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System Apocalypse: Relentless #1
A Fist Full of Credits
Bail bondsman. Veteran. Survivor.
Hal Mason's still going to find surviving the System Apocalypse challenging.
While bringing in his latest fugitive, Hal's payday is interrupted by the translucent blue boxes that herald Earth's introduction to the System - a galaxy spanning wave of structured mystical energy that destroys all electronics and bestows game-like abilities upon mankind.
With society breaking down and mutating wildlife rampaging through the city of Pittsburgh, those who remain will sacrifice anything for a chance at earning their next Level. As bodies fall and civilization crumbles, Hal finds himself asking what price is his humanity. Are the Credits worth his hands being ever more stained with blood?
Or does he press on - relentless?
A Fist Full of Credits is the first book in a new series in the System Apocalypse universe. Written by debut author Craig Hamilton in Tao Wong's bestselling post-apocalyptic LitRPG universe, System Apocalypse - Relentless is another glimpse into what humanity will do when the chips are down and the monsters are crawling from the shadows.
Hal Mason's still going to find surviving the System Apocalypse challenging.
While bringing in his latest fugitive, Hal's payday is interrupted by the translucent blue boxes that herald Earth's introduction to the System - a galaxy spanning wave of structured mystical energy that destroys all electronics and bestows game-like abilities upon mankind.
With society breaking down and mutating wildlife rampaging through the city of Pittsburgh, those who remain will sacrifice anything for a chance at earning their next Level. As bodies fall and civilization crumbles, Hal finds himself asking what price is his humanity. Are the Credits worth his hands being ever more stained with blood?
Or does he press on - relentless?
A Fist Full of Credits is the first book in a new series in the System Apocalypse universe. Written by debut author Craig Hamilton in Tao Wong's bestselling post-apocalyptic LitRPG universe, System Apocalypse - Relentless is another glimpse into what humanity will do when the chips are down and the monsters are crawling from the shadows.
499 pages, Kindle Edition
First published August 3, 2021
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About the author
Tao Wong
137 books956 followersTao Wong is the author of the A Thousand Li progression fantasy series and the System Apocalypse LitRPG series, among others. His work has been released in audio, paperback, hardcover, and ebook formats, and translated into German, Spanish, Portuguese, Russian, and several other languages. He was shortlisted for the UK Kindle Storyteller Award in 2021 for A Thousand Li: The Second Sect. In 2026, the first three books in the A Thousand Li series will be republished in hardcover by Ace Books.
When he’s not writing or working, he enjoys practicing martial arts, reading, and dreaming up new worlds. He lives in Toronto, Canada.
When he’s not writing or working, he enjoys practicing martial arts, reading, and dreaming up new worlds. He lives in Toronto, Canada.
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September 30, 2021
I gave up on the main System Apocalypse series after book eight or nine, I don't really remember.
When I saw this new take on the same apocalypse come out, I debated whether to try it or not before caving in.
I'm glad I did. Hal Mason (the MC) is an ex-marine bounty hunter who's on a job when the apocalypse hits. He kills his target, and a few system enhanced animals, taking him up to level 2 before he has time to read the notifications.
From there Hal tries to understand this new world while leveling up. He takes out a large number of monsters, mostly system enhanced but also a few humans who've turned into monsters. Along the way, he starts to understand the new dynamics in Pittsburg PA, and he meets some gnomes (they have a different name, but they're gnomes) who ask him to help out in clearing the airport.
From there he meets goblins and bogeymen, the latter spending their time collecting and eating young children. He receives a quest to figure out what is happening, and it's off to the races.
As a main character, I liked Hal. The story has a very different feel from the first three of the main series, and Pittsburg is big enough to host more races than just the Truinnar in Whitehorse. His bounty hunter job is unique too, and provides a different take on leveling up.
Having said that, there are problems. The magic of learning about the system is way behind us, and there isn't much in the way of anything new showing up. I realize this is a book leveraging off a developed storyline, but still. If it's going to succeed, it's going to need something new in regards to how the system works. Something that we didn't see in in the main series.
We get the rehashed 'learn about the system' quest, the Shop, and all the rest. It's fine, but the System plays a big part in the story, and if Hal isn't going to learn anything new that means that the MC has to carry the entirety of the story.
I still enjoyed the book, but it didn't grab me. It felt like when I used to read the old Conan novels as eleven or twelve year old. The first books are great, but then we start to see the repetition pile up. Eventually I gave up because the repetition was so bad that I was reading the same story over and over again. I hope that doesn't happen here.
The notifications are fine as far as they go. The table is slightly wonky where Hal's name reads as
H
A
L
MA
SO
N
Other than that, the notifications are fine. The editing was decent, although I caught a few minor problems.
I'll also mention that a short story by the same author is included at the end, and with Hal as the main character.
4/5* for the great character and setting, -1 for the same old System.
When I saw this new take on the same apocalypse come out, I debated whether to try it or not before caving in.
I'm glad I did. Hal Mason (the MC) is an ex-marine bounty hunter who's on a job when the apocalypse hits. He kills his target, and a few system enhanced animals, taking him up to level 2 before he has time to read the notifications.
From there Hal tries to understand this new world while leveling up. He takes out a large number of monsters, mostly system enhanced but also a few humans who've turned into monsters. Along the way, he starts to understand the new dynamics in Pittsburg PA, and he meets some gnomes (they have a different name, but they're gnomes) who ask him to help out in clearing the airport.
From there he meets goblins and bogeymen, the latter spending their time collecting and eating young children. He receives a quest to figure out what is happening, and it's off to the races.
As a main character, I liked Hal. The story has a very different feel from the first three of the main series, and Pittsburg is big enough to host more races than just the Truinnar in Whitehorse. His bounty hunter job is unique too, and provides a different take on leveling up.
Having said that, there are problems. The magic of learning about the system is way behind us, and there isn't much in the way of anything new showing up. I realize this is a book leveraging off a developed storyline, but still. If it's going to succeed, it's going to need something new in regards to how the system works. Something that we didn't see in in the main series.
We get the rehashed 'learn about the system' quest, the Shop, and all the rest. It's fine, but the System plays a big part in the story, and if Hal isn't going to learn anything new that means that the MC has to carry the entirety of the story.
