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Every object has a ghost.

There is a small yellow backpack - half unzipped, mouth yawning to the pavement, contents strewn around it (a banana, an exercise book, a pair of scissors) - abandoned on a suburban footpath.

Ten feet away, the rubber stamp of tyres, resisting clamped brakes, mount the curb and cut across the path. The tracks come to an end at a crippled stop sign.

The street, a tree-lined suburban road dappled in late-afternoon sunlight, is calm. But anyone walking past can feel the ghosts: the prickle on the back of their necks that tells them something happened here. The story of a vehicle careening to a halt. Of a child’s backpack left in a hurry.

That intuition all comes before they take a closer look, and see there is dark, dry red on the scissor’s blade. The ghosts are screaming now; the scene’s memory turns violent. And as the passers-by raise their phones to answer the question what is your emergency? They see more red. Between the tyre-tracks and the blood. There are two words, hastily scrawled on the sidewalk. Written in blood.

FIND US.

4 pages, Audible Audio

First published June 1, 2021

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Profile Image for Nina (ninjasbooks).
1,597 reviews1,688 followers
April 4, 2023
Now this was something different. The twist was totally unexpected, and I loved it at the time. Afterwards however, I realize the motivation for the kidnapping wasn’t fully explained, so that’s why I give four stars instead of five. It was still brilliant for such a short suspense novel.
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553 reviews216 followers
December 18, 2021
4.50 Stars (rnd ⬇️) — This is 4hrs of straightup porn- thriller!!! All the elements of suspense are covered and Benjamin does a stellar job building tension with a confronting & no holds-barred perspective that hits the “oh shit” button from page one!!!

Best enjoyed on a long and familiar drive, where you can pay attention without having to hold too much narrative notes at one time.

The author has outdone himself here in the evil stakes, creating genuine horror for the reader by ensuring they feel some empathy for these disgustingly awful protagonists!!!

Free for Audible members, free audiobooks don’t get any better than this. If the my do — I have some hunting ahead of me ✅
Profile Image for EmG ReadsDaily.
1,553 reviews148 followers
December 24, 2025
A brilliantly intense, dark, yet intriguing novella.

I was absolutely hooked and enjoyed the twists the entire way through this suspenseful story.

This book surprised me, as it was darker than the Ernest Cunningham series, although still a great twisty mystery!
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390 reviews53 followers
July 9, 2025
Wow! That ending...



Audible Original:
Duration 4 hours and 18 minutes


Listeners follow special FBI asset and single mother (Collette) as she desperately tries to find her children who have been kidnapped. The story has many twists and turns with the biggest one being at the end.

Very well produced!
Profile Image for Natalie M.
1,437 reviews92 followers
November 21, 2023
Wow, what a novella!

Even though I had the answer it was mind-blowing! A real freight train of disaster that had me listening to the entire book in one sitting.

If this book had been any longer I’d have had a stress attack - intense, intriguing and ultimately the perfect length.
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1,671 reviews167 followers
June 7, 2021
4/5 ⭐️
I definitely wasn’t expecting what actually happened! My only complaint is I wish it had been longer. It seemed a bit rushed, which is usually try for most short stories.
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Author 14 books127 followers
August 1, 2023
This book was super disturbing, and I can’t say I really enjoyed it, but I’m impressed with the twists and so I upped my rating from 3 to 4 because I didn’t see them coming.
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2,087 reviews191 followers
May 9, 2022
4½⭐
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Wow…what a strange little story. Unexpected and even a tad jaw-dropping. Short but not under-developed. I am surprised that it didn’t have more narrators since this is an Audible Original…they usually have additional narrators for each point of view. But it wasn’t a deal-breaker by any means.


