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A Celtic Legacy #1
Dark Waters
Librarian's note: Alternate cover edition of ASIN B006R03B6C.
Sisters bound by love, separated by blood. . .
And doomed to face the unimaginable.
An everyday vacation quickly turns into a nightmare of epic proportions. Two sisters must struggle to find the strength within themselves to survive as well as to save one another. When the world of Fae emerges on a rocky shore far from the Emerald Isle, all hell breaks loose.
Two factions vie for the sister’s loyalties, one light, the other dark. Neither honest.
A series of events are set into motion that will not only test the bonds of sisterly love, but will defy belief and reality. Then you have found yourself deep in . . . “Dark Waters”.
Sisters bound by love, separated by blood. . .
And doomed to face the unimaginable.
An everyday vacation quickly turns into a nightmare of epic proportions. Two sisters must struggle to find the strength within themselves to survive as well as to save one another. When the world of Fae emerges on a rocky shore far from the Emerald Isle, all hell breaks loose.
Two factions vie for the sister’s loyalties, one light, the other dark. Neither honest.
A series of events are set into motion that will not only test the bonds of sisterly love, but will defy belief and reality. Then you have found yourself deep in . . . “Dark Waters”.
306 pages, Paperback
First published December 28, 2011
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About the author
Shannon Mayer
161 books7,242 followersA long time ago, in a galaxy far away, I was born into a family of Star Wars nuts. I have a lot of siblings (somewhere I lost count but I think there was more than could be numbered on one hand) and being one of the young padawans I was subjected to Star Wars marathons, on a regular basis. If you've read any of my books you'll see there is often a reference to said movies as a small homage to my upbringing. May the force be with you and all that jazz.
I started writing when I realized I didn't want to grow up not believing in magic, or not believing in creatures everyone else said didn't exist. That being said, I have never seen a fairy, unicorn or dragon. I had a neighbour who swore they fed the leprechauns in their garden, but I never caught the little buggers no matter how long I lay in wait. (And consequently had to help the neighbours plant new flowers to replace those I killed waiting for the leprechauns to show their faces.)
Along the way, I found my husband who is the rock that keeps me from floating away into my dreams, and we have a little boy who is the centre of our world. Living on a farm keeps us busy (as if the writing wasn't enough) and I have more than my share of stories about wrestling with cows, helping birth calves and ending up in the creek during the process, falling in the mud (we'll call it mud but we all know that on a farm, mud is rarely mud) and chasing escaped livestock in the hopes the four legged convicts don't make it to the highway.
I've taken up archery, and the goal is to move into horseback archery in time (you know, when I can hit the target on a consistent basis) and when no one is looking, I love to bake (this doesn't happen often as it's hard to keep the sweet treats in stock with two boys in the house.)
As to what's coming next for me? More stories (since those never stop inside my head, I might as well share them with all of you!) and more adventures. Pretty much, when the fancy strikes, I'll jump on it. Leap before you look I'm sure that motto was created for me.
Or was that . . . think big and dream bigger, ready, set, pull the trigger . . . yeah. That one is a good one too. But only if you have a gun. And are hunting elephants. Which is not cool because of so many reasons. Let's stick with the first one with an addendum.
Leap before you look and let your dreams carry you on their wings. And that, my friends, is me in a nutshell.
I started writing when I realized I didn't want to grow up not believing in magic, or not believing in creatures everyone else said didn't exist. That being said, I have never seen a fairy, unicorn or dragon. I had a neighbour who swore they fed the leprechauns in their garden, but I never caught the little buggers no matter how long I lay in wait. (And consequently had to help the neighbours plant new flowers to replace those I killed waiting for the leprechauns to show their faces.)
Along the way, I found my husband who is the rock that keeps me from floating away into my dreams, and we have a little boy who is the centre of our world. Living on a farm keeps us busy (as if the writing wasn't enough) and I have more than my share of stories about wrestling with cows, helping birth calves and ending up in the creek during the process, falling in the mud (we'll call it mud but we all know that on a farm, mud is rarely mud) and chasing escaped livestock in the hopes the four legged convicts don't make it to the highway.
I've taken up archery, and the goal is to move into horseback archery in time (you know, when I can hit the target on a consistent basis) and when no one is looking, I love to bake (this doesn't happen often as it's hard to keep the sweet treats in stock with two boys in the house.)
As to what's coming next for me? More stories (since those never stop inside my head, I might as well share them with all of you!) and more adventures. Pretty much, when the fancy strikes, I'll jump on it. Leap before you look I'm sure that motto was created for me.
Or was that . . . think big and dream bigger, ready, set, pull the trigger . . . yeah. That one is a good one too. But only if you have a gun. And are hunting elephants. Which is not cool because of so many reasons. Let's stick with the first one with an addendum.
Leap before you look and let your dreams carry you on their wings. And that, my friends, is me in a nutshell.
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January 1, 2012
First of all, let me tell you that the basis for this book is very near to my heart. The bonds of siblings, sisters, and family are not something to be taken lightly, at least not to me.
Quinn and Ashling, two sisters with a strong connection and no one else in the world to lean on, face their darkest fears if they are to survive what feels to them, a turn into madness. Ancient prophecies, legendary monsters, secrets, sensual men, heart pounding action and of course, a fun, fast paced plot are sure to have your Kindle gripped in your fingers.
What more can I say? Go get it, read it, and for the love of pete, REVIEW it. :D
Quinn and Ashling, two sisters with a strong connection and no one else in the world to lean on, face their darkest fears if they are to survive what feels to them, a turn into madness. Ancient prophecies, legendary monsters, secrets, sensual men, heart pounding action and of course, a fun, fast paced plot are sure to have your Kindle gripped in your fingers.
What more can I say? Go get it, read it, and for the love of pete, REVIEW it. :D
June 26, 2012
Quick summary - Girl & sister go on holiday to celebrate sister's graduation. Mother MIA because she's not interested in kids, particularly sister. Girl takes sister for surfing lesson, sister gets kidnapped, girl goes to rescue of her sister from evil under-the-sea fae with her innate fae powers and two fae guys who want to get it on with her. Annnnnd go...
