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The Kyprian Prophecy #1

The Firemaster's Legacy

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Firesky is the ultimate weapon. It will either obliterate or liberate all of Kypria. One silver-eyed girl has the power to determine their fate – if she dares to question everything she believes in.

Arisa is a silver-eyes – a magical race feared and hunted in the Kyprian nation of Lamore. She has survived by hiding her identity but her best friend and father weren’t so fortunate.

Her luck runs out when she is forced to serve at the Lamorian Royal Court with her guardian, Erun, who is conscripted to weaponise a great power known as firesky – a power not seen since the time of the last Firemaster.

With war on the horizon, and no hope of a prophesied saviour materialising, Arisa formulates a deadly plan to tear the brutal regime apart from the inside. There’s just one problem…the arrogant, exasperating and intriguing Prince Takai.

378 pages, Kindle Edition

First published July 30, 2021

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Kylie Fennell

18 books52 followers
I’m an author of speculative fiction, fantasy and fabulism for adults and young adults. Writing about strong female leads who metaphorically and literally kick butt particularly appeals to me, as does magic…always magic!

My kind of speculative fiction features everything from magical misfits with moxie to fierce and fabulist females.

My writing is influenced by my time living in Japan and Europe and their rich histories. As an Australian writer of European and Aboriginal (Gumbaynggirr and Bundjalung) descent, I’m also fascinated by culture and identity.

I’ve been writing for as long as I can remember.

My love of reading and writing started with an early addiction to Grimms’ fairy tales, Arthurian legends and a love of superheroes.

If I hadn’t become a writer, I would be a superhero librarian – conquering the Dewey Decimal System by day and saving the world one book at a time by night. Failing that, I'd work in a doughnut shop...mmm...doughnuts. Instead, I put my superpowers to work as a Queensland Writers Centre Tutor and speaker (I have presented at industry workshops events including GenreCon 2019).

My creative writing has been recognised via several awards including Queensland Writers Centre Flash Fiction (winner), and Australian Writers Centre Furious Fiction (shortlisted out of 1300 entries), as well as second in GenreCon's short story competition 2019.

I have been shortlisted in The Long Way Home's short story competition in 2019 and 2020 with my stories published in their anthologies. I also have stories published in Lighthouse – An Anthology and Stories of Survival.

My guilty pleasures are watching the Princess Bride, the Labyrinth, Star Wars, Friends or Grease for the zillionth time.

I live in Brisbane (Yuggera and Turrbal Country) with my husband, son and too many pets.

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437 reviews72 followers
June 30, 2021
I absolutely loved reading this book. I loved the storyline and the characters. I loved this book and I couldn’t put it down.
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98 reviews4 followers
September 28, 2021
Thank you to the author and Booksprout for a free copy of the ARC in exchange for an honest review!

Since this is an ARC, this review will be longer than normal. Skip to the end for the TL;DR!

This was a bit long but overall a fun read! I'll list what I liked the most and then get into what I felt were some weak points.
🔥 Arisa is a great protagonist. She was reminiscent of many other teens in literature and real life who are enraged by the inequality around them and desperately seeking some justice. I really liked how she grappled with whether to embrace her dark feelings and how easily she steps into her role as a healer whenever necessary.
🔥 I appreciate that the story didn't shy away from showing the brutality and poor conditions the general population struggle in. While it made the novel darker than some YA, it was very realistic for the setting and conflicts. I also felt that the novel did a good job outlining how the nobility is disconnected and unaware of the lives of the rest of the population and of how innocent most Kyprians are. Basically, as far as I understand, the racism and classcism were represented well.
At first, I was afraid Arisa and Takai's relationship was going to turn from hatred to instalove far too quickly, but it looks like the romance is going to be a slow one since it's taking a sideline to the main conflicts both characters have to focus on, which I appreciate. A common problem in YA is too much emphasis on the romance, which makes readers question the priorities of the protagonists, so I hope this relationship doesn't follow suit. So far it's promising.
🔥 I'm pretty confident I can predict one or two of the big twists to come in the next books, but I like that this first one didn't end with one big revelation/cliffhanger. Sure, there's war on the horizon, and the problems are far from being solved, but the ending happened with our main characters in a logical place without a ton of shock value, looking ahead to what needs to be done next.

