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My Coach, My Stalker
My diving trainer, Everett, has coached me all the way to the Olympics. Now I'm competing on a world stage for a gold medal. But when we arrive in Tokyo, my technique is off. I'm restless, aching—and I can't pinpoint why. But Everett knows exactly what I need to get my concentration back. Now he's coaching me in a whole new way, revealing an obsession with me that has been simmering under the surface for years, preparing to boil...
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First published August 6, 2021
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August 11, 2021
1.25 stars 🚮
I once said, jokingly, that rating a JK novella less than 5 stars was an international crime, but after reading this, I think this novella should be an international crime.
The amount of pedophilic shit that is said by Everett (H) towards Margot (h) is truly traumatizing. It started off okay, though the foot fetish thought made me question that fact-
But the towel scene in the first chapter was KINDA good, which explains the extra .25 stars I gave this. It was just downhill from there because Everrett started getting really fucking creepy.
So Margot was 16 when Everrett first became her diving coach 2 years prior. Since then, he’s been stalking and lusting after her…Keep in mind this a 36 year old man.
He explains to Margot that the reason she’s been feeling awkward and her bathing suits are tight on her is because she’s 'horny' and that she’s 'ready for sex' so they must solve this “problem” before competition at the Olympics starts or else she’ll do bad…
Everett also has these nasty fantasies where he envisions Margot dressed up as a child…
Flash-forward to the end of the novella when in Margot’s inner thoughts she talks about having sex with Everrett on a plane under a blanket and when the flight attendant saw him on top of her she was surprised, presumingly because-
Margot also mentions that Everett has developed a beer belly which makes him ‘look the part as her Daddy’ while also mentioning that underneath her track shit
Everett for some fucking reason feels the need to tell Margot’s dad that he needs to have sex with Margot to improve her diving performances. NO LIKE LITERALLY, HE TELLS HER DAD
Oh my god, now this shit was hilarious. As you can tell by the book title, Everett also stalks Margot, like putting a microphone in her room and sneaking into her room to watch her sleep 😍
Oh oh, he also pictures of her on the walls of his house and not just pictures-
It wasn’t only pictures and underwear on the walls of his house, but also his own blood from slamming his head against the walls in order to try and “control his obsession”… looks like he didn’t hit his head hard enough 🤠
I once said, jokingly, that rating a JK novella less than 5 stars was an international crime, but after reading this, I think this novella should be an international crime.
The amount of pedophilic shit that is said by Everett (H) towards Margot (h) is truly traumatizing. It started off okay, though the foot fetish thought made me question that fact-
I sense movement above me and watch hungrily as Margot’s toes wiggle over the edge of the diving board. There’s no way to stop the thickening of my cock.
But the towel scene in the first chapter was KINDA good, which explains the extra .25 stars I gave this. It was just downhill from there because Everrett started getting really fucking creepy.
So Margot was 16 when Everrett first became her diving coach 2 years prior. Since then, he’s been stalking and lusting after her…Keep in mind this a 36 year old man.
He explains to Margot that the reason she’s been feeling awkward and her bathing suits are tight on her is because she’s 'horny' and that she’s 'ready for sex' so they must solve this “problem” before competition at the Olympics starts or else she’ll do bad…
“We have to take care of this before official competition starts. Otherwise you’re going to be distracted and anxious.” Everett says thickly, his eyelids drooped so low I can only see a sliver of his eyes. “You need an orgasm, Margot.”
→Ah yes, using her desire to do well at the Olympics to manipulate her into letting him touch her. Disgusting ✋🏻
Everett also has these nasty fantasies where he envisions Margot dressed up as a child…
I want to be Margot’s Daddy so bad, I can no longer locate where the need ends and I begin. It’s quite simply a part of me. My fantasies have escalated lately to include pigtails and nightgowns and that coveted pop of her cherry.
→This might the most horrifying line of the novella…
Flash-forward to the end of the novella when in Margot’s inner thoughts she talks about having sex with Everrett on a plane under a blanket and when the flight attendant saw him on top of her she was surprised, presumingly because-
A lot of people mistake us for father and daughter—and the pigtails style I wear these days doesn’t help matters.
→SHE’S WEARING FUCKING PIGTAILS I-
Margot also mentions that Everett has developed a beer belly which makes him ‘look the part as her Daddy’ while also mentioning that underneath her track shit
…I look the part of his little girl in frilly white panties and knee-high stockings.
