It was boring. Nothing happens for at least 20% of the book. Except a bunch of activities that could have been summarized in one chapter. And being in Marlee’s head for so long was annoying. She’s obsessed with Cooper, and for the longest time she only focuses on him, to the point that Tyler is barely mentioned. Even after Cooper rejects her, she’s still obsessed. I blame it on the wishy-washy rejection. He wasn’t clear, and he made it seem it was only because they’re coworkers, and not from a lack of attraction (it was painfully obvious he wasn’t attracted to Marlee. Well, for everyone but Marlee, that is). Which is very shitty because he ends up with his assistant in book 4. She thinks very highly of herself, but all I saw was a selfish person, and a shit employee, costing the company money (hiring temps and training them costs money, not to mention their mistakes) just to make her crush notice her. That was, at best, abuse of power, and she should have been fired over it. But she’s so nice, and so competent! Nope, I didn’t see that (I mean, she couldn’t differentiate between dog and bear statues, how can she be a good admin?). Not to mention none of that made sense, since she shouldn’t have been allowed to hire people, because she’s definitely not trained for that. It takes skill (and also, it’s not like people can just show up one day and start working, there’s a process, even for temps), but that’s something people who have never worked in HR seem to ignore. Her constant comparing her life to romance tropes made me cringe every time. And she does that a lot. A. LOT. Her entire personality seemed to be Cooper, romance, and pink. With the occasional mention of some physics/astronomy concepts because she’s a nerd (how is any of that related to her having an IT degree of some sort, I don’t know. Her father, apparently, knows his physics and astronomy, but that doesn’t mean she has to). Oh, and her love of musicals that doesn’t get mentioned in the first half, and seemed to have sprang up because Cooper liked musicals.
She doesn’t really start to consider Tyler for anything more than a friend until the second half of the freaking book. And as a result, he comes out flat and uninteresting. We know more about Copper than we know about Tyler.
And Cooper is definitely a gay man still in the closet, in love with Jackson, and maybe attracted to Tyler. At least that’s what he comes off as, despite the author pairing him with his male assistant later on.
I was reading this for a couple of challenges, otherwise I wouldn’t have finished it. Marlee wasn’t as good a person as she thought she was. I liked the first book in the series, and I hated the fifth. Reading this I’m starting to think the first book was a one-off.
TW for dementia.