The Inheritance

by Rumpel Stiltskin

What would you do if you inherited a gift of ultimate power and you were unaware of it? For his eighteenth birthday, Charlie inherits more than one gift. One of them is the ability to read minds and control people. He goes through a journey of self-discovery, taking what he likes starting with his younger sister. This is an epic tale of the internal struggle between good and evil.Charlie was adopted as a baby by a wealthy family. They raise him as his son, alongside two beautiful daughters. For his sister's eighteenth birthday, a group of kids end up in a fairground where gipsy reads their fortune.From the next day, strange things start to happen without Charlie realising it. Soon he finds out that he could read minds, but his deep moral values prevent Charlie from becoming a monster.Power tends to corrupt, and absolute power corrupts absolutely. Will Charlie manage to wield his power without becoming corrupt himself?This book contains a graphic description of sex between adults, including siblings and psychological powerplay.This book is self-edited. Some grammatical errors are likely, which will be fixed with further editions.

198 pages, Kindle Edition

Published June 28, 2021

Reviews

[Steve Naylor · Rating 3 out of 5]

Rating 3.0 stars

This is the second book I have read from this author. He tends to focus a little more on the darker side of sex. It made more sense in the first book I read titled The formula. In that one he was surrounded with abused women so it made more sense why their tastes were a little darker on the sexual side. The women in this book had a lot of similar tastes though and most of them didn't have that same background to make it believable. The MC in this one is an 18 year old who is in love with his sister. Technically he is adopted so they aren't related. The whole family knows that they are in love but they made a promise years ago to not do anything until her 18th birthday, which is today. They go to a carnival and he gets his fortune read by a gypsy who tells him he has to come back later that night to get his inheritance. He is given a coin in a locket. Next a lawyer gets in touch with his to tell him about his inheritance. He is the last of his line. His uncle has left him everything. He found out where he was but since he was with a loving family he left him there to be raised with love and was going to meet him when he turned 18 but died before that happened. He now owns the worlds largest company that is worth trillions of dollars. It is almost like there is 3 stories going on at the same time that are trying to interconnect. The story about the money he inherited, the story about the coin which has seemed to give him some sort of telepathic power and then there is his love life. The mix together is nowhere near seamless. Even though he is in love with his sister and was a virgin until they had sex a day ago. He starts meeting up with other women and having sexual situations with that. No conversation with is sister about this ahead of time. He just starts having sex with them, introduces a few to her and they all start having sex together. Then he starts having sex with his older sister who again is in love with him as he is with her. Then it gets weirder. He starts using his powers to change the women he is with. enhancing their sexual experience making anal sex much more pleasurable, making pain seem like pleasure. Withholding orgasms from them until he releases them so that they fall catatonic for 20 minutes or pass out for the night from the pleasure. He has sex with his women for hours at a time where they have near continuous orgasms. When he meets another telepath, he re-writes her brain to make her completely loyal to him. When he is teaching her about her power he starts acting all wise like people with our power could abuse that so be careful. Like what he is doing isn't abuse? He picks up more and more girls which most of them have been abused. He saves one girl who is about to die who has brain damage. He saves her life but she is a blank shell, has no memories. He brought her with him and started teaching her about life, but he only wanted to teach the beautiful stuff. She saw him as her god and he thought that was a good thing so left it alone. He then made her the priestess of the religion that he formed. Yeah. The story was kind of all over the place. The sex was way over the top. Think of some of the monster hentai and what happens with the women and you can get an idea.

[larry Mccauley · Rating 3 out of 5]

Fantasy on top of fantast

The protagonist is adopted and has rich parents and all.the male looks that normally would draw the women a round him . he has two.adoptednsisters and the parents already b said the kids can have sex when they then 18 obviously kept secret from the public . He goes to a carnival and has a reading ...long story short because of a pin prick and a drop of his blood he is given a locket that open a with his a drop of his blood which has a special coin inside so when he wares the locket he has staying power and can screw all night and the girls turn into a bimbo type personality . the characters are not deep and the story line is just plain meet... I love you lets didle. The story line explaining the history of the coin was more in depth . The magic dodads and bimbo hot to trot non thinking women are not a good topic or story for me . you might like the no story attitude and wish you had the magic coin .. Go for it!

[S Seaberg · Rating 2 out of 5]

Ho Hum

One of the books I’ve read that tried hard and failed. After all the work put into this book, it has more than its share of errors. Proofreading is expected as well as spellchecking and grammar checking. I can see why the author chose the pen name he did.