سفر به دوزخ

by Shawn Smucker, مهسا خراسانی (Translator)

دن مدتی در کوهستان اسرارآمیز اسیر بوده و شکنجه می‌شد، اما بخت با او یار بود و توانست از آن‌جا بگریزد. اگرچه آزادی برای او بهای سنگینی داشت، از دست دادن حافظه. او خاطرات بسیار کمی از حوادث و تجربه‌ی هولناک کوهستان به یاد دارد. اما یک چیزی را به خوبی می‌داند و آن این است که فرارش به معنای تنها گذاشتن برادرش در آن مکان هولناک بوده است.

«چطور ممکن است این همه خاطره در حافظه وجود داشته باشد؟ ذهن آن‌ها را کجا جا می‌دهد؟ این مجموعه‌ی عشق و غصه، ترس و لذت را در کدام کنج و کدام شکاف حافظه‌مان نگه می‌داریم؟ در کدام گوشه‌ی ذهنمان خاطره‌ی کسی را نگه می‌داریم که مدت‌ها پیش ملاقاتش کرده‌ایم؟ خاطرات ناامیدی و دروغ‌ها را کجا پنهان می‌کنیم؟»

Genres: Fiction, Mystery, Fantasy, Thriller, Christian, Suspense, Audiobook

328 pages, Paperback

First published June 30, 2020

Reviews

[Miranda Reads · Rating 4 out of 5]

It's a book you've read before, long ago, and you can't remember all the details or exactly when all the frightening thing happen, but you have a distinct premonition. And you don't like it.

Dan and his friends have made a darling little community for themselves - everyone pitches in to grow crops, they take care of each other...and they don't talk about the mountain.

The mountain.

It looms behind their little community and despite being hardly talked about, it is constantly on the forefront of everyone's mind.

None of us in the town remembered anything of consequence about our lives before the horror of the mountain.

All Dan can really remember is that he had (has?) a brother who he last saw under the mountain.

He wants to go back but at the same time is horrified by what lurks beneath.

"Can't you feel this place? It's coming for us. Something here is coming for us."

But now, more than ever, Dan is feeling a pull towards his brother...and to the mountain itself.

...I had no one.
But the voices never left

Overall, the concept of this one blew me away - I was hooked from the start and I could NOT put it down.

I loved teasing out what the mountain could be and the general air of mystery behind it.

When the girl came out of the mountain, and then the other girl came back from beyond - whew! I was feeling chills.

The characters for the most part felt real - though the dialogue did feel stilted at times, which caused Dan to seem far younger than his age suggested, causing a slight disconnect for me.

Towards the end I pieced together enough to figure out that the author drew inspiration from a few things and I think that's what kept it from being a five-star book for me. If the story stood a bit more on its own and a bit less on other things, I would have absolutely fallen in love.

But all in all, this one did take me by surprise and I really enjoyed my time between these pages!

"Can you tell me what happened, Mary?"
"No," she whispered.

With thanks to Shawn Smucker and Revell Publishing for sending me a free copy in exchange for an honest review

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[Debra - can't post any comments on site today grrr · Rating 4 out of 5]

“Through me is the way to the city of woe.
Through me is the way to sorrow eternal.
Through me is the way to the lost below. Justice moved my architect supernal.
I was constructed by divine power,
supreme wisdom, and love primordial.
Before me no created things were.
Save those eternal, and eternal I abide.
Abandon all hope, you who enter.”
― Dante Alighieri, Inferno

Dan has long ago escaped the captivity of the mountain but has waited in the nearby town for his brother, Adam to join him. For some reason, others have left the mountain, but Adam has not. Adam has been waiting for a long time for his brother, what he doesn't know is that others in the town have been waiting as well.

"It's the kind of place you have to leave o your own. Everyone who has ever left has battled their own way out. In this place, our guilt consumes us."

