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417 pages, Kindle Edition
First published November 9, 2021
• The love triangle OH my gosh. I don't know if it's just what I've been reading, but I was under the impression that the genre was getting a little better about this lately. Not as many blatant teen love triangles as we were plagued with in the 2008-2015ish heyday.
This, however, is a true throwback classic.
Aluma is torn between her childhood friend and the dashing foreign prince and spends far too much time dwelling on her feelings for both of them. To the extent where they're undercover on a mission that may seal the fate of the whole world not to mention Aluma's father, and half of the wordcount is about how jealous they make each other. Not gonna lie, this was a real struggle.
• The world was the most interesting part, as I said before, so it was kind of disappointing to be left a little confused about what exactly was going on. In some ways it seems like the conflict between the two (three?) kingdoms is some ancient, long-ago thing. The technology seems like it's been lost for decades if not centuries, and the war seems like it's been going on for generations. But at the same time, it seems like Gattacan's father lays direct blame for the state of things at the current king's feet?
I'm not sure exactly what happened and when and why, but I would like to be.
• The ending. Essentially, The hasty, immature nature of their mission plans and the way they just seem to be flinging desperate, half-baked ideas at the wall and hoping something sticks doesn't exactly give this denouement the gravitas that it ideally should have.
• This is really minor but like, the pegasuses can hover. There are MULTIPLE instances of entire cavalry troops just sort of... parking in thin air to hover over a target/take stock of a situation. Now. Assuming these horses have bird wings like on the cover, there are only a FEW bird species that can hover at all even with wind assist.
Do some scholarly YouTubing of buzzards or kites hovering, and imagine flocks of massive horses with twelve-foot wings doing the frantic, neurotic flapping that those birds have to do in order to hover. Absolutely terrifying. You would kill each other just trying to hover in an orderly formation. The polar opposite of stealthy.
Even worse, imagine if they have hummingbird wings and can do the HUMMINGBIRD HOVER. Scores of warriors sitting on floating horses while their huge wings do the figure 8 nyoom so fast you can't even see them. Imagine how deafeningly LOUD that would be. I know I would certainly surrender to such a horrifyingly uncanny force.
