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Darcy's Longest Day: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
Friday 18th May, 1804
Dawn. St Albans, Hertfordshire. Fitzwilliam Darcy travels north with his sister, bound for Pemberley. In his frockcoat pocket lies a letter to Elizabeth Bennet, penned the night after his disastrous proposal. He intended to hand it to her before quitting Rosings for London, but their paths never crossed.
His plan is to call at Longbourn while visiting Bingley, now returned to Netherfield. Darcy broods over possible complications. Elizabeth might refuse the letter. Bingley might have lost Jane Bennet’s esteem. The militia (including Wickham) might still be quartered in Meryton …
But these are minor worries. For what awaits him is a life-and-death struggle to protect all he holds dear, in what will prove the most momentous day of his life.
Dawn. St Albans, Hertfordshire. Fitzwilliam Darcy travels north with his sister, bound for Pemberley. In his frockcoat pocket lies a letter to Elizabeth Bennet, penned the night after his disastrous proposal. He intended to hand it to her before quitting Rosings for London, but their paths never crossed.
His plan is to call at Longbourn while visiting Bingley, now returned to Netherfield. Darcy broods over possible complications. Elizabeth might refuse the letter. Bingley might have lost Jane Bennet’s esteem. The militia (including Wickham) might still be quartered in Meryton …
But these are minor worries. For what awaits him is a life-and-death struggle to protect all he holds dear, in what will prove the most momentous day of his life.
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May 7, 2022
Adventures are things that happen that aren't supposed to happen. ~ Percy Keese Fitzhugh
If you are looking for a story that starts off slowly and slowly builds speed, look elsewhere.
“Darcy’s Longest Day” begins at midnight and ends the next midnight. In between, action is packed into every minute.
After the disastrous Hunsford proposal, Fitzwilliam Darcy was unable to deliver his letter of explanation. He comes to Meryton, intending a short visit and hoping Elizabeth Bennet would accept the missive.
His path crosses that of a woman escaping from a man whose dogs are closing the gap. Darcy takes the woman to Longbourn when she asks to see Elizabeth.
Thus our dear couple is drawn into a world of Traitors and Murderers and Spies! Oh My!
It is only in adventure that some people succeed in knowing themselves — in finding themselves. ~ André Gide
Elizabeth and Darcy come to know themselves and especially to know each other during their adventures. They also learn how to borrow clothing!
The book grabbed me from the start and never let go. I was riveted!
I think it's about adventure. The test of an adventure is that when you're in the middle of it, you say to yourself, "Oh, now I've got myself into an awful mess; I wish I were sitting quietly at home." And the sign that something's wrong with you is when you sit quietly at home wishing you were out having lots of adventure... ~ Thornton Wilder
If you are looking for a story that starts off slowly and slowly builds speed, look elsewhere.
“Darcy’s Longest Day” begins at midnight and ends the next midnight. In between, action is packed into every minute.
After the disastrous Hunsford proposal, Fitzwilliam Darcy was unable to deliver his letter of explanation. He comes to Meryton, intending a short visit and hoping Elizabeth Bennet would accept the missive.
His path crosses that of a woman escaping from a man whose dogs are closing the gap. Darcy takes the woman to Longbourn when she asks to see Elizabeth.
Thus our dear couple is drawn into a world of Traitors and Murderers and Spies! Oh My!
It is only in adventure that some people succeed in knowing themselves — in finding themselves. ~ André Gide
Elizabeth and Darcy come to know themselves and especially to know each other during their adventures. They also learn how to borrow clothing!
The book grabbed me from the start and never let go. I was riveted!
I think it's about adventure. The test of an adventure is that when you're in the middle of it, you say to yourself, "Oh, now I've got myself into an awful mess; I wish I were sitting quietly at home." And the sign that something's wrong with you is when you sit quietly at home wishing you were out having lots of adventure... ~ Thornton Wilder
July 29, 2021
5+ stars
Whew! What a great Pride and Prejudice variation with a cloak-and-dagger twist!
It begins shortly after Elizabeth and Darcy leave Kent with memories of his rejected marriage proposal. He wrote his letter (you know the one I mean) at Rosings but still hasn't delivered it. He has since confessed to Bingley his misplaced interference in his friend's love life and has encouraged him to reopen Netherfield, intending to visit and find a way to get the letter to Elizabeth. Meanwhile, she is back at Longbourn, still oblivious to Mr. Wickham's true character, and still furious with Mr. Darcy.
During Darcy's journey to Netherfield, he comes across an injured woman running from dogs and an unidentified man. Darcy rescues her, taking her into his carriage and speeding away from her pursuers. Miss Selina Seymour explains that she has been working as a governess for Mr. Marchand, he made inappropriate advances, she fled, and now he's chasing after her. She needs somewhere to hide until she can arrange travel out of the area, and Darcy suggests the Bennets. Darcy's not convinced of her story because he heard her pursuer yell "Thief" as she escaped, and he believes it prudent to investigate.
Miss Seymour is NOT who she appears, as the reader knows from the beginning. What's unclear at first is whether she's a spy for the French or for the English, and both Elizabeth and Darcy get caught up in the espionage. Things turn into a deadly cat and mouse game - a ruthless French operative seeks to eliminate Elizabeth, who has seen him without a disguise.
The story includes the killer's point of view. This allows the reader to watch a fascinating chess match unfold between him and Elizabeth: he makes plans to locate and kill her, and she must anticipate and outwit him to stay alive. Darcy is desperate to protect her yet wise enough to defer to her strategies. I love that he is not presented as a super-perfect hero; near the end, he is outmatched by the French spy in a fencing duel and knows it immediately.