This is a very thought-provoking book that looks at guilt, grief, personal demons, anger, etc. It is a nod to Dante's Inferno (if you haven't figured that out already). I found it to be beautifully written and atmospheric. My advice is to go into this as blind as possible knowing nothing more than the small synopsis. This is Christian fiction, which I did not know when I requested the book. I was intrigued by the synopsis. You should be as well. I found this to be well written, a little slow in the middle but I acknowledge that this book is about a journey and journeys are not always fast-moving. There are beautiful passages that drip with despair, guilt, and hope.

"...I went deeper than that. Deeper than the floor of the house, deeper than the foundations of the canyon, deeper than the dreams or nightmares or memories. I stayed there in that depth, and I slept like I never have before and will probably never sleep again, there on the edge of the river."

I am purposely not saying much more about the storyline. What I will say that I found it to be intriguing, captivating, thought-provoking, and well thought out.


A journey that is not to be missed.

Thank you to Revell Publishing and NetGalley who provided me with a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. All the thoughts and opinions are my own.

[Shawn Smucker · Rating 5 out of 5]

So, yes, I am the author and, yes, I'm giving it five stars! Don't trust my rating! Read it for yourself. If you have any questions about the book, please feel free to ask them here and I'll answer as best I can! Thanks for taking the time to read These Nameless Things.

[Ali Book World · Rating 4 out of 5]

دَن مدت بسیار زیادی در یک کوهستان عجیب اسیر بوده و شکنجه‌های زیادی رو تحمل کرده اما بعد از مدتی و به یکباره توانست که از آن کوهستان مرموز فرار بکنه ولی این فرار تاوانی هم داشت، تاوانی به بزرگیِ از دست دادن حافظه‌اش.! و تنها چیزی که به یاد داره خاطرات کم و مبهمی از روزگارش در همان کوهستان است و لاغیر. در کنار اینها میداند که برادرش، "آدام" را در این کوهستان تنها گذاشته و او همچنان تحت شکنجه است. دَن به همراه تعدادی از همراهانش در دهکده‌ای در نزدیکی کوهستان زندگی میکنند و همگی حافظه‌ی خود را از دست داده‌اند. روزها میگذرد تا اینکه با ورود یک زن به دهکده و یادآوری یک سری خاطرات در ذهن‌ دَن و بقیه، همه چیز عوض میشود و...

"سفر به دوزخ" کتاب عجیبی بود، کتابی بود پر از حس زندگی. افکار، گناه، غم، اعمال انسان‌ها، وجدان، حس انتقام و کلی چیز دیگه همگی در این کتاب گنجونده شده‌اند.

اولش کمی گنگ شروع شده اما رفته رفته نوع نوشتار نویسنده دستم اومد و فهمیدم این کتاب از اون دسته کتابهای معمولی نیست و باید در موردش فکر کرد و آروم‌آروم درک کنم که چی میگه!... خیلی حس عجیبیه که جایی زندگی بکنی و ندونی چرا اونجایی، ندونی قبلا کی بودی و ندونی چجور کارت به اینجا کشید و فقط یک چیز بدونی، اونم این که قبلا توی یک کوهستان مخوف زندانی بودی! خیلی حس عجیب و ترسناکیه...

ممکنه وقتی داری میخونیش حس کنی چیزی نفهمیدی و احتمالا نفهمی داری چی میخونی اما میخوام بگم به اسم کتاب توجه کن! هر جا که حس کردی نفهمیدی چی شد اسم کتاب رو زمزمه کن، خود به خود رگه‌هایی از مکان و زمان و مفهوم داستان دستت میاد.

"سفر به دوزخ" یک کتاب پایان محور نیست، یعنی منتظر نباش که به پایانش برسی که ببینی چی میشه. بله، پایان داره اما نه از اونایی که به نقطه برسه و تمام. باید بشینی فکر کنی که "چی شد؟، واقعا همین بود؟ و و و" .. حتی پایانش هم حس عجیبی بهم منتقل کرد.

