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Twists of Fate: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
What if Mr Collins shocked Elizabeth with his base conduct at the time of his proposal, thus sending her dashing out of her house, and into the arms of Mr Darcy? What if that accidental encounter was witnessed, and impropriety was assumed? What if Mr Darcy was glad of the excuse to marry his heart’s desire – only to have his best hopes blasted within hours of his wedding? What if he found himself in the wrong place at the wrong time more than once?
Evil rumours, an early marriage, a dreadful misunderstanding, an old secret and good intentions gone awry. What if ‘I do’ is not the end, but the beginning of the adventure?
(The novel addresses mature themes. Given the ‘early marriage’ premise, the issue of growing affection and intimacy is central to the story. The relevant scenes are emotive and deeply sensual, but never explicit.)
Evil rumours, an early marriage, a dreadful misunderstanding, an old secret and good intentions gone awry. What if ‘I do’ is not the end, but the beginning of the adventure?
(The novel addresses mature themes. Given the ‘early marriage’ premise, the issue of growing affection and intimacy is central to the story. The relevant scenes are emotive and deeply sensual, but never explicit.)
378 pages, Kindle Edition
Published July 22, 2021
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Joana Starnes
21 books249 followersJoana Starnes lives in the south of England with her family. She swapped several hats over the years – physician, lecturer, clinical data analyst – but feels most comfortable in a bonnet. She has been living in Georgian England for decades in her imagination, and plans to continue in that vein till she lays hands on a time machine. She loves to look for glimpses of Pemberley and Jane Austen’s world, and to write about Regency England and Mr Darcy falling in love with Elizabeth Bennet over and over and over again.
She is the author of ten Austen-inspired novels and a contributor to the Quill Ink Anthologies. Joana’s novels are all available on Amazon in Kindle Unlimited and in paperback, and some have also been released in Audible.
You can connect with Joana on: Goodreads ; Facebook ; Twitter ; Instagram ; Website and at Austen Variations or visit Joana’s Facebook page All Roads Lead to Pemberley for places and details that have inspired her novels.
She is the author of ten Austen-inspired novels and a contributor to the Quill Ink Anthologies. Joana’s novels are all available on Amazon in Kindle Unlimited and in paperback, and some have also been released in Audible.
You can connect with Joana on: Goodreads ; Facebook ; Twitter ; Instagram ; Website and at Austen Variations or visit Joana’s Facebook page All Roads Lead to Pemberley for places and details that have inspired her novels.
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July 10, 2021
This story by one of my favorite authors is long and although ODC are married rather early in the telling there is much more that happens: both in their lives and in the lives of their families.
We begin with Mr. Collins' proposal. However when he cannot keep his hands to himself Elizabeth rushes out of Longbourn in order to seek her father who is not at home. She meets Mr. Darcy who is out riding but trips and in injuring her foot must accept his assistance to get to her aunt's and uncle's home. Ironically, they are seen by Wickham and the most recent victim of his seductions and it takes no encouragement for him to convince her to spread the news of how Elizabeth is meeting with Darcy in secret and that from the condition of their clothing they have been lovers.
Elizabeth, nay -all the Bennets, soon find most of their acquaintances not only believing the gossip but also turning their backs on the family. Darcy does what is right even though Wickham offers to take his place (for a price). Yes, he had been fighting his feelings for Elizabeth but his honor takes precedence now and he is happy with that.
Now the misunderstandings begin. They do marry. (Although Elizabeth had to be convinced that running away to the Gardiners only made her look guilty.) However after the marriage and during his wait to leave for Pemberley with his bride, Darcy overhears Elizabeth complaining to Jane about "him"...not accepting "no" for an answer, etc. He is appalled and the subsequent journey is one in which they rarely speak and have separate accommodations at the inns at which they must stop. Then as soon as they arrive at the estate he disappears for 5 days.
We go back and forth reading the thoughts of Darcy and then Elizabeth. This first misunderstanding is followed by several more, which can be blamed on the fact that they have not learned to communicate in all things. There is even a past event involving a highly placed Lady Rosemary, who has been helping Elizabeth find her place among the ton, which comes up to greatly unsettle their relationship.
We also have the situation of Jane and Bingley which plays out in a different manners while his sisters seek to destroy the Darcy marriage with the "secret" Mrs. Hurst "accidently" relates to Elizabeth. Georgiana is another one who is targeted by those pernicious sisters and she gives Elizabeth a rather cold shoulder when they finally meet. Lydia comes into the picture but it is not as in canon.
I highly recommend this story. There is much romance. The chemistry between Elizabeth and Darcy is passionate and at times she makes the first move. Yes, there are some MA scenes but they were not graphically detailed, IMHO. There is much more to the story than I even hinted at herein...so do read this lovely tale.
This story was a gift with no strings attached. I am voluntarily leaving a review and all opinions are my own.
We begin with Mr. Collins' proposal. However when he cannot keep his hands to himself Elizabeth rushes out of Longbourn in order to seek her father who is not at home. She meets Mr. Darcy who is out riding but trips and in injuring her foot must accept his assistance to get to her aunt's and uncle's home. Ironically, they are seen by Wickham and the most recent victim of his seductions and it takes no encouragement for him to convince her to spread the news of how Elizabeth is meeting with Darcy in secret and that from the condition of their clothing they have been lovers.
Elizabeth, nay -all the Bennets, soon find most of their acquaintances not only believing the gossip but also turning their backs on the family. Darcy does what is right even though Wickham offers to take his place (for a price). Yes, he had been fighting his feelings for Elizabeth but his honor takes precedence now and he is happy with that.
Now the misunderstandings begin. They do marry. (Although Elizabeth had to be convinced that running away to the Gardiners only made her look guilty.) However after the marriage and during his wait to leave for Pemberley with his bride, Darcy overhears Elizabeth complaining to Jane about "him"...not accepting "no" for an answer, etc. He is appalled and the subsequent journey is one in which they rarely speak and have separate accommodations at the inns at which they must stop. Then as soon as they arrive at the estate he disappears for 5 days.
We go back and forth reading the thoughts of Darcy and then Elizabeth. This first misunderstanding is followed by several more, which can be blamed on the fact that they have not learned to communicate in all things. There is even a past event involving a highly placed Lady Rosemary, who has been helping Elizabeth find her place among the ton, which comes up to greatly unsettle their relationship.
We also have the situation of Jane and Bingley which plays out in a different manners while his sisters seek to destroy the Darcy marriage with the "secret" Mrs. Hurst "accidently" relates to Elizabeth. Georgiana is another one who is targeted by those pernicious sisters and she gives Elizabeth a rather cold shoulder when they finally meet. Lydia comes into the picture but it is not as in canon.
I highly recommend this story. There is much romance. The chemistry between Elizabeth and Darcy is passionate and at times she makes the first move. Yes, there are some MA scenes but they were not graphically detailed, IMHO. There is much more to the story than I even hinted at herein...so do read this lovely tale.
This story was a gift with no strings attached. I am voluntarily leaving a review and all opinions are my own.
July 22, 2021
4.5 rounded up to 5 stars
Twists of Fate employs a trope I usually find fault with: a forced marriage scenario where misunderstandings and lack of honest communication between Darcy and Elizabeth get them off on the wrong foot. Fortunately, Ms. Starnes is a gifted writer, and she makes these self-inflicted problems credible.
The story begins with an immediate swerve from canon. Mr. Collins gets more lecherous and "hands on" when he proposes marriage to Elizabeth the morning after the Netherfield ball, and Mr. Bennet happens to be away from Longbourn. She manages to break away from her unwelcome suitor, running out the door as quickly as possible, heading for Meryton to find her father.
Caught in a cold downpour without a coat, she seeks shelter among some trees, slips in the mud, and injures her ankle while Mr. Darcy is nearby on his horse. He's taking a final ride near Longbourn before his planned departure for London when he finds her. There's a delightful scene between two stubborn souls: the independent Miss Elizabeth wants Darcy to be on his way to avoid the possibility of the two being perceived as having had an assignation, while Darcy, determined to take her to safety, waits her out until she relents. Eventually he prevails, and they ride together on his horse to her aunt Phillips's house, Elizabeth wearing Darcy's jacket and both of them quite muddy. They avoid riding through the middle of Meryton, both aware of the faulty conclusions that could be drawn from their appearance.
Unfortunately, Mr. Wickham DOES spot them and eagerly spreads the scandalous news through town with the desire to embarrass Darcy. It doesn't take long for Elizabeth's reputation to be in tatters, especially when Mr. Collins is observed leaving the area quickly afterward - presumably he decided against marrying a ruined woman.
As it happens, Mr. Darcy is forced to extend his stay at Netherfield due to illness. When he learns about the gossip that's circulating, he immediately sets out for Longbourn. Elizabeth has no choice but to accept his honorable proposal. Although Darcy makes no declaration of love, she's now had glimpses of his true personality and becomes optimistic about their chances for happiness.
All is well until shortly after the wedding, when Darcy overhears part of a conversation between Elizabeth and Jane. His bride never told him about the proposal she received from the horrible Mr. Collins, so he believes they're discussing his own marriage proposal. Devastated, he dons his habitual mask and avoids his new wife as much as possible. This is only the first of several instances where the newlyweds get out of step with each other.
Ms. Starnes presents the story from alternating points of view, switching back and forth between Elizabeth and Darcy. They don't know each other well - no Hunsford marriage proposal, argument, or letter, and no encounter at Pemberley. Darcy is accustomed to hiding his feelings, Elizabeth is prone to impulsive reactions, and both are hesitant to show their vulnerability to the other. Before things get too out of hand, fittingly, it's the more forthright Elizabeth who finally breaks through the barrier between them. It occurs in the marriage bed in a scene that isn't graphic but clearly suggestive.
The angst is comparatively light for a Joana Starnes book, though she manages to milk the characters' various emotions for all they're worth, engaging the reader in all their conflicting feelings. Delightful dialogue helps create the palpable chemistry between Darcy and Elizabeth that we all read JAFF to experience.
Highly recommend!
Twists of Fate employs a trope I usually find fault with: a forced marriage scenario where misunderstandings and lack of honest communication between Darcy and Elizabeth get them off on the wrong foot. Fortunately, Ms. Starnes is a gifted writer, and she makes these self-inflicted problems credible.