TOTᗩᒪ SᙅOᖇᙓ 8.57/❿
OᑭᙓᑎIᑎᘜ → 8.5 ᙅᕼᗩᖇᗩᙅTᙓᖇS → 8 ᑭᒪOT/ᙖᙓᒪIᙓᐯᗩᙖIᒪITY → 8.5 ᗩTᙏOSᑭᕼᙓᖇᙓ/TOᑎᙓ → 9 ᙎᖇITIᑎᘜ STYᒪᙓ → 8.5 ᙓᑎᗪIᑎᘜ → 9 Oᐯᙓᖇᗩᒪᒪ ᙓᑎᒍOYᙏᙓᑎT → 8.5
Profile Image for Judy Pancoast.
Author 6 books58 followers
June 12, 2021
Listened to the audiobook in one trip back and forth between CT and ME. Yes, it had some big twists but they were telegraphed so obviously that when they happened I wasn’t really surprised. Also, our main character’s children, who are central to the story, are both obnoxious brats- especially the girl. I wasn’t invested at all. Thank goodness this book was a freebie with my Audible membership. I will not be looking up any more books by this author.
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1,513 reviews15 followers
December 12, 2021
Well damn. That ending. Although .
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33 reviews1 follower
July 23, 2021
WOAH! Just when you think you know what’s going to happen, there’s another plot twist! 5/5, I’d read this again.
31 reviews1 follower
June 8, 2021
Recipe of this book: Combine every cliche in the crime drama/thriller book genre into one big bowl. Stir well.
341 reviews
July 25, 2021
This was an awesome audible! I couldn’t stop listening. Stevenson was masterful with twists.
Profile Image for Amy Cobb.
384 reviews34 followers
February 21, 2023
4.5⭐️ rounded up. I listened to this in one day and it was a great thriller! Now I want to read more of his work!
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1,058 reviews94 followers
February 22, 2022
Well, what a great surprise this was! I went in blind, and was quickly hooked. And the ending! This was a gem.
Profile Image for Lavins.
1,340 reviews77 followers
January 21, 2022
3 stars

I'll be honest, until the last part this was a 2 stars for me. Then it went up to 4.4 and the ending took it down to 3 stars.

Two kids disappear and they turn out to be the kids of a former police/detective woman. She does everything in her power to find them although, of course, she is not part of the official investigation.

The story is told from the mom's perspective and the kidnapper's perspective.

Even though it's a short book, the first two thirds felt long and dragged and barely kept my interest. I enjoyed the twist in the end, very disturbing to be honest, but the actual ending was a let down for me.

A mystery book worth reading!
Profile Image for Angela.
63 reviews
October 18, 2021
This was so so so awful ! Don’t waste your time !
Profile Image for Rajesh.
413 reviews9 followers
November 26, 2024
A little over a 100 pages makes it a quick read but is very well written Fits in as many twists as possible in such a short format.
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471 reviews30 followers
July 15, 2024
A fantastic short story that had me absorbed, slightly disturbed, and a little terrified particularly because I am a mother myself. And the ending!!!!! Gripping but at the same time infuriating.

I read this short story in one sitting and couldn't get through the pages fast enough. I loved how it flicked between different POV - mother and kidnappers - allowing you to know things that some of the other characters weren't privy to. This was so well written and it gave heaps of clever clues along the way. Although the motive wasn't fully explained for both the kidnappers, I still throughly enjoyed it. However as a mum I am more than a little freaked out by it.

This was much darker than the other book I have read by this author - Everyone in my Family has Killed Someone.
Profile Image for Barbara  Williford .
645 reviews5 followers
November 14, 2021
While the storyline had potential the whole book was meh. I like the idea of the main character but she as well as the others have no depth to them. If you need a book that’s just a filler for something to do, this one was okay. More along the lines of a cozy mystery, nothing fantastic. The author could have done so much more with this book. A really good author can use more descriptive words than explicit language. If you have to relay on those adjectives, adverbs and verbs, you really haven’t made it as an author.

The mom is a secret FBI agent, her kids get kidnapped and she goes vigilante. Throw in some unnecessary language and that’s about the extent of the book.

Trigger warning: explicit language, violence against children.
Profile Image for Cardi.
379 reviews28 followers
June 13, 2021
Not bad for something I got 'for free' on Audible.
Positives: I liked the narrator's voice and performance, manages to pack in quite a bit of narrative for a short listen, it was interesting enough that I finished it, it was bold enough to go with a realistically bleak ending
Negatives: I guessed the big twist less than halfway through which made it a lot less compelling, characters are not particularly well developed, some interesting themes are hinted at but not developed in the 4 hour window, I do not enjoy an 'evil child' trope (referencing Holly here)
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Profile Image for Natalie.
79 reviews
August 6, 2024
This was not what I expected at all - in a good way. I didn’t see it coming. Although, not sure if I like the way it ended and the motive wasn’t ever fully explained. It was very short and I feel like it could have used some further fleshing out.
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