I still enjoyed the book, but it didn't grab me. It felt like when I used to read the old Conan novels as eleven or twelve year old. The first books are great, but then we start to see the repetition pile up. Eventually I gave up because the repetition was so bad that I was reading the same story over and over again. I hope that doesn't happen here.
The notifications are fine as far as they go. The table is slightly wonky where Hal's name reads as
H
A
L
MA
SO
N
Other than that, the notifications are fine. The editing was decent, although I caught a few minor problems.
I'll also mention that a short story by the same author is included at the end, and with Hal as the main character.
4/5* for the great character and setting, -1 for the same old System.
August 8, 2021
Solid
Decent and meaty, this has a lot going for it. Mostly clean prose, a clear storyline, and quality writing make for easy reading. Character interactions and secondary characters seem more than just cardboard cutouts.
Where it falls a bit short is somewhere between details and heart. On the details side, there are a few times where the MC seems to have knowledge of the system he did not acquire. It’s not egregious, but it is a flaw when it happens.
The heart problem is more about the depth of the story. The MC is fully realized in the first chapters and never reveals any deeper substance. I don’t really care what happens with him, not because he does anything horrible but because I don’t really know who he is. He is someone else’s character in a tabletop game and I never got anything beyond a basic introduction. What was his job in the Marines? Any living family (before the apocalypse)? Did he grow up in Pennsylvania?
I will likely read a sequel, but only because I like the world and not because I like this novel.
It is definitely adequate. But I want more.
Decent and meaty, this has a lot going for it. Mostly clean prose, a clear storyline, and quality writing make for easy reading. Character interactions and secondary characters seem more than just cardboard cutouts.
Where it falls a bit short is somewhere between details and heart. On the details side, there are a few times where the MC seems to have knowledge of the system he did not acquire. It’s not egregious, but it is a flaw when it happens.
The heart problem is more about the depth of the story. The MC is fully realized in the first chapters and never reveals any deeper substance. I don’t really care what happens with him, not because he does anything horrible but because I don’t really know who he is. He is someone else’s character in a tabletop game and I never got anything beyond a basic introduction. What was his job in the Marines? Any living family (before the apocalypse)? Did he grow up in Pennsylvania?
I will likely read a sequel, but only because I like the world and not because I like this novel.
It is definitely adequate. But I want more.
December 22, 2021
Notes:
Narrator - Shamaan Casey: Ok narration. Better with general character voice acting than telling the story from Hal's POV. He fit the MC well, but his interpretation of Hal is very dry and emotionless. That vibe bleeds over to the rest of the story.
Story:
- I like how it feels like a story from the System Apocalypse world. Nice use of certain details and a few cool twists on weapons & main character build.
- The story is too detached and makes it hard to care about some of the fun twists that were woven into the plot. The story arc was fairly flat and doesn't have a good build up to a climax. It's more like, here's another end of the world wacko thing. Wacko thing continued. Oh, wacko has been dealt with and now leaving like a lone ranger.
To Self: Try to read at least 10% of the ebook before buying any more of the audiobooks in this series. The audiobook feels rough in writing and narration. Not a good combo to keep listening to audio.
Narrator - Shamaan Casey: Ok narration. Better with general character voice acting than telling the story from Hal's POV. He fit the MC well, but his interpretation of Hal is very dry and emotionless. That vibe bleeds over to the rest of the story.
Story:
- I like how it feels like a story from the System Apocalypse world. Nice use of certain details and a few cool twists on weapons & main character build.
- The story is too detached and makes it hard to care about some of the fun twists that were woven into the plot. The story arc was fairly flat and doesn't have a good build up to a climax. It's more like, here's another end of the world wacko thing. Wacko thing continued. Oh, wacko has been dealt with and now leaving like a lone ranger.
To Self: Try to read at least 10% of the ebook before buying any more of the audiobooks in this series. The audiobook feels rough in writing and narration. Not a good combo to keep listening to audio.
August 10, 2021
I wasn't aware there were additional books in the system apocalypse series, this is a nice addition to the universe. Liked this book, and look forward to more in the series.
January 23, 2024
4.25 stars. Interesting new character in this system apocalypse universe.
November 1, 2021
Solid book. I like it way better than the first book of the original series. That book had some serious issues. I like the MC and his solo adventures. Definitely looking for the second one.
July 26, 2024
Who wants to read a book about a block headed sociopath? Realistically, I get it. Some people, most people even, think the world revolves around them and will do literally anything for a buck. The MC accidentally does some good... But not because of the kids, and not because of money, and not because he's got a quest, and not because he's against slaving or whatever... He does it because it's Tuesday and rescuing kids just feels like a Tuesday activity. Zero passion, zero risk, zero challenge. As a part of the forward to the next book, the MC is approached by an alien who asks him "you really don't care, do you? About all this?" and the MC's response is "nope."
Also, the narrator (or his post) is terrible. He drags his s so my $500 speaker was hissing at me with every other word. Muddy sound too. Very deep and grumbly narration that's almost impossible to parse without dialing up the volume past 11.
Also, the narrator (or his post) is terrible. He drags his s so my $500 speaker was hissing at me with every other word. Muddy sound too. Very deep and grumbly narration that's almost impossible to parse without dialing up the volume past 11.
December 14, 2021
What started as a great short story birthed a novel that didn’t quite live up to the same standard. I think it was still a reasonably good debut novel for someone in the genre and there’s plenty of groundwork for a good sequel.
Character 4/10, Plot 6/10, Setting/Game Mechanics 5/10, Writing 6/10, Enjoyment 6/10
A couple paragraphs of backstory don’t substitute for a character’s personality. Pretty much every character in the story was one-dimensional, and if this book was a movie, the credits would list them as Random Civilian #3 or Street Punk #2. The exception to this was during the arc at the airport. Even though this bit only lasted for about 15% of the book, I felt like I gained a better impression of who these particular characters were, where they came from, and what their motivations were (which were actually realistic struggles to pursue their nonviolent nature despite contradicting much of what the System seems to want).