I honestly think the plot has potential. All the characters could be incredibly memorable and easy to attach yourself to and think about long after you finished reading the book.
Except that never happened for me. I felt as though there were a lot of details simply omitted from it. And not in the whole gaps and silences way either. Just left out completely. Like, why was Luke (love interest) suddenly the love of Quinn's (our heroine) life? And why did Bres (other love interest) love her from first sight and want to have her too? We never learn much about her overall appearance, so surely it's not her astounding good looks. She constantly switches between guys (for no apparent reason other than whichever is nearer), and is also supposedly going to become a warrior, though she spent most of her time hurt or healing. And don't get me started on the hokey prophesy or the fact that we never meet the fae council. Or the fact we know very little about her or why she reacts to things how she does. All we know is she is has a few fears. Ok, that's fine, but give me something I can sink my teeth into (pun intended, for those who have read the book). Some depth, a purpose or path her life had taken that existed before meeting the fae. Also, why is the mum so uninterested in her kids?
From everything I've written, it sounds like I hated the book. Honestly, I really enjoyed it but I don't think I will continue with this series. It's just that it felt like the shell. Like it was still waiting for a lot of details to be fleshed out.
I honestly think the plot has potential. All the characters could be incredibly memorable and easy to attach yourself to and think about long after you finished reading the book.
Except that never happened for me. I felt as though there were a lot of details simply omitted from it. And not in the whole gaps and silences way either. Just left out completely. Like, why was Luke (love interest) suddenly the love of Quinn's (our heroine) life? And why did Bres (other love interest) love her from first sight and want to have her too? We never learn much about her overall appearance, so surely it's not her astounding good looks. She constantly switches between guys (for no apparent reason other than whichever is nearer), and is also supposedly going to become a warrior, though she spent most of her time hurt or healing. And don't get me started on the hokey prophesy or the fact that we never meet the fae council. Or the fact we know very little about her or why she reacts to things how she does. All we know is she is has a few fears. Ok, that's fine, but give me something I can sink my teeth into (pun intended, for those who have read the book). Some depth, a purpose or path her life had taken that existed before meeting the fae. Also, why is the mum so uninterested in her kids?
From everything I've written, it sounds like I hated the book. Honestly, I really enjoyed it but I don't think I will continue with this series. It's just that it felt like the shell. Like it was still waiting for a lot of details to be fleshed out.
April 22, 2022
Ok, so the blurb didn't tell me much, and I know I love(d) this author, so why not give this series a try, right?
Well....
The story was fast-paced and worth reading, at least out of curiosity. The plot is interesting, but there really wasn't enough info for me to make up my mind completely.
I can't say I'm disappointed, really, but I kind of am. I expected so much more from this author... I'll go on with the series (the books are really short), but eh. I wanted more from this author.
Well....
The story was fast-paced and worth reading, at least out of curiosity. The plot is interesting, but there really wasn't enough info for me to make up my mind completely.
I can't say I'm disappointed, really, but I kind of am. I expected so much more from this author... I'll go on with the series (the books are really short), but eh. I wanted more from this author.
May 13, 2012
I can imagine that an author may have a difficult time in editing books. What exactly makes a book too long or too short? As I read "Dark Waters" I thought that the book had real potential. However, it was all lost for me because the story was too rushed! I really did not have time to garner any real belief that the main character was in lust, love with either of the two men featured. What's more, I felt the storyline became convoluted at times.
Quinn and her younger sister Ashling decide to visit their grandfather in a mental institution. While there, Quinn is attacked by him and quickened (provided with a heightened with greater strength and senses). After leaving the institution, Quinn takes Ashling to an upscale resort for her graduation present. She wants to learn to surf. While in the water, Ashling is attacked and kidnapped. What, you ask? She is kidnapped by some evil fae creatures known as the Fimori. Quinn is desperate to get her back; but, her rescue attempt is halted by a good looking man named Luke.
Luke briefly explains to Quinn that she is a part of a prophecy where she is bound to save the world. However, she will have to kill her sister in the process. Quinn refuses to believe this and continues to try to find a way to help her sister. In the midst of all of this, Quinn discovers that her distant and emotionally detached mother, Darcy is also missing. Even though Darcy was not 'mother of the year,' Quinn worries about her fate. This is where the story begins to fall apart and get convoluted. There are mystical snakes, a council we never meet, the Fimori creatures and a bad guy who really is no more than a bully. I just could not buy into to it. Also, I grew tired of how Quinn vascillated her feelings from one guy to the next. Enough already.
At this point, I am not sure that I will be continuing on with the series. I do not mind a cliffhanger ending; but, I do expect more revelation and resolution at the end of my books. This one just had the storyline go in a circle. Oh well, read it for yourself and decide.
Quinn and her younger sister Ashling decide to visit their grandfather in a mental institution. While there, Quinn is attacked by him and quickened (provided with a heightened with greater strength and senses). After leaving the institution, Quinn takes Ashling to an upscale resort for her graduation present. She wants to learn to surf. While in the water, Ashling is attacked and kidnapped. What, you ask? She is kidnapped by some evil fae creatures known as the Fimori. Quinn is desperate to get her back; but, her rescue attempt is halted by a good looking man named Luke.
Luke briefly explains to Quinn that she is a part of a prophecy where she is bound to save the world. However, she will have to kill her sister in the process. Quinn refuses to believe this and continues to try to find a way to help her sister. In the midst of all of this, Quinn discovers that her distant and emotionally detached mother, Darcy is also missing. Even though Darcy was not 'mother of the year,' Quinn worries about her fate. This is where the story begins to fall apart and get convoluted. There are mystical snakes, a council we never meet, the Fimori creatures and a bad guy who really is no more than a bully. I just could not buy into to it. Also, I grew tired of how Quinn vascillated her feelings from one guy to the next. Enough already.
At this point, I am not sure that I will be continuing on with the series. I do not mind a cliffhanger ending; but, I do expect more revelation and resolution at the end of my books. This one just had the storyline go in a circle. Oh well, read it for yourself and decide.