There's a subplot involving Georgiana, who accompanies Darcy and Selina to Longbourn. She quickly gets caught up in the Bennet household, enjoying the friendships she develops with all the sisters. But the militia has not gone to Brighton yet, and the officers are given orders to search the Longbourn residence - led by Mr. Wickham.
I have loved every one of this author's books, and this one blew me away. The writing style perfectly matches the plot, and it's well-edited. There's a lot of action and thrills; the pace never lets up from the first pages to the end, and you'll find it difficult to put down. The hourly time stamps at the beginning of each chapter remind us that this all is occurring over one single day (except the Epilogue). In the midst of it all, the romance between Darcy and Elizabeth develops believably, as they make a formidable team.
Highly recommend! Content is clean.
Whew! What a great Pride and Prejudice variation with a cloak-and-dagger twist!
It begins shortly after Elizabeth and Darcy leave Kent with memories of his rejected marriage proposal. He wrote his letter (you know the one I mean) at Rosings but still hasn't delivered it. He has since confessed to Bingley his misplaced interference in his friend's love life and has encouraged him to reopen Netherfield, intending to visit and find a way to get the letter to Elizabeth. Meanwhile, she is back at Longbourn, still oblivious to Mr. Wickham's true character, and still furious with Mr. Darcy.
During Darcy's journey to Netherfield, he comes across an injured woman running from dogs and an unidentified man. Darcy rescues her, taking her into his carriage and speeding away from her pursuers. Miss Selina Seymour explains that she has been working as a governess for Mr. Marchand, he made inappropriate advances, she fled, and now he's chasing after her. She needs somewhere to hide until she can arrange travel out of the area, and Darcy suggests the Bennets. Darcy's not convinced of her story because he heard her pursuer yell "Thief" as she escaped, and he believes it prudent to investigate.
Miss Seymour is NOT who she appears, as the reader knows from the beginning. What's unclear at first is whether she's a spy for the French or for the English, and both Elizabeth and Darcy get caught up in the espionage. Things turn into a deadly cat and mouse game - a ruthless French operative seeks to eliminate Elizabeth, who has seen him without a disguise.
The story includes the killer's point of view. This allows the reader to watch a fascinating chess match unfold between him and Elizabeth: he makes plans to locate and kill her, and she must anticipate and outwit him to stay alive. Darcy is desperate to protect her yet wise enough to defer to her strategies. I love that he is not presented as a super-perfect hero; near the end, he is outmatched by the French spy in a fencing duel and knows it immediately.
There's a subplot involving Georgiana, who accompanies Darcy and Selina to Longbourn. She quickly gets caught up in the Bennet household, enjoying the friendships she develops with all the sisters. But the militia has not gone to Brighton yet, and the officers are given orders to search the Longbourn residence - led by Mr. Wickham.
I have loved every one of this author's books, and this one blew me away. The writing style perfectly matches the plot, and it's well-edited. There's a lot of action and thrills; the pace never lets up from the first pages to the end, and you'll find it difficult to put down. The hourly time stamps at the beginning of each chapter remind us that this all is occurring over one single day (except the Epilogue). In the midst of it all, the romance between Darcy and Elizabeth develops believably, as they make a formidable team.
Highly recommend! Content is clean.
July 26, 2021
“Sometimes it feels like my life is just one long day.” –John Mayer
Rating: MA: mature audience due to violence, death[s], murder, espionage, treachery, spy network, etc. Angst Level: medium-to-high: I actually broke out in a nervous sweat. That doesn’t happen too often. Source: borrowed from KU [7-25-21]
SPOILER ALERT: *** This review may contain SPOILERS ***
“Bravery is not [the] absence of fear; it is doing what must be done, in spite of fear.” Quote from book
Napoleon Bonaparte wanted to invade England. His every thought was consumed with that auspicious goal. Every avenue was being examined. He had encouraged his spy network to field information that would give him the best advantage. Who would be sympathetic to his cause and who would resist? He had to know so he sent his best and they were in Hertfordshire.
Although the title specifically mentioned Mr. Darcy’s day, it also involved Elizabeth and others. Each chapter was an hour in one very long day. Danger, intrigue, spies, disguise, murder, kidnapping, escape, attempted murder, subterfuge, betrayal, hidden in plain sight, things not being what they appeared, measures, and countermeasures. OMG! This was amazing and scary as heck but still interesting.
What I liked: the theme of this story. I loved the intelligence that Elizabeth demonstrated as she attempted countermeasures against a worthy enemy. He was certainly impressed by her and the way she thought and countered his every move. He allowed his pride to get in the way. His thinking that he could outsmart her would be his undoing. Poor man. Not sorry.
*** Spoiler *** What I didn’t like: There were several things in fact that bothered me: First: D&E thwarted one of Napoleon’s greatest spymasters and brought about the downfall of his spy network. They didn’t even get a thank you from the Crown or anything? Dang!! I know things were done in secret but… something. Lands would have been forfeit to the Crown due to treason. I realize the one guy made a deal, but others would take the fall. I don’t know… it just seemed like they should have gotten something. Oh well. Then we have Lady Pamela [Selina]. She would have been perfect for Colonel Fitzwilliam. I was just sure they would meet at the wedding. There I go matchmaking. And lastly: Darcy’s skill with the foil was an embarrassment. Seriously? Richard would have kicked his behind if he had seen this match. I’m sorry. In most JAFF stories, Darcy is usually depicted as being better with the sword. Even in the ‘95 movie, Darcy used fencing as a way to exercise his demon regard for Elizabeth. I realize a Frenchman would be most excellent with a sword and agree that he would even be better than Darcy but at least let it be a worthy match. He could have admired Darcy’s skill even as he mentioned that Darcy needed more practice… or something. That was just sad.