I felt like they were more rounded characters than our boy Hal. His bit of fist shaking toward the heavens felt hollow since he didn’t really display any decency to his fellow human beings throughout the story. Maybe he would feel like more of a Good Guy if he didn’t blatantly condone the enslavement of his own people, play the Uncle Tom for goblins just to pad his own levels and pockets, or if he would have even attempted to convert some people later in the story to his cause. Hal comes across a sociopathic plot device rather than an actual human to me. I really hope to see a true moral compass or guiding set of values in future plotlines.
I love the Man With No Name, the Dollars Trilogy, and the Yojimbo stories as much as the next guy, so I was down for a retelling. I would like to see some more effort put into subplots though. Combined with the flat characters, this story felt like it went on rails and there was never any tension for whether Hal would run into trouble playing both sides because he honestly barely did anything. I never worried about another character getting suspicious or noticing clues because they were all just plot puppets. A unique character class is a solid idea to carry a short story, but there needs to be a lot more happening to fill a novel. Granted, the plot also comes from character, so fleshing out who Hal actually is and what he becomes will improve future plotlines. I look forward to seeing him decide how much of a human-betraying pos he plans to be.
The worldbuilding and mechanics were disappointing to me, especially considering this story takes place in a fictional world that someone already did all the work to create. I was expecting the time and energy saved on world-building to be spent elsewhere and to provide a flash of something imaginative. I don’t expect amazing polish and storytelling techniques in a debut novel, but there should be some passion for the subject matter that bleeds through. I think I felt it a little bit of this during the airport arc, specifically the scene where everyone is at the bar after a cleanup mission. It would be nice if there were more scenes that felt as genuine as this one did to me.
From a mechanics side of things, there was an absence of basic information. Seeing a character’s HP and MP means nothing to me if I don’t know what their totals are. Providing a little more info on mana costs and cooldowns, even if you aren’t into crunchy stats, helps add tension to a scene if you show those limitations and how they impact the fights. While a lack of stamina was mentioned once or twice and a cooldown was briefly mentioned, I got the sense that it never actually changed how a fight unfolded. Skills were spammed nonstop and, I’ve gotta admit, I was actually bored during many of the fights and they seemed like filler rather than an opportunity to introduce a new mechanic or growth for Hal.
The writing was average or maybe above for a debut author within the LitRPG genre. That being said, it’s always a bit shocking to read books in more established genres and then come back to gamelit, because the writing is so inefficient and cluttered. The sentences read awkwardly with repeated words, often have subject verb disagreement, have way too many adverbs, and there’s usually redundant information. If you ever find yourself typing "I quickly realized..." then you really need to take the time to read a couple books on writing. There are a ton out there, they basically all say similar things, so just find one that you like and keep it on your desk. The proofreading has gotten better for the genre in the past year, with fewer glaring typos and such, so it would be great to also see the sentences get cleaner and more effective.
The short story that was the origin for this book was my favorite from the System Apocalypse anthology and I’m happy to see a different character class, one that focuses on a lot of utility skills to complement the agility dps. The groundwork is there for a great second novel and I hope to read it and see many of the things mentioned addressed. In the meantime, I would still recommend this book to fans of the genre since it provides a lot of the familiar with a dash of the different.
Character 4/10, Plot 6/10, Setting/Game Mechanics 5/10, Writing 6/10, Enjoyment 6/10
A couple paragraphs of backstory don’t substitute for a character’s personality. Pretty much every character in the story was one-dimensional, and if this book was a movie, the credits would list them as Random Civilian #3 or Street Punk #2. The exception to this was during the arc at the airport. Even though this bit only lasted for about 15% of the book, I felt like I gained a better impression of who these particular characters were, where they came from, and what their motivations were (which were actually realistic struggles to pursue their nonviolent nature despite contradicting much of what the System seems to want).
I felt like they were more rounded characters than our boy Hal. His bit of fist shaking toward the heavens felt hollow since he didn’t really display any decency to his fellow human beings throughout the story. Maybe he would feel like more of a Good Guy if he didn’t blatantly condone the enslavement of his own people, play the Uncle Tom for goblins just to pad his own levels and pockets, or if he would have even attempted to convert some people later in the story to his cause. Hal comes across a sociopathic plot device rather than an actual human to me. I really hope to see a true moral compass or guiding set of values in future plotlines.
I love the Man With No Name, the Dollars Trilogy, and the Yojimbo stories as much as the next guy, so I was down for a retelling. I would like to see some more effort put into subplots though. Combined with the flat characters, this story felt like it went on rails and there was never any tension for whether Hal would run into trouble playing both sides because he honestly barely did anything. I never worried about another character getting suspicious or noticing clues because they were all just plot puppets. A unique character class is a solid idea to carry a short story, but there needs to be a lot more happening to fill a novel. Granted, the plot also comes from character, so fleshing out who Hal actually is and what he becomes will improve future plotlines. I look forward to seeing him decide how much of a human-betraying pos he plans to be.
The worldbuilding and mechanics were disappointing to me, especially considering this story takes place in a fictional world that someone already did all the work to create. I was expecting the time and energy saved on world-building to be spent elsewhere and to provide a flash of something imaginative. I don’t expect amazing polish and storytelling techniques in a debut novel, but there should be some passion for the subject matter that bleeds through. I think I felt it a little bit of this during the airport arc, specifically the scene where everyone is at the bar after a cleanup mission. It would be nice if there were more scenes that felt as genuine as this one did to me.
From a mechanics side of things, there was an absence of basic information. Seeing a character’s HP and MP means nothing to me if I don’t know what their totals are. Providing a little more info on mana costs and cooldowns, even if you aren’t into crunchy stats, helps add tension to a scene if you show those limitations and how they impact the fights. While a lack of stamina was mentioned once or twice and a cooldown was briefly mentioned, I got the sense that it never actually changed how a fight unfolded. Skills were spammed nonstop and, I’ve gotta admit, I was actually bored during many of the fights and they seemed like filler rather than an opportunity to introduce a new mechanic or growth for Hal.
The writing was average or maybe above for a debut author within the LitRPG genre. That being said, it’s always a bit shocking to read books in more established genres and then come back to gamelit, because the writing is so inefficient and cluttered. The sentences read awkwardly with repeated words, often have subject verb disagreement, have way too many adverbs, and there’s usually redundant information. If you ever find yourself typing "I quickly realized..." then you really need to take the time to read a couple books on writing. There are a ton out there, they basically all say similar things, so just find one that you like and keep it on your desk. The proofreading has gotten better for the genre in the past year, with fewer glaring typos and such, so it would be great to also see the sentences get cleaner and more effective.
