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The Demon's Apprentice
When 15 year old Chance Fortunato suddenly finds himself living with his long-lost mother and newfound little sister Deirdre, it’s like living in a dream from which he doesn’t want to wake up. What is all too real to him are the 8 years he’s just spent enslaved to the demon Count, to whom his father traded him for power and riches—and the vicious battle he’s just waged to win his freedom.
Chance doesn’t get to enjoy his idyllic suburban life for long before the mystical underworld he’s just escaped comes calling. As much as he wishes he could ignore it, Chance knows in his heart that he is the only one who can track down the murderer of his new friend and mentor, Sydney Chomsky.
Suspected by the police and hunted by the Wizards' Conclave, Chance discovers dark secrets in every corner of his new life and quickly learns he can’t go it alone. Only an unlikely alliance with Alexis Cooper, head cheerleader and most popular girl in school, can help him survive the confrontation with an unexpected foe. To bring his mentor’s killer to justice, Chance will have to fight evil on its own terms, and discover whether that makes him a hero…or a monster.
Chance doesn’t get to enjoy his idyllic suburban life for long before the mystical underworld he’s just escaped comes calling. As much as he wishes he could ignore it, Chance knows in his heart that he is the only one who can track down the murderer of his new friend and mentor, Sydney Chomsky.
Suspected by the police and hunted by the Wizards' Conclave, Chance discovers dark secrets in every corner of his new life and quickly learns he can’t go it alone. Only an unlikely alliance with Alexis Cooper, head cheerleader and most popular girl in school, can help him survive the confrontation with an unexpected foe. To bring his mentor’s killer to justice, Chance will have to fight evil on its own terms, and discover whether that makes him a hero…or a monster.
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December 31, 2014
Brace yourself. I have claims to state, and I'm goin MLA style by provin em with support from the text, of which there are almost 20, so let's get this mango stand jumpin.
First off, might I just express how well-aligned with my tastes our tragic hero, Chance Fortunato, is? He's the kind of underdog I not only don't mind rooting for but revel in the chance to do so. He reminded me a lot of Cas Lowood (Anna Dressed in Blood [Kendare Blake]), who is pretty much like any other teenaged boy who just so happens to be AWESOME... oh, and trapped in a hopeless situation surrounded by otherworldly things.
In Cas' case, it was ghosts and witchcraft. In Chance's case, it's everything. Demons, wizards, werewolves, sorcery and much, much more! But much the same as Cas, Chance isn't perfect, and he doesn't pretend to be. He's got his flaws, and his soul's got the scars to bear the evidence as well as his own back. There's something about him, though, that keeps him from villainy, and it's intangible, but it made me love him all the more.
Aside from his redeeming qualities, he's got a bit of a dark side that kinda comes with the territory of serving a demon for nearly a decade as the price to be paid for being his greedy father's first-born son. Plus, he's kinda funny.
But through it all, he's still a hormonal teenager, and not to an unrealistic degree.
Moving on. This story is drenched with magic. Or, as it's referred to the The Demon's Apprentice's universe, magick. It makes sense since he's a warlock/familiar/slave/sorcerer. From the very first chapter, we get a sense of the energies, auras and objects of power that exist in the world, souls, charms, hexes, marks. I was steeped in it, almost to the chin, and I enjoyed how simply well-thought out every aspect of the sorcery was detailed. And I never really felt like it was information overload, either, even when surrounded by it on all sides.
I was salivating most the time at the depth and realness that guided the aspects of the supernatural. And even on the more mundane side of The Veil, his new friends Lucas and Wanda are great for high school experience milieu. I particularly enjoyed Lucas, who was the peanut butter to Chance's jelly in terms of hilarity.
Anyway, taking into account that Chance dove headfirst into a high school, there are some cliches that are exploited, but those are almost too easy to dismiss given that there's pretty much an amazing reason behind most of it. It's actually pretty dark and desperate, hence the "feed the light some dark" shelf, even aside from the sexual assault (not abused or mistreated or handled lightly, I assure anyone reading this), dark magic and involvement from Hell.
If indie books are something you typically shy away from, but this seems like it'd normally be your cup of tea, don't discount it . It's a surprisingly well-written, well-thought out, emotionally charged rollercoaster ride through the dark side. I so look forward to the sequel, Page of Swords.
Sit tight for more awesome quotes. I love 'em so. c:
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First off, might I just express how well-aligned with my tastes our tragic hero, Chance Fortunato, is? He's the kind of underdog I not only don't mind rooting for but revel in the chance to do so. He reminded me a lot of Cas Lowood (Anna Dressed in Blood [Kendare Blake]), who is pretty much like any other teenaged boy who just so happens to be AWESOME... oh, and trapped in a hopeless situation surrounded by otherworldly things.
Me, I'm Chance Fortunato. I'm a familiar, which is just a fancy word for slave. I pimp souls for [Dulka the Demon Count] and do his dirty work. (p. 21)
In Cas' case, it was ghosts and witchcraft. In Chance's case, it's everything. Demons, wizards, werewolves, sorcery and much, much more! But much the same as Cas, Chance isn't perfect, and he doesn't pretend to be. He's got his flaws, and his soul's got the scars to bear the evidence as well as his own back. There's something about him, though, that keeps him from villainy, and it's intangible, but it made me love him all the more.
"Give me a chance to make this right somehow," I whispered into the night. "I'll do whatever it takes. I swear I will. (p. 81)
Aside from his redeeming qualities, he's got a bit of a dark side that kinda comes with the territory of serving a demon for nearly a decade as the price to be paid for being his greedy father's first-born son. Plus, he's kinda funny.
The marching band was already going, playing some song I'd never heard before, or maybe playing one I did know so badly I didn't recognize it in its clever new disguise. (p. 412)
But through it all, he's still a hormonal teenager, and not to an unrealistic degree.
I caught a familiar flash of red in my peripheral vision and switched my gaze back toward the couch as Alexis moved in from my left and bent over the wounded jock. I barely tore my eyes from the way the leather stretched tight across her ass in time to catch her pulling the bloody bandage from his shoulder. (p. 467)
Moving on. This story is drenched with magic. Or, as it's referred to the The Demon's Apprentice's universe, magick. It makes sense since he's a warlock/familiar/slave/sorcerer. From the very first chapter, we get a sense of the energies, auras and objects of power that exist in the world, souls, charms, hexes, marks. I was steeped in it, almost to the chin, and I enjoyed how simply well-thought out every aspect of the sorcery was detailed. And I never really felt like it was information overload, either, even when surrounded by it on all sides.
In the Hive, you could find pretty much anything if you knew who to bribe. Forbidden tomes of Infernal lore, illegal ingredients from endangered creatures, or reality-warping devices were all here, for a price. If you knew where to look and who to ask, you could buy people here, mostly by the hour, and oblivion, usually by the gram. (p. 276)
After cleaning up animal sacrifices, or, for that matter, making them, taking out the trash was easy. (p. 204)
At least in algebra, the formulas stayed the same all the time, and didn't change with the stars. (p. 154)
I was salivating most the time at the depth and realness that guided the aspects of the supernatural. And even on the more mundane side of The Veil, his new friends Lucas and Wanda are great for high school experience milieu. I particularly enjoyed Lucas, who was the peanut butter to Chance's jelly in terms of hilarity.
"I'm in charge wherever I am, boy, especially with this bunch. I was making werewolves before your mother was spreading her legs for the locals.
"Did he just go straight to insulting your Mom, Chance? Because that's like, the ass end of lame," Lucas asked from behind me. (p. 518)
"Screw that!" Lucas said vehemently. "This guy knows who we are, and I smarted off to him. We're as ass-deep in alligators as anyone else in this room. We deserve to know the whole truth!" (p. 546)
Anyway, taking into account that Chance dove headfirst into a high school, there are some cliches that are exploited, but those are almost too easy to dismiss given that there's pretty much an amazing reason behind most of it. It's actually pretty dark and desperate, hence the "feed the light some dark" shelf, even aside from the sexual assault (not abused or mistreated or handled lightly, I assure anyone reading this), dark magic and involvement from Hell.
If indie books are something you typically shy away from, but this seems like it'd normally be your cup of tea, don't discount it . It's a surprisingly well-written, well-thought out, emotionally charged rollercoaster ride through the dark side. I so look forward to the sequel, Page of Swords.
Sit tight for more awesome quotes. I love 'em so. c:
I did my best [to speak French], but I mangled the words at first. As I went along, it got easier, and I liked having something with a little beauty to it running around in my head. (p.184)
She put a hand on my shoulder and pulled me to her. I was too messed up to give up even a token protest, though I was probably breaking about a dozen rules of being a teenager by letting my mom hug me in public. (p. 265)
"Well, I have a problem with karma. It's not perfect. I didn't do anything to deserve being Dulka's bitch for eight years. If you think I'm going to get back violence three times as bad for what I did today, then let me tell you something. I have enough scars that I ought to have a little credit on the books. But if not, then fine, I can handle it. I'm used to it by now. What I can't handle is a system that kicks me around for doing something good for someone, even if I have to get a little bloody to do it, just because someone says violence is always bad." I stopped as Wanda took a half step back, and felt like an ass when I saw the shocked look on her face. (p. 583)
Conclave vengeance was cold, calculated, and almost always done from a distance. Mr. Chomsky deserved better than that. He deserved better from me. I couldn't walk away. (p. 317)
Then two hundred pounds of fur, teeth and muscle hit the ground a foot away from me with a muted yelp.
