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The Gold Brothers #1
Hummingbird Heartbreak
DUSTY GOLD
College is weird. One second you’re studying for a huge exam in integrated physics and the next you’re secretly drooling over the sexy rugby player living in the dorm next door.
The second after *that*, you’re sharing a bed with that same Insta-famous jock, staring up at the ceiling and wondering what in gay heaven caused such a miraculous and terrifying thing.
Even though it all felt like a dream, logically, I could see that it wasn’t. That everything about Brandon Reed was real. But logic didn’t stop me from feeling an icy-cold wave of fear every time I thought about my heart and my body in his (very large) hands.
Maybe inviting him to stay at my family’s house for the summer wasn’t the greatest idea I’ve ever had?
Or maybe it was the best?
BRANDON REED
I freakin’ loved college. Everything about it, minus the classes obviously. I loved being able to play rugby the most; losing myself to the game, watching the crowds in the stadium grow bigger with every win.
Rugby gave me an escape. An escape I *really* needed.
Then Dusty Gold springs into my life. Literally.
After we end up as surprise roomies, a spring busts on his bed and we go from roommates to snuggle buddies.
Snuggling somehow turns into staying with him over the summer at his family’s animal sanctuary. Soon, I find myself falling hard for the handsome and shy nerd. I’ve got a messy past, though, and Dusty’s got a bright future. Will my ghosts ruin us before we could ever really begin or will we both get a once-in-a-lifetime shot at a happy ending?
College is weird. One second you’re studying for a huge exam in integrated physics and the next you’re secretly drooling over the sexy rugby player living in the dorm next door.
The second after *that*, you’re sharing a bed with that same Insta-famous jock, staring up at the ceiling and wondering what in gay heaven caused such a miraculous and terrifying thing.
Even though it all felt like a dream, logically, I could see that it wasn’t. That everything about Brandon Reed was real. But logic didn’t stop me from feeling an icy-cold wave of fear every time I thought about my heart and my body in his (very large) hands.
Maybe inviting him to stay at my family’s house for the summer wasn’t the greatest idea I’ve ever had?
Or maybe it was the best?
BRANDON REED
I freakin’ loved college. Everything about it, minus the classes obviously. I loved being able to play rugby the most; losing myself to the game, watching the crowds in the stadium grow bigger with every win.
Rugby gave me an escape. An escape I *really* needed.
Then Dusty Gold springs into my life. Literally.
After we end up as surprise roomies, a spring busts on his bed and we go from roommates to snuggle buddies.
Snuggling somehow turns into staying with him over the summer at his family’s animal sanctuary. Soon, I find myself falling hard for the handsome and shy nerd. I’ve got a messy past, though, and Dusty’s got a bright future. Will my ghosts ruin us before we could ever really begin or will we both get a once-in-a-lifetime shot at a happy ending?
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First published July 4, 2020
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October 31, 2024
Nope, that was not it.
Here’s what happens, so you don’t have to read it, you’re welcome:
Jock and Nerd go to college together.
Their dorm burns down and jock saves nerds cat. They ofc get assigned temporary roommates in new housing. They start hooking up and falling in love immediately. Then there’s summer break and nerd takes jock to his family‘s animal sanctuary (after meeting with an obscure fortune teller?!?!) but they keep their relationship secret for god knows what reason. Absolutely unnecessary drama ensues. Then there’s some blackmail (WHICH NEVER GET’S RESOLVED WTF), a drug addiction past, a deranged jealous ex, a cheetah clown (?!?!), adoption drama (which we never again get updated on lol), an absolutely weak resolution of jock’s family ‚trauma‘, of course a third act breakup for - again - god knows whatever reason and a kitschy epilogue where they fuck in a tent. All that while trying to be funny, meaningful and deep - and failing 🙄
Honestly, 2⭐️ only for Tammy the otter and the narrator of the audiobook who did a good job.
Here’s what happens, so you don’t have to read it, you’re welcome:
Jock and Nerd go to college together.
Their dorm burns down and jock saves nerds cat. They ofc get assigned temporary roommates in new housing. They start hooking up and falling in love immediately. Then there’s summer break and nerd takes jock to his family‘s animal sanctuary (after meeting with an obscure fortune teller?!?!) but they keep their relationship secret for god knows what reason. Absolutely unnecessary drama ensues. Then there’s some blackmail (WHICH NEVER GET’S RESOLVED WTF), a drug addiction past, a deranged jealous ex, a cheetah clown (?!?!), adoption drama (which we never again get updated on lol), an absolutely weak resolution of jock’s family ‚trauma‘, of course a third act breakup for - again - god knows whatever reason and a kitschy epilogue where they fuck in a tent. All that while trying to be funny, meaningful and deep - and failing 🙄
Honestly, 2⭐️ only for Tammy the otter and the narrator of the audiobook who did a good job.
May 25, 2021
It wasn’t that bad but it wasn’t that good either. I would probably give this book a higher rating if it chose the drama-free route. Also, It just wasn’t the banger I hoped it would be.
January 7, 2022
I'm such a huge fan of Max Walker's writing and this was a really good installment to his catalogue.
Hummingbird Heartbreak is kind of magical. The way Dusty and Brandon cared for each other. The way their love story built out. From slow and insecure to powerful and roaring. I was there for it. It was such a beautiful thing to read. Dusty and Brandon needed each other to fully blossom.
The writing was flawless and of course there was an element of mystery that will follow through the series. It wouldn't be a Max Walker book otherwise.
This is a new adult book, set in college so of course there was some drama. I could have lived without that, it was quite over the top. It took some time warming up to Dusty. He was stubborn. Really stubborn and set in his ways. But it was all the more beautiful when he let loose.
The epilogue was everything. I can't wait for the next book.