Everett for some fucking reason feels the need to tell Margot’s dad that he needs to have sex with Margot to improve her diving performances. NO LIKE LITERALLY, HE TELLS HER DAD
“I’m going to bring her back to my room and give her the only training that’s going to help at this point.”
→AND THE DAD JUST FUCKING ACCEPTS IT 🤡 YES BECAUSE ANY DAD WOULD BE OKAY WITH A 36 YEAR OLD MAN THAT’S KNOWN HIS DAUGHTER SINCE SHE WAS UNDERAGED, TO HAVE SEX WITH HER
Oh my god, now this shit was hilarious. As you can tell by the book title, Everett also stalks Margot, like putting a microphone in her room and sneaking into her room to watch her sleep 😍
Oh oh, he also pictures of her on the walls of his house and not just pictures-
My old swimsuits are tacked to the walls alongside pictures of me. Photos where I am unaware of being pictured at all. Oblivious. I’m sleeping in some of them, my leg thrown over the comforter. There are up close shots of my private parts. My sex. My breasts. My mouth. So many pictures of my mouth. Stolen panties and various items I thought I’d misplaced over the years surround me on every surface.
→It was at this point Margot realized that this man was crazy and ran for the hills…NOT she actually got turned on 🤪🤪🤪
It wasn’t only pictures and underwear on the walls of his house, but also his own blood from slamming his head against the walls in order to try and “control his obsession”… looks like he didn’t hit his head hard enough 🤠
April 20, 2023
At least we can say that the hero is a real gentleman, asking her father permission to fuck her 🤪
September 24, 2021
OMG This is just weird, Jessa has finally gone to the deep end.
Train wreck but I couldn't look away.
Jessa - My woman, my center, flesh, sex, appendage, trunk of flesh, blah, blah, blah...
Me - Pussy, Vagina, Penis, Cock, Dick.......
Train wreck but I couldn't look away.
Jessa - My woman, my center, flesh, sex, appendage, trunk of flesh, blah, blah, blah...
Me - Pussy, Vagina, Penis, Cock, Dick.......
January 17, 2025
I think I just read hent@i HELPPP🧳💀🪦
Ok so 2 stars for the laughs (it was so silly and embarrassing man i kid you not) and romance ig?!
🔬🤏🏻
Also ik for a fact her father's seeking a therapy right now🤡 (not only regarding the permission but the daddy part too) All my sympathies to uncle ji🙏🏻
“Don’t you think you’ve…trained enough?” ifykyk
Me to the FMC
"If someone cut my chest open and tried to remove the obsession, they could never get it all. It has spread to every corner of my body. It rules me. She does."
__________
Coach said not to read it so i have to read it right 🥷
Ok so 2 stars for the laughs (it was so silly and embarrassing man i kid you not) and romance ig?!
🔬🤏🏻
Also ik for a fact her father's seeking a therapy right now🤡 (not only regarding the permission but the daddy part too) All my sympathies to uncle ji🙏🏻
“Don’t you think you’ve…trained enough?” ifykyk
Me to the FMC
"If someone cut my chest open and tried to remove the obsession, they could never get it all. It has spread to every corner of my body. It rules me. She does."
__________
Coach said not to read it so i have to read it right 🥷
January 12, 2025
I need to know if Jessa wrote this book with a straight face 💀
ok.. so.. if you're in the mood for smut, age gap, student x coach, stalker, ZERO PLOT, and are okay with the word "daddy" being used SO. MANY. TIMES., then I guess read this novella.
I honestly don't know why I read this.. blame the hormones I guess? Some of the spice was good, BUT daddy and little girl being uttered were too much for me. SHE PUT HER HAIR IN PIGTAILS Y'ALL😭😭😭😭 PIGTAILSSSSSSSSS 😭😭😭😭
The mmc was basically a caveman, but.. an occasionally sweet one? I mean when he's not invading her nether regions, he was actually kind of sweet? man I don't know🤣🤣
I mean he said things like this:
I'm privileged to be in love with her.
She's worth everything this world has to offer and more.
but ALSO, he and she said things like this 😭 Avert your innocent eyes if you want plz😭
Fix me, daddy.
Can we kiss and make up, Daddy? please. 🤢
Daddy's little girl is going to give me her ass tonight.😭😭😭😭😭
So did I regret this?
yes.