"Bad dog!" I said again, shaking the rod at it for emphasis. "BAD! DOG! No biscuit!" (p. 422)
"Wait for me."
"Until the sun never rises," I said, quoting an old oath. (p. 506)
I knew then what it was like to be... pure, whole of body and spirit, and never to have known pain so intense that it made me hallucinate. I knew what it felt like to be free. Not only to be free, but to have always been free, never to have bowed my head to someone I didn't trust or respect. To have had my dignity intact my entire life. To see all that, and end up back in my own head made me feel ever worse. (p. 442)
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February 22, 2015
I wanted to like this book, I really did, but despite the plot being pretty good, and the characters interesting, I think the author's editor should have made him go back and rethink a number of things before publishing this book.
The setting is in a high school, but given the themes used and badly handled in this story, it would have been far more appropriate in a college setting. While this would have made the characters older and therefore change the intent of the author who is trying to make a point with his themes, I think on the whole the interactions and even the language Chance uses would actually make more sense. I do realize that given the life Chance has lived () made him grow up hard and fast, he's very clumsy at hiding the fact that he's not a fifteen year old and it really jars one out of the story. I kept waiting for his mom to tell him to stop trying to hide the truth from her.
The whole scenario with Brad, his unwilling girlfriend, Alexis, and Brad's posse from the football team was a mess and not very well written. At first we had the cliched gang beating up a much smaller person for interfering with something Brad should not have been doing in the first place. Later, we find out that the whole lot of them, Brad, Alexis, and Brad's posse, were changed into werewolves while still in middle school by the psychotic were Dominic who'd been forced out his pack for breaking pack laws. He forced his domination on the kids, using them to pull off petty and not so petty crimes, each crime more complicated as the kids got older. Worse yet, what he'd been doing to Alexis for the past several years makes for very uncomfortable (possibly triggering) reading ...
What bothers me about this story is, yes, I get that Alexis is an alpha werewolf; nice, strong in personality and physically and psychically powerful, but she is still a teenager and the kind of trauma she's been through is going to leave a mark on her psyche. No, she does not have to be scarred or undermined by the experience, but by the same token, the author pretty much sweeps the whole affair under a rug, out of sight, out of mind, and really never confronts the problem head on. Is no one really bothered by these events? Even the one adult who's aware of Chance's past and even listens to Alexis' tale of woe pretty much shrugs the whole thing off as if it were nothing.
Chance, too, deserves better treatment by the adults in his life. He, among all the teens in this story, has suffered the most abuse at the hands of a number of people. He's a strong guy, and, like Alexis, comes out of the fire stronger, but he has nightmares and admits that he's not normal. Yet, when he makes friends with Wanda and Lucas, they don't comment on these facts until they are allowed in on knowing about the arcane world. Yet, to an outside observer, even though this story is a first person perspective so we're inside Chance's head, it's obvious Chance isn't a typical fifteen year old.
Oh yeah, before I forget, what about that sanctioned abuse Chance suffers at the hands of the football team by the coach after Chance beats Brad up for mistreating Alexis? No one calls him on it and the other PE coach practically hands Chance over with a smile! Almost all the adults are negligent in some fashion in this story. It really made for painful reading.
The setting is in a high school, but given the themes used and badly handled in this story, it would have been far more appropriate in a college setting. While this would have made the characters older and therefore change the intent of the author who is trying to make a point with his themes, I think on the whole the interactions and even the language Chance uses would actually make more sense. I do realize that given the life Chance has lived () made him grow up hard and fast, he's very clumsy at hiding the fact that he's not a fifteen year old and it really jars one out of the story. I kept waiting for his mom to tell him to stop trying to hide the truth from her.
The whole scenario with Brad, his unwilling girlfriend, Alexis, and Brad's posse from the football team was a mess and not very well written. At first we had the cliched gang beating up a much smaller person for interfering with something Brad should not have been doing in the first place. Later, we find out that the whole lot of them, Brad, Alexis, and Brad's posse, were changed into werewolves while still in middle school by the psychotic were Dominic who'd been forced out his pack for breaking pack laws. He forced his domination on the kids, using them to pull off petty and not so petty crimes, each crime more complicated as the kids got older. Worse yet, what he'd been doing to Alexis for the past several years makes for very uncomfortable (possibly triggering) reading ...
What bothers me about this story is, yes, I get that Alexis is an alpha werewolf; nice, strong in personality and physically and psychically powerful, but she is still a teenager and the kind of trauma she's been through is going to leave a mark on her psyche. No, she does not have to be scarred or undermined by the experience, but by the same token, the author pretty much sweeps the whole affair under a rug, out of sight, out of mind, and really never confronts the problem head on. Is no one really bothered by these events? Even the one adult who's aware of Chance's past and even listens to Alexis' tale of woe pretty much shrugs the whole thing off as if it were nothing.
Chance, too, deserves better treatment by the adults in his life. He, among all the teens in this story, has suffered the most abuse at the hands of a number of people. He's a strong guy, and, like Alexis, comes out of the fire stronger, but he has nightmares and admits that he's not normal. Yet, when he makes friends with Wanda and Lucas, they don't comment on these facts until they are allowed in on knowing about the arcane world. Yet, to an outside observer, even though this story is a first person perspective so we're inside Chance's head, it's obvious Chance isn't a typical fifteen year old.
Oh yeah, before I forget, what about that sanctioned abuse Chance suffers at the hands of the football team by the coach after Chance beats Brad up for mistreating Alexis? No one calls him on it and the other PE coach practically hands Chance over with a smile! Almost all the adults are negligent in some fashion in this story. It really made for painful reading.
January 29, 2012
How amazing was this book? I got it for review as an ebook. I really, really, really want this on paperback, edited just a tiny bit.
It’s clear now that I absolutely loved it. Our main boy here is a winner, he’s charming, relatable and he has a kick-ass story to tell. His past is sad and the writer did an amazing job on telling us about it. I loved how he didn’t make him sad and resentful. Instead, all out ass-kicking boy wants is to live a normal live, to move on, to be happy. I really admire that. It’s also written in a way that makes it totally believable. I just want everyone to read it, because that is how cool this story is. This writer deserves more praise and fans and reviews.
I had a few problems with the language at the start. It might sound weird, because I have no problem with swearing, but in this story, it somehow feels off. I guess the writer tried to make clear how hard-ass-kicking-cool our main boy is, but I would have liked him more without it. And just to be clear, he’s not just ass-kicking, he is also sweet, insecure, broken, happy and a teenage boy. I guess the language and some topics made it hard for me to really place this books in a category. It is YA but with an adult twist, since the language and the themes might be a different from how YA usually is. But that’s okay! I loved it, I just think this book just shows how thin the line between YA and Adult is sometimes.
The second problem was his love interest. Without spoiling things, I didn’t like the ending. I think looking at her past, the trust she gave him felt a bit off. I think the writer needs to consider the ending, since I think there should have been a little more bonding and stuff.
Anyways. Four stars, maybe five if I change my mind sometime. Thanks R2R and author. LOVED IT.
It’s clear now that I absolutely loved it. Our main boy here is a winner, he’s charming, relatable and he has a kick-ass story to tell. His past is sad and the writer did an amazing job on telling us about it. I loved how he didn’t make him sad and resentful. Instead, all out ass-kicking boy wants is to live a normal live, to move on, to be happy. I really admire that. It’s also written in a way that makes it totally believable. I just want everyone to read it, because that is how cool this story is. This writer deserves more praise and fans and reviews.
I had a few problems with the language at the start. It might sound weird, because I have no problem with swearing, but in this story, it somehow feels off. I guess the writer tried to make clear how hard-ass-kicking-cool our main boy is, but I would have liked him more without it. And just to be clear, he’s not just ass-kicking, he is also sweet, insecure, broken, happy and a teenage boy. I guess the language and some topics made it hard for me to really place this books in a category. It is YA but with an adult twist, since the language and the themes might be a different from how YA usually is. But that’s okay! I loved it, I just think this book just shows how thin the line between YA and Adult is sometimes.
The second problem was his love interest. Without spoiling things, I didn’t like the ending. I think looking at her past, the trust she gave him felt a bit off. I think the writer needs to consider the ending, since I think there should have been a little more bonding and stuff.
Anyways. Four stars, maybe five if I change my mind sometime. Thanks R2R and author. LOVED IT.
January 24, 2012
Wow. I read this as part of read to review. So thanks to them and the author for the opportunity.
