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Blinded by Prejudice: A Pride and Prejudice Variation

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Into what kind of hell had I emerged from under those ruins?

ELIZABETH BENNET ANTICIPATED NOTHING MORE than a pleasant day among friends and relations when the pleasure trip to the ruins of Bodden chapel commenced. But what began as mere diversion turns frightening when the walls of the ancient church tumble down around them, endangering lives, demolishing pride and propriety, and bringing a hero into focus.

AS THE EARTH BEGINS TO TREMBLE, Fitzwilliam Darcy sees Elizabeth Bennet is in mortal danger and acts on instinct to save her. But when the dust settles, there are unforeseen consequences to his actions, including a serious injury to his eyesight.

I could not be married to a man who could need me the rest of his life, but never love me.

BOUND TOGETHER under the most strained circumstances, Darcy and Elizabeth embark on a future neither one of them saw coming. Time can heal all wounds but will time allow them to see through hearts made clear and eyes no longer blinded by prejudice?

249 pages, Kindle Edition

First published September 20, 2021

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KaraLynne Mackrory

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KaraLynne is an amazing mother who never makes mistakes, never gets upset with her children and never ever has a dirty house. Ever. She always has her dishes done and the floors spotless and dinner is always prepared and ready on time. Her kids are always clean, polite, respectful and loving, especially to each other. She never gets irritated with her husband when he doesn’t turn his socks right side out for the laundry and they always agree on everything. She delights in nothing else but to serve her family and never wants or needs time for herself. She takes great care to shower every day and put make up on so that she is always beautiful and presentable. She never wears her pajamas all day or for days in a row and she is the epitome of womanhood. Most of all, she has a great sense of humor and loves to write.

Although, admittedly a Darcy addict, she enjoys many things, such as: Mr. Knightly, Edmund Bertram, Captain Wentworth, Mr. Tilney and John Thornton. She is happily married to her own Mr. Darcy and together they share the insanity inducing responsibility of raising 4 children.

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2,687 reviews201 followers
September 21, 2021
If you have read the other reviews besides reading the author's blurb you have to realize that this story is very heavy on angst. I felt the tension along with our characters.

You are immediately in Elizabeth's mind as she and Darcy are buried in the sodden earth and wall of Bodden Chapel which collapsed on top of them. The Chapel was already in ruins. Recent rains bring that mudslide which then buries ODC. Only Elizabeth was really in danger but as Darcy sees the catastrophe about to hit her he shoves Caroline out of the way and throws his body on Elizabeth. We spend some time buried with them but only reading Elizabeth's thoughts. Elizabeth comes to appreciate Darcy's warmth and his embrace of her helping to somewhat relieve her broken ribs. Only later, when they are rescued, do they realize that Darcy's injuries include blindness.

Because of their being buried together (for over a day) they are expected to marry. Elizabeth knows this and part of her worries when Darcy does not show up to ask her (and her father) for her hand immediately. As with many of the misunderstandings between this couple Elizabeth learns that Darcy suffers migraines with the injury and was instructed by the doctor to rest...not to travel due to the jolting of a carriage ride. He has days spent in bed or resting. Elizabeth has problems interpreting his actions and even his words (some overheard due to eavesdropping). She seems to place the most negative meaning on it all. A decision is made that she and Jane will visit Netherfield rather than Bingley and Darcy attempting to come to Longbourn to help relieve some of Darcy's desire to "court" her.

There are definitely some sweet moments between them. Darcy finds a curl at her neckline that he likes to caress...often. He puts out his hand and Elizabeth places hers there and so they have that sense of touch playing on their emotions.

Mr. Bennet uses a code (which is easy for the reader to figure out) and Darcy seems to have an amusing relationship with the man as they banter about a sport...which is lost to Darcy due to his blindness...or is it?

There is a side thread which I am almost laughing about I type this. Caroline Bingley was thrown into a certain man's arms as Darcy threw himself at Elizabeth that day. The resulting entanglement
...well, I'll leave you to discover that bit.

The tension in this story never lets up until almost the end. Elizabeth even comes to believe that Darcy plans to break their engagement. She does meet the Colonel and Georgiana and becomes friends with them. The Colonel has a lot to say to Darcy about the situation and even realizes Elizabeth's feeling before she is willing to share them.

This was an excellent story IMHO but if you don't like angst you will probably not want to read this.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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1,337 reviews125 followers
October 25, 2025
Those in love are blind with open eyes. ~ English proverb

“Blinded by Prejudice” opens with a startling scenario:
I woke with a gasp, my chest burning for air. Air that was denied to me. Tentatively my tongue edged out to slake the dust that coated my lips, chapped and bruised as they felt.

Elizabeth Bennet has awakened and found herself buried alive beneath a collapsed wall of the ruins of an ancient chapel. Then she discovers a source of heat on top of her.

Drifting in and out of consciousness, she eventually remembers the sightseeing journey to Bodden Chapel in company with Charles and Caroline Bingley, Fitzwilliam Darcy, William Collins, and her sister, Jane. Recent rains had weakened the slope holding the ruins. When the danger appeared, Darcy had shoved Miss Bingley to safety and fallen on top of Elizabeth, protecting her with his body. Now she realizes the heat source is Darcy, injured and unconscious, trapped with her under the rubble.

The author leaves her readers there, buried with Elizabeth and Darcy, living Elizabeth’s thoughts through the long night awaiting rescue in the daylight.

Elizabeth’s most serious injury is broken ribs. Darcy has been hit in the head by a falling stone. He suffers megrims and blindness … perhaps temporary; perhaps permanent. Only time will tell.

I have not lost my sight, and yet am blind … ~ Joshua Cooke

In the Regency, a young woman could not spend a night with a man without suffering a ruined reputation. Elizabeth knows she must marry Darcy; she is thankful he is willing to marry.