یکَمی اواسطش کند میشه که حتی حوصله‌م رو هم تا حدی سر میبرد اما این کتاب داستان یک سفر بود و هیچ سفری هم سریع نیست. فکر نکنی از اون سفرهای معمولی بوداااا، اصلا، سفری عجیب به دنیایی که خود شخصیت‌های داستان هم نمیدونن کجاست!!!

در کل کتاب تامل برانگیزی بود، کتابی بود که حتی از توصیفات نویسنده هم لذت بردم و واقعا خوشحالم که خوندمش. بهتون پیشنهاد میکنم اگر دنبال کتابی هستید که حس عجیبی رو بهتون منتقل بکنه و کاری بکنه به خیلی از مسائل فکر کنید (حتی مسائلی که باعث شرمتون بشه) حتما این رو توی لیستتون قرار بدید، اما بازم میگم، سفر به دوزخ صرفا یک رمان نیست و حتی ممکنه خیلی چیزها رو متوجه نشید ولی با کمی تامل به خیلی از اهدافش پی‌ میبرید!!!

امیدوارم این کتاب بیشتر توی ایران و جامعه‌ی کتابخوان کشورمون دیده بشه و نظرات مختلفی در موردش منتشر بشه.

[Andi · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is a book I will ponder long because it tells a rich truth that I recognize but, fittingly, can’t name. A story of waiting for something to happen that could have happened long ago. A rich journey. A quiet return.

Like allegory meets fairytale meets post-apocalyptic hope.

Highly recommended.

[J. Bill · Rating 5 out of 5]

Another compelling, thoughtful work from Shawn Smucker. Real characters with real struggles in a surreal world -- such as the one we often find ourselves in when we struggle with our failings, self-forgiveness, and redemption.

[Lisa · Rating 5 out of 5]

I have never been so drawn in by a story that left me feeling so disturbed and unsettled for most of it.

I read an early copy of this book because I'll read anything Shawn Smucker writes. I was disoriented from the first page. "WHAT is happening?" I kept asking myself. And with every page I turned, I was hoping for more understanding. What I got were more questions.

This probably sounds like a negative review of the story, but this disorientation is a strength because I could feel it along with the characters.

This book was like feeling your way in the dark through an unfamiliar house. At first, you inch along, afraid you're going to bang your shin on an end table or knock a picture frame off the wall. But then your eyes adjust and you start to see the shadowy outlines around you and a path opens up.

I hit that "eyes adjusted" point about two-thirds of the way through the book, and now I want to go back and re-read the whole thing.

You won't find many stories like this. And I hope you'll consider that the highest of compliments.

[Susie Finkbeiner · Rating 5 out of 5]

Wow. This book. More details later.

But for now. Wow.

[Doreen · Rating 4 out of 5]

This book is so different from most books that I read. It has a lot of dark undercurrents and is very unsettling. Dan and eight others live at the foot of a mountain they escaped from. They're all tied together in some way and it's unclear why they're all still there until close to the end. A mysterious woman shows up at Dan's door and everything begins to change. People start to remember things. It reminded me of "The Giver" in some ways and "Dante's Inferno" in others.

There are so many layers and things to think about in this book. It deals with family relationships and responsibilities, guilt, love, forgiveness, temptation, consequences of decisions. It reminds you that no matter what you've done, you are never too far gone. There is always reason to hope. It shows the value of close friends and caring for one another in the hard times....of holding firm to someone when they can't hold on themselves.

I hadn't read the description of the book before reading the book so it all took me by surprise. It kept me wondering if there was going to be a big correlation to the Christian life or something. It is a slower paced book. I don't think it's a book for everyone. Some may find it too slow or too dark. However, if you like books that make you think and ponder, give this one a try.

Thank you to Revell for providing me with a free e-copy of this book. All opinions are my own.