Hummingbird Heartbreak is kind of magical. The way Dusty and Brandon cared for each other. The way their love story built out. From slow and insecure to powerful and roaring. I was there for it. It was such a beautiful thing to read. Dusty and Brandon needed each other to fully blossom.
The writing was flawless and of course there was an element of mystery that will follow through the series. It wouldn't be a Max Walker book otherwise.
This is a new adult book, set in college so of course there was some drama. I could have lived without that, it was quite over the top. It took some time warming up to Dusty. He was stubborn. Really stubborn and set in his ways. But it was all the more beautiful when he let loose.
The epilogue was everything. I can't wait for the next book.
July 7, 2020
Dusty is a very shy geek, intelligent, and a hard studier. He has a crush for the college guy living next door in the dorm. The guy is an impressively big rugby player and very handsome. Exactly someone Dusty tries to avoid, he’s so out of his league. Dusty doesn’t know Brandon, the big guy next door finds Dusty attractive.
I’m not gonna spoil the whole story but they both end up, during the whole summer break at Dusty’s family farm. A warm-hearted dedicated family.
Brandon wants to conquer Dusty heart badly, he’s everything he wants. Brandon has a past he’s not proud of, afraid to tell, afraid Dusty will end their relationship.
Overall a sweet and kind story, there are some sharp edges but they were not dominant in this story. It was more about their blooming love and friendship. In the background, we understand there is more going on about Brandon.
A smoothly written narrative, steady-paced, captivating, sexy, and at times quite steamy.
The scenery was creatively pictured and appealing. The characters were engaging and lovable.
It was an enjoyable story. I’m looking forward to Benji’s story.
I’m not gonna spoil the whole story but they both end up, during the whole summer break at Dusty’s family farm. A warm-hearted dedicated family.
Brandon wants to conquer Dusty heart badly, he’s everything he wants. Brandon has a past he’s not proud of, afraid to tell, afraid Dusty will end their relationship.
Overall a sweet and kind story, there are some sharp edges but they were not dominant in this story. It was more about their blooming love and friendship. In the background, we understand there is more going on about Brandon.
A smoothly written narrative, steady-paced, captivating, sexy, and at times quite steamy.
The scenery was creatively pictured and appealing. The characters were engaging and lovable.
It was an enjoyable story. I’m looking forward to Benji’s story.
October 18, 2024
Don't thumb ya nose at a gas station fortune-teller
July 9, 2020
Pro: This book features an opposites attract trope. Brandon is a rugby player, but an out and proud one. Dusty is the quintessential shy nerd who happens to be a virgin. It was a cute pairing.
Con: Played a little bit too much into that trope at times. Dusty's personality kind of annoyed me. Especially when he wouldn't hear Brandon out near the end of the book due to the usual big misunderstanding involving a stalker ex. I also didn't like that Brandon had to come to him to resolve that issue; I wanted Dusty to go to Brandon because I think Brandon let him off far too quickly, and Dusty need to apologize for his part in that misunderstanding.
Pro: I liked that for the most part, Brandon's rugby buddies were supportive. You don't see a lot of that and it was refreshing for that to be included in the book.
Con: There was a lot of fixation on loose pants showing off balls. I get it, the dude has no shame, but the need to be reminded of that every few or so pages was bothersome to say the least. I also didn't like the hyper focus on penis size. They are both hung, wow. I am moved. I would be even more moved if there was additional characterization for both Dusty and Brandon. There was definite room there for more growth in their individual characters. It felt like there was importance placed on shallow traits rather than further developing the characters.
Con: Brandon's relationship with his parents and the whole seeking forgiveness part in the book was wrapped up way too quickly. You blink and you will miss it basically. Not to mention that the big reveal of Brandon's secret was, at least to me, not handled appropriately. Jay (throwaway background character) hooks up with Dusty's best friend. Only Jay, a complete stranger, then offers the group cocaine. What a great guy. Brandon was rightfully pissed, but then whole re-introduction of Jay later on confused me. Why would you permit someone whom you know to be carrying something on their person you have an issue with into your home? I don't care if he is pulling two cheetah cubs out of a hat, that was super weird. I am being intentionally vague on the nature of Brandon's secret, but I feel like you can read between the lines here.
Pro: Dusty's twin brother, Benji, will be getting his own book, which is great because the whole mystery with a threatening letter (including a dove feather dipped in supposed blood for the added affect of impending doom *dun dun*) will be elaborated on in his story.
Pro : Dusty and Brandon's relationship ends with a satisfactory HEA.
*ARC provided, and I have given my honest review*
Con: Played a little bit too much into that trope at times. Dusty's personality kind of annoyed me. Especially when he wouldn't hear Brandon out near the end of the book due to the usual big misunderstanding involving a stalker ex. I also didn't like that Brandon had to come to him to resolve that issue; I wanted Dusty to go to Brandon because I think Brandon let him off far too quickly, and Dusty need to apologize for his part in that misunderstanding.
Pro: I liked that for the most part, Brandon's rugby buddies were supportive. You don't see a lot of that and it was refreshing for that to be included in the book.
Con: There was a lot of fixation on loose pants showing off balls. I get it, the dude has no shame, but the need to be reminded of that every few or so pages was bothersome to say the least. I also didn't like the hyper focus on penis size. They are both hung, wow. I am moved. I would be even more moved if there was additional characterization for both Dusty and Brandon. There was definite room there for more growth in their individual characters. It felt like there was importance placed on shallow traits rather than further developing the characters.
Con: Brandon's relationship with his parents and the whole seeking forgiveness part in the book was wrapped up way too quickly. You blink and you will miss it basically. Not to mention that the big reveal of Brandon's secret was, at least to me, not handled appropriately. Jay (throwaway background character) hooks up with Dusty's best friend. Only Jay, a complete stranger, then offers the group cocaine. What a great guy. Brandon was rightfully pissed, but then whole re-introduction of Jay later on confused me. Why would you permit someone whom you know to be carrying something on their person you have an issue with into your home? I don't care if he is pulling two cheetah cubs out of a hat, that was super weird. I am being intentionally vague on the nature of Brandon's secret, but I feel like you can read between the lines here.
