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Demon Hunter #3
The Breamstone Collective
Jimmy, Hayley, MJ, and Katarina have returned to school, but their lives have changed irrevocably with the discovery of Jimmy’s true identity as the dream child of the Breamstone Collective. Yet many questions remain unresolved.
The search for answers sends them deeper into Jimmy’s dream world and further into his past in an attempt to unravel the plots of the demons behind the collective. Purple-haired goth girl Morrigan may be the key – or she may be the one to lead them further into the darkness.
As the greatest powers of Hell finally take notice of Jimmy’s existence, he discovers the chance to change everything, if he can only reach the solution in time.
The Breamstone Collective is the third novel in the Demon Hunter series and contains explicit adult scenes and themes of black magic and demonology.
The search for answers sends them deeper into Jimmy’s dream world and further into his past in an attempt to unravel the plots of the demons behind the collective. Purple-haired goth girl Morrigan may be the key – or she may be the one to lead them further into the darkness.
As the greatest powers of Hell finally take notice of Jimmy’s existence, he discovers the chance to change everything, if he can only reach the solution in time.
The Breamstone Collective is the third novel in the Demon Hunter series and contains explicit adult scenes and themes of black magic and demonology.
231 pages, Kindle Edition
First published July 10, 2021
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About the author
Michael Dalton
81 books321 followersMichael Dalton is a professional journalist and editor.
Michael wrote his first piece of fiction in third grade, for which he was immediately accused of plagiarism by his teacher. Since then, he has been writing more or less steadily, interrupted only by occasional demands of work and family.
Michael lives with his family and multiple pets in Southern California.
Michael wrote his first piece of fiction in third grade, for which he was immediately accused of plagiarism by his teacher. Since then, he has been writing more or less steadily, interrupted only by occasional demands of work and family.
Michael lives with his family and multiple pets in Southern California.
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July 13, 2021
Rating 4.0 stars
A good continuation of the series. The MCs coven grows and he finds out more about his past. Again the only weird thing is that he works for hell but hasn't done anything evil yet. Is he a good guy or a bad buy? I will keep rooting for him until he does something truly evil. I like the story and the relationships.
A good continuation of the series. The MCs coven grows and he finds out more about his past. Again the only weird thing is that he works for hell but hasn't done anything evil yet. Is he a good guy or a bad buy? I will keep rooting for him until he does something truly evil. I like the story and the relationships.
February 28, 2024
Women that are mostly attracted to women and only a little to men. It doesn't make sense for a harem book as they would mostly want to have sex with each other and not the man, especially considering the succubus gives them the best orgasms they've ever experienced (in real life).
Sex in dreams is not nearly as interesting as real sex, many pages describing dreams would be more intetesting/enjoyable describing real world sexual experiences IMO. It gets ridiculous and silly with 15" dicks and constant non-stop orgasms.
Sex in dreams is not nearly as interesting as real sex, many pages describing dreams would be more intetesting/enjoyable describing real world sexual experiences IMO. It gets ridiculous and silly with 15" dicks and constant non-stop orgasms.
July 20, 2021
The story continues
It went pretty solid overall I feel. The end was.... it's like there's the ending, then the author tacks on one more thing to put the cliffhanger, which kind of... I dunno. If you hate cliffhangers you never would have made it this far in the series anyway, it just felt less a wrap up cause of it.
Smut was... well some things I never thought would be done(even if tentacles had to be used), so that's a plus. There was even a time when *gasp* A word other than butt was used! Though only once, still a ridiculously overused word.
I'll keep reading just for answers. Who will be give his attention to next? How will he deal with grandma? It's still solid, and scratches my chemistry itch so I'll keep reading definitely.
It went pretty solid overall I feel. The end was.... it's like there's the ending, then the author tacks on one more thing to put the cliffhanger, which kind of... I dunno. If you hate cliffhangers you never would have made it this far in the series anyway, it just felt less a wrap up cause of it.
Smut was... well some things I never thought would be done(even if tentacles had to be used), so that's a plus. There was even a time when *gasp* A word other than butt was used! Though only once, still a ridiculously overused word.
I'll keep reading just for answers. Who will be give his attention to next? How will he deal with grandma? It's still solid, and scratches my chemistry itch so I'll keep reading definitely.
July 12, 2021
Great read!!!!
This continues to be a great series. Great characters and love the storyline and the world creation. I got really invested to the story and what would happen next. The use of realistic situations with the fantasy is what keeps it interesting! ( Aside what a normal person with wealth would allow simple interest to create a wealth beyond "a few hundred thousand dollars". That felt so unreal it was disruptive.. but a minor point.) Great adult fantasy that's fast paced and easy to disappear into the story!!!