Rating: MA: mature audience due to violence, death[s], murder, espionage, treachery, spy network, etc. Angst Level: medium-to-high: I actually broke out in a nervous sweat. That doesn’t happen too often. Source: borrowed from KU [7-25-21]
SPOILER ALERT: *** This review may contain SPOILERS ***
“Bravery is not [the] absence of fear; it is doing what must be done, in spite of fear.” Quote from book
Napoleon Bonaparte wanted to invade England. His every thought was consumed with that auspicious goal. Every avenue was being examined. He had encouraged his spy network to field information that would give him the best advantage. Who would be sympathetic to his cause and who would resist? He had to know so he sent his best and they were in Hertfordshire.
Although the title specifically mentioned Mr. Darcy’s day, it also involved Elizabeth and others. Each chapter was an hour in one very long day. Danger, intrigue, spies, disguise, murder, kidnapping, escape, attempted murder, subterfuge, betrayal, hidden in plain sight, things not being what they appeared, measures, and countermeasures. OMG! This was amazing and scary as heck but still interesting.
What I liked: the theme of this story. I loved the intelligence that Elizabeth demonstrated as she attempted countermeasures against a worthy enemy. He was certainly impressed by her and the way she thought and countered his every move. He allowed his pride to get in the way. His thinking that he could outsmart her would be his undoing. Poor man. Not sorry.
*** Spoiler *** What I didn’t like: There were several things in fact that bothered me: First: D&E thwarted one of Napoleon’s greatest spymasters and brought about the downfall of his spy network. They didn’t even get a thank you from the Crown or anything? Dang!! I know things were done in secret but… something. Lands would have been forfeit to the Crown due to treason. I realize the one guy made a deal, but others would take the fall. I don’t know… it just seemed like they should have gotten something. Oh well. Then we have Lady Pamela [Selina]. She would have been perfect for Colonel Fitzwilliam. I was just sure they would meet at the wedding. There I go matchmaking. And lastly: Darcy’s skill with the foil was an embarrassment. Seriously? Richard would have kicked his behind if he had seen this match. I’m sorry. In most JAFF stories, Darcy is usually depicted as being better with the sword. Even in the ‘95 movie, Darcy used fencing as a way to exercise his demon regard for Elizabeth. I realize a Frenchman would be most excellent with a sword and agree that he would even be better than Darcy but at least let it be a worthy match. He could have admired Darcy’s skill even as he mentioned that Darcy needed more practice… or something. That was just sad.
July 28, 2021
As others have commented this story is full of happenings. Most involve angst. There is at the top of the list treason and murder. We have a man who is a master of disguises and woe be to anyone who happens to see him out of disguise. We have a notebook which includes a code of some sort...Elizabeth is involved in unraveling that. There is so much action packed into this one day that I had to remind myself that it was not a longer period of time!
Darcy is (as the author's blurb tells us) heading to Netherfield and hopes to give Elizabeth the letter he wrote after his disastrous proposal at Hunsford. Georgiana accompanies him. As the story progresses Darcy does deliver the letter and his relationship with Elizabeth changes. He now finds himself in the position of protector. Murder occurs. And is a twist Elizabeth finds herself changing places with an acquaintance who is pursued by a man who claims that Elizabeth's friend, Selena, stole from him.
The local militia becomes involved. And a hideaway is found for one lady while the other must come up with ways to distract and mislead the man they believe has evil intents.
Darcy finds himself on the losing end of a sword fight. (Yes, that was hard to believe.) And you might find it somewhat amusing as you read of how Elizabeth actually saves Darcy.
Throughout all this action Darcy treasures moments with Elizabeth. He despairs of a future without her and hopes her opinion of him is changing.
This story certainly kept my attention. I highly recommend it. The author's writing about her research into that period, the situation and people involved in the war was also interesting.
Darcy is (as the author's blurb tells us) heading to Netherfield and hopes to give Elizabeth the letter he wrote after his disastrous proposal at Hunsford. Georgiana accompanies him. As the story progresses Darcy does deliver the letter and his relationship with Elizabeth changes. He now finds himself in the position of protector. Murder occurs. And is a twist Elizabeth finds herself changing places with an acquaintance who is pursued by a man who claims that Elizabeth's friend, Selena, stole from him.
The local militia becomes involved. And a hideaway is found for one lady while the other must come up with ways to distract and mislead the man they believe has evil intents.
Darcy finds himself on the losing end of a sword fight. (Yes, that was hard to believe.) And you might find it somewhat amusing as you read of how Elizabeth actually saves Darcy.
Throughout all this action Darcy treasures moments with Elizabeth. He despairs of a future without her and hopes her opinion of him is changing.
This story certainly kept my attention. I highly recommend it. The author's writing about her research into that period, the situation and people involved in the war was also interesting.
August 6, 2021
Spy thriller with some romance thrown in
Story takes place over the course of a day. Lots and lots of things going on. Each chapter is an hour. This deserves to be a series on Netflix, HBO plus, etc. if Bridgerton can be made, this could be the next big thing.
I can’t think of who the perfect Lizzy and Darcy might be but it would be another star making endeavor.
Story takes place over the course of a day. Lots and lots of things going on. Each chapter is an hour. This deserves to be a series on Netflix, HBO plus, etc. if Bridgerton can be made, this could be the next big thing.
I can’t think of who the perfect Lizzy and Darcy might be but it would be another star making endeavor.
March 23, 2022
ErgMerGerd!!! P&P & SPIES!!!
This is a full throttle book that grabs you by the neck and drags you along for a wild adventure in Hertfordshire. When Bingley returns to Netherfield, Darcy decides to bring Georgiana along to meet the Bennets. Instead of a restful day in the country Darcy is caught up in early morning intrigue as a damsel in distress falls in the path of his carriage. The woman claims to be a friend of Lizzy Bennet's and claims to be under assault by her employer.
