definitely not as tough and warped as he thinks he is. Davis was good—not my fav, but a good guy nevertheless. I admit Mae wasn’t my favourite. I related to her in parts but I also just didn’t feel a strong connection to her… I don’t know why, I just didn’t. Hazel/Lillian was a fascinating addition and a great twist, and so was Vincenzo—what a powerfully weak man. The characters were definitely my favourite part of the story.
The historical fiction aspect was very well done. The writing style was a little flat sometimes, but I applaud the original and fascinating narrative voice—very much in the character’s head, in a way I have never seen before. Really unique! The plot was a bit of a sticking point to me, honestly. It was such a constant state of climax and drama that I became exhausted. It’s hard for me to bear up in stories where everyone is against the MCs and there is no authority figure to trust or expect help from. I am sure it’s accurate—and probably common for suspense novels—it is just hard on my personality. However, personal issues aside, the plot did keep interest by the constant twists, and it kept you constantly questioning if the characters would ever be okay or get out alive. At the end, I was positive they were all dying! There was some unrealisticness, but hey, truth is crazier than fiction, so that didn’t bother me at all very much. And I loved the ending. The message of this book was fantastic. Took a while for it to come, but when it did, bam! It was GOOD. A great reminder!
Romance-wise, the MCs were engaged. There was touching, kisses (non-lip, as I recall), handholding, etc. Also in one scene the MCs end up in a hotel room alone and perhaps even lying on the same bed but it is EMPHATICALLY NOT a romance scene—couldn’t be further from that—and stayed perfectly clean, with them getting separate rooms. Davis & Mae were a sweet couple for sure, and I adored Vincent + Lillian, okay??
Content—alcohol very present, but in a negative light. Cursing mentioned, never written. Fair amount of violence; one murder off-screen; lots of threats. Definitely a high level of suspense and anxiety for sensitive people (I took frequent breaks after a certain point). But it was all very clean.
Overall, a good suspense novel. It wasn’t exactly my cup of tea for various reasons (and probably because of the time in my life during which I read it) but it was a good, clean christian fiction and I recommend it for anyone who enjoys action, suspense/mystery, high crime, awesome characters, and good messages.
A Favourite Quote: Too much weight rested on her shoulders. Too much responsibility. Too much regret.
“You’re not a failure, and it’s not your responsibility to fix them.”
She squeezed her eyes shut. “If I don’t, if I do nothing, who will help them?”
He covered her hand with his. “The same One Who will help you.”
A Favourite Beautiful Quote: The ceiling soared some twenty feet above, crossed by thick wooden beams anchored in brick walls that must’ve been standing for a hundred years. The place cried of history. Of life and death. Of joy and heartache. Of peace and violence.
A Favourite Humorous Quote: Whenever the man got that sappy look on his face, words about Lillian were sure to follow. Not that she wasn’t beautiful. Any man would be lucky to have her on his arm. Yet that man didn’t have to make a fool of himself in the process.
*I received a complimentary copy of this book from the author for promotional purposes. I was not required to write a positive review. These are my honest thoughts and opinions.*
4 stars & 4/10 hearts. This was a unique Christian Fiction! To start off, I have always been intrigued by 1920-1930s big city mafia (who hasn’t?) and I found the premise of this story very interesting—the mafia, a small church preacher, a secretary from rural farmland, and a war veteran accountant, faced off in one great battle: will the lavish underground empire of the Rossis continue strong, or will a determined young woman and her self-sacrificing fiancé and pastor make them totter?
I can’t say I really related to any of the characters in particular, but I related to various aspects of their problems throughout the stories. My favourite was Scranton. What a man!! Absolutely amazing. I liked Moretti an awful lot too. He’s hilarious, and definitely not as tough and warped as he thinks he is. Davis was good—not my fav, but a good guy nevertheless. I admit Mae wasn’t my favourite. I related to her in parts but I also just didn’t feel a strong connection to her… I don’t know why, I just didn’t. Hazel/Lillian was a fascinating addition and a great twist, and so was Vincenzo—what a powerfully weak man. The characters were definitely my favourite part of the story.
The historical fiction aspect was very well done. The writing style was a little flat sometimes, but I applaud the original and fascinating narrative voice—very much in the character’s head, in a way I have never seen before. Really unique! The plot was a bit of a sticking point to me, honestly. It was such a constant state of climax and drama that I became exhausted. It’s hard for me to bear up in stories where everyone is against the MCs and there is no authority figure to trust or expect help from. I am sure it’s accurate—and probably common for suspense novels—it is just hard on my personality. However, personal issues aside, the plot did keep interest by the constant twists, and it kept you constantly questioning if the characters would ever be okay or get out alive. At the end, I was positive they were all dying! There was some unrealisticness, but hey, truth is crazier than fiction, so that didn’t bother me at all very much. And I loved the ending. The message of this book was fantastic. Took a while for it to come, but when it did, bam! It was GOOD. A great reminder!
Romance-wise, the MCs were engaged. There was touching, kisses (non-lip, as I recall), handholding, etc. Also in one scene the MCs end up in a hotel room alone and perhaps even lying on the same bed but it is EMPHATICALLY NOT a romance scene—couldn’t be further from that—and stayed perfectly clean, with them getting separate rooms. Davis & Mae were a sweet couple for sure, and I adored Vincent + Lillian, okay??
Content—alcohol very present, but in a negative light. Cursing mentioned, never written. Fair amount of violence; one murder off-screen; lots of threats. Definitely a high level of suspense and anxiety for sensitive people (I took frequent breaks after a certain point). But it was all very clean.
Overall, a good suspense novel. It wasn’t exactly my cup of tea for various reasons (and probably because of the time in my life during which I read it) but it was a good, clean christian fiction and I recommend it for anyone who enjoys action, suspense/mystery, high crime, awesome characters, and good messages.
A Favourite Quote: Too much weight rested on her shoulders. Too much responsibility. Too much regret.
“You’re not a failure, and it’s not your responsibility to fix them.”
She squeezed her eyes shut. “If I don’t, if I do nothing, who will help them?”
He covered her hand with his. “The same One Who will help you.”
A Favourite Beautiful Quote: The ceiling soared some twenty feet above, crossed by thick wooden beams anchored in brick walls that must’ve been standing for a hundred years. The place cried of history. Of life and death. Of joy and heartache. Of peace and violence.
A Favourite Humorous Quote: Whenever the man got that sappy look on his face, words about Lillian were sure to follow. Not that she wasn’t beautiful. Any man would be lucky to have her on his arm. Yet that man didn’t have to make a fool of himself in the process.
*I received a complimentary copy of this book from the author for promotional purposes. I was not required to write a positive review. These are my honest thoughts and opinions.*
July 9, 2021
4.5*
Amazing. This one is probably my favorite of the authors, and it ties in really close to To the Uttermost for me!
What I loved?
- The atmosphere.
Y'all, Promises Unbroken calls you to the dark side of the 1920s. And I LOVED. IT. It had all those speakeasies and gangsters and ruthless crime shenanigans, with evil antagonists and desperate men. It was a total vibe and incredibly atmospheric with that dark 1920s highlight there.
- The suspense and the pacing!
Everything about the book was so suspenseful, so hanging on there. Suspense was in every chapter, and it never felt that it was not going anywhere; it just kept you going. The plot wasn't complex and while there was SO much happening already by the first half of the book, I had no idea what else "had" to be done (if that makes sense?), but the author surprised me there, and it was superb! There were times, however, where I did feel the suspense was getting a tad draggy sometimes, but eh! It was still superb and I enjoyed myself *IMMENSELY*.
