This book keeps you in the dark, re-reading page after page, attempting to work out what’s going on.
I enjoyed the prequel. I naively assumed the lack of information and the strange writing style, would become clearer in this book, it doesn't.
The FMC Jolene is a supe, she doesn’t know it but the FBI does, which causes her to fail a background check. This is the catalyst for returning to her hometown where she undertakes a personal journey to face up to an event which earned her the name “The Catastrophe”, the death of her parents, and her emotional fall-out from her fiancé leaving her. At the end of this long book, we still don't have any details of these events, and little progress seems to have been made.
Jolene has a list of qualifications, training, and impressive international jobs which most people couldn’t achieve in a lifetime. Yet she is an emotional mess, self-absorbed, aloof with a superior attitude, and I find her difficult to like.
Her sidekick, Seer, is meant to be Irish I think, but her dialogue is confusing (e.g., Insulting my mates innit the best plan, ye see….). I find her remote, brash and a bit of a contradiction, I don’t like her.
I had no strong reaction to any of the men, but that isn’t helped by the writing style. Every character has many names e.g. One of her men can be Wolfgang/Wolfie/McBabyVet/Lucy or Fletcher interchangeably, so I was constantly wondering who was speaking!
I’m genuinely interested by the plot, but it's slow moving and difficult to grasp due to a lack of information. When information is hinted at, Jolene doesn’t chase down the pertinent points, instead she obsesses over the emotional ones meaning we stay in the dark. At times the book feels a bit YA because of unnecessary drama; instead of a straightforward action, the harem cooks up elaborate, juvenile, and unnecessary plots to achieve their aims. You are Adults; if you want to leave a dance, leave it!
Some sentences lack punctuation and must be read multiple times, to make any sense. Slang and odd phrases are used which I’ve assumed are common to the South, they made no sense to me. Foreign language is used and only explained at the end of a chapter. But by far the most frustration comes from being kept in the dark; In one paragraph spells, powers, a fog, and the “other side” are discussed. The reader doesn’t know (or learn) what the spells are, what the powers are, what the fog is or where the other side is. Please give me details?!!
The book finishes on a cliff hanger. Sadly I’m not convinced the intrigue will outweigh my frustration, so I probably won't read any further.