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Avalar Explored #2
Saltwater's Weep
Craving revenge for the betrayals he suffered, Jace and his companions set out to conquer some dungeon floors to gain what they need to seek their revenge. Traveling to Saltwater's Weep is a dangerous journey. A powerful coterie of adventurers led by the Warlord rules the city. Their dark fingers extend throughout and nothing is as it seems.
Taking his time to plan his attack, Jace seeks to gain control of new allies and servants before he sets out on his Quest. Join him as he takes new lovers, fulfills new temptations and gains in immortal power. Watch villains creep from the sidelines with agendas of their own. Can a fledgling Incubus survive in a dangerous world when might makes right?
Contains Explicit Content that is meant for 18+ readers, may not be suitable for everyone.
Taking his time to plan his attack, Jace seeks to gain control of new allies and servants before he sets out on his Quest. Join him as he takes new lovers, fulfills new temptations and gains in immortal power. Watch villains creep from the sidelines with agendas of their own. Can a fledgling Incubus survive in a dangerous world when might makes right?
Contains Explicit Content that is meant for 18+ readers, may not be suitable for everyone.
476 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 30, 2021
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About the author
Deacon Frost
43 books101 followersBegan gaming at the age of 8 and explored a lot of different ways to play table top. When I got older, I experimented with MMOs and found a few I really liked. My first job was mowing lawns as a young teen, and I worked to use the money to pay for fantasy series like DragonLance, Dark Sun, and Forgotten Realms. As soon as I discovered LitRPG I knew I wanted to incorporate it into my writing.
Aside from taking care of my sons as a single father, writing is what I love to do most. I hope you all enjoy my work.
Aside from taking care of my sons as a single father, writing is what I love to do most. I hope you all enjoy my work.
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September 21, 2021
A solid 5/10
I was recommended this series based on the character type and class but wasn't told and honestly didn't realise it was porn. Has quite a dark tone, with some very borderline parts that can be a little uncomfortable.
That would not have been a problem if those scenes were well written, but I found them mediocre at best and incredibly repetitive across books 1 and 2. There were a lot of repeated phrases that seem to be the authors "go-to" when describing sex. I get that describing sex in detail is going to have some repeat plays, but in this case almost every sex scene is very near the same bar, the partner, some small details, then the climax. It started to feel unnecessary... I'll say that again.
In a book series about a sex demon and his harem, the sex scenes started to feel unnecessary. They were that frequent and repetitive.
The story outside of the porn scenes wasn't bad at all, though suffered from a large number of inconsistent style choices, spelling and grammar mistakes and large plot holes.
I did enjoy it to a degree, and I think if the story continues it could all very easily improve. I hope it does
I was recommended this series based on the character type and class but wasn't told and honestly didn't realise it was porn. Has quite a dark tone, with some very borderline parts that can be a little uncomfortable.
That would not have been a problem if those scenes were well written, but I found them mediocre at best and incredibly repetitive across books 1 and 2. There were a lot of repeated phrases that seem to be the authors "go-to" when describing sex. I get that describing sex in detail is going to have some repeat plays, but in this case almost every sex scene is very near the same bar, the partner, some small details, then the climax. It started to feel unnecessary... I'll say that again.
In a book series about a sex demon and his harem, the sex scenes started to feel unnecessary. They were that frequent and repetitive.
The story outside of the porn scenes wasn't bad at all, though suffered from a large number of inconsistent style choices, spelling and grammar mistakes and large plot holes.
I did enjoy it to a degree, and I think if the story continues it could all very easily improve. I hope it does
July 3, 2021
Nice sequel.
Having a demon with a human soul makes for an interesting MC. Having such diverse characters make up an adventuring group keeps the interactions lively. The ending for this book,while not as jolting as the first book's, it still promised more adventure. So we have good writing, good plot progression and great characters - that all equals a real good read. I'm looking forward for the next edition.
Having a demon with a human soul makes for an interesting MC. Having such diverse characters make up an adventuring group keeps the interactions lively. The ending for this book,while not as jolting as the first book's, it still promised more adventure. So we have good writing, good plot progression and great characters - that all equals a real good read. I'm looking forward for the next edition.
July 19, 2021
Rating 4.0 stars
A good second book in the series. The MC was turned into an incubus in the first book and was betrayed at the end of the last book. He is a good guy but also has a demonic nature. That is an interesting mix. I don't think he is truly evil. There are certain lines he won't cross. He isn't completely soft hearted though and will do some bad things if it will give him more experience and power. Overall I am liking the series.
A good second book in the series. The MC was turned into an incubus in the first book and was betrayed at the end of the last book. He is a good guy but also has a demonic nature. That is an interesting mix. I don't think he is truly evil. There are certain lines he won't cross. He isn't completely soft hearted though and will do some bad things if it will give him more experience and power. Overall I am liking the series.