January 14, 2016
interesting premise blown to shit by some love and loyalty at first 'hear his voice' thing.
seriously. the girl HEARS some dudes voice on the phone and is all 'ooo hot *shivers of a sexual nature*'
then .... in the midst of her sister DYING/DROWNING/being pulled down into the depths of the ocean by scary ass MONSTERS, guy KEEPS her from SAVING her sister and USES HIS MAGIC ON HER TO SCREW WITH HER HEAD. but then AFTER she FAILS to save said sister girl is still all 'ooo kiss me you gold and shiny man thing you'
GAG
not to mention the guy, AT EVERY TURN, stops her and refuses to help her save the sister WHO IS STILL ALIVE AND SAVABLE. -_-
there is only a second of redemption when she actually realizes there is someone else who IS helping her and putting HIS life on the line, etc, but it's not a joke that it's ... a second in reading time.
in the end .... lets just say i think she is the biggest dumbass to ever have to 'save the world from the baddies' EVER. her ONLY redeeming quality is that she refuses to give up on saving her sister. << that is AWESOME and unfortunately the ONLY thing that could make her worth my time.
seriously. the girl HEARS some dudes voice on the phone and is all 'ooo hot *shivers of a sexual nature*'
then .... in the midst of her sister DYING/DROWNING/being pulled down into the depths of the ocean by scary ass MONSTERS, guy KEEPS her from SAVING her sister and USES HIS MAGIC ON HER TO SCREW WITH HER HEAD. but then AFTER she FAILS to save said sister girl is still all 'ooo kiss me you gold and shiny man thing you'
GAG
not to mention the guy, AT EVERY TURN, stops her and refuses to help her save the sister WHO IS STILL ALIVE AND SAVABLE. -_-
there is only a second of redemption when she actually realizes there is someone else who IS helping her and putting HIS life on the line, etc, but it's not a joke that it's ... a second in reading time.
in the end .... lets just say i think she is the biggest dumbass to ever have to 'save the world from the baddies' EVER. her ONLY redeeming quality is that she refuses to give up on saving her sister. << that is AWESOME and unfortunately the ONLY thing that could make her worth my time.
June 9, 2012
Okay, this was a fantastic read! It is the story of Quinn, who her entire life believed that she knew certain truths. That she and her sister Ashling, loved and took care of one another, that their mother was absent emotionally and many times physically. That they were normal. But it all changes when upon a routine visit to see their ailing grandfather who resides in a psychiatric facility, that Quinn’s world shifts. All of their lives, the sisters believed their grandfather was slightly delusional, or crazy, was a better term. He told stories of other worlds, powers and such. Quinn felt all her life that her grandfather favored her sister over her and actually her mom favored Quinn slightly over her sister. So, that was another truth she had been accustomed too. But the truth behind, why all of this was occurring was the major change. Upon visiting her grandfather, he begins speaking of things to Quinn that she did not understand, things that she would do…his exact words were…”YOU WILL KILL HER….” And then Quinn’s grandfather begins to choke her!… Yep! Grandad!:)
But there is a reason behind the madness, which then leads eventually to Quinn’s sister Ashling being kidnapped by beings that Quinn never knew existed and to Quinn meeting the equally hot Luke and Bres, who are also beings Quinn never knew existed and who says that they are to guard her. Quinn is told that she is not who she always believed herself to be; also that she has supernatural powers and a prophetic destiny to fulfill…which included killing her sister!
What a family!!!!!
Yes…this story grabbed ahold of me from the beginning and did not let go. It was action filled from the first chapter and carried throughout. The physical attraction between Quinn and Bres, I will have to admit was my favorite,(although Luke cannot be dismissed, especially with his devotion to Quinn)…but Bres is my favorite with his dark edginess, and his passion. I was reading and so enthralled, that I didn’t realize fully when it ended…I was like what? no!!!…The book was great and I eagerly await the next in the series!
But there is a reason behind the madness, which then leads eventually to Quinn’s sister Ashling being kidnapped by beings that Quinn never knew existed and to Quinn meeting the equally hot Luke and Bres, who are also beings Quinn never knew existed and who says that they are to guard her. Quinn is told that she is not who she always believed herself to be; also that she has supernatural powers and a prophetic destiny to fulfill…which included killing her sister!
What a family!!!!!
Yes…this story grabbed ahold of me from the beginning and did not let go. It was action filled from the first chapter and carried throughout. The physical attraction between Quinn and Bres, I will have to admit was my favorite,(although Luke cannot be dismissed, especially with his devotion to Quinn)…but Bres is my favorite with his dark edginess, and his passion. I was reading and so enthralled, that I didn’t realize fully when it ended…I was like what? no!!!…The book was great and I eagerly await the next in the series!
January 26, 2012
I had previous enjoyed Ms. Mayer's "Sundered", so was intriqued that she's ventured into a take on the Irishc myths in that at story's beginning the two sisters Ashling and Quinn are only beginning to understand their heritage as daughters of the fey—the Tuatha De Danann. The otherworld, or underworld, thrusts itself into their reality when Quinn's beloved younger sister is abducted into the watery world of the Fomorii.
I love that all this is happening right off the shores of Tofino!
Needless to say, as Quinn is gradually learning of this hidden heritage of hers, two of the De Danann who have been sent to protect Quinn rapidly become the romantic interest of the story: she's attracted to both. How not? Bres has dark hair and blue eyes, and just enough Fomori in his blood to make him seductively dangerous. Luke is blonde and destined by legend to be her mate. Our heroine is trying to stay focused on saving her sister and mother from captivity in the Fomori realm...
Recommend this book to all who enjoy a good dark fantasy with an adventurous foot in both realms: the here and now, and the underworld of Dark Waters.
I love that all this is happening right off the shores of Tofino!
Needless to say, as Quinn is gradually learning of this hidden heritage of hers, two of the De Danann who have been sent to protect Quinn rapidly become the romantic interest of the story: she's attracted to both. How not? Bres has dark hair and blue eyes, and just enough Fomori in his blood to make him seductively dangerous. Luke is blonde and destined by legend to be her mate. Our heroine is trying to stay focused on saving her sister and mother from captivity in the Fomori realm...