- The Christian theme
AHH. This one is one of my favorite things about this book! Throughout the book, there was a lot of emphasis on trusting in God. And it also talked a lot about finding salvation in Him and being cleansed and freed by His blood. And the whole truth shared here of how God's promises never fail and will never be broken really moved me; it was beautiful!
- Ah, I cannot forget Alberto Moretti.
I loved Mae and Davis (Oh, Davis is just pure really-awesomeness), but they didn't capture my attention as Alberto did! His character was so lost, evil, even apathetic with a hard heart -- all that while still making him feel so likable. Of course, talking fictional-y wise, not real life. :p I LOVED his POV, it was always the one that made me curious about him and his story. His stone-hearted character felt so oddly refreshing and new to read, and he basically intrigued me to no end.
What I didn't love?
-
Yeah, I'll just leave an awkward blank spot there cus there was nothing I didn't like. :D
- Although, I remember that there were some times when I got confused on whose POV it was, even though it was still in third person narrative. So I had to take a step back and reread, but I got it figured in the end. The problem likely might've been due to my addled fried brain. :p
I am terrible at concluding reviews, so I shall simply put it there that this book was truly spectacular, and I enjoyed it SO incredibly much! It was my bookie best friend for a week.
I shall say no more.
I think I'm just going to retreat now into my bedroom and mope over the fact that I have to wait for the next book to come out. AHHHHH.
Amazing. This one is probably my favorite of the authors, and it ties in really close to To the Uttermost for me!
What I loved?
- The atmosphere.
Y'all, Promises Unbroken calls you to the dark side of the 1920s. And I LOVED. IT. It had all those speakeasies and gangsters and ruthless crime shenanigans, with evil antagonists and desperate men. It was a total vibe and incredibly atmospheric with that dark 1920s highlight there.
- The suspense and the pacing!
Everything about the book was so suspenseful, so hanging on there. Suspense was in every chapter, and it never felt that it was not going anywhere; it just kept you going. The plot wasn't complex and while there was SO much happening already by the first half of the book, I had no idea what else "had" to be done (if that makes sense?), but the author surprised me there, and it was superb! There were times, however, where I did feel the suspense was getting a tad draggy sometimes, but eh! It was still superb and I enjoyed myself *IMMENSELY*.
- The Christian theme
AHH. This one is one of my favorite things about this book! Throughout the book, there was a lot of emphasis on trusting in God. And it also talked a lot about finding salvation in Him and being cleansed and freed by His blood. And the whole truth shared here of how God's promises never fail and will never be broken really moved me; it was beautiful!
- Ah, I cannot forget Alberto Moretti.
I loved Mae and Davis (Oh, Davis is just pure really-awesomeness), but they didn't capture my attention as Alberto did! His character was so lost, evil, even apathetic with a hard heart -- all that while still making him feel so likable. Of course, talking fictional-y wise, not real life. :p I LOVED his POV, it was always the one that made me curious about him and his story. His stone-hearted character felt so oddly refreshing and new to read, and he basically intrigued me to no end.
What I didn't love?
-
Yeah, I'll just leave an awkward blank spot there cus there was nothing I didn't like. :D
- Although, I remember that there were some times when I got confused on whose POV it was, even though it was still in third person narrative. So I had to take a step back and reread, but I got it figured in the end. The problem likely might've been due to my addled fried brain. :p
I am terrible at concluding reviews, so I shall simply put it there that this book was truly spectacular, and I enjoyed it SO incredibly much! It was my bookie best friend for a week.
I shall say no more.
I think I'm just going to retreat now into my bedroom and mope over the fact that I have to wait for the next book to come out. AHHHHH.
June 30, 2021
I've read three of Kristina Hall's books now, and this is the best one yet! Nail-biting suspense, great action sequences, deep emotion. Mae's determination was both frustrating and heart-tugging. Her doubts and fears really resonated with me, as did this exchange:
"It's not the strength of your faith that counts. It's Who your faith's in. That's what matters."
"I know that. It's just…it's just that sometimes I don't."
Can I get an amen?
And Davis. He was so caring and sacrificial, so dedicated to trying to do the right thing. His hints of backstory with Mae really deepened both characters. Moretti, complex as he was, was well done. And John Scranton is my kind of preacher. :)
As with Hall's other books, this one was full of Christian themes, Christian living, and a clear gospel message, but all of that seemed to flow more naturally in this story than in some of the others. I love how her characters constantly communicate with God in very realistic "flare prayers." Help me. Forgive me. Thank You. Life, or at least my life, is like that. I admit to mild suspicions regarding the resolution of certain plot angles, and I was not disappointed, but there were other elements I didn't see coming, so I'm happy both ways. There was a lot of violence, and some characters didn't seem as emotionally affected by that as I would expect (maybe it's normal in Georgia for farm girls to shoot people if they have to), but nothing gruesome or graphic. The 1920s mob setting seemed very well done.
All in all, this was a great read, and now I'm going to catch my breath while I wait for the next book.
I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
"It's not the strength of your faith that counts. It's Who your faith's in. That's what matters."
"I know that. It's just…it's just that sometimes I don't."
Can I get an amen?
And Davis. He was so caring and sacrificial, so dedicated to trying to do the right thing. His hints of backstory with Mae really deepened both characters. Moretti, complex as he was, was well done. And John Scranton is my kind of preacher. :)
As with Hall's other books, this one was full of Christian themes, Christian living, and a clear gospel message, but all of that seemed to flow more naturally in this story than in some of the others. I love how her characters constantly communicate with God in very realistic "flare prayers." Help me. Forgive me. Thank You. Life, or at least my life, is like that. I admit to mild suspicions regarding the resolution of certain plot angles, and I was not disappointed, but there were other elements I didn't see coming, so I'm happy both ways. There was a lot of violence, and some characters didn't seem as emotionally affected by that as I would expect (maybe it's normal in Georgia for farm girls to shoot people if they have to), but nothing gruesome or graphic. The 1920s mob setting seemed very well done.
All in all, this was a great read, and now I'm going to catch my breath while I wait for the next book.
I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
January 19, 2023
New York City, 1929.
A woman with a mission; the man who loves her bent on keeping her alive.
A woman with a buried past; the man who loves her bent on keeping her safe, happy, and content.
A deadly business. A deadly man. A deadly choice.
Promises, both broken and unbroken.
All for the love of a sister.
I didn't expect to fall into the story, to be sucked away in the shadowy plot, the way I did. But once again, Hall swept me away with her characters and action. Narey a dull moment, yet the characters lived.
The faith aspect was strong, almost to the point of being forced.
All in all, another fine work of Hall's.
Note: I received a free copy of this book and was not required to provide a review of any sort. All thoughts and options are my own.
A woman with a mission; the man who loves her bent on keeping her alive.
A woman with a buried past; the man who loves her bent on keeping her safe, happy, and content.
A deadly business. A deadly man. A deadly choice.
Promises, both broken and unbroken.
All for the love of a sister.
I didn't expect to fall into the story, to be sucked away in the shadowy plot, the way I did. But once again, Hall swept me away with her characters and action. Narey a dull moment, yet the characters lived.
The faith aspect was strong, almost to the point of being forced.
All in all, another fine work of Hall's.
Note: I received a free copy of this book and was not required to provide a review of any sort. All thoughts and options are my own.
