Could Have Been Better. A Lot
Let’s see….the cup of misspellings and incorrect word usage that began in the first installment, increased in the second, actually filled to overflowing in this, the third installment. Like, perhaps English is a second or even third language. Dude - get that spell-checker being advertised all over the internet to help you with editing out those very simple-to-correct mistakes! Or just hire a real editor! Either way, you’ve got to do SOMETHING about the bad editing of you want readers to take you seriously. Then there are the loooong, drawn-out philosophical dissertations inserted into the middle of action scenes. These are fine, even crucial to character and plot development when placed correctly, but most readers will skip over the 5 - 6 pages they occupy to find out who laid down the next come-to-Jesus smack down during the current battle. Then there was the author’s constant playing with the MC’s ‘stupid, teen-aged bad boy’ persona. That got really old really fast. All said, though, once you get past all that fluff, it’s not a bad story; I enjoyed it, and tepidly look forward to future installments.