Now on to some of the weak points.
🔥I know I just praised the ending, but I have mixed feelings about where we left off with the secondary characters. Maybe it's because I personally didn't see the king as redeemable and I'm annoyed Horace and co. are still in the picture. Then again, this is clearly mean to be the first book in a series of at least three, and the author seems to have a good grasp on the overall plotline, so there's still more development for the existing cast to go through for better or worst. I'm particularly interested in seeing what happens with the king in the long run, since his pride and uncaring attitude seems to have been cut away somewhat. Also the queen deserves a happy ending.
🔥 There were a few comments that came across as weirdly derogatory towards women. Some of these were made by characters to show society not giving women the same power and merits as the men, but these comments felt out of place, even when Arisa and other women showed they were completely capable. Since more time is focused on the racism and classcism I mentioned earlier, feminism (though very important in general) didn't have much place in this book. Perhaps this will change in future books and it currently just serves as a reminder that there are many injustices Arisa is standing against.
🔥 I wish there had been a bit more world building, especially with Kyprian culture and magic, but I think we didn't get much because Arisa herself only knows a limited amount and hasn't even travelled outside Obira. There is definitely potential for more descriptive language and world building in the next book, since I expect some of the cast to travel at some point, perhaps even to Kengia. I would have also liked a clearer understanding of how Lamor and Kengia differ in terms of technological, scientific, and medical advances. Kengia seems to be more developed than Lamor but I'm not sure how much, and my confusion made it hard to appreciate the glimpses of Kengian technology we did see.
🔥 The story is told primarily from Arisa's perspective and then Takai's. I've already discussed Arisa, and I think Takai has potential to become a solid character even though his pride (that totally covers up ignorance and insecurity) made him annoying in this book. The book is also told from a couple other perspectives briefly-- Erun's and I think Horace's. Horace's didn't contribute much, and I did appreciate Erun's because it showed scenes we wouldn't have known otherwise....And then there's Theodora. Based on how much of the book is from her point of view, she could be considered the tritagonist. But I don't see the point of seeing things from her point of view at. all. She's annoying and her personal quest to be queen isn't really on the same level as the multi-race and international conflicts the other characters are part of. She could have still been a romantic foil to Arisa and a source of info for Horace without us needing to see any of it from her perspective.
🔥 The biggest reason why I didn't give this book a higher rating (it's slightly above average) is the use of passive tense throughout most of the novel. I know it's pretty easy to slip into passive tense instead of active and that this has been overlooked by other early reviewers, but for me, the passive tense prevented me from getting fully immersed into the story and left me confused about the level of urgency and various emotions in many scenes. Using stronger, more active language would make the individual and large conflicts feel more real, polished, and intense.

Lastly, here are a few minor complaints that I felt were still worth mentioning:
🔥 Arisa being able to disguise her silver eyes when Rea did not feels like a bit of a plot hole. It should have been clearer that she (Rea) refused to do so, and this could have been done without revealing Arisa's own silver eyes earlier than intended. Erun making the mistake of keeping any Kyprian messages around at all is also hard to believe, since you think he would've been smart enough to leave no trace of the secret communication.
🔥 There should have been more time devoted to Arisa plotting to kill the king. There were many mentions of her plan but no real detail to it, which made her failed attempt feel more harried and impulsive than it could have been, though this could also show her inexperience.
🔥Going back to Takai's and Arisa's relationship, I felt like Takai's jealousy of Sar and Arisa's friendship was a bit silly and immature. On one hand, since Sar is his best friend, Takai should have trusted him not to pull a move on the girl Sar knows he has feelings for. On the other hand, this could hint toward a love triangle, and I'm really really hoping we don't have a love triangle since it would detract from the plot.