Recommend this book to all who enjoy a good dark fantasy with an adventurous foot in both realms: the here and now, and the underworld of Dark Waters.
May 18, 2025
I enjoy Shannon Mayer’s stories and writing. I’ve read almost all of her Desert Cursed series so I wanted to try a different one.
I was not disappointed!
Two sisters get caught up in a Fae world. One sister is abducted and the other must rescue her. During this time they find out more about their real background.
There are some good scary underwater scenes. The only complaint I have is that Quinn constantly repeats that she must save her sister at all costs.
At times some of the scenes felt immature and the characters weren’t that well- developed but the plot was good and I was interested in finding out what would happen.
I was not disappointed!
Two sisters get caught up in a Fae world. One sister is abducted and the other must rescue her. During this time they find out more about their real background.
There are some good scary underwater scenes. The only complaint I have is that Quinn constantly repeats that she must save her sister at all costs.
At times some of the scenes felt immature and the characters weren’t that well- developed but the plot was good and I was interested in finding out what would happen.
June 24, 2022
Unfortunately, the story felt like something I'd read before and didn't much care for: girl with secret lineage and powers, meets unnaturally handsome boy who pledges allegiance to her just because, second handsome boy enters scene just to stir things up and confuse the reader, and then somewhere towards the 80% mark we get back into the actual plot. The premise was interesting but the book ended up just not being for me.
June 27, 2017
(See the asterisks below for my updated review)
I love fey books in general and only vaguely know Celtic Myths but the concept greatly appealed to me.
Some of this story rubbed me the wrong way. I am so sick of love triangles in general. Especially when the characters don't feel finished to me. There was something that drew me to one over the other but otherwise I felt like the character development was kind of lacking. I felt that the need to keep the characters somewhat on the dark is on purpose however. Like there is a reason that the readers only know of her attraction to both.
I know I am not supposed to like her but what the heck is up with Darcy!?!? Seriously!
What kept me from giving a better review is probably the grammar issues. There didn't seem to be many but they made the story line feel disjointed and broken.
I am looking forward to reading the second one and trying to form a better opinion about the series.
***After reading the whole trilogy I have to say that if someone asked me if they should read this series I would have to say don't bother. Don't get me wrong there are some great concepts. The problem is it feels like the plot doesn't really don't get resolved until the very end. Not even the romantic triangle. I mean please for the love of my sanity let me have some romantic moments with my ship!
I love fey books in general and only vaguely know Celtic Myths but the concept greatly appealed to me.
Some of this story rubbed me the wrong way. I am so sick of love triangles in general. Especially when the characters don't feel finished to me. There was something that drew me to one over the other but otherwise I felt like the character development was kind of lacking. I felt that the need to keep the characters somewhat on the dark is on purpose however. Like there is a reason that the readers only know of her attraction to both.
I know I am not supposed to like her but what the heck is up with Darcy!?!? Seriously!
What kept me from giving a better review is probably the grammar issues. There didn't seem to be many but they made the story line feel disjointed and broken.
I am looking forward to reading the second one and trying to form a better opinion about the series.
***After reading the whole trilogy I have to say that if someone asked me if they should read this series I would have to say don't bother. Don't get me wrong there are some great concepts. The problem is it feels like the plot doesn't really don't get resolved until the very end. Not even the romantic triangle. I mean please for the love of my sanity let me have some romantic moments with my ship!
June 25, 2019
2 1/2 stars. I enjoy fae stories and this delivers on that end. I also enjoyed the real feeling of sibling connection between the two sisters. There are times when they drive each other crazy and other times when there is nothing stronger than the bond between siblings. What I don't really buy is the love/lust connection. I'm never a real believer in destined lovers, because it is hard work to make a relationship survive and thrive. But when you just hear someone in the middle of a fearing for your sister's life? Also, why would she then feel something, even if it is lust, for anyone else? Just one of my pet peeves.
So, I have mixed feelings about this one but there was action and enough drama to make you want to know what happens next.
So, I have mixed feelings about this one but there was action and enough drama to make you want to know what happens next.
July 18, 2022
fun first novel with Fae
I enjoy Shannon Mayer’s stories and writing. I’ve read almost all of her Desert Cursed series so I wanted to try a different one.
I was not disappointed!
Two sisters get caught up in a Fae world. One sister is abducted and the other must rescue her. During this time they find out more about their real background.
There are some good scary underwater scenes. The only complaint I have is that Quinn constantly repeats that she must save her sister at all costs.
At times some if the scenes felt immature and the characters weren’t that well- developed but the plot was good and I was interested in finding out what would happen.
I enjoy Shannon Mayer’s stories and writing. I’ve read almost all of her Desert Cursed series so I wanted to try a different one.
I was not disappointed!
Two sisters get caught up in a Fae world. One sister is abducted and the other must rescue her. During this time they find out more about their real background.
There are some good scary underwater scenes. The only complaint I have is that Quinn constantly repeats that she must save her sister at all costs.
At times some if the scenes felt immature and the characters weren’t that well- developed but the plot was good and I was interested in finding out what would happen.
November 8, 2024
I had wanted so badly for this to be good, but what a terribly written book....
May 3, 2015
3.5
Even having finished this book, I'm undecided about how I feel about it. There seems to be an interesting plot developing. It's well written. The dialogue seems natural and it flows fine. Though there are a few editing issues, most notably a whole passage that seems to have been pasted in twice.
But...BUT I hated the wimpy coward Quinn was portrayed as, even while she was supposed to be a prophesied saviour. It made her feel inept, like she couldn't do anything unless there was a man there forcing her to do the right thing (the thing she wanted to do, but couldn't on her own). Meh, that SOOOO doesn't do it for me. Though, in fairness, I'll give it props for being a little more realistic than the heroine who fearlessly rushes into danger.
I also didn't feel like I got to know any of the characters very well...at all. The reader isn't given any opportunity to learn about them, their past, or their personality, especially Bres and Luke. They are essentially characterless. Thus, Quinn's eenie-meenie-minie-moe routine between the two elicited no emotion from me. I didn't care who she chose, as I knew neither one of them.