[Josh Olds]

These Nameless Things is a Dante’s Inferno-esque tale that deals with one man’s personal hell and his struggle for redemption. Smucker doesn’t hide the connections. The entrance into the mountain cave bears the famous warning Abandon all hope ye who enter here and a few other Easter eggs make the connection obvious and substantive.

Our main character is Dan, who was—like every resident of the mountainside town—once a captive within the mysterious mountain. He knows he was tortured. He knows he escaped. And now he lives with the purpose of guiding others who have escaped out of the mountainside and into a new life in town. He also knows that his brother is still in the mountain.

Dan’s memories start to return and with that some of the secrets of the mountain are revealed. Or, well, at least made known as secrets. Dan’s once-mundane life is now filled with suspicion and uncertainty. And that only gets worse when a woman escapes the mountain and tells Dan that his brother is the last one left.

These Nameless Things would have worked better as a short story. It is difficult—even with Smucker’s obvious skill—to maintain the aura and singular mystery of the story over the length of the entire novel. Fifty pages in, I was waiting for answers, any answers. A hundred pages in, I still did not know the world I was in, or its rules, or even, really, its people.

The feeling of confusion and lostness is deliberate, but the sheer amount of time I was left in lostness made me disconnect from the book. I skipped forward a couple of chapters. I paged back a bit to see if I’d missed something. I read faster because absolutely nothing seemed to be happening that I could understand. Having persevered to the end, I can say it was worth it, but the journey can seem off-putting and, like the mountain, not everybody will make it out safely.

This is my first Smucker book so maybe that’s his style. The press release I received with this book said “These Nameless Things will have readers frantically flipping pages for answers in this thought-provoking narrative.” That’s certainly true. This isn’t a light or easy read. It’s heavy, weighty, literary. The symbolism and imagery are poignant and powerful, but overshadow the story. I think Smucker could have rectified this by adding a second storyline—flashbacks to Dan and his brother before the mountain. It would have given the reader context for the mystery and a break from the heaviness of the mountain’s mystery.

These Nameless Things is a slow, methodical, literary read. Know what you’re getting into before you read it. It’s markedly different and unique, which will both be its selling point and its struggle. The strength of the writing and the imagery kept me going despite a weak plot. I appreciate it in concept, but it falls a bit short in execution. Five stars for the writing and imagery. Three for the plot. I’ll average it at four overall.

[Kailey · Rating 4 out of 5]

I’m pretty sure that this is my favorite book by Shawn Smucker! This book kept me hooked the whole way through. I didn’t want to stop reading. The storyline was definitely not what I imagined it would be. I really enjoyed it! I loved the message about forgiveness and grace.



I received a complimentary copy from the publisher. I was not required to write a positive review. All opinions expressed are mine alone.

[Diane · Rating 5 out of 5]

Something is mysterious beyond the mountain from where they all came. No one wanted to go back. They had a village, friends, gardens. They seemed happy, yet some of them kept leaving to go East. Smucker book is riveting. It’s about guilt, shame, forgiveness, and moving on.

[Anna B · Rating 4 out of 5]

These Nameless Things is a book that exposes the sins of the heart, yet brings the hope that we are not forever captive—there is a way out. There is one whose deception keeps us bound in the lies we tell ourselves, but there is another who is always present, fights our battles, sustains us and frees us from darkness.

In this book the main protagonist, Dan, is living a complacent life. Temptation comes subtly, leading him to do things that exposes his sin, shame and guilt. He is shown the consequences others suffered because of his previous choices. This story is a study of redemption and the power of forgiveness.

All life is a journey, but the path we take is our choice. Will we continue on the dark path, or change direction and step into the light?

This book is well written, descriptive, made me think, and examine myself. The beginning held me up a bit, because I kept waiting for where the story would take me. I almost put it down, but I’m glad I didn’t. It’s definitely worth the read.

I was given a copy of this book courtesy of Baker Publishing Group through Interviews and Reviews, by way of NetGalley. This is my honest review.