Frankly, this was the best new YA book I've read in awhile. Definite recommend to all that like Urban fantasy, or regular fantasy. Love that the main character was a warlock. That was different for most. The werewolves were scary as they should be, but sympathetic in the long run. First off, I loved Chance. He's deeply troubled, and worried about his soul after being used as a demon's slave for eight years. He was a great character, lots of depth. I felt for him as he blundered his way around trying to live in the normal (cowan) world, make friends and clean up the messes of his own and his friends lives. Shade, Wanda and Lucas have lots of potential for future novels to grow and add to his march for redemption. The only fault I can give the book for originality is that the Horus gaze was a bit Harry Dresden. It didn't hurt my review because the book was overall extremely original and I couldn't put it down. I wanted to end it and read the sequel immediately which for me is rare.
There were only a few slight editing needs, nothing that was distracting, which is refreshing lately. To sum up, loved the book, loved the characters, and I want more!
Frankly, this was the best new YA book I've read in awhile. Definite recommend to all that like Urban fantasy, or regular fantasy. Love that the main character was a warlock. That was different for most. The werewolves were scary as they should be, but sympathetic in the long run. First off, I loved Chance. He's deeply troubled, and worried about his soul after being used as a demon's slave for eight years. He was a great character, lots of depth. I felt for him as he blundered his way around trying to live in the normal (cowan) world, make friends and clean up the messes of his own and his friends lives. Shade, Wanda and Lucas have lots of potential for future novels to grow and add to his march for redemption. The only fault I can give the book for originality is that the Horus gaze was a bit Harry Dresden. It didn't hurt my review because the book was overall extremely original and I couldn't put it down. I wanted to end it and read the sequel immediately which for me is rare.
There were only a few slight editing needs, nothing that was distracting, which is refreshing lately. To sum up, loved the book, loved the characters, and I want more!
August 1, 2011
The Demon's Apprentice is smart, funny and emotionally compelling. I found myself laughing aloud, sometimes crying and struggling right along with Chance Fortunato as he tries to adjust to "normal" life after being held captive by the demon Dulka. I was moved by his fierce love for his mother and sister, and his awkward attempts to express that love. But before he has a chance to get used to his freedom, he encounters some obstacles at his new school. Obstacles far more serious than worrying about what labels you are wearing or about who, or what, is "cool" that day. Though he had resolved to leave behind the world of Demons and dark magicks, he is forced back into it when a new friend is found murdered.
I am also a sucker for a good action scene, and The Demon's Apprentice defintely delivers on that score! The fights are fast-moving and made me feel as if I was right there in the center of the action.
I definitely reccommend this book to one and all! It contains all of the necessary ingredients for a very entertaining read: action, humor, drama, and yes, even a little romance.
I am also a sucker for a good action scene, and The Demon's Apprentice defintely delivers on that score! The fights are fast-moving and made me feel as if I was right there in the center of the action.
I definitely reccommend this book to one and all! It contains all of the necessary ingredients for a very entertaining read: action, humor, drama, and yes, even a little romance.
April 9, 2019
You know how Fifty Shades of Grey started out as a Twilight Fan fiction? Well, I'd bet a large amount of money that this book started out as a young Dresden Files fan fic. No knock to Reeder or the story he created, but the dna is quite visible.
That said, if Butcher ever wanted a Young Dresden files series created, Reeder would be the guy he should contract for it because this book is great.
This book starts off with the young magic user escaping his abusive human caregiver and having to defeat the Demon. In Dresden files this would be the battle with "He Who Walks Behind" and "Justin DuMorne", re-contextualized here as the fight with the demon "Dulka" and his father. Followed by him having to deal with 'normal' high school life.
Basically, this book has everything a fan of Dresden Files could want in a the series while being different enough to be it's own thing and chart an interesting new path.
I Highly recommend this for any urban fantasy fan.
That said, if Butcher ever wanted a Young Dresden files series created, Reeder would be the guy he should contract for it because this book is great.
This book starts off with the young magic user escaping his abusive human caregiver and having to defeat the Demon. In Dresden files this would be the battle with "He Who Walks Behind" and "Justin DuMorne", re-contextualized here as the fight with the demon "Dulka" and his father. Followed by him having to deal with 'normal' high school life.
Basically, this book has everything a fan of Dresden Files could want in a the series while being different enough to be it's own thing and chart an interesting new path.
I Highly recommend this for any urban fantasy fan.
October 11, 2024
Audiobook narrated by
Charlie Thurston
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
This was a pleasant surprise!
I went into this book, thinking I wouldn't like it.
My bad.
This was both funny and entertaining.
Charlie Thurston
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
This was a pleasant surprise!
I went into this book, thinking I wouldn't like it.
My bad.
This was both funny and entertaining.
January 26, 2012
Originally posted at http://ufreview.com/2012/01/25/the-de...
Review:
I got a copy of The Demon's Apprentice from Read2Review on Goodreads, and it seems they may turn me into a fan of YA yet. First of all thanks to them and Ben Reeder for allowing us book addicts a chance to read it. I have said before that I don't usually like YA, but this book was...really really good, I couldn't put it down. Chance is a 15 yr old kid who had been sold to the demon Dulka at age 7 by his father. He manages to break the demon's hold over him and goes to live with his mother and little sister he had previously never met. He tries to settle in and live as a normal 15 yr old in the suburbs but that doesn't work out so well for him. When a teacher at school is murdered and it's apparent that it was done by something supernatural Chance takes it upon himself to try and solve this case and then things start to get hairy.
First off and I have to say it, there are many similarities between this and the early Harry Dresden novels. A council of wizards who think you're evil and want to kill you...check, Horus gaze and Soul gaze...check. A wizard who does bad things for the greater good...check. That's not something that necessarily bothered me but it was definitely something I noticed while reading. Chance has to be the most pitiable yet endearing characters I have read in ages. I had to remind myself constantly that this kid was 15 and not an adult, missing was the annoying teenage angst that I hate in YA. This kid had a truly shitty life yet still always tries to do the right thing and protect those he loves and because of his past he just can't see himself as a good person. The friends Chance makes are also intriguing and believable in their own right and stick with him throughout all his battles with the monsters, while showing him what "normal" looks like.
The plot moves along at a good pace and if you like action there is none lacking here. Mr Reeder does as well with action as he does with the characters, the fight scenes make you feel like you're right there feeling every hit. From his escape from the demon Dulka to the final showdown you are engaged. I hope this series continues as I really enjoyed it and will happily grab the next installment.
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ 4.5/5 I couldn't put it down.
Review:
I got a copy of The Demon's Apprentice from Read2Review on Goodreads, and it seems they may turn me into a fan of YA yet. First of all thanks to them and Ben Reeder for allowing us book addicts a chance to read it. I have said before that I don't usually like YA, but this book was...really really good, I couldn't put it down. Chance is a 15 yr old kid who had been sold to the demon Dulka at age 7 by his father. He manages to break the demon's hold over him and goes to live with his mother and little sister he had previously never met. He tries to settle in and live as a normal 15 yr old in the suburbs but that doesn't work out so well for him. When a teacher at school is murdered and it's apparent that it was done by something supernatural Chance takes it upon himself to try and solve this case and then things start to get hairy.
First off and I have to say it, there are many similarities between this and the early Harry Dresden novels. A council of wizards who think you're evil and want to kill you...check, Horus gaze and Soul gaze...check. A wizard who does bad things for the greater good...check. That's not something that necessarily bothered me but it was definitely something I noticed while reading. Chance has to be the most pitiable yet endearing characters I have read in ages. I had to remind myself constantly that this kid was 15 and not an adult, missing was the annoying teenage angst that I hate in YA. This kid had a truly shitty life yet still always tries to do the right thing and protect those he loves and because of his past he just can't see himself as a good person. The friends Chance makes are also intriguing and believable in their own right and stick with him throughout all his battles with the monsters, while showing him what "normal" looks like.
The plot moves along at a good pace and if you like action there is none lacking here. Mr Reeder does as well with action as he does with the characters, the fight scenes make you feel like you're right there feeling every hit. From his escape from the demon Dulka to the final showdown you are engaged. I hope this series continues as I really enjoyed it and will happily grab the next installment.
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ 4.5/5 I couldn't put it down.
January 21, 2012
Chance's story was provided to me free in exchange for an honest review. I'm at 3.75stars.
Chance Fortunato's deepest desire is to be a normal teen-ager - but his reality is that he was sold into demon slavery when he was 7years old by his father as way of clearing a demonic debt. Chance finds a way out of this life by listening, learning and being 9years worth of patient – soon after we meet him he is able to break away from his cruel demonic master, Dulka. But of course that is not the end of the story…
After his escape chance is soon settled in a different kind of hell. On the positive side he is in the bosom of his loving re-discovered family in the forms of his mother and the sister he didn’t know he had; he has friends and his mentor Sydney. On the negative side he has the pleasure of being the target of both the jocks and the Wizard’s conclave. Soon Sydney’s murder sends Chance’s life into another tailspin as he is the chief suspect of the local police and he knows that it was one of the dark elements from his old life coming to invade this one. Chance knows if the murder is going to be solved & the bad elements repelled from the neighborhood– he will have to be the one to do it. You find yourself cheering for Chance making decisions that he knows have repercussions but have to be made – he is not about to wait for someone else to save him.
