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Unbetrothed
Around Agatha Sea, princesses are poised, magically gifted, and betrothed.
So, when seventeen-year-old Princess Beatriz still fails to secure a betrothal, her parents hold a ball. Forming an alliance could mean the difference between peace and war, but Beatriz doesn't want just any suitor.She's in love with her best friend, Prince Lux. Marrying Prince Lux will always be a silly dream as long as she has no magical gift.
Princess Beatriz will do whatever it takes to obtain a touch of magic, including making a deadly oath to go on a quest to Valle de Los Fantasmas. A valley where no one comes out alive.
If she can manage to succeed, Princess Beatriz could have everything she desires and secure peace for her kingdom. If she fails, she'll lose not only her greatest dream but also her kingdom, and maybe even her own life.
So, when seventeen-year-old Princess Beatriz still fails to secure a betrothal, her parents hold a ball. Forming an alliance could mean the difference between peace and war, but Beatriz doesn't want just any suitor.She's in love with her best friend, Prince Lux. Marrying Prince Lux will always be a silly dream as long as she has no magical gift.
Princess Beatriz will do whatever it takes to obtain a touch of magic, including making a deadly oath to go on a quest to Valle de Los Fantasmas. A valley where no one comes out alive.
If she can manage to succeed, Princess Beatriz could have everything she desires and secure peace for her kingdom. If she fails, she'll lose not only her greatest dream but also her kingdom, and maybe even her own life.
287 pages, Paperback
Published February 5, 2022
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October 24, 2023
Do you feel inadequate, unloved, and possibly lash out at others? I wrote my Latin inspired fantasy specifically for you. I hope you feel seen, loved, and know that you are valuable.
UNBETROTHED kept me up late at night enjoying all the twists and turns in this adventure. I hope you’re able to experience the joys I’ve had while visiting Huasteca, Mexico and the Puerto Rican countryside. My story world doesn't take place in our world but is infused with many of my experiences.
UNBETROTHED kept me up late at night enjoying all the twists and turns in this adventure. I hope you’re able to experience the joys I’ve had while visiting Huasteca, Mexico and the Puerto Rican countryside. My story world doesn't take place in our world but is infused with many of my experiences.
November 23, 2021
Unbetrothed is an enchanting tale full of joy, learning, and intriguing fantasy powers. With a touch of romance and a gripping battle, readers will be caught up in this story and the journey of these characters. ✨
November 19, 2021
Unbetrothed is an enchanting debut enriched with adventure, love, and a pinch of latin flair. From the start, Yamnitz creates an inviting, magical world that will easily draw readers in. With its poetic prose and engaging plot, Unbetrothed is sure to be a favorite for many readers to come.
November 17, 2021
SO GOOD kept me entertained and I know the author... super proud of her!! I loved the main character and the plot is amazing. read this book!!
April 11, 2025
What to say, what to sayyyy.
The book was ok. I didn’t love it but didn’t hate it. I had a few problems with it, so let’s get into it, shall we?
-The story
It was fine, I felt like it was basic and kind of predictable. It was interesting and kept me reading, but I wasn’t invested in the story. Also the romance progressed wayyy too fast and I didn’t feel like they got to know each other enough. Also it just didn’t seem super genuine.
-The characters
I didn’t really connect to any of the characters and wasn’t really invested in any of them.
Beatriz was kind of annoying and I didn’t really like her. I also feel like she had a flip near the end and that felt too quick and didn’t really seem realistic.
Zichri was interesting and probably the only character I liked. Though he was the typical mysterious dark haired absolutely one of the most handsome dudes ever who is a gentleman and funny. Yup, your basic book dude. lol I also really don’t get why he’d like Beatriz…..like is that really the best of the best dude?? 😂
Laude was….im sorry really annoying. She just got on my nerves and was literally all over the place with her personality.
The other characters were fine, they didn’t really stick out much.
I can’t think of much more. There are some little problems and a mistake I found, and also for some reason I feel like the author used “giggled” wayyy too much and that got on my nerves. Don’t ask me why cuz I don’t know either! 😂 Also the climax of the book was a little bit of a let down. I thought it might be a little bigger and higher stakes, but it wasn’t really.
Overall I’d say it was an easy, basic, clean read that some would love but might not be for others.
Wellll, I think that’s it. At least I read through it fast! Might come back and add stuff if I remember. Also it’s a shorter review! 🎉 So proud of myself….but also I just didn’t have much to say. 😂
See yaaa!
~EllieJellyBean ✌️
The book was ok. I didn’t love it but didn’t hate it. I had a few problems with it, so let’s get into it, shall we?
-The story
It was fine, I felt like it was basic and kind of predictable. It was interesting and kept me reading, but I wasn’t invested in the story. Also the romance progressed wayyy too fast and I didn’t feel like they got to know each other enough. Also it just didn’t seem super genuine.
-The characters
I didn’t really connect to any of the characters and wasn’t really invested in any of them.
Beatriz was kind of annoying and I didn’t really like her. I also feel like she had a flip near the end and that felt too quick and didn’t really seem realistic.
Zichri was interesting and probably the only character I liked. Though he was the typical mysterious dark haired absolutely one of the most handsome dudes ever who is a gentleman and funny. Yup, your basic book dude. lol I also really don’t get why he’d like Beatriz…..like is that really the best of the best dude?? 😂
Laude was….im sorry really annoying. She just got on my nerves and was literally all over the place with her personality.