[Amber · Rating 5 out of 5]

I found this book to be both enjoyable and deeply thought-provoking, as is true of everything I've read from this author so far. Most of all, I was impressed by how it explores the profound and far-reaching effects of the choices we make in life and of the butterfly effect that occurs when we are willing to take responsibility for them, as well as when we are not.

[Jocelyn Green · Rating 5 out of 5]

This novel was completely engaging from start to finish, even though I didn't always understand what was happening. In a way, it felt to me like an episode (or several episodes) of the TV show LOST in the sense that all these people were thrown together in ways they don't understand at first, but as memories surface, we see how everything connects. And then I hit the plot twist close to the end, which I had NO idea was coming, and completely disolved whatever LOST vibe I was feeling. What I found, in the end, was a story of guilt, grace, forgiveness and freedom that's as timeless as it is timely.⁠ Reading the Author's Note at the end tied everything together.
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Shawn Smucker just keeps surprising me! I feel like he can write any genre he sets his mind to. I can't wait to see what he writes next.⁠

[Alison Treat · Rating 5 out of 5]

An eerily beautiful and mysterious novel, rich in symbolism. Each new twist gave me chills. The themes of guilt, forgiveness, grace, and eternity were expertly woven into the fabric of the story. I will be thinking about this book for a long time.

[Jessica Westbrook · Rating 4 out of 5]

I received an advanced reader copy of this book. I finished the book this morning and I have been pondering what I want to say about it. Firstly, this is the first book I have read by Shawn Smucker. It is beautifully written and incredibly thought provoking. It makes you ponder how far you would go for someone you love while also discussing forgiveness. Are you willing to forgive others, truly forgive them for what they’ve done? What about yourself? It is definitely a book that will stay with me for sometime.

[Rebekah · Rating 5 out of 5]

Whenever I read one of Shawn Smucker’s books I need a couple of days before I can rate and review it. His writing always seems to start slow and small and build with every chapter until days and even weeks after you finish reading. Each of his books is layered with so much important truth you can’t just close it when you’re done and move onto the next book on your shelf. You need to sit with it. You need to ponder it.

These Nameless Things is no different. Like a long forgotten memory it works its way into your consciousness slowly, and then it doesn’t let go. Even before the memory has a name it is changing you and reminding you and even, just a bit, horrifying you. And then it is whispering gentle hope that sits with you and embraces you and changes you long after you finish.

Read this book. Let it remind you of all the nameless things you have forgotten. And then let it hold you in its promises of redemption.

[Donna · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is such a beautifully written, thought provoking, and suspenseful book! It is a story of guilt, loss, and memories suppressed. As the story unfolds, the mystery of those memories, and the terror of the mountain that overshadows the village kept me completely enthralled. The characters and the world the author has created are quite memorable. As Dan and the other characters journey together through the painful memories of their past, they hope to find acceptance, forgiveness and friendship. It is their story, but also, the story of all of us and our "nameless things." I did receive a complimentary copy of the book from the publisher.

[Patty Baechler · Rating 5 out of 5]

These Nameless Things is a pretty quick read but one that will stay on your mind for days and weeks. While These Nameless Things is fiction the story is one many of us, if not all of us, can relate to in our own lives. As Dan and the other characters in the book walk through the painful memories of their past decisions, they learn to forgive, accept and build lasting friendships. Through their journey they also learn to forgive themselves.

I received an Advanced Digital Copy of the book from the publisher.

[Amanda Gardner · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is one amazing book . If you like mysteries. It’s also one of these books that once you start it’s hard to put down. The Author really goes in depth with this book . Awesome is all I can say .

I received a copy from the publisher . And I would highly recommend this book to anyone who loves a mystery type book .

[Ed Cyzewski · Rating 5 out of 5]

One of Shawn's best books, which is saying something for an award-winning author. It sucked me in right from the start and the only greater suspense compared to the story is finding the dang book in our boxes after we moved!