The story begins with an immediate swerve from canon. Mr. Collins gets more lecherous and "hands on" when he proposes marriage to Elizabeth the morning after the Netherfield ball, and Mr. Bennet happens to be away from Longbourn. She manages to break away from her unwelcome suitor, running out the door as quickly as possible, heading for Meryton to find her father.
Caught in a cold downpour without a coat, she seeks shelter among some trees, slips in the mud, and injures her ankle while Mr. Darcy is nearby on his horse. He's taking a final ride near Longbourn before his planned departure for London when he finds her. There's a delightful scene between two stubborn souls: the independent Miss Elizabeth wants Darcy to be on his way to avoid the possibility of the two being perceived as having had an assignation, while Darcy, determined to take her to safety, waits her out until she relents. Eventually he prevails, and they ride together on his horse to her aunt Phillips's house, Elizabeth wearing Darcy's jacket and both of them quite muddy. They avoid riding through the middle of Meryton, both aware of the faulty conclusions that could be drawn from their appearance.
Unfortunately, Mr. Wickham DOES spot them and eagerly spreads the scandalous news through town with the desire to embarrass Darcy. It doesn't take long for Elizabeth's reputation to be in tatters, especially when Mr. Collins is observed leaving the area quickly afterward - presumably he decided against marrying a ruined woman.
As it happens, Mr. Darcy is forced to extend his stay at Netherfield due to illness. When he learns about the gossip that's circulating, he immediately sets out for Longbourn. Elizabeth has no choice but to accept his honorable proposal. Although Darcy makes no declaration of love, she's now had glimpses of his true personality and becomes optimistic about their chances for happiness.
All is well until shortly after the wedding, when Darcy overhears part of a conversation between Elizabeth and Jane. His bride never told him about the proposal she received from the horrible Mr. Collins, so he believes they're discussing his own marriage proposal. Devastated, he dons his habitual mask and avoids his new wife as much as possible. This is only the first of several instances where the newlyweds get out of step with each other.
Ms. Starnes presents the story from alternating points of view, switching back and forth between Elizabeth and Darcy. They don't know each other well - no Hunsford marriage proposal, argument, or letter, and no encounter at Pemberley. Darcy is accustomed to hiding his feelings, Elizabeth is prone to impulsive reactions, and both are hesitant to show their vulnerability to the other. Before things get too out of hand, fittingly, it's the more forthright Elizabeth who finally breaks through the barrier between them. It occurs in the marriage bed in a scene that isn't graphic but clearly suggestive.
The angst is comparatively light for a Joana Starnes book, though she manages to milk the characters' various emotions for all they're worth, engaging the reader in all their conflicting feelings. Delightful dialogue helps create the palpable chemistry between Darcy and Elizabeth that we all read JAFF to experience.
Highly recommend!
July 25, 2021
Our destiny hides among our free choices, disguised as the free-est of all. ~ Robert Brault
The original “Twist of Fate” is a creation of the not-so-very-good Reverend Collins and the not-so-very-good George Wickham. Collins physically attacks Elizabeth Bennet when she refuses his proposal. She escapes outdoors without her winter-wear and begins a journey to Meryton to speak to her father. Weather is fated to be against her and she is met on the road by Mr. Darcy. She eventually must accept Darcy’s help to her Aunt Phillips in Meryton where they are seen by Wickham and a maid who is currently his doxy. Rumors spread through the village.
A wedding is quickly accomplished, spoiled by an overheard conversation. The marriage begins on a very bad footing.
I loved a scene at Pemberley when Darcy returns after an absence of several days.
Quote from the book: … the door opened and she made her entrance. And what an entrance it was. Darcy’s jaw dropped – literally – as he stared. She had chosen to give more than a little indication that she knew she was a married woman. Her beautiful hair was now covered with a matron’s cap – the most elaborate concoction that could ever be imagined. A starched, double-tiered structure of muslin and lace adorned with a profusion of ruffles which, he could scarce doubt, evinced her mother’s taste, or rather lack thereof. Moreover, he was absolutely certain that the highly conspicuous item had been deliberately chosen in order to make a point – and the look she cast him, along with her arched brow, only served to add the unnecessary confirmation.
That's life — whichever way you turn, fate sticks out its foot to trip you. ~ Martin Goldsmith & Martin Mooney
Fate Twists for other characters as well: Jane’s and Lydia’s stories end very differently. I loved both outcomes.
Elizabeth is proactive in solving the marital issues. She moves the couple on the way to HEA much more than Darcy, although that man does acknowledge the damage caused by his actions and resolves to improve the relationship.
Joana Starnes’ books never disappoint me. 5 Stars for this one!
Coincidence is God's way of remaining anonymous. ~ Charlotte Clemensen Taylor
The original “Twist of Fate” is a creation of the not-so-very-good Reverend Collins and the not-so-very-good George Wickham. Collins physically attacks Elizabeth Bennet when she refuses his proposal. She escapes outdoors without her winter-wear and begins a journey to Meryton to speak to her father. Weather is fated to be against her and she is met on the road by Mr. Darcy. She eventually must accept Darcy’s help to her Aunt Phillips in Meryton where they are seen by Wickham and a maid who is currently his doxy. Rumors spread through the village.
A wedding is quickly accomplished, spoiled by an overheard conversation. The marriage begins on a very bad footing.
I loved a scene at Pemberley when Darcy returns after an absence of several days.
Quote from the book: … the door opened and she made her entrance. And what an entrance it was. Darcy’s jaw dropped – literally – as he stared. She had chosen to give more than a little indication that she knew she was a married woman. Her beautiful hair was now covered with a matron’s cap – the most elaborate concoction that could ever be imagined. A starched, double-tiered structure of muslin and lace adorned with a profusion of ruffles which, he could scarce doubt, evinced her mother’s taste, or rather lack thereof. Moreover, he was absolutely certain that the highly conspicuous item had been deliberately chosen in order to make a point – and the look she cast him, along with her arched brow, only served to add the unnecessary confirmation.
That's life — whichever way you turn, fate sticks out its foot to trip you. ~ Martin Goldsmith & Martin Mooney
Fate Twists for other characters as well: Jane’s and Lydia’s stories end very differently. I loved both outcomes.
Elizabeth is proactive in solving the marital issues. She moves the couple on the way to HEA much more than Darcy, although that man does acknowledge the damage caused by his actions and resolves to improve the relationship.
Joana Starnes’ books never disappoint me. 5 Stars for this one!
Coincidence is God's way of remaining anonymous. ~ Charlotte Clemensen Taylor
July 29, 2021
I absolutely adore Joana Starnes and will read anything and everything she writes!!! She always connects with me and she writes so beautifully. This book was good and I enjoyed it, but probably not my favorite from this author- although when Starnes is the author, “not my favorite from this author” is still infinitely better than many books from many other authors!
We start out with a marriage early on and are led into a false sense of security as it appears that both parties are prepared to make the most of the situation and determined to find happiness together! In the true Joana Starnes fashion that we all know and love, that rug is pulled out from under us within hours of the wedding when Darcy overhears part of a conversation that he completely misunderstands and he allows his disappointment to completely disregard his common sense and turn him into a petulant and cruel husband who is very, I will make up my own word, unDarcylike. This false belief causes all kinds of angst and heartache for both Darcy and Elizabeth and goes on for quite some time. I will freely admit that I find a story frustrating where there is no real angst, only imagined angst derived from misunderstandings that could be easily solved with a simple conversation. This heap of misunderstandings all based on on an eavesdropped conversation went on a bit too long for my tastes, but all was finally discussed and worked through transforming the rocky marriage into one of affection and passion. The satisfactory resolution almost makes up for the flimsy basis for all the suffering. I always enjoy seeing D&E learn to really know each other and develop the real heartfelt affection that always keeps us coming back for more. Starnes does a masterful job creating a both sweet and electrifying connection between them that is always delicious.
Since the reconciliation happens just past the halfway point of the book, I didn’t know what, but knew the author had more in store for! The next portion the couple goes to town and Elizabeth Darcy tries to find her footing amongst the bloodthirsty snobs of the ton. There are, of course, the Bingley sisters and many of similar ilk that make it difficult for Elizabeth to feel accepted and find any true friends. Even Georgiana doesn’t warm up to her. She feels fortunate to find a friend in Lady Rosemary Sinclair who is very respected in the highest circles and takes Elizabeth under her wing. Just when we are enjoying the feel of that rug again, once again it is pulled out and there is a whole new kind of fracture that is a little more complex and difficult than a misunderstanding.
Of course, we can hardly have a P&P variation without Wickham wreaking havoc in some way or another and it’s too good to be true that his mischief at the beginning of the book would be the last word from him. He does make another appearance, but I really enjoyed the twist in that part of the story and liked how that played out!
What to say about Jane and Bingley?!? I couldn’t help but feel sorry for Bingley, even if his wretchedness was pretty much his own fault. His intentions were never from malice and his lack of confidence and judgement robbed him of who he was. A hard lesson indeed. With that being said, I didn’t want him back with Jane here and I was happy for Jane and loved how things worked out for her. One of my favorite quotes from the book came from Jane Bennet when she reflects on her heartache and how her pain opened her eyes to some truths. The things she learned about herself and about life through the pain that she suffered made her into a stronger and wiser woman.
“ If he had stayed with me— Nay, even if he had left Hertfordshire but kept the lease on Netherfield and returned to me today, I do believe we could have been happy as we grew into adulthood together. A dollhouse sort of happiness perhaps, yet gratifying all the same, because neither one of us would have known any better. But… now I do know better. I am grown up already, and playing house is no longer as appealing as it was. I need more, and I need it to be real. I need to be Frederick’s partner in life, not a placid figure in a dollhouse.”
Well said, Jane!
Overall, I did enjoy this book, but the things that lessened that enjoyment were these:
1- Darcy was very out of character after hearing the eavesdropped conversation. Darcy can be arrogant and proud, but IMO, as a man used to much responsibility and dealing with difficult situations along with his serious nature and his commitment to honor and duty, it doesn’t seem congruent for him to react instead of respond. The Darcy I imagine might very well be angry and hurt and even draw incorrect conclusions, but would also think and ponder and consider all aspects of the situation before acting in such a rash manner. He would have had a conversation sooner rather than later and definitely before abandoning his new wife.
2- Elizabeth was also a bit out of character. I can’t imagine her waiting so long before speaking up for herself. She also forgave almost immediately and I felt like Darcy should have had to earn that forgiveness and trust, at least a little. Elizabeth was almost too perfect. I missed her fiery temper coming to the surface and taking him to task when he so deserved it.