2 stars for what you may ask? idek myself tbh
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Let's see if I regret this 👀
July 22, 2022
but i did like the towel scene
January 15, 2025
listen... the mmc no doubt deserves to be locked up and fmc needs serious therapy, but this is a taboo romance and i knew that going in, so i'm not gonna punish it for being exactly as advertised
however,
the dad... and no, not daddy, the actual biological father, i believe SHOULD not have been allowed to procreate.
when your 18 year old's daughter 36 year old coach comes to you and say, "sir your daughter is horny and it's affecting her performance, she needs to be fucked and i, only i, need to be the one fucking her" WHILE cupping her pussy,
your immediate response should NOT have been um weird but okay
no, you RUN to the PHONE and call the fucking police
and if you hear your daughter getting railed in the locker room by her coach who is twice her age, your reaction should not have been um, haven't you done this exercise enough times already...
no sir, you BUST OPEN that fucking door and SAVE your daughter.
anyways, this was interesting and thanks for the laughs i guess 😭
──────✧ pre-read
well... i am here because youssra told me this is peak literature and i have to check it out 🤨 HAHAHA
August 10, 2021
I’m going to be your husband.” I buck into her. “Your coach.” Buck. “Stalker.” A hot grind that makes her gasp. “Your ruler and your Daddy.”
Someone lock this man. This bitch do be carving her name up the wall like...mmmmm sir was that the same wall you hit your head on?
Where are my ethics? My principles?
Deep inside the swimming pool sir.
So deep inside that one just say you don't have them.😌
Every little curl of peach fuzz. Every drip that comes out of this pussy belongs to your Daddy.
Such a decent man for accepting the peach fuzz tho. I stan 🥰
Who is he to show concern for her when she’s mine to care for?
Ummmmm
An eighteen year old's father I guess. *Shrugs*
Also the fact that this guy took her father's permission to fuck her?
*bows down*
Such a man of Honor.🥇
Dropped his 👑
But honestly and seriously.... there's a fine line between daddy kink and THIS. This being a good old pedophile trait.
And ladies and gentlemen the line was crossed and mistakes were made.
Also when you read something...you have a voice inside your head right?
Now imagine reading
I giggle, barely recognizing my own voice when I say, “That tickles, Daddy.”
I rest my case here my lord.
Honestly I love me some hot young older thing but not something that involves an 18 year old trying to act 10 and a 36 year old who had his eyes on her all her life (not to forget that fucking stalking and putting a microphone under her bed)
My fantasies have escalated lately to include pigtails and nightgowns and that coveted pop of her cherry. Giggling and secrets and teasing.
The next thing this man will fantasize of is changing her nappies just you wait.
Someone lock this man. This bitch do be carving her name up the wall like...mmmmm sir was that the same wall you hit your head on?
Where are my ethics? My principles?
Deep inside the swimming pool sir.
So deep inside that one just say you don't have them.😌
Every little curl of peach fuzz. Every drip that comes out of this pussy belongs to your Daddy.
Such a decent man for accepting the peach fuzz tho. I stan 🥰
Who is he to show concern for her when she’s mine to care for?
Ummmmm
An eighteen year old's father I guess. *Shrugs*
Also the fact that this guy took her father's permission to fuck her?
*bows down*
Such a man of Honor.🥇
Dropped his 👑
But honestly and seriously.... there's a fine line between daddy kink and THIS. This being a good old pedophile trait.
And ladies and gentlemen the line was crossed and mistakes were made.
Also when you read something...you have a voice inside your head right?
Now imagine reading
I giggle, barely recognizing my own voice when I say, “That tickles, Daddy.”
I rest my case here my lord.
Honestly I love me some hot young older thing but not something that involves an 18 year old trying to act 10 and a 36 year old who had his eyes on her all her life (not to forget that fucking stalking and putting a microphone under her bed)
My fantasies have escalated lately to include pigtails and nightgowns and that coveted pop of her cherry. Giggling and secrets and teasing.
The next thing this man will fantasize of is changing her nappies just you wait.
October 31, 2021
Oo-chie wally wally, oo-chie bang bang
Oo-chie wally wally
He really really really work my body
He really really really turned me out
He really really really got to gut me
He really really made me scream and shout - QB finest
So I read this for the first time in august and it literally made me screech. I am obsessed with stalker romance. Like it gives me a breath of fresh air. It breathes life into me. I think everything is bad in the world and Jessa pulls out a stalker to make all my dreams come true.
This year we had the lovely Olympics and we had a lot of lovely divers but none of them were as enchanting as Margo. She was primed for speed and agility and her coach was watching.
