Did I just read a R.L. Mathewson book???
Let me just start off by adding that I have read The Game Plan.
I really had high hopes for this book. I've been waiting on it for forever (or so it feels like.) And I was sorely disappointed. I read it in one afternoon, literally started at 4 o'clock, and finished it by 7.
I almost feel like I'm missing half the story.
The story starts out with the main characters being 7 years old and meeting for the first time. Then by the first chapter, it's twenty so odd years later, and they're already in a relationship of sorts. They're in a friends with benefits sort of relationship. They both love each other. They know the other loves them. Yet Marybeth, the heroine, refuses to commit, even though they both love each other...or so they say. Because I didn't really see why they loved each other, myself.
Personally, I think the reasons Marybeth had a problem committing was rather childish. It was something that could've been resolved had the heroine just spoken with the hero. yet she didn't, and it stretched out into a very drawn out drama. Did it suck what she had? Yes. Does life go on? Yes.
I don't feel like I got a good enough explanation as to why she was sick. It was said that she suffered, yet there wasn't any proof of the fact.
The two definitely had chemistry. Sex was copious, if not a little much for such a short novel.
But I didn't love it. There was no relationship build up. It was almost as if the entire relationship happened in another book, and this one was a sequel that gave an 'update' on their relationship. The couple fought throughout the book. Chapters would start and the two would state 'I hate you' back and forth to each other, yet you never really figured out what had happened to get them so 'upset.' And the ending just sort of...ended. I didn't see that the two in the epilogue had any sort of relationship with the main couple to warrant what they did for the couple. Why not add that friendship in, prove to me why you'd choose that couple to *****SPOILER!!!!**** Have your baby? That's a huge process, and something that needs to be explained instead of just thrown in there all willy nilly.
As always, I'll keep buying R. L. Mathewson books because they're usually better than this. As for Double Dare, well I I'll let you draw your own conclusion.