September 1, 2021
Promises Unbroken, by Kristina Hall
By Abbigail R. B. August 31, 2021
About the book:
Mae Ashford has left her family farm and gone to New York City for one purpose: to find her sister. Everyone has been told she was dead. Everyone believed it. But not Mae.
Desperate to find Hazel and heal her broken family, she follows a photograph among her sister's belongings in the hopes that she’ll find out what truly happened. And in doing so discovers a much more sinister plot… one that could tear apart her very life, and the lives of her loved ones.
Quotes:
“We’ve got to trust Him. He’s prepared the times we’ll go home. Trust Him.”
“Why didn’t He protect Hazel? And Pa? And Ma? And Frank? And ... and you?”
“He did protect me. He brought me back—a little beat up—but He still brought me back.” Lines spread from the corners of his eyes. “I don’t know how to answer you. Maybe I can’t answer you, but I know this. I know He’s protected all those He has saved. Not always with earthly protection—we live in a world filled with sin—but with eternal protection. Protection that doesn’t fail even when life falls apart around us. Jesus secured our salvation.”
~ Chapter 2
What I enjoyed:
I loved how much Scripture was quoted throughout the book; it’s not very often that Christian authors include so much of the Word in their writing (it’s something that I’m struggling to do more in my own writing). While some might think it’s ‘too preachy’, I thoroughly enjoyed it. It continually reminded me through the whole story, especially when I wanted to cry. ;)
I loved how Davis continued to remind Mae to trust in God and to have faith when things spun out of their control. It’s a message that I think a lot of people should hear nowadays, with Covid and restrictions and whatnot.
I also loved how throughout the book, you could relate to the characters (like Davis and Mae.) The struggles they faced, the doubts and fears, and ultimately, how they shut down the muddled swirl of thoughts and doubts by asking God for the strength, the protection, and the trust they needed.
And finally… the suspense!! Now, I’ve never actually read a Christian suspense novel before (unless you count some of Frank Peretti’s novels.) But Kristina absolutely NAILED it! I ached, I nearly cried, I was tense, (hopefully I didn’t snap at my siblings during the reading process, lol). Thank you for introducing me to a new genre, Kristina! It was a fantastic opening for me.
What I disliked:
Okay… I know I just said I enjoyed the suspense in Promises Unbroken. But it was a bit overwhelming and emotionally draining. I started this yesterday afternoon and got to about chapter 7, then finished it today. And by the time I reached the end, I wanted to cry. Some good, happy crying of relief, and some heavy, aching crying of pain. It hurt for me, and put a bit of a blanket on me today, haha. But, it was good too!
Umm… Well, Moretti was scary. And Vincenzo… just… yea. Mm-hmm… yea, no comment. Apart from the fact that they were nasty bullies. And scared the dickens outta me at times.
And Hazel… Well, I better not comment. Can’t be spoiling anything, now, can we? ;)
My overall standpoint on Promises Unbroken:
In the end, Promises Unbroken was a great read and an amazing beginning for me. This was my first ever read-through of one of Kristina’s books and it was a great introduction to this author! I will definitely recommend this book to my friends and will be looking forward to any other books by Ms. Hall.
*Everything expressed in this book review is based on my own thoughts. I don’t mean to offend anyone, only share what God places on my heart.*
*And thank you, Kristina, for sending me a free copy! It was such a fun journey to read your book!*
By Abbigail R. B. August 31, 2021
About the book:
Mae Ashford has left her family farm and gone to New York City for one purpose: to find her sister. Everyone has been told she was dead. Everyone believed it. But not Mae.
Desperate to find Hazel and heal her broken family, she follows a photograph among her sister's belongings in the hopes that she’ll find out what truly happened. And in doing so discovers a much more sinister plot… one that could tear apart her very life, and the lives of her loved ones.
Quotes:
“We’ve got to trust Him. He’s prepared the times we’ll go home. Trust Him.”
“Why didn’t He protect Hazel? And Pa? And Ma? And Frank? And ... and you?”
“He did protect me. He brought me back—a little beat up—but He still brought me back.” Lines spread from the corners of his eyes. “I don’t know how to answer you. Maybe I can’t answer you, but I know this. I know He’s protected all those He has saved. Not always with earthly protection—we live in a world filled with sin—but with eternal protection. Protection that doesn’t fail even when life falls apart around us. Jesus secured our salvation.”
~ Chapter 2
What I enjoyed:
I loved how much Scripture was quoted throughout the book; it’s not very often that Christian authors include so much of the Word in their writing (it’s something that I’m struggling to do more in my own writing). While some might think it’s ‘too preachy’, I thoroughly enjoyed it. It continually reminded me through the whole story, especially when I wanted to cry. ;)
I loved how Davis continued to remind Mae to trust in God and to have faith when things spun out of their control. It’s a message that I think a lot of people should hear nowadays, with Covid and restrictions and whatnot.
I also loved how throughout the book, you could relate to the characters (like Davis and Mae.) The struggles they faced, the doubts and fears, and ultimately, how they shut down the muddled swirl of thoughts and doubts by asking God for the strength, the protection, and the trust they needed.
And finally… the suspense!! Now, I’ve never actually read a Christian suspense novel before (unless you count some of Frank Peretti’s novels.) But Kristina absolutely NAILED it! I ached, I nearly cried, I was tense, (hopefully I didn’t snap at my siblings during the reading process, lol). Thank you for introducing me to a new genre, Kristina! It was a fantastic opening for me.
What I disliked:
Okay… I know I just said I enjoyed the suspense in Promises Unbroken. But it was a bit overwhelming and emotionally draining. I started this yesterday afternoon and got to about chapter 7, then finished it today. And by the time I reached the end, I wanted to cry. Some good, happy crying of relief, and some heavy, aching crying of pain. It hurt for me, and put a bit of a blanket on me today, haha. But, it was good too!
Umm… Well, Moretti was scary. And Vincenzo… just… yea. Mm-hmm… yea, no comment. Apart from the fact that they were nasty bullies. And scared the dickens outta me at times.
And Hazel… Well, I better not comment. Can’t be spoiling anything, now, can we? ;)
My overall standpoint on Promises Unbroken:
In the end, Promises Unbroken was a great read and an amazing beginning for me. This was my first ever read-through of one of Kristina’s books and it was a great introduction to this author! I will definitely recommend this book to my friends and will be looking forward to any other books by Ms. Hall.
*Everything expressed in this book review is based on my own thoughts. I don’t mean to offend anyone, only share what God places on my heart.*
*And thank you, Kristina, for sending me a free copy! It was such a fun journey to read your book!*
October 2, 2021
They don't call it the Roaring 20s for nothing! This is a time of speakeasies, mobsters, flappers, and the Charleston.
Mae is absolutely positive that her sister is not the one they found dead in the river and only a photo gives her a clue where to start looking. However, Mae does not know who she is dealing with because this is a fast-talking town compared to her home in Georgia. However, her love for her sister, Hazel, allows her to persevere and continue her search. What she doesn't expect is for her ex-fiance, Davis, to follow her and want to help her find Hazel. Is that love or what?!
I appreciated Mae's determination but I didn't understand why she was insistent on taking her sister home to the family. Her sister was happy and knew what she had gotten herself into, but Mae did not accept that decision. Yes, her husband was a gangster and involved in shady business, but did that warrant Mae trying to take her sister away from a situation that she wanted to belong? But Mae is plucky especially when she finds herself in situations that could have not ended well.
Davis is a gem. His love for Mae throws him into the middle of the whole situation and he ends up with a price on his head. However, the one thing that Davis and Mae have going for them is their faith and they are not afraid to share their beliefs with anyone they run across, even a reluctant gangster.