3- This was my biggest problem. 1 & 2 are minor and can be easily overlooked, but this one really bothered me.
Overall, there was much more that I loved than not and I continue to be a stalwart Joana Starnes fan! As always with this author, this was a very engaging story that I was deeply connected to and while there were some things I struggled with, the story was well thought out and developed and beautifully written and kept my attention!
We start out with a marriage early on and are led into a false sense of security as it appears that both parties are prepared to make the most of the situation and determined to find happiness together! In the true Joana Starnes fashion that we all know and love, that rug is pulled out from under us within hours of the wedding when Darcy overhears part of a conversation that he completely misunderstands and he allows his disappointment to completely disregard his common sense and turn him into a petulant and cruel husband who is very, I will make up my own word, unDarcylike. This false belief causes all kinds of angst and heartache for both Darcy and Elizabeth and goes on for quite some time. I will freely admit that I find a story frustrating where there is no real angst, only imagined angst derived from misunderstandings that could be easily solved with a simple conversation. This heap of misunderstandings all based on on an eavesdropped conversation went on a bit too long for my tastes, but all was finally discussed and worked through transforming the rocky marriage into one of affection and passion. The satisfactory resolution almost makes up for the flimsy basis for all the suffering. I always enjoy seeing D&E learn to really know each other and develop the real heartfelt affection that always keeps us coming back for more. Starnes does a masterful job creating a both sweet and electrifying connection between them that is always delicious.
Since the reconciliation happens just past the halfway point of the book, I didn’t know what, but knew the author had more in store for! The next portion the couple goes to town and Elizabeth Darcy tries to find her footing amongst the bloodthirsty snobs of the ton. There are, of course, the Bingley sisters and many of similar ilk that make it difficult for Elizabeth to feel accepted and find any true friends. Even Georgiana doesn’t warm up to her. She feels fortunate to find a friend in Lady Rosemary Sinclair who is very respected in the highest circles and takes Elizabeth under her wing. Just when we are enjoying the feel of that rug again, once again it is pulled out and there is a whole new kind of fracture that is a little more complex and difficult than a misunderstanding.
Of course, we can hardly have a P&P variation without Wickham wreaking havoc in some way or another and it’s too good to be true that his mischief at the beginning of the book would be the last word from him. He does make another appearance, but I really enjoyed the twist in that part of the story and liked how that played out!
What to say about Jane and Bingley?!? I couldn’t help but feel sorry for Bingley, even if his wretchedness was pretty much his own fault. His intentions were never from malice and his lack of confidence and judgement robbed him of who he was. A hard lesson indeed. With that being said, I didn’t want him back with Jane here and I was happy for Jane and loved how things worked out for her. One of my favorite quotes from the book came from Jane Bennet when she reflects on her heartache and how her pain opened her eyes to some truths. The things she learned about herself and about life through the pain that she suffered made her into a stronger and wiser woman.
“ If he had stayed with me— Nay, even if he had left Hertfordshire but kept the lease on Netherfield and returned to me today, I do believe we could have been happy as we grew into adulthood together. A dollhouse sort of happiness perhaps, yet gratifying all the same, because neither one of us would have known any better. But… now I do know better. I am grown up already, and playing house is no longer as appealing as it was. I need more, and I need it to be real. I need to be Frederick’s partner in life, not a placid figure in a dollhouse.”
Well said, Jane!
Overall, I did enjoy this book, but the things that lessened that enjoyment were these:
1- Darcy was very out of character after hearing the eavesdropped conversation. Darcy can be arrogant and proud, but IMO, as a man used to much responsibility and dealing with difficult situations along with his serious nature and his commitment to honor and duty, it doesn’t seem congruent for him to react instead of respond. The Darcy I imagine might very well be angry and hurt and even draw incorrect conclusions, but would also think and ponder and consider all aspects of the situation before acting in such a rash manner. He would have had a conversation sooner rather than later and definitely before abandoning his new wife.
2- Elizabeth was also a bit out of character. I can’t imagine her waiting so long before speaking up for herself. She also forgave almost immediately and I felt like Darcy should have had to earn that forgiveness and trust, at least a little. Elizabeth was almost too perfect. I missed her fiery temper coming to the surface and taking him to task when he so deserved it.
3- This was my biggest problem. 1 & 2 are minor and can be easily overlooked, but this one really bothered me.
Overall, there was much more that I loved than not and I continue to be a stalwart Joana Starnes fan! As always with this author, this was a very engaging story that I was deeply connected to and while there were some things I struggled with, the story was well thought out and developed and beautifully written and kept my attention!
November 9, 2024
Forced marriage
A very good story. Wickham starts gossip in Meryton and causes Darcy to offer for Lizzy. The main thrust of the story is about why in P&P and it’s variations there are always so many mistakes, misunderstandings and incorrect assumptions. A must read for everyone.
X-ray is enabled, which I love. The author uses ‘learnt’ instead of ‘learned’ and I couldn’t find a good explanation about when to use the two words. Not much verbiage about ‘learnt’ when I googled this question.
Once again Wickham is not taken care of after potentially destroying the lives of the Darcys and the Bennets until he slinks back into the story later in the book. It’s hard to respect Darcy for not putting W into jail as a debtor. He could pay the jailers to silence W if he gets talkative.
The Happily Ever After is more realistic than the Cinderella/Sleeping Beauty HEA which is nice. I shall read the book again in a few months so I can take my time and savor the awesomeness of the writing. I do this for all her books.
A very good story. Wickham starts gossip in Meryton and causes Darcy to offer for Lizzy. The main thrust of the story is about why in P&P and it’s variations there are always so many mistakes, misunderstandings and incorrect assumptions. A must read for everyone.
X-ray is enabled, which I love. The author uses ‘learnt’ instead of ‘learned’ and I couldn’t find a good explanation about when to use the two words. Not much verbiage about ‘learnt’ when I googled this question.
Once again Wickham is not taken care of after potentially destroying the lives of the Darcys and the Bennets until he slinks back into the story later in the book. It’s hard to respect Darcy for not putting W into jail as a debtor. He could pay the jailers to silence W if he gets talkative.
The Happily Ever After is more realistic than the Cinderella/Sleeping Beauty HEA which is nice. I shall read the book again in a few months so I can take my time and savor the awesomeness of the writing. I do this for all her books.
July 17, 2021
My Rating: 5+++
"As for mistakes, I hope we do learn from them, but I will not put it past us to keep making new ones." (quote from the book)
Fate's twists and turns in Ms. Starnes latest novel will leave you wondering how she does it. Yes, we will always get our 'happily ever after' and though each journey is unique, in this one, the angst will have you squirming in your seat or talking back at the book and flames erupting when Elizabeth and Darcy are not at odds but ardently in love! It will also have you wanting to run certain 'creatures' through with a sword or wishing that the ground would open up and swallow them! At least those were just some of my reactions.
"How dare they besmirch his name - and hers!" (quote from the book)
The book opens after the Netherfield Ball, and Mr. Collins has made his proposal known. However, he goes one step too far and Elizabeth is horrified and appalled at his base behavior. I shuddered right along with Elizabeth as she flees Longbourn to await her father at her Aunt Phillip's home, but Mother Nature thwarts her efforts until Mr. Darcy comes upon her. Obstinate, headstrong girl! But, Mr. Darcy has his own streak of stubbornness called honor. Fate eventually leads them down the bridle path, unfortunately throwing another couple in to witness their disheveled state...unbeknownst to them. Cruel gossip is soon flying through Meryton. And the die is cast.
"This is what I came to offer: my name, and the protection that is in my power to give. You have my word, sir: no one will injure her again!" (quote from the book)
Ah, famous last words. I do enjoy a forced marriage trope, and if we feel that is not enough to cause tension between Elizabeth and Darcy, Ms. Starnes throws in an overheard conversation immediately after the wedding that causes 'assumptions' (we all know what 'assume' means) and things go from bad to worse and Darcy seeing red.
"Caged together! Lord almighty! They were caged together for life!" (quote from the book)
So, dear reader, there were many 'thumps' of my head and heart as our beloved couple work their way through their misunderstandings. Fate is far from done with them for there is an old secret that will be thrown in Elizabeth's face that will nearly crush her. And I was more than ready to crush the informer.
"The storm was within. Never in her life had she been so angry! Nor had she ever felt so lost. Lost and alone." (quote from the book)
Just know that Elizabeth and Darcy are not the only ones who suffer from wounded hearts. Jane Bennet's tender heart is battered, but what Ms. Starnes does for her had me smiling. There is a wonderful analogy used by Jane that is so apt. I have never heard it explained so well before, and I was completely satisfied with the end result.
"How shall I bear to be compared with a picture of perfection?" (quote from the book)
I highly recommend this incredibly heart-wrenching, passionate and well fought 'happily ever after'!
I was fortunate to be gifted with the novel with no expectation for a review.
"As for mistakes, I hope we do learn from them, but I will not put it past us to keep making new ones." (quote from the book)
Fate's twists and turns in Ms. Starnes latest novel will leave you wondering how she does it. Yes, we will always get our 'happily ever after' and though each journey is unique, in this one, the angst will have you squirming in your seat or talking back at the book and flames erupting when Elizabeth and Darcy are not at odds but ardently in love! It will also have you wanting to run certain 'creatures' through with a sword or wishing that the ground would open up and swallow them! At least those were just some of my reactions.
"How dare they besmirch his name - and hers!" (quote from the book)
The book opens after the Netherfield Ball, and Mr. Collins has made his proposal known. However, he goes one step too far and Elizabeth is horrified and appalled at his base behavior. I shuddered right along with Elizabeth as she flees Longbourn to await her father at her Aunt Phillip's home, but Mother Nature thwarts her efforts until Mr. Darcy comes upon her. Obstinate, headstrong girl! But, Mr. Darcy has his own streak of stubbornness called honor. Fate eventually leads them down the bridle path, unfortunately throwing another couple in to witness their disheveled state...unbeknownst to them. Cruel gossip is soon flying through Meryton. And the die is cast.
"This is what I came to offer: my name, and the protection that is in my power to give. You have my word, sir: no one will injure her again!" (quote from the book)
Ah, famous last words. I do enjoy a forced marriage trope, and if we feel that is not enough to cause tension between Elizabeth and Darcy, Ms. Starnes throws in an overheard conversation immediately after the wedding that causes 'assumptions' (we all know what 'assume' means) and things go from bad to worse and Darcy seeing red.