Darcy takes the lady, a governess to Longbourn and she is confirmed to be Lizzy's friend but the adventure is just beginning.
This is a fun P&P book that really finds a new story line.
This is a full throttle book that grabs you by the neck and drags you along for a wild adventure in Hertfordshire. When Bingley returns to Netherfield, Darcy decides to bring Georgiana along to meet the Bennets. Instead of a restful day in the country Darcy is caught up in early morning intrigue as a damsel in distress falls in the path of his carriage. The woman claims to be a friend of Lizzy Bennet's and claims to be under assault by her employer.
Darcy takes the lady, a governess to Longbourn and she is confirmed to be Lizzy's friend but the adventure is just beginning.
This is a fun P&P book that really finds a new story line.
July 25, 2021
Very Good!
4.5* rounded up
Intrigue, spies, traitors, disguises, heroes and heroines propel Darcy through the longest day of his life, ultimately leading to his happy ending with Elizabeth. I very much enjoyed this well-developed, page-turning plot. I’d say medium-high angst depending on your tolerance level. Very well written, and I recommend it.
4.5* rounded up
Intrigue, spies, traitors, disguises, heroes and heroines propel Darcy through the longest day of his life, ultimately leading to his happy ending with Elizabeth. I very much enjoyed this well-developed, page-turning plot. I’d say medium-high angst depending on your tolerance level. Very well written, and I recommend it.
May 1, 2022
Riveting, spell-binding, not to be missed! Fast paced action. A bright, but frightened Elizabeth juggling dangers, keeping her family alive. A gallant Darcy wading through obstacles to reach her. Masterspys aplenty. Romantic tension. They last met at Hunsford. No letter yet. But they must rely on each other to survive. If there's a weak point, it's that there's little extended romance development. Yet the way the two rely on each other amidst danger, fast relationship development is plausible. Highly recommended. Some swashbuckling violence and a stab in the back, but no sexual attacks.
May 7, 2022
Lots of adventure in a very tight timeline
This was a wild ride set in 1804. Napoleon has spies scouring the English country side, and Darcy and Elizabeth get mixed up with them. It is weeks after Hunsford, and Darcy's first chance to give Elizabeth the letter. But on the way to Meryton he and Georgiana come across a woman fleeing a pursuer. They bring her to Longbourn, and it turns out that Elizabeth knows miss Selina Seymour. When the militia comes looking for her Elizabeth and Selina leave the house and decide to swap their bonnets to throw pursuers off. Mistaken identity leads Elizabeth in danger and Darcy to the rescue.
The timeline of the story is one day, which seems rather tight for all the running and hiding and dramatic rescues but it was a great adventure in which Darcy is gallant and Elizabeth is clever.
Steam level: kissing.
A minor nitpick: baronet's daughters do not use courtesy titles, they're just Miss X.
This was a wild ride set in 1804. Napoleon has spies scouring the English country side, and Darcy and Elizabeth get mixed up with them. It is weeks after Hunsford, and Darcy's first chance to give Elizabeth the letter. But on the way to Meryton he and Georgiana come across a woman fleeing a pursuer. They bring her to Longbourn, and it turns out that Elizabeth knows miss Selina Seymour. When the militia comes looking for her Elizabeth and Selina leave the house and decide to swap their bonnets to throw pursuers off. Mistaken identity leads Elizabeth in danger and Darcy to the rescue.
The timeline of the story is one day, which seems rather tight for all the running and hiding and dramatic rescues but it was a great adventure in which Darcy is gallant and Elizabeth is clever.
Steam level: kissing.
A minor nitpick: baronet's daughters do not use courtesy titles, they're just Miss X.
September 9, 2021
4.5 This was a real page turner that was full of adventure and excitement in a world of disguise, spies, espionage, treason, and even a little romance peppered in! This book engaged me right from the start and I had a hard time putting it down! The suspense and tension was intense at times, but it wasn’t overdone and felt well paced.
Darcy never had the opportunity to deliver his letter to Elizabeth after Hunsford and plans to remedy that when he and Georgiana prepare to stop at Netherfield on their way to Pemberley. When the Darcy carriage crosses paths with a woman who is being pursued, Darcy offers aid and begins a chain of events that will have lasting effects as Darcy and Elizabeth get inadvertently pulled into the hidden developments of political and military strategy and planning happening right under their noses as Napoleon is using spies to assess the possible invasion and take over of England.
I loved the vast array of characters and their complexity. It made the story interesting and captivated me right from the start. I loved the mystery and trying to unravel the duplicity and figure out who was to be trusted and who was nefarious. While Wickham was present, it was refreshing to have some new blood in the mix and to have his and Lydia’s page time limited. I can also say that I did not miss Caroline Bingley or Lady Catherine or Mr. Collins in the least! 😂 The romance between D&E was not the focus of this book, but there were still some lovely romantic scenes and I felt the chemistry between them and felt that they were mostly true to character. Their extreme circumstances accelerated their connection and the development of their feelings and I enjoyed that! Darcy was truly heroic in his efforts to protect his lady and I loved that Elizabeth wasn’t unnecessarily stubborn in her dislike of Darcy and was willing to re-examine her opinion and feelings in a timely manner as misunderstandings were cleared up and truths were presented.
I realize that this book only covers the span of one day, although it seemed like much longer, but I would have loved to have had a little longer and more satisfying ending or an epilogue. I was so invested in this story and to have it end so abruptly was a little disappointing. I also would have liked to have gotten to know Georgiana a little more and her subplot wasn’t really developed or resolved, but again, I have to remind myself that this whole story only covered a 24 hour period of time which puts that in context for me.
