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The Lumber Baron's Daughters #1
The Element of Love
With their sharp engineering minds, Laura Stiles and her two sisters have been able to deal with their mother's unfortunate choice in husband, until they discover his plans to marry each of them off to his lecherous friends. Now they must run away--far and fast--to find better matches to legally claim their portion of their father's lumber dynasty and seize control from their stepfather.
When Laura befriends a mission group heading to serve the poor in California during their escape, she quickly volunteers herself and her sisters to join their efforts. Despite the settlement being in miserable condition, the sisters are excited by the opportunity to put their skills to good use. Laura also sees potential in Caleb, the local minister, to help with gaining her inheritance. But when secrets buried in Caleb's past and in the land around them come to light, it'll take all the smarts the sisters have to keep trouble at bay.
When Laura befriends a mission group heading to serve the poor in California during their escape, she quickly volunteers herself and her sisters to join their efforts. Despite the settlement being in miserable condition, the sisters are excited by the opportunity to put their skills to good use. Laura also sees potential in Caleb, the local minister, to help with gaining her inheritance. But when secrets buried in Caleb's past and in the land around them come to light, it'll take all the smarts the sisters have to keep trouble at bay.
304 pages, Paperback
First published March 1, 2022
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About the author
Mary Connealy
113 books2,512 followersMary Connealy writes romantic comedy with cowboys always with a strong suspense thread. She is a two time Carol Award winner, and a Rita, Christy and Inspirational Reader's Choice finalist.
She is the bestselling author of 65 books and novellas.
Her most recent three book series are: Braced for Love, A Man with a Past and Love on the Range for Bethany House Publishing. She’s also written four other series for Barbour Publishing and many novellas and several stand-alone books for multiple publishers.
Mary will be a published author for ten years in 2017 with nearly a million books in print. She has a degree in broadcast communications with an emphasis in journalism and has worked at her local newspaper.
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She is the bestselling author of 65 books and novellas.
Her most recent three book series are: Braced for Love, A Man with a Past and Love on the Range for Bethany House Publishing. She’s also written four other series for Barbour Publishing and many novellas and several stand-alone books for multiple publishers.
Mary will be a published author for ten years in 2017 with nearly a million books in print. She has a degree in broadcast communications with an emphasis in journalism and has worked at her local newspaper.
Find Mary online at:
Seekerville
Petticoats & Pistols
My Website
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February 26, 2022
Great start to the new series, The Lumber Baron’s Daughters.
We meet the sisters, Laura, Michelle and Jillian Stiles, as they sneak out of the house, on the run from their evil stepfather, leaving their mother behind and in danger. Boarding a train, they connect with a parson and his helpers on their way to a mission field near a gold mine. The three sisters are very well educated. Their real father had them trained in order to take over the family lumber dynasty. In addition, Laura knows chemistry and is adept at blowing things up. Michelle is a mechanical engineer and is very well organized. Jilly is a structural engineer and loves math. They are on the run but also in search of husbands so that they might return home, save their mother and wrest the family business from their stepfather.
Caleb is a parson with a past of secrets but a heart for the lost. Laura has set her sights on him but: “Getting to know a man was almost more work than it was worth.”
With her signature wit and plenty of danger to go around, Mary Connealy infuses her story with godly lessons, giving us unique and likable characters and just enough uncertainty to pique our interest for the next book.
*I received a complimentary copy of this book from Bethany House on behalf of the author. I was not required to give a favorable review. All opinions are my own.*
We meet the sisters, Laura, Michelle and Jillian Stiles, as they sneak out of the house, on the run from their evil stepfather, leaving their mother behind and in danger. Boarding a train, they connect with a parson and his helpers on their way to a mission field near a gold mine. The three sisters are very well educated. Their real father had them trained in order to take over the family lumber dynasty. In addition, Laura knows chemistry and is adept at blowing things up. Michelle is a mechanical engineer and is very well organized. Jilly is a structural engineer and loves math. They are on the run but also in search of husbands so that they might return home, save their mother and wrest the family business from their stepfather.
Caleb is a parson with a past of secrets but a heart for the lost. Laura has set her sights on him but: “Getting to know a man was almost more work than it was worth.”
With her signature wit and plenty of danger to go around, Mary Connealy infuses her story with godly lessons, giving us unique and likable characters and just enough uncertainty to pique our interest for the next book.
*I received a complimentary copy of this book from Bethany House on behalf of the author. I was not required to give a favorable review. All opinions are my own.*
March 1, 2022
‘The right thing for him might be to run for the hills.’
Well, Mary Connealy had done it again. She has once again written a cowboy comedy that brings much enjoyment and hours of great reading. I have been a fan since I first read a book by her. Her books sit proudly on my shelves. And do indeed take up a lot of room.
Connealy has created a cast of characters here that I surely enjoyed getting to know. And look forward to know more of, to be sure. These three sisters really are a cool trio. I can’t wait to see what happens in the lives of Michelle and Jilly. And to see if old mean Edgar gets what is coming to him. I just enjoyed every single minute. Now I have to wait a long time to read the next one.
My thanks to Bethany House Publishers for a copy of this book via the Net Galley platform. The review here is expressly my own opinion.
Well, Mary Connealy had done it again. She has once again written a cowboy comedy that brings much enjoyment and hours of great reading. I have been a fan since I first read a book by her. Her books sit proudly on my shelves. And do indeed take up a lot of room.
Connealy has created a cast of characters here that I surely enjoyed getting to know. And look forward to know more of, to be sure. These three sisters really are a cool trio. I can’t wait to see what happens in the lives of Michelle and Jilly. And to see if old mean Edgar gets what is coming to him. I just enjoyed every single minute. Now I have to wait a long time to read the next one.
My thanks to Bethany House Publishers for a copy of this book via the Net Galley platform. The review here is expressly my own opinion.
February 20, 2022
A well told story of the love between a mother and her daughters and the hunt for love. The sisters are brilliant, trained to take over a company in various ways, but they are out of their element in others. When they have to flee to escape harm, the adventure begins and runs fast and furious. A book I truly enjoyed.
April 11, 2022
*Warnings*
#1 This is a long review, so pull up a chair and grab a bowl of popcorn. You’ll be here awhile. #2 When I read a review, I want substantial information. So I will not skimp on the details. Which may mean some spoilers, so watch out.
Stars: 2 stars
Synopsis: When their vile stepfather’s intentions to marry them off to the highest bidder forces the Stiles sisters to run for their lives, the youngest of the three heiresses, Laura, finds Parson Caleb Tillman’s mission group and uses them as an escape...and perhaps much more.
Here I go again, eh? Taking of one of the industry’s most popular new releases and blasting it to bits. Y’all, even some of my friends, who’s bookish opinions I usually agree with wholeheartedly, thoroughly enjoyed this book...and I absolutely hated it.
Of course, I must preface this by saying I knew I would. You see, I read a few Connealy books back in the day (even then knowing she was one of the most popular Christian western romance authors out there) and just couldn’t get into them. Sure, the plots were interesting and kept my attention, but even twelve-year-old me knew something was lacking.
Just-as-naive (almost) seventeen-year-old me had the bright idea to pick up Connealy’s latest release, The Element of Love, and give her another try. Bethany House’s publicist basically convinced me that this book was worth the read and I thought, if nothing else, I could enjoy the story itself and that absolutely gorgeous cover.
(Y’all. That. Cover. I have no words.)
I mean, surely her 2022 novel would be leagues above her 2008-2010 releases, right? Surely her writing had gotten better within the last decade?
Yeah. Nope.
Before I start complaining, as I am wont to do, I will say this: people have enjoyed this book. You might enjoy this book (actually, I put money on it). It has an interesting premise, and it’s a short, fast-paced read, which is just about all most people want out of a story.
Keywords: most people. I, for one, am not most people, and I require a great deal more than a short, quick read and interesting concept.
I need strong development and good writing, the two main things this book lacked.
Since my pet peeves go beyond those two things, I’m gonna divide this review into subsections (no, I’m not changing my review structure again...just trying to contain my scrambled thoughts).
(This is what happens when I go to review a book the day after I finished it. *groans*)
Prose
The first of the Six Ps of a Novel, prose is one of my all-time favorites. I’m a sucker for lyrical, poetic prose...classical, philosophical prose...emotional prose that captures every element of the story and perfectly conveys it.