There is a character that might surprise you, Alberto. He is rough and tough, but I think deep down there is a part of him that does not enjoy this life and wonders if there is more out there for him. It doesn't help that he is secretly in love with Mae's sister, who is married to his boss.
I can't forget to mention Scranton, the preacher that totes a gun (seems like all of the characters toted guns) and isn't shy in helping Mae and Davis in their cause, even if it might mean death for him. And that is highly possible considering the characters they are dealing with in this book.
The book is full of scripture which fits the situations that Mae and Davis find themselves mixed up. I appreciated their strong faith beliefs and that they didn't back down no matter what anyone said about their faith and beliefs.
The book has a nice even fast pace to it and there was little downtime to wonder what might pop up and surprise us next. There are many nuances to this book that made it an entertaining read but too much would be given away by sharing those here.
We give this book 4 paws up and look forward to the next book in this trilogy that will feature Alberto and Lillian (Hazel).
Mae is absolutely positive that her sister is not the one they found dead in the river and only a photo gives her a clue where to start looking. However, Mae does not know who she is dealing with because this is a fast-talking town compared to her home in Georgia. However, her love for her sister, Hazel, allows her to persevere and continue her search. What she doesn't expect is for her ex-fiance, Davis, to follow her and want to help her find Hazel. Is that love or what?!
I appreciated Mae's determination but I didn't understand why she was insistent on taking her sister home to the family. Her sister was happy and knew what she had gotten herself into, but Mae did not accept that decision. Yes, her husband was a gangster and involved in shady business, but did that warrant Mae trying to take her sister away from a situation that she wanted to belong? But Mae is plucky especially when she finds herself in situations that could have not ended well.
Davis is a gem. His love for Mae throws him into the middle of the whole situation and he ends up with a price on his head. However, the one thing that Davis and Mae have going for them is their faith and they are not afraid to share their beliefs with anyone they run across, even a reluctant gangster.
There is a character that might surprise you, Alberto. He is rough and tough, but I think deep down there is a part of him that does not enjoy this life and wonders if there is more out there for him. It doesn't help that he is secretly in love with Mae's sister, who is married to his boss.
I can't forget to mention Scranton, the preacher that totes a gun (seems like all of the characters toted guns) and isn't shy in helping Mae and Davis in their cause, even if it might mean death for him. And that is highly possible considering the characters they are dealing with in this book.
The book is full of scripture which fits the situations that Mae and Davis find themselves mixed up. I appreciated their strong faith beliefs and that they didn't back down no matter what anyone said about their faith and beliefs.
The book has a nice even fast pace to it and there was little downtime to wonder what might pop up and surprise us next. There are many nuances to this book that made it an entertaining read but too much would be given away by sharing those here.
We give this book 4 paws up and look forward to the next book in this trilogy that will feature Alberto and Lillian (Hazel).
August 30, 2021
Talk about page-turning! But even though Promises Unbroken was a suspenseful read, it possessed a lot of heart. The novel traded point of view among three characters, Mae Ashton, Davis Everleigh, and Alberto Moretti, and all three were compelling to read about and relate to as they found themselves in life-threatening situations and questioning God's hand in their lives. My favorite character, however, was John Scranton. He had the best of both worlds and was full of surprises. :)
I felt immersed in 1920s New York. The story's conclusion kept me guessing until the very end... and the whole climax and resolution was breathtaking. The only thing that brought me out of the story a bit was some repetition where it seemed less would be more---such as several scenes depicting Moretti's alcoholism, and Mae and Davis going back and forth so many times about how they wanted the other one to go back home to Georgia and be safe. But anyway, that's pretty minor in the grand scheme of the story. If you like historical suspense with a strong Christian message that tugs at your heart, read this book!
I felt immersed in 1920s New York. The story's conclusion kept me guessing until the very end... and the whole climax and resolution was breathtaking. The only thing that brought me out of the story a bit was some repetition where it seemed less would be more---such as several scenes depicting Moretti's alcoholism, and Mae and Davis going back and forth so many times about how they wanted the other one to go back home to Georgia and be safe. But anyway, that's pretty minor in the grand scheme of the story. If you like historical suspense with a strong Christian message that tugs at your heart, read this book!
October 14, 2021
Did you think there was no such thing as a Christian noir crime novel? Kristina Hall has proven that you can have a gritty and complicated thriller that still reflects the light of Christ. She weaves wonderfully flawed characters through a sordid tale full of twists and turns, that leaves just enough questions unanswered to make you long for more.
September 3, 2021
This book was kindly sent to me by the author; a positive review was not required, and all opinions expressed below are my own. So let it be written, so let it be done.
To be honest, this book was much better than I was expecting. It's not that I don't think indie authors can write well, it's just that mysteries are complicated things. I'm very picky about them. I haven't yet found an indie author who executed a mystery to my standards of excellency. I was expecting, frankly, to be much more bored than I was.
And I really wasn't bored by the plot. Promised Unbroken is reminiscent of The Lost Girl of Astor Street. It follows a young woman in New York who is bent on finding and proving that her dead sister is still alive. Her ex-fiance (I think) follows her and stays to help. Turns out that we, the audience, get to know about what happened to her sister before she does, so that was a very interesting turn of events that, I think, made the book more exciting.
So this book has a good plot with excitement and conflict and intrigue; a fairly well written historical setting (I say "fairly well" because though it wasn't outstanding in terms of descriptive details, I never forgot it was the 1920s); and a very interesting cast of mobsters. In fact, the mobsters were the most interesting part.
This brings me to the characters, and I guess I'm both happy/disappointed in them at the same time. The gangsters and Lillian were the most interesting people in this story. Not Mae, not Davis. Which is good, I guess, because it means the author did well writing villians sympathetically, but a bit unfortunate, perhaps, because the main characters should be the /main/ characters.
And that's my biggest critique. Mae and Davis were... kind of boring. I feel like they were merely functioning as plot devices, with no life of their own. If they weren't the main characters and good Christians whom I felt some sort of duty to care about... I wouldn't really have cared much about them??
Speaking of Christians... my greatest praise for the Christianity of this book is how a certain character gets saved in the story. Fiction doesn't do dramatic conversion stories very often! Kudos to the author for that. I finally felt that the "Christianity" in a Christian book was going somewhere. My greatest complaint for the Christianity in this book is... well... it was quite "preachy". I can't explain it very well, but it's such a cliche in Christian books, and feels very weird even though I /am/ a Christian... that the characters manage to quote so many Bible verses and say all the right things at the right times and make an entire two page speech about Christian life or why there's suffering in the world... like, sure, it's /correct/ but somehow just feels off to place it here. Like, there's too much talking and too little doing.
Anyway!!
I enjoyed the book, and would have really really really liked to read the whole thing from Lillian's point of view!
I am predicting that this series will just keep getting better as it goes on. For those who like Christian historical fiction with action and mystery, this is your book!!
To be honest, this book was much better than I was expecting. It's not that I don't think indie authors can write well, it's just that mysteries are complicated things. I'm very picky about them. I haven't yet found an indie author who executed a mystery to my standards of excellency. I was expecting, frankly, to be much more bored than I was.
And I really wasn't bored by the plot. Promised Unbroken is reminiscent of The Lost Girl of Astor Street. It follows a young woman in New York who is bent on finding and proving that her dead sister is still alive. Her ex-fiance (I think) follows her and stays to help. Turns out that we, the audience, get to know about what happened to her sister before she does, so that was a very interesting turn of events that, I think, made the book more exciting.