The other characters were fine, they didn’t really stick out much.
I can’t think of much more. There are some little problems and a mistake I found, and also for some reason I feel like the author used “giggled” wayyy too much and that got on my nerves. Don’t ask me why cuz I don’t know either! 😂 Also the climax of the book was a little bit of a let down. I thought it might be a little bigger and higher stakes, but it wasn’t really.
Overall I’d say it was an easy, basic, clean read that some would love but might not be for others.
Wellll, I think that’s it. At least I read through it fast! Might come back and add stuff if I remember. Also it’s a shorter review! 🎉 So proud of myself….but also I just didn’t have much to say. 😂
See yaaa!
~EllieJellyBean ✌️
December 3, 2021
Scriptural Connection
One who is faithful in a very little is also faithful in much, and one who is dishonest in a very little is also dishonest in much.
Luke 16:10
Spiritual Themes
Because I generally review only Christian novels (as opposed to “clean” fiction), I asked the author, Candice Pedraza Yemnitz, about the genre. She said that, because it’s fantasy, it’s not a Christian book. But, because she’s a Christian, the book does have Christian themes. I appreciate her honest description of the title, which does indeed possess Christian themes (thereby setting it apart from many “clean” titles).
Throughout, the novel references the “Ancient One.” I really appreciate this name for God, which echoes the term “Ancient of Days” and also speaks to God’s unchanging nature and presence!
Although Beatriz, the main character, doesn’t yet know the Ancient One (that is, in a personal way), she prays to him and is also strongly impacted by her mom’s faith. We also see moments where traditional magic (more on this below) isn’t enough to save the day, so the Ancient One intervenes on behalf of Beatriz. There are also various Scripture quotations, throughout.
The novel also emphasizes stewardship, addressing the question of how we use the resources we have: selfishly or generously (As an aside, I think the term “stewardship” is too often applied to money, with the implication that “stewarding” money means saving it. I really disagree with this idea. Stewardship means using our resources as the Lord calls us to, which may mean doing things that the world will not understand— the widow’s mite).
Magic
This is, to some extent, also a content note, but I wanted to briefly address the use of magic in the novel.
I know that some readers avoid reading about magic, for conscience sake, and I definitely would not recommend this title to such readers.
With that said, there are a few nuances to the magic in the book. First, magic is given as gifts to people. For instance, one character heals and another kindles fire with her touch. While these gifts typically come through the whyzer, a human with the ability to confer gifts, it is also implied that their ultimate source is the Ancient One.
Additionally, I think that these gifts can be interpreted allegorically, using the Parable of the Talents. Even though “talents” are a currency in the parable, I think that a person’s “talents” (including resources), also fits the parable’s intent—especially when the last verse of the parable is taken into account.
What I Liked
I often see reviewers exploring character development in their book reviews but it’s not something I usually think about. With that said, character development is very evident in Beatriz’s story arc. She grows from being self-centered to understanding the needs of others.
The culture of the fictional land of Giddel is clearly infused with Latin elements. It is SO refreshing to see this in a wholesome fantasy novel, especially one with Christian elements. I want to see so many more #OwnVoices books in the Christian genre!
The characters were believable. Much as I hate to admit it because she annoyed me at numerous points, I can definitely see myself in Beatriz and her less-than-shining moments.
The plot line was engaging and well-paced. There were some fun end-of-chapter cliffhangers (which I generally plowed right through).
Content
I’m very happy to say that the romance was delightfully clean! There was maybe (?) one kiss, but nothing gross and detailed.
Magic, as outlined above
One other content note with a potential spoiler (see below Recommendation Status)
Recommendation Status
Reader Discretion. This was a really fun book to read, especially because I haven’t seen many princess fantasies with Christian elements. Recommended for fans of Shannon Hale and Gail Carson Levine.
Due to the inclusion of magic, some readers may feel uncomfortable with the content. The author does not classify this novel as a Christian book.
Additional Content Note Below (Spoiler)
There’s a moment where a character is referred to as “unworthy,” which I felt wasn’t completely resolved (I couldn’t tell if we, as readers, were supposed to agree with the statement or not). Additionally, I think a reader could interpret Beatriz’s character growth (in conjunction with the worthiness/identity theme) as a works-based identity. However, I don’t think this would be a fair assessment of the author’s intention, since the novel was not written as Christian allegory.
One who is faithful in a very little is also faithful in much, and one who is dishonest in a very little is also dishonest in much.
Luke 16:10
Spiritual Themes
Because I generally review only Christian novels (as opposed to “clean” fiction), I asked the author, Candice Pedraza Yemnitz, about the genre. She said that, because it’s fantasy, it’s not a Christian book. But, because she’s a Christian, the book does have Christian themes. I appreciate her honest description of the title, which does indeed possess Christian themes (thereby setting it apart from many “clean” titles).
Throughout, the novel references the “Ancient One.” I really appreciate this name for God, which echoes the term “Ancient of Days” and also speaks to God’s unchanging nature and presence!
Although Beatriz, the main character, doesn’t yet know the Ancient One (that is, in a personal way), she prays to him and is also strongly impacted by her mom’s faith. We also see moments where traditional magic (more on this below) isn’t enough to save the day, so the Ancient One intervenes on behalf of Beatriz. There are also various Scripture quotations, throughout.
