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Mr Bennet leaves his study
What might happen if a year before Netherfield was let, Mr Bennet had an epiphany and started to take an interest in his family.
Could he have curbed the excesses of his wife and younger daughters?
What impressions would the Bennet family have made on the inhabitants of Netherfield Park?
Would it have made a difference to the interactions between his family and the visitors from London and more importantly, Derbyshire?
Find out in this gentle story about a family finding a new path to happiness, as the ripples of Mr Bennet’s change spread to the rest of his family.
Could he have curbed the excesses of his wife and younger daughters?
What impressions would the Bennet family have made on the inhabitants of Netherfield Park?
Would it have made a difference to the interactions between his family and the visitors from London and more importantly, Derbyshire?
Find out in this gentle story about a family finding a new path to happiness, as the ripples of Mr Bennet’s change spread to the rest of his family.
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August 10, 2024
For any Pride and Prejudice lover worth their salt, there are many speculative questions. One is how would the story have gone if Mr. Bennet had taken even a moderate amount of interest in what went on outside his library door? It was fun to see this less pride and less prejudiced edition of the story that took a few twists and turns as it meandered it's way to happily ever after.
Well, in truth, there is Mr. Bennet's hands on and active role in the household that makes a large difference, but this is supported by a few other happy coincidences that turned the tide starting with a decision Mr. Bennet's mother made while she was still alive. At the same time, the Bingleys, too, have their own older, hands-on relation stepping in and it doesn't take long to learn that many of the Fitzwilliam side of Darcy's family as well as his godfather have his best interests at heart, too.
I said this made for a lesser P&P and what I meant was that not only did events trot down new paths, but some of the more acerbic moments were tempered like when Darcy insults Elizabeth at the assembly. That grudge never takes because the succeeding events were different.
In truth, the Lizzy Bennet of this book is a paragon of all the virtues and brilliance as is Darcy. They have a few less than perfect moments that are fleeting, but there are no flaws to overcome. All the conflict of their story is external. It may sound like a complaint, but, in truth, on a hot summer day after dealing with some of life's stresses, I'm all in favor of a story not lacking in troubles, but not of the personal drama kind.
Speaking of conflict, Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth didn't have it all their own way. The story still has it's Caroline Bingley, Mr. Collins, Mr. Wickham, and Lady Catherine to pepper it up a bit.
But, yes, I return to the fact that it is an easy-going, heartwarming piece that tells a loving family's story as it's daughters grow up, meet the men in their lives, and find their way to happy. And, they take their surrounding relations and friends along for the ride. The epilogue was one long, sweet trail of delicious happy for many. And, it all comes back to the man at the center of it all, who took a good look at himself in the mirror, found that he was wanting, and made the changes necessary to set them all on a new, better path.
Definitely recommend to JAFF and Austenesque fans who want a better and more engaging Mr. Bennet and all his family and friends.
Well, in truth, there is Mr. Bennet's hands on and active role in the household that makes a large difference, but this is supported by a few other happy coincidences that turned the tide starting with a decision Mr. Bennet's mother made while she was still alive. At the same time, the Bingleys, too, have their own older, hands-on relation stepping in and it doesn't take long to learn that many of the Fitzwilliam side of Darcy's family as well as his godfather have his best interests at heart, too.
I said this made for a lesser P&P and what I meant was that not only did events trot down new paths, but some of the more acerbic moments were tempered like when Darcy insults Elizabeth at the assembly. That grudge never takes because the succeeding events were different.
In truth, the Lizzy Bennet of this book is a paragon of all the virtues and brilliance as is Darcy. They have a few less than perfect moments that are fleeting, but there are no flaws to overcome. All the conflict of their story is external. It may sound like a complaint, but, in truth, on a hot summer day after dealing with some of life's stresses, I'm all in favor of a story not lacking in troubles, but not of the personal drama kind.
Speaking of conflict, Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth didn't have it all their own way. The story still has it's Caroline Bingley, Mr. Collins, Mr. Wickham, and Lady Catherine to pepper it up a bit.
But, yes, I return to the fact that it is an easy-going, heartwarming piece that tells a loving family's story as it's daughters grow up, meet the men in their lives, and find their way to happy. And, they take their surrounding relations and friends along for the ride. The epilogue was one long, sweet trail of delicious happy for many. And, it all comes back to the man at the center of it all, who took a good look at himself in the mirror, found that he was wanting, and made the changes necessary to set them all on a new, better path.
Definitely recommend to JAFF and Austenesque fans who want a better and more engaging Mr. Bennet and all his family and friends.
June 19, 2021
I enjoyed this cute story even though it is much, MUCH lower angst than I usually like.
Mr. Bennet makes a change and the whole family changes.
I especially enjoyed a very short scene with Mr. Collins and a small child.
Mr. Bennet makes a change and the whole family changes.
I especially enjoyed a very short scene with Mr. Collins and a small child.
June 20, 2021
How many times have we wanted Mr. Bennet to be different?
Rating: Clean, easy reading: 27-chapters + epilogue: Angst Level: slight-to-low: there were a few moments of stress as we didn’t know what was going to happen. Also, the identity of the villain/villainess had yet to be revealed. There was also the death of a secondary character. Source: KU [6-18-21] SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** Spoilers ***
“Just because your father’s present, doesn’t mean he isn’t absent.” –Elizabeth Acevedo, The Poet X
Mr. Bennet held the fate of his family in his hands. For good or evil, what happened within his family was in direct proportion to his interest and or his influence on them. Change him and everything with them changes also. The title sort of sets up the story as Mr. Bennet left his study. That lets you know that things would be different at Longbourn.
“Narcissists are very retaliative if they believe another has achieved what they desire, expose their insecurities, or refuse to be under their control.” –Lorraine Nilon, Breaking Free From the Chains of Silence
Caroline Bingley: Open mouth and insert foot. She was several steps behind in every situation with Darcy, the Bennet sisters, and especially Miss Eliza Bennet. Caroline did not hold back in her disdain for all Eliza’s relations especially her Uncle Reggie. Who lets a niece call him Uncle Reggie. Caroline would quickly find out just who this uncle was. OMG! I loved that scene. This was hilarious. For every step Caro took forward, she was pushed back several steps by her own actions. I love a good Caro set-down.