Pro: Dusty's twin brother, Benji, will be getting his own book, which is great because the whole mystery with a threatening letter (including a dove feather dipped in supposed blood for the added affect of impending doom *dun dun*) will be elaborated on in his story.
Pro : Dusty and Brandon's relationship ends with a satisfactory HEA.
*ARC provided, and I have given my honest review*
May 4, 2021
This wasn’t quite as good for me as the other books I’ve read by Max Walker. I love the nerdy academic and the good looking jock. I loved Brandon’s personality. I thought Dusty’s family was fantastic. And I loved the HEA.
However, Dusty really got on my nerves through most of the book. I’m always disappointed with a book when something happens and the main characters break up right before the end of the book and then get back together. I’ve read this same plot point so many times that I subtract a star from my review unless it’s done very uniquely. This was predictable and really hurt the book for me.
However, Dusty really got on my nerves through most of the book. I’m always disappointed with a book when something happens and the main characters break up right before the end of the book and then get back together. I’ve read this same plot point so many times that I subtract a star from my review unless it’s done very uniquely. This was predictable and really hurt the book for me.
March 14, 2022
Okay...What could an extroverted, out and proud rugby star have in common with an intensely introverted science nerd with an emotional support cat? they What if their dorm hadn't caught on fire? Would they ever have had a chance? When the past threatens to tear their tenuous connection apart, can they see past the heartbreak or will they be heartbroken? I liked Brandon a lot but I struggled with Dusty. He was needy and very insecure. It is only book one, and as those of you that have known me for more than a week know, and are not at all surprised, that I read book 2 first...so..... Not quite 4 stars because Dusty needed some redeeming qualities but it was another good story from a very talented author.
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November 12, 2020DNF @ 39%
This wasn’t bad, but it’s just ok, and I suddenly realized it’s not what I was looking for tonight anyway — and that’s not going to change. Dragging things out a bit and not smutty enough to hold my interest while I wait for the feels to kick in. And since there’s nothing else happening here...
This wasn’t bad, but it’s just ok, and I suddenly realized it’s not what I was looking for tonight anyway — and that’s not going to change. Dragging things out a bit and not smutty enough to hold my interest while I wait for the feels to kick in. And since there’s nothing else happening here...
October 30, 2020
Entertaining. Funny. Sweet. Romantic moments that hide nothing and show everything. And, before the end comes, beautifully emotional with a touch of drama. Although first, Hummingbird Heartbreak will not be the last book I’ve read from this author.
May 28, 2024
This is my second book by this author and I really enjoy their writing. I listened to the audiobook again and the narrator did a great job. This story starts off super cute and we get some suspense and angst later on in the story. I thought it was a great balance.
Dusty Gold (who is not a drag queen, no matter how much it sounds like the best drag queen name ever! 😆) is such a cutie. This is definitely a cute geek/jock pairing. I love to see him open up and be visibly more happy as their relationship grows.
Brandon was a great guy with a hard past and it catches up to him. Causes some drama but I felt so bad for him. I’m glad these two were able to work everything out and have a wonderful HEA! Recommend and look forward to reading more by this author.
Dusty Gold (who is not a drag queen, no matter how much it sounds like the best drag queen name ever! 😆) is such a cutie. This is definitely a cute geek/jock pairing. I love to see him open up and be visibly more happy as their relationship grows.
Brandon was a great guy with a hard past and it catches up to him. Causes some drama but I felt so bad for him. I’m glad these two were able to work everything out and have a wonderful HEA! Recommend and look forward to reading more by this author.
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July 22, 2021Tapping out at 30% - no rating.
This isn’t bad, but it’s not holding my interest enough or engaging me enough at this point to want to continue right now. I'll put a pin in this and maybe come back to it at a different date.
This isn’t bad, but it’s not holding my interest enough or engaging me enough at this point to want to continue right now. I'll put a pin in this and maybe come back to it at a different date.
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December 2, 2021A Joyfully Jay review.
Story: 3.5⭐️
Audio: 4.5⭐️
Dusty Gold knows an awkward, anxiety-riddled nerd like him has NO chance with his super hot and mammoth rugby star neighbor, Brandon Reed. Whenever Brandon even speaks to him, Dusty freaks and stammers his way to a quick exit. But when an accident in the dorm leads to Dusty and Brandon sharing temporary living quarters, Dusty’s preconceived ideas about the hot jock being a douchey, insensitive asshole are blown away to reveal a kindhearted, fun-loving, and surprisingly humble young man.
Since the start of the semester, Brandon has had zero luck getting to know the sexy, skittish, nerd next door, so he jumps at the opportunity to room with Dusty and (hopefully) get to know him…intimately. Their easy camaraderie (and Brandon’s shameless flirting) quickly leads to friendship, while a broken spring in Dusty’s bed produces months’ worth of mind-blowing benefits. Although Dusty loses his initial shyness, he doesn’t lose his insecurity or fear of rejection and heartbreak, so being boyfriends is off the table. However, when Dusty finds out Brandon has no plans for the summer, he can’t stop himself from inviting Brandon to spend it with him at his parents’ animal sanctuary—strictly as friends, of course. Despite Dusty’s trepidations, he finds himself trusting Brandon and opening up to him in so many ways. As much as Brandon wants to do the same, he’s scared his truths will chase Dusty away, but will his lack of trust in Dusty and his feelings be what chases him away instead?