A smart, humorous and interesting origin story for what could be an exciting series. The characters were meaty enough to make an impression and it was a good mix of them. This was an enjoyable read, from start to finish and very different from the normal YA paranormal.
Chance Fortunato's deepest desire is to be a normal teen-ager - but his reality is that he was sold into demon slavery when he was 7years old by his father as way of clearing a demonic debt. Chance finds a way out of this life by listening, learning and being 9years worth of patient – soon after we meet him he is able to break away from his cruel demonic master, Dulka. But of course that is not the end of the story…
After his escape chance is soon settled in a different kind of hell. On the positive side he is in the bosom of his loving re-discovered family in the forms of his mother and the sister he didn’t know he had; he has friends and his mentor Sydney. On the negative side he has the pleasure of being the target of both the jocks and the Wizard’s conclave. Soon Sydney’s murder sends Chance’s life into another tailspin as he is the chief suspect of the local police and he knows that it was one of the dark elements from his old life coming to invade this one. Chance knows if the murder is going to be solved & the bad elements repelled from the neighborhood– he will have to be the one to do it. You find yourself cheering for Chance making decisions that he knows have repercussions but have to be made – he is not about to wait for someone else to save him.
A smart, humorous and interesting origin story for what could be an exciting series. The characters were meaty enough to make an impression and it was a good mix of them. This was an enjoyable read, from start to finish and very different from the normal YA paranormal.
April 16, 2015
Having been sacrificed to a demon by his father, on his own birthday at age seven, Chance Fortunado has lived a miserable existence. The last eight years, he's been forced to do his master's dirty work; including the trade of charms and hexes in exchange for pieces of the buyer's soul.
Just recently broken free of his familiar bond/slavery, Chance finds him self in the situation of having to adapt to the normal life of a teenager - including high school, and getting reacquainted with his estranged mother and little sister.
Suddenly he's on the opposite ends of the table, and must fight the very forces he's been working for since childhood and dodge the Counil; a supernatural society of mages and wizards that have labeled him a warlock and wants him dead.
On the plus side: (Okay, that doesn't sound quite right..) For a YA book, this story deals with some heavy stuff, including child molestation, torture, murder and near rape. This isn't one of those fluffy coming-of-age stories, but carries some real depth.
What could have been done better, was Chance's relationship with his mother. It seems she nearly took him for granted once he returned. His sister, whom he had never met, accepted him at once, no questions asked, no period of adjustment and no jealousy. This didn't ring true to me.
Despite certain aspects, this book drew me in, and I am going to continue reading this series.
3.5 stars.
Just recently broken free of his familiar bond/slavery, Chance finds him self in the situation of having to adapt to the normal life of a teenager - including high school, and getting reacquainted with his estranged mother and little sister.
Suddenly he's on the opposite ends of the table, and must fight the very forces he's been working for since childhood and dodge the Counil; a supernatural society of mages and wizards that have labeled him a warlock and wants him dead.
On the plus side: (Okay, that doesn't sound quite right..) For a YA book, this story deals with some heavy stuff, including child molestation, torture, murder and near rape. This isn't one of those fluffy coming-of-age stories, but carries some real depth.
What could have been done better, was Chance's relationship with his mother. It seems she nearly took him for granted once he returned. His sister, whom he had never met, accepted him at once, no questions asked, no period of adjustment and no jealousy. This didn't ring true to me.
Despite certain aspects, this book drew me in, and I am going to continue reading this series.
3.5 stars.
January 17, 2015
Warlocks, Wizards, Werewolves, Demons and mages! Read it. Loved it. You'll enjoy it too. I read the ebook. Next volume is expected available in February. I'm looking forward to it.
July 23, 2024
Decent YA urban fantasy taking place in American high school - characters are a little bit over the top, but story pace and progression is really well done.
January 11, 2020
Rating 4.5 stars
Re-read Jan 2020 Initial review below.
This book was really good. If you liked the Damned and the Cursed series and the Demon Accords series, I think you will definitely like this book. I wasn't too sure about this book based on the title: Demon's Apprentice. It made me feel like the main character was going to be a bad guy, or at least morally corrupt. That couldn't be further from the truth.
Chance Fortunato is an apprentice to a Demon prince from hell, he just isn't one by choice. His father made a deal with this demon for power, money and women in exchange for his soul when he died. Normally the soul is lost right away when the person makes the deal but Chance's father made another deal. If he could keep his soul until he died, he would sacrifice his first born child to the demon. Instead of killing the boy however, the demon decided to make Chance his slave. This all happened when Chance was 7 years old. Demons can't really make deals by themselves in the world without the Conclave stopping them (they are the magic world equivalent to the magic police), but since Chance is a human, he can make all the deals for the Demon, without it being traced back to the demon. Even though chance is a slave and is tortured on a regular basis, every evil deal he makes goes against his soul and not the Demon. For the last 8 years Chance has been doing terrible acts at the behest of his master and his father. His Aura is mostly black at this point and he despises what he has done and who he is. But, Chance has a plan to escape. There are always rules with magic and the Demons, and Chance found a loophole and was able to escape. He is no longer a servant of a Demon.
There are werewolves, magic users, Fairy creatures and everything else you would expect from the magical community. I really liked this book. It begs the question: If you are forced to do something evil because you are being tortured, does that make you evil? Is it the act or the intent that is important?
Re-read Jan 2020 Initial review below.
This book was really good. If you liked the Damned and the Cursed series and the Demon Accords series, I think you will definitely like this book. I wasn't too sure about this book based on the title: Demon's Apprentice. It made me feel like the main character was going to be a bad guy, or at least morally corrupt. That couldn't be further from the truth.
Chance Fortunato is an apprentice to a Demon prince from hell, he just isn't one by choice. His father made a deal with this demon for power, money and women in exchange for his soul when he died. Normally the soul is lost right away when the person makes the deal but Chance's father made another deal. If he could keep his soul until he died, he would sacrifice his first born child to the demon. Instead of killing the boy however, the demon decided to make Chance his slave. This all happened when Chance was 7 years old. Demons can't really make deals by themselves in the world without the Conclave stopping them (they are the magic world equivalent to the magic police), but since Chance is a human, he can make all the deals for the Demon, without it being traced back to the demon. Even though chance is a slave and is tortured on a regular basis, every evil deal he makes goes against his soul and not the Demon. For the last 8 years Chance has been doing terrible acts at the behest of his master and his father. His Aura is mostly black at this point and he despises what he has done and who he is. But, Chance has a plan to escape. There are always rules with magic and the Demons, and Chance found a loophole and was able to escape. He is no longer a servant of a Demon.
There are werewolves, magic users, Fairy creatures and everything else you would expect from the magical community. I really liked this book. It begs the question: If you are forced to do something evil because you are being tortured, does that make you evil? Is it the act or the intent that is important?
January 10, 2012
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On Chance's seventh birthday, his dad sold him to a demon out of a selfish desire to escape his own demonic debts. Eight years later, Fifteen-year-old sophomore Chance takes life into his own hands. Through intelligence, careful planning, and amazing will power, Chance outwits his powerful demon master and escapes. His life is finally his own.
The Demon's Apprentice is the inverse of the typical high-school-kid-who-stumbles-upon-the-supernatural-world story. It starts with Chance fully aware of the supernatural world and, as the story continues, it's high school he has to get accustomed to. But, of course, just because he's free from the demon doesn't mean that he's free from the supernatural society. In fact, being free from the demon only makes the supernatural that much more interested in him.
His first week in the suburbs, his first week of attempting to live a normal life, turns out to be one 'hell' of a couple of days. On the plus side, he makes friends and learns what the love of a wonderful mother and little sister is like. On the negative side, the trail of people/creatures after Chance just keeps growing - from the police to the Wizards' Conclave to the football jocks.
Chance is finally surrounded by those he loves and those who love him, but can he protect them all from the dangers that come along with being a warlock?
In the beginning, I didn't know how I felt about Chance. He's one of those marvelously written protagonists that one both finds suspicious and loveable. However, by the fourth chapter, I found myself really caring about Chance. It's hard not to. He's the type of guy that would never take advantage of a female, and he has major love and respect for his mom.
I also really loved how Ben Reeder describes characters and magic. He describes magic in such a way that readers can easily grasp how it works, and it's the first time I've ever fully understood the process. In spite of all the crazy, dark things going on, there were still humorous bits that got a good laugh out of me. Hey, who doesn't like a good laugh?
There's another book on its way and I can't wait to read it!
If you enjoy the review below and would like to win a signed, print copy of The Demon's Apprentice, you have until January 14, 2012 to enter here (http://fuisti.blogspot.com/2012/01/de...). All you have to do is comment!
