Read for 2021 SPSFC
Overall Thoughts
I had high hopes for this story when I started, but a couple things dragged it down over the course of the book. The concept is that the Earth stops spinning one day (and everyone somehow doesn’t fly off) because a mysterious artifact has appeared in the sky, and various people and agencies try to find out what’s going on. Sounds really cool so far. There are some really tense scenes to start, and the book is fairly well written and easy to read. There’s a great setup in the first few chapters, however the artifact is never described, and I feel like the story goes off into the weeds on a couple points, taking away from what I wanted to learn about. In addition, the ending is…a letdown. I’m going to try not to completely spoil this one as I dig into it deeper, but I may need to in part to make some points I want to make. (EDIT: I’ve spoiled it, but the spoilers are at the end.)
Plot. Setting, and Character
I had a hard time separating the three when talking about this, so you get all of them together.
So the Earth stops spinning. Now what? At first I thought, when various scientist characters were describing that how the obvious effects (people flying off) didn’t happen that everything was going to be fine, but that quickly turns out not to be the case. Even with the most drastic effects not happening, there are still horrible catastrophes that occur, such as water drifting toward the poles, and animals going wild because there’s no magnetosphere. It’s quite interesting, but then the story starts following character interactions more, and not really going into depth about the scientific mysteries that have been set up. Add to that, no one ever gives a description of the thing in the sky. It’s referenced, but I guess no one actually looked at it, or set up a telescope? I don’t know how big it is, or how close to Earth, or even what shape it is.
The book follows several characters around the globe, including the family of a priest, and astronauts in orbit. Once past the initial shock of the Earth not spinning, more terrible things become obvious, like how one side of the world will forever be trapped in darkness, and the other forever burned by light. The seas start to migrate to the poles, and flocks of birds go astray. Massive seismic tremors rock the Earth. We also get the people aspect, with some declaring this to be divine judgement, and others simply resorting to lawless behavior. At the same time, one of the astronauts is trying to get a flash drive with data taken the moment object appeared to Cheyenne mountain, where US government systems can decode it.
But then there’s also a strange tangent with a fundamentalist preacher character who suddenly decides God is judging the world and he’s the chosen one to spread the message. I’m not arguing this wouldn’t happen (I mean, see the last few years for example), but there was a lot of focus put on this character, when I didn’t really care about him and wanted more description of the events. He starts leading a bunch of people who decide to ignore any scientific evidence and declare the physical object above them an emissary from the almighty to destroy them. My obvious question is “why go to all this trouble?” It’s a very elaborate setup and honestly, my money was on aliens instead. The whole religious thread seemed almost a throwaway, and I’m not sure why it was a central theme. The premise is set up as a way to elaborate on this incredible event, but those leads aren’t really followed. I wanted to find out more about the people trapped in permanent darkness, or how there was a mega-continent forming near the equator because all the water was heading to the poles. But it wasn’t ever explored.
Still, the story is pretty tense…up to a point. At the very end of the story, things start to unravel, and I feel like we never get a very satisfying ending.
Score out of 10 (My personal score, not the final contest score)
Temporary score until more books in the contest are read: A very cool disaster story setup about an object stopping the Earth’s spin, but falters at the end with an unsatisfying conclusion. 4/10.
OKAY. I’M GONNA SPOIL THIS ONE. I have to describe exactly how great my frustration was with the end of this story. So if you want, highlight the text below to see, spoilers included. If not, why not read it yourself? The setup is really pretty cool.
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Still here? Alright. Buckle up.
So the flash drive has important data on it about the artifact (which still doesn’t have a description), right? At the end, the priest’s crowd all falls in a pit, so they end up not mattering, despite about 30% of the book being focused on them. There’s a big combined effort to just shoot nukes at the thing in the sky, you know, like the plot of every apocalyptic movie ever, which never works. But the plucky astronaut and her crew get to Cheyenne mountain with the precious flash drive with only thirty minutes to spare! So of course she has the vital evidence that will show the real way to get rid of it, right? She’s going to prove how the nukes won’t work, and here’s the real deal with the artifact, whether it’s aliens, or angels, or the dinosaurs coming back, or whatever, and then we have a revelatory exposition that explains everything…
Wrong.
Turns out there’s nothing on the drive. Then the combined governments shoot nukes at the object, and, still holding out hope, I was thinking the dust would clear and show that it was still there, right?
No, the nukes get rid of it. It’s gone. End of the book. The Earth starts spinning again. And I guess the astronaut’s journey across the world means nothing? And we never get a description of the artifact at all. It was…something…that appeared…somehow…above our planet and then…I guess…the nukes just destroyed it? Except there were some left flying around? So maybe the thing left of its own accord? We’ll never know, because the book ends, without accounting for the billions dead or dying, or any attempt to find out what happened. But I’m not bitter.