The Light : A short story by Rose Hawke

by Rose Hawke

Gyth Richards is a collector from Lorn Town, a small country town, with a very select population. When Celeste wakes up alone in the Lorn Town square, she begins to wonder who or what she can trust. Upon meeting Gyth, she hopes to get answers; too bad Gyth is looking to add to his collection.

15 pages, Kindle Edition

Published August 16, 2021

Reviews

[Kelsey Wells]

Great story from this debut author. The story was short but it packed a punch. Check it out!

[Dani]

A short story.

I found this to be quite different than what I'm used to.
It's an interesting perspective .
I was left with questions so perhaps there will be another short story

[Smarzbar]

A 10pg speculative fiction that makes you feel like you've stepped into the Twilight zone.
Imagine waking up in a seemingly deserted town but signs of life everywhere.
I'll be honest if this was me a complete meltdown would be imminent!
But our MC travels through the town trying to discover how she ended up there and someone to help her.
A spooky twist finishes it off nicely.

[Breaux Reanna]

Interesting

An interesting short story. I don't know if my app caused the issues with missing letters but there were many words that were missing letters and in their place were spaces.

[Amanda]

Creepy story

This was a fast read and very creepy. Celeste wakes up in a town she doesn't recognize and doesn't know how she got there. Worst, she can't find a person anywhere.

[Micki_1989]

Good

Overall a good read but, i found lots of grammar and spelling mistakes throughout, and i feel it needs more defined paragraphs as just reads like one long one to me.