So this book has a good plot with excitement and conflict and intrigue; a fairly well written historical setting (I say "fairly well" because though it wasn't outstanding in terms of descriptive details, I never forgot it was the 1920s); and a very interesting cast of mobsters. In fact, the mobsters were the most interesting part.
This brings me to the characters, and I guess I'm both happy/disappointed in them at the same time. The gangsters and Lillian were the most interesting people in this story. Not Mae, not Davis. Which is good, I guess, because it means the author did well writing villians sympathetically, but a bit unfortunate, perhaps, because the main characters should be the /main/ characters.
And that's my biggest critique. Mae and Davis were... kind of boring. I feel like they were merely functioning as plot devices, with no life of their own. If they weren't the main characters and good Christians whom I felt some sort of duty to care about... I wouldn't really have cared much about them??
Speaking of Christians... my greatest praise for the Christianity of this book is how a certain character gets saved in the story. Fiction doesn't do dramatic conversion stories very often! Kudos to the author for that. I finally felt that the "Christianity" in a Christian book was going somewhere. My greatest complaint for the Christianity in this book is... well... it was quite "preachy". I can't explain it very well, but it's such a cliche in Christian books, and feels very weird even though I /am/ a Christian... that the characters manage to quote so many Bible verses and say all the right things at the right times and make an entire two page speech about Christian life or why there's suffering in the world... like, sure, it's /correct/ but somehow just feels off to place it here. Like, there's too much talking and too little doing.
Anyway!!
I enjoyed the book, and would have really really really liked to read the whole thing from Lillian's point of view!
I am predicting that this series will just keep getting better as it goes on. For those who like Christian historical fiction with action and mystery, this is your book!!
July 12, 2021
Finally finished this book! I was forced to take a long break from reading it because of a crazy busy couple of weeks, but I think I actually read it in about three sittings.
Promises Unbroken didn't turn out to be what I expected. I'm not sure what I expected, but this wasn't it.;) There was definitely no lack of action throughout the book! One fight after another kept it pretty lively! It didn't bother me at all, but if you're sensitive to gun violence and fighting this might not be the book for you...nothing excessively gorey or descriptive though.
I loved the setting and time period! I haven't read many books lately set in that time so it was refreshing.
I really loved Davis, because who wouldn't want a guy that protective and enduring? His unconditional love for Mae was so sweet!<3 What I really loved the most was the spiritual theme all throughout the book. Even though Mae struggled to trust God, she had two people constantly pointing her toward Him. The preacher (I'm having a mind-blank on his name) was one of my favorite characters. I highlighted a lot of parts of his, and Davis's, conversations about trusting the Lord!
So, even though there were some parts that bothered me when Mae's or Davis's thoughts and debates about whether the one would send the other home seemed pretty repetitive, I really enjoyed the book! (I stayed up 3 hours late finishing it, which I don't do if I don't like a book.) And now I'm eager to read the other books by this author!
I received a complementary copy of the book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
Promises Unbroken didn't turn out to be what I expected. I'm not sure what I expected, but this wasn't it.;) There was definitely no lack of action throughout the book! One fight after another kept it pretty lively! It didn't bother me at all, but if you're sensitive to gun violence and fighting this might not be the book for you...nothing excessively gorey or descriptive though.
I loved the setting and time period! I haven't read many books lately set in that time so it was refreshing.
I really loved Davis, because who wouldn't want a guy that protective and enduring? His unconditional love for Mae was so sweet!<3 What I really loved the most was the spiritual theme all throughout the book. Even though Mae struggled to trust God, she had two people constantly pointing her toward Him. The preacher (I'm having a mind-blank on his name) was one of my favorite characters. I highlighted a lot of parts of his, and Davis's, conversations about trusting the Lord!
So, even though there were some parts that bothered me when Mae's or Davis's thoughts and debates about whether the one would send the other home seemed pretty repetitive, I really enjoyed the book! (I stayed up 3 hours late finishing it, which I don't do if I don't like a book.) And now I'm eager to read the other books by this author!
I received a complementary copy of the book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
October 24, 2023
***I received a PDF copy from the author, no review required. These are my unbiased thoughts***
This book was a journey of faith! I loved the main theme of promise and how God's promises are unchanging, unbreakable and stand the test of time and space, unlike man's promises. There were so many other uplifting Christian themes: blind trust, faith, and total dependence on God. No matter the outcome, God is still on the throne. The theme of never giving up on way-ward family members really stuck with me and I appreciated the believable way it was portrayed. The author's well-grounded faith and love of the Savior clearly shone through the pages.
I don't want to spoil anything so I can't spill too many details (Trust me, there are a number of spoilers) but this book had great suspense, sweet romance (clean), page-turning action, intense emotion and a great villain to despise. And then there's Alberto/Moretti. I won't spoil anything but I'm most pleased with the ending :) Just a side note, I didn't put two and two together when it came to the trilogy name and his name until right at the end and I was like, yay! This is actually one of the few books I've read that's set in the 1920's so it was neat getting to immerse into that time period of mobsters, speakeasies, and jazz. I especially like the fashion descriptions- the makeup, flapper dresses and feathers.
Having never read anything by this author, her writing style was new to me and I thought the story had great flow and transition. I noticed a number of times she would show how many steps a character took to get to somewhere or approach someone and I thought it was unique. I'll give a couple examples:
"Twenty steps separated her from the man..."
"Four steps carried him to the end of the porch..."
There were only a few things I didn't care much for. I thought .45 was slightly overused when it came to mentioning their guns. Sometimes the action was so overwhelming and sudden that I found it hard to keep up with what was going on. But after rereading those parts the story was easy to follow. I thought Davis did a bang up job when it came to explaining salvation but I wish forgiveness would have been brought up more often along with believing and accepting Jesus. The Gospel was presented in a simple yet powerful way that's sure to speak to readers.
Overall, this was a really great read! I recommend this to anyone who's up for an exciting Christian suspense set in the roaring twenties. Thank you, Kristina for sending me a copy! Can't wait for book 2!!
This book was a journey of faith! I loved the main theme of promise and how God's promises are unchanging, unbreakable and stand the test of time and space, unlike man's promises. There were so many other uplifting Christian themes: blind trust, faith, and total dependence on God. No matter the outcome, God is still on the throne. The theme of never giving up on way-ward family members really stuck with me and I appreciated the believable way it was portrayed. The author's well-grounded faith and love of the Savior clearly shone through the pages.
I don't want to spoil anything so I can't spill too many details (Trust me, there are a number of spoilers) but this book had great suspense, sweet romance (clean), page-turning action, intense emotion and a great villain to despise. And then there's Alberto/Moretti. I won't spoil anything but I'm most pleased with the ending :) Just a side note, I didn't put two and two together when it came to the trilogy name and his name until right at the end and I was like, yay! This is actually one of the few books I've read that's set in the 1920's so it was neat getting to immerse into that time period of mobsters, speakeasies, and jazz. I especially like the fashion descriptions- the makeup, flapper dresses and feathers.
Having never read anything by this author, her writing style was new to me and I thought the story had great flow and transition. I noticed a number of times she would show how many steps a character took to get to somewhere or approach someone and I thought it was unique. I'll give a couple examples:
"Twenty steps separated her from the man..."
"Four steps carried him to the end of the porch..."