August 10, 2022
A really good story
The story is really well written for the type of antiheroes that are in it. There is a lot of adventure and intrigue and some evil things as well as a whole lot of spicy scenes. We get to see the stats of the main character as he levels Although it would be nice to see some of his group also stats as well. the characters are well written and the way they react makes sense because of who and what They are. My only complaint and the reason why I gave it four stars is because of the punctuation it has the use of her when it should be him and it could use a little bit of editing other than that a good story.
The story is really well written for the type of antiheroes that are in it. There is a lot of adventure and intrigue and some evil things as well as a whole lot of spicy scenes. We get to see the stats of the main character as he levels Although it would be nice to see some of his group also stats as well. the characters are well written and the way they react makes sense because of who and what They are. My only complaint and the reason why I gave it four stars is because of the punctuation it has the use of her when it should be him and it could use a little bit of editing other than that a good story.
April 12, 2023
Book Issues
First, there were book issues in the first and second books. 2/3 of the way done, the book claimed it was complete, and it took work to get it to go from rate and review to the following page.
I gave the second book a grudging attempt after the horror of an ending presented in the first book. I held out hope since most of the first book seemed very good. Unfortunately, the plot drug, it was very repetitive, and I lost my interest in the characters very quickly.
I feel the author lost his way after the disastrous ending of book one.
First, there were book issues in the first and second books. 2/3 of the way done, the book claimed it was complete, and it took work to get it to go from rate and review to the following page.
I gave the second book a grudging attempt after the horror of an ending presented in the first book. I held out hope since most of the first book seemed very good. Unfortunately, the plot drug, it was very repetitive, and I lost my interest in the characters very quickly.
I feel the author lost his way after the disastrous ending of book one.
July 4, 2021
Couldn’t stop reading!
The first book was good but the second was even better. This book was so exciting that I could not put it down and finished it in two days. Only fault was so many editing errors, at least they did not detract from the story too much. Now comes the long wait for the next book.
The first book was good but the second was even better. This book was so exciting that I could not put it down and finished it in two days. Only fault was so many editing errors, at least they did not detract from the story too much. Now comes the long wait for the next book.
July 7, 2021
Okay, this is a definite improvement from the first one.
While the editing is a bit rough, the pacing has greatly improved. The character actions seem more in line with their motivations. Combat has improved but could still use some more polish. The overall concept is going in the right direction and I think book three will be even better.
While the editing is a bit rough, the pacing has greatly improved. The character actions seem more in line with their motivations. Combat has improved but could still use some more polish. The overall concept is going in the right direction and I think book three will be even better.
September 22, 2021
GREAT STORY
This book was a very concise written account of how to run this type of character and a storyline I am very impressed with how this author put together the story and I hope that he will write a sequel to this book I highly recommend this novel to anyone who enjoys the game of Dungeons & Dragons
This book was a very concise written account of how to run this type of character and a storyline I am very impressed with how this author put together the story and I hope that he will write a sequel to this book I highly recommend this novel to anyone who enjoys the game of Dungeons & Dragons
September 28, 2021
Creative and satisfying
I very much enjoy and appreciate how well the characters are written and the flow of the story. The plot is refreshing and new, and while there are minor editing errors, this book will easily grant me the strength to sift until i find another diamond in the rough.
I very much enjoy and appreciate how well the characters are written and the flow of the story. The plot is refreshing and new, and while there are minor editing errors, this book will easily grant me the strength to sift until i find another diamond in the rough.
July 5, 2021
Keeping it fresh
I enjoyed how the main goal of the characters in the book was achieved, while at the same time doing lots of other adventures. I like that the MC is staying true to his choices and nature, and not wimping out. I eagerly await the next book.
I enjoyed how the main goal of the characters in the book was achieved, while at the same time doing lots of other adventures. I like that the MC is staying true to his choices and nature, and not wimping out. I eagerly await the next book.
July 30, 2021
Great 2nd book
This is a good book. You shouldy read it. I like the story. The characters are fun. The book is a good read. i enjoyed it alot.. Download or buy it today. why not?
This is a good book. You shouldy read it. I like the story. The characters are fun. The book is a good read. i enjoyed it alot.. Download or buy it today. why not?
August 3, 2021
Pretty good
Some editorial issues, otherwise a great story, with interesting characters. The plot is pretty good, most times I read these and it’s just one continuous sex scene which gets boring. Worth the read and I look forward to more books in this series.
Some editorial issues, otherwise a great story, with interesting characters. The plot is pretty good, most times I read these and it’s just one continuous sex scene which gets boring. Worth the read and I look forward to more books in this series.
August 6, 2021
Typos, typos, typos.
This is a really fun series, with plenty of action (vertical And horizontal), intrigue, magic and murder. The one thing it's missing is a proofreader. Holly scrap are there a lot of typos! Authors, PLEASE have someone go over your work BEFORE publishing!!!