TL;DR: There are some problems that distract from being fully immersed in the plot, but overall the book has enough realistic conflict and interesting protagonists to make me excited for the sequel.
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2,146 reviews39 followers
August 27, 2021
Title: The Firemaster’s Legacy
Series: The Kyprian Prophecy, #1
Genre: YA Fantasy
Rating: 4.5 stars

Thank you to the talented author for this ARC.

I am greatly impressed by this intriguing and beautifully written new fantasy series. Fantastic world building, incredible characters, a very interesting storyline. What more could you want? I am deeply invested in these characters, and their developing story arcs, and I definitely cannot wait for the sequel to be available. Highly recommend.
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Author 2 books3 followers
July 3, 2021
I feel privileged to get my hands on a preview copy of 'The Firemaster's Legacy' and I am so glad I did. (Oh, the perks of being an ARC reader!)

Kylie Fennell's un-put-down-able debut novel, the first in a trilogy set in medieval fantasy world of Kypria, grabbed my attention from the start with a fiery female protagonist with a secret. Arissa is a young "silver-eyes" with a mind of her own and a temper to match. Sick of the status quo in a world where those who are "different" are treated like slaves or sent to death, Arissa is hell bent on revenge - or so it seems. Yet, the kindness in her heart tends to find a way to put out the fire in her belly and fan the flames for something more...

Marketed as YA fiction, I have to say, I didn't feel as if I was reading a novel for young people. I was drawn into the story with themes reminiscent of what's happening in the world today - think: racism, power and status, feminism. The clever use of multi-character perspectives (each chapter is from the POV of a different key character, including our protagonist, her allies and the villains) allows the reader to fully immerse themselves in this well-drawn fantasy world full of intrigue, dastardly men and strong women. Oh, there are even maps!

After finishing the novel last night - I couldn't go to bed until I was done! - I was left wanting more, more, more. The hints at what's to come have piqued my curiosity and I can't wait to find out what happens next for Arissa in Book 2 of The Kyprian Prophecy series: 'The Watercatcher's Rise'.
Profile Image for Amanda Gregory.
538 reviews8 followers
June 30, 2021
I absolutely loved the story. I honestly couldn’t put it down. I really enjoyed the views from each of the characters. I can’t wait to read the next story.
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72 reviews27 followers
August 18, 2021
*I received an eARC from the author in exchange for an honest review.*

This epic fantasy series starter promises a perfect blend of friendship, challenges, and a hint of romance.

“Hope will be tested; some will be betrayed
Fire or water—the choice must be made.”


I enjoyed this book way more than I expected. The Firamaster’s Legacy is the first installment in the Kyprian series. As I followed Arisa, a Kengian girl who lost her father in a big massacre and thus had to keep her identity a secret, and Takai, a prince who was struggling to figure out his role and his belief, I fell deeper and deeper into this world. It was a story about so many things: race and prejudice, revenge and justice, trust and hope. I loved the complexity of it and I’m so looking forward to how the series unfolds.

“It was the fleeting time of day when dusk and twilight met. When the silvery hues of the afternoon sun gave way to pearly roses and purples, and the first evening stars pierced their way through the sky’s blanket.”


The world-building was detailed and nicely done. It even had a system for Kengia language, which made everything so believable. I could see the scenes clearly in my head and be totally immersed in the story. Though we didn’t get to see much of the magic in the works in this book, it was clear that it was elemental magic. I’m intrigued by the magic and I’d love to read more about it in the next book.

“Peace cannot be kept by brute strength or forced. It takes greater courage to seek peace than to fight.”


My favorite thing about this book was the personality arc of Arisa. Hurt by her childhood experience, she was an angry and girl who sought revenge and darkness. I loved how she made friends and realized what justice truly means. There were several great quotes in the book that could well be mottos for life.

“She laughed and closed her eyes, as if to feel the music better… At this moment, their differences didn’t matter.”