Overall, this was a great adventure and I thought it was really well done. Sometimes it’s a lot of fun to read something that is so different from most JAFF and I enjoyed this deviation from the norm very much! The story was original, exhilarating and the suspense had me on the edge of my seat.
Darcy never had the opportunity to deliver his letter to Elizabeth after Hunsford and plans to remedy that when he and Georgiana prepare to stop at Netherfield on their way to Pemberley. When the Darcy carriage crosses paths with a woman who is being pursued, Darcy offers aid and begins a chain of events that will have lasting effects as Darcy and Elizabeth get inadvertently pulled into the hidden developments of political and military strategy and planning happening right under their noses as Napoleon is using spies to assess the possible invasion and take over of England.
I loved the vast array of characters and their complexity. It made the story interesting and captivated me right from the start. I loved the mystery and trying to unravel the duplicity and figure out who was to be trusted and who was nefarious. While Wickham was present, it was refreshing to have some new blood in the mix and to have his and Lydia’s page time limited. I can also say that I did not miss Caroline Bingley or Lady Catherine or Mr. Collins in the least! 😂 The romance between D&E was not the focus of this book, but there were still some lovely romantic scenes and I felt the chemistry between them and felt that they were mostly true to character. Their extreme circumstances accelerated their connection and the development of their feelings and I enjoyed that! Darcy was truly heroic in his efforts to protect his lady and I loved that Elizabeth wasn’t unnecessarily stubborn in her dislike of Darcy and was willing to re-examine her opinion and feelings in a timely manner as misunderstandings were cleared up and truths were presented.
I realize that this book only covers the span of one day, although it seemed like much longer, but I would have loved to have had a little longer and more satisfying ending or an epilogue. I was so invested in this story and to have it end so abruptly was a little disappointing. I also would have liked to have gotten to know Georgiana a little more and her subplot wasn’t really developed or resolved, but again, I have to remind myself that this whole story only covered a 24 hour period of time which puts that in context for me.
Overall, this was a great adventure and I thought it was really well done. Sometimes it’s a lot of fun to read something that is so different from most JAFF and I enjoyed this deviation from the norm very much! The story was original, exhilarating and the suspense had me on the edge of my seat.
February 8, 2023
Як вирішити непорозуміння між Дарсі та Елізабет? Дарсі думав, що треба просто передати листа. Але автору натомість довелося залучити кількох шпигунів і одного асасина. Бадасна Ліззі і рішучий Дарсі проти підступного Хамелеона!
October 11, 2023
Compelling
Set a month after his disasterous Hunsford proposal, Darcy travels to Meryton, hoping to see Elizabeth Bennet. Although he has lost all hope of gaining her heart, he wants to give her a letter, in which he seeks to correct her bad opinion of him and ensure that she sees Mr Wickham as the snake he is.
On the way his carriage is stopped by damsel in distress. Rescuing her sets off a chain of events, which places Elizabeth in danger.
Darcy and Elizabeth become embroiled in the machinations of French sympathisers, leading to kidnapping, espionage and murder.
A fast paced story with a satisfying denouement. I couldn’t put it down!
Set a month after his disasterous Hunsford proposal, Darcy travels to Meryton, hoping to see Elizabeth Bennet. Although he has lost all hope of gaining her heart, he wants to give her a letter, in which he seeks to correct her bad opinion of him and ensure that she sees Mr Wickham as the snake he is.
On the way his carriage is stopped by damsel in distress. Rescuing her sets off a chain of events, which places Elizabeth in danger.
Darcy and Elizabeth become embroiled in the machinations of French sympathisers, leading to kidnapping, espionage and murder.
A fast paced story with a satisfying denouement. I couldn’t put it down!
November 5, 2021
I’m torn on how to rate this. It was rather well-written and the pacing wasn’t too bad. There were a few nice lines worth highlighting.
But.
It seemed a bit too heavy on spy thriller and a bit light on romance. All the traveling and walking, hiding, moving about from place to place again and again got old. Especially given that this takes place in the span of one day. I didn’t find it very clever either - the spy bits I mean. There was a code, but it was squashed in at the last minute. You know who the spy is from almost the very beginning. So there’s not a lot of mystery there. A few attempts at misdirection, but they are easily seen through.
I usually like stories where the main couple go through something together and come out of it at the end with a better understanding of each other, etc. but this didn’t quite fit that mold to me. It attempted it, but fell a little flat. There was a lot of action and ODC were thrown together often, but their interactions were lacking, the plot kind of overwhelmed their every interaction, so when the end came, it didn’t feel as if they’d had a real chance to resolve things as they should have.
In the end, it wasn’t a bad effort on the part of the author. I was engaged with the story for the most part, I only found some of it implausible, the writing style and editing were pretty solid. I did think it should have been a little more clever given that’s it’s a spy story. Having Lizzy and Darcy gallivanting to and fro, back and forth, there and back again overshadowed all else. They had no time to be clever because they had places to be.
So. It was good, but also not. Better than many, but not quite what I’d hope for when I started reading. 2.75 rounded up to 3 stars.
But.
It seemed a bit too heavy on spy thriller and a bit light on romance. All the traveling and walking, hiding, moving about from place to place again and again got old. Especially given that this takes place in the span of one day. I didn’t find it very clever either - the spy bits I mean. There was a code, but it was squashed in at the last minute. You know who the spy is from almost the very beginning. So there’s not a lot of mystery there. A few attempts at misdirection, but they are easily seen through.