"Hummingbird Heartbreak" is a fun blend of raunchy college-boy sex brain and ridiculously sweet devotion. Brandon and Dusty are made for each other, sometimes too obviously so, but their playful joy in one another is delightful. Brandon is a horny, yet sensitive, giant who loves teasing Dusty to get under his skin and bring him out of his shell. He’s also very attuned to Dusty’s highly anxious nature and knows when to offer his version of lewd diversion and unobtrusive support. As a timid loner, Dusty is surprised by how easy it is to be around Brandon and how safe he feels with him. While still uneasy hanging out with the many people visiting his charismatic and social roommate, the safety and trust Brandon inspires within him helps lower Dusty’s guard and find pleasure in interacting with strangers.
The majority of "Hummingbird Heartbreak" follows the pair during their day-to-day activities and focuses on the progression of their feelings, with a large chunk dedicated to inner monologues of Brandon wanting more but trying not to spook Dusty into bolting and Dusty mired in fear of moving forward. Expanding the setting to Dusty’s family home adds some needed movement to the story and introduces a loving and unique family and many great secondary characters—some who steal the show in one scene. Besides allowing for some insanely cute fur babies and their gleeful antics, it also allows Dusty to relax and be himself, offering more insight into his character.
"Hummingbird Heartbreak" could have been even stronger had it stuck to the more lighthearted tone it sets or actually been invested in the heavier issues it includes. The narrative introduces important elements that have sparse or mismatched details and speedy, hand-wavy resolutions. For example, there’s this emotional scene between Dusty and his twin, Benji, (who only pops in about 3 times to be a foil for Dusty) that comes out of nowhere, as well as a plotline involving the animal sanctuary. It’s introduced late in the story, established as important, then disappears. Its complete removal would have no effect on the narrative itself. I assume both are there to foster interest in Benji and lead into the next Gold Brothers’ book, but it’s not handled gracefully and feels out of place.
Brandon’s secret, the rift it caused in his family, and how he went about changing his life works well enough, but its resolution also feels off. The allusions Brandon makes to maintaining a positive attitude and his estrangement from his family, while only skimming the surface at times, still work for the narrative and tone. However, during the super quick, super sparkly reconciliation, information is introduced, which makes the resolution feel slipshod and overly simplifies supposedly life-changing events.
Because the narrative spends more time on the easier/lighter ugly ex trope than addressing the damage caused or rebuilding trust, it makes Brandon’s past ghosts feel like they are only there to serve the third act BIG SECRET/MISUNDERSTANDING, which I find distracting.
While much of the dialogue works for MCs in their late teens—lots of sex jokes, bad puns, and sassy asides, sometimes it’s awkward, try-hard, saccharine, or borderline skeevy. This too could have proved distracting, but is saved (mostly) by Greg Boudreaux’s narrative performance. Boudreaux’s skill is undeniable, and I have yet to hear a phoned in performance from him. He keeps the boys’ early obsession with each other’s junk feeling realistic for their ages, rather than creepily objectifying, and delivers a few truly sappy lines with such warmth and affection, they come across as simply the ridiculously earnest declarations teenagers in love tend to make instead of mawkish.
Despite the structural issues caused by the narrative dipping its toes into the angsty waters of heavy topics but sticking to safe ground and the kinda inane big secret shenanigans, the audiobook "Hummingbird Heartbreak" is an entertaining, steamy listen with characters who clearly like one another and click as friends. At its core, it’s about believing in yourself, facing your fears, and connecting with people who make you feel safe and inspire you to be your best self. Brandon and Dusty are charming and goofy and Greg Boudreaux’s effortless portrayal of the ribald jock who’s a romantic at heart and the fretful scientist-in-training who has trouble seeing the evidence in front of him through his biases makes them even more endearing and worth a listen for some.
Story: 3.5⭐️
Audio: 4.5⭐️
Dusty Gold knows an awkward, anxiety-riddled nerd like him has NO chance with his super hot and mammoth rugby star neighbor, Brandon Reed. Whenever Brandon even speaks to him, Dusty freaks and stammers his way to a quick exit. But when an accident in the dorm leads to Dusty and Brandon sharing temporary living quarters, Dusty’s preconceived ideas about the hot jock being a douchey, insensitive asshole are blown away to reveal a kindhearted, fun-loving, and surprisingly humble young man.
Since the start of the semester, Brandon has had zero luck getting to know the sexy, skittish, nerd next door, so he jumps at the opportunity to room with Dusty and (hopefully) get to know him…intimately. Their easy camaraderie (and Brandon’s shameless flirting) quickly leads to friendship, while a broken spring in Dusty’s bed produces months’ worth of mind-blowing benefits. Although Dusty loses his initial shyness, he doesn’t lose his insecurity or fear of rejection and heartbreak, so being boyfriends is off the table. However, when Dusty finds out Brandon has no plans for the summer, he can’t stop himself from inviting Brandon to spend it with him at his parents’ animal sanctuary—strictly as friends, of course. Despite Dusty’s trepidations, he finds himself trusting Brandon and opening up to him in so many ways. As much as Brandon wants to do the same, he’s scared his truths will chase Dusty away, but will his lack of trust in Dusty and his feelings be what chases him away instead?
"Hummingbird Heartbreak" is a fun blend of raunchy college-boy sex brain and ridiculously sweet devotion. Brandon and Dusty are made for each other, sometimes too obviously so, but their playful joy in one another is delightful. Brandon is a horny, yet sensitive, giant who loves teasing Dusty to get under his skin and bring him out of his shell. He’s also very attuned to Dusty’s highly anxious nature and knows when to offer his version of lewd diversion and unobtrusive support. As a timid loner, Dusty is surprised by how easy it is to be around Brandon and how safe he feels with him. While still uneasy hanging out with the many people visiting his charismatic and social roommate, the safety and trust Brandon inspires within him helps lower Dusty’s guard and find pleasure in interacting with strangers.