There were only a few things I didn't care much for. I thought .45 was slightly overused when it came to mentioning their guns. Sometimes the action was so overwhelming and sudden that I found it hard to keep up with what was going on. But after rereading those parts the story was easy to follow. I thought Davis did a bang up job when it came to explaining salvation but I wish forgiveness would have been brought up more often along with believing and accepting Jesus. The Gospel was presented in a simple yet powerful way that's sure to speak to readers.
Overall, this was a really great read! I recommend this to anyone who's up for an exciting Christian suspense set in the roaring twenties. Thank you, Kristina for sending me a copy! Can't wait for book 2!!
February 1, 2022
Wow what a ride! This book was fast paced and full of action!
I really enjoyed Kristina's writing style, and how she wove faith throughout the whole story. It was rich with truth.
When Davis was first mentioned I wasn't so sure about him, but boy did he prove me wrong! He was a great character - real, raw and always trying to do the right thing, even though he failed sometimes. Him and Mae were perfect together. When one struggled, the other was always there to give encouragement and support.
Scranton was amazing. A tough guy with a big fist and an even bigger heart. His whole family is just sweet and incredible. Mae really should be happy to get to live with them. XD
And Moretti - I adore those bad guy characters who turn their lives around. And I just knew this guy would be one of those - is that a spoiler? I love how we got a peak into his life/childhood and his internal struggle.
Vin and Lillian on the other hand. *gag* I wanted to believe as Mae did, but no Lillian knew what she was doing, and she wanted it. I did admire her commitment, even if it was misplaced. Vin was a well written and believable villain who seems to have everyone under his control.
I also appreciated that Mae and Davis were already engaged, and the romance was very minimal anyway. To me, it only stands out as about 1% of the plot.
Even though I didn't agree with all the shooting and violence committed by the good guys, that's my personal opinion and the author did handle it well.
Content: Alot of action, heavy violence, some shooting and beating up. Drinking, parties, and cursing mentioned, done by the bad guys and cast in negative light.
I love the message of this story. Though we may face pain and heartache here on earth, God's promises remain true and steadfast. Though family and friends may break their promises, He never does! He is faithful and true! 💖
I really enjoyed Kristina's writing style, and how she wove faith throughout the whole story. It was rich with truth.
When Davis was first mentioned I wasn't so sure about him, but boy did he prove me wrong! He was a great character - real, raw and always trying to do the right thing, even though he failed sometimes. Him and Mae were perfect together. When one struggled, the other was always there to give encouragement and support.
Scranton was amazing. A tough guy with a big fist and an even bigger heart. His whole family is just sweet and incredible. Mae really should be happy to get to live with them. XD
And Moretti - I adore those bad guy characters who turn their lives around. And I just knew this guy would be one of those - is that a spoiler? I love how we got a peak into his life/childhood and his internal struggle.
Vin and Lillian on the other hand. *gag* I wanted to believe as Mae did, but no Lillian knew what she was doing, and she wanted it. I did admire her commitment, even if it was misplaced. Vin was a well written and believable villain who seems to have everyone under his control.
I also appreciated that Mae and Davis were already engaged, and the romance was very minimal anyway. To me, it only stands out as about 1% of the plot.
Even though I didn't agree with all the shooting and violence committed by the good guys, that's my personal opinion and the author did handle it well.
Content: Alot of action, heavy violence, some shooting and beating up. Drinking, parties, and cursing mentioned, done by the bad guys and cast in negative light.
I love the message of this story. Though we may face pain and heartache here on earth, God's promises remain true and steadfast. Though family and friends may break their promises, He never does! He is faithful and true! 💖
July 1, 2021
Beautiful book! I loved how she wove scripture into the story, the characters were constantly quoting the scripture to encourage each other. They were focused on things of eternal importance and the gospel was shared, not once but twice. The theme of the book was convicting and I loved her use of the old hymns.
The time period felt very real and the characters were so well thought out. No complaints! This may actually be my favorite of her books so far! A must-read if you have enjoyed her previous books!
The time period felt very real and the characters were so well thought out. No complaints! This may actually be my favorite of her books so far! A must-read if you have enjoyed her previous books!
December 12, 2021
I really enjoyed this book! Mae and Davis are the greatest couple! I loved how they would do anything for each other...and Mae's devotion to finding her sister is something I can totally relate to.
Rossi was scary! Moreti was also scary but cool and I kind of fell in love with his character!
Scranton was one of my favorites! I loved the strong faith he represented and the love he displayed toward people he hardly knew.
I loved the story and how it drew me in and had me on the edge of my seat worried about what was going to happen next!
Kayti
Rossi was scary! Moreti was also scary but cool and I kind of fell in love with his character!
Scranton was one of my favorites! I loved the strong faith he represented and the love he displayed toward people he hardly knew.
I loved the story and how it drew me in and had me on the edge of my seat worried about what was going to happen next!
Kayti
October 22, 2021
An interesting tale that sweeps us into the slightly darker side of the Roaring Twenties. Mafia, Speakeasies, police corruption, prohibition, this book delves into all that. It also touches on Christianity and has a main focus on the themes - Trusting God and God's Unfailing Promises; both of which blended fairly well within the overarching plot. There were a few places that did lean a tad preachy but it seemed to work with the story.
I enjoyed the setting, the mystery, and all the characters - although my favorite character was actually Alberto Moretti. The story was well thought out and well written. I'm looking forward to reading the next book in this series.
I received a copy of this book from the author/publisher, a review was not required. The views expressed are my own honest opinion.
I enjoyed the setting, the mystery, and all the characters - although my favorite character was actually Alberto Moretti. The story was well thought out and well written. I'm looking forward to reading the next book in this series.
I received a copy of this book from the author/publisher, a review was not required. The views expressed are my own honest opinion.
July 28, 2021
Promises Unbroken is a very interesting book. It is set during the 1920's in New York. The tapestry of the mafia, prohibition, police corruption, and Christianity is explored into a nearly seamless story.
Mae comes to New York seeking her sister who is supposedly dead. Mae doesn't believe it and goes into the seedier side of New York to find Hazel. A good Christian girl is exposed to darkness while she tries to hold on to her faith and believe that she will be lead to her sister. Davis (her former fiancee) followers her and together they face danger, violence, and fear. Davis is a grounding force and helps Mae reconnect with her faith and believe that things will work out according to God's plan.
I found the book intriguing. People and places come together to weave a story that is full of suspense and full of grace.
The book contains violence and Christian theology.
Source: I received a complimentary copy. All thoughts and opinions expressed are my own.
Mae comes to New York seeking her sister who is supposedly dead. Mae doesn't believe it and goes into the seedier side of New York to find Hazel. A good Christian girl is exposed to darkness while she tries to hold on to her faith and believe that she will be lead to her sister. Davis (her former fiancee) followers her and together they face danger, violence, and fear. Davis is a grounding force and helps Mae reconnect with her faith and believe that things will work out according to God's plan.
I found the book intriguing. People and places come together to weave a story that is full of suspense and full of grace.
The book contains violence and Christian theology.
Source: I received a complimentary copy. All thoughts and opinions expressed are my own.
August 2, 2021
An absolute must read! An exciting story from page one and you won’t want to put it down. Intrigue, mystery, love, and faith are woven throughout this beautifully written book. This author has me hooked. Definitely reading all her books.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 8, 2021
Yes, Goodreads, this book was amazing.
Sure the writing wasn't stunning/gripping/whatever, but as someone who's brain is trying to tell them that they are exhausted this is fine. I legit started a book with that descriptor yesterday, I had hours I could have been reading it and I've not gotten to chapter two, so as much as I am on a the Wars of Boney kick, it's slow going.