Miss Mathilda Bingley: Aunt Mathilda, OMG! I loved this lady. She was a no-nonsense, no holds barred steamroller when dealing with her family. She arrived at Netherfield and took over. Charles breathed a sigh of relief and Caroline found her match with her aunt. There was no getting around the lady from the north.
Bennet family: I can’t even say without giving it away. Let’s just say Mr. Collins was disappointed on several levels. He scurried back to Hunsford like a scalded dog. This put a fire under Lady Catherine and she hurried to make her sentiments known. Her situation did not end well. I was shocked and saddened by the actions of Rosings.
What I didn’t like: Aunt Mathilda was unmarried. Everyone called her Miss Bingley. Caroline was half the time called Miss Bingley or if they were in the same room, Miss Caroline. At times it was confusing.
Rating: Clean, easy reading: 27-chapters + epilogue: Angst Level: slight-to-low: there were a few moments of stress as we didn’t know what was going to happen. Also, the identity of the villain/villainess had yet to be revealed. There was also the death of a secondary character. Source: KU [6-18-21] SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** Spoilers ***
“Just because your father’s present, doesn’t mean he isn’t absent.” –Elizabeth Acevedo, The Poet X
Mr. Bennet held the fate of his family in his hands. For good or evil, what happened within his family was in direct proportion to his interest and or his influence on them. Change him and everything with them changes also. The title sort of sets up the story as Mr. Bennet left his study. That lets you know that things would be different at Longbourn.
“Narcissists are very retaliative if they believe another has achieved what they desire, expose their insecurities, or refuse to be under their control.” –Lorraine Nilon, Breaking Free From the Chains of Silence
Caroline Bingley: Open mouth and insert foot. She was several steps behind in every situation with Darcy, the Bennet sisters, and especially Miss Eliza Bennet. Caroline did not hold back in her disdain for all Eliza’s relations especially her Uncle Reggie. Who lets a niece call him Uncle Reggie. Caroline would quickly find out just who this uncle was. OMG! I loved that scene. This was hilarious. For every step Caro took forward, she was pushed back several steps by her own actions. I love a good Caro set-down.
Miss Mathilda Bingley: Aunt Mathilda, OMG! I loved this lady. She was a no-nonsense, no holds barred steamroller when dealing with her family. She arrived at Netherfield and took over. Charles breathed a sigh of relief and Caroline found her match with her aunt. There was no getting around the lady from the north.
Bennet family: I can’t even say without giving it away. Let’s just say Mr. Collins was disappointed on several levels. He scurried back to Hunsford like a scalded dog. This put a fire under Lady Catherine and she hurried to make her sentiments known. Her situation did not end well. I was shocked and saddened by the actions of Rosings.
What I didn’t like: Aunt Mathilda was unmarried. Everyone called her Miss Bingley. Caroline was half the time called Miss Bingley or if they were in the same room, Miss Caroline. At times it was confusing.
July 9, 2021
Super Boring, can't recommend.
Synopsis:
A year prior to canon P&P events one of Lydia's brat bellyaching episodes proves to be the straw that breaks the camels back that is Mr Bennet's indolence.
The Mr Bennet we know:
As the title bluntly indicated Mr B forgoes much of his reading time and instils some changes:
➳ Lydia & Kitty are shoved back in the nursery w/ a governess.
➳ Reveals he, or more accurately his mother, had invested the girls dowries, and interest had accumulated. They had 10,000 pounds amongst them. He continues investing more.
➳ He reins Mrs Bennet in on her abuse towards Lizzy, her nerves and he becomes a more attentive husband trying to soothe her fears of hedgerows.
Bada bing bada boom! Just like that all the Bennets are perfect.
This is one of those stories where there is very little actual conflict and all the characters are in their best behavior.
And although I usually love a proactive Mr B, here the result was so dull I found myself wishing Mr Bennet had stayed in his study; at least something interesting might fester.
Oh so many punishing conversations! Details regurgitated to others, blessing the shadow of the good, damning the antagonists who didn't even get a fair shot to try and create conflict!!!
By the 40% mark I was ready to go bang my head against the wall but I kept reading, because that's the thing with a Salier JAFF, they usually have very entertaining twists/ climaxes towards the end and that anticipation kept me hanging on even when I wanted to be put out of my misery. I was not satisfactorily rewarded on that front and wish I had DNF'd when I first felt so inclined.
There are some interesting scenes, one such is Mr Bennet reacting to Darcy's slight. He is akin to one of those hotheads oft portrayed in 40's cinema, with the high wasted pants ready to rumble.
Mr Bennet's vibe check is a wake up call to Darcy on how bad he has let his renitence and defensive offense get, and he feels the egg on his face acutely.
Darcy:
This Mr B actually shares some lofty connections w/ Darcy by way of his godfather, and is prompted to write a letter to his Duke friend to tattle tale on Darcy’s blunder.
Here Lizzy is slow to pull the trigger on forming decisive opinions, so she never gets mad at Darcy.
Wickham makes a fairly late appearance but stirs the pot for totally impersonal reasons, on the behest of another by hire.
What Worked:
♡Aunt Mathilda nice addition, she comes to beat the shrew out of Caro & puts her in a 12 step program to be less of a conniving bitch, and we even see her carry out step 9: apologizing to all she has wronged.
♡ This astute observation by Lizzy:
Lizzy on Darcy's strategy:
Darcy:
♡
What Irked:
✗The cover is a kinda hilarious in how weird it is, and I get that it is Mr Bennet making a ripple but… yikes it is awk.
✗ No actual story. More like a string of small tweaks if everyone was suddenly in possession of such perfect sense that it borders on precognition; they prepare to the nines for any possible threat which could work if the threats were equal in size, but they are really insignificant.
✗Darcy is unrecognizable, simply the dullest vanilla dolt there ever was, and came off lacking a few neurons.
✗ODC snooze-a-palooza. No fizzle or pop; just automatic and dull.
The speed the courtship progressed was ridiculous, felt like a ton of steps were leaped over. Insta-love is very manufactured and cringe.
Not to mention this confusing exchange:
Me:
He got awful defensive... Though the speed of the courtship would make sense if Darcy wanted Lizzy for a 'beard'.