The novel also emphasizes stewardship, addressing the question of how we use the resources we have: selfishly or generously (As an aside, I think the term “stewardship” is too often applied to money, with the implication that “stewarding” money means saving it. I really disagree with this idea. Stewardship means using our resources as the Lord calls us to, which may mean doing things that the world will not understand— the widow’s mite).
Magic
This is, to some extent, also a content note, but I wanted to briefly address the use of magic in the novel.
I know that some readers avoid reading about magic, for conscience sake, and I definitely would not recommend this title to such readers.
With that said, there are a few nuances to the magic in the book. First, magic is given as gifts to people. For instance, one character heals and another kindles fire with her touch. While these gifts typically come through the whyzer, a human with the ability to confer gifts, it is also implied that their ultimate source is the Ancient One.
Additionally, I think that these gifts can be interpreted allegorically, using the Parable of the Talents. Even though “talents” are a currency in the parable, I think that a person’s “talents” (including resources), also fits the parable’s intent—especially when the last verse of the parable is taken into account.
What I Liked
I often see reviewers exploring character development in their book reviews but it’s not something I usually think about. With that said, character development is very evident in Beatriz’s story arc. She grows from being self-centered to understanding the needs of others.
The culture of the fictional land of Giddel is clearly infused with Latin elements. It is SO refreshing to see this in a wholesome fantasy novel, especially one with Christian elements. I want to see so many more #OwnVoices books in the Christian genre!
The characters were believable. Much as I hate to admit it because she annoyed me at numerous points, I can definitely see myself in Beatriz and her less-than-shining moments.
The plot line was engaging and well-paced. There were some fun end-of-chapter cliffhangers (which I generally plowed right through).
Content
I’m very happy to say that the romance was delightfully clean! There was maybe (?) one kiss, but nothing gross and detailed.
Magic, as outlined above
One other content note with a potential spoiler (see below Recommendation Status)
Recommendation Status
Reader Discretion. This was a really fun book to read, especially because I haven’t seen many princess fantasies with Christian elements. Recommended for fans of Shannon Hale and Gail Carson Levine.
Due to the inclusion of magic, some readers may feel uncomfortable with the content. The author does not classify this novel as a Christian book.
Additional Content Note Below (Spoiler)
There’s a moment where a character is referred to as “unworthy,” which I felt wasn’t completely resolved (I couldn’t tell if we, as readers, were supposed to agree with the statement or not). Additionally, I think a reader could interpret Beatriz’s character growth (in conjunction with the worthiness/identity theme) as a works-based identity. However, I don’t think this would be a fair assessment of the author’s intention, since the novel was not written as Christian allegory.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 2, 2021
From the first page of this YA story, I wanted to know if this proud princess would get the desires of her heart. This is a beautifully written and gripping tale of one girl's search for significance. Beatriz thinks obtaining a gift will bring her worth and purpose, but the adventure she embarks on delivers her much more than she imagines.
Being self-absorbed, Beatriz misses some of the treasures in her life right before her eyes and overlooks some real dangers. This is a story of finding real friends and discovering that our value doesn't come from something we get but rather from something we give.
Beatriz discovers her true strength and value. Laude is the kind of loyal friend we all desire. And Zichri is another character readers will love.
I highly recommend this fantasy novel, Unbetrothed. I received an ARC prior to publication, but I can't wait to buy a copy for my own teens and to tell others about this moving tale, sprinkled with sweet romance. A must read for 2022!
Being self-absorbed, Beatriz misses some of the treasures in her life right before her eyes and overlooks some real dangers. This is a story of finding real friends and discovering that our value doesn't come from something we get but rather from something we give.
Beatriz discovers her true strength and value. Laude is the kind of loyal friend we all desire. And Zichri is another character readers will love.
I highly recommend this fantasy novel, Unbetrothed. I received an ARC prior to publication, but I can't wait to buy a copy for my own teens and to tell others about this moving tale, sprinkled with sweet romance. A must read for 2022!
March 9, 2025
The author has an amazing, rich world. This is one of the few fantasy novels I've read with Spanish influence, which makes it unique. The description of mangoes, waterfalls, and mysterious forests had me imagining it all in my mind.
Adding to this are the supporting characters, who are a lot more likable than the main character. These characters made me more attached to the story, especially Beatriz's friend/servant.
The plot itself is also intriguing, taking unexpected twists and turns. The author plants some seeds that develop into full blooms by the end of the novel, and I like how she connected those plot points together.
The author uses the enemies to lovers trope to soften some of Beatriz's rough edges. She develops the romance well over the course of the novel, and it is sweet to read. The ending, though resolved, left a few strands available for a possible sequel, which I would gladly enjoy.
I would have liked a fuller change in Beatriz's character (less stubbornness and pride), but if there is a sequel, it could be that more change is to come. Overall, a good book that I recommend to people who love a strong female protagonist, a unique fantasy setting, and a sweet romance.
Adding to this are the supporting characters, who are a lot more likable than the main character. These characters made me more attached to the story, especially Beatriz's friend/servant.
The plot itself is also intriguing, taking unexpected twists and turns. The author plants some seeds that develop into full blooms by the end of the novel, and I like how she connected those plot points together.