I had a little problem with some names, but I'll save the bulk of that for The Lost Review Of Odd Books
The scripture flowed well and was touching.
Sure the writing wasn't stunning/gripping/whatever, but as someone who's brain is trying to tell them that they are exhausted this is fine. I legit started a book with that descriptor yesterday, I had hours I could have been reading it and I've not gotten to chapter two, so as much as I am on a the Wars of Boney kick, it's slow going.
I had a little problem with some names, but I'll save the bulk of that for The Lost Review Of Odd Books
The scripture flowed well and was touching.
July 10, 2021
Strap on your running shoes and get ready for this fast-paced, energy-filled inspirational historical suspense unlike any I’ve ever read—a definite page-turner. The characters are well-rounded and relentless in their search for Mae Ashton’s sister, who disappeared two years ago. The detailed plot is intense, with barely a moment to breathe.
After finding a crumpled photo of her sister with a man’s name scribbled on the back, Mae breaks off her engagement with Davis Everleigh and leaves her parent’s peaceful farm in Georgia to go to the big city of New York for answers. Would this man know where her sister is or what happened to her? Two years after the funeral, Mae still doesn’t believe her sister is dead.
Davis refuses to give up on the love of his life. He resigns from his father’s accounting firm to go find Mae and bring her home. He’s convinced she’s in denial but prays for wisdom in how to help her face reality.
The search doesn’t go as smoothly as expected for either of them. Mae learns the man in the photo is one of the most powerful and dangerous men in New York. Her questions and interference in his life put her and Davis in danger and in the crosshairs of the men ordered to kill them.
After finding a crumpled photo of her sister with a man’s name scribbled on the back, Mae breaks off her engagement with Davis Everleigh and leaves her parent’s peaceful farm in Georgia to go to the big city of New York for answers. Would this man know where her sister is or what happened to her? Two years after the funeral, Mae still doesn’t believe her sister is dead.
Davis refuses to give up on the love of his life. He resigns from his father’s accounting firm to go find Mae and bring her home. He’s convinced she’s in denial but prays for wisdom in how to help her face reality.
The search doesn’t go as smoothly as expected for either of them. Mae learns the man in the photo is one of the most powerful and dangerous men in New York. Her questions and interference in his life put her and Davis in danger and in the crosshairs of the men ordered to kill them.
July 3, 2021
The story is set in New York in the 1920s. Mae Aston is trying to locate her sister who disappeared and is presumed dead, but she doesn't believe it.
The storyline incorporates a 1920's historical city and the Rossi mob family. The story is fast-paced, filled with secrets, but also eventually leads to discovery and healing.
The Christian content is very well portrayed and is inspirational and inspiring. There are twists and mysterious happenings that will have you wondering how it will all turn out.
Great characters that kept the story moving along well and impacted the story as they should. Mae and Davis showed great courage and the situations tested their faith.
The author provided a complimentary copy and I choose to review it. All opinions are my own.
The storyline incorporates a 1920's historical city and the Rossi mob family. The story is fast-paced, filled with secrets, but also eventually leads to discovery and healing.
The Christian content is very well portrayed and is inspirational and inspiring. There are twists and mysterious happenings that will have you wondering how it will all turn out.
Great characters that kept the story moving along well and impacted the story as they should. Mae and Davis showed great courage and the situations tested their faith.
The author provided a complimentary copy and I choose to review it. All opinions are my own.
August 20, 2021
I absolutely adore that Kristina Hall is a Christian author who writes actual Christian books. Her books never just wear the label, but always have Christ at the heart, and Jesus' love and never ending grace flows effortlessly through each interaction, decision, and relationship that her characters' choose to pursue. As someone who is often disheartened with the current state of the Christian publishing industry, I'm so thankful for authors like Kristina who stay faithful to the faith element in each and every story.
I loved how this one is set in the 1920's, and revolves around gangster/mob activity, as this is definitely a unique and original idea for a Christian fiction novel. I was instantly hooked from the first page, and I had a hard time putting it down once I started it. The setting almost becomes a character in its own right, and it's extremely well developed and atmospheric to the reader. The plot is full of secrets, sinister plots, dastardly characters, and an emphasis on never giving up on what Jesus has asked of us to do, no matter how dire the situation may seem. This truly is a story that is going to appeal to a wide variety of readers, especially fans of Christian fiction who are looking for something a bit more original.
Told in the viewpoints of Mae, Davis and Alberto, the reader gets a unique perspective on the entire story unfolding, as we get to see it from both the good guys and one of the bad guys. While I definitely will say this book might not be for the faint at heart, the action keeps the story progressing perfectly, and never leaves the reader feeling bored or uninterested in the way things are unfolding.
The ending left me completely shocked, and I will now be anxiously awaiting the release of the second book, as I have a feeling that this author has another amazing story to tell in the next one.
Final Rating: 5/5.
I can't thank Kristina Hall enough for the opportunity to read this one, and for writing books that truly embody the notion of Christian fiction from start to finish.
I voluntarily read and reviewed a complimentary copy of this novel from the author in exchange for an honest review. I was not required to give a positive review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
I loved how this one is set in the 1920's, and revolves around gangster/mob activity, as this is definitely a unique and original idea for a Christian fiction novel. I was instantly hooked from the first page, and I had a hard time putting it down once I started it. The setting almost becomes a character in its own right, and it's extremely well developed and atmospheric to the reader. The plot is full of secrets, sinister plots, dastardly characters, and an emphasis on never giving up on what Jesus has asked of us to do, no matter how dire the situation may seem. This truly is a story that is going to appeal to a wide variety of readers, especially fans of Christian fiction who are looking for something a bit more original.
Told in the viewpoints of Mae, Davis and Alberto, the reader gets a unique perspective on the entire story unfolding, as we get to see it from both the good guys and one of the bad guys. While I definitely will say this book might not be for the faint at heart, the action keeps the story progressing perfectly, and never leaves the reader feeling bored or uninterested in the way things are unfolding.
The ending left me completely shocked, and I will now be anxiously awaiting the release of the second book, as I have a feeling that this author has another amazing story to tell in the next one.
Final Rating: 5/5.
I can't thank Kristina Hall enough for the opportunity to read this one, and for writing books that truly embody the notion of Christian fiction from start to finish.
I voluntarily read and reviewed a complimentary copy of this novel from the author in exchange for an honest review. I was not required to give a positive review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
September 27, 2021
There were some very important, ultimately lovely though hard, themes here. It made me consider the importance of sharing the Hope we ourselves have received. It made me consider what I would do in the situations that Davis and Mae encountered as well as truly being an encouragement to people in trusting when doubt creeps in as well as just to do the right thing when they know to do it. I enjoy this era. The prohibition and gangsters… especially after a documentary we watched about Al Capone. Definitely quite an interesting time. I wish there had been more details, it didn’t make me really feel like I was there.
What really bothered me most though was there was no reprieve from Mae’s… bleakness.
The reader was made very well to consider her plight but… she wallowed. If we had been given more interaction with coworkers (not every mention of them bearing warnings) or.. even just her and Davis sharing a meal, or with the Scranton’s. Something to give a little everyday lightness that CAN be found in every day? I dunno. But I had to take a break from it just because, aside from the scenes supposed to bring hope, they were quickly again encompassed by gloom from all 3 mc’s. There were also some other soppy redundancies.
But overall the message/themes were important; sticking with family/loved ones and really seeking the Truth and redemption.
Thank you to the author from whom I received a free copy. This is an honest review.