➳
The Brass Tacks:
I would classify Salier’s writing style as a guided meditation for JAFF Junkies nerves. It is a chain of 'what if' hastily strewn on paper, more telling than showing, that whilst very entertaining & creative, always reads as the first draft in need of a few more polishes to convey emotion and flesh out personality. It is not nuanced or stylized but it tends to be fun, fast, feature some quippy bits & twists, and is good for when the mood strikes.
I tend to take the bad with the good and enjoy her stories, but this one did not work at all for me and I have to say I found this really dull and aimless. The last Salier book I would recommend.
Check out her other stuff.
꙳ Spice Scale rating: Bell Pepper Chaste 🌶/5 ꙳
Synopsis:
A year prior to canon P&P events one of Lydia's brat bellyaching episodes proves to be the straw that breaks the camels back that is Mr Bennet's indolence.
The Mr Bennet we know:
As the title bluntly indicated Mr B forgoes much of his reading time and instils some changes:
➳ Lydia & Kitty are shoved back in the nursery w/ a governess.
➳ Reveals he, or more accurately his mother, had invested the girls dowries, and interest had accumulated. They had 10,000 pounds amongst them. He continues investing more.
➳ He reins Mrs Bennet in on her abuse towards Lizzy, her nerves and he becomes a more attentive husband trying to soothe her fears of hedgerows.
Bada bing bada boom! Just like that all the Bennets are perfect.
This is one of those stories where there is very little actual conflict and all the characters are in their best behavior.
And although I usually love a proactive Mr B, here the result was so dull I found myself wishing Mr Bennet had stayed in his study; at least something interesting might fester.
Oh so many punishing conversations! Details regurgitated to others, blessing the shadow of the good, damning the antagonists who didn't even get a fair shot to try and create conflict!!!
By the 40% mark I was ready to go bang my head against the wall but I kept reading, because that's the thing with a Salier JAFF, they usually have very entertaining twists/ climaxes towards the end and that anticipation kept me hanging on even when I wanted to be put out of my misery. I was not satisfactorily rewarded on that front and wish I had DNF'd when I first felt so inclined.
There are some interesting scenes, one such is Mr Bennet reacting to Darcy's slight. He is akin to one of those hotheads oft portrayed in 40's cinema, with the high wasted pants ready to rumble.
'Mr Bennet, would you allow me to introduce my friend?’
‘I suppose I should know the name of the man whom I am going to thrash
Mr Bennet's vibe check is a wake up call to Darcy on how bad he has let his renitence and defensive offense get, and he feels the egg on his face acutely.
Darcy:
This Mr B actually shares some lofty connections w/ Darcy by way of his godfather, and is prompted to write a letter to his Duke friend to tattle tale on Darcy’s blunder.
Here Lizzy is slow to pull the trigger on forming decisive opinions, so she never gets mad at Darcy.
Wickham makes a fairly late appearance but stirs the pot for totally impersonal reasons, on the behest of another by hire.
What Worked:
♡Aunt Mathilda nice addition, she comes to beat the shrew out of Caro & puts her in a 12 step program to be less of a conniving bitch, and we even see her carry out step 9: apologizing to all she has wronged.
♡ This astute observation by Lizzy:
You might be more successful if you did not scowl at everyone. While you push everyone away, you will never meet anyone who will respect your wish to be left in peace… because they will respect your wish, and they will leave you in peace. As a consequence, you only meet ladies who are not put off by your demeanour, since they do not care about you, but only your wealth and position.’
Lizzy on Darcy's strategy:
Darcy:
♡
What Irked:
✗The cover is a kinda hilarious in how weird it is, and I get that it is Mr Bennet making a ripple but… yikes it is awk.
✗ No actual story. More like a string of small tweaks if everyone was suddenly in possession of such perfect sense that it borders on precognition; they prepare to the nines for any possible threat which could work if the threats were equal in size, but they are really insignificant.
✗Darcy is unrecognizable, simply the dullest vanilla dolt there ever was, and came off lacking a few neurons.
✗ODC snooze-a-palooza. No fizzle or pop; just automatic and dull.
The speed the courtship progressed was ridiculous, felt like a ton of steps were leaped over. Insta-love is very manufactured and cringe.
Not to mention this confusing exchange:
Sir William gave him a sly look. ‘Perhaps the problem was not any lack, but that there was too much of an expectation…’ Watching Darcy’s reaction, he suggested, ‘considering how proprietarily she acted towards you when you arrived at the assembly, some people wondered…’
‘Certainly not. I prefer the company of ladies.’ Darcy blurted out.
Me:
He got awful defensive... Though the speed of the courtship would make sense if Darcy wanted Lizzy for a 'beard'.
➳
The Brass Tacks:
I would classify Salier’s writing style as a guided meditation for JAFF Junkies nerves. It is a chain of 'what if' hastily strewn on paper, more telling than showing, that whilst very entertaining & creative, always reads as the first draft in need of a few more polishes to convey emotion and flesh out personality. It is not nuanced or stylized but it tends to be fun, fast, feature some quippy bits & twists, and is good for when the mood strikes.
I tend to take the bad with the good and enjoy her stories, but this one did not work at all for me and I have to say I found this really dull and aimless. The last Salier book I would recommend.
Check out her other stuff.
꙳ Spice Scale rating: Bell Pepper Chaste 🌶/5 ꙳
July 26, 2021
3.5 stars rounded up to 4 stars
As other reviews tell us this story was a pleasant read with little angst. Mr. Bennet, indeed, does "leave" his study and makes some drastic changes in the household. One being that he sends Kitty and Lydia back to the "nursery". He also attends the Meryton Assembly and overhears Darcy's insult of Elizabeth. He confronts him immediately and now it is Darcy's turn to not only apologize but also to look at his life and make some changes.
Charles Bingley is another one who makes changes in his life. He finally takes a stance and tells Darcy he can advise him about estate management but not about his personal life. He also sends for the Bingleys' Aunt Mathilda, a single woman who has held on to her independence over the years by not marrying. She sets about bringing Caroline under control. Love her rules and consequences!
Caroline digs a hole for herself by insulting Elizabeth just once too often. I cannot tell you what that is about as it is a delicious part of Caroline's set down.
