2.5 stars
CW: discussions of racism & murder
I don't think this is a bad book. I know a lot of people loved the first one, and I think those people will be satisfied with this one as well. But I was not one of those people.
I continued with the story out of curiosity, and maybe some hope for Alyce and Aurora's relationship, since that was my favorite part of book 1. I thought the first had glaring flaws that got in the way of my enjoyment, but I hoped the second part wouldn't fall into those same traps.
It did.
So, here's my review. I'll first lay out the parts I liked, which do honestly comprise the majority of the book itself. Then I will go into the parts I disliked, which are smaller but *extremely glaring* in a way that managed to ruin the rest of the experience for me.
WARNING: spoilers ahead
What I Liked:
-I think it was an overall improvement in quality from the first. I felt like the writing style improved somewhat, and the side characters were far more likeable. It also didn't feel like the ending came out of nowhere, one of my biggest problems with Malice.
-The Dark Court: I truly loved all the side characters in the Dark Court. I liked that there were more types of creatures other than Vila and Fae, and some of them had some cool character designs. I also liked that most of them were lesbians.
-The Ending: okay, so I feel like people who really loved the first one might *actually* be a bit disappointed in the ending. Not because it's unsatisfying or bad, but because it's not a Happily Ever After. I get that; I myself prefer my romances to end happily. However, in this case, I don't feel like Alyce and Aurora could really make that work. I mentioned that I liked their relationship in Malice, which is true, but I feel like this book REALLY made it apparent that they were incompatable. They spent the majority of the book lying to, arguing with, and betraying each other, and it became apparent that they wanted VERY different things for the future of the world. I think that the way it ended between them was kind of the only way this could work: bittersweet, with some hope, but not after a LONG period of separation and seeing other people.
Now for the things I DIDN'T like:
-Alyce and Aurora's relationship: Yeah, I meant what I said. They were AWFUL to each other for this entire book, and it became increasingly clear that their relationship was NOT meant to be. While I felt like the ending did service to what their relationship had become, I have to admit that what had become of their relationship was very disappointing. People here for a twisted fairy tale *romance* are not going to be happy.
-“Dragon’s Teeth”- please, for the love of god, come up with another expletive. Sure, you can make this one Alyce’s go-to, but EVERY character? Why is Aurora swearing on dragons? What sort of significance would a dragon hold for her? It’s used far too often, and it got old FAST.
-Aurora being let off the hook: Yeah, Aurora and Alyce were both awful, but I feel that the narrative is a bit kinder to Aurora than she deserves. Like, she was very much the oppressor in this "fantasy pseudo-racism" story (we'll get to that), but the book seems to think that that's okay. Sure, she had a reason for being upset with Alyce and the rest of the Court, but the book made a point to emphasize that Aurora's vision for the future of the worlds was CORRECT, even though it was borne of privilege and naivety. She wanted a world where everything was light and pretty, where everyone could just GET ALONG, as if that could magically fix centuries of opression. And she was RIGHT. In the end, she is made queen of the Fae and Briar (aka the land that had become home to the Dark creatures who were tortured and ostracized from everywhere else), and everyone just becomes HAPPY with it. I'm sorry, but I don't think the blonde-haired-blue-eyed fae-touched princess who wants everyone to join hands and sing together has a proper enough grasp on the oppression of the Dark creatures to RULE them. But the narrative kind of just glosses over all of that because *at least she's not killing people.* A weird line to draw given how the ending of the last book was explicitly a wish-fulfillment fantasy of the author killing all the people who she felt wronged her in real life.
And the kicker:
-Regan: This series has a problem with women of color. I want to emphasize that I, myself, am white, and do not have intimate knowledge of racism that people who have actually experienced it do, and I do not want to talk over any of them. However, the author of this book is ALSO a white woman, as is most of the fandom in my experience, so I feel that I should bring attention to racism where it exists in my own community. And OH BOY does it exist in my community!
I feel like there's a problem among white queer people where we have dealt with a lot of internalized homophobia, particularly when raised by conservative families, so when we finally break free of that and come into our own as an openly queer person, we kind of get the sense that "WE DID IT!" That the homophobia we learned from our families was the only thing we needed to overcome and we did so by being queer, while completely ignoring the fact that our conservative families likely ALSO instilled in us some SERIOUS internalized *racism.*
This has been coming up more often in the world of queer literature, but not nearly as often as it should, and I think that this book is a good example of that. Now I’m not saying that the author did anything intentionally (that’s why it’s INTERNALIZED) or that she or anyone who enjoys these books should be cancelled, but it ought to be pointed out.
Alright, back to the point. In my observations (correct me if I’m wrong), there are only TWO characters in these books who can be described as people of color (i.e. being described as having dark HUMAN skin): Laurel from Malice, who had dark black skin, and Regan from Misrule, who had rich brown skin. The rest of the human-appearing characters are white. And that’s not the only thing Laurel and Regan had in common.
Laurel was basically Alyce’s only friend before Aurora. She was the only Grace to be kind to her, and was seen as good for the entire book, until she betrayed Alyce, prompting Alyce to very brutally and very PERSONALLY murder her. When she went on her murder spree at the end of Malice, Laurel was her first victim, and her murder was one of the most vividly described. It was clearly one to be remembered. In Misrule, Alyce doesn’t really offer her any sympathy, even when it was revealed that she was likely lying about the betrayal to SAVE Alyce. Alyce just sadly blames her for her own death and moves on.
Regan was Alyce’s first friend post-Aurora, and she remained her closest friend until Aurora woke up. She was her only Vila friend, and even a possible love interest at times, until she was revealed to have “betrayed” Alyce (though in a pretty tame and meaningless way in the face of Aurora’s betrayal). After that, she starts attacking human forces who MAY have been on the Dark Court’s side (but really it was about Aurora) rather than siding with the humans, and she overexerts herself and dies. Alyce makes no effort to save her, even though there really wasn’t a reason why she couldn’t (she fell into water. Alyce is magic, why couldn’t she just go get her??). In true leftist-Marvel-villain fashion, Regan is just TOO mad at her oppressors, and so she has no place in the happy friendship world Aurora wants.
In essence, both Laurel and Reagan started out as good guys, before proving themselves to be EVIL (aka getting in the way of Alyce and Aurora’s relationship), and so they had to be killed. That is a WEIRD thing to do to your only two characters of color.
Regan’s whole Marvel-villain arc was bad enough, especially because she didn’t really seem any less redeemable than the other members of the court (it’s not HER fault Aurora was being cagey and LITERALLY INTENTIONALLY SENT THEM INTO A DEATH TRAP), and the whole message of her being too traumatized by racism to exist in the happy world of compromises the two white girls set up wasn’t helping this book’s case. But I had ALREADY noted the treatment of Laurel as potentially racist. This just hammered it in.
To me, it was concerningly evident that there was a double standard in these books: white characters like Alyce, Aurora, and Derick can betray each other, ally with the Fae, cause the deaths of close friends, lead each other into death traps, and COMMIT GENOCIDE, but god forbid a well-meaning woman of color gets in Alyce’s way.
And that fact made it impossible for me to truly enjoy this book.