The author uses the enemies to lovers trope to soften some of Beatriz's rough edges. She develops the romance well over the course of the novel, and it is sweet to read. The ending, though resolved, left a few strands available for a possible sequel, which I would gladly enjoy.
I would have liked a fuller change in Beatriz's character (less stubbornness and pride), but if there is a sequel, it could be that more change is to come. Overall, a good book that I recommend to people who love a strong female protagonist, a unique fantasy setting, and a sweet romance.
November 30, 2021
I’m raving about this book 🤩 the scenes are beautifully written; I felt like I was standing next to the characters the whole time. Beatriz is realistic and a true princess - a little spoiled and sometimes high minded but genuine and kind. The quest itself was fun and full of surprises. I also loved the subplot of kingdom politics and the Latin flare throughout the book 🤍 I’ve truly never read a book like this before and I absolutely recommend Unbetrothed, especially if you love clean ya fantasy.
March 28, 2023
Unbetrothed was captivating! Candice is a gifted storyteller whose writing makes you think you lived the story instead of just reading it. A setting so well written your senses will feel like you are there, incredible character arc that leaves you satisfied, and a really fun Latin flare all make for a book that I was excited to keep reading and know I will be recommending!
January 6, 2022
“In due time.”
“Those three words crushed my heart and wrung my insides into knots. Mamá hugged me, but even her warmth didn’t ease my pain. Why wasn’t I special enough to get a touch of magic?”
In this moment, we get a glimpse of Princess Beatriz at age seven. By seventeen, where we begin our story, Princess Beatriz is a selfish, proud, and jaded young lady. The adventure that Candice Pedraza Yamnitz takes you on is a wild ride, as Beatriz must enter the Valle de los Fantasmas to receive her magical gifting. If she is successful, she believes she will finally find happiness through a betrothal to her long-time friend and secret crush, Prince Lux.
I stayed up way too late to finish this epic Latin fantasy tale (always the sign of a GREAT book). The setting was unlike anything I had ever read before! My mind could picture royalty within a historic, Spanish-inspired castle in the heart of the Giddel.
And then, Beatriz’s journey into Valle de los Fantasmas transported you into a jungle survival experience. Along the way, Beatriz is forced to face her preconceived prejudices as enemies become her friends as they help her on her quest. Spanish vocabulary intertmingled within the text for an enjoyable and unique world-building experience!
The character arc of Beatriz is magical as she transforms from a haughty, prideful girl to a humble, caring, and wise young lady as she discovers her self-worth is not in her gifting, but in being at peace with who the Ancient One created her to be, and discovering the value of people who accept her as she is. Note: The allegorical Christian themes are expertly woven throughout this well-written novel.
With adventure and surprises around every corner, I turned the pages in anticipation of Beatriz receiving all her heart desires. However, the Ancient One has a unique plan for her life—one that will save her heart, soul, and kingdom. I highly recommend this book for any and all fantasy fans!
The nitty-gritty:
Romance: Clean. Just hand-holding and a few kisses.
Violence: PG-13, as there is a war at the end. No gory details.
I received an ARC prior to publication, but the opinions are all my own.
I have already pre-ordered my copy-which will be released in February 2022!
“Those three words crushed my heart and wrung my insides into knots. Mamá hugged me, but even her warmth didn’t ease my pain. Why wasn’t I special enough to get a touch of magic?”
In this moment, we get a glimpse of Princess Beatriz at age seven. By seventeen, where we begin our story, Princess Beatriz is a selfish, proud, and jaded young lady. The adventure that Candice Pedraza Yamnitz takes you on is a wild ride, as Beatriz must enter the Valle de los Fantasmas to receive her magical gifting. If she is successful, she believes she will finally find happiness through a betrothal to her long-time friend and secret crush, Prince Lux.
I stayed up way too late to finish this epic Latin fantasy tale (always the sign of a GREAT book). The setting was unlike anything I had ever read before! My mind could picture royalty within a historic, Spanish-inspired castle in the heart of the Giddel.
And then, Beatriz’s journey into Valle de los Fantasmas transported you into a jungle survival experience. Along the way, Beatriz is forced to face her preconceived prejudices as enemies become her friends as they help her on her quest. Spanish vocabulary intertmingled within the text for an enjoyable and unique world-building experience!
The character arc of Beatriz is magical as she transforms from a haughty, prideful girl to a humble, caring, and wise young lady as she discovers her self-worth is not in her gifting, but in being at peace with who the Ancient One created her to be, and discovering the value of people who accept her as she is. Note: The allegorical Christian themes are expertly woven throughout this well-written novel.
With adventure and surprises around every corner, I turned the pages in anticipation of Beatriz receiving all her heart desires. However, the Ancient One has a unique plan for her life—one that will save her heart, soul, and kingdom. I highly recommend this book for any and all fantasy fans!
The nitty-gritty:
Romance: Clean. Just hand-holding and a few kisses.
Violence: PG-13, as there is a war at the end. No gory details.
I received an ARC prior to publication, but the opinions are all my own.
I have already pre-ordered my copy-which will be released in February 2022!
November 21, 2021
Sometimes, it's really hard to review a book. Not because the book was no good. Actually, it's because there's no way words can do the book enough justice.