From the ripe age of 16 Everett started to obsess over Margo. Now let me clear the air by saying there was no under age shenanigans even though the desire was there for both parties just sitting under the surface.
There love was deeply imbedded like an ingrown hair on the back of your shoulder blade. So out of reach and yet so close. Things don’t start to get out of hand until Margo starts to get kind of hot and ready like Little Caesar’s 🍕!!!
Then all matter of hell breaks loose. If you didn’t get a chance to read or purchase this one when it first came out I’m sorry to say it was banned from Amazon. This is why you should all listen to me and One-click everything Jessa.
This book had kink, ddlg play and slew of other dark things I can’t say here but if you want to know slide in my dms!!! ( Yes 🙌🏽 I am serious 🧐 too !! )
I love love love this book and I am now on a messy stalker kick that won’t quit!!
Happy reading everyone 😘🥰😘😍
Oo-chie wally wally
He really really really work my body
He really really really turned me out
He really really really got to gut me
He really really made me scream and shout - QB finest
So I read this for the first time in august and it literally made me screech. I am obsessed with stalker romance. Like it gives me a breath of fresh air. It breathes life into me. I think everything is bad in the world and Jessa pulls out a stalker to make all my dreams come true.
This year we had the lovely Olympics and we had a lot of lovely divers but none of them were as enchanting as Margo. She was primed for speed and agility and her coach was watching.
From the ripe age of 16 Everett started to obsess over Margo. Now let me clear the air by saying there was no under age shenanigans even though the desire was there for both parties just sitting under the surface.
There love was deeply imbedded like an ingrown hair on the back of your shoulder blade. So out of reach and yet so close. Things don’t start to get out of hand until Margo starts to get kind of hot and ready like Little Caesar’s 🍕!!!
Then all matter of hell breaks loose. If you didn’t get a chance to read or purchase this one when it first came out I’m sorry to say it was banned from Amazon. This is why you should all listen to me and One-click everything Jessa.
This book had kink, ddlg play and slew of other dark things I can’t say here but if you want to know slide in my dms!!! ( Yes 🙌🏽 I am serious 🧐 too !! )
I love love love this book and I am now on a messy stalker kick that won’t quit!!
Happy reading everyone 😘🥰😘😍
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January 12, 2025
September 5, 2021
I think the daddy kink in this one was a little too much for me.
It went from that's kinda hot to, um..... that is kinda yuck..... Still love her writing, but she is going a little to hard into the daddy role play and it kinda gives me the heebee-jeebees.
Will I read more, absolutely. Why the fuck not..
It went from that's kinda hot to, um..... that is kinda yuck..... Still love her writing, but she is going a little to hard into the daddy role play and it kinda gives me the heebee-jeebees.
Will I read more, absolutely. Why the fuck not..
August 13, 2021
"My Coach, My Stalker" is the story of Margot and Everett.
OH MY.. HOT.
A smut-tastic tale of forbidden lust between an older diving coach and his young protégé. It has all of my favorite kinks- stalking insanity, dirty talk, some dd/lg play along with permissions, lovemaking in precarious places, some drama and crazy jealousy. The hero was borderline psychotic, but I didn't mind it.
It 100% worked for me and this is why I love Kane!
Safe
5/5
OH MY.. HOT.
A smut-tastic tale of forbidden lust between an older diving coach and his young protégé. It has all of my favorite kinks- stalking insanity, dirty talk, some dd/lg play along with permissions, lovemaking in precarious places, some drama and crazy jealousy. The hero was borderline psychotic, but I didn't mind it.
It 100% worked for me and this is why I love Kane!
Safe
5/5
August 8, 2021
This one was okay I wish it was alil longer...maybe more about him stalking.
Margot has been training in swimming for ages and now shes going for the gold but her body has been feeling wired lately that she isn't focused her coach Everett sees that and tells her since she's a woman now her body wants things like a orgasm... he pushes away when she suggest he give her one and he wants to but he's her coach and her stalker lol.
He finally gives in but I laughed he straight up told her dad he's giving her sex.. the dad reaction was like okay... get me that gold metal... 🤣🤣🤣 but even if they take it that step there is some miscommunication after the deed.