I also loved the super slow-burned romance in this book. The romantic relationship was far from love at first sight. (I’m not gonna say who here to avoid spoiler) To be honest, I can’t say there was anything real happening between them yet, but there was the potential their relationship would further develop in the second book. I loved that romance was not a major plot so it didn’t overshadow the important point, which cannot be said about other fantasy books nowadays. The attraction they felt for each other came naturally and gradually, making it realistic yet beautiful.

The only thing I didn’t like about this book was the pacing. The first few chapters were a bit slow and I could only read a few pages a day. (This was probably due to my reading slump earlier though—and let me tell you, that reading slump went away once Arisa entered the castle!) But in hindsight, these chapters were so important for later events and were parts of the world-building. Although the first few chapters were slow and a bit dark to read, it sped up quickly. The ending was so powerful and inspiring that I’m moved. The ending also has a bit of cliffhanger that made me want to read the next book like, right now!

If you love YA fantasy with elemental magic, a complicated world worth exploring, a realistic political crisis, a slow-burned romance and strong personality arcs, The Firemaster’s Legacy is the perfect next book for you.
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7 reviews3 followers
August 17, 2021
I'm very grateful to have been chosen as an ARC reader for this very enjoyable book.
The characters intrigued me from the start and the world-building is excellent. I very much related to the female lead with her connection to nature and desire to make the world right and fair, while sometimes getting in her own way.
I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the series.
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Author 2 books6 followers
July 4, 2021
Brilliant! What more is there to say? Kylie Fennell’s The Firemaster’s legacy is a work of absolute storytelling brilliance.
With its vivid world-building, strong, multi-dimensional characters and carefully measured plot delivery, it kept me on the edge of my seat, unable to put it down.
You’re drawn into this vibrant, colourful medieval world divided by war where you really feel for Arisa and Erun and their plight. Vilified for their heritage as Kengians in hiding and forced to live out secret lives under the threat of discovery—right under the nose of the enemy no less—it is the prophecy of the promised Water Catcher that keeps them going. At least that’s the case for Erun, who believes the only way he will deliver freedom for Arisa and his people is by delivering Firesky. But with no other choice, Arisa takes to her false life at court with grace, never once compromising on her integrity for anyone’s pride or the benefit of the shallow privileged around her—including and especially a belligerent Prince.
What I most loved about this story was the artful merging of science and magic. Fireworks in a medieval world is cool, but fireworks mixed with magic, now that’s an awesome concept. The addition of a battery was a beautiful touch.
This is precisely the kind of storytelling I enjoy. I am extremely honoured and delighted to have been given the opportunity to read this advanced release copy. Thank you Kylie. I can’t wait to read the next one.
Profile Image for Anna McEvoy.
Author 2 books
August 18, 2021
This review is based on a complimentary pre-release copy.

An old Kyprian prophecy sets the scene for The Firemaster’s Legacy, and the intrigue builds from there. We follow seventeen-year-old Arisa through the gritty streets of Obira City and into the refined but ruthless Lamorian Royal Court. Arisa and her guardian, Erun, are “guests” at court while Erun works on a secret project for the king. Meanwhile, stubborn Arisa ruffles feathers and makes enemies.

Early on, we learn there’s good reason for Arisa’s cynical nature after she bears witness to the mistreatment of Kengian people at the hands of those in power. So, it’s completely believable when Arisa decides to take matters into her own hands instead of waiting for a prophesied “Water Catcher” to save the day. Still, she struggles with the concept of doing the wrong thing in order to do right by her people. I like that the characters (not just Arisa) are faced with difficult choices with no clear-cut ideal outcome.

It’s not all doom and gloom, though. Arisa finds friends and allies at court, and there’s just the right amount of tension with a potential love interest to fan the readers’ flames without it overtaking the story.

Here are a few of my other favourite things:

- A prophetic blood moon
- Starlings bearing coded messages
- A mysterious green-eyed snow wolf
- A Kengian mare no one can tame
- A very punchable antagonist who actually gets punched!

Also – this book has maps! (The literary equivalent of “this dress has pockets!”)