As a departure from most cases of compromise, Mr. Bennet agrees to allow a delay before the marriage to give Darcy and Elizabeth time to heal. So, rather than a Forced Marriage Scenario, this book is a Forced Courtship Scenario. I enjoyed this plot difference.

Since Darcy’s doctor advises no travel to avoid additional brain injuries, Elizabeth visits him at Netherfield Park. The story is told by Elizabeth, so we don’t know Darcy’s thought process, but we see rumination after rumination plague Elizabeth.

Love may be blind, but his ears are monstrous keen. ~ Minna Thomas Antrim

We know that “eavesdroppers never hear anything good” and that is especially true when they hear only part of a conversation. Elizabeth becomes convinced Darcy intends to break their engagement. Which of the two is the blindest? Darcy, blinded by a falling stone, or Elizabeth, blinded by her prejudices?

I was amused by the coded messages between Darcy and Papa Bennet. I have to admit — I figured out the “code” long before Elizabeth. And she’s supposed to be so smart!

I also loved the variation to the Caroline Bingley story.

Lady Catherine never does arrive to make her sentiments known but, frankly, I didn’t miss her.

KaraLynne Mackrory has scored another 5 Stars with “Blinded by Prejudice” — I couldn’t possibly rate it lower!

Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind:
~ William Shakespeare


I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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2,911 reviews1 follower
October 10, 2021
This is a book that relies upon an accident leading to the compromising of four characters. I have previously questioned the over use of the compromise trope by authors. Was it really as absurd that it could force virtual strangers to marry - that seems incredibly reckless. And what about accidents? There is a world of difference between being discovered in a closed room alone and falling down a hill in the view of your peers and your servants. And since a servant couldn't compromise a person of the gentle class (ie. the evil duke never has to marry the servant girl he ruined) wouldn't you just tie yourself to a footman or companion. And obviously you could not compromise or be compromised by a married person. So I really find these tropes to be absurd.
I really feel compromise was meant to force someone like Willoughby to marry Col Brandon's ward not make a gentleman decide if he should rescue an injured woman or leave her in peril until he could return with several women and some married men

Despite my dislike of this trope it was very good story. It was mostly error free and the writing was excellent. I also liked how it was from a single POV.

There was one part that left me cold and since it involves major plots twists I will hide it behind a spoiler

Still a very good book and quite readable.

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Author 5 books399 followers
October 28, 2021
What if Mr. Darcy was blinded while saving Elizabeth’s life and they were trapped in a cave in? Now, doesn’t that change up things for Jane Austen’s most famous love story? I’ve enjoyed KaraLynne Mackrory’s variations in the past for the layered characters and engaging plot and so was eager to settle in for this latest.

Blindness is both a physical challenge for Mr. Darcy as he must learn to negotiate his life and his new challenge of winning Elizabeth’s heart without his sight. It is also a metaphor that the reader sees right away when it comes to Elizabeth’s stubborn adherence that she has Darcy pegged to a tee and resents that she is being forced into marriage with such an arrogant man- an arrogant man who had a look of fear and desperation when he took the brunt of the falling building in her place, who treated her tenderly when she was terrified while they were trapped, who was gracious in the face of her rudeness and in spite of his circumstances.

It was almost painful at times seeing Elizabeth misread and assume Darcy’s expressions, words, and motives and struggle against the forced engagement that was caused by them spending the night together under the rubble of the ruins. But, her raw emotions and gradual coming to terms in this first person narrated book were sprinkled with amusing scenes with the other characters, tender moments with her sister Jane, and swoonworthy times when Mr. Darcy was enchanting as he worked to change her feelings about him. And, to be fair to the young lady, Darcy had not shown up well before the accident at the ruins. He really did have to live down what he set in motion even though he had an epiphany through that long night when they were trapped.

One of the adorable things about variations is how authors can alter the storyline so that something utterly surprising comes up it. There is a couple in this one brought together under the same circumstances that forced Darcy and Elizabeth together and I must have giggled so many times over this unlikely pairing and their antics. There is also the friendship that builds up between Elizabeth’s father and Darcy so that they share a private joke and even the beginnings of a father-son relationship that disconcerts Elizabeth and is one of the evidences that she is forced to reassess her prejudice against Darcy.

This is a gently-paced, slow burn sweet forced romance scenario paired with steady character growth. Those who enjoy light Regency era courtship set against the Jane Austen world should give this a go.

My thanks to Quills and Quartos for providing a print copy of the book to be read in exchange for an honest review.
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1,224 reviews60 followers
April 21, 2023
4/4.5*

Written all in first person, the reader has a front seat to all of Elizabeth's thoughts and feelings. I very much enjoyed the writing and feel the author did a nice job of capturing the conflict and confusion Elizabeth feels throughout almost the whole story.

We open with the direct result of a mudslide near a ruin, which Elizabeth and consequently Darcy (as he tried desperately to save her) are trapped under. Both are injured and in and out of consciousness for a day and a half. It is only later, after their rescue Darcy's injury is known and far later than that, the full consequences have to be faced.
ODC are not the only ones affected. There is another couple severely altered due to the accident. An interesting take on those characters!

We witness E process so many stages of feelings and experiences as she spends time with Darcy during his recuperation. All the while, still believing him a proud haughty man and not finding her 'tempting'. She meets Miss Darcy and Col. F, who is way too perceptive. Mr. B also has an oar - or should I say fishing rod- in to help muddy the waters between ODC.
Mrs. B and the youngest daughters were sent to London to assist (get her away) with E's healing and the militia only make an appearance in the story after the women's return to Longbourn. Mr. Wickham make's a brief appearance, but his is the catalyst that starts the beginning of the end (finally- in my personal opinion).

I would have given this 5 whole stars, but personally I felt there was something lacking when it came time to explain away the Darcy conundrum. The story is mainly based on Elizabeth's conflict of falling in love with a man she feels she can't trust.

