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Everyone Lives AU - Harry Potter and The Goblet Of Fire
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June 30, 2025
3.5⭐️
What I liked about the fic :
1) THAT CEDRIC LIVED !! the author said in her notes that apparently readers were upset about that and I can't comprehend it... the point of AU is to move from the original plot, and her title literally contains "Everyone Lives" like??
2) The fact that Cedric survived because Barty Crouch Jr wasn't able to kill him since he had Remus' hand and that it didn't obey to him properly : genius
3) Regulus killing Barty, like yeah go off king !!
4) Regulus giving Remus back his hand after killing Barty
5) During the Quidditch World Cup, James being accused of casting the Dark Mark and Remus being charged for supposedly killing Bertha Jorkins, in the actual Hp book its Crouch’s Elf which is accused and I remember finding that part so boring in the book, am glad she changed it
6) Regulus characterisation : planning his own schemes w/o telling anyone, planning to kill Voldemort and Barty and then die alone, acknowledging his weakness and thinking of himself as a good liar, reluctant to stand by Dumbledore side even thought they are the only one aware of Voldemort horcruxes
Also, at the very end, when Sirius said to him that he is finally on the 'right' side, Regulus thought about how he had always thought that he was, even when he was an active Death Eater at Voldemort service ; he really has the potential to be a great greyish character, hope he doesn't die in OOTP 😬
7) Glad the author keeps Harry sassiness and openly smiled when he punched Draco in the face lol it was golden
What draws me back :
1) Once again, the writing continues to upset me ; the vocabulary is painfully repetitive and the grammar made me reread half of the paragraphs at least twice (I'm a maniac, I don't just read a sentence to understand its global meaning, I need to ingurgitate it into my soul) ; plus, a 'too simple' writing can spoil a character depiction in my opinion
2) Plot holes : was Moody really Moody or was he someone under Polyjuice ??? because Ginny mentioned in her pov that he was always drinking from a flask ; why the author would have precised it, if not to let us know that someone was usurping Moody's identity???
Plus, it is said in a paragraph that Draco picked up something from the grass and 'whispered' to it : what was it??? why would you write something like that and then never developing it later in the story??
3) In MY opinion, the author still follows too much of the original plotline... with almost all the Marauders and Lily alive and well, living practically together, and with the comeback of Regulus, I'd have thought that there would be more changes and more ANGST, especially within the Black family
4) I desperately wished for at least one Narcissa and Regulus or Narcissa and Sirius interaction, I was deprived of it once again...
What I liked about the fic :
1) THAT CEDRIC LIVED !! the author said in her notes that apparently readers were upset about that and I can't comprehend it... the point of AU is to move from the original plot, and her title literally contains "Everyone Lives" like??
2) The fact that Cedric survived because Barty Crouch Jr wasn't able to kill him since he had Remus' hand and that it didn't obey to him properly : genius
3) Regulus killing Barty, like yeah go off king !!
4) Regulus giving Remus back his hand after killing Barty
5) During the Quidditch World Cup, James being accused of casting the Dark Mark and Remus being charged for supposedly killing Bertha Jorkins, in the actual Hp book its Crouch’s Elf which is accused and I remember finding that part so boring in the book, am glad she changed it
6) Regulus characterisation : planning his own schemes w/o telling anyone, planning to kill Voldemort and Barty and then die alone, acknowledging his weakness and thinking of himself as a good liar, reluctant to stand by Dumbledore side even thought they are the only one aware of Voldemort horcruxes
Also, at the very end, when Sirius said to him that he is finally on the 'right' side, Regulus thought about how he had always thought that he was, even when he was an active Death Eater at Voldemort service ; he really has the potential to be a great greyish character, hope he doesn't die in OOTP 😬
7) Glad the author keeps Harry sassiness and openly smiled when he punched Draco in the face lol it was golden
What draws me back :
1) Once again, the writing continues to upset me ; the vocabulary is painfully repetitive and the grammar made me reread half of the paragraphs at least twice (I'm a maniac, I don't just read a sentence to understand its global meaning, I need to ingurgitate it into my soul) ; plus, a 'too simple' writing can spoil a character depiction in my opinion
2) Plot holes : was Moody really Moody or was he someone under Polyjuice ??? because Ginny mentioned in her pov that he was always drinking from a flask ; why the author would have precised it, if not to let us know that someone was usurping Moody's identity???
Plus, it is said in a paragraph that Draco picked up something from the grass and 'whispered' to it : what was it??? why would you write something like that and then never developing it later in the story??
3) In MY opinion, the author still follows too much of the original plotline... with almost all the Marauders and Lily alive and well, living practically together, and with the comeback of Regulus, I'd have thought that there would be more changes and more ANGST, especially within the Black family
4) I desperately wished for at least one Narcissa and Regulus or Narcissa and Sirius interaction, I was deprived of it once again...
October 26, 2022
Just 160k for GoF? It's a miracle!
Some twists I really liked
Some twists I really liked
January 31, 2025
Regulus, Sirius ve Remus ile beraber yaşamaya başlamıştır. Ama hala birbirlerine güvenmezler. Barty Crouch Jr. kaçarken Remus'un asasını aldığı için Remus yeni bir asa almak zorundadır. Beraberce dünya kupasına giderler. Burada Lily, Petunia'nın yanına gider. Ama ortalık karışır ve karanlık işareti yapan asa Remus'a ait olduğu için tutuklanır. James de onunla gider. Lily ipleri eline alır ama gelmeleri 1 hafta sürer. Sonrasında işler biraz daha normale döner ama Amos Diggory evi denetlemeye gelir. Harry okula başlar ve Üç büyücü turnuvasını öğrenir. Burada çeşitli rüyalar görür. Voldemort ve Barty ile ilgili olarak. Baş ağrıları da artmaya başlamıştır. Yeni yıl partisine Cho ile gidemez. Annesi, babası, Remus ve Sirius ile sürekli mektuplaşır. Moody Snape'den haz etmez ve hocaları denetler. Kötü bir şey geliyordur. Krum, Cedric ve Fleur ile yarışan Harry, finale kadar gelir. Ama kupa anahtar çıkar ve Cedric ile mezarda bulur kendini. Burada Barty Cedric için Avada Kedavra büyüsü yapar. Ama Remus'un asası ile yaptığı için Cedric ölmez. Voldemort hayata dönmüştür. Regulus da oradadır. Harry en başta ona ihanet etti zanneder ama Regulus Barty'yi öldürür. Oradan kaçamaz ama Lily, Remus ve Sirius yetişip kurtarır onu. Mutfakta ailesine ait ev cinleri, ikizler ile olan muhabbeti, görünmezlik pelerini ile yaptıkları, kehanet dersleri ve daha niceleri ile güzel bir roman. Keyifle bir solukta okunan bir roman.
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