I usually like stories where the main couple go through something together and come out of it at the end with a better understanding of each other, etc. but this didn’t quite fit that mold to me. It attempted it, but fell a little flat. There was a lot of action and ODC were thrown together often, but their interactions were lacking, the plot kind of overwhelmed their every interaction, so when the end came, it didn’t feel as if they’d had a real chance to resolve things as they should have.
In the end, it wasn’t a bad effort on the part of the author. I was engaged with the story for the most part, I only found some of it implausible, the writing style and editing were pretty solid. I did think it should have been a little more clever given that’s it’s a spy story. Having Lizzy and Darcy gallivanting to and fro, back and forth, there and back again overshadowed all else. They had no time to be clever because they had places to be.
So. It was good, but also not. Better than many, but not quite what I’d hope for when I started reading. 2.75 rounded up to 3 stars.
August 21, 2022
Very well written, fast paced novel that is covers one VERY eventful day in the lives of most of the major Pride and Prejudice characters.
A little modern language- debrief and my personal irritant of typos pour over documents. No you pore over them. Otherwise no complaints.
A little modern language- debrief and my personal irritant of typos pour over documents. No you pore over them. Otherwise no complaints.
January 9, 2022
Engaging though a bit lacking
This variation occurs months after Mr. Darcy’s failed first attempt at a marriage proposal to Elizabeth Bennet in Hunsford. The setting is at Hertfordshire where spies, both English and French lurk.
It is commendable the way the author furthered Elizabeth Bennet’s change of regard towards Mr. Darcy in a matter of a day. While all Mr. Darcy wanted was to deliver his explanatory letter, which was in Canon delivered right after the said proposal, Elizabeth’s safety, life and limb are in peril while thwarting spies in service of the French Bonaparte. The whole novella narrates the progression of events within a period of a day.
Elizabeth Bennet is more cynical and critical towards Mr. Darcy in this; however, the same is explained towards the end while she explains and reveals her love for Mr. Darcy. She is very courageous and fearless in protecting her family and friends. Mr. Darcy likewise shows so much honor, chivalry, courage and resolve in his task to win the good regard, and eventually, affection and hand of the elusive Elizabeth Bennet, that one can’t help but love the character even more.
The issue this reader has with this variation is gives less highlight and focus on our beloved couple and more on the espionage involved. It also touches a little on the romance between Jane Bennet and Charles Bingley and other minor characters. The romance and exchanges between Elizabeth and Darcy are just isn’t adequate enough to satisfy.
However, if one wishes to read an adventure with a pinch of romance involving our favorite P&P couple, this variation is recommended.
This variation occurs months after Mr. Darcy’s failed first attempt at a marriage proposal to Elizabeth Bennet in Hunsford. The setting is at Hertfordshire where spies, both English and French lurk.
It is commendable the way the author furthered Elizabeth Bennet’s change of regard towards Mr. Darcy in a matter of a day. While all Mr. Darcy wanted was to deliver his explanatory letter, which was in Canon delivered right after the said proposal, Elizabeth’s safety, life and limb are in peril while thwarting spies in service of the French Bonaparte. The whole novella narrates the progression of events within a period of a day.
Elizabeth Bennet is more cynical and critical towards Mr. Darcy in this; however, the same is explained towards the end while she explains and reveals her love for Mr. Darcy. She is very courageous and fearless in protecting her family and friends. Mr. Darcy likewise shows so much honor, chivalry, courage and resolve in his task to win the good regard, and eventually, affection and hand of the elusive Elizabeth Bennet, that one can’t help but love the character even more.
The issue this reader has with this variation is gives less highlight and focus on our beloved couple and more on the espionage involved. It also touches a little on the romance between Jane Bennet and Charles Bingley and other minor characters. The romance and exchanges between Elizabeth and Darcy are just isn’t adequate enough to satisfy.
However, if one wishes to read an adventure with a pinch of romance involving our favorite P&P couple, this variation is recommended.
August 22, 2021
Interesting
An intriguing premise, requiring the timeline to be changed from 1811/12, to one entire day in 1804. Napoleon wants to invade Britain, and has spies in England laying the groundwork by seeking out local individuals who could be most easily coerced into being sympathizers and leaders. A French master of disguise known as "Cameleon," is in the area of Meryton to get important notes from a spy who is a local landowner and respected gentleman. Unbeknownst to him, the governess he employs is a spy for the British, and she steals his notes and flees, eventually involving Darcy and Elizabeth in her cause and her escape.
When I read P&P variations, I expect them to be romances dealing at the very least with the evolution of a relationship between Elizabeth and Darcy. Since the events of this book cover only one day, there's very little time for this. Perhaps this accounts for part of why this book left me flat.
The story begins after the disastrous proposal at Hunsford parsonage. Darcy wrote his letter of explanation, but was unable to find Elizabeth to give it to her. He and Georgiana head to Pemberly by way of Hertfordshire so that Darcy can visit Longbourn and deliver the letter. When they do finally meet, Elizabeth's behavior towards him is so hostile that it's very off-putting. This was the first issue that was distressing. This isn't our beloved Elizabeth who is firm and opinionated, but basically kind. The level of her hatred of Darcy makes subsequent changes in her attitude hard to swallow. It kind of kills the chemistry that should be between them.
Then there's the whole scenario driving this story, namely that Darcy and Elizabeth become deeply embroiled in a web of spies and villains. Although interesting, the very serious subject matter casts a pall over everything, even the scenes that should be romantic. Between Elizabeth's snarky initial attitude and all the sinister intrigue, I just wasn't feeling the love.
My final issue was just plain unbelievability of many events and situations, especially involving Elizabeth and what she's allowed to do. So many highly unlikely things she does, it just stretched credulity.
Still, the book is well written and well edited. I recommend it with reservations.
