Losing momentum
Anna, Jared and crew are hunkered at his house. Everyone is a little stir crazy after being shut in for 3 weeks after the missiles. Except for Stewart. He's still running a fever. And then just as they make the decision to start checking for fallout he changes. Sort of.
Spoilers ahead.
So, somehow, while everything is escalating, the story is losing momentum. It's an odd conundrum. Mutants are mutating. They're trying to fortify the house. They're communicating with Sten's and Harry's groups. And nothing makes sense. Jared wants to go look for Kate still. But why? They have radios, they're able to communicate. Why not ask around? Ask communities to let her know if they pass through. Especially as there's roving gangs, packs of various types of mutants, and other challenges. And they have people they need to protect. And I still don't know why they haven't joined one of the communities! They have kids and elderly. Other than the interesting story line involving Stewart, the rest is starting to become repetitive. They make bad choices, something bad happens, they go back home. The POV shifted from mostly Anna's to almost completely Jared's. His head doesn't match his previous personality. I know events like this are going to change people. But he starts beating his chest and calling Anna his. She is backing down and losing her independent spirit. She makes bad calls and puts others in danger on whims. The first book was exciting, it built slowly but expertly. People ignoring the obvious, questioning the news, the authority chain breakdown as things go FUBAR- all what you'd expect, and told with a humorous angle. I think my favorite characters are Jimmy Don, Violet and Stewart. If the story only focused on them from here on it would be about perfect. I think that scene with Grace just sort of ruined it for me. Trigger warnings for the aftermath of an earthquake in an abandoned nursing home being held together by 1 middle aged woman taking care of about 20 elderly all alone. The caretaker is mangled by a fallen beam and dies. Slowly. And Anna sleeps or ignores most of it. Doesn't check on the other elderly. Doesn't try to comfort Grace, even as she's holding out her hands for comfort, until about 10 hours afterwards and Grace is gasping her last. Shock might explain some of it, even unfamiliarity with Grace, but she tried taking care of others they'd found- it's how they assembled their group.