The short story that was the origin for this book was my favorite from the System Apocalypse anthology and I’m happy to see a different character class, one that focuses on a lot of utility skills to complement the agility dps. The groundwork is there for a great second novel and I hope to read it and see many of the things mentioned addressed. In the meantime, I would still recommend this book to fans of the genre since it provides a lot of the familiar with a dash of the different.
August 16, 2021
Well written, but not well researched.
I love the bounty hunter concept and was excited to revisit this setting with a marine as the main character. As such, I was expecting him to be highly trained in firearms and savvy in selecting an optimal kit for a SHTF scenario. I was also very curious to see how he adapted that knowledge to the System. Unfortunately, the problem I have with the new lead is his glaring lack of realism.
For example, the first chance he has to acquire gear from the Shop he ends up buying a bunch of pistols. He then goes on to spend twice as much on armor with no intention of getting another gun. That’s just some silly nonsense and immediately kicked me out of story immersion. His first priority should have been an actual *primary* weapon as in a battle rifle. Longer range, more accurate, more powerful, and select fire with high ammo capacity and easy to reload magazines. Pistols are a poor substitute for a rifle. In fact, most combat role soldiers do not even carry one.
Also, when picking guns he selects strange, new technology with unknown ammo properties and physics. Does he know the manual of arms for these weapons in the event of a malfunction or how effective they are at penetration and tissue damage? No, not unless that information is magically imparted by the System (it isn’t). The far bigger issue though is no immediate ability to reload these space guns with low fixed ammo capacity. Unbelievably, he thinks bringing untested energy weapons he has no experience with and that take a freaking hour to recharge a few rounds is a good idea for a combat zone.
Another gripe with the main character is using two pistols at once. It’s very cool and very Hollywood. In reality, aiming with a single hand is much harder than with two as the result is less control and recoil management. Also, it’s pretty much impossible aiming through two sets of gun sights on two different guns at the same time. What is possible is point or instinctive shooting, using body placement and muscle memory to aim in a general direction. There are trick shooters that can do incredible feats with this technique and it’s a legit part of Close Quarters Combat training, but it’s never going to be more accurate than actually aiming with the sights. At any rate, military and law enforcement organizations do not train to shoot two pistols at once so why the heck is the main character suddenly going full guns akimbo?
I really wish authors would do a little research if they intend to use a character with a military background and firearms in their story. Seriously, it’s not hard and the information is readily available. For example, a typical combat loadout for a solider is around 200 rounds for their primary weapon. This loadout also allows for reloading with a typical 30 round magazines in a few seconds. In comparison, what the main character selects shows a lack of tactical understanding. It’s honestly worse than picking black powder revolvers over modern guns. Makes no sense at all, especially as he has access to a magical inventory to store loads of ammunition and magazines.
Otherwise, the writing is fairly good and what I would expect from an official System Apocalypse novel. This includes a lot of pure fantasy and game mechanics that are clunky, artificial, and inconsistent. I got a real laugh when Hal bought a certain ability thinking a 2% decrease in attacker movement speed would actually be useful. Basically, it’s all normal LitRPG nonsense. I’m even OK with the main character’s anti-hero vibe and general lack of empathy, even though I’m sick of Chaotic Neutral leads. He’s good at killing and doesn’t get squeamish about it. Cool. He’s willing to risk his life to help total strangers when it suits him, but equally willing to totally ignore them as well. So very edgy.
Considering the apocalyptic setting and main character, I would have liked the story to have been even darker. When he encounters other humans willing to rob or attack him, he should have popped their tops without blinking an eye. Zero tolerance and no wasting time talking or worrying about the ethics. Heck, even if they just threaten him that should be enough of a reason to kill - it’s free experience. And then loot them all for good measure, of course.
Oh well. At least this is something new in a fun setting, and free to read via Kindle Unlimited. If you’re a fan of the original System Apocalypse series then this one is definitely worth checking out.
I love the bounty hunter concept and was excited to revisit this setting with a marine as the main character. As such, I was expecting him to be highly trained in firearms and savvy in selecting an optimal kit for a SHTF scenario. I was also very curious to see how he adapted that knowledge to the System. Unfortunately, the problem I have with the new lead is his glaring lack of realism.
For example, the first chance he has to acquire gear from the Shop he ends up buying a bunch of pistols. He then goes on to spend twice as much on armor with no intention of getting another gun. That’s just some silly nonsense and immediately kicked me out of story immersion. His first priority should have been an actual *primary* weapon as in a battle rifle. Longer range, more accurate, more powerful, and select fire with high ammo capacity and easy to reload magazines. Pistols are a poor substitute for a rifle. In fact, most combat role soldiers do not even carry one.
Also, when picking guns he selects strange, new technology with unknown ammo properties and physics. Does he know the manual of arms for these weapons in the event of a malfunction or how effective they are at penetration and tissue damage? No, not unless that information is magically imparted by the System (it isn’t). The far bigger issue though is no immediate ability to reload these space guns with low fixed ammo capacity. Unbelievably, he thinks bringing untested energy weapons he has no experience with and that take a freaking hour to recharge a few rounds is a good idea for a combat zone.
Another gripe with the main character is using two pistols at once. It’s very cool and very Hollywood. In reality, aiming with a single hand is much harder than with two as the result is less control and recoil management. Also, it’s pretty much impossible aiming through two sets of gun sights on two different guns at the same time. What is possible is point or instinctive shooting, using body placement and muscle memory to aim in a general direction. There are trick shooters that can do incredible feats with this technique and it’s a legit part of Close Quarters Combat training, but it’s never going to be more accurate than actually aiming with the sights. At any rate, military and law enforcement organizations do not train to shoot two pistols at once so why the heck is the main character suddenly going full guns akimbo?
