Not bad, not great. There were a handful of poems in here that I thought were excellent (see excerpts below), but most were just okay. Interestingly, many of the poems were about how places and things (e.g., a picnic spot, planted pine trees, a gentleman’s suit, old furniture) remain after people move on or pass away:
“Where is, alas, the gentleman
Who wore this suit?
And where are his ladies? Tell none can:
Gossip is mute.
Some of them may forget him quite
Who smudged his sleeve,
Some think of a wild whirling night
With him, and grieve.” (p. 117)
Several poems were darkly humorous (e.g., a woman sews up her drunk husband in bed sheets to avoid having sex with him, another woman dances after her husband’s death). The poems below are my favorites from the collection, listed in order of preference, along with excerpts or, for the short poems, the full text:
Christmas: 1924
“‘Peace upon earth!’ was said. We sing it,
And pay a million priests to bring it.
After two thousand years of mass
We’ve got as far as poison-gas.” (p. 239)
The Photograph
(Excerpt)
“She was a woman long hid amid packs of years,
She might have been living or dead; she was lost to my sight,
And the deed that had nigh drawn tears
Was done in a casual clearance of life’s arrears;
But I felt as if I had put her to death that night!” (p. 108)
The Self-Unseeing
(Excerpt)
“She sat here in her chair,
Smiling into the fire;
He who played stood there,
Bowing it higher and higher.
Childlike, I danced in a dream;
Blessings emblazoned that day;
Everything glowed with a gleam;
Yet we were looking away!” (p. 38)
Epitaph on a Pessimist
“I’m Smith of Stoke, aged sixty-odd,
I’ve lived without a dame
From youth-time on; and would to God
My dad had done the same.” (p. 245)
At The Altar-Rail
(Excerpt)
“It’s sweet of you, dear, to prepare me a nest,
But a swift, short gay life suits me best.
What I really am you have never gleaned;
I had eaten the apple ere you were weaned.” (p. 97).