Unbetrothed tells the story of a princess of a quest for her magical gift. Candice Pedraza Yamnitz has to be the queen of character crafting because there has been no MC I disliked as much as Beatriz. (Maybe Rubi from the telenovela of the same name) But then it gets better. The character arc is central and totally vivid in the story.
The character development is well crafted. The characters are unique and memorable (My favorites are Laude, Zichri and the four Himzos) The world building is perfect. I'd give that a 10/10. The allegory was beautifully weaved. In fact, the story gets a five stars.
But the lessons in the story are the real jewels.
1) Gifts and talents can never satisfy. Only God can.
2) Self love leaves you shallow and hollow, but true fulfilment is found in loving others and in service to others and God.
3) God doesn't care about your past. He can wrought beauty from a lifetime of carnage and a past of misery and sin. No one is beyond saving.
4) True friendship is found in people who love you unconditionally and relentlessly like Laude.
5) Sometimes, opposites really attract. Sometimes you might find love in hopeless places and the people you least expect. Prejudices and pride might just blind you to it.
6) And I'd like to borrow a quote from Disney's Hercules and say, the true strength of a hero doesn't lie in the size of his strength (or gifts and talents) but in the strength of his heart.
It was an honor to get an ARC of this book. I can't wait for the world to read it and I certainly can't wait for the sequel.
Unbetrothed tells the story of a princess of a quest for her magical gift. Candice Pedraza Yamnitz has to be the queen of character crafting because there has been no MC I disliked as much as Beatriz. (Maybe Rubi from the telenovela of the same name) But then it gets better. The character arc is central and totally vivid in the story.
The character development is well crafted. The characters are unique and memorable (My favorites are Laude, Zichri and the four Himzos) The world building is perfect. I'd give that a 10/10. The allegory was beautifully weaved. In fact, the story gets a five stars.
But the lessons in the story are the real jewels.
1) Gifts and talents can never satisfy. Only God can.
2) Self love leaves you shallow and hollow, but true fulfilment is found in loving others and in service to others and God.
3) God doesn't care about your past. He can wrought beauty from a lifetime of carnage and a past of misery and sin. No one is beyond saving.
4) True friendship is found in people who love you unconditionally and relentlessly like Laude.
5) Sometimes, opposites really attract. Sometimes you might find love in hopeless places and the people you least expect. Prejudices and pride might just blind you to it.
6) And I'd like to borrow a quote from Disney's Hercules and say, the true strength of a hero doesn't lie in the size of his strength (or gifts and talents) but in the strength of his heart.
It was an honor to get an ARC of this book. I can't wait for the world to read it and I certainly can't wait for the sequel.
February 4, 2022
4.4/5 stars. I loved this new world and the beauty and uniqueness of the land, culture, and people.
The main character has a flaw that I can relate to and I loved the way Candice brought her around full circle. I loved the Christian references in this book, although someone could read it without knowing that and still love the story.
The plot was so well written. The storyline grabbed me early on and held on throughout the twists and turns. At one point I peeked near the end to see if the book was going to turn out how I hoped! Which to me, is the sign of a great storyteller and novel :)
This book was also a clean read and full of sweet and swoon worthy romance ❤️
I'm hoping Candice will write a continuation of this or a second in this series!
Read it, you'll enjoy it :)
The main character has a flaw that I can relate to and I loved the way Candice brought her around full circle. I loved the Christian references in this book, although someone could read it without knowing that and still love the story.
The plot was so well written. The storyline grabbed me early on and held on throughout the twists and turns. At one point I peeked near the end to see if the book was going to turn out how I hoped! Which to me, is the sign of a great storyteller and novel :)
This book was also a clean read and full of sweet and swoon worthy romance ❤️
I'm hoping Candice will write a continuation of this or a second in this series!
Read it, you'll enjoy it :)
March 8, 2022
I will start off by saying this story was well-written. However, it wasn’t the book for me. There was quite a bit of magic, spells, and special giftings. In terms of characters, I found it hard to sympathise with the MC, Princes Beatriz. While I could understand her desire to be like others and her feelings of inadequacy, she came off selfish, spoiled, self absorbed, and way too stubborn for most of the book. My favourite character was probably Jaime; he seemed like a sweet, levelheaded, decent chap.
I’m probably not the target audience for this book, so I know it’s something others who enjoy magical fantasy and super stubborn/independent heroines would like. :)
I’m probably not the target audience for this book, so I know it’s something others who enjoy magical fantasy and super stubborn/independent heroines would like. :)
March 1, 2022
A new to me author. Loved the book! Couldn't put it down!
August 6, 2022
I was impressed with this debut fantasy that has Christian themes woven through while not technically being labeled a Christian book. And trying to achieve that in a fantasy world where we have to kind of suspend the belief of Almighty God, is even more of a task to tackle, and yet, the author does this beautifully.
Beatriz is a little difficult to like at first, but I appreciated where she came from and the reasons for why she was the way she was. The important thing to note is that she doesn’t stay this way. She learns and she grows. The author writes beautifully and has so many pretty turns of phrase. I’m hooked by pretty writing, and rarely do I find it in fantasy. And then there’s the romance. I tend to like the trope where girl thinks she’s in love with Boy A, but then finds out she’s really in love with Boy B. And we readers are usually wise to it before the main character is. Lots to like about this novel, and I look forward to what the author writes next.