I really wish authors would do a little research if they intend to use a character with a military background and firearms in their story. Seriously, it’s not hard and the information is readily available. For example, a typical combat loadout for a solider is around 200 rounds for their primary weapon. This loadout also allows for reloading with a typical 30 round magazines in a few seconds. In comparison, what the main character selects shows a lack of tactical understanding. It’s honestly worse than picking black powder revolvers over modern guns. Makes no sense at all, especially as he has access to a magical inventory to store loads of ammunition and magazines.
Otherwise, the writing is fairly good and what I would expect from an official System Apocalypse novel. This includes a lot of pure fantasy and game mechanics that are clunky, artificial, and inconsistent. I got a real laugh when Hal bought a certain ability thinking a 2% decrease in attacker movement speed would actually be useful. Basically, it’s all normal LitRPG nonsense. I’m even OK with the main character’s anti-hero vibe and general lack of empathy, even though I’m sick of Chaotic Neutral leads. He’s good at killing and doesn’t get squeamish about it. Cool. He’s willing to risk his life to help total strangers when it suits him, but equally willing to totally ignore them as well. So very edgy.
Considering the apocalyptic setting and main character, I would have liked the story to have been even darker. When he encounters other humans willing to rob or attack him, he should have popped their tops without blinking an eye. Zero tolerance and no wasting time talking or worrying about the ethics. Heck, even if they just threaten him that should be enough of a reason to kill - it’s free experience. And then loot them all for good measure, of course.
Oh well. At least this is something new in a fun setting, and free to read via Kindle Unlimited. If you’re a fan of the original System Apocalypse series then this one is definitely worth checking out.
December 10, 2021
This audiobook was a bit two-sided when it comes to its focus on being a lit RPG. I really enjoyed a good portion of the story and its RPG elements. However, I wanted more in a few places making it feel like the character was maturing as he leveled up. The audiobook, “A Fist Full of Credits” appears to be the premiere release for one of the two authors (Craig Hamilton and Tao Wong) while the other has experience with the genre and most of his works are highly rated. What I did not have a problem enjoying, was the narration. It is professionally performed by Shamaan Casey, who I have enjoyed many of his other narrated audiobook in the past. If you are in the look for a potentially new lit RPG series, you may want to give the first book in the series a listen.
I appreciated learning more about the system and the people dealing with their new apocalyptic world. I found many of the creatures faced by our characters both fresh and in place familiar. Large stink bugs and killer plants made the attacks fun, while we also had wild dogs and goblins. With some of the writing, I struggled to understand the characters and their drive. I felt most characters, outside of the main character, lacked dimension, personality, and purpose. A few emotionally charged event occur that tried to bring one back around to caring, but with the lack of background, it was hard to fully enjoy. Although there was a main quest, along with many side quests, I did not feel that all of them connected to the main character as they should have. Even with plenty of action and adventure, I wanted to have a more descriptive world which painted a picture of things outside of the main character’s immediate view.
When we did get a glimpse into the main character’s life, we see his ex-military drive and training help him to be the best bounty hunter the system could expect. We are given a few flashbacks for background, but I really wanted more of his past life, things prior to entering the system. He steps in and the system quickly throws increasing level of difficulty at him (much like in an RPG), yet I did not feel overall that he was ever vulnerable. I like a strong hero, but one that faces difficult challenges and potential failure. Teetering on the edge of death makes for more suspense and tension for the listener. I liked that mana (or magic) was used to power objects much like batteries, so that helped to blend fantasy with science fiction. Much of the book is a blending of fantasy, sci-fi and apocalyptic genres, and I’m not sure that this did the story justice as much as it would if focused on a single genre.
I’m not saying that I disliked the audiobook, I listened from start to finish. However, I am saying I expected more based on my knowledge of one of the authors and his rated works. I liked the journey and adventure the story took me on. Yet, I wanted more action, suspense, adventure, and excitement. The story seemed to pace itself from the start and continue to travel at that set speed until the end.
Regarding the audiobook’s narration, I have always found Shamaan Casey’s works to be performed with passion, knowledge of the work he was reading, and his ability to give unique character to the different people in the book. Sometimes that was even his voicing of non-humans. I like his deep and rich voice that is also clean and sharp when he reads. I do not recall any audio artifacts or other issues with the audio itself either.
For parents and younger listeners, I would suggest you shy away from this if you have any concerns or issues with drug use or graphic violence. The book does not have a bunch of this type of activity, but there is enough that I would not recommend it to younger audiences.
In summary, the entry book in the series was OK, but I expected and wanted more from it. Some of this may come in future books in the series. I wanted more character development, more on the system, more on the people running the system, and even some on the others our main character ran into. What make it better was the narration by Mr. Casey, he kept the story going and made it more alive and entertaining.
I appreciated learning more about the system and the people dealing with their new apocalyptic world. I found many of the creatures faced by our characters both fresh and in place familiar. Large stink bugs and killer plants made the attacks fun, while we also had wild dogs and goblins. With some of the writing, I struggled to understand the characters and their drive. I felt most characters, outside of the main character, lacked dimension, personality, and purpose. A few emotionally charged event occur that tried to bring one back around to caring, but with the lack of background, it was hard to fully enjoy. Although there was a main quest, along with many side quests, I did not feel that all of them connected to the main character as they should have. Even with plenty of action and adventure, I wanted to have a more descriptive world which painted a picture of things outside of the main character’s immediate view.
When we did get a glimpse into the main character’s life, we see his ex-military drive and training help him to be the best bounty hunter the system could expect. We are given a few flashbacks for background, but I really wanted more of his past life, things prior to entering the system. He steps in and the system quickly throws increasing level of difficulty at him (much like in an RPG), yet I did not feel overall that he was ever vulnerable. I like a strong hero, but one that faces difficult challenges and potential failure. Teetering on the edge of death makes for more suspense and tension for the listener. I liked that mana (or magic) was used to power objects much like batteries, so that helped to blend fantasy with science fiction. Much of the book is a blending of fantasy, sci-fi and apocalyptic genres, and I’m not sure that this did the story justice as much as it would if focused on a single genre.
I’m not saying that I disliked the audiobook, I listened from start to finish. However, I am saying I expected more based on my knowledge of one of the authors and his rated works. I liked the journey and adventure the story took me on. Yet, I wanted more action, suspense, adventure, and excitement. The story seemed to pace itself from the start and continue to travel at that set speed until the end.