No ow/om drama, no cheating, Sexy time, virgin gal and no manwhore
Recommend-maybe
Cover-⭐⭐⭐
Heat level-🌶🌶🌶
Slowinsta
Pinning
Age gap
36H/18h
Push away from H
Masturbation
Daddy kink
No condom
Hea
Epilogue
Margot has been training in swimming for ages and now shes going for the gold but her body has been feeling wired lately that she isn't focused her coach Everett sees that and tells her since she's a woman now her body wants things like a orgasm... he pushes away when she suggest he give her one and he wants to but he's her coach and her stalker lol.
He finally gives in but I laughed he straight up told her dad he's giving her sex.. the dad reaction was like okay... get me that gold metal... 🤣🤣🤣 but even if they take it that step there is some miscommunication after the deed.
No ow/om drama, no cheating, Sexy time, virgin gal and no manwhore
Recommend-maybe
Cover-⭐⭐⭐
Heat level-🌶🌶🌶
Slowinsta
Pinning
Age gap
36H/18h
Push away from H
Masturbation
Daddy kink
No condom
Hea
Epilogue
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August 12, 2021
This was creepy.
I love an innocent heroine. I really loved An Angel for the Devil and the heroine there was really naive.
But this was too uncomfortable especially for the setting of the story and considering the abuse that goes on in women's sports. It's a little too close to reality and too pedo.
JK missed the mark with this one.
I love an innocent heroine. I really loved An Angel for the Devil and the heroine there was really naive.
But this was too uncomfortable especially for the setting of the story and considering the abuse that goes on in women's sports. It's a little too close to reality and too pedo.
JK missed the mark with this one.
January 7, 2022
reading this book is a very traumatizing experience, but my masochist self still gonna read other books by this author 🤡
October 15, 2021
Yeesh, so many 1 stars!
But it kinda worked on me (aside from the older hero stalking the 16 yo heroine).
And he's so freaking obsessed with her, there's a skull-shaped holes on their basement's walls. Talk about OTT.
But it kinda worked on me (aside from the older hero stalking the 16 yo heroine).
And he's so freaking obsessed with her, there's a skull-shaped holes on their basement's walls. Talk about OTT.
August 21, 2021
I'm loving the teacher-student/gymnast-athlete trope right now. This was actually bordering on really fucking creepy, but I liked it.... Idk what that says about me but yea.
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August 16, 2021Jessa Kane's imagination never fails to scare me 😶😶😶. What did I just read, huh?!
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September 1, 2021I don’t know why I do this to myself, I don’t like her writing but I keep reading them. Their complete train wrecks and I’m addicted 😩
February 25, 2022
MEH or the BAD: ***SPOILERS***
First 10-15% was iffy with 36yo coach H's 2-yr obsession with 18yo virgin diver h seeming pedophile-y & reminded me of the real-life old Olympic-gymnastics doctor who recently went to prison for sexually manipulating some Olympic gymnast girls. Getting h's POV re: her being in love with H for 2 years & wanting him to devirginize her helped make their romance less disturbing. However, H's 2-yr stalkery obsession with h from age 16 to 18 & how he made his house a sex-temple of her (i.e., multiple photos of her including her privates on his wall, putting a GPS tracker on her phone & hidden microphones & videocam in her bedroom, stealing her undies to masturbate with, multiple holes on the walls of his house from H humping the walls while fantasizing about h & bashing his head at them to try to stop his mental obsession of her) was quite disturbing. If she was older like the h in My Husband, My Stalker, then this level of stalking would just be smutastic. Good thing though that H didn't act on his secret obsession with h before she was 18 and kept things professional with her until the current time. It really helped for H to repeatedly warn h from him and the illegality of crossing their professional relationship. But, once they crossed that line, H's letting her father know that they were smexxing (supposedly to relieve h's tension that was getting in the way of her diving) was cringey. Yet still hot somehow.
The GOOD:
Romantic development between them with h pushing it as H keeps backing off with warnings & h's feeling turned-on by H's stalking her made this book lose its initial pedophile-y feel & made for a hotter read. Although I like an OTT obssessive stalker H, this H's way of stalking h for 2 years was treading the psychotic line. The saving grace that kept their romance & H from seeming truly pscyhotic was h's mutual feelings for H and feeling so flattered by his stalking. She saw how much he thought of her & wanted her for years and loved his temple of her, when she found it. Hot bareback S scenes. Some Daddy-LG kink but not too much focus on it. Good sexual tension & better than Kane's My Husband, My Stalkerbook. Good-enough emotionality with bit of angst at the end, when h left H to fly back home after thinking that he wanted her for the gold-medal win than just for herself until she saw the inside of his house and then H comes back in a rage from her leaving him when he was about to propose.
