I enjoyed this enormously! I really appreciate that the author decided to write about a little known conflict between Sparta and Tegea, instead of a done-to-death great battle or something.
The writing itself was technically proficient with great pacing, balance between dialogue and description. The characters were all given an interior voice as well, which went a long way to fleshing out complex motivations and reactions and showing emotional and character growth!
And descriptions of the weather in scenes was not left out!! I don’t know why but I need to know the weather to really make a scene come alive for me!
The story itself was magnificent and served beautifully to illustrate so many aspects of both Sparta and a typical small city-state of the time. This felt like a very well researched book. I’ve spent the last three years devouring every book I can find on Ancient Greece (I have no idea why…sudden bizarre obsession!) so I have quite a lot of books to compare this to, in terms of historical accuracy…as far as we know!
I only have two complaints! One, I feel the Spartan society in this book is painted with too gentle a brush. The treatment of the helots was, by all accounts I’ve read, brutal. I don’t think these were “beloved family retainers”, as Zoe was portrayed. These were a people who had been very deliberately and skillfully “broken” into servitude.
And I don’t know how nostalgic any Spartiate would be for their years in the agoge. Psychologically, these people broke themselves for the sake of military prowess.
Although, Lysandrides reception upon return certainly illustrated this to some extent, it still struck me as not harsh enough.
Anyway, it’s a small and minor aspect that is merely my own opinion.
The other complaint may actually be a result of editing! At the end, when Spartans invaded and overthrew the tyrant? I was so disappointed to have that entire episode covered in less than two pages!!!! Arghhhh!!! The chariot races were described in such vivid detail but we SKIP the battle??? I got quite misogynistic for a moment!! “Helena!!!”, I put the book down and yelled into the empty room, “You…you WOMAN!!! You don’t gloss over the BATTLE!!!!!”.
And then I laughed at myself for having become so bloodthirsty after 3 years of reading about so many battles in such gruesome detail!
Even though a 40 page battle scene was clearly NOT the type of book this was, I still expected and wanted one!
Anyway, excellent book which I thoroughly enjoyed! It’s definitely staying on my shelf to be reread in a few years!