His behavior while blind was softer and much warmer than before the incident. His apology and explanation were sincere, but considering we spent the whole of the book wondering when and how the clarity was going to be revealed, it fell short. As a reader who was swept up with E's experiences and emotions, I would have preferred it to have gone a little deeper.
I guess that is how well the book was written! ;)

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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1,333 reviews78 followers
August 7, 2023
“There are none so blind as those who will not see.”
Through most of this very good story, that quote kept coming to mind. It has a scripture origin in Jeremiah 5:21, but Jonathan Swift paraphrased it as I noted above in “Polite Conversation”.

The story opens with a group excursion to explore the ruins of an old chapel. There is a landslide and Elizabeth awakens in the dark with an unconscious Darcy laying prone on top of her. They both go in and out of consciousness due to injuries and pain. Elizabeth has broken ribs, and Darcy has become blind due to a head injury. Inevitably, the circumstances of their overnight experience buried alone together in the rubble leads to them being forced to marry. Elizabeth is refreshingly unopposed and resigned to this outcome, recognizing the reality of their situation as being the proper thing to do to save their reputations. That’s where her good reason ends, and her willfully blind prejudice blossoms as she awaits Darcy’s offer. Will he come? Ordered to refrain from traveling, Darcy remains at Netherfield recovering. His prognosis isn’t hopeless, however, and despite experiencing severe megrims and blindness, his physician has advised it’s likely his vision will return when his head injury is healed.

He eventually makes his way to Longbourn, and hoping to “see” his bride on their wedding day, they delay setting a date for the future event. This decision affords an opportunity to get to know one another better. Because Darcy cannot travel, Elizabeth and Jane travel to Netherfield most days. She begins to see a different side to the Darcy who insulted her at the Meryton Assembly and argued with her at Netherfield when Jane was ill. However….

“If my view of Mr Darcy changed, if I could not dislike him as I once did, then I was at risk of greater agony. My heart might be touched, and I might lose it to affection for him. God forbid! Worse, I might come to love him. I must prevent it from happening.”—quote from book

Darcy is wonderful in this story, as are Mr. Bennet and Colonel Fitzwilliam. Bingley too, as he immediately steps up to take command of the situation following the landslide, and enforcing his brotherly command with Caroline. We get some chuckles from her situation, since she too was affected by the landslide. That was certainly different!

There are some very endearing moments that will touch your heart. I especially was tickled when Darcy speaks to Elizabeth about her curl. Swoon worthiness at its best! Here’s a glimpse.

“This little minx has been a source of torture for me for a very long time, Elizabeth. You tend to worry it when you are nervous or thinking. It always made me wish to worry it too.”—quote from book

On a personal note, my grandmother and one of her sisters was blind. I was always amazed by and proud of their determination and bravery living in a darkened world. My grandmother raised five children. There is a poignant scene in the book where Elizabeth blindfolds herself while dressing one morning in an attempt to experience Darcy’s situation. I tried this once myself when I was young. Like Elizabeth discovered, it’s not as easy as one might think.

I enjoyed this story very much. It leans a bit heavy on the narrative side for the first half of the book, but is very well written from Elizabeth’s self-warring, first-person point of view. Well done, and I highly recommend it.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

August 6, 2023 - Audiobook
Stevie Zimmerman is amazing as always. Insert as many positive adjectives here as you want and they’ll all be well deserved.
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340 reviews25 followers
July 8, 2022
I am always super excited to see a new book by KaraLynne Mackrory, because when she writes a good JAFF (Haunting Mr Darcy; Beswitched; Yours Forevermore, Darcy) it's really good. Unfortunately though, when she writes a bad JAFF, it's pretty bad.

Initially, I was excited by the premise. The juxtaposition of Elizabeth's metaphorical blindness contrasted with Darcy's literal blindness, was genius. That he would be more clear-sighted than Elizabeth, despite not being able to see, felt true to their characters and clever.

While I tend to dislike a first person narrative, especially in regency literature, the beginning of the book where Darcy and Elizabeth are trapped together under rubble from a landslide was okay.

There were still some issues - for example, while an unbetrothed male and female did not usually touch without gloves or have to be so close together, to be so missish about depending on another human being for warmth and comfort during a life threatening event, where you are not even sure if there is enough oxygen, felt over the top and a little ridiculous.

In a crisis, societal norms and manners fall away under a more fundamental human need to assist one another. Except in Lizzy's case, apparently. She worries more about having to be so close to Darcy than about whether he will survive with such a terrible head wound, or what injuries she herself has sustained, or if there is enough air to breathe. She is so obsessed with her own feelings, she doesn't even notice the poor man cannot see.

As the story goes on, Elizabeth's selfishness becomes utterly infuriating. She never asks how Darcy feels, because she is too busy being irrationally angry with him over her own attraction. And bearing in mind all she knows of him at this point is that he (apparently) didn't find her handsome, and yet he has saved her life and been blinded for it, it felt utterly unbelievable that she would continue to hold such a stupid grudge. I couldn't understand why Darcy even liked her.

The selfishness of her character is matched only by her stupidity, so that at the end of the book, when Darcy says to Colonel Fitzwilliam "She may be too quick for you!", I actually laughed.

An example of her self involvement and stupidity:
"His actions had saved my life and I was not even allowed to express my thanks. For all he had lost on my behalf, he had not lost his arrogance. Could he not recognise how awful it was to accept that my very life was owed to a man I disliked? He must know how difficult it was for me to be beholden in such a way."

Of course he does, that's why he said "I do not want your gratitude" because he didn't want you to feel beholden to him, but fine, decide he was just arbitrarily refusing to allow you to speak, and fire up at him anyway.

She continues:
"Although I was grateful, I could not help but feel that it cost me every bit as much as it had cost him."