I was a bit bothered by the fact that she was suddenly 'with' Luke and determined to stay loyal, when I couldn't say when they made any sort of commitment to one another. A kiss is the most they shared. Further, she just seemed to gravitate toward whichever man she was physically nearest at the time, as if she had no actual volition of her own. All of this with no real, definitive explanation beyond, 'the prophesy says it's so.'
Similarly, since I didn't feel like I knew any of the characters I didn't feel like I really grasped why anyone did anything and therefore the plot felt a bit like a group of random people running about doing random things. Now, I'm not calling it plotless, far from. But you just never really know anything anymore than you know anyone...if that makes sense. If I didn't have a basic understanding of light and dark fae I probably wouldn't have even understood the plot in to begin with.
I'm also a bit confused about the intended audience. Quinn is 25. I'm not under the impression that this is supposed to be a YA book/series, but at times it felt very much like it is. Things like a kiss being given enormous importance or juvenile questions like, "Do you want to be my boyfriend?" Wha...what? Really?
Lastly (and this is a complaint I seem to make a lot lately), I don't understand why it's broken up. This is not a stand alone book, but as each is only ~150 pages, there is plenty of room for them to be comfortably combined.
All in all, despite my apparent negativity, it's an interesting (if rushed) start to the series, but I won't really know what I feel about it until I see how the series comes together. On its own, all it is is an interesting beginning and, honestly, that's not really enough.
Even having finished this book, I'm undecided about how I feel about it. There seems to be an interesting plot developing. It's well written. The dialogue seems natural and it flows fine. Though there are a few editing issues, most notably a whole passage that seems to have been pasted in twice.
But...BUT I hated the wimpy coward Quinn was portrayed as, even while she was supposed to be a prophesied saviour. It made her feel inept, like she couldn't do anything unless there was a man there forcing her to do the right thing (the thing she wanted to do, but couldn't on her own). Meh, that SOOOO doesn't do it for me. Though, in fairness, I'll give it props for being a little more realistic than the heroine who fearlessly rushes into danger.
I also didn't feel like I got to know any of the characters very well...at all. The reader isn't given any opportunity to learn about them, their past, or their personality, especially Bres and Luke. They are essentially characterless. Thus, Quinn's eenie-meenie-minie-moe routine between the two elicited no emotion from me. I didn't care who she chose, as I knew neither one of them.
I was a bit bothered by the fact that she was suddenly 'with' Luke and determined to stay loyal, when I couldn't say when they made any sort of commitment to one another. A kiss is the most they shared. Further, she just seemed to gravitate toward whichever man she was physically nearest at the time, as if she had no actual volition of her own. All of this with no real, definitive explanation beyond, 'the prophesy says it's so.'
Similarly, since I didn't feel like I knew any of the characters I didn't feel like I really grasped why anyone did anything and therefore the plot felt a bit like a group of random people running about doing random things. Now, I'm not calling it plotless, far from. But you just never really know anything anymore than you know anyone...if that makes sense. If I didn't have a basic understanding of light and dark fae I probably wouldn't have even understood the plot in to begin with.
I'm also a bit confused about the intended audience. Quinn is 25. I'm not under the impression that this is supposed to be a YA book/series, but at times it felt very much like it is. Things like a kiss being given enormous importance or juvenile questions like, "Do you want to be my boyfriend?" Wha...what? Really?
Lastly (and this is a complaint I seem to make a lot lately), I don't understand why it's broken up. This is not a stand alone book, but as each is only ~150 pages, there is plenty of room for them to be comfortably combined.
All in all, despite my apparent negativity, it's an interesting (if rushed) start to the series, but I won't really know what I feel about it until I see how the series comes together. On its own, all it is is an interesting beginning and, honestly, that's not really enough.
January 18, 2012
I read through this book in just two sittings...a really fast, engaging read that kept me wrapped up in the characters and the action. The premise is an interesting mix of original and classic, in that Quinn, the main character, finds out she is a member of an ancient Celtic race, one of two warring factions that end up having an interesting relationship to her family's bloodline on both sides. Quinn herself is "quickened" by her Grandfather early on in the book, and finds out that she is a sort of "chosen one" for the lighter of the two races, and meant to end the war and bring peace. Some of this is classic hero's journey stuff, but the two races themselves were fascinating, with one living at the bottom of the ocean and the other being more land dwellers. While there was only an introduction to the powers on both sides, the world building is fascinating and different from anything else I've read in books of this kind.
In particular, I really loved the relationship between the two sisters, Quinn and Ashling, and the challenges Quinn faces in trying to keep her sister safe. The characters, especially the familial bonds and an emerging love triangle are really what drive the story and give it more dimension. It's a fantastic set up for future books, too. I don't want to give any spoilers, but the tension at the end of who will end up being potential lovers-enemies-friends is perfect for this kind of series, and really sets the stage for great conflicts and emotional pulls in future installations. Highly recommend!
In particular, I really loved the relationship between the two sisters, Quinn and Ashling, and the challenges Quinn faces in trying to keep her sister safe. The characters, especially the familial bonds and an emerging love triangle are really what drive the story and give it more dimension. It's a fantastic set up for future books, too. I don't want to give any spoilers, but the tension at the end of who will end up being potential lovers-enemies-friends is perfect for this kind of series, and really sets the stage for great conflicts and emotional pulls in future installations. Highly recommend!
January 28, 2012
This story intrigued me from the start. Especially the part about the two sisters. I loved the relationship between Quinn and Ashling, reminding me of my own sister as I read the book. I definitely related to Quinn, being the older sibling - the urge to protect and watch out for her younger sister.
The world building into the Fomorii and the Tuatha was developed well by the author. I'm sure we will learn more about each in the coming books of the series, but for the first book, Ms. Mayer did well bringing me into the hidden world of these creatures. She definitely set up the mystery and danger surrounding the sisters as they discover their new paranormal powers and how they fit into a prophecy. I hope to learn more - and get the mysteries solved - as the series progresses.