An intriguing premise, requiring the timeline to be changed from 1811/12, to one entire day in 1804. Napoleon wants to invade Britain, and has spies in England laying the groundwork by seeking out local individuals who could be most easily coerced into being sympathizers and leaders. A French master of disguise known as "Cameleon," is in the area of Meryton to get important notes from a spy who is a local landowner and respected gentleman. Unbeknownst to him, the governess he employs is a spy for the British, and she steals his notes and flees, eventually involving Darcy and Elizabeth in her cause and her escape.
When I read P&P variations, I expect them to be romances dealing at the very least with the evolution of a relationship between Elizabeth and Darcy. Since the events of this book cover only one day, there's very little time for this. Perhaps this accounts for part of why this book left me flat.
The story begins after the disastrous proposal at Hunsford parsonage. Darcy wrote his letter of explanation, but was unable to find Elizabeth to give it to her. He and Georgiana head to Pemberly by way of Hertfordshire so that Darcy can visit Longbourn and deliver the letter. When they do finally meet, Elizabeth's behavior towards him is so hostile that it's very off-putting. This was the first issue that was distressing. This isn't our beloved Elizabeth who is firm and opinionated, but basically kind. The level of her hatred of Darcy makes subsequent changes in her attitude hard to swallow. It kind of kills the chemistry that should be between them.
Then there's the whole scenario driving this story, namely that Darcy and Elizabeth become deeply embroiled in a web of spies and villains. Although interesting, the very serious subject matter casts a pall over everything, even the scenes that should be romantic. Between Elizabeth's snarky initial attitude and all the sinister intrigue, I just wasn't feeling the love.
My final issue was just plain unbelievability of many events and situations, especially involving Elizabeth and what she's allowed to do. So many highly unlikely things she does, it just stretched credulity.
Still, the book is well written and well edited. I recommend it with reservations.
August 28, 2021
Avid Reader
This was a most intriguing novel as Darcy travels to Netherfield give weeks after his horrendous proposal to Elizabeth because he wants to give her the letter explaining why he interfered with Jane and Bingley 's relationship and to tell her the truth about Wickham. Instead Darcy encounters a young woman fleeing for her life from a pack of dogs while being chased by two men on horseback. Thus begans the longest and perhaps the most dangerous day of Darcy and Elizabeth 's life as they must protect the young woman but also capture French spies and the most dangerous one, the Chameleon, who kills anyone who sees him out of his disguise. Unfortunately, Elizabeth has, so she's in danger!
This was a most intriguing novel as Darcy travels to Netherfield give weeks after his horrendous proposal to Elizabeth because he wants to give her the letter explaining why he interfered with Jane and Bingley 's relationship and to tell her the truth about Wickham. Instead Darcy encounters a young woman fleeing for her life from a pack of dogs while being chased by two men on horseback. Thus begans the longest and perhaps the most dangerous day of Darcy and Elizabeth 's life as they must protect the young woman but also capture French spies and the most dangerous one, the Chameleon, who kills anyone who sees him out of his disguise. Unfortunately, Elizabeth has, so she's in danger!
August 28, 2021
Ok, here’s the thing. I love a good fluff book as much as the next person if it’s written well, and this one is. It’s good good character development and you can see Darcy and Elizabeth’s relationship growing. There’s just one problem: it’s set in a DAY. That’s right, one. day. I can get Elizabeth not understanding how she felt about Darcy before and when he proposed, but for her to do a complete 180 and go from disliking Darcy with a passion to, em, throwing herself at him and taking off his waistcoat is just too much. I love the premise and this was really well written, and of good quality, but the timeline just doesn’t make sense. The amount of events and plans that were done in a day would realistically take place at least over a weeks time in my book, hence the three stars.
April 22, 2022
Elizabeth Bennet is outspoken and loyal, this time it means trouble. Mr. Darcy needs to help .
Darcy is on shaky ground with Elizabeth Bennet. His proposal was awful. Elizabeth believes him to be not only prideful but also cruel. Determined to set things right he has written a letter. Traveling to Hertfordshire to deliver it and proceed home he is drawn into a situation that will endanger their lives and require courage and bravery from both Darcy and Elizabeth. This story had me holding my breath in anticipation and breathing as heavily as I anticipated their next possible opportunity to escape harm. I thoroughly enjoyed this story and I'm sure you will too.
Darcy is on shaky ground with Elizabeth Bennet. His proposal was awful. Elizabeth believes him to be not only prideful but also cruel. Determined to set things right he has written a letter. Traveling to Hertfordshire to deliver it and proceed home he is drawn into a situation that will endanger their lives and require courage and bravery from both Darcy and Elizabeth. This story had me holding my breath in anticipation and breathing as heavily as I anticipated their next possible opportunity to escape harm. I thoroughly enjoyed this story and I'm sure you will too.
August 3, 2021
Great story but misleading title
While its a very good - interesting and frightening- story there's a huge problem with the title. There is no way on God's green earth that these events took an hour. First, they were traveling on horses....not the fastest mode of transportation unless each horse is Secretariat. The distances were too far from each other for someone to get from one to the other AND perform the activities written.
Spying during war time was punishable by death and then with the numbers of dead that this man was responsible for would see him hang in days - no possibility that they kept him for information longer than a few weeks.
While its a very good - interesting and frightening- story there's a huge problem with the title. There is no way on God's green earth that these events took an hour. First, they were traveling on horses....not the fastest mode of transportation unless each horse is Secretariat. The distances were too far from each other for someone to get from one to the other AND perform the activities written.
Spying during war time was punishable by death and then with the numbers of dead that this man was responsible for would see him hang in days - no possibility that they kept him for information longer than a few weeks.
September 6, 2021
So this was just average for me.