Regarding the audiobook’s narration, I have always found Shamaan Casey’s works to be performed with passion, knowledge of the work he was reading, and his ability to give unique character to the different people in the book. Sometimes that was even his voicing of non-humans. I like his deep and rich voice that is also clean and sharp when he reads. I do not recall any audio artifacts or other issues with the audio itself either.
For parents and younger listeners, I would suggest you shy away from this if you have any concerns or issues with drug use or graphic violence. The book does not have a bunch of this type of activity, but there is enough that I would not recommend it to younger audiences.
In summary, the entry book in the series was OK, but I expected and wanted more from it. Some of this may come in future books in the series. I wanted more character development, more on the system, more on the people running the system, and even some on the others our main character ran into. What make it better was the narration by Mr. Casey, he kept the story going and made it more alive and entertaining.
August 21, 2021
Great First Entry!
I really enjoyed the first appearance of Hal in the Anthology series, so seeing him get a novel that explores how he got started was loads of fun.
I think this story satisfies System Apocalypse readers because Hal is a character that has similar morals to John from the primary series, but also distinctly different outlooks, skill sets, and methodology. Additionally, it does not require any knowledge of the primary series to read this book.
If you have read System Apocalypse by Tao Wong - this book is enhanced. If you haven’t, this is a good entry into the universe that shows you a lot of the kinds of themes the universe / system apocalypse series has contained.
That information aside, I really loved this book. Hal is something of a bounty hunter out of a western story, slinging guns and fighting monsters. It delivers a fun romp with the feel of a LitRPG story that satisfies. I will read book 2.
I really enjoyed the first appearance of Hal in the Anthology series, so seeing him get a novel that explores how he got started was loads of fun.
I think this story satisfies System Apocalypse readers because Hal is a character that has similar morals to John from the primary series, but also distinctly different outlooks, skill sets, and methodology. Additionally, it does not require any knowledge of the primary series to read this book.
If you have read System Apocalypse by Tao Wong - this book is enhanced. If you haven’t, this is a good entry into the universe that shows you a lot of the kinds of themes the universe / system apocalypse series has contained.
That information aside, I really loved this book. Hal is something of a bounty hunter out of a western story, slinging guns and fighting monsters. It delivers a fun romp with the feel of a LitRPG story that satisfies. I will read book 2.
September 2, 2021
I was hoping for an exciting return to the beginning of the apocalypse, with all the highs and lows of Tao’s original. Instead everything is just flat.
Our MC has basically no emotional range, his class has little subtlety, he makes no lasting relationships, the story has no dynamic range, and there’s not really anything that’s much fun to read.
The author spends most of his time making sure that Pittsburgh is accurately represented, which I appreciate having lived in the east end for four years, but is mostly just distracting.
Most importantly there’s nothing strongly tied to Tao’s system in here. It could be plopped into any genetic apocalypse system without any work. I feel like the fact that this is a prequel for a short story is a negative overall, as our author is trying to retain a high level of consistency but might have made better choices otherwise.
I’ll read the next one in the hope that it livens up.
Our MC has basically no emotional range, his class has little subtlety, he makes no lasting relationships, the story has no dynamic range, and there’s not really anything that’s much fun to read.
The author spends most of his time making sure that Pittsburgh is accurately represented, which I appreciate having lived in the east end for four years, but is mostly just distracting.
Most importantly there’s nothing strongly tied to Tao’s system in here. It could be plopped into any genetic apocalypse system without any work. I feel like the fact that this is a prequel for a short story is a negative overall, as our author is trying to retain a high level of consistency but might have made better choices otherwise.
I’ll read the next one in the hope that it livens up.
September 12, 2021
Bounty hunting became a lot more difficult under the system
But Hal Mason finds that his skills translate into the system better than he could hope for with his Advanced class, Relentless Hunter. The class provides interesting and powerful class abilities, as long as he can survive to unlock them at level 15!
Another great story in the System Apocalypse universe, which is an awesome series about aliens bringing magic back to earth, but it’s not exactly what we may have hoped for.
Earth is now a dungeon planet, deadly but lucrative if he can survive the changed reality. Adapt to a new reality with game like overlays, experience, level ups, skills and more turn our would upside down… but for Hal Mason it’s just another day in the life of a hunter.
Time to read on and see if he can survive and thrive rather than become monster shit! Can’t wait for more of Hal’s story!
But Hal Mason finds that his skills translate into the system better than he could hope for with his Advanced class, Relentless Hunter. The class provides interesting and powerful class abilities, as long as he can survive to unlock them at level 15!
Another great story in the System Apocalypse universe, which is an awesome series about aliens bringing magic back to earth, but it’s not exactly what we may have hoped for.
Earth is now a dungeon planet, deadly but lucrative if he can survive the changed reality. Adapt to a new reality with game like overlays, experience, level ups, skills and more turn our would upside down… but for Hal Mason it’s just another day in the life of a hunter.
Time to read on and see if he can survive and thrive rather than become monster shit! Can’t wait for more of Hal’s story!
August 7, 2021
Perfect for fans of the earlier System novels or LitRPG
Craig’s take on Tao Wong’s System universe delivers the goods with action, cool powers, origin stories, weapon play, and more. The main character, Hal, is a Clint Eastwood type (as one would guess from the titular movie pun), so if you like the System but prefer protagonists who are comfortable with its challenges and violence rather than struggling with the moral and emotional repercussions, this is the book for you.
The professionally edited book was a pleasure to read, with no typos or mistakes to detract from the strong writing and plotting. I would definitely read more from the author, as well as other stories set in this most interesting universe.
Craig’s take on Tao Wong’s System universe delivers the goods with action, cool powers, origin stories, weapon play, and more. The main character, Hal, is a Clint Eastwood type (as one would guess from the titular movie pun), so if you like the System but prefer protagonists who are comfortable with its challenges and violence rather than struggling with the moral and emotional repercussions, this is the book for you.
The professionally edited book was a pleasure to read, with no typos or mistakes to detract from the strong writing and plotting. I would definitely read more from the author, as well as other stories set in this most interesting universe.
September 11, 2021
KU Review
“This was a fun book. I am glad that I read it. You should try it too.”