Collins is handled differently and that I also can not get into as it would spoil the tale by revealing a big change in this story from canon.
Lady Catherine de Bourgh and Anne: Well, all I can say it that their part of the story did not have a happy ending.
This was a pleasant read even with the absence of angst, which I love. It did need some editing and there is an epilogue.
As other reviews tell us this story was a pleasant read with little angst. Mr. Bennet, indeed, does "leave" his study and makes some drastic changes in the household. One being that he sends Kitty and Lydia back to the "nursery". He also attends the Meryton Assembly and overhears Darcy's insult of Elizabeth. He confronts him immediately and now it is Darcy's turn to not only apologize but also to look at his life and make some changes.
Charles Bingley is another one who makes changes in his life. He finally takes a stance and tells Darcy he can advise him about estate management but not about his personal life. He also sends for the Bingleys' Aunt Mathilda, a single woman who has held on to her independence over the years by not marrying. She sets about bringing Caroline under control. Love her rules and consequences!
Caroline digs a hole for herself by insulting Elizabeth just once too often. I cannot tell you what that is about as it is a delicious part of Caroline's set down.
Collins is handled differently and that I also can not get into as it would spoil the tale by revealing a big change in this story from canon.
Lady Catherine de Bourgh and Anne: Well, all I can say it that their part of the story did not have a happy ending.
This was a pleasant read even with the absence of angst, which I love. It did need some editing and there is an epilogue.
January 19, 2024
In this Pride and Prejudice variation, Mr Bennet finally becomes fed up with the attitude of Lydia. So he leaves his study and takes action, resulting in the improvement of all the Bennets including himself. A year later Netherfield is taken. I enjoyed reading Darcy getting upbraided for his attitude at the Meryton assembly and for Bennet not to be as useless as he is in canon.
An entertaining re-read, low angst story but would have liked a lot more of Mary's story.
An entertaining re-read, low angst story but would have liked a lot more of Mary's story.
June 29, 2021
Nearly zero angst
Mr. and Mrs Bennet have epiphanies and everyone’s lives change for the better. Well almost all. Wickham…not so much. 😀
Mr. and Mrs Bennet have epiphanies and everyone’s lives change for the better. Well almost all. Wickham…not so much. 😀
December 4, 2022
Bennets but improved
This story is a fun, no-angst ride that makes everyone better off in the end, apart from the ones who died. Mr Bennet has the good sense to have had a sensible mother, better connections and a closer relationship to his wife and it makes all the difference. He gets fed up with his family's bad manners one day and hires a governess. He accompanies his eldest daughters to the assembly and takes Darcy to task for his insult. Everything proceeds from there to give Darcy and Elizabeth a smoother courtship. Darcy tells Caroline off, Bingley gains some spine regarding Jane, somebody manages to reform Caroline's character, and even Mr Collins to some extent. Mrs Bennet, the younger Bennet sisters, Colonel Fitzwilliam, Charlotte and even the Hursts are due some good fortune. Lydia makes a brilliant match because she stood up to defend someone. Everyone who attempts to hurt Elizabeth without apologizing dies or languishes in misery.
This book makes a good gift because everything gets tied up with such a neat bow on top. Perhaps a little too easily for angst lovers. I was very well entertained but I would have preferred all the changes of the Bennets' circumstances to stem more directly from Mr Bennet's change of heart in the beginning. The extra funds and famous friends that turn up later in the book are the result of earlier events, not all thanks to Mr Bennet.
What stood out: Would somebody really have the nerve to bully a duke's heir?
This story is a fun, no-angst ride that makes everyone better off in the end, apart from the ones who died. Mr Bennet has the good sense to have had a sensible mother, better connections and a closer relationship to his wife and it makes all the difference. He gets fed up with his family's bad manners one day and hires a governess. He accompanies his eldest daughters to the assembly and takes Darcy to task for his insult. Everything proceeds from there to give Darcy and Elizabeth a smoother courtship. Darcy tells Caroline off, Bingley gains some spine regarding Jane, somebody manages to reform Caroline's character, and even Mr Collins to some extent. Mrs Bennet, the younger Bennet sisters, Colonel Fitzwilliam, Charlotte and even the Hursts are due some good fortune. Lydia makes a brilliant match because she stood up to defend someone. Everyone who attempts to hurt Elizabeth without apologizing dies or languishes in misery.
This book makes a good gift because everything gets tied up with such a neat bow on top. Perhaps a little too easily for angst lovers. I was very well entertained but I would have preferred all the changes of the Bennets' circumstances to stem more directly from Mr Bennet's change of heart in the beginning. The extra funds and famous friends that turn up later in the book are the result of earlier events, not all thanks to Mr Bennet.
What stood out: Would somebody really have the nerve to bully a duke's heir?
July 24, 2021
A better father
Mr. Bennet becomes a better father and the effects lead to more than he ever expected. This a short fun read. I liked the story.
Mr. Bennet becomes a better father and the effects lead to more than he ever expected. This a short fun read. I liked the story.
June 20, 2021
A Feel-good Story
3.5* rounded up to 4*
If you’ve ever wondered how life at Longbourn would fare if Mr. Bennet wasn’t an indolent father, this is the book for you. A pleasant, no-angst read. This author’s variations are always entertainingly different and tell a good tale. I definitely liked this Mr. Bennet who starts out the story by putting Darcy right in his place after overhearing his insult to Elizabeth at the Meryton assembly. Light reading style. Contains a few chuckles. Some proofreading misses.
3.5* rounded up to 4*
If you’ve ever wondered how life at Longbourn would fare if Mr. Bennet wasn’t an indolent father, this is the book for you. A pleasant, no-angst read. This author’s variations are always entertainingly different and tell a good tale. I definitely liked this Mr. Bennet who starts out the story by putting Darcy right in his place after overhearing his insult to Elizabeth at the Meryton assembly. Light reading style. Contains a few chuckles. Some proofreading misses.