[Jess · Rating 5 out of 5]

If I could give this book 10 stars I would!

These Nameless Things by Shawn Smucker is a book you won’t be able to put down until you’re finished. And it will leave you wanting more of the story! I finished this book in less than 24 hours and was captured from the first chapter! Eerily suspenseful, very captivating, superbly written, seamless flow through the entire book! Every emotion is felt as the pages melt away!

A beautiful story that reminds me of Pilgrim’s Progress, you will hang on to every word as this story of survival unfolds! These Nameless Things pulls the reader in and makes one feel as if they were right there in the little village themselves! What does the mountain hold? Where did these people come from? What happened to their past and their families?

Read it. You will be in “wow” status with your breath taken away!

[Nancy Wolfe · Rating 5 out of 5]

These Nameless Things is being launched in strange times, when a focus on
something other than civil awareness in a broken world seems trivial and shallow.
But this book ... *this* book ... is not only timely; it is timeless. It reveals how our personal contributions to the grief, despair, and darkness of the world, however long hidden, can lead first to overwhelming despair and a sense of loss that, with God's grace and mercy, emerge as hope and freedom. Lifelong challenges for everyone.
Shawn Smucker keeps us intrigued with an undercurrent of suspense, more mystery than anxiety. And from the very first words, I thought I knew.
But I didn't, in the best possible way.

[J.D. DeHart · Rating 5 out of 5]

I have enjoyed Shawn Smucker's writing for the past few years now, and was delighted to see another book from this author. Smucker does wonderful and thought-provoking work in sharing the interior world of characters, and brings to mind the work of Frank Peretti and Ted Dekker in some ways. I'm always glad to read this author's work and recommend his books.

[Anna LeBaron · Rating 5 out of 5]

Finished reading the book!
It was a page turner and left me breathless until the very last sentence!

[Tera · Rating 4 out of 5]

Wow! Once again Smucker has given us a thought provoking story. The book has contrasts between good and evil. It causes you to reflect on your own guilt and shortcomings while realizing that we do have an escape those feelings when we cling to the One who is always good.

[Sharon Hicks · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book easily drew me in. I quickly got caught up in the actions, emotions and character’s drama in the story. This is my third fiction book that I have read from Shawn Smucker. His books are action packed, with meaningful deep seeded thoughts. This book actually mimics many of my current thoughts I am havIng during our current pandemic, then, living in a time where society vividly sees injustice and discrimination. Changes need to happen. The storyline leaving a bad place, then trying to find a good place leaves good questions - What is life’s purpose, the responsibility of living in a community, because there are good and hard times, then the past, our memories, guilt, and real forgiveness. #thesenamelessthings has a great beginning, middle and ending.

This is a fun, yet meaningful read, or book club conversation book.

#thesenamelessthings

[Amy Nabors · Rating 5 out of 5]

With These Nameless Things, Shawn Smucker gives us his best work to date. His writing just keeps getting better.

With the same other-worldly and supernatural essence to the story like his previous books, These Nameless Things made me feel what the characters were going through physically and emotionally. The imagery of each scene and how he shows you what each character, especially the main character, is going through evoked such an emotional response I would some times catch my breath.

While I read fiction as my escape, in the midst of all that is going on right now in the world, These Nameless Things reminded me that forgiving not only others but ourselves brings healing and where there is healing there is always hope.

[Renea · Rating 4 out of 5]

These Nameless Things (which I cannot say or even think without singing it to Tori Amos’s “Precious Things”) started off slow, but once I got my bearings and had a better understanding of place, I started to enjoy it. While it would be better to go into this book without knowing anything about it, I will say that this was an interesting look at denial, grace, and forgiveness. I did wish that some of the relationships between characters were built up more fully, but this book kept my attention to the very end.

Thank you to Net Galley and the publisher for an advance copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.