"Caged together! Lord almighty! They were caged together for life!" (quote from the book)
So, dear reader, there were many 'thumps' of my head and heart as our beloved couple work their way through their misunderstandings. Fate is far from done with them for there is an old secret that will be thrown in Elizabeth's face that will nearly crush her. And I was more than ready to crush the informer.
"The storm was within. Never in her life had she been so angry! Nor had she ever felt so lost. Lost and alone." (quote from the book)
Just know that Elizabeth and Darcy are not the only ones who suffer from wounded hearts. Jane Bennet's tender heart is battered, but what Ms. Starnes does for her had me smiling. There is a wonderful analogy used by Jane that is so apt. I have never heard it explained so well before, and I was completely satisfied with the end result.
"How shall I bear to be compared with a picture of perfection?" (quote from the book)
I highly recommend this incredibly heart-wrenching, passionate and well fought 'happily ever after'!
I was fortunate to be gifted with the novel with no expectation for a review.
July 22, 2021
“Twists of Fate” begins when Darcy is at Netherfield Park and Mr Collins makes his proposal to Elizabeth—but then that’s where author Joana Starnes diverts from Austen’s “Pride & Prejudice”. Escaping the clutches of a handsy, unscrupulous,smarmy Collins, she takes herself on a walk toward her aunt Philips in the village. The weather turns and she is caught in a downpour with none other than Mr. Darcy. Afterwards, he escorts her to her aunt’s, only to be observed by a meddling maid who progresses to spread wild tales and innuendo about Miss Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy—Darcy finds he can do nothing but follow his heart, despite the differences in their social standing, and ask for Elizabeth’s hand in marriage.
“There was but one answer she could give to his offer of marriage, and they both knew it. But by now Elizabeth had sufficient cause to hope that, despite the hand they had been dealt, they might make a good life together. Thus, her smile was shy rather than forced when, with one word, she pledged herself to him in a low whisper.”—Chapter 8
Though neither knows much about the other, they come to find that in essentials they are well-matched, maybe even in a love match... Alas, soon after the wedding, Darcy overhears a private conversation between Elizabeth and her sister, and well, let’s just say, their marriage begins on a rocky road to Pemberley. “Breath caught in his chest as Darcy turned his head to stare unseeing out of the window. Heaven help him, he wanted her! No change there, even if everything else had changed. If anything, he wanted her more than ever.” —Chapter 14
A riveting and absorbing read… You’ll savor the unraveling of their fledgling love and the brilliance of the heart-pounding romance when truths are revealed. A thoughtful tale full of familiar, swoon-worthy characters and sizzling scenes! “Twists of Fate” is a real gem that we expect from the incomparable storyteller, Joana Starnes. ( I was lucky to receive an advance reader copy—looking forward to the published copy to add to my shelves!)
“There was but one answer she could give to his offer of marriage, and they both knew it. But by now Elizabeth had sufficient cause to hope that, despite the hand they had been dealt, they might make a good life together. Thus, her smile was shy rather than forced when, with one word, she pledged herself to him in a low whisper.”—Chapter 8
Though neither knows much about the other, they come to find that in essentials they are well-matched, maybe even in a love match... Alas, soon after the wedding, Darcy overhears a private conversation between Elizabeth and her sister, and well, let’s just say, their marriage begins on a rocky road to Pemberley. “Breath caught in his chest as Darcy turned his head to stare unseeing out of the window. Heaven help him, he wanted her! No change there, even if everything else had changed. If anything, he wanted her more than ever.” —Chapter 14
A riveting and absorbing read… You’ll savor the unraveling of their fledgling love and the brilliance of the heart-pounding romance when truths are revealed. A thoughtful tale full of familiar, swoon-worthy characters and sizzling scenes! “Twists of Fate” is a real gem that we expect from the incomparable storyteller, Joana Starnes. ( I was lucky to receive an advance reader copy—looking forward to the published copy to add to my shelves!)
July 31, 2021
I loved everything about this book but the last part.
July 23, 2021
Twists you say?
When Mr. Collins refuses to accept Elizabeth’s refusal of his marriage proposal, he resorts to assaulting her person and she flees the house in search of Mr. Bennet who is at a meeting in Meryton. The weather turns, she seeks shelter under a clump of hollies, becomes injured, and is discovered by Darcy who aids her and helps get her to Meryton. So begins a series of “twists of fate” for them. Unfortunately, they are seen by Mr. Wickham who uses his latest conquest, with whom he is in company, to begin a vicious rumour about Darcy and Elizabeth, twisting the real circumstances of their morning encounter. Darcy offers marriage and Elizabeth is resigned to accept. The very short courtship is pleasant, and they marry with mutual hopes of a good marriage. Just before they are about to leave for Pemberley, Darcy overhears and misunderstands a conversation between Jane and Elizabeth.
What had been planned by Darcy as a slow romantic journey to Pemberley, he now speeds up the ride to get there as soon as possible. All the while Darcy ignores her, barely speaking, and Elizabeth doesn’t know why.
“”We are here, then,” she needlessly observed. “Yes. Welcome to Pemberley,” came his crisp reply, and as she stepped out and drew a lungful of the cold night air, Elizabeth could not help thinking that she wished he had said, ‘Welcome home.’”—quote from book
There is much introspection by both Elizabeth and Darcy in this story. Because Darcy will not communicate, he is living in torment which could easily be resolved if he would only ask her about what he heard her say to Jane. Stubborn man! Observing a Darcy who has become the complete opposite of the one who spoke of a promising future of felicity, Elizabeth is now living in fear of what could become the greatest mistake of her life.
”Were there any options left to her, now that she had placed herself wholly in his power? The chilling thought caught her unawares, and in a flash the chill swelled into alarm. Husbands held all the power. Wives had none. All claims to the contrary were as hollow as the empty promise that formed a part of a man’s marriage vows: ‘With all my earthly goods I thee endow.’ That was false – a mockery. Marriage had given her no say in his affairs, no rights over his property. It had given him full rights over her.” —quote from book
Elizabeth isn’t ready to give up, however, and Darcy does love her, so inevitably, they do finally talk, and it’s Elizabeth who takes a very bold step by taking action to initiate the conversation that finally takes place and leads to their understanding. I was so proud of her for doing this. Brave girl! It takes quite a while to get there, but the journey is well worth it. There will be more twists as the story develops, threatening the harmony our dear couple has finally achieved.
As always with the work of Joana Starnes, the novel is beautifully written. There is angst, and in this story, the author has also written a very passionate and intimate couple. The way she herself describes it in the book’s description can’t be more perfect —
“The novel addresses mature themes. Given the ‘early marriage’ premise, the issue of growing affection and intimacy is central to the story. The relevant scenes are emotive and deeply sensual, but never explicit.”
I was generously gifted with an advance copy of the book with no expectation of a review, but I am pleased to happily provide one based on my honest opinion. I highly recommend this book.
When Mr. Collins refuses to accept Elizabeth’s refusal of his marriage proposal, he resorts to assaulting her person and she flees the house in search of Mr. Bennet who is at a meeting in Meryton. The weather turns, she seeks shelter under a clump of hollies, becomes injured, and is discovered by Darcy who aids her and helps get her to Meryton. So begins a series of “twists of fate” for them. Unfortunately, they are seen by Mr. Wickham who uses his latest conquest, with whom he is in company, to begin a vicious rumour about Darcy and Elizabeth, twisting the real circumstances of their morning encounter. Darcy offers marriage and Elizabeth is resigned to accept. The very short courtship is pleasant, and they marry with mutual hopes of a good marriage. Just before they are about to leave for Pemberley, Darcy overhears and misunderstands a conversation between Jane and Elizabeth.
What had been planned by Darcy as a slow romantic journey to Pemberley, he now speeds up the ride to get there as soon as possible. All the while Darcy ignores her, barely speaking, and Elizabeth doesn’t know why.
“”We are here, then,” she needlessly observed. “Yes. Welcome to Pemberley,” came his crisp reply, and as she stepped out and drew a lungful of the cold night air, Elizabeth could not help thinking that she wished he had said, ‘Welcome home.’”—quote from book
There is much introspection by both Elizabeth and Darcy in this story. Because Darcy will not communicate, he is living in torment which could easily be resolved if he would only ask her about what he heard her say to Jane. Stubborn man! Observing a Darcy who has become the complete opposite of the one who spoke of a promising future of felicity, Elizabeth is now living in fear of what could become the greatest mistake of her life.
”Were there any options left to her, now that she had placed herself wholly in his power? The chilling thought caught her unawares, and in a flash the chill swelled into alarm. Husbands held all the power. Wives had none. All claims to the contrary were as hollow as the empty promise that formed a part of a man’s marriage vows: ‘With all my earthly goods I thee endow.’ That was false – a mockery. Marriage had given her no say in his affairs, no rights over his property. It had given him full rights over her.” —quote from book
Elizabeth isn’t ready to give up, however, and Darcy does love her, so inevitably, they do finally talk, and it’s Elizabeth who takes a very bold step by taking action to initiate the conversation that finally takes place and leads to their understanding. I was so proud of her for doing this. Brave girl! It takes quite a while to get there, but the journey is well worth it. There will be more twists as the story develops, threatening the harmony our dear couple has finally achieved.
As always with the work of Joana Starnes, the novel is beautifully written. There is angst, and in this story, the author has also written a very passionate and intimate couple. The way she herself describes it in the book’s description can’t be more perfect —
“The novel addresses mature themes. Given the ‘early marriage’ premise, the issue of growing affection and intimacy is central to the story. The relevant scenes are emotive and deeply sensual, but never explicit.”
I was generously gifted with an advance copy of the book with no expectation of a review, but I am pleased to happily provide one based on my honest opinion. I highly recommend this book.
August 15, 2021
I had a love/hate with this one.
Love the author and most her works and this was just as well written as all her others.
I felt bad for Darcy that he overheard something and (Gasp) misunderstood it. Which led to a week long binge of him being a royal POS.
Then Elizabeth gets put through the ringer by unknowingly befriending one of Darcy's old, but short lived, flames.
After reading one review here, I was afraid it would be worse than it seemed to me in the end.
However, I did get a disjointed feeling. Like it was 2 books pasted together not quite so seamlessly.
Love the author and most her works and this was just as well written as all her others.