This continues to be a great series. Great characters and love the storyline and the world creation. I got really invested to the story and what would happen next. The use of realistic situations with the fantasy is what keeps it interesting! ( Aside what a normal person with wealth would allow simple interest to create a wealth beyond "a few hundred thousand dollars". That felt so unreal it was disruptive.. but a minor point.) Great adult fantasy that's fast paced and easy to disappear into the story!!!
July 15, 2021
Hey dark urban fantasy
The serving fantasy was very entertaining. I like the way the story was told from the main characters viewpoint as well as from the other main characters in the story. There was a lot of action and I like the interaction between the characters in their romance with each other as well as protecting each other. The story is pretty heavy and is very mature also towards the end it gets kind of dark and twisted and makes me wonder how the story is going to progress. I am interested to see what happens next.
The serving fantasy was very entertaining. I like the way the story was told from the main characters viewpoint as well as from the other main characters in the story. There was a lot of action and I like the interaction between the characters in their romance with each other as well as protecting each other. The story is pretty heavy and is very mature also towards the end it gets kind of dark and twisted and makes me wonder how the story is going to progress. I am interested to see what happens next.
May 2, 2025
This book is a quite good continuation of the haremlit series. There are battles. The harem grows. There are some very creative plot element. The sex is fun. One thing... As with many harem and reverse-harem books, when a group festive sex romp is described, it gets, yeah, more than a bit logistical.
I am pleased that a very solid submissive/masochist has been added to the group. :) Sex with Morganna is certainly different.
New plot elements have been added for later. And very clearly one plot arc has been ended.
I am pleased that a very solid submissive/masochist has been added to the group. :) Sex with Morganna is certainly different.
New plot elements have been added for later. And very clearly one plot arc has been ended.
July 15, 2021
Amazing
Honestly, the only thing that I could ask you to improve upon is to find a better artist. PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD OR DEMONS, THOSE COVERS DO YOU NO JUSTICE. Such an incredible story, so intriguing, so friggin fantastic, and so friggin afraid I’d have missed it because the first thing I thought when I saw the cover to your story was: “Meh, doesn’t look like anything special.” Get someone to draw hotter girls for your covers man, these look so cartoony and weird.
Honestly, the only thing that I could ask you to improve upon is to find a better artist. PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD OR DEMONS, THOSE COVERS DO YOU NO JUSTICE. Such an incredible story, so intriguing, so friggin fantastic, and so friggin afraid I’d have missed it because the first thing I thought when I saw the cover to your story was: “Meh, doesn’t look like anything special.” Get someone to draw hotter girls for your covers man, these look so cartoony and weird.
May 15, 2024
Dark twists and turns, and lovely steaminess
The Breamstone Collective is actively hunting Jimmy. Together with Hayley, MJ, Katarina, and Morrigan, they have to delve deeper into the dreamworld on a dark path. There are a lot of twists and turns, and lovely steamy bits. The characters grow while you read.
Michael Dalton has written a great series, and The Breamstone Collective is an awesome addition.
The Breamstone Collective is actively hunting Jimmy. Together with Hayley, MJ, Katarina, and Morrigan, they have to delve deeper into the dreamworld on a dark path. There are a lot of twists and turns, and lovely steamy bits. The characters grow while you read.
Michael Dalton has written a great series, and The Breamstone Collective is an awesome addition.
July 6, 2025
Once again Michael Dalton doesn’t disappoint. The story just becomes more interesting and intricate while the spice gets spicier. Dalton does a fantastic job of balancing the story elements with the level of spice so that readers don’t feel too overwhelmed by either at a given time. So often I either get nothing but spice (which isn’t bad if that’s what I’m looking for) or the spice is few and far between. This series so far has been perfect.
July 12, 2021
Fantastic Series!!
Well written and edited, developed characters, great storyline. I love how the MC is able to break down and resolve issues using science, and not just " ta da " .... Magic. This helps make the fantasy seem more possible. Love this series and can't wait for the next!
Well written and edited, developed characters, great storyline. I love how the MC is able to break down and resolve issues using science, and not just " ta da " .... Magic. This helps make the fantasy seem more possible. Love this series and can't wait for the next!
September 11, 2022
In terms of story, this is the best of the series (so far). The individual books in this series are much more complete than in most series, but there is a central mystery that starts in the first book and concludes here.
The characters are really strong -- I found I really cared about the girls as people, not just as helpers and attachments of the hero.
The characters are really strong -- I found I really cared about the girls as people, not just as helpers and attachments of the hero.
July 10, 2021
Yeah! A great addition to the series.
This was a exciting, actions packed entry to the series. James continues to grow his coven and explore his origins and build his powers. Lots of action and smexy times, a rollicking good read.
This was a exciting, actions packed entry to the series. James continues to grow his coven and explore his origins and build his powers. Lots of action and smexy times, a rollicking good read.