The good news is there’s still plenty on the map to explore in the sequel, and plenty of secrets yet to reveal. I look forward to finding out how Arisa fits into it all.
31 reviews1 follower
July 7, 2021
The details that went into creating this entirely different world is so amazing! I felt like I was learning something new about Kyprian with every page I turned. There were definitely a few slow points throughout the book, but it was a quick read overall and I LOVED the main character, Arisa. She is determined, witty and loyal to her friends and family. My only negative for this book would be those slow points and the way the dialogue was written. Recommend to anyone who liked the Red Queen series!
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6 reviews1 follower
August 16, 2021
Wow, what a ride. The Firemaster's Legacy: The Kyprian Prophecy is the first book in a trilogy by Australian author Kylie Fennell. Written with YA readers in mind, the story is, in my opinion, suitable for readers 16 to 109 years old!
The story follows Arissa, a young woman whose appearance, and temperament, make her stand out. Along with others whose silver coloured eyes identify them as different, Arissa witnesses the distrust, vilification and enslavement of her people as a wrong that must be fixed.
I love Arissa's character development as she turns her anger into compassion, and lays plans to improve her world. Fennell has done a great job of addressing so many of the issues plaguing the world today, particularly racism and the status of women.
I'm excited to see how Arissa's plans develop in subsequent books and look forward to seeing how other characters in the story develop over time.
If you're new to the fantasy genre, or looking for a great read with a strong, young female protagonist, The Firemasters Legacy is it.
279 reviews7 followers
August 13, 2021
Asira grows up in Lamoria as a ''low-born'' orphan rescued by her kind guardian Endu who is also the town healer. Growing up, she witnesses racial prejudice towards her own people the ''the silver eyed'' Kengians, including child abduction and overt discrimination. She is taught to hide her true heritage, her silver eyes. There is growing discontent amongst the Lamorian populace due to the poverty of the people and the class divide between the rich and poor. Secrets abound and the plot thickens as Endu is forced to attend the sick prince Takai, unknowingly drawing attention to both himself, his ward and the secrets they have sought to hide.

An impressive debut novel of fantasy, political intrigue, racial discrimination and above all ... hope and perseverance. Asira is an amazing character, with great depth and sense of justice. This story is well written, well plotted with a fantastic array of characters. This is by far one of the most impressive fantasy novels that I have read this year. 5/5 stars

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
56 reviews1 follower
August 16, 2021
I really enjoyed this book! It was a unique story that features Arisa, a healer's apprentice with a big secret. She has silver eyes, and presumably magical powers. Her life is turned upside-down when she and her father-figure are held prisoners in the castle to create a new type of weapon. The rest of the book follows Arisa's adjustment to life in the castle and interactions with the various courtiers.

This book had a few similarities to one of my favorite books, Throne of Glass, such as a scheming chancellor, a new girl at court with a big secret and a prince and captain of the guard falling for this mysterious girl. That being said, the Firemaster's Legacy is unique in all other aspects and I would definitely recommend it to fantasy novel fans!
1 review1 follower
August 2, 2021
I got this book as an ARC reader and I’m so glad! It’s intense characters, world-building and tension led to a bad night’s sleep for me. The Firemaster’s Legacy by Kylie Fennell is the reason I’m tired today. But that means it’s a good book :)

Arissa is a fiery yet protective protagonist who I want as a friend in the real world. The kidnapping of her best friend in the first chapter sets the story up for intrigue, adventure and friendship. The use of multiple character perspectives (cleverly done in each chapter) adds to the mystery and carefully sprinkled revelations in each character’s part of the story. Couple this with the intrigue of the “silver-eyes”, royals, a prophecy, firesky, and a few secrets along the way; no wonder I couldn’t put this book down!