Beatriz is a little difficult to like at first, but I appreciated where she came from and the reasons for why she was the way she was. The important thing to note is that she doesn’t stay this way. She learns and she grows. The author writes beautifully and has so many pretty turns of phrase. I’m hooked by pretty writing, and rarely do I find it in fantasy. And then there’s the romance. I tend to like the trope where girl thinks she’s in love with Boy A, but then finds out she’s really in love with Boy B. And we readers are usually wise to it before the main character is. Lots to like about this novel, and I look forward to what the author writes next.
January 5, 2022
Imagine knowing everyone looks down on you. You’ll never measure up or be respected. Even though the ridicule of others isn’t your fault, insecurity presses so deep you despise yourself. Why? You lack a magical gift. Pretend you are a princess and everyone in your kingdom expects you to have a gifting.
Welcome to Unbrethrothed—a teen fantasy novel laced with romance.
Princess Beatriz risks her life and leaves everyone she loves to pursue the magic that was promised but never given her. She journeys in disguise to the Valle de los Fantasmas, a place no one returns from. To survive she must depend upon enemies. As Beatriz pushes through barriers, she fights to find her gift, and she changes. I appreciate how author Candice Pedraza Yamnitz fleshes out internal struggles of jealousy and self-worth through her characters.
I’m excited to read more novels from this new author. Her own magic in Unbrethrothed will sweep readers into new kingdoms and self-understanding. I read an Advanced Readers Copy, the book will be published February 2022
Welcome to Unbrethrothed—a teen fantasy novel laced with romance.
Princess Beatriz risks her life and leaves everyone she loves to pursue the magic that was promised but never given her. She journeys in disguise to the Valle de los Fantasmas, a place no one returns from. To survive she must depend upon enemies. As Beatriz pushes through barriers, she fights to find her gift, and she changes. I appreciate how author Candice Pedraza Yamnitz fleshes out internal struggles of jealousy and self-worth through her characters.
I’m excited to read more novels from this new author. Her own magic in Unbrethrothed will sweep readers into new kingdoms and self-understanding. I read an Advanced Readers Copy, the book will be published February 2022
December 18, 2021
A unique, colorful setting with a strong protagonist makes this a captivating read. I enjoyed the dash of romance, and especially friendship between Beatriz and Laude. Definitely recommend this book to anyone who loves a bit of magic, epic quests, and stubborn (but lovable) princesses.
June 10, 2024
2024 reread: I enjoyed listening to the audiobook of Unbetrothed as a reread in preparation for the upcoming release of its sequel. I liked the narrator’s voices for the different characters. Would absolutely recommend this one to YA fantasy readers who enjoy audiobooks.
Original 2022 review:
Unbetrothed is a fantastic debut book! Author Candice Pedraza Yamnitz takes the reader on quite a journey in this YA Christian fantasy.
The world of Unbetrothed is a place of kingdoms and political tension. In the kingdom where main character Princess Beatriz lives, everyone is given a special magical ability. Everyone except Beatriz, that is.
Princess Beatriz is a very self-absorbed princess—she is the unlikable protagonist. But despite—or perhaps, due to—her character flaws, I actually found that I could still relate to her in many ways. Beatriz can be bold and daring, yet we also find her struggling with insecurities and feelings of unworthiness. I think it’s those struggles that made her a relatable character for me.
When Beatriz sets out on her journey, her faithful servant Laude accompanies her. At first I thought Laude was just that—the faithful servant going along to help the princess, but Laude ends up as much more than just a flat side-character. I really liked the character development and growth for both Laude and Beatriz.
Personally, I wanted a little more at the end. Another chapter or two, or even an epilogue would have been nice, but the author chose to leave the story open-ended. Despite my wish to know what happens after the book ends, I still loved the story and have preordered a paper copy for myself.
Content warnings & suggested reader ages:
There’s some romance in the story—mostly flirting and hand-holding. One or two kisses late in the story. There are also scenes with almost-but-not-quite graphic violence. Therefore, I’d recommend this book for teen/young adult readers and older (PG13).
My rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️💫 (4.5/5 stars)
I received an ebook ARC of Unbetrothed from the author to read and review. All opinions expressed in this review are my honest thoughts about this book.
Original 2022 review:
Unbetrothed is a fantastic debut book! Author Candice Pedraza Yamnitz takes the reader on quite a journey in this YA Christian fantasy.
The world of Unbetrothed is a place of kingdoms and political tension. In the kingdom where main character Princess Beatriz lives, everyone is given a special magical ability. Everyone except Beatriz, that is.
Princess Beatriz is a very self-absorbed princess—she is the unlikable protagonist. But despite—or perhaps, due to—her character flaws, I actually found that I could still relate to her in many ways. Beatriz can be bold and daring, yet we also find her struggling with insecurities and feelings of unworthiness. I think it’s those struggles that made her a relatable character for me.
When Beatriz sets out on her journey, her faithful servant Laude accompanies her. At first I thought Laude was just that—the faithful servant going along to help the princess, but Laude ends up as much more than just a flat side-character. I really liked the character development and growth for both Laude and Beatriz.
Personally, I wanted a little more at the end. Another chapter or two, or even an epilogue would have been nice, but the author chose to leave the story open-ended. Despite my wish to know what happens after the book ends, I still loved the story and have preordered a paper copy for myself.