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On Chance's seventh birthday, his dad sold him to a demon out of a selfish desire to escape his own demonic debts. Eight years later, Fifteen-year-old sophomore Chance takes life into his own hands. Through intelligence, careful planning, and amazing will power, Chance outwits his powerful demon master and escapes. His life is finally his own.
The Demon's Apprentice is the inverse of the typical high-school-kid-who-stumbles-upon-the-supernatural-world story. It starts with Chance fully aware of the supernatural world and, as the story continues, it's high school he has to get accustomed to. But, of course, just because he's free from the demon doesn't mean that he's free from the supernatural society. In fact, being free from the demon only makes the supernatural that much more interested in him.
His first week in the suburbs, his first week of attempting to live a normal life, turns out to be one 'hell' of a couple of days. On the plus side, he makes friends and learns what the love of a wonderful mother and little sister is like. On the negative side, the trail of people/creatures after Chance just keeps growing - from the police to the Wizards' Conclave to the football jocks.
Chance is finally surrounded by those he loves and those who love him, but can he protect them all from the dangers that come along with being a warlock?
In the beginning, I didn't know how I felt about Chance. He's one of those marvelously written protagonists that one both finds suspicious and loveable. However, by the fourth chapter, I found myself really caring about Chance. It's hard not to. He's the type of guy that would never take advantage of a female, and he has major love and respect for his mom.
I also really loved how Ben Reeder describes characters and magic. He describes magic in such a way that readers can easily grasp how it works, and it's the first time I've ever fully understood the process. In spite of all the crazy, dark things going on, there were still humorous bits that got a good laugh out of me. Hey, who doesn't like a good laugh?
There's another book on its way and I can't wait to read it!
August 2, 2011
Debut author Ben Reeder hits the YA fiction scene with a sizzle with The Demon's Apprentice. If you've had enough of sappy vampire sagas and you're ready for some kick ass action, Chance Fortunato is the hero for you. The story begins with Chance escaping from the demon count, Dulka, who's kept him enslaved since Chance's father gave Chance to him on his seventh birthday. Chance says, "mage duels tend to be hard on real estate," and Reeder takes him at his word, writing some truly exhilarating fight scenes. Chance plans to disappear into the mystical underground after his escape, but, as they say, man plans while the gods laugh, and Chance finds himself sent home with his long-lost mother and a baby sister he never knew he had. And that's just the beginning!
As Chance settles into his new life, he starts noticing some strange things going on with the jock crowd, and his teacher, friend, and mentor, Sydney Chomsky is murdered by what could only have been a mystical creature. Since the police are busy thinking Chance is behind Chomsky's death, Chance realizes it's going to be up to him to find the real killer. Then things start getting hairy!
Though he's filled with guilt over the things he’d been forced to do as Dulka’s slave, Chance finds himself drawing upon the same skills he’d learned from his life with Dulka to solve Chomsky’s murder and put a stop to the dark forces invading his community. As he struggles to cope with guilt and his desire to be a good person, Chance has to figure out whether fighting evil on its own terms make a person evil.
Chance is witty and real: easy to connect with. Reeder strikes a perfect balance between the darker aspects of the story and Chance's smart ass sense of humor, in a way that reminds me of Jim Butcher's Dresden Files. Chance's honest, straightforward voice rings true whether he's arguing with his little sister over the shower, or laying down some whoopass on a scumbag necromancer. In a YA fiction market that's quickly grown to overflowing, The Demon's Apprentice stands out as a fresh take.
As Chance settles into his new life, he starts noticing some strange things going on with the jock crowd, and his teacher, friend, and mentor, Sydney Chomsky is murdered by what could only have been a mystical creature. Since the police are busy thinking Chance is behind Chomsky's death, Chance realizes it's going to be up to him to find the real killer. Then things start getting hairy!
Though he's filled with guilt over the things he’d been forced to do as Dulka’s slave, Chance finds himself drawing upon the same skills he’d learned from his life with Dulka to solve Chomsky’s murder and put a stop to the dark forces invading his community. As he struggles to cope with guilt and his desire to be a good person, Chance has to figure out whether fighting evil on its own terms make a person evil.
Chance is witty and real: easy to connect with. Reeder strikes a perfect balance between the darker aspects of the story and Chance's smart ass sense of humor, in a way that reminds me of Jim Butcher's Dresden Files. Chance's honest, straightforward voice rings true whether he's arguing with his little sister over the shower, or laying down some whoopass on a scumbag necromancer. In a YA fiction market that's quickly grown to overflowing, The Demon's Apprentice stands out as a fresh take.
February 9, 2012
An action-packed thrill ride filled with mystical creatures, Reeder has created an amazing story that grabs hold of you from the very first word and doesn't let go until the very end.
Chance Fortunato is such a likable character. He is so real and relatable. I loved the fact that he had his ass handed to him a couple of times, but gave back as good as he got. He isn't a character who says all the right things, or plays by the rules, and in no way is he perfect, but that makes him all the more endearing. He's suffered a hard life, and I got chills reading the scene where his father gave him over to Dulka as down payment for his own soul. Can you imagine being seven years old and having to go through something like that??
I loved Chance's witty remarks and quick comebacks, and I could honestly see myself being friends with this kid.
The only thing I found a little annoying was that Chance's Mom always used the word Son when speaking to him. Especially just after the incident with Mr. Chomsky. Perhaps it's because she'd finally gotten him back after so long, but I felt it wasn't necessary for her to constantly refer to him in this way.
This is a definite must read!! I look forward to reading more work by this author.
Thank you to R2R and Ben Reeder for giving me the opportunity to read this book.
Chance Fortunato is such a likable character. He is so real and relatable. I loved the fact that he had his ass handed to him a couple of times, but gave back as good as he got. He isn't a character who says all the right things, or plays by the rules, and in no way is he perfect, but that makes him all the more endearing. He's suffered a hard life, and I got chills reading the scene where his father gave him over to Dulka as down payment for his own soul. Can you imagine being seven years old and having to go through something like that??
I loved Chance's witty remarks and quick comebacks, and I could honestly see myself being friends with this kid.
The only thing I found a little annoying was that Chance's Mom always used the word Son when speaking to him. Especially just after the incident with Mr. Chomsky. Perhaps it's because she'd finally gotten him back after so long, but I felt it wasn't necessary for her to constantly refer to him in this way.
This is a definite must read!! I look forward to reading more work by this author.
Thank you to R2R and Ben Reeder for giving me the opportunity to read this book.
November 9, 2018
Unfortunately there was nothing new in the story!With a main character who is the story claims to be smart but proves to be stupid and overlooks all of the clues. kind of like an extremely twisted Hairy Potter with lots of child abuse and rape. There are just too many better written stories out there that you can spend your time reading. But who knows maybe the next book will prove to be better. But if it follows the same formula as this one did, (like so many other books of this type do) then the main character will have the shit beat out of him at the end of the book and then pull off some miracle to turn the tides and win or survive in the end.
February 2, 2012
I really liked this book. Chance was a great character trying to escape a tragic past. Been Reeder writes beautifully. I loved the actions scenes. I wouldn't recommend this series to young readers though because of the language. I think this is more suited to older teens and Adults like me who love YA. Overall, great reading experience.
July 27, 2021
after two days in a new school ,all of the cheerleading squad was creaming for him,and the prettiest one fell in love with him,and he with her.and a hot demon wanted to fuck him
after two days
after two days
February 28, 2022
Reeder caught my attention and this was an interesting take on the democracy of supernatural creatures. Demons, magicians, werewolves, and other creatures living amongst us. Admittedly it was a little hard to really get into it at first but I think that had more to do with me and less to do with Reeder. It is not the most well written book I’ve ever read but the story was enticing enough to keep me reading it.
It’s also a little creepy how the alpha treats his pack (specifically Alexis who is 15) and how everyone does not even bat an eye other than Chance. I mean hell, even the succubus had accepted “no” from Chance. Overall probably more of a 3.5 but I have a 4 because I feel like I may reread it when I don’t have as much going on and can give it more attention.
Ps: Chance’s dad is a pos.
It’s also a little creepy how the alpha treats his pack (specifically Alexis who is 15) and how everyone does not even bat an eye other than Chance. I mean hell, even the succubus had accepted “no” from Chance. Overall probably more of a 3.5 but I have a 4 because I feel like I may reread it when I don’t have as much going on and can give it more attention.
Ps: Chance’s dad is a pos.
September 23, 2020
It aspires to be "Harry Dresden, The High school Diaries" new Urban/Contemporary fantasy continues to be done often unwell. The highwater marks aren't very recent and include, lots of Stephen King stuff, Firestarter, Salem's Lot, Carrie, and on and on. Dean Koontz has dropped some zingers, Lightning, Watchers.
Anne Rice, Interview with a Vampire, The Vampire Lestat, The Queen of the Damned...
Anne Rice, Interview with a Vampire, The Vampire Lestat, The Queen of the Damned...
November 2, 2020
I enjoyed the change of pace with having the elders believe the young character and want to help them.
Pretty cool interaction of the magic side of life as well.
Pretty cool interaction of the magic side of life as well.