July 12, 2021
Like the characters
Still reading this along with another series that I like that this author has written called “ The Makalang”. Editing is good and books come out at a relatively quick pace.
Still reading this along with another series that I like that this author has written called “ The Makalang”. Editing is good and books come out at a relatively quick pace.
July 15, 2021
A solid continuation, so keep them coming. I'm interested to see the bigger picture beyond the Hell faction, and I suspect that's where this is heading. If you've read the previous books (and liked them) this one should satisfy, other than that semi-cliff-hanger ending.
July 19, 2021
Quite possible the best harem novel sequence
I know of. The writing approaches Powers , Blaylock or Willis, and it actually has a plot. I almost wish it wasn't explicit so more people could read it!
I know of. The writing approaches Powers , Blaylock or Willis, and it actually has a plot. I almost wish it wasn't explicit so more people could read it!
September 5, 2021
Excellent continuation of the series
Excellent continuation book in a series that continues to surprise. Enjoyed, waiting for the next!
Clean editing, good characterizations, and un-predictable.
Excellent continuation book in a series that continues to surprise. Enjoyed, waiting for the next!
Clean editing, good characterizations, and un-predictable.
September 9, 2021
more and more going on
There are beginning to be too many interwoven plots to keep track of. But instead of chasing me away from the series I find myself wanting to read more and find where all the plot threads lead. Another good book
There are beginning to be too many interwoven plots to keep track of. But instead of chasing me away from the series I find myself wanting to read more and find where all the plot threads lead. Another good book
September 16, 2021
This is a good ending to an arc.
It has all the necessary wrap ups with nothing feeling forced. The set up for the next section is interesting and leaves room for many options. All in all, one could not ask for more.
It has all the necessary wrap ups with nothing feeling forced. The set up for the next section is interesting and leaves room for many options. All in all, one could not ask for more.
October 6, 2021
Excellent
Great Story! The characters are growing and maturing, watching it has been very interesting. It seemed that we were building up to the point reached in this book but we have a new conundrum. I can't wait for book 4!
Great Story! The characters are growing and maturing, watching it has been very interesting. It seemed that we were building up to the point reached in this book but we have a new conundrum. I can't wait for book 4!
November 4, 2021
Another great read
Big fan of this author and this series delivers in all the important ways. Powerful MC. Check. Powerful sexy females. Also check. Lots of what makes this series great. Another check. Just need the next one.
Big fan of this author and this series delivers in all the important ways. Powerful MC. Check. Powerful sexy females. Also check. Lots of what makes this series great. Another check. Just need the next one.
December 5, 2021
Really Great Read!
To me the only drawback to this story was it went too deep into chemistry for not only me,but most other readers.
The characters and sittings along with their dress are wonderful!
To me the only drawback to this story was it went too deep into chemistry for not only me,but most other readers.
The characters and sittings along with their dress are wonderful!
July 11, 2021
Loved it
The story continues to expand and generate more fruitful expectations.The villains are as smooth as the the hero’s in this series.
The story continues to expand and generate more fruitful expectations.The villains are as smooth as the the hero’s in this series.
July 11, 2021
Nicely done
This was an entertaining book to read. The MC was pleasant a d the harem element was fun. Good story progression.
This was an entertaining book to read. The MC was pleasant a d the harem element was fun. Good story progression.
July 11, 2021
Great Addition
This is an excerpt with a nice twist at the end. Lookalike the series is really picking up as it edges towards a darker twist
This is an excerpt with a nice twist at the end. Lookalike the series is really picking up as it edges towards a darker twist
July 17, 2021
An excellent end to this arc of the story that holds a lot of surprises and great teases for the future.
July 25, 2021
Good Book
I liked it anyway. Magic and a harem, what is not to like? It's amazing to read the book and see how the characters interact.
I liked it anyway. Magic and a harem, what is not to like? It's amazing to read the book and see how the characters interact.
August 13, 2021
Great book
Great book and I will recommend it to everyone I know.This is what I have come to expect from this author
Great book and I will recommend it to everyone I know.This is what I have come to expect from this author
August 22, 2021
Great first book
Great first book good pacing and an interesting premise looking forward to the sequel and too see how the story further develops
Great first book good pacing and an interesting premise looking forward to the sequel and too see how the story further develops
January 27, 2022
And on to the next one
Couldn’t stop reading, good characters and interesting plot and concepts. Good thing the next book in the series is already out because I need more
Couldn’t stop reading, good characters and interesting plot and concepts. Good thing the next book in the series is already out because I need more
February 8, 2022
Awesome
Another great addition lived it Jimmy is really becoming a force not to.be trifled with love the plot and the characters
Another great addition lived it Jimmy is really becoming a force not to.be trifled with love the plot and the characters
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