This is a really fun series, with plenty of action (vertical And horizontal), intrigue, magic and murder. The one thing it's missing is a proofreader. Holly scrap are there a lot of typos! Authors, PLEASE have someone go over your work BEFORE publishing!!!
June 28, 2022
Same issue as book 1 - Too much time spend on Stat reading IMO especially reading useless abilities like sowing
There was a section of the book that seemed to go on and on about stats that we do not need to know about and will forget about in a paragraph or two
There was a section of the book that seemed to go on and on about stats that we do not need to know about and will forget about in a paragraph or two
December 3, 2022
unexpected ending again
With stories in this genre I honestly expected them to reconcile with her. Definitely did not expect him to decapitate her. Talk about follow through. The knowledge that the warlord made a deal for power is interesting. I’m excited for that
With stories in this genre I honestly expected them to reconcile with her. Definitely did not expect him to decapitate her. Talk about follow through. The knowledge that the warlord made a deal for power is interesting. I’m excited for that
April 14, 2023
Fun.
I enjoyed reading this book. It was fun and entertaining. The story and characters continue to be interesting and engaging. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing what happens next. This book is worth checking out.
I enjoyed reading this book. It was fun and entertaining. The story and characters continue to be interesting and engaging. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing what happens next. This book is worth checking out.
January 26, 2025
Wow! What an amazing story
The story is darker than I expected at times, but the author has an excellent understanding of motivations and desires and brings them to light with exceptional writing.
The story is darker than I expected at times, but the author has an excellent understanding of motivations and desires and brings them to light with exceptional writing.
May 24, 2025
Great story
I'm still confused why Elisa turned on him for no gain, but this book definitely ended better. I look forward to the next book and when Jace becomes a god. You know he's gonna!
I'm still confused why Elisa turned on him for no gain, but this book definitely ended better. I look forward to the next book and when Jace becomes a god. You know he's gonna!
July 2, 2021
Content was fun, needs polishing
Publisher's footnotes interrupted the reading. Please fix asap. Other than that, the story was fun in the same lines the first one was.
Publisher's footnotes interrupted the reading. Please fix asap. Other than that, the story was fun in the same lines the first one was.
July 2, 2021
Good continuation
Great continuation more leveling and vengeance the plot grows more complex
some editing issues but nothing really so bad as to ruin the flow of the story
Great continuation more leveling and vengeance the plot grows more complex
some editing issues but nothing really so bad as to ruin the flow of the story
July 5, 2021
Dark fun
This was a nice lunch decadent story. The MC is really coming into his own. The betrayal of a friend at the last book certainly colored the team but in a good way.
This was a nice lunch decadent story. The MC is really coming into his own. The betrayal of a friend at the last book certainly colored the team but in a good way.
July 10, 2021
Loved it
I can’t wait for book three.The plot thickens and the bad guys are truly evil shits.This book has everything you could want in a good story to relax and enjoy reading.
I can’t wait for book three.The plot thickens and the bad guys are truly evil shits.This book has everything you could want in a good story to relax and enjoy reading.
July 10, 2021
Did not see the ending coming but loved it.
Awesome second chapter to Jane's adventures across avalar . I can't wait for the next book in the series to come out!
Awesome second chapter to Jane's adventures across avalar . I can't wait for the next book in the series to come out!
July 30, 2021
Outstanding Series
I think this is a over looked series. It has great storyline and interesting characters. But it really shines because of the characters interactions .
I think this is a over looked series. It has great storyline and interesting characters. But it really shines because of the characters interactions .
August 16, 2021
Excellent sequel
Not much in to harem fictionwas excellent but to much sexuality for myself but if an adult and it's your thing you will love this book
Not much in to harem fictionwas excellent but to much sexuality for myself but if an adult and it's your thing you will love this book
August 20, 2021
Loved it
I liked the flow of story and how different the outcomes are. Can't wait for the next one to be done
I liked the flow of story and how different the outcomes are. Can't wait for the next one to be done
September 30, 2021
Good
Liked the book good continuation from the first and no cliffhangers that’s always a plus can’t wait for the next one
Liked the book good continuation from the first and no cliffhangers that’s always a plus can’t wait for the next one
October 23, 2021
Fantastic
This a a great series so far. I’m just disappointed that I have to wait for another one to release now. Can’t wait to read more!
This a a great series so far. I’m just disappointed that I have to wait for another one to release now. Can’t wait to read more!
February 3, 2023
Great sequel
Loved it the book was way better than I expected it to be. I will be picking up the next book in the series, and I expect it to be as food as the first 2 boks.
Loved it the book was way better than I expected it to be. I will be picking up the next book in the series, and I expect it to be as food as the first 2 boks.
June 13, 2025
Note to self: not feeling it. Second try, after I forgot why I stopped the series before. Now I remember, don't give it another try. It's not for me.
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