Is she for real?!?
He has lost his SIGHT.

At this point she believes he dislikes her as much as she dislikes him, and yet he has offered marriage to save her reputation. And it's not even an equal cost here either, since even if they did both dislike their future partner, she at least will be married to a man of amazing wealth and gain security for herself and her family, while he obtains nothing but a wife who hates him, no wealth or connections, and possibly derision from those of his social circle.

Plus did I mention he's LOST HIS SIGHT?! His entire life has changed, his independence is drastically altered, things he loves to do like reading and riding and hunting and shooting, are all gone. He cannot even independently write letters of business any longer.
But sure, it cost her every bit as much as it cost him!

The tragedy and enormity of losing one's sight is barely touched on. Elizabeth mostly just feels 'grateful', because she can stare at him without him knowing, grr.

There is one part of the story where I almost liked her, where she actually tries to imagine what it would be like to be suddenly blind and what he must be going through, but then again, it is almost immediately countered by her own ignorant assumptions that it would be more bearable than what she just went through in tying a scarf over her eyes, because he has a valet and servants to help him, so his life would be easier. And the fact that she knew she could rip the scarf off at any point and therefore has no real concept of the terror Darcy must feel not being able to end the 'game' of being blind whenever it suits him, doesn't even occur to her.

When Darcy is a little withdrawn and moody, she makes it all about herself. The man has lost his sight, suffers terrible migraines, is engaged to a woman who doesn't love him, but isn't allowed to be out of spirits sometimes without her having a temper tantrum to her father about his 'mercurial nature'.

One of the most annoying instances of her stupidity was when Elizabeth overheard a conversation, misunderstood it, and made it all about herself. Even though she is immediately told the real topic of conversation, she continues to believe her own version of events for days afterwards, despite overwhelming evidence to the contrary, and makes herself and Darcy miserable over it. I could happily have slapped her.

Throughout their courtship, Elizabeth's father speaks in 'code' with Darcy that she cannot understand, because apparently she has never even heard of a metaphor...
Mr Bennet tells Darcy 'to catch his fish, he should reel her in with patience' or some such thing, but Elizabeth is sooo confused by this out-of-the-blue reference to fishing, it was as though she had never read a book, or a poem, or heard human speech before in her life.
In my opinion, the metaphor wasn't clever enough to make her lack of understanding anything but brainless.

Bluebells in the Mourning had a version of Darcy I absolutely hated, this book has a version of Elizabeth I hate. And if I am made to hate the characters, it is impossible for me to care what happens to them, which makes the book a trial to get through.

I give it two stars for the idea, but I did not enjoy this one at all.
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229 reviews26 followers
September 24, 2021
Elizabeth misunderstood things to the point of stupidity. It was hard to like her. But, overall, the story was interesting.
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997 reviews345 followers
April 2, 2022
Where Hearts and Eyes Learn to See the Truth

Rating: 5 out of 5 stars

Source: Gift from Publisher


TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation

TIME FRAME: Begins just after Jane and Elizabeth’s stay at Netherfield

SYNOPSIS: While exploring some ancient ruins a terrifying incident leaves some characters injured, visually impaired, and obligated to marry. Elizabeth Bennet must resign herself to a future of being married to a man who she formerly despised. But when she sees a different side of him emerge, she becomes even more apprehensive about her ability to endure her fate…

WHAT I LOVED:

- Elizabeth POV: I loved that this story was in first-person point-of-view! Elizabeth’s experiences, thoughts, and emotions were so remarkably vivid and tangible. To feel her trauma when trapped underneath the ruins, witness the gamut of emotions she experiences when interacting with Mr. Darcy, and understand her fears of risking her heart and having it broken was powerful and gripping. I felt myself immersed in this story, and my heart and mind were deeply affected by all that Elizabeth was experiencing.

- Mr. Darcy: What a hero. I absolutely adored this portrayal of Mr. Darcy. I loved his supreme gentleness and vulnerability. He stole my heart with his selfless concern and sincere attentions towards Elizabeth. His ability to cope with all the hardships he was going through and not be in a morose, irritable, or extremely vexed was most admirable. I loved witnessing his experiences through trying times, and I felt my own ardent love and admiration for his character flourish in this novel. And his tentative and tender courting of Elizabeth is utterly swoon-worthy.

- Heightened Senses: Similar to Speechless by Jessie Lewis, readers see how when Mr. Darcy loses one of his senses, he utilizes other senses to a larger extent. In this story Mr. Darcy may seem to be much more verbose and physically demonstrative than normal. It was revealing to see this reserved man seize other modes of interacting and understanding the people around him.

- Colonel Fitzwilliam: I loved everything our dear colonel did in this story. How he protected and counseled his cousin, how he took determined action to abolish the harm that one nefarious individual could cause, and how he closely scrutinized Elizabeth and had the uncanny ability to know all that she didn’t want to reveal. But best was seeing his relationship with Elizabeth develop, and how she was quick to feel a rapport with him and liken him to a sibling.

- Blindness Theme: What brilliance. The theme of blindness was so cleverly woven into this story in numerous ways. There is more than one character who is blind, and there is more than one type of blindness brought up. I thoroughly enjoyed how Ms. Mackrory united this theme in her story and how her characters came to understand many different truths with their own eyes and hearts in the end.

-Miss Bingley and Mr. Bennet: I loved the humor infused with these characters. Miss Bingley finds herself in a most unusual (and for her – repugnant) situation, yet in the end it seemed to be oddly perfect! Lol! Also, I loved Mr. Bennet’s relationship with Mr. Darcy and his chosen use of metaphor. It was adorable to see them have their own code and inside joke of sorts.

WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:

Nothing, it felt perfect.