I felt bad for Darcy that he overheard something and (Gasp) misunderstood it. Which led to a week long binge of him being a royal POS.
Then Elizabeth gets put through the ringer by unknowingly befriending one of Darcy's old, but short lived, flames.
After reading one review here, I was afraid it would be worse than it seemed to me in the end.
However, I did get a disjointed feeling. Like it was 2 books pasted together not quite so seamlessly.
July 26, 2021
Starnes is one of my favorite JAFF authors so I tend to read whatever she publishes.
This forced marriage scenario has been of course done many times before. Many worse than this. Quite a few actually better.
It's one of those novels where angst feels kinda redundant because Darcy keeps making the worst possible choices and, quite frankly, some downright asshole moves. E. comes across as much more emotionally mature and has to carry the whole relationship mostly on her shoulders.
Darcy either sulks, overreacts, runs away, lusts or hides things from her. It's poor E. who has to sort everything out and come up with resolutions. I wanted way more grovel from him for some things he did in the beginning of the marriage. I wanted E. to give him hell.
Yes, D. is loving and considerate and indulgent once they get going (thanks to E. taking conrol of the situation ... again) but even then he tends to falter when true transparency is needed. So insted of being honest with E. and giving her all the information she needed, he lets the situation to blow up in her face.
Anyway, it wasn't one of my favorite works from Starnes. That said, she is still a very good writer so however irritated I was with characters at time, the reading was constantly a pleasurable experience.
This forced marriage scenario has been of course done many times before. Many worse than this. Quite a few actually better.
It's one of those novels where angst feels kinda redundant because Darcy keeps making the worst possible choices and, quite frankly, some downright asshole moves. E. comes across as much more emotionally mature and has to carry the whole relationship mostly on her shoulders.
Darcy either sulks, overreacts, runs away, lusts or hides things from her. It's poor E. who has to sort everything out and come up with resolutions. I wanted way more grovel from him for some things he did in the beginning of the marriage. I wanted E. to give him hell.
Yes, D. is loving and considerate and indulgent once they get going (thanks to E. taking conrol of the situation ... again) but even then he tends to falter when true transparency is needed. So insted of being honest with E. and giving her all the information she needed, he lets the situation to blow up in her face.
Anyway, it wasn't one of my favorite works from Starnes. That said, she is still a very good writer so however irritated I was with characters at time, the reading was constantly a pleasurable experience.
October 17, 2021
After malicious gossip compels Darcy to offer for Elizabeth, he overhears a private conversation and misconstrues it’s meaning. Unfortunately that leads to a wretched beginning for their married life at Pemberley. There is a lot of drama in this book and it kept me reading late into the night. Wickham is up to his evil ways (on several occasions) and Georgiana naively falls for the poison spewed by Bingley’s sisters. Darcy is hiding a secret that threatens the marriage as well. So much drama. But ODC comes through it in the end. Jane and Lydia’s stories take an original turn. And unfortunately Colonel Fitzwilliam is only mentioned in passing. I can see that he wasn’t necessary to the story but I quite missed him all the same. He might have knocked some sense into Darcy during the first week of his marriage, but I suppose Darcy had to come up with the solution on his own.
October 14, 2021
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Joana Starnes’s previous books have set the quality bar too high so the expectations towards Twists of Fate were obviously in accordance with that, but if there is one thing Starnes never fails to present is a well written and engrossing book.
The premise of Twists of Fate is somewhat common, however, there are a few twists I particularly liked reading about, and of course, the manner in which Starnes presents the entire story is compelling, which makes the book unique in its own way.
In this forced marriage scenario Mr. Collins doesn’t take no for an answer and to avoid his more aggressive overtures, Elizabeth runs out of the house in search of her father. While she is in a hurry to get to Meryton, she falls and twists an ankle and it is at this point that she is found by Mr. Darcy, who assists her, and takes her to her Aunt Phillip’s house. This scene is observed by a maid and gossip soon spreads over Meryton.
Starnes is known as the Queen of angst, but readers should expect an almost angst free novel. That is not to say that conflict is completely absent from the story, but there aren’t many angsty moments in it, and the relationship between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth is quite mature with both sharing and talking over the many different situations they must face…well…they start doing that…eventually. What I want to say is that in this novel there is a moment of misunderstanding, but apart from that, we see the couple getting to know one another and slowly falling in love, which means that readers who love to read scenes between these two characters will be delighted! They will even face adversity as a couple completely in love and in syntony with one another.
What I loved the most in this book was the characterization of Darcy. No matter the adversity, or the setting, Joana Starnes is always able to create a Darcy who is exactly as I imagined he would be. He always reacts as I believe he should react, and he is always passionate, honorable and strong. This Darcy is swoon worthy and I absolutely loved every scene that was told from his point of view. His feelings are always raw, exiting and electrifying. His love for Elizabeth is beautiful and because his character, as well as Elizabeth’s were so well developed, their romance was the second aspect I loved the most in the book. They finish off with a solid relationship and I am sure readers will love to read the story as the characters achieve that.
Another aspect I really loved, and something I wasn’t certainly expecting, was to be privy to how the gossip spreads. Usually in this type of books we are told that rumors occur, but in this case, we see how the rumor is spreading and who is taking part in it. We follow the characters as they discuss the events and have a good laugh through it all. These humorous sections are something else that Starnes has started using in her most recent books, and a characteristic I particularly liked in the first part of Twists of Fate. She certainly knows how to make me smile 😊
Towards the end of the book, I must confess I was also pleasantly surprised by Lydia and astonishingly interested in Jane’s love life! If you think Elizabeth and Darcy are the only interesting couple in this book, be assured they are not! Jane was the one who made me read nonstop until the end!
I didn’t have any quibble with this book, but I would prefer if it was a little shorter, even if I couldn’t stop reading it from the moment I started.
Twists of Fate is another fantastic book that will not disappoint any reader. It is beautifully written, engrossing and passionate. The characters are true to themselves, and the path they take to find their happiness is thrilling. I highly recommend this book to all readers.
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Joana Starnes’s previous books have set the quality bar too high so the expectations towards Twists of Fate were obviously in accordance with that, but if there is one thing Starnes never fails to present is a well written and engrossing book.
The premise of Twists of Fate is somewhat common, however, there are a few twists I particularly liked reading about, and of course, the manner in which Starnes presents the entire story is compelling, which makes the book unique in its own way.
In this forced marriage scenario Mr. Collins doesn’t take no for an answer and to avoid his more aggressive overtures, Elizabeth runs out of the house in search of her father. While she is in a hurry to get to Meryton, she falls and twists an ankle and it is at this point that she is found by Mr. Darcy, who assists her, and takes her to her Aunt Phillip’s house. This scene is observed by a maid and gossip soon spreads over Meryton.
Starnes is known as the Queen of angst, but readers should expect an almost angst free novel. That is not to say that conflict is completely absent from the story, but there aren’t many angsty moments in it, and the relationship between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth is quite mature with both sharing and talking over the many different situations they must face…well…they start doing that…eventually. What I want to say is that in this novel there is a moment of misunderstanding, but apart from that, we see the couple getting to know one another and slowly falling in love, which means that readers who love to read scenes between these two characters will be delighted! They will even face adversity as a couple completely in love and in syntony with one another.
What I loved the most in this book was the characterization of Darcy. No matter the adversity, or the setting, Joana Starnes is always able to create a Darcy who is exactly as I imagined he would be. He always reacts as I believe he should react, and he is always passionate, honorable and strong. This Darcy is swoon worthy and I absolutely loved every scene that was told from his point of view. His feelings are always raw, exiting and electrifying. His love for Elizabeth is beautiful and because his character, as well as Elizabeth’s were so well developed, their romance was the second aspect I loved the most in the book. They finish off with a solid relationship and I am sure readers will love to read the story as the characters achieve that.
Another aspect I really loved, and something I wasn’t certainly expecting, was to be privy to how the gossip spreads. Usually in this type of books we are told that rumors occur, but in this case, we see how the rumor is spreading and who is taking part in it. We follow the characters as they discuss the events and have a good laugh through it all. These humorous sections are something else that Starnes has started using in her most recent books, and a characteristic I particularly liked in the first part of Twists of Fate. She certainly knows how to make me smile 😊
Towards the end of the book, I must confess I was also pleasantly surprised by Lydia and astonishingly interested in Jane’s love life! If you think Elizabeth and Darcy are the only interesting couple in this book, be assured they are not! Jane was the one who made me read nonstop until the end!
I didn’t have any quibble with this book, but I would prefer if it was a little shorter, even if I couldn’t stop reading it from the moment I started.
Twists of Fate is another fantastic book that will not disappoint any reader. It is beautifully written, engrossing and passionate. The characters are true to themselves, and the path they take to find their happiness is thrilling. I highly recommend this book to all readers.
June 21, 2023
What If Mr. Darcy Discovered His New Bride Blames Him for their Forced Marriage?
Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars
Source: Gift from Author
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
THE PREMISE: Mr. Darcy is Elizabeth Bennet’s preserver twice over, only to overhear that she blames him and his “brazen presumption” for their forced marriage in the first place. Now they both are “caged together for life.” Any chance for a tolerably happy union is done away with as doubt, deception, and distance have crept in to their marriage…
MY THOUGHTS: I love when Mr. Darcy comes to the rescue! Especially when Elizabeth still thinks the worst of him and is still trying to sketch his character. Mr. Darcy is incredibly swoon-worthy in this story as he gently tends to Elizabeth’s needs, displays his adorable sense of humor, and takes care to ensure safety. And if that isn’t enough to make us love him, as soon as he learns that other have spotted them alone together and have spread malicious gossip, he unhesitatingly yet deferentially prepares to do his duty (and follow his heart) and propose to Elizabeth Bennet. I just loved this beginning!
Where Joana Starnes’s talent shines – and where it always shines in any book she writes – is with her sensitively and sublimely developed depictions of Darcy and Elizabeth through their journey to love, happiness, and understanding. I always love how Ms. Starnes takes us into their heads and reveals their inner-thoughts, tangibly displays their emotional struggles, and and gives the readers plenty of insight and introspection. I find her way of portraying these beloved characters to be immensely perceptive and satisfying. I loved seeing how both characters struggled with pain and uncertainty. Seeing them work through their obstacles (even the self-made ones) was moving and rewarding. And their romantic encounters with each other were ardent with a capital A. (Note: For readers who might like forewarning, there are allusions to intimate scenes, but very little takes place on page).
