2-4 stars
An actually decent clone of other very low quality restaurant+system novels. This one has a good plot, intelligent characters, and a reasonable level of consistency for novels like this. This would be a 4 star novel if the author didn’t bog down the story progression in filler, a large amount of side characters/plots, and an unnerving amount of focus on a "cute" toddler. The last thing seems to be partially the fault of the translator deciding to translate 'young girl/toddler' as loli. Although the author doesn’t cross any lines, the fact that the protagonist's 3-4 year old daughter is so extremely captivating to so many adults is off putting.
Because of the very slow pacing I’m temporarily (perhaps permanently) dropping this. The 2500+ chapters and still ongoing is very discouraging.
-Temporarily Dropped Ch 501
At some point this book became more repetitive, and the antagonists became morons so that they could be face slapped more easily. The constant stream of idiot antagonists are annoying, but what’s more annoying is that even the protagonist lost some intelligence too!
The fact that all of the female characters are have far too many sexual descriptions regardless of age is annoying. Faux harems (etc.) are terrible for so many reason. The only actual 'romance' is even worse. The protagonist's wife is an adult replica of his 4 year old daughter (deranged, impulsive, annoying, and dumb). The relationship between is similar to the relationship between his daughter and the cat she 'loves' but regularly bullies and abuses for fun. The protagonist is now labeled a masochist (just for her!) and loses all assertive behavior and self respect around her. The wife regularly risks their lives because… either impulse, selfishness, or being to dumb to realize that she’s doing so. The protagonist says and does nothing to stop her when he has the opportunity.
The rare moments of actual plot (and the well constructed parts of slice of life) is great, but everything else is getting progressively worse. Plot holes and inconsistencies are cropping up more and more often. This has devolved into a hybrid consisting of a typical very low quality system+restaurant novel and an original (for me) 3-4 star story that’s haphazardly mixed in.
-Temporarily Dropped Ch 806