CONCLUSION:

With Blinded by Prejudice KaraLynne Mackrory once again delivers a wonderfully arresting and compelling tale that is full of intense emotions, evocative prose, and thoughtful understanding. Readers who enjoy unique premises, forced marriage situations, and emotionally-wrought relationships between Elizabeth and Darcy will “clearly see” why I feel this Pride and Prejudice variation is most deserving of praise.

Austenesque Reviews

899 reviews70 followers
December 11, 2021

My Rating: 3.5*

"I had the power of sight, yet he saw more than I." (quote from the book)

This is a well written and unique variation. I was anticipating this novel so much, as I do love Ms. Mackrory's novels, especially 'Yours Forevermore, Darcy', I bought the paperback. I don't regret buying it, but I found this story did not 'spark joy' in me.

"He was like a sun in this dark hole. His whispered, calm, soothing words served only to pull me further into the desire for his rays." (quote from the book)

I realize the seriousness of the subject matter and the angst level were high, but I could not connect with this version of Elizabeth Bennet. Maybe her stubbornness went on for too long, or that she continued to be a bit too 'dense' at times. I wanted to shake her...obviously, I was engaged, however, it was easy for me to put the book down and only read a chapter or two when I did pick it up again.

"The fog had taken hold of me, the haze closing my eyes and submerging me in inky darkness." (quote from the book)

There are some very humorous moments in this novel that I laughed at along with some very tender ones...especially regarding Mr. Darcy. Mr. Bingley was a delightful surprise, and I did enjoy how he was portrayed.

"I felt Mr. Darcy was drinking every word from the cup of my lips and living off the life source. It made me uncommonly stupid in my conversation." (quote from the book)

I know I go against the norm here so please read other reviews...many others have loved it.
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1,736 reviews133 followers
August 17, 2021
“There’s none so blind as those who will not listen.” –Neil Gaiman, American Gods

Rating: Mostly clean but PG17 due to adult themes and discussions, trigger warning for those who are claustrophobic. 29 Chapters + Epilogue. Angst Level: medium-to-high due to drama as ODC found themselves in a deadly situation, delayed rescue attempts, lovers’ angst, compromise for more than one couple, and those infuriating misunderstandings. GRRR! Source: ARC via BookSprout 8-2-21

SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** spoilers *** [proposed publication Sept 20, 2021]

The writing was beautifully done and felt so Regency. The author placed great importance on demonstrating the comportment and deportment expected of couples within the era. I could really feel the restrictions of the times. They would have driven me insane.

“There are two ways to be fooled. One is to believe what isn’t true; the other is to refuse to believe what is true.” –Soren Kierkegaard

We were in the head of Elizabeth Bennet the whole time. Her POV was not a pleasant place to be for me because of one thing… well, actually more than one thing. For one, Elizabeth Bennet was the most stubborn, misguided, clueless person I’ve ever seen. Obstinate, headstrong, and foolish were next in the lineup of grievances I had against her. I did not like this characterization of Elizabeth one bit. I’m fairly positive that the title was for her and her alone. She saw life through her own lens and no one could change her perception of how things were. She hated Fitzwilliam Darcy with a passion and she knew just how he was. She knew what she knew and she knew best.

“I’ve gotten really hot since you went blind.” –John Green, The Fault in Our Stars

Perhaps this was closer to Austen’s characterization than I realized. However, she hadn’t met Wickham yet so she hadn’t heard his sob story. Charles was still with them and had not been whisked away to London to abandon Jane. So, what was the deal? He called her tolerable and she thought he disdained the citizens of Meryton and her family. That’s it? That was enough to hate someone with a passion bordering on psychotic. I was seriously wondering about her sensibilities.

“Had I been in love, I could not have been more wretchedly blind. But vanity, not love, has been my folly.” –Jane Austen Pride and Prejudice
Her emotions ran hot and cold for most of the story. I wanted more D&E quality time. Darcy was everything you could ask for and she wasn’t having any part of it. No, in her mind it was all wrong. He was the worst. I HATE that. I wanted to pull my hair out… actually, I wanted to pull her hair out. Woman, what’s your problem?

“If love is blind, then maybe a blind person that loves has a greater understanding of it.” –Criss Jami, Salomé: In Every Inch In Every Mile

Recommendation: If you love angst, this story is full of it. If you love a strong Darcy, he is all that and more. If you want a happy ever after, you’ll have it but you have to wait for it. If you enjoy watching Caroline be outrageous… OMG! This was hilarious. You’ve got to read it just to see where her proclivities lie. Then we have Mr. Collins… I can’t say… OMG! Hilarious!
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1,432 reviews
June 14, 2022
P&P told again

P&P told again except Darcy’s role and Lizzy’s role are often reversed.

SPOILERS FOLLOW


Lizzy and Darcy are trapped together in a cave-in and barely survive. The role reversal starts after Lizzy takes a large swig of Darcy’s brandy from a flask. This is the symbolic beginning of the role reversal. As we all know, Darcy usually drinks copious amounts of brandy in JAFF tales. Darcy is blind which gives him the role of powerless that Lizzy usually has, being a Regency era female.

Lizzy begins to start to have guilty thoughts for no good reason, misunderstands everything around her like Darcy usually does and goes in and out of depression like Darcy usually does.

Watching how the author portray Our Dear Couple with switched roles is so very entertaining. The colonel is there to help explain things to Lizzy like a brother would like he usually explains things to Darcy, like a brother.

All in all I thought the role reversal was handled brilliantly. Being a female Lizzy couldn’t tale the role of solving all the problems but she had most of the emotional angst Darcy usually dies and she. Ould help Darcy through his blindness.

Very original, very fun.
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1,680 reviews79 followers
September 20, 2021
This is yet another wonderful Pride and Prejudice variation from the immensely talented Ms. Mackrory.