I am not going to share my reasoning, thoughts on the book, or any opinions that would influence your decision to read it. I am simply saying that I liked it. I would like you to read it and make your own decision. After all, you are a much better judge of what you will like than anyone here.
I will happily discuss the book with you on Goodreads if you are so inclined. As always, I am open to debates and arguments, but also vain enough to seek acknowledgement, so feel free to roast me or applaud my efforts. Either is acceptable, because if you are paying attention to me then you are at least considering the book. And THAT my friends is exactly why you see my comments here.
Cheers
“This was a fun book. I am glad that I read it. You should try it too.”
I am not going to share my reasoning, thoughts on the book, or any opinions that would influence your decision to read it. I am simply saying that I liked it. I would like you to read it and make your own decision. After all, you are a much better judge of what you will like than anyone here.
I will happily discuss the book with you on Goodreads if you are so inclined. As always, I am open to debates and arguments, but also vain enough to seek acknowledgement, so feel free to roast me or applaud my efforts. Either is acceptable, because if you are paying attention to me then you are at least considering the book. And THAT my friends is exactly why you see my comments here.
Cheers
October 7, 2022
excellent, RVG elements, sci-fi elements, fantasy.
An excellent fast paced book, has all the elements you want. The book has RPG elements as well as science-fiction elements, modern technology in the modern world. If you like books that contain all these elements which I do, you’ll enjoy this book. The story is fast paced, excellent, main character, not overpowered, wish he was. The only problem I found that his pistols are too weak. You should not have to unload magazine after magazine into and adversary. he needs to upgrade his weapons and his armor. Main character does not moralize he just gets things done. This is the type of character. I enjoy most. He’s third in line behind Zack and Jason for me. Going on to read the next book.
An excellent fast paced book, has all the elements you want. The book has RPG elements as well as science-fiction elements, modern technology in the modern world. If you like books that contain all these elements which I do, you’ll enjoy this book. The story is fast paced, excellent, main character, not overpowered, wish he was. The only problem I found that his pistols are too weak. You should not have to unload magazine after magazine into and adversary. he needs to upgrade his weapons and his armor. Main character does not moralize he just gets things done. This is the type of character. I enjoy most. He’s third in line behind Zack and Jason for me. Going on to read the next book.
November 25, 2025
I listened to this on Audible and it did not cost me anything as it was a part of the Plus Catalog. I did not like the narrator (he was fine as other characters but the main character was a reach (it kind of sounds like he is a noir detective than an ex soldier). It was a bit off putting for me.
There is no main story - it read more like a chain of smaller stories, though there is a hint at the end of a meta plot. I also felt that the author had him between being an uncaring person (as if that related to be a tough guy, and than sort of caring). It did not make me like the character (but I did hate him either.
I would say if you are starved for LitRPG give it a go. I will not be continuing in the series.
There is no main story - it read more like a chain of smaller stories, though there is a hint at the end of a meta plot. I also felt that the author had him between being an uncaring person (as if that related to be a tough guy, and than sort of caring). It did not make me like the character (but I did hate him either.
I would say if you are starved for LitRPG give it a go. I will not be continuing in the series.
August 25, 2021
Solid book, quite enjoyed it. I've read most of the System Apocalypse books, and the weak point of them for me was always the MC. Miserable, moody people aren't fun to read about and I found that John detracted from the overall experience.
Here we have another perspective on the apocalypse, and Hal, damaged veteran that he is, is much easier to follow. Specifically, he seems more relatable and like someone I could actually spend time with, and that makes an easier reading experience for me.
If the SA universe appeals to you, I recommend this book. If you haven't read any of them yet, this one stands on its own and is worth a look if the blurb looks interesting to you.
Here we have another perspective on the apocalypse, and Hal, damaged veteran that he is, is much easier to follow. Specifically, he seems more relatable and like someone I could actually spend time with, and that makes an easier reading experience for me.
If the SA universe appeals to you, I recommend this book. If you haven't read any of them yet, this one stands on its own and is worth a look if the blurb looks interesting to you.
October 6, 2023
4.5 stars
Better than system apocalypse. I enjoyed this MC way more. The stakes of the story were good but not overwhelming. It's been a while since I read SA (only read like 3 books before I gave up) but the system is weird in that a level 3 can kill a level 50 with relative ease. Also, it takes A LOT of damage to kill anything. The fights are kinda drawn out for someone shooting a dog with a literal rail gun. I know that's not the authors fault because he's writing in an already established universe but I prefer a more realistic system where a head shot actually means something. Anyways, I'll definitely read the next one.
Better than system apocalypse. I enjoyed this MC way more. The stakes of the story were good but not overwhelming. It's been a while since I read SA (only read like 3 books before I gave up) but the system is weird in that a level 3 can kill a level 50 with relative ease. Also, it takes A LOT of damage to kill anything. The fights are kinda drawn out for someone shooting a dog with a literal rail gun. I know that's not the authors fault because he's writing in an already established universe but I prefer a more realistic system where a head shot actually means something. Anyways, I'll definitely read the next one.
August 16, 2021
Good book
I enjoyed the mc in this side story much more the the main story. Much less emotional hang ups bogging down the story although it almost goes too far with a close to cold and uncaring mc. Hopefully we'll see some growth in the next book. Lots of great action and leveling with cool news class and abilities. Looking forward to the next book featuring this mc. As a bonus, no weird relationship dynmaic between the mc, a human women, and a make alien like the first book.
I enjoyed the mc in this side story much more the the main story. Much less emotional hang ups bogging down the story although it almost goes too far with a close to cold and uncaring mc. Hopefully we'll see some growth in the next book. Lots of great action and leveling with cool news class and abilities. Looking forward to the next book featuring this mc. As a bonus, no weird relationship dynmaic between the mc, a human women, and a make alien like the first book.
October 31, 2021
I did this one on audio.
The narrator emphasices every other Word. Horrid listening experience He is clesrly trying to convey a macho feel. The problem with overdoing it is that :
1. You flatten the character. There is only room for macho. This is accentuated by the writingstyle and the combined outcome is hard to listen to.
2. You subtract from the suspence when you constantly remind the listener that the MC is a badass. There is no room for any tension
3. It sounds downright ridicolous WHen EVery WOrd is a PUnchline.
The narrator sounds like he has seen one too many trailers.