A lot of unanswered questions were left at the end - a great set up for the next book in the series. I was surprised when I reached the ending, still expecting there to be more. The book is a bit shorter than I'm used to and I wish it was a bit longer. It doesn't need more in the way of world building or character development, I just feel like it, suddenly stopped mid-story. I know many authors use this as a set up for book 2, to make readers hungry to read the next one (which obviously works for this book as I really want to know how it all ends) but I still felt a little disappointed by the abrupt ending of this one.
I look forward to reading the second book in the series, Emerald Isle, when it releases this spring.
The world building into the Fomorii and the Tuatha was developed well by the author. I'm sure we will learn more about each in the coming books of the series, but for the first book, Ms. Mayer did well bringing me into the hidden world of these creatures. She definitely set up the mystery and danger surrounding the sisters as they discover their new paranormal powers and how they fit into a prophecy. I hope to learn more - and get the mysteries solved - as the series progresses.
A lot of unanswered questions were left at the end - a great set up for the next book in the series. I was surprised when I reached the ending, still expecting there to be more. The book is a bit shorter than I'm used to and I wish it was a bit longer. It doesn't need more in the way of world building or character development, I just feel like it, suddenly stopped mid-story. I know many authors use this as a set up for book 2, to make readers hungry to read the next one (which obviously works for this book as I really want to know how it all ends) but I still felt a little disappointed by the abrupt ending of this one.
I look forward to reading the second book in the series, Emerald Isle, when it releases this spring.
March 23, 2012
I just love books that have Irish lore, have since I was a kid so I was super excited when I had seen that Shannon was writing something along those lines. The story starts off with Quinn getting ready to take her younger sister Ashling on a mini-vaca to the beach to celebrate Ashling's graduation. But first a quick stop to see their grandfather. Ordinary, right? Not quite. Out of the blue Quinn experiences her Grandpa "quickening" her, and she has no idea who is going on or what it means. Quinn is not happy when her sister decides to take surfing lessons, as Quinn has had a bad experience in the past involving a shark. When Ashling is drug down to the depths of the ocean, Quinn is helpless to save her, because of her fears. But not everything is as it seems, because the creatures that have Ashling have a tie with Quinn, that is part of her destiny. The choices left in Quinn's hands will not be easy one's. Adding to everything else thrown on Quinn's plate, are two smoking hot men vying for her attention, one of which is to be her sole mate.
Although the read is short, it is fast paced, and full of suspense and action. I can't wait to find out more about the back story. Beware! The reader will be left with lots of cliffhangers and unanswered questions! I can't wait to read book two.
Although the read is short, it is fast paced, and full of suspense and action. I can't wait to find out more about the back story. Beware! The reader will be left with lots of cliffhangers and unanswered questions! I can't wait to read book two.
January 12, 2012
Right from the beginning this story explodes. It starts in a psych ward where the heroine Quinn is visiting her Grandpa. He ‘quickens’ her in a violent way that will prepare her to meet with her coming fate. The way Ms. Mayer wrote about young Quinn, I found I cared what would happen to her. In fact, I couldn’t put the book down.
When Ashling, Quinn’s sister, talks her into a surfing trip to Tofino strange things start to happen. First of all, because of a shark accident previously, Quinn is horrifically afraid of the water, but circumstances force her to overcome these fears. From conflict to conflict, the tale moves along engrossing the reader with each turning page.
Fighting magic and monsters, Quinn survives each battle until she meets with the ultimate war - that of her emotions. Bres, who is a violet-eyed, dark-haired Fomorii- an enemy to her people - excites her beyond all reason. Then there’s Luke, her golden-eyed destiny whose spirit links with hers in such a way that she knows they belong together.
Quinn finds she has certain powers while she battles to live, but will she be strong enough to save her sister who was captured by the wicked Fomorii?
At the end of this story, the author stated that the next book in the Celtic Legacy Series - Emerald Isle - will be released soon. I can’t wait!
When Ashling, Quinn’s sister, talks her into a surfing trip to Tofino strange things start to happen. First of all, because of a shark accident previously, Quinn is horrifically afraid of the water, but circumstances force her to overcome these fears. From conflict to conflict, the tale moves along engrossing the reader with each turning page.
Fighting magic and monsters, Quinn survives each battle until she meets with the ultimate war - that of her emotions. Bres, who is a violet-eyed, dark-haired Fomorii- an enemy to her people - excites her beyond all reason. Then there’s Luke, her golden-eyed destiny whose spirit links with hers in such a way that she knows they belong together.
Quinn finds she has certain powers while she battles to live, but will she be strong enough to save her sister who was captured by the wicked Fomorii?
At the end of this story, the author stated that the next book in the Celtic Legacy Series - Emerald Isle - will be released soon. I can’t wait!
May 31, 2013
This was a fun read with an original twist on the mythology aspect of it. The focus here was on Irish myths instead of more commonly seen Greek/Roman Gods. The family aspect of this read was also a bit unusual. We are introduced to two sisters that are very close. Quinn is the older sister that has practically raised her younger sister Ashling. Their mother has had little to do with them and their grandfather is in a mental institution, and even he has his favorite of the two.
As the story unfolds, Quinn quickly learns that her life is not what she has always believed it to be. The loss of her sister to the monsters that she never knew existed has opened her eyes and caused her to fight for those she loves. My biggest problem was understanding the family dynamics portrayed in this story. Its never really explained why their mother doesn't want them, or why their grandfather behaves the way he does towards them.
Overall, I enjoyed this read although it left me with a lot of questions. And some things were rather predictable, the ever present love triangle was no surprise. But I am intrigued as to where this story is going and I plan on reading the next book in this series.
As the story unfolds, Quinn quickly learns that her life is not what she has always believed it to be. The loss of her sister to the monsters that she never knew existed has opened her eyes and caused her to fight for those she loves. My biggest problem was understanding the family dynamics portrayed in this story. Its never really explained why their mother doesn't want them, or why their grandfather behaves the way he does towards them.
Overall, I enjoyed this read although it left me with a lot of questions. And some things were rather predictable, the ever present love triangle was no surprise. But I am intrigued as to where this story is going and I plan on reading the next book in this series.