Or, well, anything well-written.
Unfortunately, Connealy’s prose of none of that. I hate to say it, but to me, there was more telling than showing. There was no emotion or deep connection to the characters’ perspectives (which made it so hard to tell who’s POV each scene was in, especially since we had so many POV characters). Really, the book read like a first draft—very threadbare in both the prose department and the…
Plot
Y’all. The concept was so interesting (if a little unrealistic), and it really had so much potential! BUT (always a but, y’know), it was so poorly executed and I just felt like plot had never really been plotted. And this is coming from a pantser (which means I don’t follow a specific plot structure or outline for my novels). It seemed like Connealy just made things up as she went along and threw stuff in whenever it popped in her head.
And, since we’re talking first drafts here, the plot was never polished or developed. You can wing your story and figure out your premise as you write it, but you have to finish it. You can’t just pass your pantsed story off as a polished novel; you have to fix inconsistencies, tie loose ends, foreshadowed things, omit anything that’s pointless. The list goes on. Unfortunately, Connealy didn’t do that.
On top of that, she added a lot of extra plot points and subplots that really took away from the main one. Considering how short this book was, I feel like the emphasis needed to be solely on Laura, her sisters, and finding husbands. All the drama with the miners (especially at the end) and the whole deal with the gold could’ve been (1) handled better or (2) omitted entirely.
Or we could’ve made the book longer...just sayin’.
Pacing
It’s honestly hard to find a book with bad pacing; it’s kinda difficult to mess that up. The Element of Love was fast-paced and—like I said—short, and I think that pacing would have worked really well (especially considering it’s part of a series) IF the story had been developed better! We breezed through the beginning, skipped over character development, and jumped headfirst into a marriage without any foundation! Worse, the ending was terrible. I’m sorry, but it just was. All the subplots were wrapped up hurriedly, while the main plot points were left hanging. Of course, not everything could be resolved in this book, but there’s no denying that the ending could’ve been better.
People
For a 304-page book, we had a TON of characters. Laura and her sisters. Caleb and his friends. The miners and their wives. Zane and his men. Not to mention Margaret and Edgar. In short, there should’ve been half as many characters and twice as many pages.
Why?
Because the characters were positively skeletal. Laura was lacking characterization and development that she sorely needed—because she could’ve been an amazing, unique character, but instead she was just a smart blonde. Jilly and Michelle were more developed, and only from other characters’ perspectives rather than their own.
Speaking of the three sisters...it bothered me how much emphasis was put on their intelligence. Okay, okay, I know what you’re thinking: “It’s the whole point of the story! They’re smarter than any woman—or man—of their time!” And that is an amazing and unique trait, but it was used just like beauty.
Seriously.
Everyone was captivated by their intelligence (which was real, but confined only to book learning rather than wisdom or common sense, which I personally value more), and their smarts were their only good quality, their definition. In the end, people didn’t like the Stiles sisters because of their kind hearts or insight or helpfulness or cheerful attitudes or Christlike qualities.
They liked them because they were smart.
And the last thing I wanted to do was like them just because they were smart. I wanted true depth of character and authentic faith in God and genuine compassion. Not mathematical minds. (Speaking of, though, I personally think Roseanna M. White’s Margot de Wilde was written better. Her intelligence stretched a little farther than a good education, and she actually had a convincing mathematical mind. Still didn’t like her much either, though, go figure.)
Caleb...whoo, boy. It’s one thing for me to not like the heroine or connect with her, but the hero? I’m supposed to adore the hero!
Not Caleb. He had so much potential—caring missionary pastor with a hidden past of shame—but his entire character was rushed through and discarded. All his struggles and internal conflicts and feelings and arc could’ve been defined and made him an amazing, relatable hero...instead, he was nothing but a—you guessed it—love interest. I don’t do love interests. I do heroes and heroines. Not main character and love interest. I need equality.
In the end, Zane was the best character. I absolutely adored him (strong, stubborn, tall, dark, and handsome; what’s not to love?), and the only reason I might read the next book is because of him. Out of everyone, his personality came through the strongest and he intrigued me the most.
(Also, y’all will probably hate me for this...but Edgar needed more development too. Like, c’mon, y’all. Even the villains are people. Unless they’re aliens, of course. Or animals. Or robots. Or...you get my point.)
Purpose
This section is technically for themes and messages, but I’m gonna go overboard and cover a lot here.
First of all, there was no theme or message. There should have been one...about trusting in God or forgiveness or true love. But there wasn’t. *sobs* The faith elements were there...but they weren’t defined and they had no impact. And, of course, the sisters’ faith in God was limited to “knowing their Bible” (even the devil knows his Bible; that doesn’t mean a thing), and they never sought God, His will for their lives, or His precepts.
Rather, there was this twisted idea that marriage is an institution created for the sole purpose of serving oneself. If your husband is perfect, be married. If not, you need to leave. If your marriage gets you an inheritance, get married. If you don’t gain anything, forget it. Marriage was not treated as “an honourable estate...signifying unto us the mystical union that is betwixt Christ and his Church: which holy estate Christ adorned and beautified with his presence, and first miracle that he wrought, in Cana of Galilee, and is commended of Saint Paul to be honourable among all men: and therefore is not by any to be enterprized, nor taken in hand, unadvisedly, lightly, or wantonly, to satisfy men’s carnal lusts and appetites, like brute beasts that have no understanding; but reverently, discreetly, advisedly, soberly, and in the fear of God.” (Quoting from the Puritan vows, in case you're wondering.)
Speaking of marriage, y’all. This was one of the worst romances I’ve ever read...mainly because there was no romance. There was no connection between Laura and Caleb, no development of their relationship at all, so their sudden marriage seemed really uncalled for, you know? Had the characters been developed and their romance actually there, I might not have minded the quick marriage so much.
(As it were, I would’ve rather had a marriage of convenience that occurred within a day of acquaintance.)
Also, this whole “marrying you would be a sin because you couldn’t have a mission” was. so. weird. (Is that a spoiler? I dunno. I feel like I’m past spoilers at this point.) Like, if God called Caleb to that, only He can call him out of that...and we’re all called to serve others and share the Gospel, whether we own a lumber company or not. Ya dig?
Just seemed like a dumb excuse when she’d could’ve went with “Dude, we don’t know each other from Adam’s house cat.”
And Caleb told her he was in prison, but apparently Laura thought that he’d been imprisoned for jaywalking, so when it came out that he’d been a swindler, she immediately gets ticked and vows to run off. LIKE C’MON HONEY HE TRIED TO TELL YOU AND MAYBE IF YOU HADN’T MARRIED HIM WITHIN A DAY YOU WOULDN’T HAVE BEEN SO SURPRISED TO FIND OUT HE WAS A CRIMINAL!
*clears throat* My apologies.
Before I get on another rant...the last big thing that bothered me was that everyone was a wife-beater. If you weren’t perfect, you beat women. And that was that. There was no development of the issue of abuse or really anything aside from just lots of gratuitous violence. What could’ve been an impactful theme was very poorly dealt with, I think.
But I��ve got to move one before I get mad again…
Preachiness
(Technically, this section is for faith elements...not preachiness. I just needed a P-word.)
Y’all know it ain’t a good book unless it’s got the Lord in it. Naturally, there were Christian elements, because Caleb was a parson...but, like I said, there weren’t any themes or messages, what could’ve been was never dwelt on, and everyone’s relationship with God was defined by how well they knew Scripture (not that they ever quoted any). There was really no substance to everyone’s faith, nor did I see any witnessing going on. *shrugs* I just needed more authenticity. More...everything, really.
Long Story Short
To sum up all my whining, the story needed more development, stronger characters, and better quality writing. The characters and concept had great potential—and Zane was awesome—but I feel like the execution left a lot to be desired. There were no definite themes, arcs, or messages either, which was really disappointing for me, because I love gleaning from stories, feeling inspired by them, connecting with the characters, and learning something new!
(And I could kick myself for writing in nearly two thousand words what I just summed up in seventy-three words. Y’all, I need help.)
If you don’t mind hopping all over the place in terms of characters and plotlines, and you’re just looking for a fast and unique western read, then you’ll probably enjoy The Element of Love! But if you, like me, want a story to tug at your heartstrings and rope you in, I suggest picking up a Karen Witemeyer novel instead! (Hmm...should I start adding recommendations to my book reviews? Might not be such a bad idea!)
