Really enjoyed this boom. Really good story line, Aiden is amazing! Love the dynamic with his beta and gamma too. Lots of humour and really wouldn’t mind hearing more of their stories.
I’m honestly only doing this to try to reach out to you. This book has an amazing storyline, the basis of this book would make an amazing book with the proper editing. If you read this please reach out to me, I’d like to help you. I know this is an unconventional way to contact an author but I’ve tried every other way I can think of and I’d really like to help you re-edit.
The storyline is good, but the grammar is difficult at times and you have to figure out which meaning to keep on track. Big difference between in and on, and definitely between scavenge and ravage. But if you read at a faster pace you will figure out what what word should come next as opposed to the one you see.
The storyline is great, engaging, and suspenseful. The grammar is frustrating at points. I found myself changing a lot of the words to make the story make more sense. I still would like to see a sequel though, perhaps with less grammar issues.
If I could go back in time and read this for the first time all over I would I absolutely loved the characters so much the plot was outstanding i recommend 10/10