When the Netherfield party plus Jane and Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Collins all go to view the ruins of an ancient stone chapel near Netherfield and Longbourn, their timing is disastrous. Elizabeth is too close as the walls unexpectedly begin to shake and crumble, and Mr. Darcy reacts quickly to protect her. They both survive but are trapped and injured in a small, black, cave-like pocket underneath the rubble. His tender, reassuring manner during their imprisonment surprises Elizabeth and soothes her understandable panic.

Searchers are unable to get them out until the next day, and it's discovered that Mr. Darcy has been literally struck blind from a blow he took to his head. This doesn't deter him from insisting he speak with Elizabeth's father immediately to assure him that he will do the honorable thing and marry her. Since Elizabeth is dealing with her own recovery from injuries she sustained, she doesn't immediately grasp that her future is irrevocably set.

Just as in Jane Austen's classic novel, this story is limited to Elizabeth's point of view. She knows Darcy saved her and feels compassion for his condition, but she resents having her marital choice taken from her, especially when she's betrothed to a man she previously loathed. She isn't sure how she feels about him now - his actions at the ruins and his subsequent behavior are opposite of what she would have expected, but what if he should revert to his haughty manner? And although there is hope that he will regain his sight, what kind of life will they have together if he doesn't?

Elizabeth's reactions are believable, considering her unsettling experience. The scenes between her and Darcy build sizzling chemistry together - as this author's books always do.

Secondary characters are consistent with what one might expect as they face these circumstances. With Mr. Darcy incapacitated, Mr. Bingley is forced into an uncustomary leadership role. Colonel Fitzwilliam brings Georgiana to Netherfield once they get news of Darcy's condition and disconcerts his cousin's betrothed with his close scrutiny. Mrs. Bennet is ecstatic that Elizabeth has caught such a rich husband but incapable of understanding that blindness does not affect his intellect or his hearing.

Additionally, the reader is treated to a delightful secondary storyline: Caroline Bingley and Mr. Collins are another couple who must marry due to events at the ruins. While I've read stories with this particular pairing before, Ms. Mackrory puts a unique spin on it that suits these characters perfectly.

This book has just the right blend of angst, romance, and humor, and it's beautifully written. Content is clean.

Highly recommend!

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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234 reviews3 followers
October 3, 2023
Rating: 3.5 Stars

One might say that an excursion to a chapel went terribly wrong in their case. Darcy and Elizabeth got buried alive under the ruins of Bodden Chapel. While she had sustained broken ribs, Darcy lost his sight due to a head injury. ODC is trapped through the night in their small 'coffin', and that is why both are kind of forced to marry. Though they don't marry right away, they are courting and it doesn't feel like a forced marriage. Liked that.

I know how serious this subject is, my godmother is partially blind and also broken ribs how hurtful that can be, but I didn't liked Elizabeth in this that much. Yes, Elizabeth is stubborn in canon, but in this work.. in my opinion it was already too much. Darcy's mood changed sometimes and wasn't always talkative and open like after the accident. People needed to reminded what happened to him that she sees reason like 'Oh yeah right. Understandable that his mood is sometimes changing.'

However I couldn't put it down because I loved this portrayal of Darcy. Darcy's teasing or the Colonel's was top and often laughed out loud!And how Darcy adapted himself quite quickly in being blind. The tenderness etc.. It was beautiful!

I really must say what she did to Caroline and Collins was so fun!! Would've loved hearing more about them.

Mr. Bennet and Darcy's growing friendship was also great and their inside jokes. Poor Lizzy.

It was a good book, I don't regret buying the audiobook because I love Stevie Zimmermann and like always she did an excellent job at narrating.

-Content is Clean (kissing, nothing more) and story contains a bit of angst though.



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573 reviews11 followers
October 10, 2021
4.5*

I really enjoyed reading this well written and compelling take centred around a forced marriage scenario involving Darcy and Elizabeth.

With some misconceptions and misunderstandings adding the necessary punch of angst,I highly recommend this tale.
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277 reviews13 followers
October 14, 2021
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Blinded by Prejudice has one of the most powerful and gripping beginnings I’ve ever seen in a book. Written in the first person, this book immediately transports the reader into an unknown situation and, without even knowing who is narrating the story, all there is left for him is to feel everything the character is feeling. If a book was ever able to make a reader forget he is reading a story, and believe he is actually living it, Blinded by Prejudice is that book.

When Mr. Darcy, the Bingley’s, the Bennet sisters and Mr. Collins are visiting an old ruin site near Longbourn an earthquake strikes the grounds, and the consequences will change everyone’s lives forever.

The first part of the book will see Elizabeth Bennet forced to accept an engagement with Mr. Darcy, while Miss Bingley is also forced to accept Mr. Collins’s hand. However, these two engagements couldn’t be more different. Elizabeth and Darcy’s relationship will take the center of the stage in the book, and we see them come closer to one another and discover the real person behind all the prejudices. Their romance is slow and angst free so the reader will witness many endearing moments between them, and after Mr. Darcy’s heroic actions, and his demonstration of strength and calm, he proves to be a patient and romantic man, which I am sure will captivate most readers.

Miss Bingley and Mr. Collins will take a minor part in the story, but their relationship will, as the reader may already have guessed, be a humorous one. Their actions will shock some characters in the book, but make the reader laugh out loud. The old Colonel will also be present in the story, and he will also bring some humor to it.

I cannot say I had a quibble with this book, but I did feel the first half of the book was much more engrossing than the last part and, because of that, it felt a little anticlimactic. Nevertheless, I do believe most readers will love this book. The first part has some angst to it, while the second part is full of romance as our characters get to spend more time together. Because of these two conditions, the book has enough diversity to appeal to a wide range of readers.