March 10, 2012
This was filled with lots of action and I enjoyed reading it. The story flowed quickly and it was easy to get caught up in the supernatural world the author envisions. The bond between the sisters is fabulous and I loved the sense of danger and conflict that is woven throughout the whole book. The world-building here is off to a fabulous start, and I am eager to read the next installment. That said, the major cliff-hanger ending was a real blow. I don’t mind when there is a set-up for the next adventure but I heartily dislike serialized books – most especially when there is a long wait before the next book is released. In general, my practice is to wait until a series is complete so I can better submerge my mind into the story. I wish I had waited longer before reading Dark Waters. I feel that this book ended too soon. The ending left me feeling somewhat depressed and out of sorts – I much prefer leaving a book and feeling at least content, if not jubilant.
Reviewed by Laurie
Reviewed by Laurie
January 13, 2012
(4.5 stars)
I loved the story. It was a fast read, perfect for the beach, a rainy afternoon or a sleepless night! But don't expect to be lulled to sleep, this story doesn't stop moving. As fast as it is happening for our protagonist, Quinn, is as fast as Mayer takes us along for the ride
I too cannot wait to see what lays ahead for Quinn! Will she face her mother? Will her sister stay true? Will Bres heart still belong to her?
The bond of sisters is one of the strongest within a family structure, and Quinn and Ashley are no exception to this rule. In the middle of the greatest evil and good force of their lives the two are set in a struggle to overcome blood and be true to that bond.
The only reason I didn't give it a 5 star review was the ending. She has her work cut out for her when it comes to this Medievalist and Arthurian Mythos junkie! If she does, I'll be back her to change it to five!
I loved the story. It was a fast read, perfect for the beach, a rainy afternoon or a sleepless night! But don't expect to be lulled to sleep, this story doesn't stop moving. As fast as it is happening for our protagonist, Quinn, is as fast as Mayer takes us along for the ride
I too cannot wait to see what lays ahead for Quinn! Will she face her mother? Will her sister stay true? Will Bres heart still belong to her?
The bond of sisters is one of the strongest within a family structure, and Quinn and Ashley are no exception to this rule. In the middle of the greatest evil and good force of their lives the two are set in a struggle to overcome blood and be true to that bond.
The only reason I didn't give it a 5 star review was the ending. She has her work cut out for her when it comes to this Medievalist and Arthurian Mythos junkie! If she does, I'll be back her to change it to five!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 29, 2012
An Action-Packed Sexy Adventure
Shannon Mayer’s, Dark Waters , is action-packed from beginning to end. This book has it all, a bond between sisters, monsters, Fae, and sexy men. You can’t go wrong.
After an attack by her own Grandfather, Quinn is “quickened” and her life is changed forever, but when her younger sister is kidnapped, pulling her into the water world, Quinn must face one trial after another including her attraction to two very different men. This book leaves some unanswered questions as it sets you up for the next book, but it in no way takes away from this book or story. I loved it and recommend it to anyone who loves the paranormal/urban fantasy genre.
Shannon Mayer’s, Dark Waters , is action-packed from beginning to end. This book has it all, a bond between sisters, monsters, Fae, and sexy men. You can’t go wrong.
After an attack by her own Grandfather, Quinn is “quickened” and her life is changed forever, but when her younger sister is kidnapped, pulling her into the water world, Quinn must face one trial after another including her attraction to two very different men. This book leaves some unanswered questions as it sets you up for the next book, but it in no way takes away from this book or story. I loved it and recommend it to anyone who loves the paranormal/urban fantasy genre.
January 25, 2012
No gossamer and glitter fairies, here! Dark Waters is a quick, action-packed urban fantasy offering a refreshing twist on the use of Celtic myth in a modern setting. From the beginning, this novel offers interesting characters and creatures in more interesting settings. (I particularly enjoyed Quinn and Ashley's visit with their grandfather.) A couple of things kept me from giving this novel five stars. First, the characters felt younger to me than I think is intended, so the more adult love interests came as a surprise and felt awkward. And second, the book was short and ended in an odd place. I would prefer to pay more and get the full story in one volume.
May 27, 2012
I would have given a much higher rating but this reads like the self-published book it is. It needed some serious editing but there was a lot about the story I enjoyed. The pacing was off, the way Quinn vacillated between two men was a little much, and a ton of commas were missing where they needed to be. All that said, I think I'd probably read the next book because the world and the characters were interesting enough. This series has great potential but needs some polishing...
July 2, 2015
I am not sure exactY why
I loved the idea, I loved the theme. The characters seemed a bit card boardish to me. I could not quit connect to any of them. I am on the fence about book two
I loved the idea, I loved the theme. The characters seemed a bit card boardish to me. I could not quit connect to any of them. I am on the fence about book two
January 31, 2012
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April 26, 2013
I reviewed this entire trilogy after finishing dark Fae. The books were so short & all followed one basic plot there wasn't enough to say in 3 separate reviews
January 16, 2018
Book Review- Dark Waters by Shannon Mayer
Ashling and Quinn stop to see their Grandfather in the Nursing Home. Their grandfather favors Ashling and threatens Quinn. He attacks Quinn so it seems. However, he quickens her. Quinn has no idea what he did. She still takes Ashling to the beach as her graduation present even finding a surfing instructor. Quinn fears the water after she was attacked by a shark.
Unfortunately, the trip turns into a nightmare when Ashling was dragged under by a shark. That is what Quinn thought at first. She is shocked to see the monsters her grandfather used to talk about. Luke, the surfing instructor, stops Quinn from going after her sister. She is introduced to a new world she never knew and a prophesy that she is involved in. She must make difficult decisions for herself and Ashling. She refuses to give up even as nothing goes a she hopes.
The story was the first in a series called A Celtic Legacy. Quinn learns what she is and that she is important. The author makes her face her biggest fear as she tries to get to Ashling. There are a lot of twists and turns. The author throws a few surprises at the reader. It was a short read that didn’t develop Quinn’s character as much as I would have liked. She seemed very immature to me. In fact, I thought she was younger than she was. I had a hard time getting behind her at certain parts of the story. I didn’t like how she let her fear stop her in crucial moments. I got disgusted with her at times I will admit. So, I will be interested to see how she handles the next steps. I’m not quite sure where the author will take it. It is a very original story. I give it a 3 out of 5.