Disclaimer: A complimentary copy of this book was provided by the publisher, publicist, or author, including NetGalley. All opinions expressed are my own.
#1 This is a long review, so pull up a chair and grab a bowl of popcorn. You’ll be here awhile. #2 When I read a review, I want substantial information. So I will not skimp on the details. Which may mean some spoilers, so watch out.
Stars: 2 stars
Synopsis: When their vile stepfather’s intentions to marry them off to the highest bidder forces the Stiles sisters to run for their lives, the youngest of the three heiresses, Laura, finds Parson Caleb Tillman’s mission group and uses them as an escape...and perhaps much more.
Here I go again, eh? Taking of one of the industry’s most popular new releases and blasting it to bits. Y’all, even some of my friends, who’s bookish opinions I usually agree with wholeheartedly, thoroughly enjoyed this book...and I absolutely hated it.
Of course, I must preface this by saying I knew I would. You see, I read a few Connealy books back in the day (even then knowing she was one of the most popular Christian western romance authors out there) and just couldn’t get into them. Sure, the plots were interesting and kept my attention, but even twelve-year-old me knew something was lacking.
Just-as-naive (almost) seventeen-year-old me had the bright idea to pick up Connealy’s latest release, The Element of Love, and give her another try. Bethany House’s publicist basically convinced me that this book was worth the read and I thought, if nothing else, I could enjoy the story itself and that absolutely gorgeous cover.
(Y’all. That. Cover. I have no words.)
I mean, surely her 2022 novel would be leagues above her 2008-2010 releases, right? Surely her writing had gotten better within the last decade?
Yeah. Nope.
Before I start complaining, as I am wont to do, I will say this: people have enjoyed this book. You might enjoy this book (actually, I put money on it). It has an interesting premise, and it’s a short, fast-paced read, which is just about all most people want out of a story.
Keywords: most people. I, for one, am not most people, and I require a great deal more than a short, quick read and interesting concept.
I need strong development and good writing, the two main things this book lacked.
Since my pet peeves go beyond those two things, I’m gonna divide this review into subsections (no, I’m not changing my review structure again...just trying to contain my scrambled thoughts).
(This is what happens when I go to review a book the day after I finished it. *groans*)
Prose
The first of the Six Ps of a Novel, prose is one of my all-time favorites. I’m a sucker for lyrical, poetic prose...classical, philosophical prose...emotional prose that captures every element of the story and perfectly conveys it.
Or, well, anything well-written.
Unfortunately, Connealy’s prose of none of that. I hate to say it, but to me, there was more telling than showing. There was no emotion or deep connection to the characters’ perspectives (which made it so hard to tell who’s POV each scene was in, especially since we had so many POV characters). Really, the book read like a first draft—very threadbare in both the prose department and the…
Plot
Y’all. The concept was so interesting (if a little unrealistic), and it really had so much potential! BUT (always a but, y’know), it was so poorly executed and I just felt like plot had never really been plotted. And this is coming from a pantser (which means I don’t follow a specific plot structure or outline for my novels). It seemed like Connealy just made things up as she went along and threw stuff in whenever it popped in her head.
And, since we’re talking first drafts here, the plot was never polished or developed. You can wing your story and figure out your premise as you write it, but you have to finish it. You can’t just pass your pantsed story off as a polished novel; you have to fix inconsistencies, tie loose ends, foreshadowed things, omit anything that’s pointless. The list goes on. Unfortunately, Connealy didn’t do that.
On top of that, she added a lot of extra plot points and subplots that really took away from the main one. Considering how short this book was, I feel like the emphasis needed to be solely on Laura, her sisters, and finding husbands. All the drama with the miners (especially at the end) and the whole deal with the gold could’ve been (1) handled better or (2) omitted entirely.
Or we could’ve made the book longer...just sayin’.
Pacing
It’s honestly hard to find a book with bad pacing; it’s kinda difficult to mess that up. The Element of Love was fast-paced and—like I said—short, and I think that pacing would have worked really well (especially considering it’s part of a series) IF the story had been developed better! We breezed through the beginning, skipped over character development, and jumped headfirst into a marriage without any foundation! Worse, the ending was terrible. I’m sorry, but it just was. All the subplots were wrapped up hurriedly, while the main plot points were left hanging. Of course, not everything could be resolved in this book, but there’s no denying that the ending could’ve been better.
People
For a 304-page book, we had a TON of characters. Laura and her sisters. Caleb and his friends. The miners and their wives. Zane and his men. Not to mention Margaret and Edgar. In short, there should’ve been half as many characters and twice as many pages.
Why?
Because the characters were positively skeletal. Laura was lacking characterization and development that she sorely needed—because she could’ve been an amazing, unique character, but instead she was just a smart blonde. Jilly and Michelle were more developed, and only from other characters’ perspectives rather than their own.
Speaking of the three sisters...it bothered me how much emphasis was put on their intelligence. Okay, okay, I know what you’re thinking: “It’s the whole point of the story! They’re smarter than any woman—or man—of their time!” And that is an amazing and unique trait, but it was used just like beauty.
Seriously.
Everyone was captivated by their intelligence (which was real, but confined only to book learning rather than wisdom or common sense, which I personally value more), and their smarts were their only good quality, their definition. In the end, people didn’t like the Stiles sisters because of their kind hearts or insight or helpfulness or cheerful attitudes or Christlike qualities.
They liked them because they were smart.
And the last thing I wanted to do was like them just because they were smart. I wanted true depth of character and authentic faith in God and genuine compassion. Not mathematical minds. (Speaking of, though, I personally think Roseanna M. White’s Margot de Wilde was written better. Her intelligence stretched a little farther than a good education, and she actually had a convincing mathematical mind. Still didn’t like her much either, though, go figure.)
Caleb...whoo, boy. It’s one thing for me to not like the heroine or connect with her, but the hero? I’m supposed to adore the hero!
Not Caleb. He had so much potential—caring missionary pastor with a hidden past of shame—but his entire character was rushed through and discarded. All his struggles and internal conflicts and feelings and arc could’ve been defined and made him an amazing, relatable hero...instead, he was nothing but a—you guessed it—love interest. I don’t do love interests. I do heroes and heroines. Not main character and love interest. I need equality.
In the end, Zane was the best character. I absolutely adored him (strong, stubborn, tall, dark, and handsome; what’s not to love?), and the only reason I might read the next book is because of him. Out of everyone, his personality came through the strongest and he intrigued me the most.
(Also, y’all will probably hate me for this...but Edgar needed more development too. Like, c’mon, y’all. Even the villains are people. Unless they’re aliens, of course. Or animals. Or robots. Or...you get my point.)
Purpose
This section is technically for themes and messages, but I’m gonna go overboard and cover a lot here.
First of all, there was no theme or message. There should have been one...about trusting in God or forgiveness or true love. But there wasn’t. *sobs* The faith elements were there...but they weren’t defined and they had no impact. And, of course, the sisters’ faith in God was limited to “knowing their Bible” (even the devil knows his Bible; that doesn’t mean a thing), and they never sought God, His will for their lives, or His precepts.
Rather, there was this twisted idea that marriage is an institution created for the sole purpose of serving oneself. If your husband is perfect, be married. If not, you need to leave. If your marriage gets you an inheritance, get married. If you don’t gain anything, forget it. Marriage was not treated as “an honourable estate...signifying unto us the mystical union that is betwixt Christ and his Church: which holy estate Christ adorned and beautified with his presence, and first miracle that he wrought, in Cana of Galilee, and is commended of Saint Paul to be honourable among all men: and therefore is not by any to be enterprized, nor taken in hand, unadvisedly, lightly, or wantonly, to satisfy men’s carnal lusts and appetites, like brute beasts that have no understanding; but reverently, discreetly, advisedly, soberly, and in the fear of God.” (Quoting from the Puritan vows, in case you're wondering.)
Speaking of marriage, y’all. This was one of the worst romances I’ve ever read...mainly because there was no romance. There was no connection between Laura and Caleb, no development of their relationship at all, so their sudden marriage seemed really uncalled for, you know? Had the characters been developed and their romance actually there, I might not have minded the quick marriage so much.
(As it were, I would’ve rather had a marriage of convenience that occurred within a day of acquaintance.)