Content warnings & suggested reader ages:
There’s some romance in the story—mostly flirting and hand-holding. One or two kisses late in the story. There are also scenes with almost-but-not-quite graphic violence. Therefore, I’d recommend this book for teen/young adult readers and older (PG13).
My rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️💫 (4.5/5 stars)
I received an ebook ARC of Unbetrothed from the author to read and review. All opinions expressed in this review are my honest thoughts about this book.
February 1, 2022
Actual Rating: 4.5/ 5 stars
The story begins with a haughty princess who desperately wants to have her gift so she could marry the prince that she wants. So she embarks on a dangerous quest to find her whyzer into the deadly valley with nothing but her wit, her loyal servant, and a determination to be something more.
The character development was gradual and realistic. I loved seeing my dislike for Beatriz transform into real respect and admiration. I really didn’t know if I would change how I felt for her, but the author did an amazing job of writing a unlikable protagonist (at the beginning) who truly grows and matures by the end of the story.
“More valuable than a high position is finding a loyal friend”
Laude is still my favorite and I loved the way the friendship dynamics between them two and the Himzo boys.
The beginning was quite slow for me and it didn’t really pick up until halfway. Once it did, I was flipping pages like crazy, trying to guess who was the bad guy. I might’ve even messaged the author, throwing my wild guesses at her. 😂
The Latin-inspired world was infused with sensory details and exciting and deadly things. I had a blast discovering these places alongside the characters.
I appreciated the allegory and use of scripture so, so much! Every moment that Beatriz prayed or just talked to the Ancient One had me feeling happy. I just love seeing that in a YA fantasy.
I definitely would recommend this book to anyone who loves a clean YA fantasy full of adventure, an element of mystery, a dash of romance, beautiful allegory, and friendship.
I was given an advanced reader’s copy for an honest review. All opinions are my own.
The story begins with a haughty princess who desperately wants to have her gift so she could marry the prince that she wants. So she embarks on a dangerous quest to find her whyzer into the deadly valley with nothing but her wit, her loyal servant, and a determination to be something more.
The character development was gradual and realistic. I loved seeing my dislike for Beatriz transform into real respect and admiration. I really didn’t know if I would change how I felt for her, but the author did an amazing job of writing a unlikable protagonist (at the beginning) who truly grows and matures by the end of the story.
“More valuable than a high position is finding a loyal friend”
Laude is still my favorite and I loved the way the friendship dynamics between them two and the Himzo boys.
The beginning was quite slow for me and it didn’t really pick up until halfway. Once it did, I was flipping pages like crazy, trying to guess who was the bad guy. I might’ve even messaged the author, throwing my wild guesses at her. 😂
The Latin-inspired world was infused with sensory details and exciting and deadly things. I had a blast discovering these places alongside the characters.
I appreciated the allegory and use of scripture so, so much! Every moment that Beatriz prayed or just talked to the Ancient One had me feeling happy. I just love seeing that in a YA fantasy.
I definitely would recommend this book to anyone who loves a clean YA fantasy full of adventure, an element of mystery, a dash of romance, beautiful allegory, and friendship.
I was given an advanced reader’s copy for an honest review. All opinions are my own.
January 19, 2024
This book has the unique distinction of being the only one I've pulled a true all-nighter with. I'm not sure what had me awake, but the book certainly didn't put me to sleep. ;)
The worldbuilding, y'all! It was absolutely beautiful, and I perked up each time even the most minor of powers was mentioned. (I think the one that surprised me most was the megaphone one, that was so cool and practical! I liked that almost everyone in the kingdom had powers, not just the elite.) I especially enjoyed the family relationships--Mama's forbidding yet gentle strength, Papa's soft spot for his little girl, and Cosmo's enigmatic care. (Sidenote: I would take an entire book about the Donatos!) And I ended up loving Laude!
Also, Beatriz's character arc?!!
THE ROMANCE. So sweet and pure. 🤍 He truly loved all versions of Beatriz, and who couldn't
help love him in return?
As I think through the themes in my less sleep-deprived state, they become even more beautiful, and I can't wait to read the prequel story when it releases. <3
CW: violence, lying, attempted r*pe.
The worldbuilding, y'all! It was absolutely beautiful, and I perked up each time even the most minor of powers was mentioned. (I think the one that surprised me most was the megaphone one, that was so cool and practical! I liked that almost everyone in the kingdom had powers, not just the elite.) I especially enjoyed the family relationships--Mama's forbidding yet gentle strength, Papa's soft spot for his little girl, and Cosmo's enigmatic care. (Sidenote: I would take an entire book about the Donatos!) And I ended up loving Laude!
Also, Beatriz's character arc?!!
THE ROMANCE. So sweet and pure. 🤍 He truly loved all versions of Beatriz, and who couldn't
help love him in return?
As I think through the themes in my less sleep-deprived state, they become even more beautiful, and I can't wait to read the prequel story when it releases. <3
CW: violence, lying, attempted r*pe.
August 21, 2022
"You know you'v read a good book when you turn the last page and feel a little as if you have lost a friend." - Paul Sweeney. Now, I'd probably say this for every book I've ever read, and then re-read, but Unbetrothed was EVERYTHING I expected and needed. From the fantasy feel to the action and adventure, Candice weaves stories with unforgettable characters and mesmerizing plots. Do yourself a favor and go read this book!!!