The majority of "Hummingbird Heartbreak" follows the pair during their day-to-day activities and focuses on the progression of their feelings, with a large chunk dedicated to inner monologues of Brandon wanting more but trying not to spook Dusty into bolting and Dusty mired in fear of moving forward. Expanding the setting to Dusty’s family home adds some needed movement to the story and introduces a loving and unique family and many great secondary characters—some who steal the show in one scene. Besides allowing for some insanely cute fur babies and their gleeful antics, it also allows Dusty to relax and be himself, offering more insight into his character.
"Hummingbird Heartbreak" could have been even stronger had it stuck to the more lighthearted tone it sets or actually been invested in the heavier issues it includes. The narrative introduces important elements that have sparse or mismatched details and speedy, hand-wavy resolutions. For example, there’s this emotional scene between Dusty and his twin, Benji, (who only pops in about 3 times to be a foil for Dusty) that comes out of nowhere, as well as a plotline involving the animal sanctuary. It’s introduced late in the story, established as important, then disappears. Its complete removal would have no effect on the narrative itself. I assume both are there to foster interest in Benji and lead into the next Gold Brothers’ book, but it’s not handled gracefully and feels out of place.
Brandon’s secret, the rift it caused in his family, and how he went about changing his life works well enough, but its resolution also feels off. The allusions Brandon makes to maintaining a positive attitude and his estrangement from his family, while only skimming the surface at times, still work for the narrative and tone. However, during the super quick, super sparkly reconciliation, information is introduced, which makes the resolution feel slipshod and overly simplifies supposedly life-changing events.
Because the narrative spends more time on the easier/lighter ugly ex trope than addressing the damage caused or rebuilding trust, it makes Brandon’s past ghosts feel like they are only there to serve the third act BIG SECRET/MISUNDERSTANDING, which I find distracting.
While much of the dialogue works for MCs in their late teens—lots of sex jokes, bad puns, and sassy asides, sometimes it’s awkward, try-hard, saccharine, or borderline skeevy. This too could have proved distracting, but is saved (mostly) by Greg Boudreaux’s narrative performance. Boudreaux’s skill is undeniable, and I have yet to hear a phoned in performance from him. He keeps the boys’ early obsession with each other’s junk feeling realistic for their ages, rather than creepily objectifying, and delivers a few truly sappy lines with such warmth and affection, they come across as simply the ridiculously earnest declarations teenagers in love tend to make instead of mawkish.
Despite the structural issues caused by the narrative dipping its toes into the angsty waters of heavy topics but sticking to safe ground and the kinda inane big secret shenanigans, the audiobook "Hummingbird Heartbreak" is an entertaining, steamy listen with characters who clearly like one another and click as friends. At its core, it’s about believing in yourself, facing your fears, and connecting with people who make you feel safe and inspire you to be your best self. Brandon and Dusty are charming and goofy and Greg Boudreaux’s effortless portrayal of the ribald jock who’s a romantic at heart and the fretful scientist-in-training who has trouble seeing the evidence in front of him through his biases makes them even more endearing and worth a listen for some.
December 7, 2020
Catching the hummingbird or firefly is never easy. But making sure you fix the heartbreak takes wings.
Things can happen quickly when you dreaming at hummingbird speed while trying to enjoy the necter of your greatest love as it blossoms forth based on your action. Hummingbirds are best seen in the early mornings while the dew glistens on the petals of the flowers as the sunshine opens up the deep hole that connects the closet to the stem that brings the sap of life. The hummingbird pierces the depths with its long narrow beam to suck the essence of its life at amazing speed and gentle wing tickles to the delicate petals before it.
The fireflies swarm as party animals as darkness tries to conquer the day's end and birds are seldom seen to feast on the small creatures of the night. But bats can distructive path thru the swarms without the glowing butts to light their way. Radar sounds and delicate scents can lead them to a quick meal with an afterglow for the aperitif effects on beak and sing that may make the lack of lights on the batwings less worrisome than the dark and silent paths they fly almost without detection until too close to avoid the soft wings and fluttering sounds as their radar sounds scars those close enough to hear.
The two boys can overcome lies, misunderstandings, parental worry, family announcements, drug history, rejection, animal care, childhood conflicts, and fears to let the balls fly and rockets spew flames as their love conquers all and runs rings around their fingers in a romantic nature spot under the stars while petting Wesley Crusher.
Things can happen quickly when you dreaming at hummingbird speed while trying to enjoy the necter of your greatest love as it blossoms forth based on your action. Hummingbirds are best seen in the early mornings while the dew glistens on the petals of the flowers as the sunshine opens up the deep hole that connects the closet to the stem that brings the sap of life. The hummingbird pierces the depths with its long narrow beam to suck the essence of its life at amazing speed and gentle wing tickles to the delicate petals before it.
The fireflies swarm as party animals as darkness tries to conquer the day's end and birds are seldom seen to feast on the small creatures of the night. But bats can distructive path thru the swarms without the glowing butts to light their way. Radar sounds and delicate scents can lead them to a quick meal with an afterglow for the aperitif effects on beak and sing that may make the lack of lights on the batwings less worrisome than the dark and silent paths they fly almost without detection until too close to avoid the soft wings and fluttering sounds as their radar sounds scars those close enough to hear.
The two boys can overcome lies, misunderstandings, parental worry, family announcements, drug history, rejection, animal care, childhood conflicts, and fears to let the balls fly and rockets spew flames as their love conquers all and runs rings around their fingers in a romantic nature spot under the stars while petting Wesley Crusher.
