*Thank you to NetGalley and Bold Strokes Books Inc. for providing me with this Advanced Reader Copy (ARC) in exchange for an honest review!*
**This review is intended for readers 18 and over**
Sum It Up:
Clichés and clunky sentences abound in this Women Loving Women (WLW) Erotica novel from Renee Roman. Ryan Lewis is every characteristic from the “toxic male CEO” crammed into a tall brunette woman who runs an agency for intimate escorts. Ryan is a workaholic that doesn’t believe in love or getting attached, but wait– here comes character #2 who will magically change her mind! Dani, a self-proclaimed virgin-with-women who is a hardworking hairstylist and “not like other girls” contacts The Agency to schedule an appointment for the “full lesbian experience.” The story begins when Dani unknowingly chooses Ryan as her escort for the evening. BDSM, kink, instalove, and an excessive use of the word “straining” ensues.
Rate the Story: (Spoiler Warning)
As soon as I started this story I felt like I was not a member of the intended audience. This feels like a story written for older folks, or those with an outdated view of how women function in romantic or intimate relationships with each other. Ignoring that this story is viewing “women” in the binary (vs including queer, nonbinary, and trans women), it still doesn’t do a super great job of having the women stand out as anything other than a series of clichés.
The story failed to provide adequate character development for Ryan, our hyper-masculine CEO, leaving her connection to Dani feeling possessive and shallow much like the dynamic in 50 Shades of Gray. The reader is given 2 sides of Ryan: the way she behaves alone or at work and the way she behaves when she’s with Dani. Over the chapters, this flip flop with no real change or integration of growth prevents the reader from believing in the “love” that is claimed by the end. While Dani is granted a decent character arc, she seems to be more of a foil to the characters around her vs. commanding the page or advancing her own storyline.
Rate the Spice: (Explicit descriptions below 18+)
Oh man, this was a grocery-store smut novel at its peak. Imagine every word you dislike when reading erotica, and then imagine them used in every scene throughout the novel. No spoilers, but get excited for lots of slick folds, straining, roaring, buds, nubs, and more of your favorites. There’s even a moment where someone spills their essence– I’ll let you guess where.
Not only did the descriptions feel outdated, but so did the way Roman had her characters interact in intimate scenes. I felt she recycled a lot of stereotypical male descriptions or characteristics and just relabeled them with female genitalia to “convert” the smut from hetero to sapphic. In addition, there was a strong focus on penetrative intimacy vs exploring all the ways that women can pleasure each other without relying solely on a phallic appendage.
Who Should Read This:
Folks who love Harlequin Romance, grocery store smut novels, and ask lesbian couples “who’s the man and who’s the woman?”