Ashling and Quinn stop to see their Grandfather in the Nursing Home. Their grandfather favors Ashling and threatens Quinn. He attacks Quinn so it seems. However, he quickens her. Quinn has no idea what he did. She still takes Ashling to the beach as her graduation present even finding a surfing instructor. Quinn fears the water after she was attacked by a shark.
Unfortunately, the trip turns into a nightmare when Ashling was dragged under by a shark. That is what Quinn thought at first. She is shocked to see the monsters her grandfather used to talk about. Luke, the surfing instructor, stops Quinn from going after her sister. She is introduced to a new world she never knew and a prophesy that she is involved in. She must make difficult decisions for herself and Ashling. She refuses to give up even as nothing goes a she hopes.
The story was the first in a series called A Celtic Legacy. Quinn learns what she is and that she is important. The author makes her face her biggest fear as she tries to get to Ashling. There are a lot of twists and turns. The author throws a few surprises at the reader. It was a short read that didn’t develop Quinn’s character as much as I would have liked. She seemed very immature to me. In fact, I thought she was younger than she was. I had a hard time getting behind her at certain parts of the story. I didn’t like how she let her fear stop her in crucial moments. I got disgusted with her at times I will admit. So, I will be interested to see how she handles the next steps. I’m not quite sure where the author will take it. It is a very original story. I give it a 3 out of 5.
January 5, 2021
I’m invested
This was a quick read and honestly I’m not sure how I feel about this. Mayer updated this book and I wonder what the original was like, I noticed a few errors but it wasn’t distracting like bigger blunders about how an appearance changes between scenes or someone’s name being written wrong.
This was a short story and everything wasn’t fleshed out, meaning we didn’t get a lot of world building or even learn more about the prophecy or how both of the fae described in the series were rooted in Irish folklore. Like she had a working phone that she clearly read reviews on an expensive hotel but can’t do a quick Wiki search to see what she may be up against?
Also, I know she was pressed for time, but in learning that her mom and sister went missing on the same day... did no one think to reach back out to the grandfather and say “hey, I know you’re not really crazy..tell me what I need to know to get them back”?
It didn’t seem rooted in the reality of a 22 year old living in the 21st century with a sister who was social media obsessed. Or actually packing a bookbag with real supplies, like water or rope or any of the other survivalist things her grandfather supposedly trained her for?
Overall, I actually enjoyed the story and was happy there was no snarky/trusty sidekick to keep her company as Mayer loves to include in the majority of her books. I’ve already downloaded book 2 and can’t wait to see how Quinn grows and learn more about why her mother is so detached.
This was a quick read and honestly I’m not sure how I feel about this. Mayer updated this book and I wonder what the original was like, I noticed a few errors but it wasn’t distracting like bigger blunders about how an appearance changes between scenes or someone’s name being written wrong.
This was a short story and everything wasn’t fleshed out, meaning we didn’t get a lot of world building or even learn more about the prophecy or how both of the fae described in the series were rooted in Irish folklore. Like she had a working phone that she clearly read reviews on an expensive hotel but can’t do a quick Wiki search to see what she may be up against?
Also, I know she was pressed for time, but in learning that her mom and sister went missing on the same day... did no one think to reach back out to the grandfather and say “hey, I know you’re not really crazy..tell me what I need to know to get them back”?
It didn’t seem rooted in the reality of a 22 year old living in the 21st century with a sister who was social media obsessed. Or actually packing a bookbag with real supplies, like water or rope or any of the other survivalist things her grandfather supposedly trained her for?
Overall, I actually enjoyed the story and was happy there was no snarky/trusty sidekick to keep her company as Mayer loves to include in the majority of her books. I’ve already downloaded book 2 and can’t wait to see how Quinn grows and learn more about why her mother is so detached.
November 15, 2024
Storyline: 7
Characters: 8
Spice: 1
Trigger Warnings: 2
Book: Dark Waters
Series: A Celtic Legacy Series
Author: Shannon Mayer
Will You Read More From This Author: Yes
Completed Series: Yes!
The audio version was good. I didn’t really care for the voice of Bres, but that is just because it was a little too gritty for me. I picked the book solely because it was a Shannon Mayer book. I was a little thrown by the way it started, but it got better quickly. I love the way Shannon always gives backstory in the most interesting ways. I love the premise of the two different races (I couldn’t spell them if I tried *Audiobook*). All around a good book and I look forward to seeing what happens. It doesn’t end on a cliff. I felt more like it was intermission, if that makes sense.
I really loved Bres. It’s not really a question of why… He’s the brooding, the world can eff off while I try to save it type. I also love Cora (sp- I was listening to it, so spelling may not be exact.). She is a little hard to figure out and that’s half the fun of reading! I’m not sure about Luke. We will see!
2 kissing scenes, maybe 3
Triggers: If you are scared of sharks maybe
Characters: 8
Spice: 1
Trigger Warnings: 2
Book: Dark Waters
Series: A Celtic Legacy Series
Author: Shannon Mayer
Will You Read More From This Author: Yes
Completed Series: Yes!
The audio version was good. I didn’t really care for the voice of Bres, but that is just because it was a little too gritty for me. I picked the book solely because it was a Shannon Mayer book. I was a little thrown by the way it started, but it got better quickly. I love the way Shannon always gives backstory in the most interesting ways. I love the premise of the two different races (I couldn’t spell them if I tried *Audiobook*). All around a good book and I look forward to seeing what happens. It doesn’t end on a cliff. I felt more like it was intermission, if that makes sense.
I really loved Bres. It’s not really a question of why… He’s the brooding, the world can eff off while I try to save it type. I also love Cora (sp- I was listening to it, so spelling may not be exact.). She is a little hard to figure out and that’s half the fun of reading! I’m not sure about Luke. We will see!
2 kissing scenes, maybe 3
Triggers: If you are scared of sharks maybe
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