July 22, 2020
I don’t understand the hype on this book. I found it so frustrating, and honestly it put me in the worst mood. Dusty was beyond annoying. All he thought about was himself and how other people would perceive him. When he found out about Brandon’s past, he was so unsympathetic. If you really love someone, do you honestly just turn your back on them when you learn about the struggles you’ve gone through? I felt so bad for Brandon, he did nothing wrong. How come Dusty can be so scared to do ANYTHING! but Brandon can’t have time to tell about his past? I’m so pissed, f*** this book, seriously! I’m so angry and so done. I really hated Dusty and it made me really hate this book and this author.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 25, 2021
This isn’t terrible, but it was poorly paced/plotted and has a bunch of questionable analogies/metaphors that were pretty distracting and occasionally pulled me out of the story. I think they were supposed to be part of Brandon’s himbo persona, but that could have been better communicated. It began pretty well, but then . . . what’s the word for a fast-paced meander? A speed wander? There really wasn’t enough room to come to a satisfying conclusion. And I also didn't like the way Brandon's addiction was treated like an afterthought/shock reveal--his reconciliation with his family seemed very rushed.
July 19, 2020
Hummingbird Heartbreak is the first book in The Gold Brothers by Max Walker. This book is about Dusty Gold, a shy and intelligent geek and Brandon Reed, a handsome rugby player. I loved Dusty and Brandon's story. It was my first story by this author and this story made me want to read more. Can't wait for the next book.
September 26, 2020
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2.5 🌟
What a letdown! :(
I was in the mood for something NA and light so I went for this one because it fit perfectly. And I found exactly what I was looking for, but towards the end everything became insane and I found myself hating the characters, Dusty particularly.
The beginning is nice, if not my preferred style as Brandon seems pretty infatuated with his neighbour since the very beginning. I prefer to see the characters picking their interest and then falling in love rather than this, because it feels like I'm missing a big part of the romance but well, although not my preferred starting point, it was nice to read.
Brandon and Dusty are complete opposites: one sporty and the other nerdy, one open and social while the other is socially ackward and has a hard time meeting new people... And so one. The difference are many but they end up getting closer when their building sets on fire and they are relocated in the same tiny room: one bedroom with two beds.
My biggest problem, overall, is that Dusty didn't feel realistic at all. I get ackward characters, and also those with trusting issues... But Dusty crosses that line by a lot. His confidante issues are too much exaggerated, and even if at the beginning I didn't mind it that much, when Brandon's secret is unveiled, is reaction is over the top and not believable at all.
Brandon is depicted as the bad guy when really he isn't. Can Dusty blame him for jot trusting him enough with his past messes? Of course, but one thing is feeling dissaponted and another thing is acting like Brandon lied to him... When, newsflash, he didn't. He told him part of the story and not the full picture, but he didn't kill no one.
What's more, even if Brandon can me blamed of not being totally honest, I think it's worse how little trust he has in the Boy he supposedly loves.
If the author would have developed this part of the story better, I would like the book much more. The supporting characters are lovely and there are some pretty funny scenes that made me laugh out loud.
I don't rule out the possibility of resding the next book, in hopes of Benji's story being better developed and him not being as unstable as his twin brother... I'm also intrigued but the mom's sanctuary plot, really.
2.5 🌟
What a letdown! :(
I was in the mood for something NA and light so I went for this one because it fit perfectly. And I found exactly what I was looking for, but towards the end everything became insane and I found myself hating the characters, Dusty particularly.
The beginning is nice, if not my preferred style as Brandon seems pretty infatuated with his neighbour since the very beginning. I prefer to see the characters picking their interest and then falling in love rather than this, because it feels like I'm missing a big part of the romance but well, although not my preferred starting point, it was nice to read.
Brandon and Dusty are complete opposites: one sporty and the other nerdy, one open and social while the other is socially ackward and has a hard time meeting new people... And so one. The difference are many but they end up getting closer when their building sets on fire and they are relocated in the same tiny room: one bedroom with two beds.
My biggest problem, overall, is that Dusty didn't feel realistic at all. I get ackward characters, and also those with trusting issues... But Dusty crosses that line by a lot. His confidante issues are too much exaggerated, and even if at the beginning I didn't mind it that much, when Brandon's secret is unveiled, is reaction is over the top and not believable at all.
Brandon is depicted as the bad guy when really he isn't. Can Dusty blame him for jot trusting him enough with his past messes? Of course, but one thing is feeling dissaponted and another thing is acting like Brandon lied to him... When, newsflash, he didn't. He told him part of the story and not the full picture, but he didn't kill no one.
What's more, even if Brandon can me blamed of not being totally honest, I think it's worse how little trust he has in the Boy he supposedly loves.
If the author would have developed this part of the story better, I would like the book much more. The supporting characters are lovely and there are some pretty funny scenes that made me laugh out loud.
I don't rule out the possibility of resding the next book, in hopes of Benji's story being better developed and him not being as unstable as his twin brother... I'm also intrigued but the mom's sanctuary plot, really.
August 23, 2020
It has been a while since I picked up a book by this author and I am definitely glad I grabbed this one.
Hummingbird Heartbreak is a sweet, opposites attract, Jock/Nerd story with a lot of sweetness, kindness and definitely some drama put into the mix.
I loved the attraction build up we see between main characters Dusty and Brandon. The way they are both attracted to each other but too nervous/ shy/insecure/worried to act on it.
When, as the blurb says, they up they end up together by accident, things turn heated and intense quickly! There’s exploring and so much more..
Bring on the summer stay at with the family and you have an excellent story. I loved the family, from the sweetness, to the smiles, to the love and support.
The author did a thorough job of building up the (sexual) tension between Dusty and Brandon which I appreciated.
Brandon seems supported by his team and friends and I would have loved to have read a bit more on that. It isn’t often you come across that in the sports world and I would have loved to have seen that part more evolved.
Max Walker has a very pleasant way of writing and bringing you into the story. It took me a little bit to get into this but it definitely grabbed me after a few pages.
You see alternating chapters from both Dusty and Brandon and for some reason what got to me was seeing their full names constantly on top of that, for some reason it stuck out at me. I was like okay I get that those are their full names by now, we don’t have to call them by their full names all the time either, right? (obviously that is just me)
If you like a nice romance story with definitely some additional drama added you should absolutely pick this one up and let yourself be brought into this new series and their characters/family.