If I had to pick a downfall, it would be that Book Two isn’t out for ages and I want to know what happens next. Arissa’s story isn’t finished. There is so much more I want to know about each characters journey!
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238 reviews3 followers
September 25, 2021
This book from the very first page was so intriguing! The author is great at world building and this has so much angst and mystery. Right away you are enthralled with all of the characters and you want to know all of the secrets that they’re hiding.
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Author 6 books26 followers
July 31, 2021
I was fortunate to receive a preview copy of The Fireman’s Legacy, the first in a trilogy, by Kylie Fennell. It is a fast-paced fantasy novel that pulls you into the magical world of Kypria and captured me from the first page. I just adored this world with its conflicts, history, culture and language. So exquisitely drawn. It reminded me of a childhood reaching into the back of my wardrobe longing to find Narnia.
The characters stayed with me long after I finished the book. The main protagonist Arisa is a feisty, tough female who stands up for justice for the oppressed, determined to seek justice for her people, the Kengians. I particularly enjoyed meeting one of the antagonists, Theodora who is determined to marry her prince and become the next queen.
Kylie uses her magical world to draw our attention to the issues in our own world. The treatment of minority groups, the role of women, the ever-larger divide between the haves and have-nots. I found myself totally immersed in the novel and look forward to the next book.

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Author 8 books9 followers
August 3, 2021
Really enjoyed this book. Great world building and detail. Loved Arisa, who's is my kind of bad ass girl! Overall great story and can't wait for the next book!
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2 reviews
August 21, 2021
*I received a free copy of this ARC in return for an honest review*

Thank you to the author for giving me the chance to read this book! This book reminded me a lot of Throne of Glass by Sarah J. Maas which is not a bad thing in my opinion. There were a few things that I particularly enjoyed while reading this:

1. The world-building was very good. I loved reading about the different cultures and how they interacted with each other. I'm not sure if this was intentional, but the Northemers reminded me alot of the Vikings: giants, sleek longboats capable of crossing vast bodies of water, bloodthirsty and unafraid of death. I thought that the attitude of the Lamorians towards the Kengians and the dichotomy between the rich and poor were well-founded in reality. There were some very nice descriptions of Obira and its inhabitants that gave me a very good image of what the city is like.
2. I like the slight diffusion of humour to disperse the darker themes and moments. AKA "stubby fingers." That is always something I enjoy in books particularly of the darker variety, as it breaks it up and gives the reader a bit of light.
3. I was intrigued to see how it ended and did not want to put the book down.
4. There were a few interesting twists that made the story more fulfilling and raised the stakes.

I did, however, have some gripes that resulted in a slightly lower rating:

1. I felt that the book employed many tropes meaning that from the second we heard about a stuck-up prince and an opinionated poor girl, I knew that they were going to fall in love.
2. The king was such an impressionable character that I felt that he was simply put in the story to create drama. In the beginning, he was a tyrannical king who had ruled with an iron fist for years and years and within a few weeks, he has completely renewed his values and philosophies. Sometimes, it felt like all he was capable of doing was nodding in agreement.
3. The constant repetition of, "but she knew there would never be a water catcher," clearly means that there will be a water catcher, and it will most likely be her. I am curious to see in the future books if this proves true. It seems rather obvious to me (and has from the very beginning of the book) that this will be the case.
4. Being completely honest, the dialogue was a bit hard to get through. It was quite simple and unrealistic, as was the behaviour of the characters. There was a lot of, "our sham of a marriage," "before they dare to invade us," and "none of us can be spared from the hopelessness of this kingdom." Basically, there was quite a bit of telling even when we had already been shown something. Overall, the dialogue was just a bit cringy and left me thinking, "who really speaks like that?" Alot of the characters had a deep hatred for others but we are never really told where that comes from. For example, Theodora HATES her brother. But why? Sure, he's annoying and whiny, but people don't simply hate their siblings for that. Everyone's siblings are like that.
5. Nothing really happened in the first book. I can see why it is a series because the only thing that really happened was that Erun created firesky but didn't tell anyone, and the king, queen, and prince have done a 360 and are all of a sudden good and benevolent rulers. If the book had started about 75% of the way through and then extended, I think it would have been a bit more interesting, but I am glad that we got some interesting scenes in the later chapters!