Sexual History:
18yo virgin h had been in love with H since she was 16. No info about her dating or kissing anybody before meeting H. She'd been wanting H to be her first lover. No info about H's past dating/sexual history. He'd been solely focused on h since meeting her 2 years ago. He humped his walls & her undies and mastrubated the past 2 years. So, he was celibate for 2 years.
First 10-15% was iffy with 36yo coach H's 2-yr obsession with 18yo virgin diver h seeming pedophile-y & reminded me of the real-life old Olympic-gymnastics doctor who recently went to prison for sexually manipulating some Olympic gymnast girls. Getting h's POV re: her being in love with H for 2 years & wanting him to devirginize her helped make their romance less disturbing. However, H's 2-yr stalkery obsession with h from age 16 to 18 & how he made his house a sex-temple of her (i.e., multiple photos of her including her privates on his wall, putting a GPS tracker on her phone & hidden microphones & videocam in her bedroom, stealing her undies to masturbate with, multiple holes on the walls of his house from H humping the walls while fantasizing about h & bashing his head at them to try to stop his mental obsession of her) was quite disturbing. If she was older like the h in My Husband, My Stalker, then this level of stalking would just be smutastic. Good thing though that H didn't act on his secret obsession with h before she was 18 and kept things professional with her until the current time. It really helped for H to repeatedly warn h from him and the illegality of crossing their professional relationship. But, once they crossed that line, H's letting her father know that they were smexxing (supposedly to relieve h's tension that was getting in the way of her diving) was cringey. Yet still hot somehow.
The GOOD:
Romantic development between them with h pushing it as H keeps backing off with warnings & h's feeling turned-on by H's stalking her made this book lose its initial pedophile-y feel & made for a hotter read. Although I like an OTT obssessive stalker H, this H's way of stalking h for 2 years was treading the psychotic line. The saving grace that kept their romance & H from seeming truly pscyhotic was h's mutual feelings for H and feeling so flattered by his stalking. She saw how much he thought of her & wanted her for years and loved his temple of her, when she found it. Hot bareback S scenes. Some Daddy-LG kink but not too much focus on it. Good sexual tension & better than Kane's My Husband, My Stalkerbook. Good-enough emotionality with bit of angst at the end, when h left H to fly back home after thinking that he wanted her for the gold-medal win than just for herself until she saw the inside of his house and then H comes back in a rage from her leaving him when he was about to propose.
Sexual History:
18yo virgin h had been in love with H since she was 16. No info about her dating or kissing anybody before meeting H. She'd been wanting H to be her first lover. No info about H's past dating/sexual history. He'd been solely focused on h since meeting her 2 years ago. He humped his walls & her undies and mastrubated the past 2 years. So, he was celibate for 2 years.
August 10, 2021
“Don’t you think you’ve…trained enough?” asks her father
God wtf was this
God wtf was this
August 22, 2021
I think it was a little too much.
August 9, 2021
This just felt too true to life. Considering the recent real life scandals about coaches grooming and sexually abusing young athletes, this came off creepy af.
There is an 18 year age gap between coach and athlete. Margot started when she was 16, is now 18 and Everett's so "obsessed" that he tracks her phone, jerks off to her sleeping (because he has keys to her room and house) and has her bedroom under surveillance so he can watch and listen in. I get these books are supposed to be fantasy, but this felt sleezy and gross to me. The worst was the creep coach asking her father for permission to "train" her ie. have sex with her in order to prepare her for competition. Apparently her hormones were getting in the way of her concentration. 🙄 Her dad consenting to "the plan" was supposed to be about consent so creeper coach doesn't feel like an actual creepy coach. However, this was bizarre and disturbing and lends to the idea that the adults around young athletes turn a blind eye to harmful behaviours because its all about winning - at any cost.
To be clear, there are ways to write a smutty age gap novel about a coach and athlete that doesn't literally hit every creepy note, but I guess the point here was to do just that. Some readers are gonna love this shit, but it's not for me.
Everett needs to be inside a fucking jail cell.