February 1, 2012
This was a R2R for a group. As a heads up I am not "easy" on books because they are free or self published. If your book sucks I'm gonna tell you.
That said, I gave this book 3.5 stars, rounded to 4 because I think it deserves some recognition for sure. This is also the only R2R book I've rated favorably so far! Take note!
Chance Fortunato was forced into slavery to a demon by his father when he was only a young boy. Now, after years of darkening his soul as a warlock Chance has finally broken free and he’s not going back if he can help it. Luckily his mother and sister are there to pick him up and take him in. Chance is really engaging. He’s had a terrible childhood so for him things like actually going to a real high school and getting new clothes from Walmart are awesome experiences. If that’s not good enough Chance meets someone willing to help him learn magic that right way and hopefully clean his poisoned soul. Unfortunately said help winds up ripped to pieces in the science lab.
Now in addition to playing the part of a normal well adjusted teenager (which he’s not), he has to solve the mystery of who or what killed his science/magic teacher. All this while dealing with the stereotypically aggressive, uber-testosteroned football players and keeping his eyes on the stereotypical hot, popular cheerleader who’s begging him for help.
I did really enjoy this book. Chance is a sympathetic character and the adventure is great and well planned. It rarely flags and I was always looking forward to the next event. The best thing about Chance is that he’s so abused he can’t even bring himself to sleep on a bed, but he plays white knight to literally everyone he runs across.
One thing to consider is that this book is a mature YA book. There’s cussing, violence and so on. This is a book I wouldn’t recommend for the delicate or young reader but as a teen YA adventure and a YA for adults who love YA it’s great.
A few things did annoy me. For the first 1/3 of the book I could not remember Chance’s name. Your task as a writer is to make that name so familiar to me I’ll remember it always. Chance’s own mother refers to him as “son” the entire time. That’s just odd and really distancing to me. Deirdre’s instant connection and acceptance of Chance. A bit odd to me. Chance as a character is well fleshed out but he’s the only one. Deirdre and his mom are both very flat characters. Lucas and Wanda (his two best friends) are pretty under-realized as well. Alexis is stereotypical and flat as well. I have to say I don’t love the “fall for the insta-hot girl/guy theme” in books.
Now that I've given the things I didn't love let me reiterate what I did love: adventure, a great MC, demons instead of werewolves/vampires, and a fun read.
That said, I gave this book 3.5 stars, rounded to 4 because I think it deserves some recognition for sure. This is also the only R2R book I've rated favorably so far! Take note!
Chance Fortunato was forced into slavery to a demon by his father when he was only a young boy. Now, after years of darkening his soul as a warlock Chance has finally broken free and he’s not going back if he can help it. Luckily his mother and sister are there to pick him up and take him in. Chance is really engaging. He’s had a terrible childhood so for him things like actually going to a real high school and getting new clothes from Walmart are awesome experiences. If that’s not good enough Chance meets someone willing to help him learn magic that right way and hopefully clean his poisoned soul. Unfortunately said help winds up ripped to pieces in the science lab.
Now in addition to playing the part of a normal well adjusted teenager (which he’s not), he has to solve the mystery of who or what killed his science/magic teacher. All this while dealing with the stereotypically aggressive, uber-testosteroned football players and keeping his eyes on the stereotypical hot, popular cheerleader who’s begging him for help.
I did really enjoy this book. Chance is a sympathetic character and the adventure is great and well planned. It rarely flags and I was always looking forward to the next event. The best thing about Chance is that he’s so abused he can’t even bring himself to sleep on a bed, but he plays white knight to literally everyone he runs across.
One thing to consider is that this book is a mature YA book. There’s cussing, violence and so on. This is a book I wouldn’t recommend for the delicate or young reader but as a teen YA adventure and a YA for adults who love YA it’s great.
A few things did annoy me. For the first 1/3 of the book I could not remember Chance’s name. Your task as a writer is to make that name so familiar to me I’ll remember it always. Chance’s own mother refers to him as “son” the entire time. That’s just odd and really distancing to me. Deirdre’s instant connection and acceptance of Chance. A bit odd to me. Chance as a character is well fleshed out but he’s the only one. Deirdre and his mom are both very flat characters. Lucas and Wanda (his two best friends) are pretty under-realized as well. Alexis is stereotypical and flat as well. I have to say I don’t love the “fall for the insta-hot girl/guy theme” in books.
Now that I've given the things I didn't love let me reiterate what I did love: adventure, a great MC, demons instead of werewolves/vampires, and a fun read.
February 14, 2012
Fifteen-year-old Chance has been abused, betrayed, and beaten for 8 years. Sold by his father into slavery to a demon, he's been forced to perform dark magic for his demon master. His aura is rotten. His soul is doomed. But his life isn't over. Chance summons the strength and wit to break free from his dark bonds, only to be thrust into a world where magic and darkness continue to follow him.
This was a terrific book, and I liked it quite a bit. In fact, I've already recommended my daughter read this book. The characters have depth and are well-drawn, motivations are clear. The plot is well paced, with excellent tension in all the right places. The bad guys are bad, the good guys good, and our main character is stuck in a gray world where a good guy can do bad things. I absolutely loved that.
A word of warning to younger readers: there is a bit of cussing...not that I mind, of course, I've been known to sling a few off-color words in my day, but some people care about that sort of thing.
Anywho...
"The bed was on the left wall, a little desk as opposite the door, and there was a dresser on the right. There was a boxy little machine on the desk, and a dozen spools of thread. The dresser looked like it was supplying the desk's thread habit, and also like it was pimping out yarn and cloth on the side, too."
That's just a taste of the delightful imagery that the author has sprinkled throughout this book like dew drops on rose petals. It was a real treat to read his clever prose. I could have bookmarked page after page and filled my blog spot with examples...but I won't.
Okay, so here's what bothered me.
I had trouble following the ages. Our MC is fifteen, and he's a sophomore in high school. Most of the kids he encounters drive, which make them sixteen, and I assumed they were all sophomores (though their ages/grades are never made clear)...yet the leader bad boy was mentioned as a freshman. I guess he could have been held back a year, or maybe the reference was to the guy's previous year. The whole issue was not made clear and left a clueless kind of residue in my mind. And yes, it bothered me, because I kept trying to figure out how old everyone was, and in what grade.
Also, the younger sister seemed as though she was maybe twelve years old...but by my calculations she couldn't have been more than seven or eight. And one flash-back dream sequence, when Chance was seven, started out sounding seven, but ended with thoughts and obsevations more atuned to an older kid, say fifteen. I think the young voices were a little lost.
And the type font is too small!
Regardless, the pros far out-weigh the cons. I hope this is a first book in a series, because I will definitely continue reading if there is more to come.
This was a terrific book, and I liked it quite a bit. In fact, I've already recommended my daughter read this book. The characters have depth and are well-drawn, motivations are clear. The plot is well paced, with excellent tension in all the right places. The bad guys are bad, the good guys good, and our main character is stuck in a gray world where a good guy can do bad things. I absolutely loved that.
A word of warning to younger readers: there is a bit of cussing...not that I mind, of course, I've been known to sling a few off-color words in my day, but some people care about that sort of thing.
Anywho...
"The bed was on the left wall, a little desk as opposite the door, and there was a dresser on the right. There was a boxy little machine on the desk, and a dozen spools of thread. The dresser looked like it was supplying the desk's thread habit, and also like it was pimping out yarn and cloth on the side, too."
That's just a taste of the delightful imagery that the author has sprinkled throughout this book like dew drops on rose petals. It was a real treat to read his clever prose. I could have bookmarked page after page and filled my blog spot with examples...but I won't.
Okay, so here's what bothered me.
I had trouble following the ages. Our MC is fifteen, and he's a sophomore in high school. Most of the kids he encounters drive, which make them sixteen, and I assumed they were all sophomores (though their ages/grades are never made clear)...yet the leader bad boy was mentioned as a freshman. I guess he could have been held back a year, or maybe the reference was to the guy's previous year. The whole issue was not made clear and left a clueless kind of residue in my mind. And yes, it bothered me, because I kept trying to figure out how old everyone was, and in what grade.
Also, the younger sister seemed as though she was maybe twelve years old...but by my calculations she couldn't have been more than seven or eight. And one flash-back dream sequence, when Chance was seven, started out sounding seven, but ended with thoughts and obsevations more atuned to an older kid, say fifteen. I think the young voices were a little lost.
And the type font is too small!
Regardless, the pros far out-weigh the cons. I hope this is a first book in a series, because I will definitely continue reading if there is more to come.
March 26, 2015
I picked this book up at Visioncon, where I was fortunate to meet the author himself! I don't usually buy books at cons since they are often self-published and not much better than fanfiction. Luckily, this one defied the stereotype!
Overall, I enjoyed the book, though I can't quite shake the feeling that this book would appeal more to male readers than female readers. Male protagonist aside (because there are tons of great books with male protagonists that are just as fantastic for female readers as male) I think what irked me in this area was the character of Alexis.
