I'm no stranger to urban fiction and find myself thoroughly enjoying it, especially ones that feature LGBTQIA characters. So I went in expecting a pretty good time. Of course the sex scenes and sexual content does not at all disappoint... for the most part. I want to avoid spoilers so anyone who has read or will read this story should understand what I mean.
I haven't quite finished yet but I can say that the story is pretty interesting, if not very different from other novels about up to three black leads with one as the obvious morally deviant one. However, I did appreciate the vastly different viewpoints each of the three lead characters: Shawn, James and Mona, and each POV was definitely a completely different entity of their own.
My main criticism, aside from some of the idiotic choices of the non-antagonistic leads which plays right into the villain's hands, is the terrible grammar. I know, I know, this is a pretty petty thing to bitch about, but as someone who is very experienced with literature and the English language it almost takes me out of the story when I word is misspelled or used in the wrong way (one glaring example was something that SHOULD have said 'I rode the elevator' instead saying 'I road the elevator'). A few typos is no big deal to me, shy happens, but when it happens almost every other chapter and more than a few times in the chapter it occurs, Houston we have a problem. It makes me not blame the writer, again shit happens, but it makes me wonder how and why the publisher approved the finished product.
Overall, I am enjoying this story and hope that the two 'good' leads can get their shit together and turn the tables on the obvious villain.