A Jersey

by Tealitful

All she wanted was a jersey and a little revenge

Genres: Fan Fiction, Romance, Fiction

ebook

Published June 22, 2021

Reviews

[Luna ♡ · Rating 5 out of 5]

» What are you doing, Scor?«
»I think Mione would like a cinnamon roll, so she can have my other one.«

★ ★ ★ ★ ★

𝐒𝐮𝐦𝐦𝐚𝐫𝐲
All she wanted was a jersey and a little revenge. Now rated M for Mmmmmmmaybe a tad more than tubular. You've heard of porn without plot? Well, this is fluff without plot!

𝐖𝐨𝐫𝐝𝐬: 60.430
𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐩𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐬: 23
𝐒𝐡𝐢𝐩: Dramione + Scorpius

✥ 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒃𝒐𝒐𝒌
Such a comfort read! I loved it!
It was cute, funny and enjoyable.
Little Scorpius was so adorable and I loved his relationship with Hermione.
Would definitely recommend!

𝐫𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐨𝐟 𝟓
plot: 4/5
spice: 1/5
humor: 4/5
couple/tension: 5/5
world building: 5/5
happy end?: yes

𝐭𝐫𝐨𝐩𝐞𝐬
quidditch Malfoy, babysitting Scorpius, revenge on Ron, friends to lovers, fluff, comfort, single dad

[♡ Rosella Swan ♡ · Rating 5 out of 5]

Word Count: 60,430
Chapters: 23
Rating: 5 ⭐

This ended too quickly 🥺 I didn't expect Scorpius but he was so cute. « A perfect Granger-Malfoy Hybrid » 🥰 Hermione and Draco oblivious of each others feelings and making a plan to date one another was hilarious 🤣 They are such an adorable family. The end was not enough. I want more of them and future chapters of their family 💖

24 December Reread:
I forgot how adorable the Malfoys were. I love the mixed POVs especially Scorpius. I stand by my statement that this ended too quickly and I want more of them.

[erica.reads.a.lot · Rating 5 out of 5]

I’d never heard of Dramione until a couple months ago. I’m now three books deep and totally here for it! This was a fun, light and fluffy departure from most of the Dramione fanfic I’ve seen. Draco is a pro Quidditch player and single dad and Hermione a librarian after the war. Through a series of events, she ends up watching Draco‘s son, Scorpius, during one of Draco‘s games. The story was lighthearted, low stress and fade to black. Highly recommend if you are looking for an easy read Harry Potter/Dramione fanfic!

[EinaSelesnia · Rating 4 out of 5]

A very cute, short, fluffy, romantic story. Finished it in one go because I couldn't put it down. Absolutely loved how it was written. Realistic characters and how I wished I had gotten more. More story more spicyness. Really loved reading it even with small typo's here and there.

[antri౨ৎ · Rating 4 out of 5]

too fricking cute

[Sarina Grace · Rating 3 out of 5]

2.8
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241 pages. It was really cute and I loved the Hermione/Scorpius moments but there were hardly any dramione moments. I feel like they barely interacted

[Tina Tette · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was cute.
No plot, no smut… just some fluff as promised.

However, except for the names and places it didn’t seem like a dramione
There was no back story on how Draco and Hermione mended what happened at school or during the war.
And further more, when the past was mentioned it was with no consequences - like nothing happened.
Also, Draco and Hermione didn’t feel like Draco and Hermione.
They were missing all that was making them… “them”.

So all up to the end - the mum thing was too much for me- it was a ok way to pass the time.
Fast read and mostly enjoyable.
Just not dramione to me.

[Ashley · Rating 3 out of 5]

This is a really cute Dramione fan fic, showcasing a sweet Daddy Draco - 0 spice, so he's not that kind of daddy 😂

There were a lot of typos (which absolutely happens in fan fics) but I don't feel that it took away from the story. My main concern is that it was written in kind of a childish way? Like, it's too innocent? Idk it's hard to explain. Regardless, it's a cute story and little Scorpious is just adorable!

[Labmonkey · Rating 3 out of 5]

2.5 stars

Concept was great, execution needed help

Scorpius' relationship to Hermione was all that held me to this story. The spelling mistakes and grammatical errors kept me from fulling enjoying the story. Beta review would have help immensely.

Curious to read other work by the author as this held potential. Thank you for sharing Tealitful

[Gabbie Cryer · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 stars! It was really cute! It was short and I wanted more but the pacing was really fast. And considering that it had more time to develop and it didn’t was sad to me. But overall it was really cute.

[Denisa Dembická · Rating 4 out of 5]

It was so sweet, fluffy and cute 🥰
Scorp is absolutely adorable!
4/5 only because sometimes I was lost in POVs, cause it changed every few articles not only from Mione to Draco, but also Scorp, Cissa or Ginny and the Slytherins

[Kate Childers · Rating 3 out of 5]

Hermione just randomly fucking with Draco as if they're best friends is so funny. Also I love Draco being into divination, I've never seen that in a fic, I wish it showed up more. This was a good fic and Scor is a cutie, it just wasn't my style or pace.

[ilcm · Rating 3 out of 5]

Would have DNFed if it wasn’t for Scorp. Needed more dhr development and multidimensional characters.

[Bethany · Rating 5 out of 5]

So cute!

[Hessa · Rating 5 out of 5]

My comfort fic.

[April Parker · Rating 4 out of 5]

4.5

[She Reads So Much · Rating 4 out of 5]

Cute as fluff, some errors here and there but absolutely precious

[Cissa]

DNF @ 24%

[neebee · Rating 5 out of 5]

Sweet. Cute. Comfort read ❤️

[afarian · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.5 ⭐

[Ghaya · Rating 1 out of 5]

The idea was good but the rest wasn't.

[Penny · Rating 1 out of 5]

Developed too quickly and the writing style was hard to get used to.

[adriana]

So stinking cute!

[Mariana Camargo · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was so cuteeeee

[Rc · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.5 super cute overall

[Fimilia · Rating 3 out of 5]

This kind of Draco is my favorite. I also love angsty Draco, but right now was the right moment for single parent Draco. I usually can't get excited about stories where Draco has a child. In this story too, I missed more Dramione moments.

[liya · Rating 2 out of 5]

⭐️⭐️
listened to audio book rated 2 for effort + dnf
where was the DRAMIONE part of this book literally no interactions and they went from liking each other and hermione practically being scorps mother with a blink of an eye. the whole book was hermione and scorps glazing each other.

[Alexzandra Pattinson · Rating 3 out of 5]

To get back at a cheating Ron, Ginny and Hermione come up with a plan to hurt him without actually maiming him. They gonne use his hatred for Malfoy and for the team that rejected him but chose Malfoy.
Malfoy is more than happy to give his jersey to Hermione and in turn ask her to babysit Scorpius during the game.
Neither of them had anticipated how quickly Scorpius bonded with Hermione and how much she actually enjoys spending time with the two Malfoys.

[Amundeep Kaur · Rating 4 out of 5]

I loved this fic it was really cute and fluffy. I loved the bond between Hermione and Scorpius. But the way it end did not feel like an ending. There were so many changes and the end was very abrupt as I was surprised and expecting another chapter. I think it would have worked if the author had at least added an epilogue to tie it all together.