Alexis starts out as this snotty cheerleader, but Chance finds himself drawn to her in spite of himself. Upside: he at least initially is able to see what a shallow snob she is, even though there is something niggling at the back of his mind about that casting. And I did like the fact that, at the end of the day, Chance is a teenage boy, and he can overlook the fact that he can't stand her because, well, boobs. I just never bought into Alexis/Shade's transformation. Even at the very end, I was waiting for her to pull one over and screw Chance over. But this is, I think, a perfect example of the White Knight Syndrome that affects so many men - even as I was reading it, I thought how this would be something that my fiancé, who suffers from WKS pretty badly himself, will disagree about once he reads this book.
Despite my dislike for Alexis, I still enjoyed this book. There are a lot of writers out there that try to stuff their supernatural characters into a standard high-school setting, but often the high-school part just gets brushed aside. In The Demon's Apprentice, it really sticks: Chance deals with school bullies, pep rallies, angry teachers, and even the awkwardness of the school cafeteria.
If living in the mundane world doesn't pique your interest, don't worry: there are still plenty of glimpses into the magical world. As Chance tries to adapt to living a "normal" life, he can't sever his ties completely, or forget his years of training and just tackle things like a non-magical person would. Not to mention that he seems to be a magnet for fantasy elements - even when he tries to avoid any contact with his old life and the world that encompassed it, he can never seem to escape.
Overall, I'd say this book has all the right ingredients to be a favorite among fantasy readers: a sharp-witted, smart-mouthed underdog protagonist, genuinely evil villains, a pair of witty side-kick type friends, plenty of cultural references, lots of magic, supernatural creatures, wizened elders, an overarching plot of a missing sword that will lead into the sequel... which I'm glad I bought along with this first book so I can read more of Chance's adventures!
Overall, I enjoyed the book, though I can't quite shake the feeling that this book would appeal more to male readers than female readers. Male protagonist aside (because there are tons of great books with male protagonists that are just as fantastic for female readers as male) I think what irked me in this area was the character of Alexis.
Alexis starts out as this snotty cheerleader, but Chance finds himself drawn to her in spite of himself. Upside: he at least initially is able to see what a shallow snob she is, even though there is something niggling at the back of his mind about that casting. And I did like the fact that, at the end of the day, Chance is a teenage boy, and he can overlook the fact that he can't stand her because, well, boobs. I just never bought into Alexis/Shade's transformation. Even at the very end, I was waiting for her to pull one over and screw Chance over. But this is, I think, a perfect example of the White Knight Syndrome that affects so many men - even as I was reading it, I thought how this would be something that my fiancé, who suffers from WKS pretty badly himself, will disagree about once he reads this book.
Despite my dislike for Alexis, I still enjoyed this book. There are a lot of writers out there that try to stuff their supernatural characters into a standard high-school setting, but often the high-school part just gets brushed aside. In The Demon's Apprentice, it really sticks: Chance deals with school bullies, pep rallies, angry teachers, and even the awkwardness of the school cafeteria.
If living in the mundane world doesn't pique your interest, don't worry: there are still plenty of glimpses into the magical world. As Chance tries to adapt to living a "normal" life, he can't sever his ties completely, or forget his years of training and just tackle things like a non-magical person would. Not to mention that he seems to be a magnet for fantasy elements - even when he tries to avoid any contact with his old life and the world that encompassed it, he can never seem to escape.
Overall, I'd say this book has all the right ingredients to be a favorite among fantasy readers: a sharp-witted, smart-mouthed underdog protagonist, genuinely evil villains, a pair of witty side-kick type friends, plenty of cultural references, lots of magic, supernatural creatures, wizened elders, an overarching plot of a missing sword that will lead into the sequel... which I'm glad I bought along with this first book so I can read more of Chance's adventures!
February 8, 2012
An excellent read. There's so much going on within my head right now and I'm lacking the words and honestly, the focus to jot it all down here. Maybe because it's jumbled trying to piece together facts from the stories and preconceived notions of magic. The rational mind is at war with the subconscious fantasy filled psyche of my soul and there can't be a winner or a loser.
The title pretty much speaks for itself. This tale revolves around a boy named Chance, who through magic and luck finds a way to break away from the slavery he has been placed under by a demon. Once free, he figured he would live his life on the outskirts of society because of all of the wrongs he was forced to commit. However, Chance was happily thrown smack dab into Suburbia and all was well until he realized that even Middle America had it's share of magical secrets. With his life and soul on the line, he had to make quite a few decisions treading the line of right and wrong, all the while trying to preserve his happy existence in the normal world.
I loved just about everything about this book! The writing style wasn't too hard to follow. The words weren't too flowery, and weren't too gruff. Scenes seemed to flow together beautifully. The characters were likeable in every sense, and left the reader wanting to know more about them. The world itself was quite interesting in how things seemed to work. Even exchange, and all that jazz.
What I didn't like, however, caused the four star rating. It was too wordy! The explanations for things were great, and needed throughout the book, don't get me wrong, but the way things were explained and in the language they were explained...well, it almost appeared as though someone was trying to fit a word quota for a research paper. Some parts I had to read over again just to make sure I didn't miss any of the information that was shoved down my throat, and I'm still pretty sure that I did!
So besides the fact that little side notes of information may be lost to the reader when moments of pure information is thrown their way, this is a wonderful book. The characters are wonderful, even the ones that are barely glanced over, and they leave healthy questions that you want to be answered. And since there is going to be another installment following this one, one should take the time to slowly take in all the information provided in here and enjoy it to the last drop, because another one is coming!
The title pretty much speaks for itself. This tale revolves around a boy named Chance, who through magic and luck finds a way to break away from the slavery he has been placed under by a demon. Once free, he figured he would live his life on the outskirts of society because of all of the wrongs he was forced to commit. However, Chance was happily thrown smack dab into Suburbia and all was well until he realized that even Middle America had it's share of magical secrets. With his life and soul on the line, he had to make quite a few decisions treading the line of right and wrong, all the while trying to preserve his happy existence in the normal world.
I loved just about everything about this book! The writing style wasn't too hard to follow. The words weren't too flowery, and weren't too gruff. Scenes seemed to flow together beautifully. The characters were likeable in every sense, and left the reader wanting to know more about them. The world itself was quite interesting in how things seemed to work. Even exchange, and all that jazz.
What I didn't like, however, caused the four star rating. It was too wordy! The explanations for things were great, and needed throughout the book, don't get me wrong, but the way things were explained and in the language they were explained...well, it almost appeared as though someone was trying to fit a word quota for a research paper. Some parts I had to read over again just to make sure I didn't miss any of the information that was shoved down my throat, and I'm still pretty sure that I did!
So besides the fact that little side notes of information may be lost to the reader when moments of pure information is thrown their way, this is a wonderful book. The characters are wonderful, even the ones that are barely glanced over, and they leave healthy questions that you want to be answered. And since there is going to be another installment following this one, one should take the time to slowly take in all the information provided in here and enjoy it to the last drop, because another one is coming!
September 2, 2011
Review of The Demon's Apprentice, by Ben Reeder
After a little break to rejuvenate my mind, I return to my reviews with Ben Reeder’s novel The Demon’s Apprentice; an intriguing paranormal novel, perfect to return to.
Curiosity is piqued from word one, growing as events occur. Who exactly is this Chance, other than a being warlock; what is he doing for this Master; why doesn’t he try to escape? Emotions towards Chance vary between pity for his lot in life and animosity towards what could be a villain in disguise; more often than not, however, pity for Chance is predominant.
Reeder paints a clear picture of the scenery, and his writing from Chance’s perspective really made me feel like I was in the warlock’s head. His escape shows his cunning, his pent up rage and his own power. The tension is blatant, anxiety clear.
As the story progressed I was drawn in, quickly losing track of time. Ben has woven emotions deftly, and painted scenes so vivid, I could almost feel the cool of the night air, see the lights of the Night City.
While Chance settles in to his new home with his mother and younger sister, unknown to him until now, his guilt at his actions becomes apparent. He quickly shows that he is a decent person, despite actions he was forced to perform while he was a slave. This observation is confirmed as the story unfolds.
A few pokes at other popular fiction pieces bring in a humorous touch, and appeal suitably to the television-keen minds of most young adults. The Demon’s Apprentice doesn’t lack a surprise, that’s for sure, which develops depth to this story that a lot don’t have.
As the story culminates, striving towards to reach the all important climax, Reeder superbly builds tension and anticipation, and I found myself on the edge of my seat, biting my lip. A satisfying end, The Demon’s Apprentice definitely leaves room for a sequel, which I would highly anticipate.
All the details throughout the story are vivid; helping to create a wonderful read perfect for young adults, or for those after a less complicated yet thrilling read. Don’t read on an empty stomach, however, as Chance chomps down on enough to feed several people in one sitting. This was such a vivid scene, that my own stomach growled in envy!
I look forward to hearing more from Mr Ben Reeder!
After a little break to rejuvenate my mind, I return to my reviews with Ben Reeder’s novel The Demon’s Apprentice; an intriguing paranormal novel, perfect to return to.