It was very fast paced and that coupled with the sheer amount of plot and happenings was a bit much for me.
There was just so much contained within a short amount of time that it wasn’t entirely believable that this was feasible to occur within the span of a single day.
I also don't really think that Wickham’s small role that he had was really necessary, and he could've been omitted to be honest.
But if you're looking for a spy Pride and Prejudice variation, this one will probably fit the bill.
It was very fast paced and that coupled with the sheer amount of plot and happenings was a bit much for me.
There was just so much contained within a short amount of time that it wasn’t entirely believable that this was feasible to occur within the span of a single day.
I also don't really think that Wickham’s small role that he had was really necessary, and he could've been omitted to be honest.
But if you're looking for a spy Pride and Prejudice variation, this one will probably fit the bill.
October 9, 2023
3/5 - Silly Fun Spy Adventure
This book is 24 (the TV show) but regency. There's a French spy in Hertfordshire, and Darcy and Elizabeth get mixed up with them. It takes place over 24 hours and is chock-full of action.
I enjoyed the story, but it was honestly very silly. Almost a comedy of errors, except it wasn't supposed to be funny. People acted so illogically and got themselves into trouble over and over again. It was fantastical to the point of being stupid.
It was still a fun read, but definitely don't take it seriously.
This book is 24 (the TV show) but regency. There's a French spy in Hertfordshire, and Darcy and Elizabeth get mixed up with them. It takes place over 24 hours and is chock-full of action.
I enjoyed the story, but it was honestly very silly. Almost a comedy of errors, except it wasn't supposed to be funny. People acted so illogically and got themselves into trouble over and over again. It was fantastical to the point of being stupid.
It was still a fun read, but definitely don't take it seriously.
August 24, 2021
Tremendously enjoyable
I don't read a lot of spy stories, but occasionally I find one I like. This was such a book. The plot and characters were all well handled, and the writing was excellent. I won't give spoilers, particularly since the suspense was so well done, but I definitely recommend this book. I read it for free on Kindle Unlimited but plan to buy it for my library, since I can definitely see myself rereading it multiple times.
I don't read a lot of spy stories, but occasionally I find one I like. This was such a book. The plot and characters were all well handled, and the writing was excellent. I won't give spoilers, particularly since the suspense was so well done, but I definitely recommend this book. I read it for free on Kindle Unlimited but plan to buy it for my library, since I can definitely see myself rereading it multiple times.
August 4, 2021
Rollicking good time
What a lark, as Lydia would say! I enjoyed every moment of this fast-paced, engaging story. I particularly liked how Darcy was not the best st everything, Lizzy was equally human, and Bingley had brains between his ears. I will definitely be reading more from this author.
What a lark, as Lydia would say! I enjoyed every moment of this fast-paced, engaging story. I particularly liked how Darcy was not the best st everything, Lizzy was equally human, and Bingley had brains between his ears. I will definitely be reading more from this author.
August 20, 2021
Mystery, Intrigue, Fun and Romance…
…All rolled into one. A very different take on P&P - loved that the story was confined within a 24-hour window with the hourly time markings to keep track. I enjoyed the story very much - the only thing that might have improved it was a map to represent the various locations where the characters were to-ing and fro-ing in rapid succession.
…All rolled into one. A very different take on P&P - loved that the story was confined within a 24-hour window with the hourly time markings to keep track. I enjoyed the story very much - the only thing that might have improved it was a map to represent the various locations where the characters were to-ing and fro-ing in rapid succession.
August 25, 2021
Oh I really liked this. Fast paced, edge of your seat, who is the spy, who is going to live 😱
Very much enjoyed Elizabeth getting to be a badass, Darcy (and Bingley) both respecting their women and keeping them in the loop as well as trusting their decisions. Will have to look up more by this author.
Very much enjoyed Elizabeth getting to be a badass, Darcy (and Bingley) both respecting their women and keeping them in the loop as well as trusting their decisions. Will have to look up more by this author.
March 25, 2022
An enjoyable and engaging read
It's enjoyable to read a good thriller set in the P&P world! Our favourite characters stay true to their original descriptions and new characters do their role and move along. No jarring moments anywhere, and a natural progression to the romantic developments (mostly) - this story was a pleasure to read.
It's enjoyable to read a good thriller set in the P&P world! Our favourite characters stay true to their original descriptions and new characters do their role and move along. No jarring moments anywhere, and a natural progression to the romantic developments (mostly) - this story was a pleasure to read.
January 2, 2024
DNF at 30% ... i can't go on.
Lizzy's behavior in this book is worse than Lydia's. This was the 1st time when i wished for Darcy to chose someone else!
The sudden and often POV changes is disturbing, we are talking paragraphs and not chapters. It's more than disturbing it's chaotic. It made me dizzy.
Lizzy's behavior in this book is worse than Lydia's. This was the 1st time when i wished for Darcy to chose someone else!
The sudden and often POV changes is disturbing, we are talking paragraphs and not chapters. It's more than disturbing it's chaotic. It made me dizzy.
August 1, 2021
Fascinating
A rather unique variation inspired by author Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice. Intrigue, mystery, spies and romance all in one story. I sat down and read it through in one sitting eagerly waiting to see what would happen.
A rather unique variation inspired by author Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice. Intrigue, mystery, spies and romance all in one story. I sat down and read it through in one sitting eagerly waiting to see what would happen.
August 2, 2021
Nonstop adventures
Very fast-moving story, with a multitude of adventures, plots dangers and spies. Still some cute romantic scenes as Darcy rescues Elizabeth and she rescues him right back.
Very fast-moving story, with a multitude of adventures, plots dangers and spies. Still some cute romantic scenes as Darcy rescues Elizabeth and she rescues him right back.
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