January 13, 2022
It is a fascinating story that hooked me from the beginning of the book. I like Beatriz from the beginning but loved her at the end. The story is full of adventures and love.
I highly recommend this fantasy novel, Unbetrothed. I received an ARC prior to publication, and can't wait to get my copy in the mail for my library. A must read for 2022!
I highly recommend this fantasy novel, Unbetrothed. I received an ARC prior to publication, and can't wait to get my copy in the mail for my library. A must read for 2022!
December 23, 2021
Unbetrothed is a wonderfully imaginative tale of a princess willing to go on a dangerous quest to receive a gift of magic. Candice Pedraza Yamnitz has crafted a young adult fantasy that helps girls embrace their own self-worth.
Sharon Rene, author, Hesitant Heroes
Sharon Rene, author, Hesitant Heroes
July 10, 2022
What an amazing read. The character development of the main character had me hooked from the beginning. I am definitely recommending this book. Romance, adventure, discovery, love and honor is the best way I could describe this to you.
dnf
January 20, 2023DNF at chapter 8; not because the book is bad (it's not) but I didn't have it in me to read an entire novel with a protagonist I didn't like. Based on reviews I've seen, however, she apparently has a good character arc so don't take me for an example with this one!
November 9, 2025
First of all, I’m not really the target audience for this book, and I knew that going into it. So it’s unsurprising that I didn’t fully enjoy the read.
My biggest issue was that I never quite connected with the writing style or with the main character. There were a lot of times when I felt like Beatriz’s behavior wasn’t consistent. I also would have liked more explanation about how everything worked with the whyzers and people’s gifts, because I was occasionally confused.
I do think the concept was interesting, and it was fun to see a fantasy world with Latin-inspired elements! I want to see more of that in the fantasy genre!
My biggest issue was that I never quite connected with the writing style or with the main character. There were a lot of times when I felt like Beatriz’s behavior wasn’t consistent. I also would have liked more explanation about how everything worked with the whyzers and people’s gifts, because I was occasionally confused.
I do think the concept was interesting, and it was fun to see a fantasy world with Latin-inspired elements! I want to see more of that in the fantasy genre!
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July 26, 2022I rarely read Young Adult Fantasy, but this one caught my attention. I loved watching Princess Beatriz evolve and earn the gift she so desperately seeks. In doing so she learns so many things about herself that she wants to change. The fight scenes were intriguing and the setting breathtaking. This coming-of-age tale has a clear thread of redemption which adds additional depth to Beatrix's maturing. And the young readers will understand where their focus in life should be. I'd love to read more about these characters and more from this author.
June 15, 2022
What a delightful book marketed for YA but suitable for adults too. It has castles, and fairies, and creepy creatures in the deep dark woods that you have to cross in order to get the offered magical gift that can save your kingdom and make you worthy to be the princess. It's a fairy tale, coming-of-age love story with lessons in selflessness, leadership and redemption in a setting so fun you don't even realize you're being taught. I can hardly wait for the sequel!
January 14, 2022
If you're a fan of a slow-burn romance and gradual build-up, combined with a journey to seek purpose and magical gifts, complete with dangerous monsters, a refreshingly tropical vibe, and plenty of political intrigue, then this is the book for you!
I especially enjoyed watching Beatriz's character growth, and I have to say, I loved how she actually learned from her past mistakes and changed for the better! Beatriz was such a refreshingly flawed and honest character, and I related to her so much! I also loved the theme of the danger of making hasty vows, and the importance of humility. Plus, the final climax was sooooo incredible!!! I can't wait for the sequel!
Now for my content disclosure:
The language was completely clean and guilt-free. For sexual content, no sex occurs during the book, and, apart from a kiss, some handholding, and a scene where the main lead goes swimming in a white dress, the book was very clean. For thematic and religious content, magic is present, but it's used moreso as a gift given than as a power achieved, and the characters are seen praying to a diety, but it is used moreso as an allegory for trusting in God over our own understanding. For violence, there are several intense action scenes, including a lot of death during the final climax, but it never gets too gory. For this reason, I give this book a PG-13 rating, mainly for the violence and action.
If you're looking for a delightful fantasy romance, that delivers an epic adventure and one amazing climax, then this is the book for you!
I especially enjoyed watching Beatriz's character growth, and I have to say, I loved how she actually learned from her past mistakes and changed for the better! Beatriz was such a refreshingly flawed and honest character, and I related to her so much! I also loved the theme of the danger of making hasty vows, and the importance of humility. Plus, the final climax was sooooo incredible!!! I can't wait for the sequel!
Now for my content disclosure:
The language was completely clean and guilt-free. For sexual content, no sex occurs during the book, and, apart from a kiss, some handholding, and a scene where the main lead goes swimming in a white dress, the book was very clean. For thematic and religious content, magic is present, but it's used moreso as a gift given than as a power achieved, and the characters are seen praying to a diety, but it is used moreso as an allegory for trusting in God over our own understanding. For violence, there are several intense action scenes, including a lot of death during the final climax, but it never gets too gory. For this reason, I give this book a PG-13 rating, mainly for the violence and action.
If you're looking for a delightful fantasy romance, that delivers an epic adventure and one amazing climax, then this is the book for you!
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