Blinded by Prejudice is one of those books the reader will hardly forget. The story is very interesting, and it slowly develops a relationship between the main characters that is endearing and passionate. Some secondary characters bring some humour to the story, which is a refreshing pause from the more serious tone we find in the main plot, and all these factors combined make it a remarkable book. I also enjoyed the writing style in Blinded by Prejudice and I highly recommend this book.
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832 reviews1 follower
September 19, 2021
This story had me captivated. When I finished the book, so thoroughly were the characters and events etched in my mind that I couldn’t determine what to read next and so began reading it a second time just a few days later. It’s a truly unique forced marriage scenario, where Elizabeth and Darcy become engaged after the collapse of some ruins leaves them trapped together for a night. The accident occurs after Jane’s illness and before the Netherfield Ball. Elizabeth’s dislike of Mr Darcy is strong, to say the least, even without the added offenses that Wickham usually spews. It’s clear that Darcy has had much more pleasant feelings for her.

The story is told entirely in first person narrative by Elizabeth, which I enjoyed. It was delightful to see Lizzy’s feelings slowly change. Initially she can’t see past her own selfish dread of being forced to wed without affection and wrongly attributes Darcy’s moods to his displeasure with her instead of to his injury. Eventually she realizes she must give Darcy a chance to redeem himself. Mr Bennet is helpful in that regard as he comes to respect Darcy during their short meeting.

After the accident, Georgiana and Colonel Fitzwilliam arrive at Netherfield to assist Darcy in his recovery. I love stories where the Colonel and even Georgiana help Darcy work through his emotions. Though we don’t witness it, Darcy admits that Richard encouraged him to secure Elizabeth’s affections. Just as things are going well between Lizzy and Darcy, Wickham shows up. Wickham and Elizabeth do not meet, but his appearance in Meryton wreaks havoc on the situation especially when Elizabeth misconstrues a conversation that she overhears between Darcy and Richard. Eventually everything is resolved and the much anticipated happy ending is satisfying. I definitely recommend this to fans of Austen retellings, it’s unique, well written and captivating.

I received a free ebook from the publisher via Booksprout and voluntarily leave this review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
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563 reviews2 followers
August 25, 2023
Status: Read July 27-August 9, 2023
via kindle & audible editions

Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐

Edition Read:

Blinded by Prejudice: A Pride & Prejudice Variation
by KaraLynne Mackrory
Kindle Edition, 326 pages
Published September 20, 2021 by Quills & Quartos Publishing (first published August 1, 2021)
ASIN: B0982BX5XG
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Into what kind of hell had I emerged from under those ruins?

Elizabeth Bennet anticipated nothing more than a pleasant day among friends and relations when the pleasure trip to the ruins of Bodden chapel commenced. But what began as mere diversion turns frightening when the walls of the ancient church tumble down around them, endangering lives, demolishing pride and propriety, and bringing a hero into focus.

As the earth begins to tremble, Fitzwilliam Darcy sees Elizabeth Bennet is in mortal danger and acts on instinct to save her. But when the dust settles, there are unforeseen consequences to his actions, including a serious injury to his eyesight.

I could not be married to a man who could need me the rest of his life, but never love me.

Bound together under the most strained circumstances, Darcy and Elizabeth embark on a future neither one of them saw coming. Time can heal all wounds but will time allow them to see through hearts made clear and eyes no longer blinded by prejudice?

My Library Notes:

Blinded by Prejudice: A Pride & Prejudice Variation
by KaraLynne Mackrory, Stevie Zimmerman (Narrator)
Audible Audio, Unabridged, 10 pages
Published August 6, 2021 by Quills & Quartos Publishing (first published August 1, 2021)
ASIN: B09C26CHC4

Listening Length: 9 hours and 35 minutes
652 reviews13 followers
September 23, 2021
I have loved every book by this author so couldn't wait to dive into this! Mr Darcy loses his sight after he and Elizabeth were buried in the rubber of a collapsing building. Having spent so long in such close proximity, they are going to have to marry. It seems that Me Darcy sees so much more without his eyes. Elizabeth gets to spend time with Darcy and really get to know him without the scrutiny of his stares. Unusually this book is in the first person perspective, told from Elizabeth's point of view. This is a lovely story with some really cute moments! The relationship between the colonel and Elizabeth is fab too!
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471 reviews13 followers
September 21, 2021
Great Story

Loved the story, which one was more blind Darcy or Lizzy. The colonel was a great addition to the story. Glad the villain got his comeuppance.
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143 reviews18 followers
January 6, 2022
a good trope done to death

If you like the misunderstanding plot device you may enjoy the extraordinary over use of it here at every single twist and turn.

This book is, unfortunately, about double the length it should be because of it and sadly the result is that Lizzie comes off as inordinately stupid for 99% of the book.

I really loved the premise of this book and had they actually spoken to one another rather than inaccurately assuming I would have really enjoyed it.
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970 reviews4 followers
September 19, 2021
I never warmed up to this petulant Elizabeth. Love the story idea.
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2,147 reviews1 follower
October 5, 2021
This story was very well written. The imagery and feelings leap right off the page onto the reader. Fitzwilliam Darcy rushes to protect Elizabeth Bennet as they are caught in a landslide and together they are trapped beneath the earth. This incident occurs before the Netherfield Ball, but after Jane's illness meaning that Elizabeth assumes that Darcy hates her.

Their survival, escape, and subsequent meetings are fraught with SO MUCH feeling. I wanted to shake Elizabeth silly - not to get her to admit her feelings but just to stop being so very emotional!!!! The only thing that lightened the mood was the fishing references between Fitzwilliam and Mr Bennet. The title of the book is perfect as there are many ways that one can be blinded and they all come to play in the story.

