When Dani’s dream of tennis stardom is crushed, she’s sent away to recuperate. But a meeting with the vibrant Blanca is about to push her forward in ways that she can’t begin to imagine.
Ana Sanchez wrote Alter Ego, a girls-love story in a manga vein, that turned out to be one of my favourite one-shots in the genre and the one I have re-read the most since it came out.
While accidentally discovering that she’s got a follow-up to that title coming soon, I also discovered that Tokyopop had brought this over as part of its line of all-stripes romance titles and decided to read it while waiting for Sanchez’ new work.
And I’m glad I did - Sanchez acutely grasps the essentials of how to tell a story that encompasses multiple parts, but fits neatly into a single volume. There’s no fat on this at all and, while that gives some aspects shorter shrift, there’s no denying the end result.
Dani has a chip on her shoulder and a literal scar on her heart after her mother went from parent/coach to high pressure monster, which lead to Dani having a full-on heart attack during the most important match of her life.
So Dani is broken and her mom blames herself, so much so that Dani is shipped off so her mom can recover from a nervous breakdown. Consequently, Dani feels abandoned and adrift with no dream to pursue.
There’s a lot of Noel from Alter Ego in Dani’s demeanour, the bitter girl who feels betrayed and can’t handle it, but Dani is less about lashing out than Noel was. She’s just defeated and has a world-weary exhaustion that belies her years.
Until Blanca tries to shake her down (after some drugging and goading by the village mean girls), that is, and Dani sticks up for herself and ends up putting herself in hospital briefly. It’s one of the oddest meet-cutes, but works because Blanca is such a softie that she crumples immediately.
And so it goes, with Blanca’s boundless enthusiasm for her dreams contrasting with Dani’s lack of same. Blanca is very, very into her astronomy and her design is quite well realized - there’s usually a star motif of some kind hiding out in her outfits.
The two don’t have too much drama beyond Blanca feeling like her energy for something she’s dreamt of is almost rude to rub in Dani’s face. And the usual immediate reaction of ‘situation bad, avoid’ that causes drama in manga like this.
There could be more, so much more to this, the side story with our leads’ siblings, the mean girls, more of the astronomy side, the parental fallout in Dani’s life. You can practically see a multi-volume series in the making.
So it’s a credit to the author that I wanted more but was very satisfied with what I got. There’s a quick summer connection and a romance after some hurdles and then we see what the future holds. It’s not quite elegant, but definitely economical in a way I appreciate.
And there’s certainly lots of interesting characterization to be found - Dani and her mother might be a little too alike, for example, in their desire to be the best. And when mother’s efforts are more than Dani can keep up with, they both pay the price for it.
Oh, it’s not perfect. The central imagery with the stars is good up to a point, but once Blanca talks about Sirius, well, the story’s pretty blatant about bludgeoning you with its meaning. Yeah, it’s very obvious about its symbolism, but I would rather that than nothing at all.
You could also argue that Blanca is a little underwritten compared to Dani, but not everybody has to be working through their own personal hell and she mostly feels like the right character for the job. And that implies their romance doesn’t work, but I assure you it does.
The denouement is terribly charming and Blanca does a good thing for Dani, though it could have gone really bad, and I do love the western sensibilities here. It gives it a different flavour than traditional yuri and that’s a really welcome change of pace.
Yes, fine, also those bikinis are so brutally on-the-nose they’re riotously funny, but I’ll let it go because that scene is really well done overall.
3.5 stars - a good story that warrants a rounding up because it gets the important stuff right. That’s two for two for Sanchez and I hope she continues to make comics at this level for a long time to come.