Also, this whole “marrying you would be a sin because you couldn’t have a mission” was. so. weird. (Is that a spoiler? I dunno. I feel like I’m past spoilers at this point.) Like, if God called Caleb to that, only He can call him out of that...and we’re all called to serve others and share the Gospel, whether we own a lumber company or not. Ya dig?
Just seemed like a dumb excuse when she’d could’ve went with “Dude, we don’t know each other from Adam’s house cat.”
And Caleb told her he was in prison, but apparently Laura thought that he’d been imprisoned for jaywalking, so when it came out that he’d been a swindler, she immediately gets ticked and vows to run off. LIKE C’MON HONEY HE TRIED TO TELL YOU AND MAYBE IF YOU HADN’T MARRIED HIM WITHIN A DAY YOU WOULDN’T HAVE BEEN SO SURPRISED TO FIND OUT HE WAS A CRIMINAL!
*clears throat* My apologies.
Before I get on another rant...the last big thing that bothered me was that everyone was a wife-beater. If you weren’t perfect, you beat women. And that was that. There was no development of the issue of abuse or really anything aside from just lots of gratuitous violence. What could’ve been an impactful theme was very poorly dealt with, I think.
But I��ve got to move one before I get mad again…
Preachiness
(Technically, this section is for faith elements...not preachiness. I just needed a P-word.)
Y’all know it ain’t a good book unless it’s got the Lord in it. Naturally, there were Christian elements, because Caleb was a parson...but, like I said, there weren’t any themes or messages, what could’ve been was never dwelt on, and everyone’s relationship with God was defined by how well they knew Scripture (not that they ever quoted any). There was really no substance to everyone’s faith, nor did I see any witnessing going on. *shrugs* I just needed more authenticity. More...everything, really.
Long Story Short
To sum up all my whining, the story needed more development, stronger characters, and better quality writing. The characters and concept had great potential—and Zane was awesome—but I feel like the execution left a lot to be desired. There were no definite themes, arcs, or messages either, which was really disappointing for me, because I love gleaning from stories, feeling inspired by them, connecting with the characters, and learning something new!
(And I could kick myself for writing in nearly two thousand words what I just summed up in seventy-three words. Y’all, I need help.)
If you don’t mind hopping all over the place in terms of characters and plotlines, and you’re just looking for a fast and unique western read, then you’ll probably enjoy The Element of Love! But if you, like me, want a story to tug at your heartstrings and rope you in, I suggest picking up a Karen Witemeyer novel instead! (Hmm...should I start adding recommendations to my book reviews? Might not be such a bad idea!)
Disclaimer: A complimentary copy of this book was provided by the publisher, publicist, or author, including NetGalley. All opinions expressed are my own.
April 17, 2022
4.5/5 because I feel like it wasn't super well written, but I still deeply enjoyed it. It's an excellent story!
Michelle, Jilly, and Laura all stand out as unique and interesting characters (I want to write siblings like this!), their knowledge is extensive and believable, and the plot is interesting. Pleased how clean it was, too, as the author made the decision to keep us out of the bedroom but still be realistic about the situation the characters were in, which I don't see enough of. I feel like this is one of the few situations where a rushed marriage can work well! (I really like Zane! I mean, I also like Caleb, but ZANE!)
But again ... not well-written, the themes weren't well-developed, and I honestly feel like I haven't seen much growth in terms of the author's writing style, etc., over the years. However, maybe that's just me. I feel like there was so much more editing and general development that could've gone into this story to make it excellent - and more likable to people who, unlike me, weren't just pleased with the characters.
However, I'm not in charge of writing other peoples' stories - just to enjoy them or not and report my impressions. Therefore, I shall remember the parts of this book I loved and be a little ashamed of my recommendation.
Michelle, Jilly, and Laura all stand out as unique and interesting characters (I want to write siblings like this!), their knowledge is extensive and believable, and the plot is interesting. Pleased how clean it was, too, as the author made the decision to keep us out of the bedroom but still be realistic about the situation the characters were in, which I don't see enough of. I feel like this is one of the few situations where a rushed marriage can work well! (I really like Zane! I mean, I also like Caleb, but ZANE!)
But again ... not well-written, the themes weren't well-developed, and I honestly feel like I haven't seen much growth in terms of the author's writing style, etc., over the years. However, maybe that's just me. I feel like there was so much more editing and general development that could've gone into this story to make it excellent - and more likable to people who, unlike me, weren't just pleased with the characters.
However, I'm not in charge of writing other peoples' stories - just to enjoy them or not and report my impressions. Therefore, I shall remember the parts of this book I loved and be a little ashamed of my recommendation.
March 5, 2023
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I haven’t read a Mary Connealy book in several years and I’m glad to be back into it. Her books are always so inspirational with such a faith filled message in them. I found this story to be unique. I enjoyed the plot and the pacing. There are three sister’s living with their mother and stepfather. There was great love in their house with their mother and father who had respect for women and taught the girls how to run his lumber business and they would have taken it over but upon his death it all changes. The mother remarries too quickly, and the stepfather reveals his true evil self after the wedding when it’s too late. He wants to marry them off and benefit from payoffs for doing so. Plotting to run away the sisters and mother leave but the mother goes home as she cannot travel on. The sisters wander until exhausted and hungry they find a find an encampment in California serving the poor and downtrodden led by a preacher man. I found it refreshing that the girls are so smart and are not afraid to show it. Intelligence looks good on you, girls! People wander in and out of this camp, some good people, some just looking for a handout and bringing trouble with them. As the preacher man sees how helpful and kind the oldest sister is he falls in love with her kind heart, and they decide to marry. On the eve of their wedding wanting no secrets between them she tells him about her past life. The preacher man is hiding secrets of his own but found his calling and became a man of God. When trouble comes a calling from his past life will she think she married the wrong man hastily like her mother has? I enjoyed this inspirational book so much and look forward to reading the stories of the two other sisters now.
I received a complimentary copy of this book.
All opinions expressed are my own.
I haven’t read a Mary Connealy book in several years and I’m glad to be back into it. Her books are always so inspirational with such a faith filled message in them. I found this story to be unique. I enjoyed the plot and the pacing. There are three sister’s living with their mother and stepfather. There was great love in their house with their mother and father who had respect for women and taught the girls how to run his lumber business and they would have taken it over but upon his death it all changes. The mother remarries too quickly, and the stepfather reveals his true evil self after the wedding when it’s too late. He wants to marry them off and benefit from payoffs for doing so. Plotting to run away the sisters and mother leave but the mother goes home as she cannot travel on. The sisters wander until exhausted and hungry they find a find an encampment in California serving the poor and downtrodden led by a preacher man. I found it refreshing that the girls are so smart and are not afraid to show it. Intelligence looks good on you, girls! People wander in and out of this camp, some good people, some just looking for a handout and bringing trouble with them. As the preacher man sees how helpful and kind the oldest sister is he falls in love with her kind heart, and they decide to marry. On the eve of their wedding wanting no secrets between them she tells him about her past life. The preacher man is hiding secrets of his own but found his calling and became a man of God. When trouble comes a calling from his past life will she think she married the wrong man hastily like her mother has? I enjoyed this inspirational book so much and look forward to reading the stories of the two other sisters now.
I received a complimentary copy of this book.
All opinions expressed are my own.
February 28, 2022
Filled with colorful and captivating characters, unusual and creative settings, and her hilarious sense of humor, Mary Connealy’s newest series stars three unusual sisters running for their lives. Laura, Michelle, and Jilly Stiles are highly intelligent and educated in engineering, mathematics, and scientific fields but must escape their evil stepfather’s plans to marry them off to his lecherous friends and gain control of the girls’ lumber empire.
“There was never a good pack of wolves around when you needed them.”
The Element of Love involves all three sisters but features Laura, the youngest, who loves chemistry and blowing things up. When the girls meet parson Caleb Tillman, they join his mission group in the mountains.
“. . . the true right thing for him might be to run for the hills.”
“The meaning is clear as the sky, clear as glass, clear as, as, as . . . carbon monoxide.”
This story conjured up all sorts of comical, hilarious, and entertaining images in my mind. The girls are all so engaging in their efforts to adjust to a far different environment than they were familiar with. I so enjoyed getting to know them and was chuckling and laughing out loud at their antics and adventures.
