Not bad... Not good either
It wasn't bad. I liked that there was the whole witness protection thing but it had issues. First, Blair is 5'10" & Dalton is an unspecified over 6' tall. At one point, he said "she's tall for a woman but still several feet shorter than me. Umm... Isn't that making him at least 9 feet tall cause miniumly he'd have to be at least 3 feet taller because 2 would be a couple. Several is many. Since he's not 9' tall, that's an error that editors missed & one that annoyed me to no end. That's not a little thing to miss. If this is self published with no professional editors, did no one reading that for the writer pick that up?! Then there was the trial. I could I my roll my eyes. A huge trial that big with a mob boss, is seeminy held in the same town they housing their witness?! No. Also, there was an older woman staring at the judge hoping to influence his decision on guilt. No, that would be a jury that decides that. A witness sitting in during the hearing prior to testimony? No, especially one he's been in WitSec for. Anyone could have taken him out at the trial. Also, it was done in a single day?! He shows up & testifies like he's one of the 2 people giving testimony in the whole trial & by the time he gets back to the condo, the trial is over. Just no. Did the writer have no idea how the judicial system works? I get these books take some liberties with believability but that's not something that can be just trashed like that. It didn't even require any amount of extra pages or anything - just leave that out & say he testified & waiting for the verdict. Instead, it's written like someone who's never been to a trial, read about a trial, watched a TV show about a trial, a movie about a trial, or had any idea how the justice system works. Watching a rerun of Law & Order would have taught this writer a little more than they know about it. If they did it that way to wrap up the story, that's laziness. There were better ways to wrap up the story than to write a crap scene. The love story was good. It was everything else about it that was not. Don't include a trial of a mob boss involving someone in WitSec if you aren't going to do any research on it to make it somewhat realistic.