July 3, 2021
Wonderful
I'm not sure what it is about Sydney Salier's books, but they're addictive and fun to read. They're written well enough, but are definitely not great literature. As the title indicates, Mr Bennett has some sort of epiphany, and realizes that he needs to take a more active role in the lives and upbringing of his daughters. This occurs, apparently, slightly before the events of P&P, as the girls are all a little younger, and a governess is employed to take the youngest two in hand, and even Mary to some degree. This change has a profound effect on everyone in the Bennett family, including Mrs Bennett, whose relationship with her husband is improved, and she bears him another child, the long awaited son and heir to Longbourn.
The book summary mentions the "what-if" situation of Mr Bennett becoming a better father and husband. But the changes don't stop there. There are also many pleasant and satisfying changes to many of the other main characters, including Darcy and Bingley. Most notably, Mr Bennett is now a vigilant and protective father, with some past training as a pugilist, and he's just itching for a fight when Darcy delivers his insult about Elizabeth at the Meryton assembly. It's an amusing scene that sets the tone for the changes to come.
I love the new character of Bingley's Aunt Mathilda. She's priceless, and oh so wonderful in her handling of her niece, Caroline. The usual villains make appearances, but because Mr Bennett is now a decent father and husband, the bad guys are disposed of much more quickly and neatly. It's nice to have a Jane Bennett with slightly more backbone, the three youngest Bennett girls with more sense and less annoying behavior, and a Mrs Bennett who isn't so cartoonishly weird. Darcy is romantic and swoon worthy, and Bingley starts to grow up a little.
The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly. It's great fun.
I'm not sure what it is about Sydney Salier's books, but they're addictive and fun to read. They're written well enough, but are definitely not great literature. As the title indicates, Mr Bennett has some sort of epiphany, and realizes that he needs to take a more active role in the lives and upbringing of his daughters. This occurs, apparently, slightly before the events of P&P, as the girls are all a little younger, and a governess is employed to take the youngest two in hand, and even Mary to some degree. This change has a profound effect on everyone in the Bennett family, including Mrs Bennett, whose relationship with her husband is improved, and she bears him another child, the long awaited son and heir to Longbourn.
The book summary mentions the "what-if" situation of Mr Bennett becoming a better father and husband. But the changes don't stop there. There are also many pleasant and satisfying changes to many of the other main characters, including Darcy and Bingley. Most notably, Mr Bennett is now a vigilant and protective father, with some past training as a pugilist, and he's just itching for a fight when Darcy delivers his insult about Elizabeth at the Meryton assembly. It's an amusing scene that sets the tone for the changes to come.
I love the new character of Bingley's Aunt Mathilda. She's priceless, and oh so wonderful in her handling of her niece, Caroline. The usual villains make appearances, but because Mr Bennett is now a decent father and husband, the bad guys are disposed of much more quickly and neatly. It's nice to have a Jane Bennett with slightly more backbone, the three youngest Bennett girls with more sense and less annoying behavior, and a Mrs Bennett who isn't so cartoonishly weird. Darcy is romantic and swoon worthy, and Bingley starts to grow up a little.
The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly. It's great fun.
September 3, 2021
3.25 stars
Well.
I read this last week, and have no recollection as to what the plot entailed, or much else about it to be honest.
But I think, based on the rating I gave that it was fairly good, just not particularly memorable.
So, take that as you will.
Well.
I read this last week, and have no recollection as to what the plot entailed, or much else about it to be honest.
But I think, based on the rating I gave that it was fairly good, just not particularly memorable.
So, take that as you will.
June 29, 2022
If the angst is what draws you to P&P you may not enjoy this as much as I did, but for me this is the closest I’ve read to what I would consider the perfect timeline.
February 10, 2023
February 10, 2023:
On my second reading, I like this Pride and Prejudice variation just as much as the first time, especially Bingley's aunt, and how things wrapped up with Caroline Bingley. I didn't actually set out to reread this one, but after reading another title by the same author that I didn't like as well, I felt some curiosity and wanted to refresh my memory about this one. I don't regret the reread.
July 14, 2021:
The best thing about this story is how it portrays everyone's humanity, how well-rounded the characters are. So many stories have two-dimensional, evil or saintly characters, and while there is at least one irredeemable one here, there are many who are able to come to see their own flaws and want to do something about them, who accept the imperfections of those they love, and some blunt assessments of behavior that are entirely called for. On top of that, some tying up of loose ends in the epilogue that I found touching - and I don't even usually like epilogues. Highly recommended, especially if you have the patience to get through the slightly awkward beginning.
On my second reading, I like this Pride and Prejudice variation just as much as the first time, especially Bingley's aunt, and how things wrapped up with Caroline Bingley. I didn't actually set out to reread this one, but after reading another title by the same author that I didn't like as well, I felt some curiosity and wanted to refresh my memory about this one. I don't regret the reread.
July 14, 2021:
The best thing about this story is how it portrays everyone's humanity, how well-rounded the characters are. So many stories have two-dimensional, evil or saintly characters, and while there is at least one irredeemable one here, there are many who are able to come to see their own flaws and want to do something about them, who accept the imperfections of those they love, and some blunt assessments of behavior that are entirely called for. On top of that, some tying up of loose ends in the epilogue that I found touching - and I don't even usually like epilogues. Highly recommended, especially if you have the patience to get through the slightly awkward beginning.
August 7, 2021
Good storyline with interesting twists
I enjoyed this story but the punctuation and sentence fragments distracted me from total enjoyment. Once you understand how to get past that -- reading through stray commas and getting used to phrases used as sentences -- the story moves along well.
I enjoyed this story but the punctuation and sentence fragments distracted me from total enjoyment. Once you understand how to get past that -- reading through stray commas and getting used to phrases used as sentences -- the story moves along well.
March 16, 2024
Enjoyed reread.