All that being said, I did enjoy this book and I am excited to read more. Although it had its faults, I think it did a very good job of setting up for future books. I feel I have a good grasp of the world and most of the characters.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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55 reviews7 followers
September 7, 2021
3.9/5 The Firemaster's Legacy Book 1

Received an eARC from the lovely author in exchange for an honest review (and may contain spoilers!) This was a super late review because of IRL getting in the way, but I'm glad I still managed to finish it!

Content: Name-wise, around the "Silver-eyes", the name alone had made me feel that it was a big mouthful to say. It could have been better if the Kengian people had a more exotic or even a simpler name as most magic-bearers do, but however it was structured did make more sense considering their bloody history against royals. Who knows that they have a far-better sounding name as the story progresses?

Lore-wise, I feel like I've missed out a lot on the Kengian magic system, and not a lot of stories or interactions had shed enough light or knowledge over the cultures, beliefs and stories that the Kengian people have/had. The Water-Catcher is indeed a prominent symbol of hope for them, but it was a big struggle to keep my interest fixated on this one character that may or may not even be real (speculatively, I have my theories, but each to their own!). I was very surprised (and delightedly excited) to see a language system. I think this was the closest we had to uncovering some part of the Kengian culture.

World-wise, K.F. didn't spare any details, no. There were a lot of parts where the scenery was solidly built and the characters' interactions were played very well in, but somehow, it didn't get me as immersed as I felt like it lacked a little bit more substance or omnipresent context that a reader would expect to have.

Characters: Starting in with the first few chapters left me very confused as there had been a lot of characters introduced at the same time. I often had to backtrack because there had been almost nothing memorable enough to let me remember which character was who, excluding our main character, Arisa and her guardian, Erun. However, while the story progressed, I got the hang of everyone (maybe not Horace, lol).

The Queen and her handmaiden (thank you, K.F., somehow I felt like she and I had the same vibes!) also has merits to be shrouded in this mysterious veil. Who are they? How do they know Erun? Will we ever get to see the Queen as the warrior she was raised to be but had put that part of herself aside for the King? So, so many questions!

I also noticed the on-going slow burn romance that had me reminded of Children of Blood and Bone and The Bone Witch, but I get that the prince has his own morals and Arisa has hers, but more often than not it's the prince who's got me frustrated more than Arisa breaking noses!

Conclusion: The build-up of the story to that particular cliffhanger was...only adequate. But seeing as this is still the debut and first novel of the series (duology? trilogy? series?), I have high expectations to come back to K.F.'s world and uncover more secrets as we go.

Thank you so so much for letting me read! - Gwyn
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104 reviews1 follower
August 18, 2021
3.75/5 stars

This was actually pretty good! Thank you so much to the author for letting me read this ARC! It was a pleasant surprise and I ended up finishing this one in a day!!
The Characters were well written and totally relatable at times. I'd have to note that there were some things about their appearance that made me confused through half of the book until an explanation was given but it was nothing major.
On the other hand, I feared at around half of the book that this would be similar to the romantic line of Throne of Glass, as there was a girl with a prophecy that wanted to fight the regime, a handsome guard and a prince. But thankfully there was no extremely obvious love triangle, even though the way "falling in love" was described was a bit sudden and without any precedents what made me cringe at times.
There was good character development through the story being what actually moved the story further. To sum up, a character driven story.
I appreciated the plot but it was too predictable besides the last couple chapters... I could guess the whole plotline by the end of the first third of the book what is not that good. It sometimes resembled the Throne of Glass series as well as a bunch of other fantasy prophecy books where the main character is the one with the power to save everyone. Read it, seen it. Nothing new.
The ending was satisfactory but wouldn't say it made me really want to read the next one.
The writing on the other hand was fenomenal! I enjoyed all of it, all the quirky conversations between familly, the intricate dialogues and scheming of the council and the in-between jokes to lighten the mood of the book. Everything was perfectly understandable and right-paced that it was impossible not to be immersed in the book feeling everything the characters feel!
Overall, I really enjoyed it and I would recommend it to people who likes the "special girl prophecy" kind of story with a tiny bit of romance, family love and a very scheming court.
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126 reviews6 followers
October 17, 2021
I downloaded this book on Kindle Unlimited this morning, and I devoured it by bedtime. It was incredible! Arisa was a fantastic protagonist, so outspoken and opinionated. I love how she stood up to the royals and the male characters in the story.

