thank you netgalley and wattpad for the free arc, but at what cost??? bc i ended up paying for it. i did not enjoy myself one bit. i couldn’t even find some laughs and joy in a hate read, which i shockingly did not set out to do this time. and this is how i'm rewarded for my good faith??
besides the really weird formatting issues (going to assume that’s just what the arc is like and it’ll be fixed) and the misspellings and incorrect word choices (also going to hope that these will be fixed) and the terrible writing (not as hopeful about this one), this was just so generic
i am so convinced this was written by ai bc as the book went on, it was just hitting bingo spot after bingo spot of melodramatic events that happen in soap operas and stories set in ~mafia romances~. unfortunately, i don't think the model was fed enough data about mafia stories even, bc the mafia portion was SO BAD LOL it wasn't even salad dressing; it was like ordering fresh orange juice and being served la croix
every single ‘issue’ is swiftly dealt with - as in, in a few sentences or paragraphs, it would be resolved, so there were 0 stakes even though they live in such a ‘dangerous crime filled mafia world.’ and as a result, nothing hit! they would also contradict themselves almost sentence to sentence. they would say one thing, and their IMMEDIATE action would be so incongruous to what they just said, i was getting whiplash
the thing that annoyed me most, though, if i really had to rank them, was that a major plot point was that ava's twin andrew's death led to the fallout between the spaghettis and macaronis, but for some reason, it felt like only ava was affected by his death?? she has all these other siblings, but they barely mention him outside of one conversation in the beginning of the book
i can’t tell you anything specific about nick or ava, but i guarantee they are exactly the stereotype you already have in your head about them. like, i'm not going to think their love is so strong and enduring if you keep throwing plot points and obstacles every few paragraphs to fill in the bingo spot
spoilers (but are they really?) but all the bases are covered here: death of a sibling, controlling parent, addiction, relapse, ava is shot, surprise pregnancy and swift car accident resulting in miscarriage, they go through a hard time, dad was involved in nefarious plot, she is lured away by rival mafia family, nick is shot, adoption, pregnant again, the end! keep in mind that none of these topics were dwelled on in any meaningful way. i think we’ve all seen this film before, and i didn’t like the ending, which was me being baffled, flabbergasted, feeling like a silly annoyed goose