June 5, 2023
Mr. Bennet Leaves His Study
What a delightful and quick read. Mrs. Bennet is indisposed so Mr. Bennet accompanied the girls to the Meryton Assembly. Unfortunately, Bingley is still himself and pushes Darcy to ask his newest angel’s sister to dance. When the insult is heard, Mr. Bennet responds. Darcy gets an ear full as well as an threat to thrash him for his ungentlemanly behavior. Darcy is shocked by the response, but when his godfather’s name is heard noting his arrogant behaviors, Darcy apologizes immediately. Darcy asks Elizabeth for her next available dance, but she has nothing available. Mr. Bennet hints that he will release her from their dance, but she’ll have nothing to do with that suggestion. Darcy becomes immediately intrigued when a woman would rather dance with her father than with him. Caroline is still the barnacle that she most always becomes around Darcy, and he removes himself to the inn in Meryton. When Bingley’s Auntj Mathilda shows up at Netherfield, Caroline is in for a rude awakening. Her aunt has a stiff back bone and takes Caroline to task. Besides Caroline being taken in hand, the two youngest Bennet daughters, after witnessing their behaviors before the assembly, Mr. Bennet hires a governess, Mrs. Taylor, and the girls are returned to the nursery. While Bingley is falling in love with Jane, Darcy knows that he wants Elizabeth as his wife. Elizabeth accepts Darcy’s request for entering a courtship. Collins shows up and is distraught that both of the elder girls are spoken for. He is even more distraught when Mrs. Bennet gives birth to her sixth child, a son and heir to Longbourn. Mr. Collins wants confirmation that it is a son, and is “baptized” when the chilled air hits Joshua’s skin. His Father was thoroughly impressed by his son! As the story continues, Caroline seems changed, Lady Catherine arrives, Wickham arrives by design, the Matlocks appear in stages, and in the end of all the shenanigans, ODC is united in matrimony towards their HEA. There are a few surprising twists and turns that made this a very enjoyable read. Some that I was not expecting and was pleasantly surprised.
What a delightful and quick read. Mrs. Bennet is indisposed so Mr. Bennet accompanied the girls to the Meryton Assembly. Unfortunately, Bingley is still himself and pushes Darcy to ask his newest angel’s sister to dance. When the insult is heard, Mr. Bennet responds. Darcy gets an ear full as well as an threat to thrash him for his ungentlemanly behavior. Darcy is shocked by the response, but when his godfather’s name is heard noting his arrogant behaviors, Darcy apologizes immediately. Darcy asks Elizabeth for her next available dance, but she has nothing available. Mr. Bennet hints that he will release her from their dance, but she’ll have nothing to do with that suggestion. Darcy becomes immediately intrigued when a woman would rather dance with her father than with him. Caroline is still the barnacle that she most always becomes around Darcy, and he removes himself to the inn in Meryton. When Bingley’s Auntj Mathilda shows up at Netherfield, Caroline is in for a rude awakening. Her aunt has a stiff back bone and takes Caroline to task. Besides Caroline being taken in hand, the two youngest Bennet daughters, after witnessing their behaviors before the assembly, Mr. Bennet hires a governess, Mrs. Taylor, and the girls are returned to the nursery. While Bingley is falling in love with Jane, Darcy knows that he wants Elizabeth as his wife. Elizabeth accepts Darcy’s request for entering a courtship. Collins shows up and is distraught that both of the elder girls are spoken for. He is even more distraught when Mrs. Bennet gives birth to her sixth child, a son and heir to Longbourn. Mr. Collins wants confirmation that it is a son, and is “baptized” when the chilled air hits Joshua’s skin. His Father was thoroughly impressed by his son! As the story continues, Caroline seems changed, Lady Catherine arrives, Wickham arrives by design, the Matlocks appear in stages, and in the end of all the shenanigans, ODC is united in matrimony towards their HEA. There are a few surprising twists and turns that made this a very enjoyable read. Some that I was not expecting and was pleasantly surprised.
February 9, 2024
I loved it!
I like This author's positivity irrespective of the overuse of the word "irrespective". This is what happens when Mr. Bennet decides to Step up and take charge? The entire story changes. Mrs. Bennet was pregnant. She didn't get her chance to embarrass the family too much. A good governess was hired for Kitty and Lydia. The story was still according to canon. However, having Mr. Bennet showing up at every function changes the storyline. He hired a governess for the 2 youngest. I don't think Kitty is shy at all, but well, that could be an explanation. Everything fell into place and there is a lot less angst. I think it was funny when Mr. Bennet got mad at Mr. Darcy at the Assembly for his Intolerably insensitive remark. The best parts were with Lady Catherine and Mr. Collins were being annoying. Mrs. Bennet was unable to go anywhere because of her interesting condition. Perhaps that was one reason Mr. Bennet had to take action. Caroline and Wickham had their comeuppances that were much deserved. The Bingley aunt turned out to be a wonderful, intelligent hostess when Caroline started to get on everyone's nerves. It was so bad that Mr. Darcy had to move to an Inn until Aunt Matilda Bingley took Caroline's place. whew. Everyone ignored Wickham who was paid by someone surprising to ruin Lizzy, good thing she loves heavy books. I always love it when Col Forster makes good marriages. Col Richard FitzWilliam is a great favourite character of mine and he made an interesting choice of wife. Everything is the same yet different because of Mr. Bennet. Everyone had an HEA except for Wickham because he is a blight, so he did not deserve anything else. Wonderful for people who like positive spins on this famous novel. I did enjoy it a lot! I highly recommend!
I like This author's positivity irrespective of the overuse of the word "irrespective". This is what happens when Mr. Bennet decides to Step up and take charge? The entire story changes. Mrs. Bennet was pregnant. She didn't get her chance to embarrass the family too much. A good governess was hired for Kitty and Lydia. The story was still according to canon. However, having Mr. Bennet showing up at every function changes the storyline. He hired a governess for the 2 youngest. I don't think Kitty is shy at all, but well, that could be an explanation. Everything fell into place and there is a lot less angst. I think it was funny when Mr. Bennet got mad at Mr. Darcy at the Assembly for his Intolerably insensitive remark. The best parts were with Lady Catherine and Mr. Collins were being annoying. Mrs. Bennet was unable to go anywhere because of her interesting condition. Perhaps that was one reason Mr. Bennet had to take action. Caroline and Wickham had their comeuppances that were much deserved. The Bingley aunt turned out to be a wonderful, intelligent hostess when Caroline started to get on everyone's nerves. It was so bad that Mr. Darcy had to move to an Inn until Aunt Matilda Bingley took Caroline's place. whew. Everyone ignored Wickham who was paid by someone surprising to ruin Lizzy, good thing she loves heavy books. I always love it when Col Forster makes good marriages. Col Richard FitzWilliam is a great favourite character of mine and he made an interesting choice of wife. Everything is the same yet different because of Mr. Bennet. Everyone had an HEA except for Wickham because he is a blight, so he did not deserve anything else. Wonderful for people who like positive spins on this famous novel. I did enjoy it a lot! I highly recommend!