I also loved the Queen and the role she played, along with the other characters in the court.
This is perfect feminist fantasy. It is SO refreshing reading YA without badly-done sex/romance.

The little romance that was in this was very well done and did not take away from the main plot.

I just wish that someone could write a wonderful feminist Epic Fantasy book as I feel all the best feminist fiction is usually YA or SF. This book has the potential to be 200 pages longer with more complexity, more POVs and more subplots. I did feel certain parts were rushed and could have been played out longer, especially towards the end.

But that is not a criticism, it is a compliment because I simply couldn’t get anough 😊
This was a highly enjoyable read and I look forward to anything else Kylie Fennell writes.
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88 reviews9 followers
August 19, 2021
"Peace cannot be kept by brute strength or forced. It takes greater courage to seek peace than to fight."

This first book of The Kyprian Prophecy series exceeded all my expectations! First of all, I absolutely loved the setting of this story: a fantasy world with a medieval vibe, divided by war. I also loved the elemental magic aspect in this world. I thought it was a very original way of adding magic into this fantasy tale.

In this magical world we follow the story of Arisa, a young woman who has to hide her true identity and who seeks justice for those who have been wronged. When she finds herself at the Royal Court, she comes up with a plan to end the current regime...

The rebellious Arisa immediatly stole my heart! She's definitely the kind of loyal friend I would like to have in my corner! I loved seeing her development throughout the book. I adored some of the side characters that Kylie Fennell created, such as the friendly warrior Sar and the handsome prince Takai, and loved how those characters developed as well. Both individually and their relationships. I also enjoyed the use of multiple points of view. It helped me understand all the different characters on a deeper level which made the overall story so much more interesting.

It wasn't a big thing in this first book but there was a romantic aspect to the story wich I thoroughly enjoyed. It was a slow-burn and it didn't develop much, but it shows great potential. I hope we get to explore this a bit more in the second book! And with that big cliffhanger I am very excited to start reading how the story continues!

Many thanks to the author for gifting me an ARC e-copy in exchange for an honest review.
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182 reviews1 follower
August 21, 2021
Set in a fantasy world in medieval times this book grabbed my attention and held it throughout! This book is set in Kypria where people whose are “different” are put to death or treated as slaves. Our fiery main character, Arissa, wants to change how she, and others who are different, are treated. I’m so glad I have book 2 already and don’t have to wait to continue this series!

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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15 reviews
August 19, 2021
I loved this book! I read it in one sitting I couldn’t put it down.
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2,190 reviews8 followers
October 31, 2021
Riveting read,can’t wait to read the next book

I don’t like to give spoilers on the books that I read. I believe the blurb on the back is enough for you to decide if you will read the book or not. If you choose to read, enjoy!
618 reviews6 followers
December 3, 2021
entertaining and clean

Good teen read, recommended for all ages. No swearing, vulgarity, or sex. Fantasy and real emotional development in twined. Yay!
1 review
October 3, 2021
I enjoyed this well written book and will be looking for more books by this Author.
105 reviews
March 13, 2022
A Truly epic fantasy

This book has all the bells and whistles of a traditional fantasy with a few surprises to boot! I love that it is clean enough to read to my grandchildren without ever talking down to the reader or sacrificing any of the richness of the story. If the series continues as it has begun I predict it will become a classic.
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2 reviews1 follower
September 28, 2021
Wonderful to read!

The characters come alive and you find yourself routing for most of them. The ones that trying to overtake things and cause trouble you want to throw them in a ditch, lol.
The author draws you in and keeps you there. I can't wait to start the next book in the series! Happy reading to all.
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