What really bothered me most though was there was no reprieve from Mae’s… bleakness.
The reader was made very well to consider her plight but… she wallowed. If we had been given more interaction with coworkers (not every mention of them bearing warnings) or.. even just her and Davis sharing a meal, or with the Scranton’s. Something to give a little everyday lightness that CAN be found in every day? I dunno. But I had to take a break from it just because, aside from the scenes supposed to bring hope, they were quickly again encompassed by gloom from all 3 mc’s. There were also some other soppy redundancies.
But overall the message/themes were important; sticking with family/loved ones and really seeking the Truth and redemption.
Thank you to the author from whom I received a free copy. This is an honest review.
August 18, 2021
Short Version: If you like historical suspense with captivating antagonists, delicious subtext, and absorbing action – get this book!
Long Version:
Characters – Can I just say that I absolutely love Davis? He cares for Mae so much that he constantly sacrifices his own wants for hers in the most noble, protective, manly way. It’s refreshing and incredibly sweet and I loved every bit of his POV chapters.
However, a lot of times I struggled to understand Mae herself. I get why she’d want to look for her sister because they’re family, but the other reasons were confusing because Hazel didn’t appear to be in as much danger as Mae thought she was. Mae also didn’t seem to have any personal hobbies/goals in life outside of Davis and Hazel, which made her character harder to empathize with.
Now Moretti, on the other hand, was one of the most intriguing henchmen I’ve read. His motivations were deliciously complex. On the one hand, he ruthlessly threatens, beats people up, and murders. But he also is a man of his word. He keeps his promises. Always. That really fascinated me and made me respect him, despite the fact that he’s such a cruel man. I couldn’t gobble up his POV chapters fast enough.
Prose – This was so lovely. I’ve never read a book in the 1920’s time period before, but I was still able to clearly imagine the settings in this story and immerse myself in the surroundings. It was all very subtly and skillfully described and I thoroughly enjoyed the ease with which I could imagine everything happening, like a movie. I wasn’t particularly thrilled with some of the mechanical aspects of the writing, like short sentences in sequence that were abrupt for dramatic effect, but that’s personal preference.
Plot/Pacing – A few of Mae’s chapters were hard to get into, but overall it was such a gripping story and flowed smoothly. The action and chase scenes were particularly well-written and I found myself holding my breath as it all unfolded.
Themes – You know what I really love in stories? When the title fits so perfectly to the story, when the themes in the story are woven so artfully around the title. Like this one. Most notably, we have God’s promises which are never broken. This is what sustains Davis and Mae throughout all their struggles and pain. And then we have Davis and Mae’s promises and commitments to each other, which they cling to no matter how tough it gets. Truly inspiring. Finally, as I’ve mentioned, there are Moretti’s promises, which he also never breaks and yet they give him (and the plot) layers of added conflict.
Some of the faith-based execution fell too heavily on the preaching side, mostly from Davis. I think it could have been more powerful if this was either shortened or delivered from Scranton, who is actually a preacher.
But the message and verses themselves were incredibly encouraging. Trusting God in the darkest of circumstances, because we know that He always keeps His promises. They’re like an anchor we can cling to during storms, solid, dependable, unshakeable. Unlike our own human weaknesses.
Note: I was given a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. Many thanks to Kristina for reaching out to me!
Long Version:
Characters – Can I just say that I absolutely love Davis? He cares for Mae so much that he constantly sacrifices his own wants for hers in the most noble, protective, manly way. It’s refreshing and incredibly sweet and I loved every bit of his POV chapters.
However, a lot of times I struggled to understand Mae herself. I get why she’d want to look for her sister because they’re family, but the other reasons were confusing because Hazel didn’t appear to be in as much danger as Mae thought she was. Mae also didn’t seem to have any personal hobbies/goals in life outside of Davis and Hazel, which made her character harder to empathize with.
Now Moretti, on the other hand, was one of the most intriguing henchmen I’ve read. His motivations were deliciously complex. On the one hand, he ruthlessly threatens, beats people up, and murders. But he also is a man of his word. He keeps his promises. Always. That really fascinated me and made me respect him, despite the fact that he’s such a cruel man. I couldn’t gobble up his POV chapters fast enough.
Prose – This was so lovely. I’ve never read a book in the 1920’s time period before, but I was still able to clearly imagine the settings in this story and immerse myself in the surroundings. It was all very subtly and skillfully described and I thoroughly enjoyed the ease with which I could imagine everything happening, like a movie. I wasn’t particularly thrilled with some of the mechanical aspects of the writing, like short sentences in sequence that were abrupt for dramatic effect, but that’s personal preference.
Plot/Pacing – A few of Mae’s chapters were hard to get into, but overall it was such a gripping story and flowed smoothly. The action and chase scenes were particularly well-written and I found myself holding my breath as it all unfolded.
Themes – You know what I really love in stories? When the title fits so perfectly to the story, when the themes in the story are woven so artfully around the title. Like this one. Most notably, we have God’s promises which are never broken. This is what sustains Davis and Mae throughout all their struggles and pain. And then we have Davis and Mae’s promises and commitments to each other, which they cling to no matter how tough it gets. Truly inspiring. Finally, as I’ve mentioned, there are Moretti’s promises, which he also never breaks and yet they give him (and the plot) layers of added conflict.
Some of the faith-based execution fell too heavily on the preaching side, mostly from Davis. I think it could have been more powerful if this was either shortened or delivered from Scranton, who is actually a preacher.
But the message and verses themselves were incredibly encouraging. Trusting God in the darkest of circumstances, because we know that He always keeps His promises. They’re like an anchor we can cling to during storms, solid, dependable, unshakeable. Unlike our own human weaknesses.
Note: I was given a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. Many thanks to Kristina for reaching out to me!
January 17, 2022
Mae leaves rural Georgia for New York City in the early 1920s in search of her sister, Hazel. Hazel has disappeared, and Mae fears she has been killed. But the truth is even harder to swallow. Hazel has taken a new name and a new life with a very powerful and bad man, Vincenzo Rossi, who is involved in many illegal activities, bootlegging foremost amongst them. Mae's one-time fiancé, Davis, follows her to NYC to bring her home, but finds an obstinate Mae who refuses to give up on her sister.
These characters, along with one of Rossi's enforcers (Alberto Moretti), face great adversity, ultimately finding what many of them have known from the beginning: faith in Jesus Christ and God's promises is the answer to their current problems and their guilt for what they've done in the past (sometimes the very recent past!).
The author sets the scene very well, bringing the 1920s alive and populating it with characters we care about and root for or against. I particularly enjoyed the arc Moretti's character took, and also appreciated Mae's self-doubts and self-recriminations. The Pastor is also a great character. The biblical quotes are spot on, and the hymn sung at the church service is used in a beautiful way.
This is the first in a trilogy, and the ending leaves plenty of story to tell.
Well done!
These characters, along with one of Rossi's enforcers (Alberto Moretti), face great adversity, ultimately finding what many of them have known from the beginning: faith in Jesus Christ and God's promises is the answer to their current problems and their guilt for what they've done in the past (sometimes the very recent past!).
The author sets the scene very well, bringing the 1920s alive and populating it with characters we care about and root for or against. I particularly enjoyed the arc Moretti's character took, and also appreciated Mae's self-doubts and self-recriminations. The Pastor is also a great character. The biblical quotes are spot on, and the hymn sung at the church service is used in a beautiful way.
This is the first in a trilogy, and the ending leaves plenty of story to tell.
Well done!
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