September 25, 2021
What if Mr. Bennet actual did something other than read?
This story has one of the many answers to that which is big changes! With a parent that pays attention to the world around him, the Bennet girls actually have a fighting chance against the pride and prejudices of their own making and of the social circle that they technically belong to.
Spoilers ahead
This story’s take on Pride and Prejudice does take a few liberties with relationships of the Bennet’s and the people around them but overall, you have a story where Mr. Bennet gets off his butt and pays attention to what is going on. The first clue that this story would be different is the fact that Mr. Bennet also is there for when Darcy puts his foot in his mouth and insults Elizabeth. He goes full on papa bear. And if that seems off character, I suggest looking at his words to Elizabeth after Mrs. Bennet threatens not to speak to Elizabeth if she doesn’t marry Mr. Collins. One can take it as a man who doesn’t want to let his most precious daughter go, or a man who doesn’t want to lose the only sane person in his home. But if the man had moved away from his books, he would have seen his girls for who they are, curtailed his wife’s antics, and honestly this story!
The biggest change that happens here is the original Act 2 is no longer it’s usual self. But you must read it to find out why.
This story has one of the many answers to that which is big changes! With a parent that pays attention to the world around him, the Bennet girls actually have a fighting chance against the pride and prejudices of their own making and of the social circle that they technically belong to.
Spoilers ahead
This story’s take on Pride and Prejudice does take a few liberties with relationships of the Bennet’s and the people around them but overall, you have a story where Mr. Bennet gets off his butt and pays attention to what is going on. The first clue that this story would be different is the fact that Mr. Bennet also is there for when Darcy puts his foot in his mouth and insults Elizabeth. He goes full on papa bear. And if that seems off character, I suggest looking at his words to Elizabeth after Mrs. Bennet threatens not to speak to Elizabeth if she doesn’t marry Mr. Collins. One can take it as a man who doesn’t want to let his most precious daughter go, or a man who doesn’t want to lose the only sane person in his home. But if the man had moved away from his books, he would have seen his girls for who they are, curtailed his wife’s antics, and honestly this story!
The biggest change that happens here is the original Act 2 is no longer it’s usual self. But you must read it to find out why.
July 23, 2021
I always like Pride and Prejudice variations that take the best of the characters and exemplify them. This one does this to an excellent degree. The book is low angst, progresses well and quickly, introduces a couple new characters that enhance the story, and a story line that follows the original Pride and Prejudice to a good degree while still being somewhat different.
The main premise is that Mr. Bennett is not the lackadaisical father and negligent landowner in this story. He has an epiphany before the arrival of Mr. Bingley to Netherfield and begins to take an active hand in his family's life. The changes wrought by this are what prompts the story line. Mr. Darcy is given a verbal thrashing much earlier on in this variation and this leads to a smoother courtship of Elizabeth. Wickham, Lady Catherine, Mr. Collins, and the Matlocks make an appearance and cause some issues but the variation handles them well. My favorite change was the arrival of Mr. Bingley's Aunt Madeline. She's a hoot and made for some very interesting interactions.
Overall a low angst, quick, fun read that I would read again. Would definitely recommend.
The main premise is that Mr. Bennett is not the lackadaisical father and negligent landowner in this story. He has an epiphany before the arrival of Mr. Bingley to Netherfield and begins to take an active hand in his family's life. The changes wrought by this are what prompts the story line. Mr. Darcy is given a verbal thrashing much earlier on in this variation and this leads to a smoother courtship of Elizabeth. Wickham, Lady Catherine, Mr. Collins, and the Matlocks make an appearance and cause some issues but the variation handles them well. My favorite change was the arrival of Mr. Bingley's Aunt Madeline. She's a hoot and made for some very interesting interactions.
Overall a low angst, quick, fun read that I would read again. Would definitely recommend.
July 28, 2021
This was another low-angst romantic variation of Pride and Prejudice where the family is much improved by Mr Bennet choosing to step outside his study and get more involved in his family's affairs. This opens a year or so before the original novel when Mr Bennet chooses to curtail his wife's doting on Lydia and criticism of Lizzy.
The Bennets also have a change in fortune where the author has chosen to give Mr Bennet a friendship with a Duke and a mother whose inheritance was passed on to her grandaughters via Mr Gardiner and invested so that they have more than decent doweries. The new approach from Mr Bennet sees the younger girls in the schoolroom rather than out in society and the patriarch attending the balls with his daughters in place of their mother who is atbthe time of Bingley's arrival, in a 'delicate condition' - no prizes for guessing that plot thread.
It's a nice comfort read. Just enjoying the characters interacting and falling in love, thwarting their enemies' schemes.
The Bennets also have a change in fortune where the author has chosen to give Mr Bennet a friendship with a Duke and a mother whose inheritance was passed on to her grandaughters via Mr Gardiner and invested so that they have more than decent doweries. The new approach from Mr Bennet sees the younger girls in the schoolroom rather than out in society and the patriarch attending the balls with his daughters in place of their mother who is atbthe time of Bingley's arrival, in a 'delicate condition' - no prizes for guessing that plot thread.
It's a nice comfort read. Just enjoying the characters interacting and falling in love, thwarting their enemies' schemes.
August 29, 2021
A few minor changes and everything is suddenly different
Mrs Bennet becomes " with child " at the ripe old age of 40 and Mr Bennet, seeing how unruly his 2 youngest daughters are decided to become more involved in his family and the estate. The girls get a governess, he begins to attend more activities, and developed a relationship with Darcy. Mr Bennet is long term friends with Reggie who is Darcy's god father and also a Duke!
I enjoyed reading this because minor changes - getting Wickham sent to debtor prison, getting Bingley's aunt to come rein in Carolina's behavior, and then the birth of the Bennet heir has changed and then made everything different.
Mrs Bennet becomes " with child " at the ripe old age of 40 and Mr Bennet, seeing how unruly his 2 youngest daughters are decided to become more involved in his family and the estate. The girls get a governess, he begins to attend more activities, and developed a relationship with Darcy. Mr Bennet is long term friends with Reggie who is Darcy's god father and also a Duke!
