Anteriormente, ya había empezado la historia pero por diferentes motivos la dejé (ojo que no fue porque no me gustara xD )
Decidí volver a leerla y pues si bien amé la primera parte.. luego se me cae un poco. Esto es porque el alfa, aunque me parezca súper bello, es muy obsesivo. Siento que la escritora ha "solucionado" y justificado cosas en modo: "pasa por el nombre del amor .... Y el poder del guión"
Así que no me ha dejado satisfecha, dejándome incluso, en algunas partes, un mal sabor de boca.
La pareja secundaria me gustó... Pero siento que le faltó más.
I've read many reviews which mentioned how psycho/ possessive ML was. I partly agree that ML is kinda red flag, but he does have some redeeming qualities as well: 1) While he complains about MC's best friend Xie Yu's pheromones on MC, at least he doesn't beat up XY or forbid MC from having XY as his friend. The novel likes to throw in suspicious scenarios, but at least ML doesn't go crazy. 2) Other than the lie about MC's pregnancy and doing some scum-like actions like spoiling the water heater, ML does respect MC. He does not mark his scent glands unless MC allows him to; he does not initiate car scenes with MC when he was sick (heck, there are novels where ML still does it). ML is not totally innocent but is really just a loyal dog.
BUT I do agree that MC and ML were written to be a little too childish/ dumb, especially MC. Their actions during the time of the first life were... *facepalm*. I also find the timeline of MC getting pregnant a little... ridiculous - while still in school and doing his final year exams, working towards his first job. The novel was just written pretty conveniently, where the MC's life is pretty smooth-sailing and coincidental.
However, the novel was still pretty fluffy, with a devoted, albeit devious, ML. MC was written as a straight Alpha male,
For an ABO novel, while it has elements of military, which I felt were unnecessary, it did not have an interstellar plot. There was also minimal discrimination against Omegas, just that Alphas were written to be physically superior and were the only secondary gender chosen for military school. Maybe because the novel mainly revolves around the MC's and ML's school life, there was little discussion about society.
Overall, an okay read, recommended for Mpreg, ABO without mecha/ interstellar. Oh, and because it's from CG, for its excellent translation quality.
I only managed reading up to ch13 before giving up. The only reason this got 2 stars instead of 1 was due to translation quality. I enjoy naive protagonists in its own right, but I don't enjoy a brainless protagonist... and this fell into the second category. I couldn't stop cringing as I read from the MC's idiocy, so I decided to drop this.
tbh, i wanna stop at 20 something but i give it a chance... And yeah, I can't anymore, this is cliche, ML and MC is unlikeable with the way they act. Also i noticed a lot of mistake regarding the plot and how the story was told. So, bye.
Tóxico y manipulador. Necesitaba una historia así 💖💖
Update, leí los extras 😎✨✨
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Los gemelos son un amor y el calor del celo nunca termina 😜😜. Olvide escribir la reseña el día que termine de leer así que olvidé todo loq me pasó. Pero puedo decir que no cambia mi opinión: Tóxico y manipulador. Necesitaba una historia así 💖💖.
Aunque eso de que intento hace rla auto monición porque murió su amorcito (aunque ellos no eran nada). Si me pareció muy extremo pero romántico.
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