There is an 18 year age gap between coach and athlete. Margot started when she was 16, is now 18 and Everett's so "obsessed" that he tracks her phone, jerks off to her sleeping (because he has keys to her room and house) and has her bedroom under surveillance so he can watch and listen in. I get these books are supposed to be fantasy, but this felt sleezy and gross to me. The worst was the creep coach asking her father for permission to "train" her ie. have sex with her in order to prepare her for competition. Apparently her hormones were getting in the way of her concentration. 🙄 Her dad consenting to "the plan" was supposed to be about consent so creeper coach doesn't feel like an actual creepy coach. However, this was bizarre and disturbing and lends to the idea that the adults around young athletes turn a blind eye to harmful behaviours because its all about winning - at any cost.
To be clear, there are ways to write a smutty age gap novel about a coach and athlete that doesn't literally hit every creepy note, but I guess the point here was to do just that. Some readers are gonna love this shit, but it's not for me.
Everett needs to be inside a fucking jail cell.
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August 12, 2021
Who loves that the hero was an obsessed psycho, this is for you and for me)))
Р.S . Everyone says that at the age of 16 she is still a child and a pedophile hero. The hero loved only the heroine, he did not stare at others. I do not think that this is pedophilia, he just fell in love with her when she was 16, he waited for her 18 years old and she herself set him up to have sex with her.
I will also say that 16 years old is not a child, remember yourself in this age, what kind of child you were, especially who lost their virginity these years.
With age, we forget how wild we were in those years. I recently re-read some books by Bertrice Small, where almost all the heroines from 11 to 15 years old are already dragged along with a bunch of sheikhs. I was in shock now, how could I read this and consider it normal when I was 15-17 years old. but then it was normal for me, because I myself was not far from that age. And I also liked men over 30 when I was 16-17 years old. Now I consider men of this age to be old and look at younger guys)))
And to compare what is happening in the world with a frivolous fantasy romance, this is insanity, do not go deep ladies, we are not here for serious topics.
Р.S . Everyone says that at the age of 16 she is still a child and a pedophile hero. The hero loved only the heroine, he did not stare at others. I do not think that this is pedophilia, he just fell in love with her when she was 16, he waited for her 18 years old and she herself set him up to have sex with her.
I will also say that 16 years old is not a child, remember yourself in this age, what kind of child you were, especially who lost their virginity these years.
With age, we forget how wild we were in those years. I recently re-read some books by Bertrice Small, where almost all the heroines from 11 to 15 years old are already dragged along with a bunch of sheikhs. I was in shock now, how could I read this and consider it normal when I was 15-17 years old. but then it was normal for me, because I myself was not far from that age. And I also liked men over 30 when I was 16-17 years old. Now I consider men of this age to be old and look at younger guys)))
And to compare what is happening in the world with a frivolous fantasy romance, this is insanity, do not go deep ladies, we are not here for serious topics.
August 8, 2021
I’ve never actually cried from a book especially a smutty novella being so bad before
Like … the women needs to chill with the daddy kink
This was more like .. daddy moleststation kink .. if that’s your thing
Like … the women needs to chill with the daddy kink
This was more like .. daddy moleststation kink .. if that’s your thing
January 16, 2022
And now I know why this beauty got banned from Amazon.
Coach Everett is nothing short of a psychotic stalker with grooming tendencies. I mean the man fell in love with his sixteen year old pupil.
He’s her swim coach.
Her mentor.
Her stalker.
And her daddy.
For two years he tracked her every move. He picked her up for practice. He dropped her off at night. And he was the last person she spoke to before bed. He mic’d her bedroom and had keys to her house. He watched her in her sleep and “out of necessity, [he] learned to ejaculate without shouting. [He] developed a routine of coming into a pair of panties from her drawer…”
Margot Summers is innocent to the point of disbelief. At eighteen years old she doesn’t know how to find relief for her needs. And when things heat up with her coach, she doesn’t know that a penis must enter (fill) a vagina for sex to happen?! She didn’t sound facetious or placating when this scene played out:
“I won’t be lonely anymore if you let me inside this pretty cunt. You’re going to be so tight around my cock, I won’t be able to think at all, will I?”
“I don’t want you to be lonely,” I say, biting my bottom lip and looking down between our bodies with naïve confusion. “How c-can you be inside of it?”
And even with her naïveté I wasn’t turned off from enjoying this story. I was as obsessed with Everett as he was with the girl. His devotion to her was on par with David McCall from Fear, and the way he continually couldn’t control his need to bury himself deep in her cunt. Isn’t that the type of devotion every woman wants from her man?
𝓋𝓍𝒽𝑒𝓍𝓃 𝓇𝑒𝒶𝒹𝓈
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Coach Everett is nothing short of a psychotic stalker with grooming tendencies. I mean the man fell in love with his sixteen year old pupil.