Curiosity is piqued from word one, growing as events occur. Who exactly is this Chance, other than a being warlock; what is he doing for this Master; why doesn’t he try to escape? Emotions towards Chance vary between pity for his lot in life and animosity towards what could be a villain in disguise; more often than not, however, pity for Chance is predominant.
Reeder paints a clear picture of the scenery, and his writing from Chance’s perspective really made me feel like I was in the warlock’s head. His escape shows his cunning, his pent up rage and his own power. The tension is blatant, anxiety clear.
As the story progressed I was drawn in, quickly losing track of time. Ben has woven emotions deftly, and painted scenes so vivid, I could almost feel the cool of the night air, see the lights of the Night City.
While Chance settles in to his new home with his mother and younger sister, unknown to him until now, his guilt at his actions becomes apparent. He quickly shows that he is a decent person, despite actions he was forced to perform while he was a slave. This observation is confirmed as the story unfolds.
A few pokes at other popular fiction pieces bring in a humorous touch, and appeal suitably to the television-keen minds of most young adults. The Demon’s Apprentice doesn’t lack a surprise, that’s for sure, which develops depth to this story that a lot don’t have.
As the story culminates, striving towards to reach the all important climax, Reeder superbly builds tension and anticipation, and I found myself on the edge of my seat, biting my lip. A satisfying end, The Demon’s Apprentice definitely leaves room for a sequel, which I would highly anticipate.
All the details throughout the story are vivid; helping to create a wonderful read perfect for young adults, or for those after a less complicated yet thrilling read. Don’t read on an empty stomach, however, as Chance chomps down on enough to feed several people in one sitting. This was such a vivid scene, that my own stomach growled in envy!
I look forward to hearing more from Mr Ben Reeder!
May 27, 2018
**I recieved this book from the author in exchange for an honest review**
Chance Fortunado was sold to a demon count on his seventh birthday by his own father. He lives out 8 years of torture and finally manages to escape. Now suddenly Chance has the opportunity to go to a real school and live a normal life with his mother and younger sister, only he doesn't have as much of a chance as he thinks. When his old life comes back to haunt him, Chance has to throw his friends in with him and make some other unlikely friendships if he wants to make it to graduation.
If you're tired of overly dramatic and romantic YA, then this is something that you may want to read. This is a kickass action book, and Reeder grabs you from the very beginning and doesn't let go.
Chance has been through a hell of a lot, and it shows by the way that he acts. He spends a lot of his time wondering about how some of the things that he has had to do will affect his soul, but he is a really good kid with a really good heart, and that is apparent.
When a teacher at his new school is murdered, Chance is determined to find the person that did it. So, he has to call upon a lot of the skills that he learned as Dulka's slave to figure out who is responsible. However, relying on these old ways and the way he handles certain situations makes him question what is going to happen to his soul even more.
I really liked Chance. I really liked all of the characters in this book, or the ones that you were supposed to like, anyway. I think that the only thing that I struggled with was the age of the characters. These kids are supposed to be 15 years old. I just felt like they acted way way older than they actually were. I know that Chance has been through a lot, and that might account for why he acts a bit older, but there were a few scenes where it felt like he shouldn't even be in highschool at all. Not that this was a problem, it just struck me as interesting.
There's also a little bit of language in this book, which doesn't bother me in the slightest, but just throwing it out there in case that is something that offends you!
I liked this book and I'd definitely read the next in the series! A solid 3.75 stars out of 5!
Chance Fortunado was sold to a demon count on his seventh birthday by his own father. He lives out 8 years of torture and finally manages to escape. Now suddenly Chance has the opportunity to go to a real school and live a normal life with his mother and younger sister, only he doesn't have as much of a chance as he thinks. When his old life comes back to haunt him, Chance has to throw his friends in with him and make some other unlikely friendships if he wants to make it to graduation.
If you're tired of overly dramatic and romantic YA, then this is something that you may want to read. This is a kickass action book, and Reeder grabs you from the very beginning and doesn't let go.
Chance has been through a hell of a lot, and it shows by the way that he acts. He spends a lot of his time wondering about how some of the things that he has had to do will affect his soul, but he is a really good kid with a really good heart, and that is apparent.
When a teacher at his new school is murdered, Chance is determined to find the person that did it. So, he has to call upon a lot of the skills that he learned as Dulka's slave to figure out who is responsible. However, relying on these old ways and the way he handles certain situations makes him question what is going to happen to his soul even more.
I really liked Chance. I really liked all of the characters in this book, or the ones that you were supposed to like, anyway. I think that the only thing that I struggled with was the age of the characters. These kids are supposed to be 15 years old. I just felt like they acted way way older than they actually were. I know that Chance has been through a lot, and that might account for why he acts a bit older, but there were a few scenes where it felt like he shouldn't even be in highschool at all. Not that this was a problem, it just struck me as interesting.
There's also a little bit of language in this book, which doesn't bother me in the slightest, but just throwing it out there in case that is something that offends you!
I liked this book and I'd definitely read the next in the series! A solid 3.75 stars out of 5!
August 4, 2011
Debut author Ben Reeder hits the YA fiction scene with a sizzle with The Demon's Apprentice. If you've had enough of sappy vampire sagas and you're ready for some kick ass action, Chance Fortunato is the hero for you. The story begins with Chance escaping from the demon count, Dulka, who's kept him enslaved since Chance's father gave Chance to him on his seventh birthday. Chance says, "mage duels tend to be hard on real estate," and Reeder takes him at his word, writing some truly exhilarating fight scenes. Chance plans to disappear into the mystical underground after his escape, but, as they say, man plans while the gods laugh, and Chance finds himself sent home with his long-lost mother and a baby sister he never knew he had. And that's just the beginning!
As Chance settles into his new life, he starts noticing some strange things going on with the jock crowd, and his teacher, friend, and mentor, Sydney Chomsky is murdered by what could only have been a mystical creature. Since the police are busy thinking Chance is behind Chomsky's death, Chance realizes it's going to be up to him to find the real killer. Then things start getting hairy!
Though he's filled with guilt over the things he’d been forced to do as Dulka’s slave, Chance finds himself drawing upon the same skills he’d learned from his life with Dulka to solve Chomsky’s murder and put a stop to the dark forces invading his community. As he struggles to cope with guilt and his desire to be a good person, Chance has to figure out whether fighting evil on its own terms make a person evil.
Chance is witty and real: easy to connect with. Reeder strikes a perfect balance between the darker aspects of the story and Chance's smart ass sense of humor, in a way that reminds me of Jim Butcher's Dresden Files. Chance's honest, straightforward voice rings true whether he's arguing with his little sister over the shower, or laying down some whoopass on a scumbag necromancer. In a YA fiction market that's quickly grown to overflowing, The Demon's Apprentice stands out as a fresh take.
As Chance settles into his new life, he starts noticing some strange things going on with the jock crowd, and his teacher, friend, and mentor, Sydney Chomsky is murdered by what could only have been a mystical creature. Since the police are busy thinking Chance is behind Chomsky's death, Chance realizes it's going to be up to him to find the real killer. Then things start getting hairy!
Though he's filled with guilt over the things he’d been forced to do as Dulka’s slave, Chance finds himself drawing upon the same skills he’d learned from his life with Dulka to solve Chomsky’s murder and put a stop to the dark forces invading his community. As he struggles to cope with guilt and his desire to be a good person, Chance has to figure out whether fighting evil on its own terms make a person evil.
Chance is witty and real: easy to connect with. Reeder strikes a perfect balance between the darker aspects of the story and Chance's smart ass sense of humor, in a way that reminds me of Jim Butcher's Dresden Files. Chance's honest, straightforward voice rings true whether he's arguing with his little sister over the shower, or laying down some whoopass on a scumbag necromancer. In a YA fiction market that's quickly grown to overflowing, The Demon's Apprentice stands out as a fresh take.
February 8, 2012
Oh, wow. I loved it. I only started reading it about two days ago, and whatever free time I had was then dedicated to this book. It was different, and nice, and for once the main character acted their age. In most books, you get the main character being 'wise beyond their years' or had 'eyes older than them', that had 'seen terrible things', but all in all, this guy, was fifteen and acted it. He noticed girls, got in to fights, was horribly slow at times, and it was nice. It was good to have that happening in the sidelines.
It was funny, too, which is always a plus. Had me giggling a few times behind my desk, or smirking slightly at a line that was wrote. I definitely enjoyed this and would love to continue on the series, and definitely intend to do just that - as soon as I have money / and or other books are released. I do believe this is one author I'll be adding to my favourite authors lists, too.
Thank you for an amazing read!
It was funny, too, which is always a plus. Had me giggling a few times behind my desk, or smirking slightly at a line that was wrote. I definitely enjoyed this and would love to continue on the series, and definitely intend to do just that - as soon as I have money / and or other books are released. I do believe this is one author I'll be adding to my favourite authors lists, too.
Thank you for an amazing read!
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