In addition, one aspect I especially enjoyed about this portrayal of Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s relationship was how (after their initial misunderstanding) they strove to have a marriage of full honesty and open communication. Even if the truth was painful or would present difficult challenges. This was a very evolved and mature relationship. I appreciated the moments where both of them shared with each other unreservedly and how, through their opening communication with each other, they worked through the obstacles in their path.
My one quibble for this story would maybe have to do with the balance and pacing . There were some lengthier passages in the story that were several chapters in length – the beginning incident, D&E living in Pemberley complete contentment – and then some new storylines that were swiftly introduced and resolved in one-to-two chapters towards the end of the book. While I enjoyed some of theses new storylines (especially since they were about secondary characters), they did feel a little disjointed and maybe needed some more leisurely development to match the pacing and balance of the rest of the story. And in a bigger scope, even though they brought some fresh drama and conflict, I don’t know if some of these storylines were as necessary.
Joana Starnes’s Twists of Fate is an impassioned and articulate tale about Darcy and Elizabeth finding true understanding with each other and learning that the strongest bonds are forged with honesty and reciprocated openness. A beautiful and bewitching Pride and Prejudice variation that any ardent admirer of Austenesque would enjoy! I highly recommend!
Austenesque Reviews
Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars
Source: Gift from Author
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
THE PREMISE: Mr. Darcy is Elizabeth Bennet’s preserver twice over, only to overhear that she blames him and his “brazen presumption” for their forced marriage in the first place. Now they both are “caged together for life.” Any chance for a tolerably happy union is done away with as doubt, deception, and distance have crept in to their marriage…
MY THOUGHTS: I love when Mr. Darcy comes to the rescue! Especially when Elizabeth still thinks the worst of him and is still trying to sketch his character. Mr. Darcy is incredibly swoon-worthy in this story as he gently tends to Elizabeth’s needs, displays his adorable sense of humor, and takes care to ensure safety. And if that isn’t enough to make us love him, as soon as he learns that other have spotted them alone together and have spread malicious gossip, he unhesitatingly yet deferentially prepares to do his duty (and follow his heart) and propose to Elizabeth Bennet. I just loved this beginning!
Where Joana Starnes’s talent shines – and where it always shines in any book she writes – is with her sensitively and sublimely developed depictions of Darcy and Elizabeth through their journey to love, happiness, and understanding. I always love how Ms. Starnes takes us into their heads and reveals their inner-thoughts, tangibly displays their emotional struggles, and and gives the readers plenty of insight and introspection. I find her way of portraying these beloved characters to be immensely perceptive and satisfying. I loved seeing how both characters struggled with pain and uncertainty. Seeing them work through their obstacles (even the self-made ones) was moving and rewarding. And their romantic encounters with each other were ardent with a capital A. (Note: For readers who might like forewarning, there are allusions to intimate scenes, but very little takes place on page).
In addition, one aspect I especially enjoyed about this portrayal of Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s relationship was how (after their initial misunderstanding) they strove to have a marriage of full honesty and open communication. Even if the truth was painful or would present difficult challenges. This was a very evolved and mature relationship. I appreciated the moments where both of them shared with each other unreservedly and how, through their opening communication with each other, they worked through the obstacles in their path.
My one quibble for this story would maybe have to do with the balance and pacing . There were some lengthier passages in the story that were several chapters in length – the beginning incident, D&E living in Pemberley complete contentment – and then some new storylines that were swiftly introduced and resolved in one-to-two chapters towards the end of the book. While I enjoyed some of theses new storylines (especially since they were about secondary characters), they did feel a little disjointed and maybe needed some more leisurely development to match the pacing and balance of the rest of the story. And in a bigger scope, even though they brought some fresh drama and conflict, I don’t know if some of these storylines were as necessary.
Joana Starnes’s Twists of Fate is an impassioned and articulate tale about Darcy and Elizabeth finding true understanding with each other and learning that the strongest bonds are forged with honesty and reciprocated openness. A beautiful and bewitching Pride and Prejudice variation that any ardent admirer of Austenesque would enjoy! I highly recommend!
Austenesque Reviews
July 29, 2021
I loved this book so much! The variation happens early on - Collins proposes but is a bit more hands on as he tries to convince Elizabeth of his affection. Mr Bennet is in Meryton which means Elizabeth leaves the house to go to him but gets caught in the rain, then gets injured. Darcy didn't leave Netherfield with Bingley and comes upon Elizabeth and stays with her. This is a lovely scene where Darcy is obviously relaxed in her company. Soon after, rumours of a compromise start thereby forcing an early marriage... but things get off to a patchy start when Darcy overhears Elizabeth talking - presumably about him - and gets upset. There are plenty of misunderstandings to be had but the true affection between these two is never in doubt.
There were so many things I enjoyed about this book. The whole time we are with Darcy or Elizabeth or both of them at the same time. As a couple they are adorable- they like each other early on so there is plenty of cuteness! Wickham has a slightly different role which I enjoyed. We have a not so good Georgiana and a different approach to the Jane/Bingley situation as Darcy doesn't learn about Jane's feelings till much later. The gossiping at the beginning is brilliantly done as word of the compromise spread- it felt like I was right there!
I absolutely adore books by this author but was braced for the gut wrenching, soul destroying agony Elizabeth or Darcy generally experience at the hands of Ms Starnes... although there are misunderstandings aplenty, we know these two adore each other and so always feel confident they will work it out! Its a lovely read - Darcy and Elizabeth against some real vipers! Although others characters are involved to a point, this book is firmly about Elizabeth and Darcy and their relationship. A brilliant read!
There were so many things I enjoyed about this book. The whole time we are with Darcy or Elizabeth or both of them at the same time. As a couple they are adorable- they like each other early on so there is plenty of cuteness! Wickham has a slightly different role which I enjoyed. We have a not so good Georgiana and a different approach to the Jane/Bingley situation as Darcy doesn't learn about Jane's feelings till much later. The gossiping at the beginning is brilliantly done as word of the compromise spread- it felt like I was right there!
I absolutely adore books by this author but was braced for the gut wrenching, soul destroying agony Elizabeth or Darcy generally experience at the hands of Ms Starnes... although there are misunderstandings aplenty, we know these two adore each other and so always feel confident they will work it out! Its a lovely read - Darcy and Elizabeth against some real vipers! Although others characters are involved to a point, this book is firmly about Elizabeth and Darcy and their relationship. A brilliant read!
July 20, 2023
I am a big fan of Ms.Starnes's works. This book was lovely and well written with a perfect balance of angst and sweetness. That said, this somewhat didn't feel like Joana Starnes-ish. I'm not even comparing it to the nerve-wrackingly, heart-poundingly, tissue-seekingly and above all deliciously angsty works like Falmouth connection or Journey home to Pemberley or The Unthinkable Triangle or Mr.Bennet's dutiful daughter (Ok, I think I should stop here) but even comparing it to the low angsty works like Darcy legacy or Timely elopement, this story feels a little off. Please don't mistake this as me saying I didn't enjoy it, I doubtlessly did but it didn't feel like the author's style of story writing. It felt as if many opportunities for some real depth of feeling was wasted which has never happend in any other of her works. Just saying!
September 9, 2021
It feels like you are reading 2 books. The first half of the story is with Darcy, who has a childish, capricious, quick-tempered and touchy temperament and also does not really know how to use his own brain. The second is with Darcy, who is more mature, calm, but still does not shine with mental abilities. It's a pity, I expected more from this author.
July 28, 2021
A Fine Reimagining
I enjoyed this version of D&E and the story of their romance. I also liked the new characters created by the author. I found myself skimming through the portion of the story that featured Lydia - even with a different take on it, I couldn’t help but feel ‘been there, done that.’ All in all, it was a fine story and I recommend with enthusiasm.
I enjoyed this version of D&E and the story of their romance. I also liked the new characters created by the author. I found myself skimming through the portion of the story that featured Lydia - even with a different take on it, I couldn’t help but feel ‘been there, done that.’ All in all, it was a fine story and I recommend with enthusiasm.
July 26, 2021
I read Starnes for the Twisted sense of humor!
Every time I read a new Starnes' novel I feel as if she places her heroes on a tree branch, tall enough for us to see them in all their Austenian glory, and then slowly saws that very branch to show us what they will do, what they are made of. Will they fall? Will they jump before the fall? Who are these people behind their immaculate behaviors and their stereotypic “I’m a good judge of character, yet I believed Wickham” and “I’m above everyone I know in breeding, manners, character yet I insulted the woman I love and I’m not beneath buying my happiness with my money.”
There are many reviews describing the book’s plot so I will refrain from that. Even after reading the blurb one already knows that it’s an early forced marriage scenario and especially one happening before Kent and the fateful Hunsford proposal--yes, one of the first Twists of Fate was avoiding THAT. Which means that feelings are everywhere and nowhere, and both Darcy and Elizabeth need to walk on unfamiliar ground.
Now, if sudden marriage is unfamiliar ground for Elizabeth, dealing with Elizabeth for a proud Darcy (remember we are before-Hunsford so he definitely hasn’t gotten the memo) feels like completely unfamiliar territory! Perhaps even a different country altogether! And that goes on even after the first major misunderstanding is resolved. Especially later on in the marriage, during let’s call it The Great Mistake (I’ll avoid spoilers) where Darcy seems to have the emotional intelligence of a turtle and the poor man would wish he had been a turtle in order to avoid the continuing blows.
I’m saying the “poor man” but he was the one doing The Great Mistake, have no doubts about it, and yet Starnes does something she has showed she excels in: she makes the reader understand the whys and the hows of the wrong decisions and while I was “nope, he could never have done that!”, I was “OMG, he really did that!” and then “It’d not have been so bad if they had lived now” to “Stop, Darcy, you don’t need to explain more! You’re making it worse!”
Yep, all this is happening.
So, if you think it’s just one more early forced marriage scenario, you may need to think again because the good stuff happens after the wedding and after the first HEA because Starnes is not living in a cloud and knows that in the real world--no matter the century, no matter if it's fictional--shit happens.
(Don’t get me wrong! Nothing too-hard-to-forgive happens!)
Another thing worth mentioning is the structure of the story. Imagine P&P as a music piece. We have a climax at the Hunsford proposal and then another one at Lydia’s elopement.
There is a similar structure here and it’s nice to see such a subtle tribute to the original.