He’s her swim coach.
Her mentor.
Her stalker.
And her daddy.
For two years he tracked her every move. He picked her up for practice. He dropped her off at night. And he was the last person she spoke to before bed. He mic’d her bedroom and had keys to her house. He watched her in her sleep and “out of necessity, [he] learned to ejaculate without shouting. [He] developed a routine of coming into a pair of panties from her drawer…”
Margot Summers is innocent to the point of disbelief. At eighteen years old she doesn’t know how to find relief for her needs. And when things heat up with her coach, she doesn’t know that a penis must enter (fill) a vagina for sex to happen?! She didn’t sound facetious or placating when this scene played out:
“I won’t be lonely anymore if you let me inside this pretty cunt. You’re going to be so tight around my cock, I won’t be able to think at all, will I?”
“I don’t want you to be lonely,” I say, biting my bottom lip and looking down between our bodies with naïve confusion. “How c-can you be inside of it?”
And even with her naïveté I wasn’t turned off from enjoying this story. I was as obsessed with Everett as he was with the girl. His devotion to her was on par with David McCall from Fear, and the way he continually couldn’t control his need to bury himself deep in her cunt. Isn’t that the type of devotion every woman wants from her man?
𝓋𝓍𝒽𝑒𝓍𝓃 𝓇𝑒𝒶𝒹𝓈
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August 9, 2021
I have been really liking Jessa Kane’s newest releases but this one just didn’t do it for me. I really couldn’t get down with the problematic elements of a Coach/Student dynamic. The relationship and the romance overall seemed very weird to me.
If a forbidden romance that has a Daddy/Baby Girl kink works for you then maybe this will be alright but personally these aren’t the type of tropes I love.
If a forbidden romance that has a Daddy/Baby Girl kink works for you then maybe this will be alright but personally these aren’t the type of tropes I love.
August 9, 2021
Everything about this book is just disgusting. I enjoyed Jessa Kane's books but this one is just a major NO for me. Like seriously, Everett is nothing but a predator. He's been obsessing over Margot when she was 16, a literal minor. Not only that, he keeps all her old swimming suits and even have photos of her private parts. Whereas for Margot, she is air headed and a doormat. She has zero personality.
Talking about the story, it focuses on the Olympic. What makes this story so ridiculous is that Margot can't perform "well" if she doesn't have an orgasm. Bear in mind, this girl is still a virgin. So Everette convinced her that the only way to help her is through full intercourse. I was like "WTF?! ". He's indirectly grooming her in this story. Please, he even asked the permission of her father to have sex with her. He keeps on giving stupid reasons saying that he wants to help her n the only way is by having sex. Like bruh, that's nothing but excuses just to get his dick wet.
Please don't read this. If u think it's hot, you need help.
Talking about the story, it focuses on the Olympic. What makes this story so ridiculous is that Margot can't perform "well" if she doesn't have an orgasm. Bear in mind, this girl is still a virgin. So Everette convinced her that the only way to help her is through full intercourse. I was like "WTF?! ". He's indirectly grooming her in this story. Please, he even asked the permission of her father to have sex with her. He keeps on giving stupid reasons saying that he wants to help her n the only way is by having sex. Like bruh, that's nothing but excuses just to get his dick wet.
Please don't read this. If u think it's hot, you need help.
August 20, 2021
This is a quick novella. That said, I do wish it was a little longer. I needed more time with the characters! Fortunately, both the hero and the heroine have known each other for years before the beginning of this book. We don’t have to worry about them meeting and magically falling in love in only sixty pages. That said, it was still a little rushed, and I would have liked for the story to have been drawn out a little more.
July 22, 2022
dnf @ 55%, I got bored. The 3 stars is for the towel scene. Everyone wasn't lying, that was hot.
This was my first Jessa Kane book. I had to go for the most controversial one. It was OTT ridiculous, but I have to admire any author who has the balls to publish an Olympic coach/student age gap with not just daddy kink but age-play in light of the recent scandals 🤡 This book is too silly for me to get upset about it, or offended, I'm just left amused by the author's guts.
This was my first Jessa Kane book. I had to go for the most controversial one. It was OTT ridiculous, but I have to admire any author who has the balls to publish an Olympic coach/student age gap with not just daddy kink but age-play in light of the recent scandals 🤡 This book is too silly for me to get upset about it, or offended, I'm just left amused by the author's guts.
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