I enjoyed reading this because minor changes - getting Wickham sent to debtor prison, getting Bingley's aunt to come rein in Carolina's behavior, and then the birth of the Bennet heir has changed and then made everything different.
August 5, 2022
Mr. Bennet's Studies
This is a sweet what if about Mr. Bennet leaving his study. What would he do? How would this action affect his wife and daughters? What major changes would occur to the story?
All of these questions are answered in this Pride and Prejudice variation. I loved Mr. Bennet. One of my favorite scenes is the Meryton Assembly when Darcy makes his infamous remarks and the actions taken by others in response. There were a couple of noncanon characters that were awesome.
Read to find out. While reading this story, I wore a grin and laughed out loud several times.
This is a sweet what if about Mr. Bennet leaving his study. What would he do? How would this action affect his wife and daughters? What major changes would occur to the story?
All of these questions are answered in this Pride and Prejudice variation. I loved Mr. Bennet. One of my favorite scenes is the Meryton Assembly when Darcy makes his infamous remarks and the actions taken by others in response. There were a couple of noncanon characters that were awesome.
Read to find out. While reading this story, I wore a grin and laughed out loud several times.
September 19, 2021
Cute sweet funny
I found this to be a funny, clean, sweet, and touch of anguish. I found I loved how involved Mr Bennett was in this story. I dont know how i feel about Anne DeBourg because of how she behaved. I liked how Lady Catherine received her just deserts. I found this friendlier Darcy was funny. In this story, a whole new scenario is born with a Bennett more consistent which in turn changes hid family dynamics. With the family changed they influence changes in others. The ones who don't want Darcy and Lizzy together stay the same.
I found this to be a funny, clean, sweet, and touch of anguish. I found I loved how involved Mr Bennett was in this story. I dont know how i feel about Anne DeBourg because of how she behaved. I liked how Lady Catherine received her just deserts. I found this friendlier Darcy was funny. In this story, a whole new scenario is born with a Bennett more consistent which in turn changes hid family dynamics. With the family changed they influence changes in others. The ones who don't want Darcy and Lizzy together stay the same.
January 3, 2024
Lovely story!
It is amazing how much one simple change by a secondary character of the original P&P can be the premise of a much different story.
I found this alternative tale compelling and completely believable. The author kept to much of the original characters portrayed by JA, but the minor change when Mr. Bennet puts his foot down to stop Lydia’s excessively spoiled behavior is riveting. It’s not heavy-handed, and the ripples from that action are the base to a much less aggravating meeting between the Bennetts and the Netherfield party.
It is amazing how much one simple change by a secondary character of the original P&P can be the premise of a much different story.
I found this alternative tale compelling and completely believable. The author kept to much of the original characters portrayed by JA, but the minor change when Mr. Bennet puts his foot down to stop Lydia’s excessively spoiled behavior is riveting. It’s not heavy-handed, and the ripples from that action are the base to a much less aggravating meeting between the Bennetts and the Netherfield party.
May 22, 2025
3.5⭐️
I like the variations where Mr. Bennet isn't as indolent as in the original. In this version he has an epiphany about how he is acting and how that affects everyone in the house and sets about righting the situation. The story moves away from canon in the sense that Lizzy and Darcy do not have a contentious relationship from the get go and Darcy doesn't struggle too much with Lizzy's lack of connections and dowry while Lizzy quickly sees past Darcy's arrogance to the gentleman and the shy gentle man beneath his facade. This was a pretty low angst book.
I like the variations where Mr. Bennet isn't as indolent as in the original. In this version he has an epiphany about how he is acting and how that affects everyone in the house and sets about righting the situation. The story moves away from canon in the sense that Lizzy and Darcy do not have a contentious relationship from the get go and Darcy doesn't struggle too much with Lizzy's lack of connections and dowry while Lizzy quickly sees past Darcy's arrogance to the gentleman and the shy gentle man beneath his facade. This was a pretty low angst book.
June 8, 2022
Believable Variation
I found this to be a more believable variation than some I've been reading. There were only 2 story lines that seemed rushed and a bit questionable, however they are short-lived. One almost seems as if the author forgot the character so threw them in towards the end. If you stick to the story of Darcy, Bingley, the Bennett family and those close then it is a story you can dream about.
I found this to be a more believable variation than some I've been reading. There were only 2 story lines that seemed rushed and a bit questionable, however they are short-lived. One almost seems as if the author forgot the character so threw them in towards the end. If you stick to the story of Darcy, Bingley, the Bennett family and those close then it is a story you can dream about.
January 31, 2025
This is one of my favorite books by Sydney! It’s a low-angst Pride & Prejudice variation that explores what would happen if Mr. Bennet finally took action to secure his family’s future—before it’s too late.
Familiar characters make their appearances, but the story doesn’t follow the usual ending, which kept things fresh and interesting. It’s an enjoyable, short read that offers a compelling take on what might have happened if Mr. Bennet had truly taken an interest in his family’s well-being.
Familiar characters make their appearances, but the story doesn’t follow the usual ending, which kept things fresh and interesting. It’s an enjoyable, short read that offers a compelling take on what might have happened if Mr. Bennet had truly taken an interest in his family’s well-being.
July 5, 2021
I do enjoy some of the many books written as prequels and sequels to Jane Austen's books, I found this one not as enjoyable as some of the others. And I beg this author to never use the word "ton" again. It was the most overused word in the entire book; as if the author discovered a new word and felt the need to repeat it over and over.
August 7, 2021
A lovely take of ripples.
I loved this take. It was nice to see what our dear family could be like if Mr. Bennet would get out of his library. This was definitely a low angst variation. It was fairly well edited but could use a little polish. None of the mistakes were glaring or ridiculous, mostly just minor punctuation problems. I truly enjoyed this one, well done.
I loved this take. It was nice to see what our dear family could be like if Mr. Bennet would get out of his library. This was definitely a low angst variation. It was fairly well edited but could use a little polish. None of the mistakes were glaring or ridiculous, mostly just minor punctuation problems. I truly enjoyed this one, well done.
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