“She liked decisive people, but she liked them best if they decided to do things exactly as she’d have them done.”
With plenty of action, suspense, adventure, humor, and a dash of romance and inspiration, this book has something for everyone. There’s a bit of a cliffhanger at the end, but it’s nothing too jarring. I’m anxiously awaiting the next two books in the series. Luckily, I won’t have to wait too long. 4.5 stars
I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy from Bethany House Publishers. All opinions are my own.
“There was never a good pack of wolves around when you needed them.”
The Element of Love involves all three sisters but features Laura, the youngest, who loves chemistry and blowing things up. When the girls meet parson Caleb Tillman, they join his mission group in the mountains.
“. . . the true right thing for him might be to run for the hills.”
“The meaning is clear as the sky, clear as glass, clear as, as, as . . . carbon monoxide.”
This story conjured up all sorts of comical, hilarious, and entertaining images in my mind. The girls are all so engaging in their efforts to adjust to a far different environment than they were familiar with. I so enjoyed getting to know them and was chuckling and laughing out loud at their antics and adventures.
“She liked decisive people, but she liked them best if they decided to do things exactly as she’d have them done.”
With plenty of action, suspense, adventure, humor, and a dash of romance and inspiration, this book has something for everyone. There’s a bit of a cliffhanger at the end, but it’s nothing too jarring. I’m anxiously awaiting the next two books in the series. Luckily, I won’t have to wait too long. 4.5 stars
I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy from Bethany House Publishers. All opinions are my own.
March 4, 2022
This new book by Mary Connealy introduces us to the Stiles sisters and their mother Margaret, along with their stepfather Edgar Beaumont. The primary focus of this book is Laura, a chemist who understands explosives and knows how to blow things up. Will she need to use this talent to save her mother and her sisters from the evil actions of Edgar?
This book has it all. Michelle, Jillian, and Laura have amazing abilities and they've been raised to 'manage a dynasty in a man's world' so there's action, danger, and suspense, but Connealy buffers the drama with moments of lightness. I found myself laughing out loud at some of their antics and cheering when Laura meets Parson Caleb Tillman. Is this man of God the answer to their prayers?
How am I ever going to wait four months to learn more about these lumber baron's daughters? Laura's story reeled me in, and there are two more daughters waiting for their own chance to shine. Connealy is known for writing 'romantic comedy with cowboys' and The Element of Love certainly fits this description. It's a fun adventure with clean romance and a subtle faith message, and I can't wait for the next book in The Lumber Baron's Daughters series!
I received a copy of this book from the author and publisher. There was no obligation for a positive review. These are my own thoughts.
This book has it all. Michelle, Jillian, and Laura have amazing abilities and they've been raised to 'manage a dynasty in a man's world' so there's action, danger, and suspense, but Connealy buffers the drama with moments of lightness. I found myself laughing out loud at some of their antics and cheering when Laura meets Parson Caleb Tillman. Is this man of God the answer to their prayers?
How am I ever going to wait four months to learn more about these lumber baron's daughters? Laura's story reeled me in, and there are two more daughters waiting for their own chance to shine. Connealy is known for writing 'romantic comedy with cowboys' and The Element of Love certainly fits this description. It's a fun adventure with clean romance and a subtle faith message, and I can't wait for the next book in The Lumber Baron's Daughters series!
I received a copy of this book from the author and publisher. There was no obligation for a positive review. These are my own thoughts.
February 25, 2022
The Element of Love kicks off another exciting series by Mary Connealy.
The last couple of series I’ve read by Mary Connealy have left me feeling a little meh for some reason. It was a bit of a bummer because I’ve loved her books ever since I read Doctor in Petticoats. The Element of Love, however, reminded me why I’ve been such an ardent fan of hers.
The premise itself is interesting but, as usual, the characters are what made me love this book. Each sister had their own talent, which was cool, especially since their talents aren’t normally associated with women. I loved getting a glimpse into each sister, and I especially loved getting a glimpse in Zane’s head. I can’t wait for the next books to see what happens next.
The only moment of annoyance I felt was Laura’s reaction after Caleb’s secret was revealed. But that may just be me. Otherwise, the romance was sweet. I liked that their quick relationship was addressed. It was a bit quick, but I enjoyed Laura and Caleb together so much I almost didn’t care.
The faith arc provided some thought-provoking moments regarding redemption, forgiveness, and God’s plan. And the humor gave much needed comedic relief after delving into some weighty topics. This may very well be Connealy’s best novel yet.
Overall, The Element of Love is an enjoyable historical romance with great characters.
(Note: I received a complimentary copy via NetGalley. All opinions expressed are my own.)
The last couple of series I’ve read by Mary Connealy have left me feeling a little meh for some reason. It was a bit of a bummer because I’ve loved her books ever since I read Doctor in Petticoats. The Element of Love, however, reminded me why I’ve been such an ardent fan of hers.
The premise itself is interesting but, as usual, the characters are what made me love this book. Each sister had their own talent, which was cool, especially since their talents aren’t normally associated with women. I loved getting a glimpse into each sister, and I especially loved getting a glimpse in Zane’s head. I can’t wait for the next books to see what happens next.
The only moment of annoyance I felt was Laura’s reaction after Caleb’s secret was revealed. But that may just be me. Otherwise, the romance was sweet. I liked that their quick relationship was addressed. It was a bit quick, but I enjoyed Laura and Caleb together so much I almost didn’t care.
The faith arc provided some thought-provoking moments regarding redemption, forgiveness, and God’s plan. And the humor gave much needed comedic relief after delving into some weighty topics. This may very well be Connealy’s best novel yet.
Overall, The Element of Love is an enjoyable historical romance with great characters.
(Note: I received a complimentary copy via NetGalley. All opinions expressed are my own.)
February 21, 2022
Laura, Michelle and Jill are 3 highly educated sisters, trained to take over their father’s lumbar dynasty after his death. Unfortunately their mother’s new husband turns out to be an abusive swindler who wants to sell the girls in marriage to his despicable cronies. Their only hope is to run away and return with husbands so they can claim their inheritance. After a harrowing escape, they join up with Caleb Tillman, a missionary with a past, and his small group who want to establish a ministry among the poor during the California Gold Rush. There is a lot of drama in this book, so if you’re looking for a gentle, feel good story, this is not it. But if you like strong, intelligent and fiercely loyal women and a story with a strong faith element, then check out this first in a series. It’s well written with a lot of character depth and it moves at a quick pace. These men and women show compassion and face danger all while relying on their faith in the Lord.
Many thanks to Bethany House Publishers for the chance to read an ebook via NetGalley. A positive review was not required and all opinions are my own.
Many thanks to Bethany House Publishers for the chance to read an ebook via NetGalley. A positive review was not required and all opinions are my own.
March 15, 2022
I was very excited to see another Mary Connealy book! I knew I just had to have it!
I wasn't disappointed not in the least.
I adore Connealy's humor and action adventures in each book she writes. I have a feeling that this will be my favorite series.
These girls are just amazing!
There are many places in the book that made me sit on the edge of my seat.
I also found myself hold my breath in certain scenes too.
I was cheering these girls on as they went on their journey.
One thing I know for sure. That God was with these sisters every step of the way. Even if they couldn't see it at first.
Lots of lovely secrets my favorite of course.
Secrets aren't meant to be kept. It can drive a person crazy for sure and certain!
I think however; my favorite character is Margaret. My heart went out to her. I was rooting for her the whole entire time.
She was totally amazing. I loved her because her heart was in the right place.
5 stars for an awesome adventure!
I highly recommend!
My thanks for a copy of this book. I was NOT required to write a positive review. All opinions are my own.
I wasn't disappointed not in the least.
I adore Connealy's humor and action adventures in each book she writes. I have a feeling that this will be my favorite series.
These girls are just amazing!
There are many places in the book that made me sit on the edge of my seat.
I also found myself hold my breath in certain scenes too.
I was cheering these girls on as they went on their journey.
One thing I know for sure. That God was with these sisters every step of the way. Even if they couldn't see it at first.
Lots of lovely secrets my favorite of course.
Secrets aren't meant to be kept. It can drive a person crazy for sure and certain!
I think however; my favorite character is Margaret. My heart went out to her. I was rooting for her the whole entire time.
She was totally amazing. I loved her because her heart was in the right place.
5 stars for an awesome adventure!