Who choose the dilettant?
The narrator emphasices every other Word. Horrid listening experience He is clesrly trying to convey a macho feel. The problem with overdoing it is that :
1. You flatten the character. There is only room for macho. This is accentuated by the writingstyle and the combined outcome is hard to listen to.
2. You subtract from the suspence when you constantly remind the listener that the MC is a badass. There is no room for any tension
3. It sounds downright ridicolous WHen EVery WOrd is a PUnchline.
The narrator sounds like he has seen one too many trailers.
Who choose the dilettant?
June 21, 2024
There is apocalypse, there is a system and there is progression and MC can be liked. However, it fell a little short of the iedal:
1) The mechanics allow you to use weapons and skills without a limit, so the winner is not the better one but the one with the graver, wallet which is not shown
2) It doesn't feel somehow expressly that higher levels and attributes translate into ease of fighting.
3) Lack of curiosity about the sytem. No wondering where it came from, what its range is, what its limitations are or what is effective about it.
1) The mechanics allow you to use weapons and skills without a limit, so the winner is not the better one but the one with the graver, wallet which is not shown
2) It doesn't feel somehow expressly that higher levels and attributes translate into ease of fighting.
3) Lack of curiosity about the sytem. No wondering where it came from, what its range is, what its limitations are or what is effective about it.
August 10, 2021
An excellent book!
I'm a keen fan of the System Apocalypse series and this new entry to the world is exactly what the world needed. Hal is a reluctant hero at best and I feel perfectly sums up a veterans attitude to life with his no nonsense attitude and brutal pragmatism.
The expanded world building is brilliant and has built nicely off of the previously established series but still manages to add its own flavour.
I'm a keen fan of the System Apocalypse series and this new entry to the world is exactly what the world needed. Hal is a reluctant hero at best and I feel perfectly sums up a veterans attitude to life with his no nonsense attitude and brutal pragmatism.
The expanded world building is brilliant and has built nicely off of the previously established series but still manages to add its own flavour.
August 28, 2021
New adventure in an awesome universe!
Honestly, the caption says it all.
I’m a huge fan of the universe, and Craig does an awesome job bringing a new character and city to life. Exploring a different, more populated area at the beginning was a ton of fun, and I can’t wait for more of Hal’s story.
Craigs writing style is a bit different, more description and detail for the city, but it fits really well, and this is a great addition to the series!
Honestly, the caption says it all.
I’m a huge fan of the universe, and Craig does an awesome job bringing a new character and city to life. Exploring a different, more populated area at the beginning was a ton of fun, and I can’t wait for more of Hal’s story.
Craigs writing style is a bit different, more description and detail for the city, but it fits really well, and this is a great addition to the series!
December 2, 2021
Great Addition to the System Apocalypse World
This is my second series embedded into the System Apocalyose world after Tao Wong's original. It is as much fun to read as the other ones. Following a bail bonds man turned bounty Hunter on his first adventures through the newly formed Dungeon World Earth. It has a bit more of a military background which fits the main character.
I hope there will be a second one soon. Will bridge the time with the short stories.
This is my second series embedded into the System Apocalyose world after Tao Wong's original. It is as much fun to read as the other ones. Following a bail bonds man turned bounty Hunter on his first adventures through the newly formed Dungeon World Earth. It has a bit more of a military background which fits the main character.
I hope there will be a second one soon. Will bridge the time with the short stories.
August 13, 2021
Great System Apocalypse
How long is created a vivid post apocalyptic world with a fascinating system, and Hamilton I was taking full advantage of it, by refocusing from the galaxy spanning epic saga that’s the main story has become to one man finding his way in Dungeon World Earth. Great action and an Interesting MC
How long is created a vivid post apocalyptic world with a fascinating system, and Hamilton I was taking full advantage of it, by refocusing from the galaxy spanning epic saga that’s the main story has become to one man finding his way in Dungeon World Earth. Great action and an Interesting MC
August 19, 2021
Good Start, Promising Series
This is good, quality action adventure starring a cold but honorable man. Recommended.
My only complaint is that it is a bit confusing if this is your first System Apocalypse book. Hal does not have a djinn explaining his new reality, so the first half is more confusing for the reader than for the character.
This is good, quality action adventure starring a cold but honorable man. Recommended.
My only complaint is that it is a bit confusing if this is your first System Apocalypse book. Hal does not have a djinn explaining his new reality, so the first half is more confusing for the reader than for the character.
August 31, 2021
Pretty fantastic
Perfectly solid intro to a new character in the system apocalypse universe. A particularly liked how it included the short story at the very end that first introduced the character. That short story actually takes place after this novel, as the novel introduces the origins of the character.
I absolutely look forward to more
Perfectly solid intro to a new character in the system apocalypse universe. A particularly liked how it included the short story at the very end that first introduced the character. That short story actually takes place after this novel, as the novel introduces the origins of the character.
I absolutely look forward to more
September 22, 2021
Book one
Mistakes: Very well written and edited. I did find one mistake and listed it on Goodreads. However the book ended at 90%. The rest is a short story.
Plot:This is a story set in the System Apocalypse world. It's about a bounty hunter.
Characters: He really doesn't seem to have any emotions.
7/10
Mistakes: Very well written and edited. I did find one mistake and listed it on Goodreads. However the book ended at 90%. The rest is a short story.
Plot:This is a story set in the System Apocalypse world. It's about a bounty hunter.
Characters: He really doesn't seem to have any emotions.
7/10
October 17, 2023
DNF
Couldn’t make it through the first chapter. He’s pulls his gun on a perp with a shotgun and says drop it while the guy shoots him in the chest. Obviously he’s wearing body armor, but I’ve got another ending for you. He gets shot and dies because he decided to say “drop it” instead of just pulling the trigger. He’s not even a cop. Utter nonsense.
Couldn’t make it through the first chapter. He’s pulls his gun on a perp with a shotgun and says drop it while the guy shoots him in the chest. Obviously he’s wearing body armor, but I’ve got another ending for you. He gets shot and dies because he decided to say “drop it” instead of just pulling the trigger. He’s not even a cop. Utter nonsense.
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