Overall I can say this is a great start to a new series by this author and I am definitely looking forward to reading the next books in the series
Bring it on!
Hummingbird Heartbreak is a sweet, opposites attract, Jock/Nerd story with a lot of sweetness, kindness and definitely some drama put into the mix.
I loved the attraction build up we see between main characters Dusty and Brandon. The way they are both attracted to each other but too nervous/ shy/insecure/worried to act on it.
When, as the blurb says, they up they end up together by accident, things turn heated and intense quickly! There’s exploring and so much more..
Bring on the summer stay at with the family and you have an excellent story. I loved the family, from the sweetness, to the smiles, to the love and support.
The author did a thorough job of building up the (sexual) tension between Dusty and Brandon which I appreciated.
Brandon seems supported by his team and friends and I would have loved to have read a bit more on that. It isn’t often you come across that in the sports world and I would have loved to have seen that part more evolved.
Max Walker has a very pleasant way of writing and bringing you into the story. It took me a little bit to get into this but it definitely grabbed me after a few pages.
You see alternating chapters from both Dusty and Brandon and for some reason what got to me was seeing their full names constantly on top of that, for some reason it stuck out at me. I was like okay I get that those are their full names by now, we don’t have to call them by their full names all the time either, right? (obviously that is just me)
If you like a nice romance story with definitely some additional drama added you should absolutely pick this one up and let yourself be brought into this new series and their characters/family.
Overall I can say this is a great start to a new series by this author and I am definitely looking forward to reading the next books in the series
Bring it on!
October 16, 2021
Even worse than I’d expected
This book wasn’t…offensive. It just wasn’t very good. The style was fairly juvenile, which in a way is what I associate with sports romances (what I expected this to be), but then this wasn’t a sports romance at all. The author just read as very young and pretty naïve without a lot of life experience. They also struggled to create major conflict from minor arguments, which really didn’t work.
We never really addressed the fact that Brandon’s parents should be arrested for child abuse and neglect. So at 16 he was struggling with addiction, and rather then getting him help they seem to have said “now don’t be an addict!” Then he broke a bookcase, which his mom tripped over and hurt herself, and the whole family acted like Brandon has personally beaten her to death and kicked him out without a word at 15 or 16? They’re the real villains of the story, and the fact that they continued to foster the belief in Brandon that he was a horrible person and an abusive son was absolutely inhumanly cruel.
The author introduced a variety of plot points - namely Dusty’s parents’ potential adoption of River and the threats to them and their property - and never went anywhere with them. I would have assumed those issues would be addressed in a future book, but he three year time jump at the end here kind of precludes that.
Also some more personal things, but the author struggled some with names. Dusty corrected Brandon once to say the name he was trying to think of was Stephen Hawkins. It wasn’t, of course, it was Stephen Hawking. What an elementary mistake to make! The author also couldn’t decide whether to spell Aidan with an A or an E. As a rare Aidan with an A who has had my name misspelled my entire life, this hit close to home. Also, naming your dog after Wesley Crusher, really?? Literally no one likes Wesley.
This book wasn’t…offensive. It just wasn’t very good. The style was fairly juvenile, which in a way is what I associate with sports romances (what I expected this to be), but then this wasn’t a sports romance at all. The author just read as very young and pretty naïve without a lot of life experience. They also struggled to create major conflict from minor arguments, which really didn’t work.
We never really addressed the fact that Brandon’s parents should be arrested for child abuse and neglect. So at 16 he was struggling with addiction, and rather then getting him help they seem to have said “now don’t be an addict!” Then he broke a bookcase, which his mom tripped over and hurt herself, and the whole family acted like Brandon has personally beaten her to death and kicked him out without a word at 15 or 16? They’re the real villains of the story, and the fact that they continued to foster the belief in Brandon that he was a horrible person and an abusive son was absolutely inhumanly cruel.
The author introduced a variety of plot points - namely Dusty’s parents’ potential adoption of River and the threats to them and their property - and never went anywhere with them. I would have assumed those issues would be addressed in a future book, but he three year time jump at the end here kind of precludes that.
Also some more personal things, but the author struggled some with names. Dusty corrected Brandon once to say the name he was trying to think of was Stephen Hawkins. It wasn’t, of course, it was Stephen Hawking. What an elementary mistake to make! The author also couldn’t decide whether to spell Aidan with an A or an E. As a rare Aidan with an A who has had my name misspelled my entire life, this hit close to home. Also, naming your dog after Wesley Crusher, really?? Literally no one likes Wesley.
March 26, 2023
Enough happens, but I just don't care. There should be a problem to be solved or some tension or character development. Nope. Just everyday life, day after day. Tedious.
The narrator had nothing to work with, so the performance was bland but well read.
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The narrator had nothing to work with, so the performance was bland but well read.
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September 30, 2025
3.5 stars
I actually enjoyed this more than the other Max Walker book I’ve read, Love and Monsters.
Dusty and Brandon had really sweet chemistry and the way they were thrown together was fun. There were some truly humerous moments, and even though I felt that there was an overreaction to the big reveal towards the end, this has renewed my interest in checking out more of Walker’s work.
I actually enjoyed this more than the other Max Walker book I’ve read, Love and Monsters.
Dusty and Brandon had really sweet chemistry and the way they were thrown together was fun. There were some truly humerous moments, and even though I felt that there was an overreaction to the big reveal towards the end, this has renewed my interest in checking out more of Walker’s work.
November 13, 2020
4 stars up to 80%, 3 star after.
Pretty much the only thing that worked for me after 80% was the epilogue.
Pretty much the only thing that worked for me after 80% was the epilogue.