Once more, Starnes uses her well-known writing technique: she unweaves small or larger parts of Austen’s story to use the threads to weave a story of her own. And it IS a story of her own in the end, in which a writer of the 21st cent manages to breathe fresh air into heroes created 200 years ago.
For angst-haters I would say this is not the most angsty Starnes’ book ( TUT and TJHTP are far more angsty than Twists of Fate--after all, they ARE married!) but I’m not an unbiased reader: I like angst in books--nothing duller than reading about other people’s happiness. :-P
To make a long review short, I’ll add that if there’s one thing you need to know about Joana Starnes’ Twists of Fate, this is it:
Besides the plot --because there is a plot--besides the surprises and the twists--oh, there are surprises in multiple levels!--, besides the angst--would it be a Starnes’ book without angst?-- true to Austen there is humor!
If a sneezing Darcy proposal won’t do it for you, there is one scene that will--I have named it “Code: Matron’s Cap.”
PS: When Bingley’s sisters enter the story, bring a bat.
PPS: Well done, Jane!
Every time I read a new Starnes' novel I feel as if she places her heroes on a tree branch, tall enough for us to see them in all their Austenian glory, and then slowly saws that very branch to show us what they will do, what they are made of. Will they fall? Will they jump before the fall? Who are these people behind their immaculate behaviors and their stereotypic “I’m a good judge of character, yet I believed Wickham” and “I’m above everyone I know in breeding, manners, character yet I insulted the woman I love and I’m not beneath buying my happiness with my money.”
There are many reviews describing the book’s plot so I will refrain from that. Even after reading the blurb one already knows that it’s an early forced marriage scenario and especially one happening before Kent and the fateful Hunsford proposal--yes, one of the first Twists of Fate was avoiding THAT. Which means that feelings are everywhere and nowhere, and both Darcy and Elizabeth need to walk on unfamiliar ground.
Now, if sudden marriage is unfamiliar ground for Elizabeth, dealing with Elizabeth for a proud Darcy (remember we are before-Hunsford so he definitely hasn’t gotten the memo) feels like completely unfamiliar territory! Perhaps even a different country altogether! And that goes on even after the first major misunderstanding is resolved. Especially later on in the marriage, during let’s call it The Great Mistake (I’ll avoid spoilers) where Darcy seems to have the emotional intelligence of a turtle and the poor man would wish he had been a turtle in order to avoid the continuing blows.
I’m saying the “poor man” but he was the one doing The Great Mistake, have no doubts about it, and yet Starnes does something she has showed she excels in: she makes the reader understand the whys and the hows of the wrong decisions and while I was “nope, he could never have done that!”, I was “OMG, he really did that!” and then “It’d not have been so bad if they had lived now” to “Stop, Darcy, you don’t need to explain more! You’re making it worse!”
Yep, all this is happening.
So, if you think it’s just one more early forced marriage scenario, you may need to think again because the good stuff happens after the wedding and after the first HEA because Starnes is not living in a cloud and knows that in the real world--no matter the century, no matter if it's fictional--shit happens.
(Don’t get me wrong! Nothing too-hard-to-forgive happens!)
Another thing worth mentioning is the structure of the story. Imagine P&P as a music piece. We have a climax at the Hunsford proposal and then another one at Lydia’s elopement.
There is a similar structure here and it’s nice to see such a subtle tribute to the original.
Once more, Starnes uses her well-known writing technique: she unweaves small or larger parts of Austen’s story to use the threads to weave a story of her own. And it IS a story of her own in the end, in which a writer of the 21st cent manages to breathe fresh air into heroes created 200 years ago.
For angst-haters I would say this is not the most angsty Starnes’ book ( TUT and TJHTP are far more angsty than Twists of Fate--after all, they ARE married!) but I’m not an unbiased reader: I like angst in books--nothing duller than reading about other people’s happiness. :-P
To make a long review short, I’ll add that if there’s one thing you need to know about Joana Starnes’ Twists of Fate, this is it:
Besides the plot --because there is a plot--besides the surprises and the twists--oh, there are surprises in multiple levels!--, besides the angst--would it be a Starnes’ book without angst?-- true to Austen there is humor!
If a sneezing Darcy proposal won’t do it for you, there is one scene that will--I have named it “Code: Matron’s Cap.”
PS: When Bingley’s sisters enter the story, bring a bat.
PPS: Well done, Jane!
August 31, 2023
I’m afraid this excellent variation was slightly marred for me by Darcy’s dishonesty in the final conflict between the couple… and a too-easy forgiveness from Elizabeth, considering his actions. To conceal his previous entanglement and encourage Elizabeth to form a friendship with the same woman is just too much for me! Without that, this would have deserved 5 stars.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 25, 2021
Beautifully written! Jane finds her very own Darcy!
Ms. Starnes delivers another gem! Darcy is every woman’s dream hero in this story! Also loved the bonus of a strong Jane! Would love a 2nd story telling us Jane’s backstory!
Ms. Starnes delivers another gem! Darcy is every woman’s dream hero in this story! Also loved the bonus of a strong Jane! Would love a 2nd story telling us Jane’s backstory!
February 9, 2022
4.5⭐️
June 12, 2022
Too long, and Darcy has an affair he hides from Elizabeth
The book is, technically, well-written. But while it did have some moving moments between Darcy and Elizabeth, there were a few main overarching flaws I could not stand.
The first complaint is that it is just way too long. One does not need such a long variation.
The second problem is the bad ratio of plot and progress in the first half of the book. So little happens, and yet it takes hundreds of pages to go through the events. We really don’t need to know what Mrs. Bennet was thinking during the wedding breakfast.
The third and BIGGEST problem for me is a major spoiler. Darcy carried on an affair with someone in the past, does not tell Elizabeth about it, has the audacity to ENCOURAGE a friendship between Elizabeth and the woman, and yet when the truth comes out Elizabeth somehow forgives him within minutes just because he holds her. It is frankly ridiculous. It is even heavily implied that Elizabeth is supposed to be THANKFUL her husband used to sleep with this woman. That plot point ruined the whole book for me, and I regret spending so much time on a book that portrays Darcy and Elizabeth like this. He is dishonorable, and she is a pushover. How disappointing.
The book is, technically, well-written. But while it did have some moving moments between Darcy and Elizabeth, there were a few main overarching flaws I could not stand.
The first complaint is that it is just way too long. One does not need such a long variation.
The second problem is the bad ratio of plot and progress in the first half of the book. So little happens, and yet it takes hundreds of pages to go through the events. We really don’t need to know what Mrs. Bennet was thinking during the wedding breakfast.
The third and BIGGEST problem for me is a major spoiler. Darcy carried on an affair with someone in the past, does not tell Elizabeth about it, has the audacity to ENCOURAGE a friendship between Elizabeth and the woman, and yet when the truth comes out Elizabeth somehow forgives him within minutes just because he holds her. It is frankly ridiculous. It is even heavily implied that Elizabeth is supposed to be THANKFUL her husband used to sleep with this woman. That plot point ruined the whole book for me, and I regret spending so much time on a book that portrays Darcy and Elizabeth like this. He is dishonorable, and she is a pushover. How disappointing.
August 6, 2021
Started great. Once we got to Pemberley, I was no longer on board. Just wasn't for me.
July 24, 2021
Increfible
This story takes you in a dollar foster tide literally if you love something very unexpected this is it made me cry definite reread
This story takes you in a dollar foster tide literally if you love something very unexpected this is it made me cry definite reread
January 4, 2024
Loved, loved
This is my favourite P & P author due to her delectable, authentic conversations by our favourite characters. She is a master at describing thought processes from both men and women’s perspective and reveals a sensitivity when it comes to realistic lovers conversations with poignant humour, wit and misunderstandings. I wait patiently each time for her next P & P variation and hope and pray she never tires of concocting new ones
This is my favourite P & P author due to her delectable, authentic conversations by our favourite characters. She is a master at describing thought processes from both men and women’s perspective and reveals a sensitivity when it comes to realistic lovers conversations with poignant humour, wit and misunderstandings. I wait patiently each time for her next P & P variation and hope and pray she never tires of concocting new ones
July 25, 2022
This was my second time reading this book. I have to say I took away a star. The ending seemed to get away from the author. The Lydia/Wickham thing seemed unbelievable considering what everyone knew about Wickham. It felt shoved in. Ditto with the Bingley part.
The author had Darcy’s servants traveling by stagecoaches. I’ve always read them traveling in a coach along with the main characters.
The author had Darcy’s servants traveling by stagecoaches. I’ve always read them traveling in a coach along with the main characters.
August 12, 2021
Joana Starnes scores with her best book yet! I don't say that lightly, because when I got to the part where (spoiler alert) D balks after the wedding, having just read a book with exactly the same mini-twist, I didn't expect as much as I got in this exciting and different twist on the forced marriage scenario.
I don't rehash the plot and spoilers in my reviews since you can find that in all the other reviews. Instead, I focus on the technical issues.
Starnes' latest book is her best edited, and she's eschewed some of her crutch words for some new ones. Her language is approachable, yet complex enough to be comparable to Austen, which is what a JAFF reader looks for in an Austenesque novel. A couple of too-complex words were noted: douter and pithily. Non-Regency language was less than in her previous books, consisting of headed, wing chair, outing, chuckle, snort, hairstyle, and possibly aquamarine. I wrote the latter down but I can't recall if it was the stone or the colour. The stone is Regency, the colour is 1846. There were a couple of contractions to knock me out of the Regency mood, but hardly any compared to most Regency novels that are well-edited.
Starnes often used an n-dash where she should have used an m-dash. This makes the book have an odd look and it's incorrect for that very reason. I also noticed a sentence fragment.
I enjoyed the prose quite a lot, noting phrases such as "mocking rattle of the coach," and "clenched his hands into rigid claws around the armrests."
The author drew from Austen's characterization quite well, finding the lesser used aspects of both Darcy and Elizabeth and expanding upon them for the times they found themselves in strife, as well as to examine their passionate side. The book has sexy scenes without being explicit, making one's toes curl even though there is no slot a tab b. She may have pressed Bingley's spinelessness a little to make for good drama, but that was the extent of changes to characterization. New characters were well-drawn and only used to the extent that they enhanced the novel. She used third person multiple point of view well, getting the reader into the character's head with a lot of showing and only using telling briefly where it mattered. No head-hopping in this novel.