I highly recommend!
My thanks for a copy of this book. I was NOT required to write a positive review. All opinions are my own.
March 28, 2022
2.5 stars
I really wanted to like this book. It was a 4.5 star read up until about the midway point.
Honestly it was super great. I loved the concept. I loved the characters, I loved the sisters, their interactions, the predicament they found them in and while the writing wasn't amazing, it was still very good and I was enjoying it alot!
Until about midway when all of a sudden a switch flipped. I have no idea what I missed, but Caleb went from being hesitant of marrying Laura, to suddenly fanaticizing about their married life, what their wedding would be like, what their kisses and physical interactions would be like and then suddenly they rushed their marriage. It wasn't so much the rushed marriage as that was needed and was pretty much laid out from page one... but the characters were super inconsistent and I was genuinely super confused.
I honestly don't know what I missed. But it lost me. I wasn't really interested in continuing so decided to discontinue reading. I may pick up the next book just because I loved Zane and Michelle so much, but I was super sidelined by the spicy content that felt incongruous and over the top.
If you like that sort of thing, you might find it interesting, but it wasn't my cup of tea after that. it's a shame because I really thought the story was going well till then,
*This book was given to me free of charge in exchange for my honest review. The thoughts and opinions expressed in this review are my own and in no way influenced by the author or publisher.
I really wanted to like this book. It was a 4.5 star read up until about the midway point.
Honestly it was super great. I loved the concept. I loved the characters, I loved the sisters, their interactions, the predicament they found them in and while the writing wasn't amazing, it was still very good and I was enjoying it alot!
Until about midway when all of a sudden a switch flipped. I have no idea what I missed, but Caleb went from being hesitant of marrying Laura, to suddenly fanaticizing about their married life, what their wedding would be like, what their kisses and physical interactions would be like and then suddenly they rushed their marriage. It wasn't so much the rushed marriage as that was needed and was pretty much laid out from page one... but the characters were super inconsistent and I was genuinely super confused.
I honestly don't know what I missed. But it lost me. I wasn't really interested in continuing so decided to discontinue reading. I may pick up the next book just because I loved Zane and Michelle so much, but I was super sidelined by the spicy content that felt incongruous and over the top.
If you like that sort of thing, you might find it interesting, but it wasn't my cup of tea after that. it's a shame because I really thought the story was going well till then,
*This book was given to me free of charge in exchange for my honest review. The thoughts and opinions expressed in this review are my own and in no way influenced by the author or publisher.
March 1, 2022
With The Element of Love Mary Connealy begins a new series featuring three intelligent sisters who are on the run and on the hunt for husbands. And in true Connealy fashion, there are a few laughs and plenty of conundrums along the way.
My favorite parts in the book are when the sisters are together plotting and planning. You really see the strengths of their personalities shine through. And while the girls are all extremely book smart the life lessons need some honing. I also appreciated that we got some glimpses of Mama Stiles and the sacrifice she made to ensure her daughters’ safety.
While his heart is in the right place in serving the people in the small mining camp, he also has a couple lessons to learn. He and Laura are a good match and Caleb’s strength of mind is match by his physical strength.
This is a series you will definitely want to read in order as we’ve already gotten a few hints as to what comes next for Michelle (and I’m very curious to learn more of Jill’s story), so get an early start and pick up The Element of Love now.
Disclosure statement: I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book and was not required to write a positive review. All opinions are my own.
My favorite parts in the book are when the sisters are together plotting and planning. You really see the strengths of their personalities shine through. And while the girls are all extremely book smart the life lessons need some honing. I also appreciated that we got some glimpses of Mama Stiles and the sacrifice she made to ensure her daughters’ safety.
While his heart is in the right place in serving the people in the small mining camp, he also has a couple lessons to learn. He and Laura are a good match and Caleb’s strength of mind is match by his physical strength.
This is a series you will definitely want to read in order as we’ve already gotten a few hints as to what comes next for Michelle (and I’m very curious to learn more of Jill’s story), so get an early start and pick up The Element of Love now.
Disclosure statement: I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book and was not required to write a positive review. All opinions are my own.
February 18, 2022
Anyone who knows me personally is quite aware how much of a Mary Connealy fan I am. I've read many many of her novels and loved each one.
This novel, the debut in The Lumber Baron's Daughter's series might be my all-time favorite. Between the intelligence of the witty Stiles sisters who are so worthy of rooting for, to the quiet, faith-filled spirit of Pastor Caleb, it had me hooked.
I don't give anything away in my reviews but like to go with my "heart reaction," this one had mine pitter-pattering at a brisk speed.
Excellent novel, can't wait for more.
I received this book from the publisher but was under no obligation to write nor post a review.
This novel, the debut in The Lumber Baron's Daughter's series might be my all-time favorite. Between the intelligence of the witty Stiles sisters who are so worthy of rooting for, to the quiet, faith-filled spirit of Pastor Caleb, it had me hooked.
I don't give anything away in my reviews but like to go with my "heart reaction," this one had mine pitter-pattering at a brisk speed.
Excellent novel, can't wait for more.
I received this book from the publisher but was under no obligation to write nor post a review.
February 6, 2022
4.5 stars
This was a fascinating and engaging book! It took a bit for me to get really engaged, but I ended up really enjoying it. I also love the stories that Connealy writes and this one is no different. The Element of Love is the first book in Mary Connealy’s new series, The Lumber Baron’s Daughters. I love how Connealy usually writes series that feature a family. This series features three sisters on the run from their stepfather, searching for husbands to save their inheritance from their stepfather.
Laura Stiles was such a fascinating character, she was the youngest of the sisters and the main character of the first book. I thought that she was really cool, her father had wanted her and her sisters to have a full education and Laura even knew how to use chemicals to create explosions and such. However she was on the run and just trying to survive. Pastor Caleb Tillman is just trying to follow God’s lead. He felt drawn to the mission field never expecting to meet Laura and get drawn into her world. However both Caleb and Laura have secrets that can affect the future. Will they learn to trust each other?
Laura was different from characters you usually read about in historical romances and I really enjoyed reading about her. Although she was the youngest, she was still strong and stubborn. She was trying to do her part to help her sisters and protect their mother. Laura was trying to find her place in the world and trying to find a husband. She didn’t expect to meet someone so quickly or to find herself drawn to him. But Caleb has secrets of his own, will Caleb and Laura be able to work through their secrets to form a relationship or will it all go up in flames.
I liked Caleb, he was trying his best to follow God’s leadings. He wasn’t a perfect man and he had made mistakes but he was trying to own up to them. I could tell that Caleb cared for the people around him and he wanted to point them towards God. He had his faults, but he was trying to learn from them and grow. It was sweet to read about him falling for Laura. I liked how he saw her for the capable woman that she was. Caleb will have to figure out what it means to care for Laura and follow God’s calling.
This was a fun and exciting book! The characters drew me in and I am excited to read the next books in the series. I have my guess on who it will be about. The plot was also interesting and I was engaged the whole time. The Element of Love is a clean historical Christan romance. I would recommend it to those who like historicals and enjoy a little suspense and action.
I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book which I received from the publisher through Netgalley. All views expressed are only my honest opinion, a positive review was not required.
This was a fascinating and engaging book! It took a bit for me to get really engaged, but I ended up really enjoying it. I also love the stories that Connealy writes and this one is no different. The Element of Love is the first book in Mary Connealy’s new series, The Lumber Baron’s Daughters. I love how Connealy usually writes series that feature a family. This series features three sisters on the run from their stepfather, searching for husbands to save their inheritance from their stepfather.
Laura Stiles was such a fascinating character, she was the youngest of the sisters and the main character of the first book. I thought that she was really cool, her father had wanted her and her sisters to have a full education and Laura even knew how to use chemicals to create explosions and such. However she was on the run and just trying to survive. Pastor Caleb Tillman is just trying to follow God’s lead. He felt drawn to the mission field never expecting to meet Laura and get drawn into her world. However both Caleb and Laura have secrets that can affect the future. Will they learn to trust each other?
Laura was different from characters you usually read about in historical romances and I really enjoyed reading about her. Although she was the youngest, she was still strong and stubborn. She was trying to do her part to help her sisters and protect their mother. Laura was trying to find her place in the world and trying to find a husband. She didn’t expect to meet someone so quickly or to find herself drawn to him. But Caleb has secrets of his own, will Caleb and Laura be able to work through their secrets to form a relationship or will it all go up in flames.