July 11, 2020
Max Walker has made me a instant fan with Hummingbird Heartbreak! This is my first book by this author and now I'm looking forward to more.
This is an absolutely adorable nerd/jock opposites attract love story. It's a perfect, "Do Not Judge A Book By It's Cover" type book.
From the first few pages I was all in. Dusty Gold is a delightful, awkward, shy, scientific geek. While Brandon Reed is a huge but gentle, teddy bear rugby player. They were neighbors in their college dorm and had a mutual crush on one another from afar. One almost tragic event had them living together! This is where the butterflies began! The closer they got the harder it was to keep their hands and lips to themselves!! I love how naturally their relationship blossomed. Besides their crush and chemistry they truly cared for each other as people. Both of them have huge hearts and could not help but LOVE THEM. So freaking sweet!
While living with Dusty's family on their animal sanctuary for the summer the guys began to change. All for the better because of each other! Their were some mystery and secrets swirling around them. Which enhanced the storyline, but the main focus was about them and their relationship.
I adored the secondary characters, the animals and the animal sanctuary itself!!
Dusty's twin brother Benji's book is up next and I can not wait!
This is an absolutely adorable nerd/jock opposites attract love story. It's a perfect, "Do Not Judge A Book By It's Cover" type book.
From the first few pages I was all in. Dusty Gold is a delightful, awkward, shy, scientific geek. While Brandon Reed is a huge but gentle, teddy bear rugby player. They were neighbors in their college dorm and had a mutual crush on one another from afar. One almost tragic event had them living together! This is where the butterflies began! The closer they got the harder it was to keep their hands and lips to themselves!! I love how naturally their relationship blossomed. Besides their crush and chemistry they truly cared for each other as people. Both of them have huge hearts and could not help but LOVE THEM. So freaking sweet!
While living with Dusty's family on their animal sanctuary for the summer the guys began to change. All for the better because of each other! Their were some mystery and secrets swirling around them. Which enhanced the storyline, but the main focus was about them and their relationship.
I adored the secondary characters, the animals and the animal sanctuary itself!!
Dusty's twin brother Benji's book is up next and I can not wait!
July 19, 2020
Dusty and Brandon have been crushing on each other all without the other knowing it. Dusty will never make a move, though. He turns into a stuttering fool when he's near Brandon. Brandon, though, after having rescued Dusty's cat during a fire in their dorm, is decidedly not as shy as Dusty. Now the two just have to enjoy each other as they fall in love. And deal with the fallout once Brandon's not so pretty past is revealed.
This a hot and sweet story of two opposites. I love how well these two fit together, even as different as they were. But most of all I love Brandon and how he grew and opened up near the end. He and Dusty really are perfect for each other.
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July 7, 2020
This is a great low-angst, new adult romance, that also packs in the nerd/jock, roommates-to-lovers, opposites-attract tropes, and a touch of mutual pining. Dusty and Brandon are so sweet together and both characters are really likeable. I especially liked seeing the total sweetheart, Dusty, grow in confidence and self-assurance. And Brandon, I absolutely loved him! He has past demons that come back to haunt him alongside a vengeful ex-lover, and it does create for some drama, hurt and miscommunication. Dusty and Brandon complement each other beautifully, and they truly bring out the best in one another. Can't wait for the next Gold Brothers book!
July 7, 2020
Dusty and Brandon
I originally picked up this book because of the cover and that I love the way Max Walker writes. I never thought this story about two college men would pull me in and not release me! I could not put this book down, Dusty and Brandon sucked me into their sweet love story and the summer they spent together getting to know each other and growing that knowing into love. I absolutely cannot wait for more of the Gold family! Everyone needs to read this happily ever after or at least put it on your summer reading list!
I originally picked up this book because of the cover and that I love the way Max Walker writes. I never thought this story about two college men would pull me in and not release me! I could not put this book down, Dusty and Brandon sucked me into their sweet love story and the summer they spent together getting to know each other and growing that knowing into love. I absolutely cannot wait for more of the Gold family! Everyone needs to read this happily ever after or at least put it on your summer reading list!
July 8, 2020
My first by this author but definitely not my last, it was a fast reading well written love story that I totally enjoyed reading. When Dusty noticed Brandon in their dorm he thought he was gorgeous but he's a jock so being a geek himself figured that lust from afar was the best he would get. But after a fire in their dorm they end up room mates and maybe this dream was not so unrealistic after all.
August 30, 2020
Sweet
This was such a sweet book, a wonderful romance and low level drama, enough to keep it interesting mind you but low enough where you don’t want to toss it away in frustration. Brandon and Dusty were so incredibly sweet together and honestly sometimes you just need that! Great book!
This was such a sweet book, a wonderful romance and low level drama, enough to keep it interesting mind you but low enough where you don’t want to toss it away in frustration. Brandon and Dusty were so incredibly sweet together and honestly sometimes you just need that! Great book!
September 11, 2021
Sweet, steamy, slow. Mostly I enjoyed it. But. What's up with most people in this book being psycho? Quite a few plot holes in here, including some actions, reactions and decisions that were RIDICULOUS, or that seemed off (like with the parents). Otherwise, this could have been an easy 4 stars.
And Dusty is the greatest dumbass of them all. Didn't like him. He deserved to grovel but the book made it seem like he was the victim in that ridiculous conflict. He wasn't. He was a whiney little biyatch, like he was for the majority of the book. Brandon is a remarkable character who overcame some near impossible issues, and he deserved better from Mr. Whiner. It ends well, though, of course.
And Dusty is the greatest dumbass of them all. Didn't like him. He deserved to grovel but the book made it seem like he was the victim in that ridiculous conflict. He wasn't. He was a whiney little biyatch, like he was for the majority of the book. Brandon is a remarkable character who overcame some near impossible issues, and he deserved better from Mr. Whiner. It ends well, though, of course.
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