Bryce is nicely flawed in the beginning, someone enjoying a privileged but undisciplined life, is living the wildness that we strait arrows wished there was more of in our history. It all blows up and he is off to shovel shit at a horse farm giving the space to change his ways.
It was interesting to have Bryces parents drop into the story here. Having later read some of their back story in "Diamond Girl", they seem oddly normal when they appear in this story.
But this story is really about Bryce, who comes to value the experience of being part of a family who are strongly connected to each other. Avery is distant at first, but attractive in all the right ways. I looked forward to seeing this unlikely pair find their way to connect. Avery's attraction is motivation for Bryce to recognize another path. Bryce accepts and comes to value that while low on the totem pole his work is respected. If anything, I wanted him to find a path to grow as a contributor to the enterprise of the farm.
Avery is a good girl, who finds appeal in the bad boy. She's organized, with focus, taking on a responsible role for someone so young. When the sex comes, she lets herself go into it, trusting her desirability as a woman. The connection between the two is powerful and believable when it happens. If anything, I wanted Avery to break more of her own boundaries as she rode Bryce.
i enjoyed the transformation of Bryce through the story, but was disappointed in his decision to join the military as a next step towards becoming complete as a man. In his experience at the farm, he made mistakes and struggled to grow. Instead of continuing, in a fully adult relationship with Avery, to grow, he cedes his next steps to military discipline.
Recommended. I am looking forward to reading more by this author.