I liked Caleb, he was trying his best to follow God’s leadings. He wasn’t a perfect man and he had made mistakes but he was trying to own up to them. I could tell that Caleb cared for the people around him and he wanted to point them towards God. He had his faults, but he was trying to learn from them and grow. It was sweet to read about him falling for Laura. I liked how he saw her for the capable woman that she was. Caleb will have to figure out what it means to care for Laura and follow God’s calling.
This was a fun and exciting book! The characters drew me in and I am excited to read the next books in the series. I have my guess on who it will be about. The plot was also interesting and I was engaged the whole time. The Element of Love is a clean historical Christan romance. I would recommend it to those who like historicals and enjoy a little suspense and action.
I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book which I received from the publisher through Netgalley. All views expressed are only my honest opinion, a positive review was not required.
February 12, 2022
Mary Connealy does it again! Here's another reader-grabbing series with realistic, gritty, likeable characters. The trio of gifted, strong sisters drive the plot straight to your senses. The action is heart-pounding and explosive. Connealy plants many life truths within the pages. I immediately want to read the next two books in the saga.
I received a complimentary copy of the book without obligation. This review is my opinion.
I received a complimentary copy of the book without obligation. This review is my opinion.
February 15, 2024
1872 California
Great start to the series! Three young adult sisters educated to run their father's lumber business. Unfortunately, their dad passes away and their mother remarries a less than honorable man. The sisters go on the run in search of husbands instead of marrying the men their step-father has in mind.
Great start to the series! Three young adult sisters educated to run their father's lumber business. Unfortunately, their dad passes away and their mother remarries a less than honorable man. The sisters go on the run in search of husbands instead of marrying the men their step-father has in mind.
March 6, 2022
With their sharp engineering minds, Laura Stiles and her two sisters have been able to deal with their mother's unfortunate choice in husband until they discovered his plans to marry each of them off to his lecherous friends. Now they must run away--far and fast--to find better matches to legally claim their portion of their father's lumber dynasty and seize control from their stepfather.
During their escape, Laura befriends a mission group heading to serve the poor in California. She quickly volunteers herself and her sisters to join their efforts. Despite the settlement being in miserable condition, the sisters are excited by the opportunity to put their skills to good use. Laura also sees potential in Caleb, the mission's parson, to help with gaining her inheritance. But when secrets buried in Caleb's past and in the land around them come to light, it'll take all the smarts the sisters have to keep trouble at bay.
My review: This is another hit for Ms. Connealy. Three sisters are on the run from their mean stepfather who wants to marry them off so he can get control of their inheritance. The sisters run into a group of missionaries that they decide to join incognito. They don't want anyone to recognize them and tell their stepfather. Along the way Laura decides she is going to marry the parson. The parson has some deep secrets of his own that he doesn't want anyone knowing. While at the mission camp they make a startling discovery of their own that they are afraid to tell anyone.
This was an enjoyable book and I highly recommend it. I'm looking forward to the next book in the series.
I was given this book by Bethany House Publishers via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. I was not compensated in any way.
During their escape, Laura befriends a mission group heading to serve the poor in California. She quickly volunteers herself and her sisters to join their efforts. Despite the settlement being in miserable condition, the sisters are excited by the opportunity to put their skills to good use. Laura also sees potential in Caleb, the mission's parson, to help with gaining her inheritance. But when secrets buried in Caleb's past and in the land around them come to light, it'll take all the smarts the sisters have to keep trouble at bay.
My review: This is another hit for Ms. Connealy. Three sisters are on the run from their mean stepfather who wants to marry them off so he can get control of their inheritance. The sisters run into a group of missionaries that they decide to join incognito. They don't want anyone to recognize them and tell their stepfather. Along the way Laura decides she is going to marry the parson. The parson has some deep secrets of his own that he doesn't want anyone knowing. While at the mission camp they make a startling discovery of their own that they are afraid to tell anyone.
This was an enjoyable book and I highly recommend it. I'm looking forward to the next book in the series.
I was given this book by Bethany House Publishers via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. I was not compensated in any way.
March 6, 2022
The Element of Love is a historical fiction novel written by Mary Connealy. It is book one in the Lumber Baron’s Daughters series.
Summary: Laura Stiles and her sisters are forced to flee their home when their stepfather promises to marry them off to his evil cronies.
They know they will receive their deceased father’s vast fortune at age 25, but even sooner if they get married.
They are determined to escape, find husbands as soon as possible, come back to claim their inheritance, and save their mother from their abusive stepfather.
But will they get away safely? And where does one find a husband anyway?
My Thoughts: I really liked this book and literally read it in one sitting. The plot is very entertaining, and the sisters are fantastic characters. They are so intelligent and determined and have been brought up with such unique skill sets that really give them room to do some cool things throughout the story.
It’s a great book, and one I definitely recommend-especially if you like stories that take place in the Old West/Gold Rush time period.
This one is my favorite so far this year, and I can’t wait to read the next one!
I want to thank Bethany House for providing me with a free digital copy of this book in exchange for my review. Thank you!
Summary: Laura Stiles and her sisters are forced to flee their home when their stepfather promises to marry them off to his evil cronies.
They know they will receive their deceased father’s vast fortune at age 25, but even sooner if they get married.
They are determined to escape, find husbands as soon as possible, come back to claim their inheritance, and save their mother from their abusive stepfather.
But will they get away safely? And where does one find a husband anyway?
My Thoughts: I really liked this book and literally read it in one sitting. The plot is very entertaining, and the sisters are fantastic characters. They are so intelligent and determined and have been brought up with such unique skill sets that really give them room to do some cool things throughout the story.
It’s a great book, and one I definitely recommend-especially if you like stories that take place in the Old West/Gold Rush time period.
This one is my favorite so far this year, and I can’t wait to read the next one!
I want to thank Bethany House for providing me with a free digital copy of this book in exchange for my review. Thank you!
March 1, 2022
Three sisters must escape! Their step-father has decided to marry them off for profit. When they join a mission group heading to serve the poor in California they realize how privileged their lives have been, Hardships and mishaps plague them and the three talented sisters quickly become leaders to this mission group. This was so interesting to see how the sisters knowing the only way to save their mother and their inheritance from their conniving step-father was to marry, in the middle of nowhere, just how was it going to happen? Educated women were a shock to some of these rough men of the West and it was fun to see just how these three sisters worked together to solve the many problems in the community. I requested a copy from the publisher through NetGalley. No review was required. My review and opinion are voluntary.
March 1, 2022
Ahhh! I don't want to have to wait for the next book in this series! This was a wonderful book: exciting, funny, charming, nail-biting, on the edge of your seat, can't wait to turn the page book! I don't think that I can even pick a favorite part of this story.
Mary Connealy offers another smashing (explosive! 😉) tale. If you have not read one of her books yet, this one is a great place to start!
I received a free copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions expressed are my own.
Mary Connealy offers another smashing (explosive! 😉) tale. If you have not read one of her books yet, this one is a great place to start!
I received a free copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions expressed are my own.
March 1, 2022
fabulous!
Another fabulous book by Mary Connealy. Strong female characters who in this case are sisters, who go out into the world to escape their evil stepfather. I loved reading their story and can’t wait for book 2!
Another fabulous book by Mary Connealy. Strong female characters who in this case are sisters, who go out into the world to escape their evil stepfather. I loved reading their story and can’t wait for book 2!
March 19, 2022
The Lumber Barron’s Daughter series by Mary Connealy gets off to a great start in The Elements of Love. Three highly intelligent sisters are forced to leave their beloved mother, home and everything they love when they discover the plans their stepfather has for their future.
The love and strength their mother had by helping her daughters escape showed how selfless this woman is, as she was left to face the wrath of her husband. The Stiles sisters definitely get their bravery from her. I love the gumption that Laura, Michelle and Jillian Stiles show as they meet and join a mission group and how they help them minister to a rather motley crew of people they meet.
This is such a wonderful novel filled with a cast of characters who I want to get better acquainted with. I look forward to the next book in the series to find out what the author has in store for her readers.
I received a copy of this book from the publisher. All opinions are my own.