I really enjoyed the story, but this is not a light, fun take on vacation type book.
79 reviews4 followers
September 21, 2021
Delightful lightness of touch

This is a heart rending, sweet and romantic version, an alternate journey for our couple, well written and including visceral descriptions of the initial disaster, and of its distressing aftermath. What elevates this version, though, is the endearing blindness of this Elizabeth, who cannot see what is right in front of her ( blindness being the overarching theme), whilst, deliciously, we the reader can. Both amusing and stirring, and of course ultimately romantic as anything. Read it on KU, off to buy a copy as I know in a while it will be enjoyed again. Brava, Ms Mackrory!
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652 reviews32 followers
August 14, 2021
4.5 rounded up. This was a really great story with lots of elements to enjoy. Danger, suspense, romance, misunderstandings, humor. I was drawn in right from the beginning as the story. We begin with darkness and uncertainty and we as readers understand that something very significant has happened, but we have no idea what it is. We aren’t even sure who’s thoughts we are reading or what has happened, but are looking for clues and waiting on pins and needles to see what will happen next. Things slowly start to piece together so we have a better understanding of what is going on and it is fascinating and suspenseful to see how our hero and heroine will get out of the significant scrape they are in and the events that will follow.

Darcy has some limitations in this story that I don’t think I’ve ever encountered in JAFF before. It is interesting and engaging to see him have to come to terms these unsettling physical limitations while, at the same time, dealing with the fall out and aftermath of the accident. It was hard not to admire and love this Darcy as he shows his strength of character while we find him in a much more vulnerable position. It’s also interesting to see how his condition affects not only him, but those who care about him. Elizabeth also has some things to overcome both physically and emotionally. It felt pretty authentic as we watch her struggle with her circumstances, but also with herself as she learns to navigate through new territory. Both Darcy and Elizabeth are dealing with their own versions of blindness.

The development of the romance between D&E was a slow build up and I enjoyed many sweet and tender moments as they come to know each other better and learn more about each other, especially in their unusual circumstances. It was a learning process they had to go through as they learned trust and respect each other a little at a time. I did find there were a few times that the intelligence that is such a prominent part of Elizabeth’s character was a bit lacking, but I suppose it can be attributed to extreme pressure.

While the main focus of the book is on D&E, they are not the only ones affected by the tragic events we read about at the opening of the book. The other characters were also enjoyable and I especially enjoyed this version of Colonel Fitzwilliam. There is an unexpected pairing in this book and their part of the story brought much amusement and laughter. Very cleverly written and entertaining!

I really loved this book. It was exciting and romantic and very engaging. I would definitely recommend this to those who love a a sweet dose of romance and intrigue between our favorite legendary couple.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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131 reviews8 followers
October 26, 2022
To keep this review simple and short, this version of Elizabeth was very selfish, self-centered, lacks sympathy/compassion and is slow (stupid stupid stupid… not witty at all). I hated her. She does not deserve Darcy. Read my notes/highlights and you’ll get an idea of my frustration and annoyance. Also, the reflections were soooooo long that at some point I started to skim through the paragraphs just to get to the dang point.
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204 reviews16 followers
June 18, 2023
While visiting an old chapel with a group of friends, Darcy and Elizabeth are buried after the chapel collapsed. Both are injured and when they are found, it is evident that Darcy isn't able to see. Because of the time spent together entrapped Darcy and Elizabeth are forced to wed, it does not matter that they don't like each other. While their injuries heal they get to know each other better. Can they overcome their prejudice against each other or will they continue to be blind for the the love of their life?

The book of the author Karalynne Mackrory is well written in Elizabeth's point of view. This means we get to know the story only from her but she also tells us her thoughts and her innermost feelings. Darcy's point of view might have been interesting, too, but the book is nevertheless very good.

In this book Darcy is very vulnerable. He normally is a man of action. Because of his blindness he is dependent on others and needs their help. He also struggles very much because he can't capture all aspects of Elizabeth's feelings and meanings. I like this version of Darcy. I have the feeling to see more of the real Darcy without disguise, a loving man who wants to be loved in return, but because of himself and not because of his status in life. A man who struggles as everybody, who tries to make everything right but fails from time to time. I really like that.

I also like the love which develops slowly. That they are, because of Darcy's injuries, forced to proceed slowly and this means they can talk. They need to care for each other. There are nevertheless misunderstandings but they have to deal with them. Besides, there are no true villains in the book which keep Darcy and Elizabeth apart, this time prejudices on both sides are the cause.
I also like that in this story there are also only supportive relatives who are favourable of the union between Darcy and Elizabeth and who encourage them to fight further for an unterstanding and their love.

And I like the fate of Carline Bingley in this book very much. Something one had not thought of at the beginning 😉

I really recommend this book. If you like a vulnerable Darcy and a Elizabeth blinded by her prejudice, this book is for you!
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366 reviews
September 11, 2021
This book is fantastic! It is gripping, intriguing, heartfelt, and so much more. Whenever I picked up “Blinded by Prejudice”, I was whisked back in time to the Regency Era, and went on such an emotional journey with this story.

This is the first book I have read by Karalynne Mackrory, and it will not be my last. Her writing style is very vivid, and feels true to the era that this book is set in. She brilliantly weaves characters from Jane Austen’s “Pride and Prejudice” into her own story, and I found myself hooked from the first page to the last.

This variation explores what might have happened had Darcy and Elizabeth found themselves in an emergency situation, that would then force them to be married. As a group is exploring Bodden Chapel, they become trapped as the ruins collapse around them. Darcy leaps in to protect Elizabeth, physically shielding her with his body. Elizabeth has broken ribs, and Darcy has a head injury that causes him to go blind and have excruciating headaches. Even though they were not in one, Darcy and Elizabeth know that society will see them as being caught in a compromising position, and believe they must marry. As Darcy and Elizabeth begin to spend more time together, their feelings and respect for one another deepen into something more. What happens? You will just have to read to find out.

If you enjoy Jane Austen variations, I highly recommend this book! It kept me turning the pages into the early hours of the morning, and I look forward to reading what Ms. Mackrory writes next.

Thank you so much to Quills & Quartos Publishing for the ARC of this book. All opinions expressed in this review are my own.
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