The plot in the initial part of the story was a familiar one, but the title gives away the fact that it twists quite a few times. First, there are several twists to make for the forced marriage scenario. Then, several twists make up the romance story line which is the main thread of the novel, and well done--no question about a rushed love story here. Other twists involve secondary characters, and they are masterfully tied into the main plot without taking away from it or seeming like we went off on an unnecessary tangent, like happens in so many other books. This is masterful plotting. The angst factor is moderate, so it will appeal to those who don't like books that survive on painful dramatic tension.
The cover is attractive and different, while tying into Starnes' other books by using her trademark Darcy. I think Elizabeth is new, though. I'm someone who enjoys covers and the details around them, but has no artistic background to back up my opinions. Therefore, I've made a habit of learning about the importance of balance of elements, and this seems to me to have it all going on. It has that "wow" factor that will capture the attention of potential readers and get them to look at the blurb.
I recommend this book because the twists keep the story alive and are all relevant to the primary plot, that of Elizabeth and Darcy falling in love while struggling with misconceptions related to their forced marriage. Joana Starnes is a clever author and this is among the best of her novels, if not the best.
Disclaimer: I'm a JAFF writer and some might claim that this review is a conflict of interest. However, I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. They are written for both the reader and the author.
I don't rehash the plot and spoilers in my reviews since you can find that in all the other reviews. Instead, I focus on the technical issues.
Starnes' latest book is her best edited, and she's eschewed some of her crutch words for some new ones. Her language is approachable, yet complex enough to be comparable to Austen, which is what a JAFF reader looks for in an Austenesque novel. A couple of too-complex words were noted: douter and pithily. Non-Regency language was less than in her previous books, consisting of headed, wing chair, outing, chuckle, snort, hairstyle, and possibly aquamarine. I wrote the latter down but I can't recall if it was the stone or the colour. The stone is Regency, the colour is 1846. There were a couple of contractions to knock me out of the Regency mood, but hardly any compared to most Regency novels that are well-edited.
Starnes often used an n-dash where she should have used an m-dash. This makes the book have an odd look and it's incorrect for that very reason. I also noticed a sentence fragment.
I enjoyed the prose quite a lot, noting phrases such as "mocking rattle of the coach," and "clenched his hands into rigid claws around the armrests."
The author drew from Austen's characterization quite well, finding the lesser used aspects of both Darcy and Elizabeth and expanding upon them for the times they found themselves in strife, as well as to examine their passionate side. The book has sexy scenes without being explicit, making one's toes curl even though there is no slot a tab b. She may have pressed Bingley's spinelessness a little to make for good drama, but that was the extent of changes to characterization. New characters were well-drawn and only used to the extent that they enhanced the novel. She used third person multiple point of view well, getting the reader into the character's head with a lot of showing and only using telling briefly where it mattered. No head-hopping in this novel.
The plot in the initial part of the story was a familiar one, but the title gives away the fact that it twists quite a few times. First, there are several twists to make for the forced marriage scenario. Then, several twists make up the romance story line which is the main thread of the novel, and well done--no question about a rushed love story here. Other twists involve secondary characters, and they are masterfully tied into the main plot without taking away from it or seeming like we went off on an unnecessary tangent, like happens in so many other books. This is masterful plotting. The angst factor is moderate, so it will appeal to those who don't like books that survive on painful dramatic tension.
The cover is attractive and different, while tying into Starnes' other books by using her trademark Darcy. I think Elizabeth is new, though. I'm someone who enjoys covers and the details around them, but has no artistic background to back up my opinions. Therefore, I've made a habit of learning about the importance of balance of elements, and this seems to me to have it all going on. It has that "wow" factor that will capture the attention of potential readers and get them to look at the blurb.
I recommend this book because the twists keep the story alive and are all relevant to the primary plot, that of Elizabeth and Darcy falling in love while struggling with misconceptions related to their forced marriage. Joana Starnes is a clever author and this is among the best of her novels, if not the best.
Disclaimer: I'm a JAFF writer and some might claim that this review is a conflict of interest. However, I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. They are written for both the reader and the author.
August 16, 2021
Simply wonderful
When Mr Collins proposes to Elizabeth, he breaches propriety and takes improper liberties with her, sending her fleeing from the house in fright, and causing circumstances that eventually lead to a compromise with Mr Darcy, and his agreement to marry her in order to prevent a scandal. As in the original P&P, Darcy has been fighting his strong attraction to Elizabeth. This compromise, orchestrated by Mr Wickham, gives Darcy a welcome excuse to marry Elizabeth. When Elizabeth discovers that Wickham has betrayed her, she begins to see Darcy's merits, and is reconciled to her fate. However, a conversation that Darcy overhears between Elizabeth and Jane gives him the mistaken impression that Elizabeth still despises him, and he begins their married life under a cloud of anger and suspicion.
Joana Starnes is a wonderful writer, storyteller, and creative force. It's such a joy to read a well crafted story, with a well developed plot, and characters that you can care about. Her books are mercifully devoid of repetition and useless filler content, as in so very many of the JAFF books out there. This is quality literature, and I appreciate it.
I only have two concerns with this book, but they aren't even serious enough to deduct a star. First is Darcy's reaction and subsequent actions after he overhears Elizabeth speaking with Jane right after their marriage. I don't like to think that he would have been such a coward, and not have broached the subject with Elizabeth right away. The other concern is that I'm always wishing the books by this author were longer. It's such an enjoyable experience, I just don't want it to end.
This story is heartbreaking and heartwarming, and very romantic. This is a swoon worthy Darcy, and the kind of spunky, determined Elizabeth that we love. It's rather an epic love story, and Jane has her own important story, as well. I recommend it highly.
When Mr Collins proposes to Elizabeth, he breaches propriety and takes improper liberties with her, sending her fleeing from the house in fright, and causing circumstances that eventually lead to a compromise with Mr Darcy, and his agreement to marry her in order to prevent a scandal. As in the original P&P, Darcy has been fighting his strong attraction to Elizabeth. This compromise, orchestrated by Mr Wickham, gives Darcy a welcome excuse to marry Elizabeth. When Elizabeth discovers that Wickham has betrayed her, she begins to see Darcy's merits, and is reconciled to her fate. However, a conversation that Darcy overhears between Elizabeth and Jane gives him the mistaken impression that Elizabeth still despises him, and he begins their married life under a cloud of anger and suspicion.
Joana Starnes is a wonderful writer, storyteller, and creative force. It's such a joy to read a well crafted story, with a well developed plot, and characters that you can care about. Her books are mercifully devoid of repetition and useless filler content, as in so very many of the JAFF books out there. This is quality literature, and I appreciate it.
I only have two concerns with this book, but they aren't even serious enough to deduct a star. First is Darcy's reaction and subsequent actions after he overhears Elizabeth speaking with Jane right after their marriage. I don't like to think that he would have been such a coward, and not have broached the subject with Elizabeth right away. The other concern is that I'm always wishing the books by this author were longer. It's such an enjoyable experience, I just don't want it to end.
This story is heartbreaking and heartwarming, and very romantic. This is a swoon worthy Darcy, and the kind of spunky, determined Elizabeth that we love. It's rather an epic love story, and Jane has her own important story, as well. I recommend it highly.
July 25, 2021
Twists Ahead!
With prose instantly recognizable and often unforgettable, Joana Starnes shows her mastery in JAFF of the longed for, soul fusing romance of Elizabeth Bennet and Fitzwilliam Darcy.
The Netherfield ball is over. The morning finds Elizabeth fleeing Longbourn from trauma delivered in the form of a marriage proposal by a nauseating, forward and disgusting Mr. Collins.
Darcy has taken to his horse for a last ride of the Hertfordshire countryside. The wet, cold morning is fitting for his mood as he struggles to bid farewell to his fascination with Elizabeth Bennet. His plan is in place to quit Hertfordshire within hours, pack up his unruly heart and return to London where duty awaits. Fate however, has a different plan for the gentleman when he comes upon a cold, rain soaked and injured Elizabeth.
He gives aid, and most unexpected to Elizabeth’s thinking, comfort and
compassion, and delivers her safely and discreetly to the home of her aunt. Later in his chamber at Netherfield as he laments the latest bittersweet memory he has no hope of forgetting, Darcy succumbs to effects of a violent cold and falls asleep. He wakes hours later to shocking news of damaging, scandalous gossip run rampant.
Let the twists begin!
A vile Wickham earns a much deserved comeuppance. An early marriage with hopeful promise. A stunning misunderstanding. A determined bride sparks a blazing passion. These are only the start of the twists that do not let up until the final chapter.
Bingley’s disappointment, his sister’s viciousness, and a secret long past, test ODC in ways that lead us down paths intense, poignant, heart-rending and ultimately joyous.
I relished this newest journey and highly recommend!
A gift of an early copy of this book was given with no expectations. The published book was read through my KU and all opinions are my own.
With prose instantly recognizable and often unforgettable, Joana Starnes shows her mastery in JAFF of the longed for, soul fusing romance of Elizabeth Bennet and Fitzwilliam Darcy.
The Netherfield ball is over. The morning finds Elizabeth fleeing Longbourn from trauma delivered in the form of a marriage proposal by a nauseating, forward and disgusting Mr. Collins.
Darcy has taken to his horse for a last ride of the Hertfordshire countryside. The wet, cold morning is fitting for his mood as he struggles to bid farewell to his fascination with Elizabeth Bennet. His plan is in place to quit Hertfordshire within hours, pack up his unruly heart and return to London where duty awaits. Fate however, has a different plan for the gentleman when he comes upon a cold, rain soaked and injured Elizabeth.
He gives aid, and most unexpected to Elizabeth’s thinking, comfort and
compassion, and delivers her safely and discreetly to the home of her aunt. Later in his chamber at Netherfield as he laments the latest bittersweet memory he has no hope of forgetting, Darcy succumbs to effects of a violent cold and falls asleep. He wakes hours later to shocking news of damaging, scandalous gossip run rampant.
Let the twists begin!
A vile Wickham earns a much deserved comeuppance. An early marriage with hopeful promise. A stunning misunderstanding. A determined bride sparks a blazing passion. These are only the start of the twists that do not let up until the final chapter.
Bingley’s disappointment, his sister’s viciousness, and a secret long past, test ODC in ways that lead us down paths intense, poignant, heart-rending and ultimately joyous.
I relished this newest journey and highly recommend!
A gift of an early copy of this book was given with no expectations. The published book was read through my KU and all opinions are my own.
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