The love and strength their mother had by helping her daughters escape showed how selfless this woman is, as she was left to face the wrath of her husband. The Stiles sisters definitely get their bravery from her. I love the gumption that Laura, Michelle and Jillian Stiles show as they meet and join a mission group and how they help them minister to a rather motley crew of people they meet.
This is such a wonderful novel filled with a cast of characters who I want to get better acquainted with. I look forward to the next book in the series to find out what the author has in store for her readers.
I received a copy of this book from the publisher. All opinions are my own.
February 9, 2022
What a read!! I had no idea I was on the last few pages of this book, (because I read digitally) until I flipped over and BAM! This book will keep you engrossed until the very end. It is action packed, heart breaking and hope filled all at the same time. I loved the characters and how they all interweaved into each other’s stories. You can bet there will be a “sequel” to this book because the author leaves a lot of plot to unfold.
Definitely a read to recommend to anyone, all ages. I will be on the lookout for the next book in this series from the author!
I was given a free copy in exchange for this review.
Definitely a read to recommend to anyone, all ages. I will be on the lookout for the next book in this series from the author!
I was given a free copy in exchange for this review.
March 3, 2022
Oh my goodness I am hooked! I should have known that this would happen. I could not force myself to put this book down. Who wouldn’t love a group of sisters who are super smart and on a mission to save their family? The girls had to escape undetected to prevent their step-father from marrying them off in his quest to gain full control of their father’s legacy. They were raised to take over the dynasty, and they can’t let the manipulating man deviate them from their calling. Fleeing is just the beginning of the adventure, and the girls just might be in a little over their heads.
I love how different and yet similar the sisters are. They were easy to love and I can’t wait until the next book in this series comes out. Laura is good at getting things done. When she meets Caleb and his missionary group she knows that is their first step at finding husbands. I loved watching the chemistry between Laura and Caleb and the way they interacted with each other. Caleb isn’t perfect, and longing for a new start he’s hesitant to share his past. Will his secrets keep him from finding a true partner in life? I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys Historical Romance. Connealy kept me turning the pages way past bed time, and I can’t wait to see what she does next. I received a complimentary copy of this book from Bethany House Publishers and was in no way forced to post a positive review. All opinions expressed are my own.
I love how different and yet similar the sisters are. They were easy to love and I can’t wait until the next book in this series comes out. Laura is good at getting things done. When she meets Caleb and his missionary group she knows that is their first step at finding husbands. I loved watching the chemistry between Laura and Caleb and the way they interacted with each other. Caleb isn’t perfect, and longing for a new start he’s hesitant to share his past. Will his secrets keep him from finding a true partner in life? I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys Historical Romance. Connealy kept me turning the pages way past bed time, and I can’t wait to see what she does next. I received a complimentary copy of this book from Bethany House Publishers and was in no way forced to post a positive review. All opinions expressed are my own.
May 2, 2022
Seriously, sometimes a reader gets a craving for the kind of story only Mary Connealy can dream up. And she's in her element (ha -- get the play on words there?) with this new series. From the clever title tie-in to the wild adventuring of her unique heroines...well, I was enthralled. And that was even before the kind and compassionate and oh so swoonworthy parson showed up on the scene. :-)
There is absolutely no end to the creativity this author brings to her action scenes. Just when I thought she couldn't possibly start off a story in a more dynamic way than her last book, or the one before that, or the one waaaay back or...well, you get the idea. Connealy's imagination is a bottomless pit of scary creativity. And the start of the Stiles' sisters' adventuring is ample proof of that!
I love that it's told in multiple points of view -- we get to know each sister and even their mother really well. And the parson, of course. (furiously fanning my blushing cheeks.) It's clear that this is Laura's story as she takes a chance at finding love but the groundwork has been laid for the rest of the series and I get the feeling it's going to be a humdinger of a grand finale come book three. Can't wait for the next Lumber Baron's Daughters book to come out!
Book provided courtesy of Baker Publishing Group and Graf-Martin Communications Inc.
There is absolutely no end to the creativity this author brings to her action scenes. Just when I thought she couldn't possibly start off a story in a more dynamic way than her last book, or the one before that, or the one waaaay back or...well, you get the idea. Connealy's imagination is a bottomless pit of scary creativity. And the start of the Stiles' sisters' adventuring is ample proof of that!
I love that it's told in multiple points of view -- we get to know each sister and even their mother really well. And the parson, of course. (furiously fanning my blushing cheeks.) It's clear that this is Laura's story as she takes a chance at finding love but the groundwork has been laid for the rest of the series and I get the feeling it's going to be a humdinger of a grand finale come book three. Can't wait for the next Lumber Baron's Daughters book to come out!
Book provided courtesy of Baker Publishing Group and Graf-Martin Communications Inc.
March 2, 2022
The Element of Love is the first book in The Lumber Baron’s Daughters series. It is a historical Christian novel written by Mary Connealy set in northern California in the late 19th century.
Three sisters must make an escape from the plans their stepfather has made to marry them off. Through the dark of night, they make their escape with their mother, who feigns an injured ankle and returns to their home and back to her husband. The three continue and with the help of a flume, they make their escape down a mountainside. Laura, Michelle, and Jillian are three highly intelligent girls who were raised to take over their father’s business, but now they must find husbands in order to secure their inheritance. Worried about their mother and her circumstances, they still push forward and join a mission group to hide out. Laura sets her sites on Caleb, the pastor of the group.
I highly recommend this book. Mary Connealy once again delivers on her characters and the history of the area and background scenery. I had a tough time putting the book down.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily. #TheElementOfLove #TheLumberBaron’sDaughters #NetGalley #MaryConnealy
Three sisters must make an escape from the plans their stepfather has made to marry them off. Through the dark of night, they make their escape with their mother, who feigns an injured ankle and returns to their home and back to her husband. The three continue and with the help of a flume, they make their escape down a mountainside. Laura, Michelle, and Jillian are three highly intelligent girls who were raised to take over their father’s business, but now they must find husbands in order to secure their inheritance. Worried about their mother and her circumstances, they still push forward and join a mission group to hide out. Laura sets her sites on Caleb, the pastor of the group.
I highly recommend this book. Mary Connealy once again delivers on her characters and the history of the area and background scenery. I had a tough time putting the book down.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily. #TheElementOfLove #TheLumberBaron’sDaughters #NetGalley #MaryConnealy
February 18, 2022
This was such a fun story, the Stiles sisters literally flee and fly (down a flume) to escape marriage to the evil men their wicked step-father has plans to marry them off to so he can claim their inheritance. Laura, Jilly, and Michelle were all raised to be mathematical geniuses and to some day run their father's lumber company. They need to find three, hopefully upstanding men of society to marry and bring back to gain control. The Element of Love is Laura's story but all three sisters play a part. They meet Caleb, a preacher taking a mission group to the miners in California. This is another book of Mary's that will not disappoint, full of humor, romance, running for your life, cowboys, ranchers, the usual stuff. I'm looking forward to book two in the series. Oh, and did I mention Laura likes to blow things up?
February 8, 2022
Laura and her sisters are forced to flee the machinations of a wicked step-father. They travel as far away as they are able and end up part of Caleb's mission near the California gold camps. Each one of them is looking for a husband so they can have their inheritance from their father and thwart the evil schemes of their step-father. As always, Mary Connealy's stories do not disappoint. Looking forward to the rest of this series!
I have voluntarily reviewed a copy of this book that I received from NetGalley. All views expressed are only my own honest opinion.
I have voluntarily reviewed a copy of this book that I received from NetGalley. All views expressed are only my own honest opinion.
April 16, 2022
The Element of Love has all the elements I have come to expect from a Mary Connealy book: strong, intelligent women, tough men of integrity, faith, romance, and humor, along with plenty of action and "bad guys." Laura, Jillian, and Michelle Stiles had a wonderful, but unconventional upbringing for girls in their era. After they have to escape a cruel step-father with evil intentions, the sisters meet Parson Caleb Tillman and several others traveling to minister to the impoverished miners in California. They join them for protection but also to help and are stunned at the poverty of the women and children at the rundown settlement. The sisters have a goal of finding husbands as quickly as possible so they can return home to their mother and take control of the lumber company from their step-father, meeting the conditions of their father's will. I enjoyed The Element of Love very much and plan to read the next two books in the series to find out how this all works out. I received a complimentary copy of the book. All thoughts are my own.
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